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March 26, 2020
March 26, 2020
'What' Cleft Sentences
1) What Samantha did was help an injured man stand up and give him a lift to the nearest hospital.
2) What happened was Daniel and I went out of the house, saw a suspiciously familiar face, then realized it was the offender from the news.
3) What he detested was the wedding invitation from his friend.
4) What Colonel Harris did was order all of us to wipe out the local residents in this area.
March 26, 2020
March 26, 2020
March 26, 2020
Quais são alguns pontos negativos das redeis sociais?
Pessoalmente, eu nunca me inscrevi num rede social, nem Facebook, nem Twitter etc. mas eu acho que tem pontos negativos.
Eu acho que o primaira problema é os "Fake news". É muito facíl nos redeis sociais de publicar informações errados. Por examplo, pessoas morreram no Irã porque eles leram no redeis sociais que álcool ia matar o Coronavirus.
Um outro ponto negativo e que nos podemos ser anónimo, então é possivel de falar sobre coisas ilegal ou intimidar outras pessoas.
March 26, 2020
March 26, 2020
March 25, 2020
Der Frühling kommt
Und weil wir alle Zuhause bleiben müssen, können wir den nicht genießen! Das ist wirklich schade. Die Sonne scheint, die Vogel singen und die Blumen blühen. Wobei ist seit ein paar Tagen die Temperatur etwas niedriger im Vergleich letzen Monat.
Habt ihr in den letzten Tagen spazieren gegangen?
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
Shazam Part 2
This article definitely contains spoilers.
Continuation from last time of the rundown.
The villain is a man who couldn't pass the Shazam test by the old Shazam when he was a child. This villain killed this old Shazam and gained an evil power with monsters.
Billy had moved from foster parent to foster parent. But finally he met a nice couple. This couple were also raised up in a foster home, and took in four children before Billy after they married. The family was not going well first, but after Billy's secret was revealed to the siblings, they started to cooperate with Billy.
This villain was so strong that Billy was struggling to fight. Billy's siblings helped him. At the climax, Billy stood a magic wand holding which the old wizard passed on to him, and told his siblings to clutch it. They said “Shazam” together, and then, all of them turned into adult Shazam. The Shazam team defeated the villain and his monsters.
I like this story very much!
Billy's real mom marooned him at a festival when he was a little boy because she was too young to raise him up. Billy met his mom in person while the nice foster couple took him in, but he was rejected by her. Among hero's stories I know, Billy is the first hero who has a really miserable background. But he gained a new family whose members are all good and cheerful and kind. Also, I think this foster parents are very happy because their children are all Shazam though they don't know.
At the ending scene, Superman appers at the last scene.
This is really irresistible to fans 😍
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
３月２５日。
先日、私は友達と近い森へ散歩に行きました。この森はたくさんの経路があります。私たちは運動をあんまりしなかったので、簡単な経路を選びました。でも、この経路はとてもつまらなかったです。左手に見ると色々な高いビルを見えたが、右手に見ると汚い川がありました。でも、私達は森の中に入る小さい道を見付けた。この道はとても不思議で日光があんまり達しませんでした。それで、面白いだと二人言いました。そして、二人は森の中に行きました。
高い坂が突然現れました。自分はちょっと疲れっていてけど、目の前に美しい事がありました。土には落ち葉や大きい石などをかけて虫がたくさん飛んでいたのです。その時、二人は絵の中に入られたようです。
March 25, 2020
Sentences With Participle Clause
1) Scrambling up the wall, Marc scratched his palm on the sharp stone.
2) Knowing not to move the unconscious person, Josh instantly called the ambulance.
3) Were you here on time, you'd have seen your son graduate.
4) Having been bumped over the spikes, the front tires of the car became flat.
5) After forming an alliance with that company, Ms Baker received a wealth of profit.
6) Having decided where the children might go, I headed towards the convenience store.
7) Not spotted, the intruder sneaked into the rear open window.
8) Having given the report succinctly, he headed out from the office.
March 25, 2020
Survive On Venus (Integrated)
The listening section casts doubt on the reading passage for humans are impossible presence on Venus. First, the reading states that the pressure at Venus's surface is much greater than at Earth's. So, almost everything is landed on Venus by humans, such as spacecraft, would be crushed. The listening part, however, asserts that establishing a station which is floating on Venus' atmosphere rather than surface, the problem can be solve. Since since the pressure on the air is lower than surface. So, there is no danger of the station to be crushed.
Second, the author thinks that Venus contains very less water and oxygen for humans surviving. So, these should be import from Earth to Venus. Yet, the speaker from the listening portion points out that Venus does contains carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, the chemicals are able to produce water and oxygen for humans survival. Thus, it is not necessary to supply these elements from Earth.
Finally, the reading passage mentions that sunlight is blocked by the thick clouds. Since very little light reaches the surface, humans could not get electricity to power. Nevertheless, the lecturer argues that above clouds are not very thick and clouds can reflect the sunlight too. People can collect the light from direct sunlight and reflection from above and below clouds to generate electricity to power the station.
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
Das Quarantänisieren
Einmal pro hundert Jahre... Hoffentlich das wird wahr, weil ich glaube dass ich durch so einander nicht erleben könnte. Diese Pandemie hat schon viele meine Pläne zerstört. Ich bin ein Senior und kann doch nichts tun. Ich sitze Zuhause, und breche zusammen, als ich fühle mich dicker und langsamer werden. Ich hasse mich, weil ich hasse meine Familie mehr jeden Tag. Meine Mutter ist mir sehr anstrengend, und mein Stiefvater ist einfach zu laut. Mein Großvater kann kaum irgendwas verstehen, und immer meine Mutter fragt dumme Fragen über Nachrichten von Wochen die schon passiert sind. Ich darf kaum ein Buch lesen, Fernsehen, oder eine Coke trinken, ohne meine Mutter etwas sagen. Ja, ich kann endlich Dinge die mir gefällt kaufen, aber das ist noch nicht ohne Kommentar von ihr.
Ich habe mich nicht so sehr vom Verlust Proms geweint, und auch nicht für den Schulabschluss, aber ich wäre infrage für eine Reise nach Deutschland kommen, und jetzt ist es einfach nicht. Ich habe Reisen verloren, und, am wichtigsten, meine tägliche Interaktionen mit meine Freunde und, besonders, Freundinnen, habe ich noch nicht mehr. Ich bin ja sehr enttäuscht, sehr frustriert drin, und will viel tun, aber kann nichts. Ich kann nur hoffen, dass, als ich so lebe, würde ich mich zu verbessern lernen, ohne Behörde.
Entschuldigung für das Ablassen meinen Dampf, aber ich wollte auf Deutsch zu schreiben, und das war all dass zu mir kam. Bitte helft ihr mich mein Deutsch zu verbessern! Besonders wenn ihr meine Redensart korrigieren könntet. Danke sehr!!
March 24, 2020
March 24, 2020
March 24, 2020
Cultura/Politica Brasileira
Cultura Brasileira é algo bem intrigante, não é? Muitas vezes me encontro em situações em que os outros estão falando de algo que não tenho o menor conhecimento...”Tomar Ovada”? Não ouvi falar disso antes! Ainda me pareço bem estranho, talvez eu precise me mudar pro Brasil por uns meses para entender (mas não tenho dinheiro o suficiente para isso kkk).
March 24, 2020
Currency Swap
A couple days ago, a currency swap was made between Korea and America, The F.R.B of the America has led this scheme, however, Korean government wants to take credit for this scheme, It asserted that it has led this currency swap. Actually, the F.R.B led these schemes not only for Korea itself, but also for another eight nations. The reason why the F.R.B led this scheme is to stabilize world stock markets. Just before this scheme was carried out, the Korean stock market and forex market have been plunging. Particularly, Korean markets have been unstabilized for a week, Korean markets have faced something like this sometimes, they say it's called Asian ATM. When risky situations like this comes, the foreign currencies will always flow out of Korea, This kind of thing has happened this time very seriously, Once a news of the currency swap came, the makers of Korea was stabilized successfully, but I meant to say, to be exact, just stabilized for the time being, The period of the currency swap should last only six months from now on.
March 24, 2020
March 24, 2020
Shazam Part 1
This article perfectly contains a spoiler.
I watched Shazam on the weekend. Honestly, I didn't look forward to it, but I found it very funny like a comedy.
The rundown is like this.
An old man whose name is Shazam has been looking for his successor.
This old man is a wizard and had siblings who were all gone. This old man is the last surviving. His successor must be chosen a child with a beautiful mind. The old man has tried many children one by one to check if they had a beautiful mind. Finally, an orphan boy whose name is Billy was chosen as the old man's successor. Billy got a super power. Saying Shazam, Billy turned an adult man with a red costume like Superman. Saying Shazam again, he turns back to a boy. Billy practices how to use his new ability. The funny scene to me is that Billy came across robberies at a shop. Billy was shot by robberies around his body but he was alive. Billy was so excited that he asked robberies to shoot his face as well. His body was covered with a red suits like Superman, but his face is without any cover. He wanted to know if the suits saved him or not. The robbery shot his face many times without hesitation. Billy was still alive. He was one moment giggling in excitement, but the next moment he threw away the robberies with a blow. It's certainly comedy.😂
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