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March 7, 2020
Germs
Yesterday morning, my boss said with anger, "I just lightly coughed a few times while I was on the train. Then, every last one of them gave me cold looks. It pissed me off! I'ｍ not a germ!" He’s cheesed off all morning.
At lunch time, I got some cups of yogurt from a colleague in another division. I gave them to my members. When I handed one to the boss, he gave me a disgusting look and said, "Did you wash your hands?" I said yes, then he was reluctant to take it.
I shouted in my mind.
"It's you~~💢 who treats us as germs. Shoot!"😂
March 7, 2020
Primer Post
Saludos a todos! Espero que todos estén bien esta noche. Me alegro que pude encontrar un sitio como este por que imaginasen que yo estaba buscando por todo el Internet un sito donde la gente pueden hacer unos ejercicios de escrito y que pueden ser corregidos también.
Ademas de ese poquito de comentario, déjame hacer una introducion sobre yo mismo para que me conocen.
Mi nombre real es Michael, tengo 21 anos, y ahora mismo estoy viviendo en Puerto Rico. Como podrían imaginar, mi familia es Puertorriqueno y la mayoría viven en la isla.
Aunque ya me considero como fluido (por lo menos, ya he alcanzado un nivel decente en el idioma), admito que todavía tengo que mejorarlo muchísimo jajaja.
Y por los que quizás iban a preguntar, he vivido la mayoría de mi vida en los estados y por eso, mi español no es tan avanzado como debería.
Que eso seria todo para mi introducion, espero que no hayan sido tantos errores jajaja.
Que pasen buenas noches y créenme, este no sea el único que voy a hacer en este sito :).
March 7, 2020
Запись в дневнике №4
Так, мы с женой только что переехали в ее родной город, Фантхиет. До сих пор мы уже обжились, я бы сказал. Всё уже знакомо для жены.
Но я ещё приспосабливаюсь к одной вещи. Труднее всего — это привыкнуть к кухне. По-моему мне не удастся осваиваться по Вьетнамской кухне. Хотя она реально очень вкусная, но питательных веществ правда не хватает, особенно для тех, которые серьёзно занимается фитнесом.
Вроде было бы ничего страшного, только здесь, все относятся к питанием как общественное дело. Тёще желательно сама питать всех у нас дома, своим приготовлением. Раньше, когда мы с женой навещали тёщу и теста, питаться блюдами дома дня 2-3 не было проблемы. Зато сейчас мы здесь надолго, пока оформляем просьбу для визы жены, и более того я тренируюсь для гонки в Мае.
Так что, вчера я решил съездить в далёкий супермаркет за продуктами, в основном за овощами, чтобы питательных веществ в рационе было достаточно. Блюда с такими ингредиентами я сам готовлю. Я думаю, что сначала это запутает тёщу, но надеюсь, что в конце концов она привыкнет.
March 7, 2020
Pratique de la grammaire 9
Le plus-que-parfait:
1. J'avais mangé le petit déjeuner avant de faire de l'exercice.
2. Quand mon mari s'est rentré chez nous, je m'étais déjà brossé les dents.
3. Le concert avait déjà fini lorsque mon ami est arrivé.
4. Les enfants avaient fait leurs devoirs avant le week-end.
5. Mes parent avaient déjà acheté leurs billets d'avion avant que le nouveau coronavirus s'est propagé.
Le passé du conditionnel:
6. J'aurais déjà terminé ce travail si tu m'avais donné un peu de l'aide.
7. Si vous auriez su qu'il pleurait, seriez-vous restés chez vous aujourd'hui?
8. S'il n'avait pas laissé tomber son portable, il ne l'aurait pas perdu.
9. Elles ne seraient pas venues si elles avaient su que cet homme serait venu aussi.
10. Nous ne lui aurions pas acheté un gâteau si tu 'avais pas nous dit qu'aujourd'hui est son anniversaire.
March 6, 2020
Wiatr
Wiatr mocno wieje i liście, które spadają z drzew, tworzą zielony wir ponad jeziorem. Fale uderzają o brzeg i mam wrażenie, że krzyczą: "Prosimy, ochroń nas przed tym złym wiatrem". Słyszę ich krzyk o pomoc, ale nie jestem w stanie zrobić niczego, aby przeciwstawić się złemu wiatrowi. Fale płaczą i powtarzają: "Prosimy, prosimy..."
Jestem tylko człowiekiem, co mogę zrobić, aby zabić wiatr? A fale nie przestają płakać, więc wstaję i krzyczę: "Dlaczego to robisz, zły wietrze? Dlaczego tak ranisz te małe i bezbronne fale?". Nagle wiatr zatrzymuje się i liście spadają malując jezioro na zielono. Wtedy usłyszałem szept wiatru: "A dlaczego ten świat tak rani bezbronny wiatr?". Wtedy wiatr odleciał i nigdy już go nie widziałem.
March 6, 2020
March 6, 2020
Why I'm learning English
I'm learning English because there are so many things that I can do with this knowledge, for example, the English language opened many contents that before weren't possible for me to consume, now I can read manga, books, listen to podcast, movies, etc. There are no limits anymore and as long as I'm studying I now that other things will open up for me too.
March 6, 2020
March 6, 2020
March 6, 2020
About a Certain Dairy Product
I'd like to present to you a drink that is commonly consumed by the mountain inhabitants of the Caucasus and people from Central Asia. It is called "tan". Please note that it's not related to that brown skin you get after laying under the sun.
The beverage is a fermented milk product and usually made from cow and goat milk that has had fermented bacteria, milk yeast added. It's traditionally made from matzoon by the people I mentioned in the previous paragraph.
This beverage provides a pile of benefits; for instance, it can cure hangovers provided that you consume 1.5 litres over twelve hours. You'll feel a lot better. Subsequently, it facilitates a heaviness in your stomach as well. Another beneficial effect is that it can quench your thirst more t than other beverages, so drink until your thirst is sated. The latest and most questionable benefit of tan is its effects on weight loss. Just consume 250ml of tan after each meal.
In conclusion, the beverage helps relieve various stomach pains, especially in the gut.
March 6, 2020
江戸時代の人々
江戸時代の農民の日常生活はかなりきつかったです。まずは、早く起きなければならなかったことです。そして、毎日畑で働かなくちゃいけませんでした。外で働くから、労働条件は厳しかったです。故に、暑苦しい夏それとも寒い冬も関係なく、野菜を作ることが続かなければならなかったです。そうしなければ、彼らはきっと貧乏になります。それから、最悪のシナリオは死ぬことです。
逆に、農民たちに比べると、天皇は夢のような生活を暮らしていました。天皇は貧乏になることの可能性はとても低かったです。大きな京都御所に住んでいました。そこで彼は主に政務を執り行っていました。しかし、偶には節分などの儀式があるの時、儀式の準備担当していたのは天皇でした。
March 6, 2020
Der Freitags Feierabend
Nach einer ziemlich langen Woche ist heute endlich Freitag!
Aber heute mache ich nichts Besonderes, denn ich würde lieber einen ruhigen Abend, mit guter Gesellschaft und vielleicht einem guten Wein, zu Hause verbringen.
Diese Woche habe ich leider nicht zu viel von dem Buch, dem ich gerade lesen, gelesen. Ich hoffe, dass ich heute Abend Lust habe, meinen Roman zu lesen.
March 6, 2020
My Memory About My Students
I used to be a teacher when I was in my twenties.
My students were not able to go to elementary school (7-12 years old) & junior high school (13-15 years old) due to sickness caused by their mental issues.
Only one thing I could do was to give them scholastic knowledge as much as I could when they came to a small classroom that was in a hospital where they went to see their doctors.
Some students came to the classroom everyday, and other students came once a week or less.
Now I wonder how much they were struggling for themselves.
Some people might think, “Why don’t they move on? Time is limited. Just move on and don’t waste your time.”
Now I know they never wasted their time at all, and they really needed enough time to do every little thing.
Life is long.
We can stop or run away from darkness anytime anywhere.
I suddenly remember my old students today.
One of my students will work at an animal hospital this spring.
I hope they are walking their own paths with smile.
March 6, 2020
「Go Fish」
去年まで子供に英語を教えました。私たちはボードゲームをしました、でも英語だけを話します。
ルールも英語で教えました。日本語でもやってみたい！
「Go Fish」のルール
２から5人のプレイヤーカードを5枚引く。２から３人のプレイヤーがいますと、7枚引く。
ターンの間に、プレイヤーは他のプレイヤーのカードの番号を聞く。あのプレイヤーはカードを持っていく、あのプレイヤーはターンのプレイヤーにその番号のカードを上げる。しかし、あのプレイヤーは持っていくないと、あのプレイヤーは「Go Fish」って言う。そして、ターンのプレイヤーは1枚カードの引く。
2枚同じの番号のカードを持っていくと、あのペアを捨てる。
26ペアを捨てられると、ゲームは終わりです。
一番ペアを捨てたのプレイヤーは勝つ。
March 6, 2020
Tour du monde
Si je pourrais faire un tour du monde, la première ville auquelle je voudrais aller est Taipei. J'y suis allée il y a presque six ans, et je me souviens que la nourriture était très délicieuse et les gens étaient très gentils.
Je voudrais aussi aller en Europe, à la France, la Suisse, l'Allemand, et peut-être un peu d'autres pays. Je voudrais aller à la Musée du Louvre, et j'ai des amis qui habitent en Suisse et en Allemand. Si je vais en Europe, je voudrais rencontrer mes amis!
March 6, 2020
2020.03.05(木)
私の投稿間の日数がどんどん増えていってしまう… 今週が忙しいねー 思いより用事が多くある。奨学金の締め切りは明日の午後3時にある！願書のエッセイが書き上げた。ところが、ガイドラインを再び読んで、私は間違えた。だから今不完全なエッセイしかない、、速く書かなきゃ！
ところで、コロナウイリスのせいで色々なめんどくさいことになったww 日本人の友達が卒業式は行ったけどご両親が式にきてはダメって言っていた：（ 火に油を注ぎて、大学の入学式も休止された。それは最悪のタイミングだなー。仕方がねえけど悲しいことだと思う。私の卒業旅行の予定も休止したらいい気がする。でもまだ不明なので、まだなんとも言えない。夏までに治ってたらいけどね。そのうち分かる。
March 6, 2020
History Classes
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
When asked abut whether or not students should take history courses whatever they are major in, some people completely support that students have to take history lessons. While others oppose that the history courses are not required. There are some advantages and disadvantages, but, I am more in favor of students should not be required to take history classes.
To begin with, if students are able to take courses they have a passion for, it will increase their career options. More to the point, students explore their interests by taking courses they like, not are forced to take lessons they dislike, which can broaden their horizons. They will have some distinct viewpoints which are able to enrich their integrated abilities, meanwhile, augment the opportunity of career . For instance, students who are in the field of English, they are also greatly interested in Science field. They take several related courses in order to enhance their knowledge and self-ability. After, graduated, they will have higher chance of working oversea, since they have strong fundamental in both English and Science.
In addition, what if students can focus on the field they are major in, they can put their whole energy on it and make efforts to become experts. To be more concise, if students have to take some courses which they are not interested, it is wasting time. Students can spare their time to study the field they chose and so their best on it. In the future, they probably become experts who are able to contribute our society. Case in point, most students who are excellent at computer, but not history. If they can use their time on computer studies, not taking history classes, they will have more knowledge and concept about computer, so. that students are able to invent something which is benefit to our society, By focusing on the field they truly have passion for, we can make a different to the world.
Admittedly, some people might say that students should take history courses no matter what their field of study is. It either helps them gain knowledge of world history or wider their perspectives. For example, suppose students had made friends with foreigners, they may share some history opinions, so that they are able to make closer with each others. Yet, I still believe that students do not have to take history lessons as curriculum, since they can take courses they are extremely interested to help them decide career, and focus on the filed which they can be contributors in the future. Hence, let students take courses they like is more benefit to them in their lives, after all.
March 6, 2020
China
I am very glad to know that business in China is returning. Factories resumed production exept for Wuhan. They predict that Chinese productivity would return to normal by the end of this month. I think this is a very fast recovery despite of many people loss. It is heartbreaking to think about those who lost families or friends by this virus and still have to back to work for their lives.
What I am concerned now is America. It means Grand Princess staying at near San francisco.
I strongly wish the same thing of Diamond Princess in Japan doesn't happen to her.
Thank you.
March 6, 2020
Electronic Records (Integrated)
The listening section completely refutes the reading passage in the fact that whether or not it is benefit to store patients' medical records in electronic database rather than traditional paper-based records. First, the reading says that using electronic records not only can reduce costs by saving money on storing and transferring paper records but doctors can easily access the records from almost everywhere when necessary. However, the lecturer points out that electronic records are unlikely significant, since doctors keep paper records for emergency backup and signatures needed for legal reasons. So, it still have to pay space cost for storing paper records.
Second, the reading passage mentions that one of the = electronic records' advantage is that it can decrease the chances of medical errors in spite of handwriting. So that it can prevent any serious consequences for the patients' health. Yet, the listening part argues that doctors still use paper to examine patients , take note and prescription by Hans. Office staffs, later time, interpret the information to the electronic databases by poor writing will cause some errors as well.
Last, the author thinks that electronic records can aid medical research. With the electronic records, these will provide needed information and can be accessed from any place for research benefits. Likewise, the speaker from the listening passage asserts that it is not necessary beneficial, it still find difficult to collect data from electronic records, since there is extremely strict privacy law in US. And some of information are not guaranteed for some patients can block information for any purpose.
March 6, 2020
I'm drawing again
Today I came back to something that I really like and this is drawing after a long time (2 months to be specific) without drawing I came back to it I just can't stand to stay without creating anything that I like or draw my fanarts of games and animes, and I believe that what set me back then was the fact that I was drawing not what I like but what seems to be the "correct to draw" in order to learn without considering the fact that for you to not burn out you need to remind yourself why in the first place you are doing it and as many warned me: you do that by drawing what you like and by drawing even if you think you're not ready yet.
March 6, 2020
Mon jour
Je suis très fatiguée, mais je veux encore à écrire quelque chose.
Aujourd’hui, j’ai travaillé avec les enfants dans l’école primaire (classe de cinquième).
Ils étaient semblant à posséder un commerce. J’étais avec les enfants dans l’hôpital. C’était très amusant.
Quand même, je me dors maintenant. Bonne nuit!
March 5, 2020
Las noticias
Hoy en día no me gusta ver las noticias, prefiero leerlas por internet. Creo que ser informado es algo muy importante pero las noticias pueden ser demasiado dramática y también pueden darnos cualquier información que quieren. Aquí en Australia la mayor parte de las noticias son operado por Rupert Murdoch así que tienen un prejuicio en su opinión. Por eso prefiero buscar por internet las noticias que son independiente, no demasiado a la derecha ni demasiado a la izquierda, y puedo leer los hechos y nada más.
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