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19.02.2021
Das Kind nebenan streitet sich mit seinen Eltern und schreit und weint. Ich hasse es so sehr, weil es mich daran erinnert, wie ich früher mit meinen Eltern gestritten habe. Verbale Gewalt hat mir Schaden zugefügt. Aber in China ist die körperliche Züchtigung nicht verboten, und es gibt sogar viele Menschen, die sie unterstützen.
Feb. 19, 2021
Mein Erster Beitrag
Dies ist mein erster Beitrag auf Langcorrect. Ich bin schreiben sehr langsam. Ich bin noch verwirrt über Wortreihenfolge in Deutsch.
Ich wohne in Hamburg mit meine Mann. Ich bin im September umgezogen, hatte aber aufgrund von Sperren nicht viel Zeit zum Erkunden. Jedoch, wir lieben spazieren in der Park und entlang die Elbe. Ich backe und bastle auch zu Hause.
Feb. 19, 2021
La prueba de sangre
Tengo que tener una prueba de sangre aproximadamente cada tres meses por una medicación que tomo. No tengo miedo de las agujas pero aún no me gustan. Esta mañana tuve que ir a un hospital pequeño para tomar la prueba de sangre. Es una experiencia extraña en este momento porque es silencioso en el hospital y hay un miedo de enfermedad en todos los pacientes. Nadie habla y nadie quiere quedarse por mucho tiempo.
Ahora tengo que ir al médico para obtener mi medicación... es otra aguja. ¡Ay! Estoy lleno de agujas hoy y el lunes tengo que ir al hospital grande en mi ciudad así que podré tener más pruebas e investigaciónes. Tendré que hacer una prueba de covid antes de esta cita. ¡Qué divertido!
Feb. 19, 2021
Translation Practice
History cannot be tampered with, and heroes cannot be forgotten! In fact, China doesn't have to take care of this side's face, take care of that side's feelings, and consider every side's emotions. Heroes in previous self-defense counter-attacks should be vigorously publicized and carry forward the patriotic spirit of heroes and inspire the patriotic feelings of the whole nation, so as to implement patriotic education.
Feb. 19, 2021
IC
IMLAY and Chenle of NCT are dropping a collabo titled “Too Good” next Wednesday.
The Korean DJ under SM Ent. took to Instagram today to share information about his forthcoming album. The caption says, “IMLAY The 4th EP Album [UTOPIA]. Title track 'Too Good (feat. CHENLE of NCT)'. 2021.02.24 6PM KST.”
The post also shows an animated image, which is believed to be the cover art of his new album, hyping up fans of both IMLAY and NCT.
Earlier today, the 25-year-old Korean DJ celebrated the 1st anniversary of his latest EP album “DYSTOPIA” as well:
“It’s been a year since the release of ‘DYSTOPIA’! Do you guys still enjoy listening to it? (Last year) was disappointing since I couldn’t perform in front of you, but I prepared a lot in the meantime. I will show you what they are soon! Stay safe and healthy.”
Feb. 19, 2021
2021年2月18日の日記
昨日の午前毎朝のように日本語を練習していた。ワニカニというのサイトで漢字と単語を復習していた。普通に他のサイトでも復習している。カニワニも文プロも使っている。カニカニはワニカニに基づいてサイトだ。ワニカニは漢字を見せている。意味と読みを答える。カニワニは意味を見せている。読みを答える。私は紙で漢字を書いていてそのようにも漢字の書き方を練習している。文プロは文法の練習するサイトだ。
でも昨日はワニカニの後で運動していた。この後で瞑想していた。運動は必要なものだけど、よくするのが好きがない。運動な後でよく感じているけど。
この後でセムラという菓子を焼いている。セムラは スカンジナビアで謝肉祭の時で食べている。セムラは マジパンが入っていてホイップクリームをかけたパンだ。私のセムラがあまりホイップクリームがなかった。少しクリームだけ家があるのだから。友達はチョコレートと キャラメルのマカロンを作っていた。晩御飯にパンを焼いていた。私毎日のようにパンを作っている。
友達が訪ねた。一緒に絵を描いていた。
昨夜に シリーズを見ていた。この後で眠ってにいく。
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Feb. 19, 2021
Journal
Wanfo Lake, located in Wanfo Lake Town, Shucheng County, Lu'an City, Anhui Province, is an important part of Pishihang Irrigation District, with an area of 299 square kilometers in total, 50 square kilometers of lake surface, 250 kilometers around the lake shore and a storage capacity of 903 million cubic meters. Geographical coordinates: east longitude 116 78', north latitude 31 30'.
Wanfo lake integrated mountains, waters, springs, rocks, cliffs, pools, caves, forests, flowers, water conservation facilities and cultural sites. There are 6 kinds of geographical landscape, 4 kinds of water scenery, 4 kinds of biological landscape, 25 kinds of historical sites and buildings, 9 kinds of leisure and fitness and 4 kinds of shopping.
In 2007, Wanfo Lake won the glorious title of national beautiful environmental town and the best tourist township in the province. In 2020, it was identified as one of the key tourist attractions of Anhui World Expo; In 2012, Wanfo Lake won the title of the top ten tourist attractions in the province. In 2016, Wanfo Lake was successfully promoted to the national 5A level scenic spot.
Feb. 19, 2021
Mi hermana
Hoy llamé a mi hermana por accidente mientras me preparaba a dormir. Cuando devolvió la llamada, le dije "no te preocupes, fue un accidente" pero para mi sorpresa, ¡quería hablar conmigo! Suelo pensar que está demasiado ocupada para hablar por teléfono conmigo pero tal vez no.
Me contó mucho sobre su clase de literatura caribeña (a ella le encanta leer y analizar obras) y sobre el nuevo perro de su amigo. Estaba muy animada y me alegró charlar con ella. Hace unos días le mandé una carta y espero que le gusta la sorpresa.
Feb. 19, 2021
Thursday
I woke up at 7 am because I had class at 10 am, I had breakfast, took a shower, I dressed up brushed my teeth, comp my hair, etc, then I watched some videos about maths for the icfes (I don't want to do it again, the same pressure in one month all of that will end, you'll get it Mariana, for now you have to improve a lot) I got into the class, it was about human development, so interesting, we started with the freud's theory and there was a workkshop about the topics (the due date is until monday) 5 there're etages of developvelp according to Freud if the person doesn't "complete" or "resolve" one it will become a problem later but one of the most interesting concept were the it, the me and the super me, then we saw some about Erikson, 8 stages but it was more integral in so many ways, there're a kind of duality between a positive and a negative atribute if you complete the stage in a positive way you'll get a virtue, that makes sense, then there were another theories and things, a lot of topics.
The class finished at 1 pm, I had lunch thinking in my own development like a person, I did a conceptual map for the presentation of the next week and when I ended I did some exercise with my sister.
The night arrived I entered to a meeting of the English group, my internet has the habit to go slower when I'm doing something important but then there were a fast biology class about genetics, it's an easy topic but I decided to get into it for learn more, I made activities on Dualingo until see my messages in Discord, there were the link for this page so I'm listening Heart of glass of Céline Dion while I'm writing this, tomorrow will be another day.
Feb. 19, 2021
Feb. 19, 2021
The Ends of the Party by Graham Greene
Hanne Falcon is graceful and elegant. Every year she organize a party for children. She is a friend of the Morton family. She seem to be friendly to children, but she represent the world of adults which is indifferent to children's. Her symbolically composed of two birds; the Hen and the Falcon. On one hand the Hen is harmless and domestic. on the other hand the Falcon is a killer and harmful. Therefor we can say that she is the Hen because she organize the party, and the Falcon since she is partly responsible for the death of Francis
Feb. 19, 2021
Le participe passé avec avoir et être 2
J'ai dormi tard, donc je suis descendue manger vers 10 heures du matin.
Je suis restée dans la cuisine 30 minutes après avoir fini de manger.
Après ça, je suis montée dans le bus pour aller à l'universitaire.
Ensuite j'ai réalisé que j'avais oublié mon portefeuille, donc je suis retournée chez moi pour le retrouver.
Je suis sortie avec lui pendant trois mois.
Je suis passée te voir hier, mais tu n'étais pas là.
Elle est venue chercher ton fils.
Je suis allée chez ma tante la semaine prochaine.
Elle est née le trois de mars.
Il est tombé du toit quand il a essayé de monter sur la cheminée.
Il est devenu un artiste bien doué.
Nous sommes entrés dans l'ère de la "post-verité".
On est arrivé juste à l'heure pour commander de la nourriture.
Il est mort il y a deux siècles.
C'est très calme ici depuis qu'elle est partie.
Feb. 19, 2021
La aleatoriedad
¿Por qué nos fascina la aleatoriedad? Parece que cada vez más sitios como "50 hechos al azar" se aparecen. Creo que tiene relación con la torrente de dopamina que nos dan nuestros cerebros. Es lo que les hace a las redes sociales tan exitosos. Cuando encontramos una pieza de información nueva, nos cerebros nos recompensan. Esa es la razón por qué las redes sociales pueden ser tan adictivas.
Creo qué nuestros cerebros nos recompensan más si encontramos información especifica que queramos. Por ejemplo, si quisieras saber algunos hechos de Uzbekistán, ¿te alegraría más de leer una página de texto denso o algunas viñetas con pinturas? Es probable que quieras lo segundo. Cada trocito de información te da una recompensita, especialmente cuando es el formato preferido.
Pues... ¿qué podemos hacer? No creo que sea algo que ya deberíamos preocuparnos. Aunque tenga algunos efectos secundarios negativos, como en las redes sociales, parece que es una manera de memorizar información. Las infografías, por ejemplo, son básicamente lo mismo y súper útiles para organizar y recordar información crítica.
Dos oraciones con "lo que + verbo + tema".
1. ¡Lo que me cansa ese tarea!
2. ¡Lo que me lo quejas tú!
Feb. 18, 2021
Journal
BanTang Hot Spring. I went there several years ago during the winter and with heavy snow outside. Huh, is it exciting? I remember we had to wear a bathrobe when changing pools, but never felt cold. The price at that time seemed like 180 a person. I assume the conditions now should be much better than before. Anyway, a nice place for relaxing and enjoying life, but all these are based on money, so we have to earn as much money as we can.
Feb. 18, 2021
두근두근 내인생을 왜 읽고 싶은지...
저는 한국인 소설을 원래 읽어본 적이 없는데도 한국어를 배우는 친구들이 두근두근 내 인생이란 소설에 대한 얘기를 굉장히 하다 보니까 상당히 관심과 궁금증이 늘리게 되었습니다. 긍정적인 의견을 가끔 들었고 다채로운 관점도 읽어본 기회가 생겼기 때문에 개인적으로 한국인 소설을 어쩌면 읽어볼 생각이 있었다면 그걸 뽑았을 텐데요.
그래도 읽기를 위해서는 아는 어휘가 충분하지 않다는 생각이 아주 많이 나와서 아직도 안 읽기로 마음에 먹었습니다. 그렇지만 친구들과 대화하다가 계속 기다리면 안 되겠습니다. 그런 식으로 두근두근 내인생이란 한국인 소설은 볼 첫번째 책이 되었습니다.
읽기 시작할 때면 Habitica로 새로운 습관을 창조하여 페이지 10장이상 맨날 읽어보겠습니다. 그 외에 글쓰기를 연습하려고 요약을 쓸 수도 있고 아주 보이는 단어를 anki로 외워 복습할 수 있습니다. 페이지 10장 목표가 너무라면 감소할 텐데요. 아무튼 매일 그렇게 하고 편하게 읽어 그 소설을 끝냈으면 좋겠습니다
Feb. 18, 2021
Feb. 18, 2021
The Period of New Semester
Japanese universities start their classes from April, while universities in western countries and China start from September. Last year, a project team in the ruling party, Liberal Democratic Party, suggested that Japanese universities should change (be consistence with?) their admission schedules same as foreign universities. But, this proposal was strongly criticized by public opinions and was finally turned down.
However, I agree with their proposal that Japanese universities also should start their first semester from September. It was a suitable timing to change academic calendars since class cancellation due to the COVID-19 pandemic gave a sufficient period of time.
One of the advantages is that it becomes easier for motivated students to apply for exchange programs. Learning foreign cultures, languages, and the different way of thinking around their 20 years old cause significant impact on their life.
In addition, universities would recover their competitive at scientific fields if the number of foreign students have been increasing.
In my opinion, we have to discuss pros and cons before criticizing inacceptable proposals.
Feb. 18, 2021
Nouvelle autoroute
Monsieur le maire,
Je m'appelle xx et je suis un citoyen de votre ville. Ayant de connaissance de votre volonté de création d'une nouvelle autoroute qui passant à <<Belleville>>, je me permets de vous écrire, au nom d'une organisation locale <<Bellevillois>>, pour vous décourager et faire part de nos inquiétudes.
İl est indéniable que cette nouvelle autoroute facilitera des échanges. De plus, elle nous offrira d'une facilité pour aller aux grandes villes la plus proche. D'une autre coté, je n'ignore pas que le chantier de l'autoroute créera des nouvelles possibilités de travails dans les différentes domaines pour nous, les locaux. Même s'il y a des avantage de cette nouvelle projet, ce n'est pas pour autant qu'il n'y a aucun d'inconvénients.
Toutes les études scientifiques tendent à provuer que les résidus de l'asphalte qui divisent à l'air ont l'affectation mal à la santé. En outre, pour le création d'une nouvelle autoroute, il faut qu'il y ait des abattages des arbres parce qu'il n'existe pas de la place disponible à l'autoroute. Les arbres non seulement contribuent de la création d'oxygène, mais aussi ils diminuent la pollution de sonore et la pollution visuelle. Par ailleurs, selon le journal de Belleville, la conjoncture économique de la Ville n'est pas bien pour la création d'une nouvelle autoroute et en plus l'utilisation de cette autoroute n'est pas garantie.
Au nom de mes cohabitants, nous possédons de solide connaissance d'importance d'une environnement écologique, y compris les arbres de notre ville. Nous sommes opposés à nouvelle autoroute tant que les rasions j'ai expliqué.
En vous souhaitant bonne réception de cette lettre, en l'attente de votre attention, je vous prie de bien vouloir, Monsieur le Marie, l'expression de mes sentiment les plus distingués.
Feb. 18, 2021
Some sentences with new words
1) He unzipped his windbreaker, cold and wet , and asked me to brew tea.
2) All the devices I have and use might seem obsolete for a youngster, but I don't like to change them.
3) Do you think that cohabitation is normal, or, unlike regular marriage, it might destroy socio-economic and socio-demographic development of the society?
4) They could have drowned, but, luckily, a local sailing nearby rescued them.
5) Do not lie in! Get up and help me with chores.
Feb. 18, 2021
Journal
I went to see my father-in-law yesterday morning.
I bought perch, roast duck, bread, cantaloupe, kiwi fruit, mango and durian in Wanjiafu Supermarket. It cost nearly 600 yuan in total. But do you know how much a durian costs? Nearly 300. Its price here is one kilo in 90 yuan.
As a result, this durian is not delicious, and its flesh is not as soft as others, but a little hard, which is the feeling that it is not ripe.
I really can't figure out why durian is so expensive, and the pulp of this durian is just a little more than 0.5 kilo at most, which is even more incredible.
If it wasn't for giving away, I would never buy it, which is extremely uneconomical.
Feb. 18, 2021
18. Tagebuch - Feierabend
Heute war schwierig. Arbeit war schwierig und meine Stunde mit Philip war ein bisschen schwierig. Deshalb ich trinke ein Glas Wein. Normalerweise trinke ich nur auf den Wochenende. Wahrend ich Wein trinke schaue ich uber Deutschlernen auf YouTube.
Meine Lieblings Channel ist heist ‘Easy German’ und das is sehr interessant. Ich habe schon 20 oder viele geschaut.
Feb. 18, 2021
18. Februar Tagebuch
Jeden DIenstag leren ich mit meinem Lehre Deutsch. Meinem Lehrer heißt Philip und er ist gelassen und freundlich. Ehrlich gesagt, vor die Stunde will ich nicht lerne aber nach der stunde ich bin glücklich. Heute wir lernen Akkusativ, Dativ und so weiter.
Das ist nicht so einfach. Die Frau oder Der Frau, was ist war? Ich weiss nicht. Nach die Stunde haben wir uber One Punch Man gesprochen. Philip kann viele Sprachen sprechen. Normalerweise nach meine Stunde habe ich gehe nochmal durch was wir gemacht haben.