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Soy una introvertida
Soy una introvertida. Me gustan mis amigos y puedo hablar con ellos la mayoría de los días, pero no me encanta hablar con otros personas por grandes periodos del tiempo (por ejemplo más de una hora) a menos que estamos amigos cercanos. La interacción social me agota mucha. Me prefiero leer un libro. Pero, me gusta cocinar con mis compañeras de cuarto o hablar en el celular con mis padres. Durante los tiempos antes de COVID-19, al final del día, las interacciones en mis clases me agotaron. Así pues, a veces me gusta el distanciamiento social porque no necesito usar toda mi energía cada día.
March 20, 2021
March 20, 2021
Schlechte Nacht
Letzte Nacht konnte ich leider nicht gut schlafen. Vielleicht soll ich ausprobieren, keine Bildschirme eine Stunde vor ich einschlafen gehe, anzustarren.
Das künstliche Licht, die von Geräte wie Handys oder Tablets ausgestrahlt wird, könnte schuld daran sein, wenn man Schwierigkeiten beim Schlafen hat.
Auch vermute ich, dass Kaffee etwas damit zu tun hat, da ich manchmal nach 18:00 Uhr Kaffee trinke.
March 20, 2021
iPad
I wonder if I should purchase 8th generation of iPad now or wait until the new generation will be released. What I want to do with iPad is writing English articles for LangCorrect during my commute to work. Smartphone's screen is so small that my eyesight has gradually deteriorated. Aside from writing posts, I'd like to watch animes on Netflix, reading online books, and organizing my photos. One of my hobbies is photography. I used to take photos with old lens and retouch the photos by photoshop.
Even though I realize that advanced features such as large storage and versatile connecter aren't required to fulfil my purpose, I can't get rid of my thought that it is good time to buy iPad air or new generation since Apple is supposed to announce the release of new models on March 23.
March 20, 2021
Sandalen mit Socken rocken
Ja, ich habe es gesagt. Ich weiß, dass jeder den Look hasst, aber die Kombination ist so verdammt bequem. Es ist ein deutsches Klischee, aber es scheint auch in andere Länder zu erscheinen, weil ein Professor von mir würde es die ganze Zeit tragen. Heutzutage ist es zum Schuhfegefeuer verbannt, unter Crocs und Velcroschuhe. Trotzdem muss ich zugeben, dass ich es immer noch manchmal drinnen tragen. Besonders letztes Jahr, seit ich mit Socken geschlafen habe und meine Klassen alle online waren. Und wenn man ausgehen muss, können schwarze Socken mit Adidas Slides eigentlich ziemlich cool aussehen. Fast modisch, würde ich sagen. :^)
March 20, 2021
March 20, 2021
March 20, 2021
A Big Earthquake
This evening, a big earthquake happened again in the Tohoku region of Japan. The magnitude is 7.2, and it was almost as big as the previous earthquake on February 13th. I'm back in my hometown where is far from there now, so, fortunately, I wasn't fear of the ground shaking but I'm worried about my friends and my room. Additionally, The tsunami warning was issued just after the shock. It would be scarier than before. Finally, the tsunami didn't happen and the warning was canceled.
March 20, 2021
Why are so many people angry on social media? (pt. 6)
Is it possible for us to try to change the social environment? The answer is: yes. There are already a number of people in academia and technology who are doing some experiments, and I'll introduce you to some of them.
First of all, how can we make people feel that users on social media are living people? For example, Youtube and Tiktok are posted according to the algorithm, which leads to the majority of video traffic is less than 25. However, Kwai, a Tiktok's competing product, is not the same. Kwai is not pushing you a choice, but let users see a different life on it. Even if your life is more niche and grassroots, it is also worthy of respect. This means that the algorithm is different. Kwai's algorithm is to give at least 300+ traffic to each uploaded video. In order to make the traffic more balanced, the traffic is limited for fine and good content, because we need to free up more traffic and let everyone become the master of the platform. The traffic is pushed according to your label, your territory, your occupation and your online behavior tendency.
March 20, 2021
March 20, 2021
2021年3月20日の日記
朝に普通のようにまず日本語を練習していた。漢字と文法を復習していた。この後でパンを焼いている。生地は前日に作っていた。近頃 セモリナが入っているパンを焼いていた。昼ご飯でパンだけ食べた。
昼ごはんの後で散歩していた。友達は散歩したくなかった。それで一人で散歩していた。一人で散歩することでハラハラしていた。でも散歩してそんなにハラハラなことがなかった。散歩でキツツキや ノロジカなど見ていた。可愛いだった。散歩の後で少し買い物していた。予定していたパンでサンドライトマトが必要だから。
家に帰って、パソコンでブレンダーという３Dモデリングのアプリを勉強していた。ブレンダーの勉強を始めた。
夕べで友達と一緒に バーベキュー していた。寒いけど外で焼いていることだけした。家の内で食べていた。
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March 20, 2021
Gerônimo
Gerônimo foi um importante líder Apache. Nunca foi chefe, mas é bem conhecido por sua habilidade militar. Quando sua família morreu num attaque em Sonora, Gerônimo tornou-se guerreiro. Foi capturado pelos exércitos dos Estados Unidos e México três vezes, mas ele escapou. Anos depois, foi preso como prisoneiro de guerra.
Gerônimo ainda é reconhecido nos Estados Unidos por sua coragem. Quando paratropas saltam do avião, dizem "Gerônimo!"
March 20, 2021
Demand for Data Scientists
There is a large demand for data scientists and students who have majored machine learning at universities. Regardless of the kind of industries, Japan's companies want to obtain artificial intelligence (AI) technologies. However, I guess that most employers aren't sure what AI is all about and how the technologies create profitable outcomes. They have to figure out them before the companies invest on recruiting data scientists.
If you intend to predict future trends of the market accurately or derive personal preferences from order histories, enormous amount of data is required. Though some companies assume that AI robots automatically collect and organize the data by itself, the company should have accumulated large amount of data for long time. Apart from the case of big companies, the quantity and the quality of the data which companies possess is insufficient.
I infer that some problems facing the companies can be solved by conventional statistical methods. Especially, physical phenomena such as chemical reactions and manufacture error rates should be adapted by statistical methods because machine learning models are prone to make it's process black box. In addition, it deserves to be known that some of machine learning models are developed by conventional statistical methods.
March 20, 2021
le dernier voyage au Japon: la préparation et le première jo
L'année dernière, j'ai eu le chance de faire un voyage seule. À cause de l'instabilié sociale à ce moment-là, l'école a été suspendu. Alors, j'avais deux mois de vacances. Et le billet d’avion et le frais de logement étaient bon marché au debut de décembre car c’était la basse saison. Avec tout ça, c’était un bon moment pour partir en vacances!
C’était la premiere fois que j'ai parti seule à l’étranger. C’était très excitante ! J'avais fait beaucoup de recherches sur le route de bus, les destinations touristiques, les cuisines renommées et etc. J'avais même préparé l'itinéraire pour le beau temps et le mauvais temps car j'avais lu
qu'il y avait de chance de pluie. Je sais que je dois faire tous les préparations pour bien commencer le voyage. Personne peut me guider, sauf mon portable :p
J'ai seulement prévenu ma mère cette decision une semaine d'avant. (Attention ! Je n'ai pas demandé de sa permission !) Même elle n'était pas contente, et elle était très inquiète, j'ai déjà décidé de le faire ! (Ah, je l'ai dit à ma meilleure prof, elle croyait en moi :)
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Le grand jour était arrivé. Je me suis levée tôt parce que l'avion serait partir à 7h du matin. Ma mère m'a accompangé à l'arrêt de bus, et puis, j'étais tout seule. C'était très bien de regarder le réveil du soleil lors que l'avion a été décollé ! Bon voyage !
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Quand j'ai arrivé, il pleuvait. Le système de bus locale est un peu compliqué et le moyen de paiement est different de ce qu'on a au Hong Kong. Heureusement, j'avais fait de recherche et avec l'aide de carte, j'ai arrivé à la chambre d’hôtes sans grand problème Le moment que j'étais sur le bus, je m'ai dit, « Enfin, je suis là. Je suis dans la scene de Doreramon. (Un dessin animé très célèbre qui vient du Japon.) »
L’enregistrement n'a pas très bien passé parce que on avait de difficulté sur Léa communication : je parlais pas Japonais et l'hôtesse ne parlait pas bien anglais. Mais, au final avec l'aide de « google translate», je me suis installée.
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La pluie n’arrêtait pas. Mais je sais que mon temps était limité, alors j'ai quand même sorti et exploré les endroits au ville à pied. J'aime bien me promener. C'est juste qu'il pleuvait vraiment fort et je dois trouver un café pour rester et lire le livre que j'apporté.
La nuit fut sombre et pluvieuse. Les toilettes, le lit de l’hôte ne sont pas si confortables compare aux miens. C’était le première moment que ma chambre m'a manqué. Juste un peu. Après, j'ai réfléchi mes expenses de la journée et écrit qu'est-ce que ce passait dans mon journel. Et j'ai même discuté un peu avec une fille japonaise qui aussi partait seule en vacances !
Jusqu'à demain !
March 19, 2021
Los idiomas tonales
Por todo el mundo, hay lugares donde se hablan lenguas tonales. Para muchos de Estados Unidos o Europa, nos pone miedo la idea de tener que aprender todos los tonos distintos. Sin embargo, incluso en los idiomas indoeuropeos hay elementos tonales. Si has intentado aprender sueco o griego antiguo, es probable que los hayas experimentado antes. Aunque es discutible si son lenguas tonales de verdad o no, los elementos se acentúan mucho.
Además, los idiomas tonales son relativamente comunes. Alrededor de una mitad de los que se hablan en este mundo, o alrededor de 2500 idiomas, son tonales. Así que en realidad no hay nada de temer. Muchas personas los hablan cada día, sin problemas. ¡El chino mandarín, el idioma más hablado del mundo, es tonal! Al fin y al cabo, lo único que nos aplaza es nuestros miedos. Pero, como nos ha mostrado, son tontos, porque cualquier persona que quiere aprender un idioma tonal lo puede.
Dos oraciones con "de + infinitivo".
1. De decirme, habrías podido evitarlo.
2. De abandonarse, quizá se rompa la maldición.
March 19, 2021
Reflesh
I watched the movie on the Netflix last night. My favorite actor “Ryuhei Matsuda” was on that film. It was really interesting story and I enjoyed it a lot. Usually there are tons of things to do after I come home. Cooking, finishing up dishes, doing laundry, playing with my daughter and so on. My husband and my daughter were at my mother in law’s house. Spending time alone makes me reflesh but also notice how much I need my family.
March 19, 2021
Juni
Min mamma berättade för mig att hon kommer att komma till Sverige i juni. Hon saknar mig mycket, ibland för mycket enligt mig... Den sista gången såg vi varandra var i december 2019. Inte ens två år. Jag älskar min mor men jag är inte säker att jag tycker om henne som en person, om du förstår? Hon är lite manipulativ mot mig och gillar inte att jag är vegansk och feminism. Hon gillar min partner men gillar inte att han är också vegansk, och hon skulle föredra om min partner inte var vegansk. Hon säger att vi stänger oss själv i ett veganskt fängelse... Om det är logiskt??
Jag är glad över att sig henne igen snart men jag är REDAN stressad över alla våra bråkar. Jag vet inte än hur många dagar hon ska stanna, hon bara sa om den just två timmar sedan. Vi ska se.
March 19, 2021
March 19, 2021
Short mystery story
Hello, so I wrote a short mystery story which was basically for school, but I finally didn't use it, so I would like that someone read and correct it. I know it's very long, and it can be a bit boring as I was pretty restricted for the storyline but please, if you have a bit of time, I would be extremely grateful if you could read and correct this. If you don't want to correct this as it's too long, then I would appreciate simple feedback of the story or any writing advices. Also, could anyone approximately guess my English level with this text ? I know it's hard to guess a language level just with one simple text so if you can't, don't worry, but it would help me a lot. I just think I have more than A1 level.
I know I'm asking for a lot of things and I kind of feel bad for that, but I'm really motivated to learn English, so even the smallest help would be appreciated.
Thank you in advance for your time and consideration :)
‘-You’re Sadie, Jack’s best friend, right ?’ asked the detective.
‘-Yes I am.’ answered Sadie.
‘-Perfect. So, I briefly heard about what happened last night. Would you mind explaining the story in detail ?
-Sure. Yesterday, Luke and I were invited to Jack’s house. Luke is a best friend of Jack. It was a bit awkward as I had never seen him before. But we talked and he seemed nice.
Jack is very rich, maybe you have already seen his house, it’s just huge. Besides, he has one cook and two servants just for himself. So, Jack, Luke and I were talking in the kitchen while eating dinner. It was probably around 10:30 in the evening. Suddenly, Jack said he wanted to go outside to smoke. I was surprised because the weather outside was awful. It was raining and storming. From the inside of the house, we could hear the loud noise of the lapping rain hitting the ground, and we could see big scary but impressive flashes appearing in the sky through the window.
Therefore, I was left alone with Luke. We started talking, and he told me he had met Jack just recently. I said at my turn that Jack was a friend from my childhood but that he was becoming a bit weird these times. Luke replied that there was nothing to worry about. I frowned, because I am supposed to know him better, but I decided to not worry that much about it.
After 30 minutes, I started to get worried as Jack hadn’t returned yet. When I asked Luke what we should do, he said ‘Stay here. I’ll go look for him.’ I didn’t want to stay alone but as Luke insisted, I finally let him go. I waited, for more than 30 minutes. I started to become really anxious about them. What if something very bad had happened ? I decided to go out of the kitchen and go outside to search for them. After walking just a few steps, I noticed that there were blood marks on the ground. I immediately panicked and went back to the house. I opened the door leading to the common room, and then I saw… a body. Slowly, I got closer to the body and realized that my best friend Jack was actually laying on the floor, covered with blood. I screamed. But no one came; it seemed that everyone had suddenly disappeared. I continued to scream louder and louder, in vain. I was sobbing more than ever. It took me some time to realize it was meaningless. I then decided to call the police. And they came and stayed about an hour. I asked them how their research was doing, and they just answered me that they had found meds in his bedroom. But they still haven’t found the murderer. That’s why I decided to reach you.
-Well thank you, that was an interesting case.
-What do you mean by “that was” ?
-Oh, I just found the murderer.’ He said calmly.
‘-Really ?
-Isn’t it obvious ? Luke killed your best friend.
-But that’s not…
-Well, finding murderers is my job. So, who should we trust ?’
Sadie didn’t know what to answer.
March 19, 2021
Never give up
Hi guys, today I'd like to say how the situation is in Ecuador with the weather. Currently it's raining a lot. People with low resources have a lot of inconveniences because the water is entering the houses. At the same time, it is most difficult to work. That's a pity. I almost forgot that also a few days ago a volcano entered an eruption which caused the sky to be black in the morning. I'm fine, but always I remember these news. I know that are difficult days, but we never gave up.
March 19, 2021
Leben und Wetter
Ich habe schon seit zwei Jahren in Deutschland gelebt und ehrlich gesagt, habe ich diese Zeit kaum gefühlt.
Das liegt wohl daran, dass wir mehr als ein Jahr mit dem Coronavirus in unserem Alltag gelebt haben, deswegen fühlt sich die Zeit gleichzeitig langsam und schnell an.
Ich kann es kaum glauben, dass März fast vorbei ist. Das Wetter scheint jeden Tag, wegen der niedrigen Temperaturen, Winter zu sein.