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Il mio provo di studiare l'Italiano ancora una volta
Ho studiato l'italiano quando avevo 17 anni, pero purtoppo non mi ricordo niente, e spero che questa volta imparerò meglio.
Sto solo provando questo sito per la prima volta, quindi apprezzerei qualsiasi feedback quindi so che funziona :)
Grazie mille!
Jan. 21, 2021
永生に生きていれば、面白いと思うことはまだある？
面白いということは、大抵新しい経験だと思う。例えば、映画館で新しい映画を見るとか、新しいレストランに行ってみるなど。でも、他の面白い経験の種類がある。それは、懐かしくさせることだ。例えば、久しぶりに友達に合うことや、小さいごろ好きな音楽を聞くことなど。だから、楽しみにしていることはやったことがないことと、懐かしくさせることに分けている。
もし永遠に生きれば、映画を見る機会が本当にたくさんあるから、多分新しい映画に飽きるだろう。だから、楽しいと思うことは懐かしくさせることだけが残っていて、過去のことばかり思い出す。（「私の一番好きな映画は２００年前に作られた。」）
Jan. 21, 2021
Translation Practice
It is normal for enterprises to lose money, but what people didn’t expect was that Meituan had lost as much as 115.5 billion yuan and became the “king losses” in the takeout industry, which was an unbearable pressure for any enterprise. In the face of huge losses, Wang Xing still has confidence. He believes that Meituan will start to make profits only after experiencing long-term losses.
Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 21, 2021
I Have a Dream
Today I would like to tell you about my dream. For many years, I would like to visit a few places in the world. One of them is Japan. Why Japan? I want to tell you about that as well. I became interested in Japanese culture when I was 14. At first, I watched old animated productions such as Sailor Moon, Haibane Renmei, and Studio Ghibli productions. Later, I collected books with stories popular in Japan, Japanese mythology, and I read an anthology of Japanese theater and Japanese tea brewing. At that time, I used these anthologies during my Polish matura exam. I was writing some haiku poems. I was inspired by the poetry of Czesław Miłosz and other Japanese poets. I also did presentation on Japanese clothing for one website that doesn't exist now. However, I wanted to try something more. I decided to learn Japanese. I installed Japanese alphabet on my computer and my adventure with Japanese began. I have been learning Japanese for a few years using materials on the Internet. I became most involved in learning language when I joined the Polish beginner group. There used to be popular chats on the Polczat website. We learned something new every day in the chat. There were also competitions hold by the owner of the then only one Polish website for learning Japanese. I won the competition twice. Then I got a humorous book to write Japanese characters from scratch and sweets brought from Japan. To this day, I keep candy wrappers deep in my wardrobe. Later I started writing with Japanese people to practice Japanese conversations. Then one friendship was arise with a Japanese woman, even though the Japanese don’t maintain contact with anyone for that long time. I got a package of sweets from this Japanese woman for me and for my best friend. We were happy. After a while, I took a break from learning Japanese. To this day, I’m remembering a lot of Japanese characters, I’m watching Asian cinema and read books related to Japanese culture.
In the future, I would like to go to Japan with my partner who is also interested in this country. I would like to go to Tokyo, Hiroshima and Osaka. At that time, my ex-friend, from whom I got sweets from Japan, lived in Osaka. I hope my dream will come true.
Jan. 21, 2021
キャンプ
(あなたの学校に来た日本人の 留りゅう学生は、1 週間、しぜんの中でキャンプをするきかいがあります。でも今いる 留りゅう学生はキャンプに行きたがっていで、ホストファミリーはしんぱいしています。そしてあなたにせっとくの手紙がみを書くようにたのみました。その手紙がみを書きなさい)
金木さんへ、
お元気ですか。今日の天気はさむすぎで、雨をふって初めます。おさむさの 折からお 体をお 大切に。
金木さんのホーストファミリーによると、1 週間、しぜんの中でキャンプをするきかいがあります。それはいいことｔ思います。
まず、いい点はうつくしいしぜんの眺めがあります。そして、夜の中に、ほしを見ることができます。うんが良ければ、動物もいます。たとえば、色々なとりがい るかもしれません。
そして、ヘルシーのために、運動しなければなりません。だから、歩くことは金木さんにとって良いことです。歩きながら楽しむことができます。せきにすわるより運動します。
たくさんおやつを持ってきたほうがいいです。それに、キャンプファイヤーでマシュマロを焼けます。マシュマロを食べることがありますか。
家にいるのはかんたんですが、キャンプに行くことをけんこうしてください。
これで、終わります。お 返事を 待ちしております。
デイモンより
Jan. 21, 2021
Should You Eat Breakfast?
I think eating breakfast gives us many profits. The most significant profit is that breakfast is good for your health. You can't eat and drink during your sleep, so it's important to get food and water in the morning. Otherwise, you will be hungry and irritated before lunchtime. Some researches show eating breakfast is related to mental and physical health.
Personally, I didn't eat breakfast while I was in junior and high school because I didn't have time to eat. However, now, I can take a meal in the morning, and it energizes me. Because morning is busy, I often eat serial with yogurt, or a nutrition bar.
Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 21, 2021
バイデンの就任式
今日はバイデンがやっと正式に大統領になった。最初の日でバイデンは15ぐらい大統領令をした。特にパリ協定を入り直して、Keystoneの送油管をやめさせたから、私は喜んだ。バイデンは少しいまいちと思うけど、トランプに比べると、大きな進歩だ。
ありがたいことに、キャピトルで暴力が避けた。多分強烈な警備のおかげで。もちろんトランプは就任式に出なくて、リゾートに行く前に「未来で私はまた戻る」と言った。情けない大統領の情けない終わりだと思う。彼はもう大統領じゃないから、たくさん州と連邦の捜査が進める。例えばニューヨーク州で税金の詐欺をして、ジョージア州で大統領選挙を干渉した。多分刑務所には行かないけど、トランプはたくさん不法なことをしたから、政府は処罰しなきゃ。
Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 21, 2021
Writing for analysis
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although news plays an essential role in shaping people’s lives, the way people perceive depends on the person who covers the news that suits their opinions. Some people watch the news if it matches their opinion while others consider different views even though they don’t fit. In my opinion, I think watching news presented by people of different ideas which I do not agree on. This is because it helps me to cover the topic from various viewpoints and distinguish between facts and flaws. Also, viewing an opposite version of my views allows me to increase my critical thinking skills.
First of all, if people watch news that won’t match their opinions, first they will listen to the person’s perspective and analyze the information. In other words, assimilating information from different standpoints gives people an opportunity to understand the difference between factual information and bias data. The USA, for example, a recent incident US capitol riot by the Trump supporters that devastated the nation. As I was a die heart fan of Trump, I usually followed the news that supports Trump. However, after listening to Stephen Colbert's explanation for the causes of the riot and evidence that supports Trump’s involvement in it. Though I won’t agree with him initially, by reading the news of various views regarding the same incident, I realized that he was the mastermind behind this riot. Thus, people like me will be blindsided if we agree to the news that suits our opinions and will never see the reality. Hence, covering the news from different vantage points allow people to refine the information.
Second of all, when people watch the opposite views of their opinions it aids them to increase their critical thinking skills. This means in the case of political conflicts if people continuously arguing about their topic unable to trace out the flaws in the system. India, for example, the ruling YSR party leaders always boast about the positive side of their party and the programs, whereas if people listen to the different sides of the same issue, they can persuade the people who stand in favor of their opinion. Specifically, the YSR party recently launched a program of the daily labors-this program helps labor to work for 3 hours and get pay of 300 rupees. In this way, people who are the potential to perform other duties are reluctant to work on account of the 300 rupees free money. YSR party is doing this even though it creates a huge burden on taxpayers, just because of the votes and for the party's survival. How can I know this flaw that is detrimental to future generations if I have not watched different views? Thus, the government is making people couch potatoes with this scheme. Therefore, people should be aware of the government's motivation behind the execution of the plan which can be accomplished by following news of various opinions that do not meet with our opinion.
In essence, I strongly agree that watching the news from different perspectives that I don’t agree on benefits people in two ways. One way, people recognize the bias information, and the other way people enhance their critical thinking skills.
Jan. 21, 2021
Book review - Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone
I highly recommend this book to those who are looking for a mind-blowing and well-executed story.
The book is full of plot twists, and there’s never a dull moment.
Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone was the book that turned me into a big Harry Potter fan.
J.K Rowling is so imaginative and writes everything in amazing detail. One more thing is that this book is an excellent pick for those who are learning English and want to test, improve their reading skills, or simply learn new vocabulary since the book is not that hard to follow. (I'm a nonnative speaker, and I was able to follow it).
What's more, I find this book most suited for learners at the intermediate level or above as they would benefit greatly from it. Anyway, it's a fantastic read, and it's definitely worth a try.
Jan. 21, 2021
Essay for evaluation
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Money plays a vital role in society as a means of making all sorts of transactions and knowing its value is critically important to people. Specifically, young people learning about financial management enables them to grow not only as financially independent individuals but also plan for a better future. Although some people think allowing children to know about money makes them materialistic, to me this is an amazing approach that benefits children in the future. I believe that children will understand the value of credit and use it wisely for their educational purposes at a later age, and financial planning helps children to know the significance of savings for emergency needs.
First of all, children cultivating a habit of controlling their own money gives them an opportunity to make their own budget and allocating funds based on their priorities. This means if children can maintain their money at a young age they will know where the money has to be spent or not. For example, when I was in high school, I remember that my mother gave me an allowance of $40 monthly for my spending. This includes stationary, project materials, or outside dining. If I spend the money on trivial things like movies or buying a CD, then I have to wait till month end to meet my other necessities. This habit really helped me, when I was in college because of spending money with a limited amount of cash I adjusted myself and only bought the most important things. As a result of this behavior, I could meet my expenses in the college with a clear allocation of funds to various purposes. Because of my financial understanding at a young age, I was able to plan my budget and develop as a financially independent person.
Second of all, children learning about money matters at a young age not only makes them financially independent but also helps them to save money for future needs. In particular, we are uncertain about the emergency needs so if children how to save money thereafter they can use the funds during an unexpected crisis. For example, my brother used to squander money and have had none nested eggs for meeting his needs. Recently, he met with an accident and ended up in the hospital bed looking for some help. At that time, I supported him because of my savings, which I kept back when I was working. Had I not learned financial matters at an earlier age, I would not have money to support my brother. Therefore, learning about cash flow helps people to save some money to meet emergency needs.
In essence, I completely agree that to become responsible citizens, children must learn to maintain their own money at a young age because it helps them to plan their budget and save money for meeting unexpected emergencies.
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Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 20th, 2021 The curfew
Quebec started curfew from January 9 because of the COVED 19. People are not allowed to go out from 8 pm to 5 am.
I think I'm lucky because I don't live in Quebec. And, I realized that my parents didn’t give me a curfew when I was child. They have never told me when I have to go back home. I could go out anytime. They would go out to find me if they found that I didn’t be in home. Especially at the diner time, you know, when they finally finished the cooking. I lived in a quite close neighborhood. All the children played around that area. We were in a same school. Parents knew each other. Many of them worked together. It was safe.
But I had a curfew when I was in the university. All students lived in dorms that was provided by university at that time. The gates of the buildings closed, and the power of rooms shut down from 11 pm to 7 am every day.
I haven’t thought about giving my son a curfew yet, and probably I will haven’t the chance to do it. The problem is that he always just wants to stay home. What I do every day is to convince him to go out, but it is really hard. The world really changed.
Jan. 21, 2021
J'ai été très occupé...
J'ai été très occupé ces dix jours, voilà pour quoi je n'ai rien écrit. À cote de mes études, j'ai un travail à temps partiel qui me demande beaucoup de temps. J'ai accepté ce travail pour gagner un peu d'argent pendant cette pandémie, mais il a été plus difficile que ce que je croyais. Bon, c'est plutôt facile en fait, c'est juste qu'il me prend beaucoup de temps. Le travail c'est corriger ou écrire des thèses pour les personnes dans l'université qui ont besoin d'aide. C'est techniquement contre les rules, mais je m'en fiche à vrai dire. Malheureusement pour moi, les personnes que je dois aider ne sont pas si intelligents, et ils font beaucoup d'erreurs. Ça, bien sûr, rend mon travail plus difficile.
Jan. 21, 2021
Mi carjeta de débito fue robado
Hace dos semanas que descubro un cargo en la historia sobre mi carjeta de débito que no hice mi mismo. Era pequeño, $30, pero lo no hice, entonces estaba nerviosa. Cuando lo descubré, llamé mi banco y cancelé la tarjeta. Después par de días, hablaba con mi mejor amiga sobre que sucedió, ¡y se dio cuenta de ella accidentalmente hubo robado la información de mi tarjeta y compró algo en línea sin saber! Era grasioso, pero deseo que hubiera hablado con mi amiga antes. Como dije, hace dos semanas que este sucedé, y todavía no tengo mi nueva tarjeta.
Jan. 21, 2021
Usted y preguntas sobre ruido
¿Usted me puede describir el ruido? ¿Es más ruidoso fuera de la casa o dentro de la casa?
Si es más ruidoso fuera de la casa, puedo mandar un equipo de construcción a su casa para inspeccionar las conexiones en el transformador.
Si es más ruidoso dentro de la casa, le recomiendo a Usted que debería contratar a una electrista para inspeccionar el panel de su casa.
Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 21, 2021
¿Cuidado con los extraños?
En Estados Unidos, y estoy seguro de que tienen en otras partes del mundo también, es común decirles a los niños "cuidado con los extraños". Sin embargo, ¿es correcto? Vivimos en un mundo que está creciendo cada vez más peligroso.
Se ha vuelto especialmente peligroso por los niños. Con el crecimiento del Internet, ahora es súper fácil por los aprovechados, ladrones y otros criminales alcanzarles. Yo apoyo a más maneras de seguridad para proteger a los niños en línea. Pero, ¿es lo mismo en el mundo real?
Aunque hay muchos peligros en línea, el mundo real aún tiene muchas amenazas. Secuestros, asesinatos y robos todos son ejemplos extremos de ellas. Sin embargo, todos nosotros, incluso los niños, tenemos que interactuar con los desconocidos todo el tiempo. Es más importante que les enseñemos cómo hacerlo con cuidado. Siempre habrá amenazas y peligros, no los podemos controlar. Podemos, empero, entrenarles a nuestros hijos para que se puedan encargar de (casi) cada tipo de situación.
Aunque en Estados Unidos, tenemos una mentalidad de súper-protección, sé que no es verdad de otros países. Espero que encontremos una manera de equilibrar la seguridad de nuestros hijos y dándoles experiencias en el mundo real.
Dos oraciones con "recordar + a/que".
1. El video me recordaba a las playas de Grecia.
2. La nota me ha recordado que necesito que compres una bolsa de manzanas.
Jan. 21, 2021
The Destiny
COVID-19 is not something special or unique, but an ordinary virus. For some reason, we've been focusing on the virus and have been making a fuss about it. In 2018, including a winter season, the number of influenza 's victims in Japan was around 3,500, and the immediate cause of death the influenza virus. To date, there have been approximately 3500 deaths due to the coronavirus in two winter seasons. In fact, that figure includes not only the immediate cause of death due to a coronavirus, but also the death of a chronic disease caused by corona virus.
Given that we add the number of relative death causes of chronic disease such as a hypertension and a diabetes, etc. caused by Influenza to the number of the immediate cause of death caused by influenza, the total number of the deaths caused by Influenza in Japan should be more than ten thousand people for a season in general. We have been wrapped in a lie and ignorance. We have to be more careful about this kind of statistics. I'm sure that even the prime minister of Japan, Suga is sure to know this fact.
In fact, he is the only one who can explain and persuade Japanese citizens in an objective manner. However, I think he's always made a speech based on illogical thinking or on playing party politics. Or he's a just fool or ignorant. His counter measure about coronavirus was too late and sluggish. There seem to be no close aides beside of him to advise and cannot grab the present situation at all. He seems to be in total confusion.
There is no time for him think it over, he had better act now or he'll miss the bus. This is the only last chance that he has to do, if he can't do now. I am sure that his party will lose at the next election, and cannot but resign at the next election for sure or he might be destined to be fired by the next election will begin.
Jan. 21, 2021
E-Prüfung
Heute habe ich meine erste Prüfung für Uni geschrieben... durch Zoom. Ich muss verraten, dass ich sehr skeptisch darüber war. Vor allem hasse ich mündliche Prüfungen. Hat es dir nicht passiert, dass du etwas in einer Prüfung vergisst und dann erinnerst du dich darüber fast am Ende? Also das ist nicht möglich, wenn der Lehrer/in dich schaut und eine schnelle Antwort erwarte. Man ist nervös und plötzlich alles ist weg.
Glücklicherweise ist das nicht mir heute passiert. Ich bin sicher, dass ich diese Prüfung bestand. Ich habe jedoch etwas sehr Komisches erlebt. Meine Kamera war in Mitte des Gespräches kaputt! Natürlich war das sehr stressig, ich musste mich entschuldigen, und dem Lehrer fragen, ob er mir warten konnte, bis ich die Zoom App in meinem Handy öffnen konnte. Der war Gott sei Dank sehr verständlich und geduldig.