Recently corrected public entries
👉 Register to view more posts, get corrections on your writing and correct others.March 8, 2021
Extrovert and introvert
I don't know if I am an extrovert or an introvert. If I have to choose one, I think I might be an introvert. If it's not necessary, I'm not willing to meet new people, and I am not willing to talk more with people. I always think there is no need to talk more with other people unless there is something you have to negotiate with others. So I usually don't want to meet new people, and don't want to talk more with others as well. I don't think this kind of character is harmful, instead it benefits me a lot. It saves me a lot of time and lets me do all of the things I like.
March 8, 2021
March 8, 2021
March 8, 2021
To Keep on Study
Yesterday I talked to an American language exchange partner, and he is working in the lab. He's worked for three months. I haven't talked him a quite long time. He was way too busy, and I asked the reason why he was so much busy. Actually, the group that he belonged was originally four members. Two of them suddenly quit the job, and went up to a graduation school, then he entered the group.
A member of the three was an Indian, whose sister was going to get married in India. The Indian wanted to attend his sister's marriage ceremony. But unfortunately, he found his visa already was expired, so he ended up not attending the ceremony in due, Though he could go to India, but he could not come back to America. Only two of them had to continue to work for seven projects. So that's why he's been so busy that he dad to work overtime every day. And lately a new member joined his group as a trainee, at least, his load of work is much better than before.
His purpose was to take Mcat exam last year, but for some reason, he got a full-time work in the lab, instead, and began to work there. I asked how his study was going. As he was really busy, he was so tired that he could not study at all at home. From now on, I guess that he could afford to study. But I think I cannot give him far too much credit, and it will be a quite long time to recover his loss of the study for Mcat exam. I think if he's lost to take Mcat, to go up a graduate school is a one of the solutions. There are some universities near his workshop. He may study at a graduate school after work at the same time.
He said he would take the Mcat exam in may this year. He is not expecting it so much, according to him, an American can take three times in his life. The first time of taking the Mcat exam seems to be a trial, but he said before he would get the best score on the first exam. It cannot be helped, he didn't study almost for three months. Before he got this full time work, he studied for ten hours a day every day. When I heard he got full-time work, I thought what a stupid guy he became! , I thought I should persuade him, but I was afraid he didn't realize how fool he was! , until what would happen to him. Actually, he's got full-time work already, and it will make the matter worse as a matter of course.
Now he's realizing how stupid he was! , and said he lost the motivation to study after he comes back home from work, because he spent so much. He's just begun to study early in the morning before he goes to work. I am glad he is continuing to study, and I am now concerned about a decline in his academic standards. I cannot help as well. He should do his best as well.
March 8, 2021
Pedir comida
No recuerdo bien cómo pedir comida en español. ¿Alguien me puede recomendar algunas frases que puedo utilizar?
A: Me muero de hambre. ¿Qué vas a pedir?
B: Pues, estaba pensando en pedir el salmón.
A: Mmm he probado ese plato y me ha gustado mucho. ¿Te apetecería pedir un aperitivo para compartir? Me gustan mucho los champiñones.
B: ¡Por supuesto!
Camarero: Hola, ¿estáis listas para pedir?
B: Si. Para empezar vamos a compartir los champiñones y me gustaría el salmón, por favor.
A: Y yo quisiera la crema de espinacas. ¡Gracias!
March 8, 2021
Empieza
Hace much tiempo que he hablado Español.
Cuando estuide en la escuela secondaria, entre los grados siete y nueve, mi familia y yo vivimos en espana - solomente, claro, por mi madre. Ella estaba la trabajadora en nuestros familia.
Ahorrita, yo tengo demaciado cuidado en con quien yo quiero hablar espanol. Ya no quiero nadie sientir como si yo fue estando condescendiente. No se nadie que habla espanol - pues. No se nadie que se habla espanol y que yo sentiria tan comoda que hablaria espanol con ellos.
Mi acento no le ayuda. Aunque vivi en Espana por un porcion de mi vida, no soy de Espana. Fue casi un sueño. Ya, puedo recordar como me senti estar alla, pero al regresar a los Estados Unidos me di cuenta tuvo un acento ininteligible y extremadamente sureña europa. Nadie se me intiende. Es divirtida pero triste.
Yo quiero aprendar entender espanol como podria naturalmente si no me hubiera reprimido. hay algo alli, pero tengo que movar mi propria verguenza manualmete. Como de dice Nike: Solomente hagale.
March 8, 2021
Le weekend
Si je pouvais décrire mon weekend, je dirais qu'il était très fatigant et stressant. Pour la majorité du weekend, j'ai fait beaucoup de devoirs et j'ai étudié sans arrêt. En tant qu'étudiant dans ce temps-là, il est difficile de gagner du temps libre. Pour ce semestre, je suis six cours. C'est trop ! Tous les professeurs exigent que tous les étudiants soient determinés mais ça, c'est dur. Les professeurs nous donnent beaucoup de devoirs, de projets, et d'examens. Il semble qu'ils avaient oublié que nous sommes dans une pandémie et chaque étudiant a ses propres difficultés pendant ce temps difficile. J'espère que ça ira dans les prochains mois. Pour le reste de mon weekend, j'ai regardé des émissions françaises. Je les trouve intéressantes. J'aimerais recommencer à voir des films français quand j'ai le temps. J'ai aussi lu des articles sur la politique. Il y a des temps où la politique m'énerve et je pense que ça se passe encore maintenant. À mon université, j'étudie les sciences politiques et je peux dire que je déteste vraiment la politique (surtout la politique américaine). Bref, je pense que c'est tout ce que j'ai fait pour ce weekend. J'ai vraiment hâte pour les vacances de printemps qui sont dans une semaine !
March 8, 2021
March 8, 2021
what does racism mean?
What does racism mean?
Racism refers to misplaced discrimination and hatred towards a human being just because of his race. not only color of skin but also religion, language, nationality, etc. could be a reason behind racial prejudice. For example, racial behavior against black people can represent this matter excellently. Anti-Arabism and anti-Afghanism are examples of such racial behaviors, which can be seen among Iranians. Racism is an ideology, which related race to none-biological phenomena like religion, language, customs, etc. and considers some races as superior. In this ideology, racial superiority is not detached to environmental and social condition but destiny made some human races inferior.
Basically, racism is kind of prejudgment and discrimination, which focuses on differences, which come from racial and cultural alterations that originates from language, customs, religion, history, etc. Like: “I’m white and you’re not. So, I’m better than you”. It seems that common feature of different types of racism is:
1-Racism considers specific and crucial quality or qualities for a race or ethnicity.
2-Such qualities are described, in the way that show superiority of a race in comparison to another race (biological superiority) or inferiority of a race in comparison to another race (biological inferiority).
3-The most important thing is that any racial superiority or inferiority is eventually caused racial discrimination and negative moral judgment.
If one lets those racial beliefs ban someone’s progress, racism happens. Those who prohibit a specific race from some jobs, habitation, political rights, educational opportunities, social interactions, etc. are called racists. One of the main reasons of racism is that it guarantees control of majority on minority.
March 8, 2021
House in Hainan
I've been focusing on an apartment in some southern coastal cities of China. For the majority of Chinese, the first place they would like to choose is Hainan island, which is also a province of China. Hainan island is located in the southern ocean of China, and also in the tropical region, so the weather in Hainan is pretty warm. Take Sanya for example, even if in the winter, people can still swim in the sea. Besides the warm weather, the air in Hainan is always fresh because the Hainan island is surrounded by the southern ocean of China. All above is the reason why Chinese people take Hainan as the first place to buy houses. But nowadays, the house prices in Hainan are really high, and here I will show you some data of the house prices. The house prices in Sanya are almost 30,000 yuan per square meter while it is almost 20,000 yuan per square meter in Haikou. I definitely can't afford to buy an apartment in Sanya, even if it is in Haikou, I feel I still can't afford an apartment. The low apartment price in Hainan is in those counties that are located in inland areas and far away from coastal areas. But the price in those counties is still up to 10,000 yuan per square meter. It seems I can only afford to buy a small apartment in those counties which are inland and far away from coastal areas.
March 8, 2021
Englische Lernreise
Ich habe 14 oder 15 Jahren lang Englisch gelernt.
Ich begann es zu lernen, als ich 3 Jahre alt war in der Schule, und seitdem liebe ich es.
Letztes Jahr habe ich die C1-Prüfung abgelegt. Ich plane, mein Englisch in Zukunft zu verbessern.
Ich lerne es, weil ich denke es sehr wichtig ist. Es erlaubst ihnen eine Menge Dinge zu tun, und gibt ihnen mehr Möglichkeiten.
March 8, 2021
Everything On My Terms
When I was a mere child, I sometimes pushed my luck a bit too far. Even now I remember the scenes, I really feel ashamed of what I did. Since then, I have always refrained from cheeky behavior. I guess it may have caused me to have a passive personality. Frankly speaking, I always kind of think I am arrogant on my mind. They say an arrogant person like me is not always approved. An arrogant person or a person who pushes luck too far is not respectable in Japan. So I had better pretend to be an introvert person. Modesty seems to be a very important matter in Japan. To push my luck too far is backfiring, and people don't want to pull any punches on me. In terms of me, something is not sitting right. I want everything on my own terms.
March 7, 2021
Une petite tâche
J'ai un peu de honte de l'écrire, mais il y a cinq années que j'ai commencé mon apprentissage du français. Bien que j'aie l' impression que ma compréhension est dans un niveau très normale pour cinq années, je me suis rendu compte que j'ai un problème de parler. Lorsque je essaie de parler, il me manque du vocabulaire. Cette chose-là me fait un peu de peur car je veux étudier en France bientôt. Jusqu'à 2020 je n'ai fait rien pour mon français sauf les exercices que j'avais dû faire. Depuis 2020 j'ai essayé de consumer beaucoup de contenu français. J'ai aussi lu quelques roman en français. D'ailleurs je regarde des vidéos.
Mes raisons pour mon apprentissage sont plutôt simples que complexe - je suis très ravi de rencontrer la culture française. J'aime lirer des auteurs francophone comme Molière et l'un des mes objectifs c'est de lire quelques oeuvres écrit par Molière en français. Maintenant c'est difficile de voyager mais ça après le Covid ça sera une chose de dire aussi.
March 7, 2021
Söndag den sjätte mars
Idag har jag gjort något hemskt. Istället för att studera för provet imorgon, jag har tillbringat nästan hela dagen på med att titta på The Walking Dead. Det är sant att jag var också lite produktiv; jag är klar med 5 sidor för min tidningserie, och jag har förberett två matlådor för min partner för nästa vecka.
Men jag tillbringade för mycket tid på The Walking Dead och på min iPad. Nu känner jag mig lite sjuk och jag har ont i hela kroppen. Det är dåligt. Jag behöver radera Viaplay från min iPad...
Men jag har åtminstone skrivit något här och också övat lite med Duolingo.
March 7, 2021
Pandemic " When will you end? "
In Brazil, COVID-19 has devastated the population, and it does not seem to be going away anytime soon. Around April 2020, I was trying to optimistic but also realistic believing that by early March 2021 the pandemic would have been under control and we would be heading to a victory against the virus. However, unfortunately, due to the lack of agreement between the federal government and the states, currently the situation is extremely concerning. Hostipal beds are almost fully occupied, and cases are soaring and breaking records daily.
On top of that, the President's disregard for the virus really sets the country to an uncertain future. Instead of relying on vaccination in a large scale, he has been convinced that certain medications, which have not undergone strict study, will be the miracle key to put an end to the outbreak. Last saturday, the state of Sao Paulo has been imposed to an intense two weeks lockdown, which the president is opposed to, in order to contain the virus spread, but some mayors, who take president's side, still allow non-essential business to be open.
Therefore, I am not sure about the future nor about when we will be able to return to our normal lives. It is time to hold on tighly and rise above when this eventually goes way.
March 7, 2021
March 7, 2021
March 7, 2021
Неожиданное сообщение
Сегодня я получил сообщение с моей бывшей учительницы русского языка. Я пишу тут мой ответ к ней. Я надеюсь, что не есть слишком много ошибок!
"Здравствуйте учительница! Я сейчас во своем родном доме в Италии. Если всё идёт по плану, я вернусь во Францию в конце этого года. Я уже там хотел вернуться в прошлом году, но из-за ситуации коронавируса я не смог. Сейчас я ищу работу и пытаюсь быть активным: на пример я поучаствовал в литературном конкурсе и мой рассказ был выбран для публикации вместе с рассказами других победителей конкурса. Книга по-итальянски, итак я не уверен, что Вы поймёте*, но рассказы - очень интересные. Рассказывают о Сардинии с точки зрения её жителей. Я очень терпел, когда я должен уехать из Лиона, но эти прошлые годы были очень интенсивные и много я сделал. Я также пытался продолжать учить русский язык, хотя я должен признать, что я пренебрёг этот язык. Я рад, что Вы мне написали. Всего хорошего и до свидания."
* В её сообщении она написала, что хочет купить книгу.
March 7, 2021
Le travail de ma mère
Ma mère est cuisinière dans un petit bistrot qui se trouve au centre de ma ville. Elle travaille presque tous les jours, car le bistrot est très populaire et souvent visité par des touristes.
Le petit restaurant est connu pour son café et ses gâteaux. Ses cheesecakes (le plus populaire dont est l’un avec des biscuits Oreo) et son gâteau au chocolat, sont aimés par tout le monde. Il y a plusieurs articles (dans les journaux et aussi sur Internet) qui parlent de la patronne et de l’histoire du bistrot.
Ma mère cuisine beaucoup quand elle travaille – elle fait les gâteaux chaque matin, mais aussi les commandes des clients. Elle rentre très fatiguée chaque soir et c’est pourquoi elle n’aime pas cuisiner à la maison. Mais mon père est toujours là pour maman, il prépare le dîner et de temps en temps, je l’aide. Malheureusement, j’ai beaucoup de devoirs à faire et je ne suis pas toujours disponible pour aider mes parents.
Un jour, j’espère devenir une bonne cuisinière comme maman et ouvrir mon petit restaurant à la plage.
March 7, 2021
¿Colonizar Marte? (2/2)
Si no solamente queremos sobrevivir en Marte en pequeños grupos arificialmente cultivando vegetales, sino también vivir ahí como humanidad viviendo una vida de calidad, tendrémos que terraformar la planeta, es decir, cambiarla para que ahí se encuentren las mismas condiciones de vida como en la Terra. Necesitaríamos medios colosales, y al ver de todos los problemas de que hablé en mí último mensaje, dudo en que sea posible...
Elon Musk propuso que bombardearamos el helio del polo Norte de Mars para que se liberara vapor de agua. Primero, la totalidad del arsenal nuclear mundial no sería suficiente, y con hacer eso, el vapor solo se dispersaría en el vacio espacial, ya que no hay ninguna atmósfera en Marte! Tales ideas loquitas sobre Marte son un poco preocupantes, en el sentido de que Elon Musk está dirigiendo SpaceX, una empresa que ya planea colonizar Marte...
Obviamente, el viaje de la Terra a Marte en sí mismo dependrá de nuestra evolución tecnológica y del dinero que los paises y empresas del mundo estan listos a investir. Ahora, con todos los problemas ecológicos, sociales y económicos que el mundo tiene que arreglar, es difícil saber si un proyecto espacial tan enorme represente una prioridad.
Seguro, la colonización espacial sería un otro gran paso para la humanidad, la tecnología, y la ciencia, pero realmente dudo en que sea una solución aceptable para resolver nuestros problemas. Me parece que es un otro de aquellos sueños espectaculares pero irrealizables, sueños que las empresas de Big Tech a veces tienen... Me parece que saldríamos ganando si investirámos para salvar la planeta única donde la vida humana de es de hecho possible, es decir, nuestra Terra.
March 7, 2021
March 7, 2021
Being Fluent In Japanese Seems To Keep So Far Away From Me!
I wrote a sentence"Being fluent in Japanese seems to keep so far away from me." Can I Write This Way In English?
Will people understand what I want to say? There is a road, a long distance between being fluent in Japanese and me. Being fluent in Japanese is at the end of the road, and I stand at the beginning of the road. I need to try as hard as I can to keep moving forward towards the goal. I need to push myself almost everyday. This is what I want to say.
And then, should I say it (being fluent in Japanese) seems so far away from me to replace the former one I wrote?
Keep away from me, stay away from me, so far away from me...my brain is gonna burn just thinking about it. lol
March 7, 2021
March 7, 2021
A empresa vídeo Brinquedo
Por trás de filmes de sucesso pra criançada como Cars e Kung Fu Panda, existe um submundo muito obscuro que poucos tem a coragem de descobrir... ou explorar como vídeo Brinquedo fez, correndo o risco de tomar processo.
É nem mais nem nada menos que o universo de copias de filmes zoados que no lugar de inovar, deixa muito a desejar e arruina a infância das crianças brasileiras.
Pois é, Brasil não poupa dessa não, amigão.Se toca.
Olha só, a vídeo Brinquedo produziu obras de arte como "Barquinhos", "Ratatoing", "Carrinhos", "Ursinho da Pesada" e uma porrada de filmes cagados a mais de graça no Youtube.
De longe, a franquia mais conhecida deles é "Carrinhos", que até é exportado na gringa até hoje.
O pior não é nem isso.
Eles fizeram um negócio ( chama BR Futebol) de uma galera jogando bola que pra sair de uma enrascada, têm que enfrentar um time de meninos podres de rico.
Mesmo o capricho nas vozes, não dá pra levar ao sério uma parada dessas velho kkk.
Para pra pensar comigo no tanto de gente que foi iludida e teve que engolir alguma furada deles sem saber.
Quem sabe né.Sempre tem quem acaba curtindo na inocência.
É isso aí.Se não me engano, o fechamento foi em 2012.
Pelo jeito, Youtube derrubou o canal oficial do dono onde postavam recortes dos filmes e enchiam o cu de grana.
Uma lenda quase esquecida pela geração de hoje, gente.
Tá bem na cara que foi feito com humor, não?
March 7, 2021
Über diese Himalaya Salzlampen
Ok, so vor einige Jahre waren diese Salzlampen wirklich trendig, und obwohl sie sehr schön sind ich will heute die Behauptung entlarven, dass sie tiefgreifende gesundheitliche Vorteile haben. Himalaya-Salz wird aus dem Süden von Himalaya in Pakistan gewonnen, wo es vermutlich Millionen Jahre alt ist. Die Farbe ist einzigartig, ein Ergebnis von ein wenig zusätzlichen Mineralien, das einige glauben tiefgreifende gesundheitliche Vorteile hat und sich entscheiden, im Gegensatz zu normalem Salz zu kaufen, lächerliche Geldbeträge dafür zu bezahlen. Die Idee mit Salzlampen ist etwas lächerlicher, weil die Idee ist, dass sie "Negative Ions" produzieren würden, aber es gibt keine Beweise, dass das wahr ist. Und auch wenn es wahr wäre, es gibt gar keine Hinweise auf eine tiefgreifende Verbesserung der Gesundheit durch negative Ionen. Im Gegenteil, es wurde festgestellt, dass viele "Negative Ion" Produkte Strahlung von Thorium emittieren, das darin versteckt. Man kann niemals New-Age-Vermarkter glauben. Um die Wahrheit zu sagen, ich finde die Lampen immer noch sehr schön und wenn sie nicht so teuer wären, würde ich eine für mein Zimmer kaufen. Nur zur Dekoration, natürlich.