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Feb. 28, 2021
Fallschirmsprung.
In das Jahr 2012 war ich in den USA. Dort habe ich neue Freunde kennengelernt. Wir alle waren in Urlaub. Wir wollten etwas Besonderes. Wir waren alle allein unterwegs, ohne Familie und wollten etwas Abenteuerliches unternehmen. Jemand hatte eine tolle Idee: Fallschirmsprung.
Dieser Tag ist einer der besten Tage in meinem Leben. Ich war dort in einem kleinen Flugzeug, mit meinen neuen Freunden, bereit zu springen. Ich hatte Adrenalin, ich wollte es bereuen, aber ich konnte es nicht. Jeder von uns war an einen Instruktor gebunden und er sprang und ich sprang mit ihm.
Ich erinnere mich, dass ich schrie, ich spürte eine Menge Kraft und Wind in meinem Gesicht, mein Magen zog sich zusammen. Aber es war toll, den Wind zu spüren, die Freiheit und die Landschaft.
In ein paar Minuten war alles vorbei, ich weiß immer noch nicht, wann, aber das muss ich wiederholen.
Feb. 28, 2021
The Expanse résumé parti 2
La derrière semaine j’ai écrit un peu sure une série qui s’appelle « The Expanse ». J’ai raconté l’histoire de trois des personnages principaux mais je n’ai pas expliqué l’histoire du dernier personnage principal.
L’autre personnage principal vivre dans la Ceinture et travailler comme un investigateur. Un jour, il est instruite par sa commanderesse de chercher pour une fille que s’appelle Julie Mao. Julie Mao a disparu il y a quelque semaine et est une Terrien, quelqu’un qui vivre sur la Terre. Alors, l’inspecteur commencé de chercher. Il trouve que Julie est un membre de la PE, une association pour quelque chose. En fait, je n’ai pas tout compris alors je ne sais pas exactement que-ce que le PE veut faire. Je pense qu’il veut que la Ceinture gagner l’Independence. En tout cas, le PE est un groupe terroriste.
L’inspecteur a suivi les indices et finalement trouve un puce d’information. Les contenus du puce ce sont la mission finale que Julie a poursuivie. Elle a été envoyer d’intercepter un vaisseau qui apporter une arme mystérieuse. L’inspecteur va à sa commanderesse est lui dit tout qu’il a savoir sur Julie. Mais, sa réponse est un peu bizarre. Elle prit le puce est le mettre dans une place sécure est dire à l’inspecteur d’oublier tout ce que passer. L’inspecteur réaliser qu’elle savait tout sur Julie est elle est dans le coup. Il part pour une différente planète que s’appelle Cerus.
Feb. 28, 2021
ไดอารี่ของเด็กไม่เอาถ่าน [หน้า 72]
[1] หลังรอสักพักหนึ่ง เราสำนึกว่า พวกวัยรุ่นนั้นจะรอทั้งคืนให้เราออกมา เราก็ตัดสินจะนอนข้ามคืนที่บ้านยาย
[2] นั่นคือเมื่อเราเริ่มจะอวดดี ทำเสียงลิงต่อวัยรุ่นเป็นต้น
[3] ก็อย่างน้อยฉันทำเสียงลิง
[4] ราวลี่ทำเสียงแบบนกฮูก แต่ก็คิดว่ามันดีพอแล้ว
[5] โทรไปแม่จะบอกเขาว่า จะนอนที่บ้านยาย
[6] แต่เมื่อคุยโทรศัพท์แม่ก็พูดแบบโมโหมากเลย
[7] แม่บอกว่า เราต้องไปโรงเรียนพรุ่งนี้ แล้วก็ต้องรีบกลับบ้านทันที
[8] งั้นเราก็ต้องพยายามวิ่งหนีออกไป
Feb. 28, 2021
Journal
I have different hobbies during different periods. When I was a child, I liked playing catapult and it seemed that most of my childhood was spent with catapult. Even when I attended the middle school entrance exam, I still carried a catapult. When I was in middle school, my biggest hobby was getting up late. I don't know why I liked sleeping so much back then, especially in the morning. If there were no rules about the time of getting up, I would sleep until noon. When I got a job, my hobby was hanging out with friends and doing nothing all day long. Every time I think of that period, I always regret wasting a lot of time. But now I think I have good hobbies and one of them is studying. I don't think I should continue wasting time now. On the contrary, I should find back the time I have wasted. I am very happy to have good hobbies and I always feel satisfied with those positive hobbies.
Feb. 28, 2021
Zu dem Thema "Klimawandel"
Bilden Sie aus den vorgegebenen Wörtern Sätze. Achten Sie auf die richtigen Präpositionen und den Kasus.
1. (Es – sogar – ein Temperaturanstieg um bis zu 6,4 Grad – zu rechnen sein): Es ist sogar mit einem Temperaturanstieg um bis zu 6,4 Grad zu rechnen.
2. (die Atmosphäre – zeitverzögert – Veränderungen – reagieren): Die Atmosphäre hat auf Veränderungen zeitverzögert reagiert.
3. (der Weltklimarat – Dürren, Waldbrände und Wassermangel – warnen): Der Weltklimarat warnt vor Dürren, Waldbrände und Wassermangel.
4. (40 Prozent aller Arten – die globale Erwärmung – Aussterben – bedroht sein): 40 Prozent aller Arten sind durch die globale Erwärmung vom Aussterben bedroht.
5. (isolierte Ökosysteme – das Einbringen fremder Arten – empfindlich – reagieren): Isolierte Ökosysteme haben auf das Einbringen fremder Arten empfindlich reagiert.
6. (die Erde – zu einem großen Teil – Wasser – bedeckt sein): Die Erde ist zu einem großen Teil von Wasser bedeckt.
Feb. 28, 2021
Pokemon Trading Card
I was really surprised at how expensive the trading card is. My girlfriend explained that Pokemon Trading Cards become popular among adults and are traded at high prices. Then, she let me see her collections while playing the game Splatoon. Surprisingly, one of them was worth three hundred thousand yen even though she had bought it for less than ten thousand yen. It seemed that she won't let go of her collections. It doesn't matter to her how high the price is in the flea markets since she genuinely loves Pokemon.
I wondered if I have something to be dedicated all of my passion. I can't do
anything at the expense of my saving and free time.
Feb. 28, 2021
Diary
Communication is essentially a process of finding intersections and expanding them. Lack of intersection on both sides leads to a state of resistance, and resistance exacerbates the sense of dislike for other's statement. A preconceived and ever-present sense of dislike may lead to resenting people who hold opposing views. But it is better to hate than to be indifferent to emotions and opinions. It is not necessary to respect the opinions of others, but rather to try to understand and tolerate these opinions.
Feb. 28, 2021
Meine Geschwister
Ich habe eine Schwester und einen Bruder. Meine Schwester wurde geboren, als ich 13 Jahre alt war. Mein Bruder wurde geboren, als ich 16 Jahre alt war. Meine Schwester und ich haben dieselbe Mutter und mein Bruder und ich haben denselben Vater. Deshalb sind sie keine Geschwister voneinander.
Es kann vielleicht kompliziert klingen. Ich weiß nicht, ob es in Deutschland üblich ist, Geschwister nur von der Mutter oder vom Vater zu haben. In Japan ist es anscheinend sehr selten, weil die Menschen ein bisschen überrascht waren, als ich ihnen davon erzählt habe.
Es geht aber komplizierter, wenn wir über die Geschwister meiner Schwester sprechen. Meine Schwester hat nicht nur mich als Bruder. Ihr Vater hatte schon einen Sohn, bevor sie geboren wurde. Später hat er eine andere Frau kennengelernt und mit ihr noch zwei Mädchen zur Welt gebracht. Das heißt, dass meine Schwester 4 Geschwister hat: drei väterlicherseits und einen mütterlicherseits, nämlich mich.
Andererseits hat mein Bruder nur einen Bruder: mich. Wir haben leider keinen Kontakt. Ich habe einmal versucht, mit ihm Kontakt zu knüpfen. Ich habe ihm eine Nachricht durch WhatsApp geschickt, aber er hat mich nie geantwortet. Wir haben nie gestritten oder so was. Vielleicht wollte er einfach keinen Kontakt mit mir haben. Ich weiß es nicht. Unser Vater ist 2014 gestorben und wir hatten fast keinen Kontakt, während mein Vater noch lebte. Meine Beziehung mit meinem Vater war auch sehr kompliziert. Aber das wäre Stoff für einen anderen Text.
Feb. 28, 2021
Warum tragen wir Krawatten?
Es wurde gesagt, dass die Praxis im französischen Gericht angefangen hat. König Louis XIV war fasziniert von dem Stoff, den kroatische Söldner um den Hals trugen, und fing er bald an, dasselbe zu tragen. Es wurde dann modisch und der Stil entwickelte sich bis zu dem, was wir heute kennen. Einige Varianten sind der Querbinder und einer den ich besonders mag, der Bolo Tie. Heutzutage nimmt die Praxis, Krawatten zu tragen, etwas ab. Ich frage mich, ob die Menschen weit in der Zukunft lachen oder zumindest den vertikalen Stoffstreifen eigenartig finden werden.
Feb. 28, 2021
Films
Recently, I have been really into horror and thrillier films. Ever since the end of last year, with my friends I have finished 6 horror films, ranging from Asian ghost films to American thriiling films such as Orphan and Annabelle series. Before we got started, we set everything up. We turned all the lights off and closed curtain so that the atmosphere would be more outstanding. However, I was the only one who got frightened a lot by the scary sounds and bloody scenes. I was too embarrased to stop and I wanted to satisfie my curiousity. So I find a way to solve the problem. I turned back and moved my eyes away from the screen everytime 2 seconds before something creepy showed up. But I missed some details and plots. I exposed my weakness and my friends knowed it. One time, late at 8 pm, My firend and I just got off work and we were the last. All the other colleauges had already left and the office building was empty without anyone in there. There was only a lamp above the building. When we walked out of the building, he suddenly said to me "Look! Something at the top of the building? There was one person looking at his phone on the staircase". I know he tried to scare me so I said firmly without hesitation:" Don't be silly. It's just the plant. Nothing serious. You don't dare to look at your driving mirror and remove it away." He giggled. Those flms are ficitonal but they really got me so I had to remember and repeat socialist core values again and again. Luckily it really worked! It's probably the time to quit horror movies and get something relaxing to watch.
Feb. 28, 2021
“La terribile lingua tedesca” di Mark Twain, parte 1ª
Andavo spesso a vedere la raccolta di curiosità al castello di Heidelberg, e un giorno ne sorpresi il curatore con il mio tedesco. Parlai esclusivamente in quella lingua. Egli era molto interessato; e dopo che avevo parlato un po’, disse che il mio tedesco era molto raro, possibilmente “unico”; e voleva aggiungerlo al suo museo.
Se avesse saputo quanto mi fosse costato apprendere la mia arte, avrebbe anche saputo che rovinerebbe qualsiasi collezionista comprarla. Era da ormai diverse settimane che Harris e io lavoravamo sodo al nostro tedesco, e nonostante avessimo fatto grandi progressi, essi erano stati ottenuti sotto grandi difficoltà e fastidio, perché tre dei nostri insegnanti erano morti nel frattempo. Una persona che non abbia studiato il tedesco non può formarsi un’idea di quanto sia una lingua sconcertante.
Di sicuro non c’è nessun’altra lingua così sciatta e disorganica, e così viscida e inafferrabile. In essa si viene trascinati avanti e indietro in modo più indifeso; e quando si crede di aver finalmente afferato una regola che offra terra ferma sui cui riposarsi fra il turbinio e il tumulto generali delle dieci parti del discorso, si volta pagina e legge: “Lo studente prenda attentamente nota delle seguenti ECCEZIONI.” Vi si dà una scorsa e scopre che la regola ha più eccezioni che applicazioni. E così si cade di nuovo in mare, cercando un altro Ararat e trovando altre sabbie mobili. Questa era e continua ad essere la mia esperienza. Ogni volta che credo di essermi impadronito di uno di quei quattro confusi “casi”, un’apparentemente insignificante preposizione s’intromette nella mia frase, vestita di un potere terribile e insospettato, e fa crollare la terra sotto i miei piedi. Per esempio il mio libro chiede di un certo uccello (chiede sempre di cose che non hanno nessuna importanza per nessuno): “Dov’è l’uccello?” Allora, la risposta a questa domanda — secondo il libro — è che l’uccello aspetta nella fucina a causa della pioggia. Ovviamente nessun uccello lo farebbe, ma ci si deve attenere al libro. Molto bene, inizio a elaborare il tedesco per questa risposta. Cominicio, necessariamente, dall’estremità sbagliata, perché è questa la maniera tedesca. Mi dico: “REGEN (pioggia) è maschile — o forse è femminile — o possibilmente neutro — è troppa fatica controllare adesso. Quindi è DER REGEN, DIE REGEN o DAS REGEN, a seconda del genere che si rivelerà di avere quando controllerò. Nell’interesse della scienza parto dal presupposto che sia maschile. Molto bene — allora LA pioggia è DER Regen se è solo nel passivo stato dell’essere NOMINATO senza elaborazione e discussione — nominativo; ma se questa pioggia è sparsa, in modo generale, per terra, allora è definitivamente localizzata, FA QUALCOSA — cioè RESTA FERMA (che è una delle cose che la grammatica tedesca considera fare qualcosa), e questo lancia la pioggia al dativo, facendola diventare DEM Regen. Però questa pioggia non resta ferma, ma fa qualcosa ATTIVAMENTE — cade — per interferire coll’uccello, probabilmente — e questo indica movimento, che ha l’effetto di farlo scivolare all’accusativo e cambiarlo in DEN REGEN.” Compiuto l’oroscopo grammaticale di questa faccenda, rispondo con sicurezza in tedesco che l’uccello sta nella fucina “wegen (a causa di) DEN Regen”. Poi l’insegnante mi delude leggermente con il commento che quando la parola “wegen” fa un salto nella frase, lancia il soggetto SEMPRE al GENITIVO, a prescindere dalle conseguenze — e quindi quell’uccello stava nella fucina “wegen DES Regens”.
Nota bene: Fui informato dopo da un’autorità superiore che c’è un’“eccezione” che permette dire “wegen DEN Regen” in certe circostanze particolari e complesse, e che quest’eccezione si applica SOLO alla pioggia.
Feb. 28, 2021
Journal
I usually wake up early in the morning, and it is about between 4 and 5 am when I wake up every morning. Since it's still earlier, I just lay on the bed and don't get up, but I will always study English on my phone. There are many different English learning apps on my phone, such as HelloTalk, Hallo, Itaki Everyday English Listening and so on. I usually spend time on HelloTalk and listen to the voice messages posted by someone else, or write some stuff and post it, as well as check the corrections some people made to my posts. Time goes quickly and it's very fast to reach 7:30 am. Then I get up, wash my face and brush my teeth. After that, I will eat breakfast if our nanny has it done. Otherwise, I will eat breakfast out, then I drive to my office, and the whole trip will take thirty minutes or so. I am supposed to be at my office at 8:30 am and the work of that day will start.
Feb. 28, 2021
Beginner Drivers
This week, I finally got a driver's license. I felt driving a car was somewhat easy because I've ridden a motorcycle on public roads for a year. By the way, in Japan, beginner drivers who are within one year after they got the license have to indicate they are a beginner to cars around them. They put a symbol for newly licensed drivers on the front and back of a car. The symbol is green and yellow and expresses fresh verdures. In the same way, old people also put a mark on their car, which shows the driver is senior. Other drivers can be thoughtful to them.
Feb. 28, 2021
婚礼
A: 快到教汉语的老师的婚礼了，你参加吗？
B：当然了，我一直期待着那一天。从来我还没参加过婚礼。
A：真的么？
B：真的，不知道婚礼是怎么进行的？有什么仪式？
A：我已经参加过几个婚礼了，通常参加婚礼的来宾会送给新郎和新娘红包。
B：除了红包以为，可以送礼物吗？
A：可以，亲戚常送给新郎和新娘黄金饰品. 这两种办法是最常见的。
B：我也许会送给他们红包，那个是最快的。
A：婚礼开始以前，新郎和家人会在门口迎接来宾并受到他们的祝福。然后新郎、新娘在音乐声中携手出场。大家鼓掌欢迎，紧随新娘和新郎之后，是两个孩子撒花祝贺他们。
B：我一想象在我眼前已经能看到一个美丽的景象了。真是一个幸福的气氛。
A：主婚人和父母说完话后，新娘和新郎将交换戒指并切结婚蛋糕。
新人和双方家人会在每张桌子上干杯跟来兵一起喝喜酒，对他们表示感谢。
B：谢谢你啊，我对婚礼的进行方式有些了解了。到时候我一定来参加。
Feb. 28, 2021
Journal
I seldom drink tea. It's not because I don't want to, it is because drinking tea often makes me uncomfortable. Many of my colleagues like drinking tea. You can often see them holding a cup of tea and there were too many tea leaves in their cup. I also want to drink tea their way, but after I drink tea my stomach usually feels nauseated. Also, I rarely drink coffee. I am Chinese and I don't have the habit of drinking coffee. Once I smelled coffee and I felt it was very fragrant, so I drank some Nestle bagged coffee. It seems like I have drunk it for a long while, but later, after I drink it, I feel a little headache and can't fall asleep. The feeling doesn't happen just once, so I haven't drunk coffee for a long time. Usually I don't have the habit of drinking water unless I feel thirsty. When I am thirsty, I prefer drinking cold boiled water because I believe cold boiled water is the best drink for our health. Although I know drinking more water is good for one's health, I still don't have the habit. I just drink water when I am thirsty. Maybe each person is in a different situation and they are not suitable for the same rule. My mom doesn't often drink water, but she is already more than ninety years old.
Feb. 28, 2021
Juegos de mesa
Últimamente mi padre ha comprado unos juegos de mesa para que podamos pasar tiempo juntos después de la cena. Lo que probamos hoy fue una versión de "Ticket to Ride" que tiene lugar en Londres. El objetivo del juego es construir la cadena de autobuses más larga y conectar las estaciones de autobús más valiosas. Mi padre puso música de los Beatles en el fondo para hacer un ambiente inspirado por Londres. Gané todas las veces que jugamos :)
Después, mi padre y yo hicimos un rompecabezas de Cinqueterre mientras mi madre veía el último episodio de su serie.
Feb. 28, 2021
Feb. 28, 2021
Review Defending the undefendable
4/5, the book principally it´s about to generate debate on topics like prostitution, drug selling, children´s work, bribery, blackmail, etc. Putting people that we use to look as they were the generators of evil and disgrace in society, in an exaggerated heroic position.
Before reading it I was very surprised to know that it was published in the '70s since a lot of those problems are validate even in actuality, that makes me think about the little change that we have actually made in those situations, the lecture proposes a controversial point of view about everything and it´s curious the reflection of the author based only in the perspective of the free market, nevertheless, after debating with more people I noticed that some of his arguments aren´t enough according to the social reality and some of his future scenarios, based obviously in suppositions, would end in failure.
Beyond that I consider that that´s the mission of the book, get you out of the centrist or indifferent position that we usually assume in the presence of topics that don´t have any solution or we have a fixed and “unbreakable” idea according to us and at least in my opinion, it gets it, so it was a good lecture.
Feb. 28, 2021
2.28 article
YUMDDA’s "Michael Jackson" is our Dance Track of the Month for Feb!
Since day one, I’ve never doubted YUMDDA’s songwriting and producing abilities that people often overlook because of his funny uncle persona. And this late bloomer proved once again with “Michael Jackson” that his recent rise isn’t just due to his smart marketing or interesting gimmick.
On top of its brilliantly composed melodies, “Michael Jackson” boasts very simple and delicate instrumentation. In this track, there are only drums, bass, off-kilter electric piano hits and a touch of a warm synth pad. I especially love how the percussion in this track deliberately imitates the signature percussion sounds and rhythms often heard in Michael Jackson’s music (e.g. “Love Never Felt So Good”).
Listen to YUMDDA’s “Michael Jackson” and talk about your favorite dance track of this month as well!
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Minha rotina matinal.
Acordo as 7 horas. Escrevo todos os sonhos de que me lembro e tudo o que me preocupa sobre o dia. Eu medito. Entao, eu escovo meu cabelo e treino. Despois disso, faco minha rotina de higiene tipica. Eu escovo meus dentes e lavo meu rosto. Entao, eu tamo cafe da manha e me preparo para a escola online.
Feb. 28, 2021
Un vuelo
Cuando viajo, prefiero el asiento de la ventana. Primero, puedo ver la tierra debajo del avión. No he viajado desde 2018, pero me gustan sentarse por la ventana. Además, siempre viajo con mis padres, y cuando hay tres asientos, mi padre se gusta el asiento del pasillo. Mi madre se senta en el medio. Sin embargo, cuando hay sólo dos asientos, todavía me siento, pero mi madre se sienta en el asiento del pasillo. Mi padre se sienta en un pasillo otro.
Feb. 28, 2021