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Feb. 3, 2021
Der erste Weltraumspaziergang
Im 1965 erreichten die Russen einen weiteren Durchbruch im Weltraum. Sie hatten schon den ersten Mann im Orbit, Gagarin, gebracht, was ein Ergebnis der Volstok Mission war, aber Gagarin war während der gesamten Reise im Raumschiff. Die nächste Mission sollte der erste EVA (Außenbordeinsatz) erreichen. Der gewählte Mann war Alexei Leonov, ein Leutnant in der Armee und obwohl er viel Übungen hatte, die Mission hat fast in einer Tragödie geendet weil sein Raumanzug wurde aufgeblasen, und es war schwer, wieder hineinzukommen. Hoffentlich hatte er es geschaffen und kehrte als Held zurück. Du kannst Aufnahmen der Mission in dem Video des PSB Song E.V.A. auf Youtube sehen. In seinen späteren Jahren würde Leonov Maler werden und schöne Gemälde malen.
Feb. 3, 2021
Stress Abbauen
Der zweite Lockdown ist gekommen, keine wissen, wie lange kann es noch dauern. Während des Zeitraums vom Lockdown gehen die Leute trotzdem nach Ausländer, um den Urlaub zu machen. Ich habe gehört, dass mache Leute in Südafrika gewesen sind und sogar die regionale Virusvariante nach Deutschland mitgebracht haben. Dazu hat es geführt, dass die Todesfälle während der Weihnachten mehr als die letzten 3 Monaten gesteigert sind.
Feb. 3, 2021
Wahlrecht ab 16 Jahren.
Ich habe gestern im Fernsehen gesehen, dass es eine Initiative gibt um zur Senkung des Wahlalters, das heisst, jugendlichen dürften wählen schön ab 16 Jahren. Ich war überrascht zu erfahren, dass in Österreich haben die Jugendliche schon dieses Recht. Wenn ich stimmte dürfte, wäre ich zweifellos für diese Initiative, weil ich denke mit 16 Jahren ist man Reif genug um eine Stimme in die Politik zu haben. Hier in der Schweiz können jugendliche mit 16 schon arbeiten und müssen Steuer bezahlen (wenn sie eigene Einkommen haben), dann denke ich, wäre logisch, dass sie dürfte auch mitstimmen, wie und wofür sein Geld ausgegeben wird. In letzter Zeit wir waren Zeugen wie jungen Menschen für Themen wie Klimawandel und "Black Live Matters" auf der Strasse demonstrieren haben. Die sind Themen die für die ältere teil des Bevölkerung scheint nicht so wichtig zu sein, daher würde eine Senkung des Wahlalters die Balance zwischen die alte und junge Generationen fördern.
Feb. 3, 2021
Cheap plastic glove
I am talking about the kind of glove, when you go to KFC ask for it, they will give you for free.
As the virus fear everybody wearing a mask when they go outside.
Today inside a bus the woman sitting next with me, she was not only wearing a mask but also a pair of cheap plastic glove.
What do you think?
She didn’t talk to me or doing anything strange.
But I am kind of annoyed by her.
If she really worry about the hygiene, she shouldn’t take that bus.
Or she should cover her whole body with a large plastic bag!
I am sorry, am I bad to judge her?
Feb. 3, 2021
Setsubun
February second is a day of "Setsubun" in Japan. Setsubun celebrates the change from winter to spring, and people do amulet ritual by throwing soybeans. This is because demons don't like soybeans, which is a symbol of vitality. There is also double meaning that beans in Japanese are pronounced "destroying evils." The spell during this ritual is "Demons go outside, happiness comes inside." If children do this, a man wears a demon's mask, and children throw beans at him. After enjoying throwing soybeans, people eat beans as much as their age number.
Feb. 3, 2021
Translation Practice
In July 1965, Yang Chunqing, the cook of Wuhan Donghu Hotel, was resting. Suddenly, Chareman Mao came to him, smiled and asked: "Master Yang, I want to give you something. Do you want it?"
When the master head of this, he immediately was silly. Chairman Mao personally came to give himself a gift? This made Master Yang flattered, and he reacted, and felt that he couldn't accept it. Master Yang said hesitantly: "Chairman ... How can I... I can't accept it."
Seeing that Master Yang was very at a loss, Chairman Mao said "Master Yang, don't be nervous, I really like the bream you cooked."
Then chairman Mao took out a banner from behind and said: "This is a poem, which I wrote after I ate the bream you made, and you have more than half of the credit."
That day, after Chairman Mao visited the Yangtze River, while eating at noon, Master Yang cooked steamed bream for him. Chairman Mao ate very happily, especially after he just finished swimming in the Yangtze River. He ate such delicious fish. Chairman Mao immediately got inspiration and wrote the poem directly.
Master Yang learned that it was not a valuable item. It was a poem written by Chairman Mao, so he smiled and took the banner over, and opened it slowly. It is the famous poem "Shui Diao Ge Tou Swim", and it was the original draft. This banner is well preserved by Yang Chunqing. This poem also made Wuchang fish famous.
Yang Chunqing not only cooked Wuchang fish for Chairman Mao, but also cooked many dishes. Once he cooked "Furong chicken slices" for Chairman Mao, but this time Chairman Mao didn't eat a bit. He said: "The name of this dish is too bad to hear, it makes me lose my appetite. I don't eat it, even if the future economy is improved, I prefer eating some braised pork."
This is Chairman Mao. He gave his poem to an ordinary chef, which is his respect for him. Chairman Mao is such a person, (没有一点主席架子, sorry, I don’t know how to translate it into English) he has never been special, he has always been diligent and thrifty. Chairman Mao gave his whole life to the country and people, and we should always remember him.
Feb. 3, 2021
How many kanjis do I know?
I'm not sure how many kanji I know because it's too many to count on my own.
And, the number of kanjis you can read and of you can write is different. ( Kanjis I can read is more than ones I can write. )
Many kanjis you can read, much more comfortable you can read Japanese sentences. ( Japanese sentences using only hiragana are often hard to get its meaning. )
How I should write some kanji in handwriting would slip my mind sometimes, but I could remember its shape.
So, even in that case, I think I could pick from suggestions by software keyboards of my smartphone.
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Levadura de vainilla
Hoy mi amiga me llamé para enseñarme la nueva disposición de su despensa (justo había comprado un estante para organizarla mejor). Mientras me enseñaba el estante, noté que tenía "lievito vanigliato in polvere," un tipo de levadura que nunca había visto en mi vida.
Cuando la pregunté por este ingrediente, me dijo que su hermana la había comprado hace un año cuando quería hacer pan, pero luego se dio cuenta de que no se usa este tipo de levadura para hacer el pan que quería. Entonces, le regaló la levadura a mi amiga porque a ella le encanta cocinar, pero todavía no había encontrado ninguna receta para usarla.
Por curiosidad, busqué en YouTube para una receta y encontré un video titulado "Torta pan degli angeli." El video y la receta que lo acompaña están en italiano, así que intenté averiguar la receta y las ingredientes del contexto y palabras semejantes (solo para diversión porque me encantan las idiomas y no quería ir directamente a Google Translate). Al final, puse la receta en un traductor y la envié a mi amiga. Creo que sería muy divertido intentar hacer esta receta juntas.
Feb. 3, 2021
Need some help with my essay
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Decision-making is critically important in people's lives whether it may be alone or with the help of others. Some people think that they can take rational decisions in major issues, while others believe that discussing the problem with others might bring better outcomes. I strongly think that taking others input while making an important decision plays a vital role in the end results than self-decisions. This is because others look at the problem from different perspectives and provide valuable suggestions, and because experienced individuals people can analyze the pros and cons of the issue.
First of all, I am inclined to believe that when making a crucial decision it is better to consider others contribution because they provide unbiased judgements. This means individuals when they are dealing with a situation their judgements are masked and unable to identify the accurate information, whereas others are not in that position so they will give a fair advise. For example, when I was majoring in pharmacology, I was in a relationship with my girlfriend it went well for a while. Later, she started involving in my personal matters. Therefore, I lost my personal space and had a hard time to resolve the issue so; we have separated apart for a while. Then, when I discussed with my friend about this conflict, he suggested that explaining the situation to her might help to reinforce our relationship. I thought staying apart might help but never thought of reviving it. However, with my friend’s advice, I expressed my views to her, and she understood the situation. Now, my girlfriend is transparent and happier with me.
Second of all, seeking other's advice in making important decision enables people to get a clear picture of the plan. This structured planning comes with practical experience and better analytical skills. Therefore, inputs from experienced people helps to analyze the situation and avoid risks rather than considering self judgements. For instance, when I was preparing for TOEFL iBT, I purchased an online application My Best Test to practice the tests. However, the test materials were not adequate enough to support my studies and application expired in a month. Then, I asked my friend about this application, she clearly stated that there are free applications for practicing TOEFL along with strategies. Thus, I came to know the importance of others in while taking major decisions.
In essence, I think people would benefit more when they seek advice from others while taking an important decision than making by themselves. This is because some people give new insights to the issue and evaluate the condition in an experienced approach.
Feb. 3, 2021
Wat is je favoriet eten?
Ik heb altijd houden van sushi. Ik vind het super lekker smaken. Er is iets met sushi dat heel interessant is, bijvoorbeeld de kunst van het maken van sushi. Toen ik naar Japan reisde, leerde ik dat in Japan een sushichef een sushi-opleiding moet volgen voordat hij sushichief wilt worden. De cursus duurt drie jaren. Als ik thuis sushi maak, vind ik het rollen van sushi erg moelijk omdat een zeewiervel gemakkelijk scheurt. En als ik veel ingredieten op de rol zet, is het is ook erg moelijk om te rollen. Dus ik vind sushi rollen een prachtige kunst. Je moet de exacte hoeveelheid rijst, komkommer, en vis weten die je op moet doen. Mijn favoriete soort van sushi zijn de California rollen. Ik zette vroeger vis op sushi maar sinds ik een vegetarier ben geworden, is mijn nieuwe soort is avocado rollen. Ik kan het elke dag eten. Vind je ook sushi leuk?
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STRANJAH
STRANJAH has unveiled his remix of SAINt JHN’s “Roses.”
The DJ & music educational content creator has posted a snippet of his rework of “Roses” on his Instagram Feb. 2.
In this released short video, viewers can enjoy a bleak drum'n'bass version of “Roses,” which has a very different tone from the original.
SAINt JHN’s 2016 weighty hip-hop track “Roses” shook up the dance music scene last year when it was remixed into a breezy house track by Imanbek. The remix version has attracted more than 100 million YouTube views.
STRANJAH’s “Roses” remix is available to stream for everyone via his SoundCloud.
Feb. 3, 2021
Sume
Sume ("Onde?") é uma banda de rock de Groenlândia. O grupo se encontrou em Dinamarca, em um campus universitário. Começam a cantar em Groenlandês. A banda usou a música para chamar atenção à vida quotidiana na Groenlândia. Havia uma necessidade de reformo. Seu primeiro album foi "Sumut," ou "Para onde?"
Além da música, foi um tempo de mudanças rápidas. Groênlandia votou para autonomia.
O Sume tornou-se famoso. Em 2014, foi lançado um filme contando a história da banda.
Feb. 3, 2021
Adults doing exercise
"According to most doctors, adults need thirty minutes of physical activity at least five days a week to be healthy. However, most adults do not get this recommended amount of exercise. What can be done to help people get the exercise they need? Give examples to support your answer"
Exercise is one of the most important things in the people's life. Not only help to maintain physically healthy, but also help to be mentally relaxed. This physical activity can give them a lot of benefits, that I strongly support it. Some ways can help adults to get exercise understanding the benefits of doing exercise and writing down on a whiteboard to help remembering it.
My principal reason is that the physical activity helps to body to be with a huge energy, after that people had finished doing the exercises. This behaviour, people need to understand this benefit in their bodies during the time-work. It considerably count on a great advantage to them. I remember when I started doing some exercises at gym. The first week, it always is the worst; but after that, I could feel how my body gained this extra energy that I needed it, and it was really helpful in my diary activities.
Secondly, people may write down a small exercise schedule per week, for example, on a whiteboard or in a calender. It can help them to remember doing the exercises that they need it. Maybe, this habit could be easily forgotten, but if people see the schedule and remember doing it every day, I will surely they can achieve their goals that it is doing enough amount of exercise. A good example of this idea is my cousin. She has her own schedule on the whiteboard, and she can easily remember any activity or event that she has to do.
In conclusion, adults should be aware of exercise they need and look for some ways that can help them to remember it.
Feb. 2, 2021
Feb. 2, 2021
El cliffhanger
Los cliffhangers, los hemos experimentado todos nosotros. No me cuesta entender mis sentimientos de ellos. Aunque sé que se usan para construir tensión, los odio. También sé que es irracional que odie una técnica, pero no cambia mis sentimientos. Opino que es una idea asombrosa, sino usada demasiada. Un ejemplo excelente es las películas de Marvel (y su competencia). Los llevan usados en casi cada una de sus películas. Es tan popular esta moda, que ahora el público los espera.
Incluso los tienen las series populares en televisión. Entiendo la razón de que se usa al fin de una temperada. Aún así, no me gusta, especialmente cuando no está seguro de que regrese la serie. Eso es cómo lo del fin de la serie Agent Carter sucede. Al fin de temporada dos, lo mataron un personaje principal, pero nunca era una temporada tres. Aunque para ser justo, si se incluyó otro personaje principal en otra serie de Marvel, pero eso no es el punto. Cuando ocurre algo significativo en una serie al fin de temporada, les alienta a seguir mirando la serie a los fanáticos. Sin embargo, si la renovación no es asegurada, les puede salir desilusionados.
Al fin y al cabo, el cliffhanger es una técnica muy antigua, y aún se usa en nuestros días por una buena razón. A pesar de esto, deseo que se use mejor, y que su meta no sea tan clara.
Dos oraciones con "por mucho/más que".
1. Por más que me rogaras, no vas a alentarme a hacerlo.
2. Por mucho que me fascinara, no iré a allí nunca.
Feb. 2, 2021
Overnight Stay At The Desert
I will never forget the night I spent at the Sahara. When I was twenty years old, I visited Morocco and Spain with my friend of high school for two weeks. (I think that "visit" doesn't fit with this sentence, but "spend the time" has already used in the previous sentence.)
We were really looking forward to joining the desert tour from marrākish, Morocco. It takes three days by bus to arrive at the desert. During the bus trip, I got upset that some couples often kissed each other. I wondered why they can be indifferent to others since people must feel embarrassed and aren't likely to kiss in front of others in Japan.
The night has come soon after we arrived at the Sahara.We enjoyed a dinner and sounds of ethnic instruments. Then, tour guides laid out everyone's betting directly on the ground. We can look upon the stary sky while lying on the bed.
I got acquainted with the dutch couple during the tour. They let me know that the Sahara is popular as a honeymoon destination among European people.
Feb. 2, 2021
Sentences 009: Cryptos, hype, invest, loose
Money chasers turn out thousands of fake articles about obscure crypto currencies every week to lure gullible people to invest.
He invested 200 thousand pound sterling in Bitcoin without batting an eyelid.
The downfall of this crypto currency was an accident waiting to happen.
Feb. 2, 2021
Japanischer Rap
Ich höre Rap selten, aber ich habe eine japanische Rap Playlist gefunden und fand es wirklich gut. Ich glaube der Beat ist eher wie Hip-Hop als Rap, was einem komischen Gefühl der Nostalgie bringt. Außerdem, ich verstehe gar nichts was sie sagen und deshalb kann ich nicht den Text nicht mögen. Eine Gruppe insbesondere die mir gefällt ist Buddha Brand, ihr Lied "人間発電所", was übersetzt bedeutet "menschliches Kraftwerk" ist wirklich toll,"天運我に有り" (Es ist im Himmel) auch. Ich habe sogar Übersetzung der Texte gesucht, aber den originell Sinn ist etwa verloren.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ii-_EtWBVSM&t
Feb. 2, 2021
aufschieben
Ist aufschieben die beste deutsche Übersetzung von ,,Procrastinate" ? Also schiebe ich jetzt alles auf, das ich tun soll.
Ich erkläre mir ein bisschen. Ich habe eine mündliche Prüfung in 2 Wochen und es geht um Geschichte, ich habe schon alles gelesen und sollte den Inhalt sehr gut kennen. Aber ich fühle mich sehr nervös und vermeide es zu lernen. Vielleicht das ergibt keinen Sinn, aber die Probleme zu vermeiden ist eigentlich einen sehr bekannten Abwehrmechanismus. Ich denke, dass vielleicht es besser ist, wenn ich nur ein bisschen täglich lese und dann mir selbst fragen, was ich gelernt habe. Diese ganze Situation ist aber sehr nervig. Ich drücke mir die Daumen.