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Mi ho sevegliato con una domanda sulla testa.
La domanda è questa; come faccio a sapere quando un verbo e transitivi e intransitivi? Ho letto un libro di grammatica che lo spiegava cosi; verbi intransitivi sono quelli che dopo di se non hanno un complemento oggetto, esempi; andare, arrivare, tornare ecc. Allora, i verbi transitivi sono quelli che dopo di sè hanno un complemento oggetto... non riesco a capire questo, magari dovrò trovare altri metodi per imparargli.
April 4, 2021
चौथा दिन: मेरी पसंदीदा खाना
2012 से मैं सिर्फ़ शाकाहारी खाना खाती हूँ । शाकाहारी होना मेरे लिए ज़रूरी है लेकिन बहुत जगह है यह मुश्किल है । असल में मुझे मांसाहारी भोयन का स्वाद अच्छा लगता है । मेरे लिए शाकाहारी होना खाने के स्वाद का मामला नहीं है । शाकाहारी होना एक नैतिक का मामला है । और बहुत सब्ज़ियों का स्वाद स्वादिष्ट है । लेकिन मुझे दो सब्ज़ियाँ बिलकुल अच्छे लगते नहीं हैं और ये लहसुन - हाँ , मैं गंभीर हूँ - और कासनी मतलब chicory हैं । मैं लहसुन खाने की कोशिश नहीं करती हूँ क्योंकि मुझे एलर्जी है । अगर मैं लहसुन खाऊँ तो मेरे पूरे शरीर को बहुत खुजली हो जाए । और मुझे कासनी का स्वाद क्यों अच्छा लगता नहीं है ? चिकोरी में बहुत कड़वा स्वाद होता है । मुझे कड़वे चखने वाले खाना बहुत पसंद नहीं है ।
April 4, 2021
A small broken family
At the beginning it was my two ""parents"" (I put "" because they don't deserve that title, long story) and me. 4 years later my sister was born, we never got along in childhood. 6 years later (when I had 10 y. o.) my brother was born.
At 15 years old "HE" (I wrote it in a specific way to emphasize my hate to that person) had to leave my house, my scholar psychologist talked with my mom and gived a warning, If he didn't leave the house my psychologist was going to call the police.
Now I have more than 18 years old, I don't want to be exact.
What happened? Why does it sounds so shady?
I was born when my mother didn't finished school, neither him. He was an alcoholic abuser, a corrupted police, a thief as security guard. My mom was someone with many problems, insecurities and her own family was the same or worst. A child in that conditions couldn't end fine.
"HE" was a physical, verbal and sexual abuser. I'm not gonna shut up with it, he was the worst shit. We suffered a lot, we have many traumas even now, many years later.
I don't want to get into details, it's painful.
I hated my mother for many years when I was teen, because she didn't changed anything. I was so tired and mad with everything, so angry. I was giving up with everything: my life, my family and the world. I was so hopeless.
Some day came a woman to the class, she introduced herself: Hello everyone, my name is Andrea and I'm psychologist.
Andrea was the unique light among those dark years, I'll not be here without her help.
Because of everything I was an insecure, hostil and distrustful person. But I decided to ask for help, many years passed and she gived to me all the atetion and help that I needed at that time.
Since "HE" leaved the house, my mother changed gradually. How she changed I changed my feeling to her too, I don't hate her now, but I can't forgive all the suffering. She wanted a boy before being 20 years old. I didn't decided to exist, she decided it. She, knowing everything decided to have a kid with the first stupid that found, a kid to be used as an object to take out all her angry.
Of course, How could a 4 years old child be able to fight two stupid shits?!
I'm sorry, I'm holding my tears, I want to cry.
I hate this question, I don't have a real family. I feel so alone. I don't know what is miss your mother, laugh with you father, I don't know how is that feeling.
My mother is a better person now, my siblings are happy and in better conditions, they got the mother that I never had, and I'm happy for them. She is saving money now, she has goals, she is studying at university.
I know that she regrets for all the things of the past. She worries about me, supports me and doesn't pressure me. But she isn't my mom, I don't feel that. I see someone with blood ties that regrets and try to fix the things. I can forgive many things but that doesn't repair anything.
Have a mom isn't a blood tie or title, is a conecction, a feeling that cames from the inside. And I don't have that feeling, I'm empty.
When I read people saying "I miss my mom" "I love my mom", I just feel that empty space and I repeat to myself "How is that feeling? Is it warm? Does it gives you security or calm?".
Believe me, I'm not the most sad and poor person of the world, but my childhood and adolescence was horrible.
How much? Am I exaggerating?
I suffered insomnia because I was terrified thinking that maybe my alcoholic """FATHER""" could rape me when I was sleeping. Everyday was humiliations and threats. My mother tried to kick me out because I said, in a really calmed way "I don't think is okay force my sister to play something she doesn't want to". I ran to the bathroom to help my brother, otherwise """HE""" will hit him because his stupid brain can't do anything withouth hit someone. What does he said? "Dale las gracias a tu hermana porque sino ¡te habría sacado la mierda!". In English, something like "Thank your sister, otherwise I would taken the shit out of you!".
"Sacado la mierda" is an expression to threat with hits.
"Crazy", "Without marks there's no pain", "I'll give you a real reason to cry". I can't forget those words. Fortunately I forget the most part of bad things.
Those stupid pieces of....
Seriously... I can't with this...
I'm sweating and holding my tears at the same time.
Even If my mother is a good person now, she can't erase anything of that shit of past that I had.
So, I tried to change my family and I did it. That changed the life of my siblings.
I'm trying to get over it, but is so hard.
At least now I can smile, I'm recovering from all of that. I'm working on it.
So, a mother and two siblings. That's all.
I guess I'll have many errors, I'm not gonna check it soon. When I was kid I obssesed with "perfection" because that's what my mother wanted, a sad and stupid "perfect daughter".
She said to me many times, that I was the perfect child for her. But I can't feel that. Even now I'm a bit obssessed with errors, mistakes and defects.
I was so near to end with everything. Well, my mother was near to end with me and my sister when my grandmother died. I was 7 years old then.
At the end there's only a sad person with mental problems and a deep hole inside her heart, holding all the memories and trying to fight.
I'm not married, I don't want to have kids or pets. If I'm not fine I'll not bring a little and fragile life into this to suffer.
Why do people have kids?
"Because they will care you when you are old" "Because I want a mini me" "Because they are cute" "Because people say that" "Because my parents want grandchildren" "Because all my friend have one" "Because is the only way to be complete" "Because we born for that" "Because I didn't used protection and we don't have option"
NO! I'm not gonna have kids for that simple reasons. I heard all these things from real parents and people who wants to have kids.
But I say no. I'm not gonna create a new life just because I can or I want. If I have a kid, I'll sure to give the best: a nice family, a good enviroment, a brilliant future and above all a safe space, a good life. I'm gonna think "What could that little criature want and need?.
A life is something so beautiful and fragile. I aprecciate it so much that I can't do it If I'm not enough, because I know how is to grow up in a terrible family.
If I forgot a word or something, I'm sorry, I was feeling more than thinking.
Although I'm not married, I have a boyfriend. He is the most important person in my life. We have problems sometimes as all the couples, but we progress. We learn with the time. He is the closest person for me, and I talk with him when I'm stressed and worried about something, specially If I'm remembering bad things or having nightmares.
Thanks for your time, I'll try to learn more about English.
April 3, 2021
April 3, 2021
La évolution concernant les familles
À HK, le modèle familial évolue au fur et à mesure. il n'y a plus de modèle unique qui consiste un père, une mère et leurs enfants qui vivent ensemble avec leur grand-parents.
D’abord, concernant la taille d’une famille, c'était toujours une grande famille avant. Mais maintainent, la taille d'une famille diminue ! Il y a moins d'enfant par famille. C’est souvent un enfant unique. En plus, ils ne vivent pas avec leur grand-parent. Parce que à la société moderne, les familles ont déménagé aux appartements auxquels la taille diminue au comparé à la grande maison.
Ensuite, en matiere de structure d'une famille, il y a de plus en plus de famille monoparentale à HK. D'après le chiffre de 2011, le taux de croissance de famille monoparentale de 2001 à 2011, c'est +33%. Je peux même trouver deux exemples parmi mes amis ! En details, il y a plus de mère monoparentale que le père célibataire.
En même temps, les familles recomposées sont de plus en plus nombreuses à HK. Je pense que c'est pas surprenant, vu que la valeur traditionnelle n'est plus forte et ce devient beaucoup plus facile de se marier et se divorcer.
Pour les mariages mixtes, c’est-à-dire des mariages avec des personnes d'origine étrangère. Il y'en avait beaucoup dans les années avants. Il concern les femmes qui vivent en chine se marient avec les hommes d’HK. Parce que à ce moment-là, la condition de vie à HK est meilleure. Selon moi, c’est toujours vrai maintenant. Mais la diminution de mariage transfrontalière, c’est dû a l'amélioration d'économie chinoise et c'est pourquoi les chinoises ne voyent pas cette avantage. Mais, concernant le mariage avec des personnes occidentales, il y en a plus. C’est normale grâce à la mondialisation. Une de mes amis se
marie avec son conjoint Australien et elle démenage à l'Australia ensuite.
Mais malheursement, les mariages homosexuels ne sont pas encore légalisé ici.
April 3, 2021
Nabemono
My favorite food is Nabemono (鍋もの) which is a variety of popular Japanese homemade dishes. It is served with hot pods and includes vegetables, fungi, meats, and seafoods. It's great way for children who dislike vegetables and people who live by themselves to take vegetables. Unlike Chinese hotpods (火鍋), Japanese hotpods don't include spices and taste sweet and salty in most cases. You can enjoy various types of soup and ingredients depending on the region such as Oden, Shabu-shabu, and Sukiyaki.
My favorite one is Motsunabe (もつ鍋), which is known for local food of Fukuoka, includes beef guts called Motsu. The dish is thought to be good for maintaining elasticity of the skin since it contains much collagen. However, I guess that collagen is decomposed into amino acids. It isn't essential for me to be healthy food. I often enjoy Motsunabe with Mentaiko (明太子), which is salted pollock roe.
April 3, 2021
Mi familia: artistas y aventureras
Cuando hablo de mi familia, hablo de la familia de la parte de mi madre: mi madre, mi hermana, mis abuelos, mi tía y mi prima. No hay muchos hombres en mi familia: solo mi abuelo y el marido de mi tía. Son hombres muy reservados, contentos de estar solos y hacer sus cosas en su rincón.
Mi madre y mi tía tienen historias muy similares. Los dos han dejado a sus estudios para tener niños: mi madre tenía 24 años y estuvo en el fin de su diploma. Unos años después me recuerdo ir con ella a su universidad, ella quería saber si había posibilidad recuperar su diploma. No ha podido. Mi tía a dado a luz a mi prima aún más temprano, cuando tenía 21años. Soy la primera mujer en la familia de mi madre que tiene un diploma.
A pesar de eso, hay mucho talento en mi familia. Mi tía ha siempre creado cosas increíbles: ella dibuja, pinta. Sus creaciones son unas des cosas que son las mas preciosas de mis posesiones. Mi prima ha seguido sus pasos: ha dejado sus estudios para coser disfraces y vestidos que vende en Etsy. Mi madre ha siempre tocado el piano, es su gran pasión en la vida. Mi hermana también dibuja muy bien.
Mi abuela, por otro lado, es una aventurera. Ha trabajado toda su vida como geóloga y ha pasado todo su tiempo en las montañas con una mochila. Puedo decir lo mismo de mi otra abuela que estuvo ingeniera nuclear.
En momentos difíciles, pensar a esa familia de artistas y aventureras me da fuerza.
April 3, 2021
तीसरा दिन: मेरा परिवार
मेरा परिवार ऑस्ट्रेल्या में रहता है । मेरे बचपन में हम ग्यरा साल नीदरलैंड में भी रहते थे । मेरे पिता-जी स्कॉटलैंड से हैं और मेरी माता-जी नीदरलैंड से हैं । 1997 में मेरे पिताजी को ऑस्ट्रेल्या में काम करना लगा । वे डॉक्टर हैं । 2004 में हम नीदरलैंड से ऑस्ट्रेल्या चले गए । उस समय मैंने सोचा कि मैं फिर कभी नहीं नीदरलैंड जाऊँगी । लेकिन 2010 में मैं अपनी पड़ाई के लिए नीदरलैंड वपास गयी । इसके कारण मैं आजकल अकेली रहती हूँ ।
हाल ही तक मेरा बॉफ़्रेंड था । वह जॉर्डन में रहता था । हम जॉर्डन में मिले । हमारा रिश्ता 2 साल के लिए बिलकुल ठीक था लेकिन तीसरे साल को यह धीरे-धीरे बदल हो जाना लग रहा था । आजकल हम एक दूसरे से बात नहीं करते हैं । इस वजह से मैं कभी-कभी बहुत दुःख हूँ । शायद एक दिन सब ठीक होगा लेकिन मुझे अभी तक समझ नहीं आया कि क्या हुआ । इस तरह से ज़िंदगी थोड़ी अजीब हो सकता है ।
April 3, 2021
salut tlm:)
salut! je m’appelle olivia. j’ai 26 ans et j’habite aux états-unis. je suis un prof d’anglais au lycée. j’ai étudié français quand j’étais plus jeune, mais maintenant j’ai besoin de plus de practice! j’aime étudier les langues et voyager. j’ai visité paris 2 fois, et je veux retourner :)
April 3, 2021
Моя семья
У меня нормальная семя. Я живу с ним в не большой Дома в Варселоне.
У меня есть отец, мать, маленькая сестра, у маленькая собака. У меня тоже много дяди, и он живет рядом с меня.
Я очень люблю моя семья, по я хочу есть мой собственной дом. Сейчас в Испании ето очень трудно, но я думаю после Covid ето может быть легче.
Когда у меня хорошая работа, я хочу создать свою семьюсемью с моя любимая.
April 3, 2021
El canto de los pájaros
Mientras Pascua se aproxima, también el tiempo se vuelve más agradable aquí. Los pájaros ha regresado de su hogar del invierno y las plantas han florecido. Recuerdo que durante los primeros meses de la pandemia, mucha gente dijeron que los cantos de los pájaros eran más fuertes. Aunque sea verdad, creo que es más gracias a que más personas los hicieron caso. Personalmente, me gustan los cantos de los pájaros, especialmente durante la mañana cuando me despierto. Sin embargo, ¿se clasifican como idiomas distintos?
La repuesta sencilla es... no. Esto es porque hay diferentes requisitos que un sistema necesita para clasificarlo como un idioma. Desafortunadamente para ellos, sus cantos faltan unos pocos de ellos. Eso no significa que son sencillos, sin embargo. Algunos de ellos se puede hacer de cientos de sonidos, siempre en combinaciones distintas. Al fin y al cabo, aunque no son idiomas sí mismos, aún expresan significados diferentes y hacen el área rodeada más bello.
Dos oraciones con "cuando + el imperfecto de subjuntivo".
1. ¡Yo trabajaría cuando me permitieras!
2. Se iría cuando terminara de sus deudas.
April 3, 2021
Minha familia
Meus pais são divorciados então eu moro com minha mãe. Eu me dou bem com minha mãe e nós gostamos de fazer muitas coisas juntas como cozinhar. Eu não tenho irmãos. Nós moramos perta da casa da minha tia e daí nós a visitamos frequentemente. No momento eu não tenho um animal mas no passado eu tive peixes. Eu quero ter um cachorro, mas isso não é possível por causa da minha alergia.
April 3, 2021
April 3, 2021
I used to do BASIC programming of 8-bit computers.
I'm not sure what my hobby is.
However, I used to use some programmable language called BASIC on several 8-bit computers when I was in junior high school.
I've got to know BASIC since I was in elementary school because of a friend whose father has a computer.
I found some English words, such as "if," "then," and "else," as commands at that time. I didn't know how to use them in the English language (to communicate with people), though.
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April 3, 2021
A little bit about my family
I am the little brother in a family of five, although I am not so little anymore, haha. I have two sisters older than me, but we get along with each other. They are my sisters but also my friends. My mother is great because she made me love books, which are one of my greatest pleasures in life and I always will own her for that. My father is funny and I can always count on him.
I am also happily married. We are about to adopt a couple of cats and they are going to be my first pets ever! So I am thrilled to have them at home, even though I am worried about the safety of my precious books.
April 3, 2021
推理作家殺人事件
とある日、有名な推理作家は新しい小説に取り組んでいました。その作家は一日中小説を書きましたから、作家の妻は毎日寂しくて悲しくなってきました。だから、作家の妻は秘密に作家の友人と出会い始めました。二人はお互いにだんだん好きになってきて、推理作家は全然分かってきませんでした。多少の月の後に小説は出版してから、推理作家のお金がどんどん増えてきました。その時、推理作家の妻はまだ夫に愛していたことがありません。それどころか、作家の友人と浮気し始めました。妻と推理作家の友人は推理作家を殺して、お金を取る案を一緒に作ってみました。とある日、妻は推理作家の部屋で友人が部屋に入れるように窓を開けました。入り口のドアは夕方でいつも閉まっていました。外が暗くなってきた時、全然見ないように妻は部屋の電気を消しました。そういう風に作家の友人はうちの壁を登ることができて、開いてある窓からうちへ入れるようになりました。全部の部屋が暗くなりましたから、推理作家は壁を登った友人の気が付けませんでした。推理作家は電気をつけ直した後で、作家は友人を驚かせて、急にパニックになった友人のピストルで撃たれました。そのショックの後に死んでいた推理作家の妻と友人は一緒に入り口に３００万円を持って逃げました。
April 3, 2021
3/30 Voglio parlare di mia mamma
Oggi voglio parlare di mia mamma, e quanto l'amo.
Lei è nasciuta in un piccolo villagio, chiamato Esguevillas de Esgueva, nel anno 1962, ed è la più piccola di quattro figli. A lei piacieva giocare, aveva moltissima energia, ed era sempre fuori casa con i suoi amici.
Ci ha dato tanti bacci, ci portava a scuola, ci leggeva, giocava con noi, insomma, con poco, ci ha dato una infazia molto felice.
Lei è adesso giocando con il gatto, e non sa che sto scrivendo su di lei.
Lo dico oggi e lo dirò sempre.
Mamma, ti amo. :D
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L'endroit ideal pour vivre
Je me suis souvent demandé où est l'endroit ideal pour vivre. C'est très difficile répondre à cette question parce-que il y a autant de pays où je voudrais vivre. Je crois que j'aimerais vivre en Europe parce-que je pourrais visiter tous les pays dont j'apprends la langue, par exemple la France, la Belgique, et la Suisse. Je parle allemand beaucoup mieux que français, alors je pourrais vivre dans le sud-ouest de L'Allemagne, près de la frontière avec la France et la Suisse. Je connais dans cette région une ville très belle: Freiburg im Breisgau, où je vivais d'étudiant il y a plus de trente ans. La ville est située dans la foret noire et est encerclée de montagnes. La cathédrale dans le centre-ville est une des plus haute et plus belle de l'Allemagne. Il y a une terrasse qui donne sur la vie avec une vue magnifique. Quand j'étais étudiant j'aimais m'assoir là pour lire un livre et boire de la bière.
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Familie
Ich bin das zweite Kind meiner Eltern. Heutzutage sind sie getrennt, aber nicht offiziell, weil die beiden Bürokratie vermeiden wollen. Deshalb leben sie in verschiedenen Häusern aber in Papier verheiratet bleiben, was ich ein bisschen komisch finde. Mein Vater arbeitet in das gleichen Bank seit er 20 war und sein größter Traum ist es in Zukunft durch die ganze Welt zu reisen. Meine Mutter hat Sprache an der Uni studiert, aber heutzutage arbeitet sie in einem Krankenhaus. Meine Schwester ist vier Jahre alter als ich und als Ärztin arbeitet. Sie und meine Mutter reden immer über Krankenhausgeschichten, Patientenfälle und so weiter. Ich habe momentan keine Haustiere aber ich bin ein großer Fan von Katzen und will in Zukunft auf eine aufpassen. Wenn ich eine tolle Frau finde, hoffe ich, dass sie auch Katzen liebt.