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일상을 일기 쓰는 것을 통해 대처법
일기를 쓰겠다는 생각이 들었던 분이신가요?
많은 분들은 어렸을 때부터 이 생각이 들었을 수도 있어요. 근데 귀찮아 쓰고 싶지 않다는 생각도 있으니까 오늘은 여러분들에게 일기 쓰는법과 좋은 점을 좀 알려드리도록 하겠습니다.
첫째로, 일기의 좋은 점이 뭐죠?
가장 당연한 이유는 나의 감정, 가치, 꿈을 기록하면 까먹지 못하고 공책이 나의 경험을 저장하기 때문이에요. 노트를 펼 때마다 특별한 일의 모든 기억이 나서 시간 여행처럼 순간을 회상하게 돼요! 대단하죠? 왜 사람들이 일기 쓰는 걸 더 널리 받아들이지 않는지 모르겠어요
그리고 하루를 돌아보는 것은 목표와 현실 행동이 일치하는지 통찰력을 얻을 수 있게 해줘요. 시간을 정말로 똑똑하게 투자하는지 낭비하는지 한눈에 볼 수 있어요. 그러므로 하고 싶은 일을 더 명쾌하게 알아서 앞으로 꿈을 쫓을 줄 아는 입장에 서게 돼요!
게다가 날의 인상을 적다가 감정과 어려운 일을 되새겨요. "일들이 진짜 이랬을까?"라고 스스로 물어보며 객관적인 시각을 획득할 수 있어요.
일기는 머리 속의 감정을 쏟아내며 깨달음을 얻을 수 있는 도구예요. 저에게도 유익한 것 같아서 처음에 발견하고 나서 일상에 접목시키고 싶었어요. 하루 동안 다르고 나오는 생각을 위한 공간이 있으니까 머리가 맑아지더라구요.
일기를 쓰면 잠시 동안 자기 자신의 이야기를 하여 자신을 더 깊게 이해하고 부정적 생각을 영원히 놓거나 집중하게 풀 수 있어요. 자기 자신과 데이트처럼.. 어떤 것 같아요?
자신과 공감을 어떻게 하는지 가르쳐 자기 수용과 자신감을 높여요.
마음만 먹으면 속에 있는 갈등을 해결할 수 있고 일상생활에서 큰 도움이 될 것 같습니다.
좋게 들리는데 어디부터 시직하는지 모르고 계신다면 아래에서 영감과 활용할 방식을 공유할게요.
일단, 좋아하는 노트와 펜을 얻으세요! 펜과 종이에서 글 쓰기를 즐기면 습관으로 매일 스케줄에 포함하기 더 쉬워져요. 저는 날짜하고 시간을 적은 다음에 일반적인 기분을 기록하기가 좋아요. 그리고 아무런 주제에 대해 쓰기를 바로 시작해요. 어렵게 들리기는 하는데 시간이 지남에 따라 그 방법이 친숙해질 거예요. 그외엔 더 체계적인 방법을 원하신다면 시작 문장을 정리해 봤습니다.
- 오늘 힘든 일이 무었을까?
- 오늘 잘한 일 3 가지, 감사한 일 3가지
-장기적으로 하고 싶은 게 뭘까? 왜?
-무얼 했더라면 오늘 하루가 만족스러웠을까?
이렇게 하면 마음을 챙겨 공포와 목표를 정면으로 향할 수 있어요.
마지막으로 공책은 판단하지 않으니까 경험을 솔직하게 적어면 돼요.
쓰는법은 정말 다양해요. 규칙이 없으니까 여러분도 즐기세요.
Jan. 26, 2021
Einkaufen gehen
Heutehabe ich einkaufen gegangen.
Ich beschliesse etwas Essen einzukaufen.
Ich habe: einen Brot, eine Milch, ein Mösli, einen Griechischer Joghurt, Obst, Äpfel, Bananen,
Heidelbeeren, Himbeeren, Gemöse, Kartofel, Zwiebel, Schpinat, Tomaten, Kohl, Blumenkohl, Zucchini, Nudel,
Reis, Öl, Oliven Öl, Mehl, Käse, Salami, Hefe und so weiter gekauft.
Ich habe die Telefonkarte und die Netflickskarte einkaufen.
Jan. 26, 2021
Eine Filmempfehlung
Der Film heißt Enola Holmes und läuft seit zwei Monaten auf Netflix. Nur die Abonennten von Netflix dürfen dort Filme und Series online anschauen.
Im Film geht es um ein Mädchen, dem plötzlich ihre Mutter verschwunden ist. Niemand weißt, wo diese Frau ist. Aber Enola hat einige Spuren zum Verfolgen. Der interessantesten Teil ist das Enola, die Schwester von einem bekannten Detektiv ist: Sherlock Holmes. Deshalb will sie die Schritte von ihrem Bruder folgen, um ihre Mutter zu finden.
Mir hat die Leistung von Milly Bobby Brown besonders gefällt, die ich ziemlich sympathisch finde. Außerdem ist die Handlung von dem Film wirklich interessant und spannend. Während des Situations fügen mehr Dinge hinzu, die der Film noch spannender machen. Ich empfehle euch dieser Film zu anschauen.
Jan. 26, 2021
Jan. 26, 2021
Jan. 26, 2021
Translation Practice
In the past decades of economic development, cities have played an important role, and the urban agglomerations composed of many cities have greatly promoted the rapid growth of a regional economy, such as the Yangtze River Delta urban agglomeration and the Pearl River Delta urban agglomeration. Among them, Shanghai, Suzhou, Guangzhou, Shenzhen and other cities have played a great role in driving the economy.
According to the comprehensive scores of urban economic scale, population size, fiscal revenue, geographical transportation, commercial trade, financial services, business environment, etc., cities can be divided into multiple “levels”. There are differences among first-tier cities, new first-tier cities, second-tier cities and third-and fourth-tier cities in China. Then, globally, there is such a distinction.
Recently, GaWc released the World City Ranking Book 2020, which contains the ranking of first-tier cities in the world. Among them, London ranks first in the world, New York ranks second in the world, Hong Kong, China ranks third in the world. Specifically, most of them come from China, the United States, India, Britain, Japan, Canada and other countries.
Five American cities were shortlisted, namely, New York, Los Angeles, Chicago, San Francisco and Boston. In terms of GDP, New York is undoubtedly the largest city in the world with GDP exceeding US$1 trillion, which is unmatched by many emerging economies. New York mainly focused on the financial industry, especially the major consortium represented by Wall Street capital crocodiles, which have a far-reaching impact on the economy of the United States and even the whole world.
At the same time, New York is not only the financial center of the United States, but also the largest financial center in the world, playing a big role in the global financial market. In New York, there are millions of people engaged in financial, securities, banking, legal consulting, accounting, auditing and other industries related to the financial industry, which makes New York the largest commercial center in the United States.
Only one city in Japan was shortlisted, namely, Tokyo. According to the ranking published from the GaWc, Tokyo ranks ninth in the world. Many people think that this ranking seriously underestimates Tokyo’s strength. In fact, this ranking is the final result of considering various factors. In terms of GDP alone, Tokyo is the second largest city in the world, ranking first in Asia.
Tokyo is the home to most of Japan’s Fortune 500 companies, especially the traditional manufacturing industry such as semiconductors, machine tools, steel, shipbuilding, motors, precision instruments, etc. It is the commercial and trade center of Japan. Many people travel to Japan, and Tokyo is also the first choice with a strong cultural and commercial atmosphere.
Three Indian cities were shortlisted, namely, Mumbai, Delhi and Bangalore. India has a population of more than 1.3 billion, which has developed rapidly in recent years, and its future development potential should not be underestimated. After decades of development, a number of big international cities have emerged in India. First of all, Mumbai, which is equivalent to Shanghai’s position in China and is the largest trading city and port city in India.
Mumbai is also the cultural and entertainment center of India, where Bollywood is located, which has driven the development of publishing houses, movies, brokerage companies and satellite network industries. Bangalore is the third largest city in India and the information industry center of India, which is equivalent to Shenzhen’s position in China, and is known as the "silicon valley” of India, with a large number of scientific and technological information enterprises gathered.
Then, among the first-tier cities in the world, there are five cities in the United States, three in India and only one in Japan. What about China? According to the ranking, there are 6 cities in China that ranked first in the world in terms of the number. The shortlisted cities are Hong Kong, Shanghai, Beijing, Guangzhou, Taipei and Shenzhen, among which, Hong Kong ranks first in China and third in the world.
China’s development in various fields in recent years has attacked worldwide attention and the influence of Chinese cities in the world is increasing day by day, especially Shanghai, which not only has rapid increase in economic volume, but also has increased its strength in aviation connectivity, finance, science and technology, industry and other fields. Shenzhen’s development speed is more rapid, its comprehensive influence in the Greater Bay Area is greatly enhanced, and it will continue to impact world-class cities in the future.
In addition, Chengdu, Tianjin, Nanking, Hangzhou and Chongqing are among the world’s Beta-rated cities. With the continued improvement of China’s comprehensive strength, these cities will have the opportunity to impact the world’s first-tier cities in the future.
Jan. 26, 2021
Jan. 26, 2021
Tourism or well-being?
Most of us have traveled at least somewhere. It could be either in your own country or further away to the other side of the globe. And this is the trend that will take over. More and more travelers go wandering around the world every year.
We can’t deny it wouldn’t be a great thing, as it is. It can even be vital for some countries as a source of income. Those countries could have their whole economy relying on travelers. What we often miss, are the downsides caused by it. These could be “small” things like trashing, forgetting animal rights, or at worst, destroying local culture and traditions. Most of the time this correlates between the number of tourists and the harmful effects, but we can’t take that for granted.
Many luckily have already started to fight against this. One good example of this found almost anywhere is certificates. They could signify almost anything from locality to saving the environment by more carbon-neutral solutions or less plastic used in the products. We can also be happy that tourists seem to be more and more aware of the certificates, and appreciate them more than the possible rivals without them.
In the end, what matters is how we choose to live our lives. No one can be perfect in everything, but each one of us can make a good try to make our world available for tourism without too many negative impacts. Perhaps our new slogan should be “Sustainable tourism for the win!”
(this is one of my English essays for school, but our teacher didn't correct it at any point so I would like it to be checked :))
Jan. 26, 2021
Abstract
In dieser Arbeit stelle ich den Übersetzungsprozess von Textauszügen aus dem Buch „Tagebuch der Armut: Aufzeichnungen einer brasilianischen Negerin“ von Maria Carolina de Jesus (1960/1962) vor. Der Übersetzungsprozess wurde nach dem kulturellen Übersetzungsparadigma anhand des Theoretikers HobiBhabha sowie Beiträge von Stuart Hall und anderen Theoretikern der Übersetzungswissenschaft durchgeführt. Diese Forschung zielt unter anderem darauf ab, angesichts der Idee der Rasse und aus einer schwarzen Perspektive Rassismus im brasilianischen Alltag durch das Schreiben/Weltbild einer schwarzen Schriftstellerin zu übersetzen/interpretieren. Die Forschungsmethodik durchläuft das „Thema-Feld“ von Peter Kevin Spink (2003) und „Escrevivência“ von Conceição Evaristo (2017). Die hier beobachteten Situationen, die der kulturellen Übersetzung unterliegen, wurden durch den Ort des Sprechens der Übersetzerin beeinflusst: Frau, Schwarze, Mutter, Migrantin und Sozialarbeiterin. Dementsprechend wurde der Schwerpunkt auf explizite Rassismusfälle in Carolinas Tagebuch sowie auf die Übersetzung täglicher Erfahrungen bezüglich der An- und Abwesenheit des Staates durch unterschiedliche staatliche Politik gesetzt. Durch Carolinas Texte ist zu beobachten, dass tägliche Erfahrungen der Autorin und ihrer Familie von strukturellem Rassismus durchdrungen sind. In ihrer Zeit hatte Carolina schon diese Wahrnehmung, indem sie einen Kontrapunkt über ihre Erfahrungen aus einer Perspektive setzte, die sie als ihren geopolitischen Standort und ihren Ort des Sprechens innerhalb der brasilianischen Gesellschaft betrachtete.
Jan. 26, 2021
La régle de cinq secondes
Alors, je pense que á propós du sujet de motivation - et des gens paresseux comme moi - il y a une régle importante, laquel nos suivant empéche de atteindre nos buts. La régle c'est le suivant: il faut commencer a faire le chose dans les cinq secondes qui ont passe de la moment dans lequel nous avons pensé en le chose. Sinon, nous nous convaincrons que c'est pas le moment pour commencer, que il faut preparer plus, que d'abord il fait mieux prendre du café, ou n'importe quoi, et par consequent, nous finirons ne faisont rien.
Pour cette simple raison, j'ai decide d'écrir cette court texte. J'ai sauve le page de langcorrect il y a quelques semaines, mais, je n'ai écrit rien, et donc j'ai pas vraiment progressé avec mon français. Et dans un instant, je souviens de cette page, et immediatement, j'ai decide de commencer a écrir en français
J'éspere que ça ne fut le pire français que vous avez lu dans votre vie. Néanmois, si ça fut le cas, je croix que l'amelioriation c'est la seul possibilite, que me donne beacuoup d'espoir. Je vous remercie beacoup d'avoir lu ma primiere tentative d'écrir quelque chose de coherente en français!
Jan. 26, 2021
练一练1
我需要用"再。。。也。。。"这个结构。
1、如果一个人不积极，不努力，(这是需要完成的句子)。。。 创造力再多也不会成功 (这是我写的)。
(If a person does not have a positive outlook and doesn't work hard, no matter how creative he/she is, he/she will not succeed.)
2、同学们只要平时认真学习。。。智商再多也不考试不及格。
(As long as students often study seriously, no matter how high/low their IQ is, they will not fail the exam.)
3、有些事情过去了就过去了，不要后悔，。。。再想改变过去也没门。
Jan. 26, 2021
What about having different teachers?
This is a difficult answer cuz it depends in the viuw you have.
Having the same teacher for years allows him to know what are your strength or your weaknesses, he gets to know you much more and with that, he is capable of provide to you a better and personalized education, otherside, change teacher every year, also have his beneficed, because you could learn news things with a different method of teaching.
What if the teacher you have before it wasn't that good teaching different topics?
You could only know by having another teacher and compare the two of them.
Also, it is good that a new person analysed your strength, he is going to look at you by a new perpective that no one else have, new perspective is always a good thing to have to get better, an change you're mind, for the best and not for the worse.
Jan. 26, 2021
Daybreak
Daybreak and Heize have teamed up for the indie band’s upcoming single.
According to the band’s music label Happy Robot Record’s announcement today, Daybreak is returning with a new single titled “Doesn’t Make Sense” on Feb. 2.
In this song, the band’s vocalist Lee Won Suk and Heize sing to each other as if they were having a conversation, capturing the thoughts and emotions of couples on the verge of breaking up.
In addition to Heize, who also wrote the lyrics, renowned songwriters Yoon Sang and Kim Eana participated in the songwriting process. According to Happy Robot Records, Yoon Sang, who became a fan of Daybreak after seeing their performance at “SUMMER MADNESS 2019: ESCAPE," sent a demo of the song to the band. Afterward, Kim Eana and Heize joined, respectively, to add their own twist.
“The fact that such powerhouses have collaborated on this track alone is highly remarkable,” the agency said. “Not to mention that the song has a great production quality.”
Source: Yonhap News
Jan. 26, 2021
Where to Try Out My English Skills
I hope to stay in New Zealand for a year someday and spend a lot of time on watching amazing starry sky. Canada is also one of my next travel destination since aurora can be seen there. Traveling abroad was most important motivation for learning English. I always devoted my long-term paid holiday to go abroad.
Last year, I was upset that I couldn't make myself understood in English and couldn't figure out what the bus announcements said about in New Zealand. I have to accept that my English skills aren't enough to communicate with native speakers. But, I guess that New Zealand English totally differ from U.S. English which we have learned for a long time in the Japanese educational system. English beginners like me are likely to ignore the differences of English pronunciation and intonation.
Taking into account my bucket list, I should get used to New Zealand English.
Jan. 26, 2021
Jan. 26, 2021
Jan. 26, 2021
Make sentences
1. Accompany
Lonely people are accompanied by pets.
2. Ravage
Crimes ravage this village.
3. Suppress
When I heard the news, I can hardly suppress my tears.
4. Rosy
The predictions of economy in China is rosy.
5. Arid
The books from this author are extremely arid.
6. Chill
I need to chill out after one-day work.
7. Condense
Please, condense your speech into several sentences because we are running out of time.
8. Damp
Nothing can damp my interest for English.
9. Correspondent
When I was a child, I used to dream about to be a correspondent in the future.
10. Revive
A group of people in China want to revive Confucianism.
Jan. 26, 2021
un courriel 6
J'ai une image MEB et une image optique. Je suis sûr que la région de l'image optique se trouve quelque part dans l'image MEB mais je n'arrive pas à la trouver.Pense-tu qu'on peut utiliser ton script pour superposer deux images ?
J'ajoute l'image optique brute. D'après mes notes, la taille d'un pixel est de 55 nm.
Jan. 26, 2021
Wi-Fi
Today, I couldn't use the internet before noon because my Wi-Fi router didn't work. I live in an apartment so I thought it was just a bad connection caused by simultaneous uses. However, after one hour I still couldn't access the internet. Therefore, I found my router had a problem. After all, after I unplugged the router and clean the LAN cable by air duster, the router has worked normally. It was lucky that I didn't have online classes while Wi-Fi was out of order, and I understood Wi-Fi is essential.
Jan. 26, 2021
Jan. 26, 2021
un courriel 5
J'ajoute une copie de l'image précédente pour indiquer l'échelle. Les autres images sont toutes dans la même échelle.J'ajoute également l'image MEB et l'image optique brutes. Ce sont la source des images précédentes, que j'ai découpées et superposées.
Dis-moi si tu as besoin d'autre chose. Je viens de commencer à utiliser ton script. Ça marche bien et ça m'aide à ranger mes données.
Jan. 26, 2021
Gestern
Gestern bin ich am acht Uhr aufgestanden. Nachdem ich mir meine Zähne geputzt hatte, saß ich auf einem Stuhl, um zu meditieren. Vor ich mit dem Aktivität angefangen hatte, stellte ich einen Wecker auf meinem Handy an, der 20 Minuten lang dauert. Nach meine Meditation, hatte ich alle Geschirr in der Küche abgespühlt. Dann, ich fruhstuckte und telefonierte mit meiner Freundin. Nach eine Stunde, ging ich nach Panjim, die eine Stadt 20 Kilometer fern von meinem Haus war. Da hatte ich gegangen, um kleine Besorgungen zu machen. Ich kam um 14 Uhr vom Draußen zurück und kochte mein Mittagessen. Nachdem das Mittagessen, las ich ein Buch und trank ein kleine Tasse Tee. Um 18 Uhr schaute ich einen Film an, der sehr lustig war. Wegen den Film war ich in guten Launen und daswegen ich hatte für Abendessen Pasta gekocht. Um 22 Uhr war ich ins Bett und hörte ich einen Podcast an. Ich schlaf danach.
Jan. 26, 2021
Australia Day
Oggi è Australia Day, cioè la festa nazionale ufficiale dell'Australia. Purtroppo non è una festa felice. Il 26 gennaio 1788 ricorda lo sbarco della First Fleet (Prima Flotta) nella Baia di Sydney e il preso formale della terra del Nuovo Galles del Sud come colonia inglese. Però la maggior parte degli aborigeni, e anche una grande parte degli australiani, chiama l’Australia Day “Invasion Day” (Giorno di Invasione). Questo nome non riferisce solo alla nuova colonia, ma proprio alla decimazione degli aborigeni, alle confische di terre usando la dottrina legale “terra nullius” (gli inglesi erano sicuro nella presa delle terre perché gli aborigeni, secondo loro, non contavano come una civilizzazione) e alla distruzione della loro cultura fino ad oggi (vedi la distruzione recente di un luogo importante per gli aborigeni compiuto da Rio Tinto). Quindi secondo me dobbiamo cambiare la data e cercare ancora di andare verso Reconciliation (riconciliazion).
Jan. 26, 2021
Té o café
Me gusta más el café que el té, porque es una bebida, que estoy adicto. Lo bebo todas las mañanans. Es una costumbre que me gusta mucho. Antes he bebido muchos más de eso. Pero no me gustaba beber tan mucho. Ahora bebo soló una taza cada día.
Pero me gusta té también, especialmente en el invierno. Creo que es agradable tener una bebida caliente, cuando entras por frío.
Jan. 26, 2021
Mis preocupaciónes
En este momento, estoy en mi primero año de un programa doctorado, y encuentro que es muy difícil durante la pandemia. Mi programa es en Florida, pero vivo a Portland, y he nunca visitado el estado de Florida en mi vida. Estoy haciendo todo mi trabajo en línea este año, entonces he nunca conocido las otras personas en mi grupo doctorado. Tengo un par de amgios a Portland con quien hablo en persona durante cuarantena, pero estes amigos no son en academia, entonces no saben como es este cambio de vida. Tengo la impresión de que trabajo todo el tiempo, pero al mismo tiempo, no soy productiva en cuarentena. El tiempo de año escolar viene donde todos los estudiantes tienen que informar a nuestro programa sobre todos los algos que hemos hecho este año, y me preocupa que no he hecho lo bastante.