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A Trip to Mars
The listening section completely refutes the reading passage's assertion that it is challenging for humans having a trip to Mars. First, the reading passage mentions that a round-way trip to Mars
takes approximately 2 years, there is no enough space to store human's essentials, like food, water and oxygen for such a long time. The listening portion, however, argues that astronauts can grow plants in water which requires small space that plants can produce crops which provide food for humans. The plants release oxygen for people needed and they can recycle waste water to release clean water that collect drink water for astronauts. So, the people who trip to Mars are available to live over there.
Second, the reading suggests that the astronauts on the Mars are in zero-gravity that is harmful for human body, decreased muscle mass and lower bone density, for example. Instead, the listening part points out that astronauts have learned to use techniques to safely managing zero-gravity. They do exercises to prevent muscles mass from decreasing and eat vitamins to slow down bone density.
Third, the reading clams that a trip to Mars that the astronauts would be exposed to dangerous levels of space radiation, so the spaceship should build a shield to protect them. Yet, the shield would cause the spaceship too heavy to make the trip to Mars. Refuting this, the listening passage indicates that the space radiation is not in dangerous level all the time, it is occasionally. Astronauts are able to avoid this by equipping special instrument with small shield which does not cause too much weight. They can stay in the special small shield area against radiation until danger pass.
April 10, 2020
April 10, 2020
Plumas descoloridas en su cabello
Disfruto de las sesiones de sparring que tengo con mi canguro Pepe.
Su esposa, Lola, solía ser una bailarina. Lola quiera empezar a ensayar de nuevo, pero Pepe está pensando de tratar de disuadirla de esto.
No es que él dude de la habilidad de ella, sino que ella tiene una lesión de rodilla persistente. Ya ella duda de hacer ciertos ejercicios. Pero Pepe no quiero echarse la culpa a sí mismo si ella no echarse a bailar otra vez.
Lo cual es bueno, porque ella se empeña en ser el primer marsupial que gane su concurso local de cancán. Entonces todo el mundo va a llamarla "Lola el Cancanguro."
Y esa es una de las razones por las que Pepe se enamoró de ella -- su sentido del humor.
April 9, 2020
축제, 전통
캐나다의 장인 정신이 깃들어 있는 것은 Poutine(푸틴)이다. 처음 보기에는 단지 감자 튀낌, 치즈, 고기 소스인 뿐인 것 같을 수 있지만 제대로 마들면 과정이 복잡하다. 당연히 길이 높은 감자하고 Gravy (소고기 기본 소스) 를 올려야 맛있는데다가 무엇보다 Cheese curds는 (치즈 커드) 필수다. 다른 치즈와 다르게 치즈커드의 무척 신선한 특징이 있다. 대개 만든지 12시간 만에 먹는 것이다. 그래서 이동 시간때문에 제일 빠른 택배를 통하더라도 해외까지 배달을 못한다.
캐나다에는 동양 스타일 축제가 인기가 없다. 우리는 과식하는 테마가 관심을 끌어 모은다. 예를들면 ribs (돼지와 소의 갈비) 맥주, chili (어떤 매운 건더기 많은 수프) 축제에 사람들이 몰린다. 장인이 만든 수제의 물건품이나 전통적인 문화보다 우리가 터질 한계점까지 돼지처럼 먹고 싶다.
April 9, 2020
Не открывай глаза
Быть ребёнком- трудно, потому что наша жизнь полная правил. Из многих правил, было одно, которого я не понял. Мама всегда говорила: "Никогда не открывай глаза, если боишься монстров под кроватью". Но я уже был интеллигентным и отвечал: "Но, мам, монстры не существуют".
Когда доростаешь, зачинаешься понимать почему эти правила были важны. На берегу моря, я смотрю солнце, которое заходит. Я очень боюсь вечера, потому что темнота - опасная. Неожиданно я слышу животны крик: это монстр. Но я должен закрыть глаза. "Не открывай глаза" я потеряю. Монстры в моей голове не поедят меня, пока мои глаза - закрыты.
[ТЕКСТ С ПОПРАВКАМИ]
Быть ребёнком - трудно, потому что наша жизнь полна правил. Из многих правил - было одно, которого я не понимал. Мама всегда говорила: "Никогда не открывай глаза, если боишься монстров под кроватью". Но я уже был умным и отвечал: "Но, мам, монстры не существуют".
Когда подростаешь, начинаешь понимать почему эти правила были важны. На берегу моря, я смотрю на солнце, которое заходит. Я очень боюсь вечера, потому что темнота опасна. Неожиданно я слышу крик животного - это монстр. Но я должен закрыть глаза. "Не открывай глаза" я повторяю. Монстры в моей голове не съедят меня, пока мои глаза закрыты.
April 9, 2020
Un videojuego que me gusta mucho
Tengo ganas de escribir sobre un sujeto que no hay nada que ver con la cuarentena, pero en este momento me parece que todo en mi vida tiene un vínculo con el virus. Pues decidí de escribir un poco sobre un videojuego que he estado jugando, que se llama "Animal Crossing" (AC). Empecé de jugar AC hace una semana y es un juego perfecto para una cuarentena. En primer lugar, requiere al menos un poco de tiempo cada día. Hay tareas que tienes que hacer con frequencia para avanzar en el juego, y en este momento tengo más tiempo libre que lo normal. En segundo lugar, es un juego que es muy calmante. Paso mi tiempo dentro del juego en buscar recursos, pescar, charlar con mis vecinos, y explorar islas desiertos. No tengo que pensar en acertijos complicados ni que alguien va a matarmede repente. Finalmente, es un videojuego que me conecta con mis amigos. Podemos "visitar" los unos a los otros dentro del juego; también podemos enviarnos pequeños mensajes y regalos. En resumen, Animal Crossing es un videojuego bien adaptado a la situación que nosotros vivimos en este momento!
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April 9, 2020
What things do you see in an airport?
Most memorable and interesting thing I've seen in in the airport were old-style car exhibition in the airport of Domodedowo. I've visited it one year ago after my buisnestrip to the city of Voronezh. There were some retro cars 30-40th years of production, mostly old Ford's, Citroen's Peogeot's and few bykes (like BMW, I guess).
April 9, 2020
Een oplossing voor België
België is een klein landje dat ligt in West-Europa.
Ondanks het feit dat je het hele land gemakkelijk met jouw auto in drie uren kan doorrijden, zijn er heel veel verschillen tussen de bevolking.
België wordt gezien als een succesvol drietalige land. Net zoals Zwitserland.
Hier is het verwacht dat alles zo werkt, en ik bedoel niet enkel verkeersignaaletjes, maar ook meer complexe dingens zoals gemeentenhuizen die naast Brussel liggen, treinstationen, evenementen, en zo verder.
De realiteit zegt toch iets anders. Er zijn mensen die van plaats verhuizen omdat er nieuwkomende Wallen, zelfs Bruselaars dicht bij Brussel graag willen blijven.
Het resultaat is een beetje onverwachtelijk. Vlaamse gemeenten zijn er nu praktisch gezien Franse gementen bij de taal die daar wordt gesproken.
Nu, hoe zullen de Belgiën dit kunnen oplossen? Is er iets dat gedaan kan worden? Ik laat jullie antworden. Veel plezier met creatif zijn!
April 9, 2020
Barcelona
Querida Barcelona,
Es terrible cómo un virus nos separó hace un mes. Un virus capaz de parar toda la vida cotidiana, aunque no es más que un poco de material genético. ¡Qué mundo en que vivimos!
Nos conocimos solo desde hace dos meses, y me gustas tanto. Me encantan tus lugares de interés: el Arc de Triomf, las Ramblas, y la Sagrada Familia. Me encanta tu centro histórico. Me encanta tu transporte público. Y todavía no he visto todo.
No creo que sea posible verte pronto. Solo podemos esperar hasta que el brote se resolverá. Espero verte pronto.
Hasta la próxima visita.
April 9, 2020
Interessante Themen im Politik für mich
Ich interessiere mich mit sozialen Probleme im Politik. In den USA haben wir viele verschiedenen Leute. Diese Leute haben andere Rassen, Religionen, Sexualität, sozioökonomischen Status, usw. voneinander. Viele Minderheiten sind ausgelassen, und sie haben nicht so viele Chancen wie die Mehrheiten, deshalb müssen wir für sie im Politik vertreten. Ich glaube, dass alle Menschen gleich sein sollen, und das heißt, alle sollen gleiche Rechte und Chancen haben. Ich bin mich damit auch mit dem Bildungspolitik interessiert, weil ich glaube, dass es ein großes Problem ist, wenn einige Schule gratis sind, und einige Schule Schulgeld habe. Ich denke, dass die Bildung gratis sein sollen, deshalb könnten alle die gleiche und dieselbe Bildung haben. Auf diese Weise hat niemand die Überlegenheit und alle haben dafür der Chancengleichheit. Ich interessiere mich auch mit den Themen der Frieden und Umwelt im Politik. Weil wir alle am Erde wohnen, sollen wir friedlich miteinander sein, und wir sollen über den Umweltschutz und den Klimawandel zusammenarbeiten.
April 9, 2020
Ted Where camels really come from
Today, I don't want to do anything. But I have to do something, so now I am writing this. This writing is about where camels really come from.
I got to know a paleobiologist from this video. I think people who work in this kind of fields looks great. Because paleobiologists have to be delicate to find fossil which is from tiny to huge things.(?) In addition, fossils are hard to tell what those are. Those are similar with a piece of wood and other things when those are broken into small pieces. and process of finding evidences is stressful if those are right or wrong. In this video, the paleobiologist was finding many pieces of bones in the ice and digging up old dead stuffs. And she pieced them together. she struggled with finding lab that could find what animal the bones are from. I can’t imagine how hard the process are. I thank paleobiologists who discover facts of pasts. Finally it turned out what it is. It is a camel. I thought camels only live in the desert! I didn't know that. I found out Camels would have lived around the north pole, camel came from America and primitive camel would have been really small like rabbit. I was freaked out to know this. Rabbit sized camels? wow. how cute those are. History of evolution is amazing. How did they adapt a lot of environment? They must have adapted new environments with things they already had. Because I think they can’t evolve in short time. So that's why I think like that. I think to understand this, I have to readjust and reimagine my thoughts. Be flexible. There are many mysteries that we don't understand in this world.
April 9, 2020
How to talk and listen to transgender people
This is about “How to talk (and listen) to transgender people”. I was thinking about transgender through this video. I recognized what is transgender when I was freshman in high school because my middle school friend told me “I am a lesbian.”. before that, I had no knowledge about queer and have never thought about that. So I didn't know what happened at that time. I said “what??” to my friends. She explained her feelings and I was a bit confused. But I got my act together and listened her saying. My friend is queer? It was not matter to me. Because she doesn't change into different person because of that. after that, I was getting to notice gay, transgender and etc. So I was getting to be interested in queer. I thought all queers are related with bad things at the first time. But it didn't. sometimes I think of queer because of my friend. and I got to know who they are and know my favorite singer is gay. and I have accepted them. I was talking about queer with my friends and I realized many friends have open mind about many things. That was good experiences to me. And now I don't understand many people hate queer. I don't know why they do. They are all same person like us. It is just woman likes woman and man likes man. They don't deserve it. We have freedom!! In this video, I got impressed this sentence.
“The truth is we trans people are so much more scared of you than you are of us.” They are scared of other people’s how people look at them.
What we have to do is to change recognition of people. and We have to know most of them are not promiscous. just some of them might be like that. it is same with people who love different gender I think. and we have to accept them with all our heart. It is okay not to accept them except hating them and swearing them.
I know people who one of their family is queer are hard to accept the fact. But people who are gay also might have downright wound on their heart. So I think we need to respect them. It is terrible to look at them with disgust. I was able to think about queer and what they think about that through this video.
April 9, 2020
Übungen am Donnerstag
Ich bewerbe mich morgen auf die Stelle.
Nie im Leben bestehe ich eine C2-Zertifikat Prüfung.
Mein Freund erklärt dich, wie deine Arbeitsstelle funktioniert.
Ich denke, unser Chef befördert uns dieses Jahr nicht mehr...
Ich verspreche euch, dass so etwas nicht noch einmal vorkommen wird!
Wann kann ich erfahren, ob ich wieder zur Arbeit gehen kann?
April 9, 2020
Video Games
Children nowadays spend a lot of time with video games. They felt many emotions such as excitement, happiness and fear when they played video games. So they want to play video games all the time. But İt's mean that they can be addicted with time. This situation is very dangereous. Because they don't want to do their duty such as do homework, go to school, help your parents. Additionally they don't want to play real game with friends. They may prefer virtual games. That's so children's social communication skills may weaken. Children don't have a self-control mechanism. Consequently, their parents should limit their time spent playing video games.
April 9, 2020
louer mon logement
Bonjour,
Pour raisons personnelles, je loue mon appartement à Manchester pour deux moins. Il a une chambre, une salle de bain et une petite cuisine. Le selon est clair et grand, et il y a un télévision. L'appartement est à côté de le beau parc. Mes voisins sont gentils et tranquilles. Il est un peu de loin de la gare, mais j'ai un vélo que votre pouvez utiliser. Mon numéro de portable est 078128383192. Merci
A bientôt,
kjk31
April 9, 2020
April 9, 2020
My Boss's Behavior
Our company doesn't allow us to work from home yet, so we have to go out to work every day.
The staff members who have children can take special paid holidays besides normal paid holidays as the schools are closed.
My boss takes a day off once a week using this special holiday system for his youngest son, 11 years old.
11....I'm wondering if the children more than 10 years old sill need to be taken care of? Even though he lives with his parents...
He makes a phone call every three hours to us during the holiday and asks "Is there any matter I have to deal with?" We say no, then he starts to speak about some topics on the TV news.
Analyzing his behavior, I guess he just doesn't want to work and take a day off, but he isn't needed at all by his family in his house. So he feels lonely and often makes a phone call to us.
Do you think my guess is wrong?😆
April 9, 2020
April 9, 2020
４月９日。
昨日、私は仕事で夜に遅く終わりました。だから、晩ご飯も遅く食べました。私はとても疲れたけど、眠くなかったです。それで、平和的な音楽を聴きながら、ゲームを遊んでいました。そして、寝ることも遅くしたけど、楽しかったです。
仕事はとても忙しかったです。お客さんが夕方中、電話とオンラインで注文したので、ピザがたくさん作らないとだめでした。台所の中でとても暑かったです。でも、外でちょっと寒かったです。それで、終わりの後で、私は汗をかけていたから、風邪を引くと思いました。だから、家を帰ったばかり、シャワーを浴びました。楽でした。
今日、一日中に働かないとだめです。まだ、ちょっと疲れているけど、頑張れます。
April 9, 2020
April 9, 2020
Rice's Whereabouts
While we are asked to voluntarily refrain from going out, my wife and I are getting fat. Our staple food is rice, but she said she'd change it to potato and cabbage. I objected her plan, yet she forcibly conducted it. To be surprised, my potbelly is getting flat. I didn't think I can live without rice, but I found I can.
I saw some people buying some dozens killograms of rice at a grocery store and rice was disappeared from a display rack last month. I'm wondering if they can eat up that rice, especially by summer. Japanese summer is so muggy and hot that rice often goes bad unless it's put in a fridge. Some of them were the eldery around 80. I think they have a so big family, othewise, they won't be able to eat up that tons of rice within this year.
I think those who got fat are not only our couple but some other people. I wish those who stocked up rice don't dump its unused rice into Mt. Fuji. Illegal dumping around Mt. Fuji has been still conducted by people and companies.
April 9, 2020
8. April
Ich habe heute später aufgestanden. Ich habe Toast gegessen und Kaffee getronken.
Ich habe nicht heute Deutsch gelernt. Ich war müde. Aber, meine Mutter und ich habe ein Netflix-film zusammen ferngesehen. Die Film war interessant. Der Film heißt Unorthodox. In der Film gibt ist eine Frau dass nach Berlin fliegen. Sie liebe Klavier spielen. Sie liebe viel Musik.
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