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March 11, 2020
深夜
掃除しながら音楽を聞くのが好きです。昨夜、11時までに掃除しました。掃除している間に、誰か電話しました、まだ疲れましたけど。そして電話を切りました。やっと暇でした。
今朝、妹は電話しました。妹は「コルビー！どうして昨夜電話を切った！」と言っていました。
私は「ごめん。ごめん。ごめん。ごめん。」と言っていました。そして私達は今日についてを話していました。妹は友達に会っていましたので、電話を切りました。
私はときどき帰りたいですけど、勉強するのがとても重いですね。家族はCaliforniaに住むながら私の大学がTexasにあります。じゃあ、今寝ます。
読んでくれてありがとうございました。おやすみなさい。
March 11, 2020
March 10, 2020
March 10, 2020
Algo que no me gusta
A mí no me gusta el sistema de salud en los E.E.U.U. La mortandad aquí es más alta que la mortandad en los países donde la sanidad es un derecho. ¡Qué pena que la calidad de tu seguro de salud dependa en gran medida de tu trabajo! Acabo de leer que el 25% de la población pospone la visita al médico porque no puede pagar el costo alto de la atención sanitaria.
March 10, 2020
「ダニーと恐竜と大嵐」 第1番
今日は子供の物語を訳すことがいい練習と思うていました。だから、こっちらで「ダニーと恐竜と大嵐」を、
恐竜はダニーと一緒に遊びのために来てくれた。春の日が晴でした。ダニーと恐竜は子犬と一緒に遊んだ楽しい時でした。そして、雲が来た。。。
。。。ぽつぽつで雨が降り出した。これは悪くなかったけど。。。
ゴロゴロ！雷が出て雨がざあざあになった。ダニーは「心配じゃない。ただ嵐です。」と言った。
子犬は「イェイ」と弱音をして家に走る。恐竜は「うわぁ」と泣き声して子犬と行く。
ゴロゴロ！空は稲妻が一杯と雷がガーンした。
子犬は怖く跳躍した。恐竜は跳躍したときが。。。
。。。屋根を当たった。
「痛い」と言った。ダニーは「おっとっと。それは跡が残っている」と言った。
稲妻はまた起こったと子犬は走ってベッドの下で隠れる。
続きます。。。
March 10, 2020
March 10, 2020
March 10, 2020
Fortune knocks the door of the enterprise of Tacos and Fajit
The times that has passed sins we have apertured the enterprise are filled with uppers and downers but all contribute to the well feeling of the members of this homestead. Aperturing your owns restaurants can to teach you an abundance of things about the industry of the food and of sure a lot about your self too.
In the beginning of times this enterprise was turbulent because the clientele is asking for more eatables that we have in the menus, or they some times overpopulated the facilities and it was impossible to handle all petitions at once. In good manners of fortune, a berry good friend of mines is a restaurateur who owns a hot dog joint with agglomerated success, so he combines with me into partnership and sins then the enterprise flies in direction of success like a rocketsheep. When my wive heard he comes into business she susurrated that we should to be careful but all is well for now.
He festinated to bring the additions of smart orderings, so now costumers order from touch screen at the entrance, and have a sip of drink that is always refillable and at the times they already get to the counters, their meals are ready to go, just have to pay for the food and voi·la, enjoy a tasty savory rich plate of food made with the love. We, after that, make haste to create auditions for new position for waiter and waitress and to our very good lucky, after the selection is finishes, the two lasting contestants has been gaving the best ingredient to the recipe of service for costumers that we had, because the guy is fun and witty, and very charming so people relation to him easy, and the woman always always has smiles on the face and people know they like that, and additioning to the service that is now fast, the people have many better experiences and give us merry reviews.
In fact, the business is sometime so well, than we now are open in three other rooms than before, and provide accomodations for two times the number of peoples we could to before. In fact, the business has rocketsheeped that sometimes we have alive music and the musicians create a vibe with the grandiloquent lyrics the put in the music that always have to do with the food and the drinks that we put on the plates of the diners.
My partner has suggestions of marketing so we put a billboard on the road, but I contradict his words and decide to do it with the mouth, and in less than a lightning thunders in the sky, we put the joint in the mouth of all the locals and it has becoming a great success with sustained growth ratings.
However , to my shock and my awe, the luck was soon to walk into my door because, a few days later, we had the blessed fortune of receiving a local celebrity in the joint and all the people tweeted to their knowns about it and the business tripled and is been tripeling sins the performance of that night.
We have the occasional brawler that puts spirits in the hibiscus drink and requires the attention of the bouncer (my partner is 2 meters and 2 centimeters tall and he is also the bouncer) or he creates torment in the lives of the customers. Other than that, so far so good.
March 10, 2020
March 10, 2020
March 10, 2020
Bees (Integrated)
The listening content completely refutes the reading passage in the fact that it is possible that bees have existed on Earth as early as 200 million years ago. First, the reading thinks that there have not ever found fossil remains of bees until 100 million years ago. However, the listening part asserts that fossil bees are preserved by trees' sticky liquid, which were rare 200 million years ago, but become common much later. So the fact that there has no fossil remains at that time, it does not mean that bees did not exist.
Second, the reading passage mentions that bees feed on flowering plants, but there did not have the first absence of flowering plants 200 million years ago. It is unlikely bees have existed before that time. Likewise, the lecturer points out that the early bees could have fed on non-flowering plants, such as pine trees that occurred flowering plats during evolutionary history. Later, when flowering plants evolve, bee may have adapted to feeding them. Thus, bees are likely have exist at that period of time.
Finally, the author says that there lack some of the finer details of bees' nests, while fossilized structures are found today. Chambers, for example, Chambers of modern bee nests are closed by caps, but the evidence of fossil lack of caps. So, the fossilized structure may made by others insects. Yet, the speaker from the listening argues that there is chemical evidence that supports the bees built chambers. Morden bees use waterproofing materials to protect their nest chambers. The fossilized chambers were found out that they also contained the same kind of waterproofing substance. Hence, bees are likely have appeared 200 million years ago.
March 10, 2020
Pratique de la grammaire 10: Le subjonctif
1. Il faut que j'aille à l'hôpital après de quitter mon boulot ce soir.
2. Il est un peu bizarre qu'elle ne fasse rien aujourd'hui. Normalement elle aiment bien sortir avec ses amis.
3. Il est préférable que nous arrivent à dix heures du matin.
4. Tu veux que je demande au cadre s'il augmentera notre salaire? Je préfére que tu le fasses.
5. Je suis très contente que ma famille aille en Corée du Sud pour me rendre visite cet été.
6. Regrettez-vous que vous ne puissiez pas aider votre ami?
7. Si tu veux trouver le suspect, il est important que tu saches où il est allé hier soir.
8. Il faut qu'elles ne soient pas en retard demain.
9. Le professeur souhaite que nous réussissions.
10. Il est important que vous ne buviez pas d'alcool avec ces medicaments.
March 10, 2020
日記（第６９番）：久しぶりの出会い
６年前に中学生であったころの友達に食事を誘われました。彼らはインフォコム部の友達です。久しぶりなのに、急に誘われるのは、びっくりしました。でも、それは悪くありません。18 chefsというところで食べようとしているようです。その飯屋は、学生として安いです。学生には、独特の割引があります。４００円を払うと、小さいアイスとアイスレモンティーとお好きなようにできるご飯がサーブされます。ご飯のことをちょっと説明したいと思います。まず、ご飯やスパゲティや焼き飯などを選びます。そして、ソースをクリームやカレーやボロネーゼを選びます。最後は、おかずを鶏肉や豚肉や牛肉などから選びます。このような感じの食事です。
March 10, 2020
La mia ciudad
Hola Todos!
Yo haría hablar de la mía ciudad Lippstadt. Ella es una pequeña, pero fantástica, ciudad in NRW in Alemana. La ciudad esta circa Dortmund. Yo soy italiano pero vivo aquí por estudiare en la universidad. La ciudad es muy característica. Aquí esta una maravillosa iglesia en el estilo gótico. El plato típico esta el "bratwurst" (Yo pienso), esto es similar all'hotdog
March 10, 2020
Un poquito de mi historia
Hace 3 días que hice mi primer post (mas o menos mi introducción) y aunque ya les había dicho unas información sobre mi, quisiera hacer un post mas dedicado a mi historia para que por lo menos me conocen un poquito mas mejor (y también por que no pude pensar en alguna otra tema para discutir jaja).
Para que ustedes sepan, aunque yo crecí principalmente en los estados, yo nací en Puerto Rico, específicamente en Mayaguez. Mi padre era soldado en el ejercito y por eso mudamos de Puerto Rico cuando tenia mas o menos 5 meses.
Por el trabajo de mi padre, he vivido por muchos estados (incluso algunos que quizás no conocen), una lista corta de los estados donde vivía son Tennessee, Washington (el estado, no confunden con el capital de los EEUU), Norte Carolina, y Virginia. Y Virginia fue el estado donde me gradué.
Habían instancias también cuando vivía en Puerto Rico, como cuando nací, en 2009/10,... y actualmente en 2020.
Y puedo seguir con mas de mi historia pero estoy bien seguro si yo sigo mi historia no terminara hasta el fin de 2020 jaja.
Espero que hayan aprendido algo de mi historia y que pasen buenas noches!
March 9, 2020
Replica an excellent movie!!
The movie I watched yesterday in the night it's call Replica and is starring by Kanuee Reeves and the movie is about a neuroscientist who is a genius and crack in technologies and neuroscience. He work for a biotechnology company in a project which consist to move the Human consciousness on to a robot. In a moment he reached it, using the man's body who were into armed forces but the man didn't can to keep the calm and finished for taking off his life.
Then the scientist and his family was planing a travel but in the road they had an accident and his family die. Immediately he call his friend who was in a experiment similar to the main character and it was about to make animals and human clones (something really interesting). When his friend arrived, he tell him to carry out his family at his house because he wanted to bring them to lives.
Ok but... how? How did he think about doing that? Well, he will do that copying the memory of his family, making clones of them and putting the memory and consciousness in each clone.
I recommend the movie, is veery interesting and revealing.
March 9, 2020
Woskowy świat
Pewnego dnia zdałem sobie sprawę, że istnieje świat na świecy. Małe woskowe ludziki mieszkały na tym niezwykłym lądzie i często rozmawialiśmy. Bały się płomieni, bo mogłyby stopnieć przy ogniu, więc mieszkały na brzegu świecy. "Prosimy, czy możesz nam pomagać? Za każdym razem, gdy widzisz, że płonie ogień, zgaś go. Tylko tak możemy przeżyć" powiedziały bez większej wiary. Zdecydowałem się trzymać świecę w moim pokoju, w którym ludziki mogły być bezpieczne. Codziennie przyglądałem się z zainteresowaniem, jak żyły na swoim małym woskowym świecie i upewniałem się, że knot został zgaszony. Chciałem chronić ten delikatny świat i istoty go zamieszkujące. Niestety życie woskowych ludzików nie jest łatwe i wszystko jest dla nich niebezpieczeństwem. Gdy pewnego dnia zostawiłem świecę na parapecie, odkryłem, że wosk stopniał przez kaloryfer pod oknem. Woskowe ludziki zginęły. A piszę te słowa, by podtrzymać pamięć ich istnienia.
March 9, 2020
March 9, 2020
Ich übersetze mal eine kurze Zitat des Autors Albert Camus
Für mich, auf jedem Fall, ich habe nur in meinen Jugendlichen Jahren, diese starke Hoffnung und Begeisterung Gefühl gekannt, die die langen Trainingstage bis zu der verlorene oder gewinne Spiel begleitet.
Aber eigentlich, das Wenige über Moral, dass ich weiß, habe ich auf die Theaterbühnen und in Fußballstadien gelernt, die meinen echten Universitäten verbleiben würden.
March 9, 2020
Beginning at the start of a new life and work.
The period of the lasts two months has been too confusion for my life, in the cents of the organization that we have been obligated to accommodate our daily routines in my house and in my family. As a humongous spin of situations, the former brother of another mother of mine files motions to reduce the persons who are working in the branch, and with total lack of advertance, he did one day publish in the face book portal of the branch that cubiclers and managers will be reduced because the enterprise is needing to make more bucks, and with the present performance of the last months of the last year, that money is not enough to cover every expenses that they need, and that all persons that are selected in the low performing ranges will be calling in the after days for interviews to decide the destiny and choose if it is satisfactory, or negative with the personal vision for the future. I have always the habit to never give my knees permisions to go shaking if there is horror near, or if all other persons in the rooms have the shiverings of terror to think they are losing their works. So, for this reason, my knees stayed like icebergs, solid and with no movements, and I continuing with my day like all is normal, but a few little things did I know before the moments I am called to enter the office of my friend, and he shuts the door.
He always has good flavors for the music, and for spirits, so as soon I see a turning table and stacks of albums of the more iconic bands of the history recent; Mothership is on top. In additions he has on the top of the desk on the side of the computer a flask of crystal in the shape of a skull and it is full of rum, the Cuban kind, 32-years-old of age, and it is looking delicious. So I sit and expect a pouring of this rum, but I receive a very long cold impersonal heavy salutation in return, “empty your lockers, and leave the cubicle by the end of this Friday. Expect to receive your money of your termination by the second Saturday of the month in deposit forms and check with your local bank.” I am not for feelings my legs shaking, but in those moments, the mix of fear and joy overpowers reason and gut, and almost immediately I feel both my feet sweat, my ankles crumble, my knees crackle, the back of my knees grind, my stomach burn, my chest quiver, and my tears fear. I took the longest possible breathe of my time on earth, and exited the master cubicle. At the door I complements the tastes of the flask, and the stack, and with no looks back, I shut the door for ever.
The moment that Friday comes, I leave my belongings in the trunk of my car, and exit threw the big door, and drive to the stations where is the place that my family has been await for me to arrive, and as soon as they see my bucket of rust, they cheer and wave. I stop. They get on the car, and we drive for all the night until we got to the new town. New town, new life, new house, no looks for the behind. We arrive in the approximations of 3 in the morning of Saturday and no person bothers to unbox the packs, or unpack the boxes, we just only flat to bed like die right there, and sleep without stop until the 4 or 5 o’clock in the afternoon. For the rests of the days, we prepare the homestead as we best can. My wive has collections of paintings and proceeds to hang to the wall until looks beautiful, and I helping all the day with the things heavys. The childrens perfom recognition of the vicinity to the east and to the west, and they come back with news positive that the territory has all the things in their expectations. The neighborhoods are friendly for the more part, and the next door ones keep to them and never talk, which is fine by us. This is the longer week I have never have in all my time on earth, but in the final, it pass and Satuday is here so I drive to the bank, and open my wallet for the id and tell the teller to read me my balance and what surprise, there is forty two thousand dollars in the account, and I was to flip but in control don’t. I only leave the bank and drive back to the house jumping in my mind of joy and to understand how this happens, where did all money comes from. I check all statements and all is clear, and when my wive sees this, she overjoys with happiness and faster than sooner she says we are opening the business the she has ever wants, and this is fine by me, so we find a local, set the tables and burners and in less then two weeks, we have a diner serving pulled sanwhiches, deep fried fajitas, hot dogs with the dog made in the home, and the barbecue salsa that we make in the home drives all the peoples crazy and they love it, they ask for more, and the selection of natural waters that we make with infusions of spices are heaven to their tongues, so we do good and I am standing on my feet again, and we are standing upright altogether as a family.
The bigger surprise is when Jonas, my former ex friend, one day enters the joint and sits to eat guacamole tacos with hibiscus slurpy, and when we connect the eyes, my instinct basic calls for retaliation but suppressing my anger, I arrive to the table and asks if the food is to his liking, and he says he is glad to see the dream of food shop has been coming true, and before I can talk, he continues to say that it was necessary to lay me like that, and that the money was enough severance for to accomplish the dream, and finally he tells me that the branch is now another thing with new administration and nobody likes the new direction and that he hopes what he did for me is working, and because I don’t understand I say if he makes this on purpose, and he says he knows I felt miserable if continue to work in a work that has no passion anymore. He says he don’t have expectations for forgiveness but he enjoys that the dream of my family is now a possibility.
March 9, 2020
March 9, 2020
Random Example Sentences
1. The amount of iron ore in this area is twice as much as the amount of copper.
2. The poll revealed that working outdoors is three times as efficient as sitting in the office in terms of productivity.
3. The price of paraffin was increasing over the period between June and September, however, in October it steadily fell.
4. The rate of mortality here dropped to a low age of fifty-seven in 2005 .
5. The quality of medical education almost dropped to eleven point eight percent, whereas the quality of legal education rose to fifteen point seven percent.
6. The sales of houses rose at a slow pace from twenty thousand properties in two thousand six to nearly twenty-four thousand in two thousand eight.
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