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jimmy_jon

July 16, 2021

Hormigas en la casa

Estamos en la temporada del año cuando el aire está más calentada y los varios animales y los bichos salen de sus domicilios para reanudar las actividades que suspendieron a la llegada del invierno. Aunque a la gente le agrade el calor, esta temporada me causa angustia porque significa el regreso de los hormigas en mi casa. Hace poco me di cuenta de que volvían en cantidades más grandes que en los años anteriores. Además han aparecido en más sitios, por lo tanto me causan más molestía que antes. Antes era manejable controlar sus poblaciones con algunas trampas cuidadosamente colocadas en el baño o en la rincón de la sala de estar. Otra cosa que he notado es que antes formaban filas siguiendo en patrón predicible. Ahora parecen divagar a todas direcciones y hay que acorralarlos. Este año ya he comprado algunas trampas pero no bastan, apenas realizan algún cambio en la aparición de los insectos.

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eeprom

July 16, 2021

Freitag im Juli

Ich habe heute kein Home-Office gemacht, da ich immer noch unter Schmerzen leide. Aber nicht alles ist schlimm, mir geht es schon besser. Ich kann mich mehr bewegen bzw. mein Rücken tut weniger weh und heute bin ich sogar einkaufen gegangen.

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alisson

July 16, 2021

VR-Treffen

Die Anzahl der Kurse und Online-Meetings in den letzten Tagen war so riesig. Ich frage mich, ob wir uns darauf zubewegen, dass dies zur Norm wird. Ich finde es praktisch, aber manchmal vermisse ich es, mit Menschen im echten Leben zu interagieren. VR ist eine Idee, um dies zu verbessern. Es ist aber noch primitiv, die sogenannten "Hololens" von Microsoft zum Beispiel scheinen futuristisch zu sein, aber eigentlich sind auf keinen Fall genug immersiv. Andererseits weiß ich nicht, ob es gut ist, wenn sie zu immersiv sind.

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winterdawn

July 16, 2021

“하울의 움직이 성” 리뷰

어제 저는 “하울의 움직이 성”이라는 영화를 보려서 공부를 안하는 걸 결정했어요. 스투디오 지브리의 아니메이션 진짜 예뻐요! 그리고 모든 케릭터들도 너무 사랑스러워요. 음악이 도 좋아요. 이제 “하울의 움직이 성”은 제 가장 좋아하는 영화가 되는 것 같아요! 이 영화가 저에게 행복한 느낌 줘는 밖에 아주 의미가 있어요. 영화가 삶의 이유에 대한 메시지를 보여줘요. “하울”를 다시 보고 싶어요!

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hinakido

July 16, 2021

印象に残っているストーリー

プロンプトの反応（久しぶり）

僕は昔の時にインタビューに行った、悪いな印象に作っていたと思った。

その会社はスーパーマーケットと僕の初めて職業だから不安があった。

誰でもは同じ部屋を集めなければいけないだから私たちの顔に見た。

その顔は忘れた、でも恥ずかしい感じを思いだした。

皆さんがちゃんと座って、僕は不器用なこと椅子に落とした。

多い問題、多い問答、自分に禅問答が見えた。

ついに、終わった。その画像カード、その基本のコミュニケーション試験やっと終わった。私たちは電話をかけてもらう、もしも誰かが募集した、会社員と言った。

それは残り何か、わかんないけれど。

一週間から二週間に僕は職業をくれた。

どうかな。

このメッセージ読んでいる人々、ありがとうよ。

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dej

July 16, 2021

希望がある

今週、上司たちと難しい会話しなくてはいけませんでした。動物実験ができないと言いました。研究所で酷いことを見たことがあって、苦しかった。でも、従業員として動物実験と動物の手術が一番責任でした。仕事を負けるかもしれないと思っていました。でも、会話が旨く行きました。実は私たちの研究所で動物実験と関係ない研究ごとが沢山あります。寧ろ、そんな仕事を働き始めます。すごく嬉しい！I

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bmas

July 16, 2021

¿Dónde están mis padres?

Mi madre es Mónica. Ella fue al restaurante con mi papá, Pablo. A ellos les apetecen comer cordero, pero por seguro van pedir vino al camarero primero. ¡Qué rica cena! Los dos ya están juntos hace diecisiete años, y son muy enamorados aún. Cuándo ellos sálen, mi mamá se pone muy bonita. Ahora son las nueve de la noche, y el restaurante cierra a las diez menos veinticinco. Voy a llamarlos y pedir que compren pastel, posto que hay una panadería al lado del restaurante. ¡Tengo mucha hambre!

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edwardsbjeremy

July 16, 2021

水果

我上个星期和朋友去了州立公园走一走，公园里我们找到了几棵醋栗，结果了，可还没成熟，所以我们没吃这些野醋栗。公园里的醋里都是绿色的，水果的表面还有棘刺。当地杂货店里的醋栗都是金色的，还没有棘刺，物种不一样。

公园里还有树莓和黑莓，不过八月才成熟，真令人失望啊

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kiwy

July 16, 2021

I need some help

We have just interviewed an applicant (who/whom)the committee believes is best qualified for the position.

In this sentence, 1)why the answer is who?
2) can I omit "the committee believes"? What is the function of it?

Thank you!

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kiwy

July 16, 2021

Night Riding

My legs were sore, I thought I can't keep running today. So I decided to ride a bike to auntie's home. It was so hot in the afternoon, so I started at dusk.
When I arrived, I was told that auntie had went to the rice field. I chatted with her father-in-law a few minutes. Then I went to the field. A few people were busy working there. The ridges of the field were a little muddy. I pulled up my trousers and walked cautious. Water was flowing in the small stream, it was so clear that I can see the mud in the bottom. Birds were flying in the sky. Breeze was flowing. There were green trees around the field. It was very peaceful.
When I was on my half way, auntie recognized me. She told me not to approach because there were many ants. And she asked to go back to ask another auntie to help her. I did what she asked and waited for her in her front yard.
Her father-in-law pointed at a longan tree and invited me to pick some longan. He said they were sweet. I picked some and tried. Wow, to my surprise, they were so delicious. They were sweet, but not merely sweet. I can't describe the taste exactly. Then uncle picked some lobgans from another tree which he thought would be more delicious. But I thought it tasted so normal. So I stood under the first tree, kept picking and eating. I was so satisfied with the moment.
Auntie didn't come back until it was dark. She said the rice seedlings were almost dead because of the hot weather. It was lucky that she went to look after them and saved them in time.
After dinner, I began to ride back. I rode with my torch on. But I haven't use the torch for a long time, I didn't know that it was power off. Lukily, I can use my phone's light. When I was riding on the country road, I play music from my phone loudly. There was moonlight, it was a little dim but it was beautiful. I saw a few fireflies, they shone and shone. Because I was alone, I was a little nervous. I kept riding and riding.
I went to a night ride on the same road last summer, and I encountered many fireflies flying in the brushwoodsall the way. It felt like I was riding in the sky which were full of stars. It was the most wonderful night ride in my life for now.

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Bees

July 16, 2021

いとこが訪れました。

今、夫と夫のいとこと一緒にテレビを見ています。従妹は今週末私のうちにいます。高校生ですが、最近家族との喧嘩があるのでここへ来ました。晩ご飯はチキンとピザを食べました。そして食べながら話しました。夫は明日別の都市に行きますが、いとこも夫と一緒に行きます。私は朝早く図書館に行って勉強する予定です。そして午後言語交換に行く予定です。

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pringerx

July 16, 2021

動力

今天有机会跟我的中文老师视讯。除了他帮我提高我的中文程度，他每次都刺激我多学习中文。

学语言有时候是一种枯燥的过程，所以能保持动力是至关重要的。

我个人内在的动力程度总是会波动，所以我得成立一些外在的动力机构给我补充。

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SummerTeaWater

July 16, 2021

The Glass Bead Game

Previously, my senior suggested to me to read a book, the Glass bead game.

The book is written by the well known author, Hermann Hesses.

I have read three times, but I still don't understand completely.

But I focused on the game which is described in the book.

The glass bead game is a result of high thoughts and meditations.

Masters can play beautiful sound with glass beads.

At first, I thought that it is similar like the Go game or else, but I can't image it.

Today, I find out that connecting contents between notes are similar the game.

When I connect the notes, I can make ideas and inspirations which are so beautiful sound in my brain.

I feel like I am a master of the game in this moment.

Like making nice sound of glass beads, I want to make nice ideas of my notes.

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MarkLin

July 16, 2021

自動車教習所

運転については、数年前もう免許を取ったけど、それからは一回しか運転していない。

理由はいろいろで、台北の交通は便利だし、家の車と教習所の車は違うから慣れない。

最近は自由な時間がいっぱいなので、近くの教習所にもう一度練習している。

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acorngalaxy

July 16, 2021

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Vivresti in un AirBnb invece di un albergo durante un viaggio?

Durante un soggiorno in un albergo, dal momento in cui si entra per le porte, tutto è già calibrato per lui; i dipendenti parlano inglese (la lingua franca), ci sono delle guide e dei libri nel vestibolo che gli consigliano i migliori luoghi turistici per spendere i propri soldi, e nel caso che non gli piaccia o non gli interessi la gastronomia locale (in tale caso, perché intraprendere un viaggio in primo luogo?), si può anche approfittare l’enorme selezione di cibo nei buffet quotidiani. Tuttavia, quando si vive in un AirBnb, bisogna imparare una lingua straniera, dal momento che è possibile che i anfitrioni non parlino l’inglese, altrimenti la sua madrelingua. Si dice che il linguaggio è il portale per tuffarsi nell’immersione, quindi lo considero importante quest’aspetto nella mia argomentazione. Ci sono anche il cibo fatto a casa, i suggerimenti e i consigli autentici, ma non approfondiamo.

Malgrado i benefici, una vacanza realizzata in un AirBnb può risultare rischiosa. È difficile verificare l’identità di tutti gli usuari sull’applicazione, quindi se qualsiasi persona con delle intenzioni contorte volesse approfittarsi della bontà e dell'ingenuità della gente, potrebbe farlo; ma la compagnia è stata fortunatamente lavorando sulla sicurezza della propria piattaforma dopo un filo di casi di rapimenti, stupri e anche omicidi, quindi forse in futuro non sarà una preoccupazione così grande. In qualche modo, non si può però rilassare la guarda, o si rischia di mettersi in repentaglio. D'altro canto, se non avessi goderti il tuo soggiorno, ci sarebbe una procedura nei hotel per determinare e valutare la sua qualità , ma in un'applicazione come AirBnb, le regolazioni e le procedure sono più arbitrarie.

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MikaSwedish

July 16, 2021

What customs does your culture have for gift giving?

0616. Gåvotraditioner

För vad jag vet finns det inga gåvotraditioner i mitt land.

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ponta

July 16, 2021

It is Summer

The meteorological agency announced the rainy season had passed where I live. This year, the rainy season was about a month because the beginning was later and the end was earlier than the normal year.
By the way, it is too difficult to pronounce "meteorology," isn't it?

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nixie

July 16, 2021

Språkinlärning i barn och vuxna

Barn och vuxna lär sig på olika sätt. Det finns ingen kurslitteratur för barn i ett års ålder till exempel, men de klarar sig att lära sitt modersmål ändå. Jag tror inte att det beror på någon slags magiskt tillstånd av barnets hjärna, eller åtminstone inte bara på det. Den viktigaste skillnaden till vuxenlärande ligger i barnens förberedelse att ha fel och inte bli sur på det. De provar om och om och om igen, börjar med "bababa" och "dadada", leker med ord (vilket ger mycket glädje till föräldrarna) och slutligen bemästrar språket. Man får våga göra fel. Jag med. Det är därför jag skriver på langcorrect.

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nambatsuyoshi

July 16, 2021

The cram school

My youngest son goes to the cram school this year. I took a day off today and go to the school to talk to his teacher. She gave us some advices. He is good at math and science. However, he is not good at Japanese and English. He needs to improve those subjects.

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Frank

July 16, 2021

趣味を分野に分けてみた

最近、どんな趣味があるかを少し考えていて、４つの分野があることを気づいた。それは「ゲーム」、「成長」、「創作」、「消費」だ。例えば、テニスやサッカーなどのたくさんのチームスポーツは「ゲーム」だ。「成長」の分野の特徴は、趣味の目的は上達するだけで、例えば難しい曲をピアノで引くことや、もっと速く走ることなどだ。「制作」は新しいものを作ることなので、庭仕事や絵を描くことなどは「制作」だ。ついに、「消費」の趣味はもう存在しているものを楽しむこと。例えば、本を読んだり、映画を見たりすることだ。

だから、この理論によりと、langcorrectは多分「成長」も「制作」だろう。

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basiliomagno

July 16, 2021

I'll go to sleep

I have decided to improve my English. Now, there is late in the night, I have written a couple of little English texts along the day. I jus came to know this page, already did some corrections. I hope somebody correct me, as I did with others. I have sleep difficulties, every time it is time to sleep, I try to do something else. Every day I say to myself I would not use screen past 10 pm, and every day I fail to myself. Aren't you experts in deceiving yourselves? I am that. I'll go to sleep, I expect to dream, to have English nightmares if necessary.

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lcy5124

July 16, 2021

Dia dezasseis de julho

No próximo ano, nós viajamos para Hong Kong e Macao.
Hong Kong e Macao estão perto de Taiwan, e nós pudemos visitar aqui muitas vezes.
Este vez foi na férias verão antes do meu ano final em escola secundária.
Eu tinha passava bastante tempos de estudar por teste para entrada na universidade.
Neste viagem, eu achei que Hong Kong não muda muito, mas há mais chineses do que último vez nós visitamos.
As comidas de Hong Kong é ainda saborosa.
Nós visitamos a casa do amigo da minha mãe.
A casa dela foi localizando longa do central da cidade.
Além disso, nós deslocaramos a casa dela de autocarro.
A casa dele foi muita pequena, comparado da minha casa de Taiwan.

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heavensblade13

July 16, 2021

シャーロック・ホームズ

今日は「憂国のモリアーティ」というアニメを観た。シャーロック・ホームズシリーズの人物を使っていて、興味深いところがある。シャーロック・ホームズはすごく人気だね。もう複数のアニメ、漫画、映画、ドラマシリーズがあるのに、引用する作品がまだ作っている。原作の人気が分かるけど、ほとんどの他の作品の人物の使い方はめちゃくちゃ（雑）だと思う。

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emilybrehob

July 16, 2021

Les chats de mon amie

En ce moment je m'occupe des chats de mon amie. Elle m'a demande de m'occuper de ses chats pendant trois mois. J'aime les chats, donc je pensais que ca ne serait pas une probleme, mais ils causent beaucoup de problemes! Ils endommagent mes meubles, et ils se sentent mal. Je suis ennerve, je ne veux pas m'occuper de ces chats deux mois et une semaine plus, mais je ne sais pas si j'ai une option.

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kidneyprivilege

July 16, 2021

2021/07/15

在美國，年輕人一滿十六歲就可以考車牌。我爸經常勸我去考。他認為人應該以防萬一，為任何情況做好準備。他說得有道理，可是我現在二十幾歲了，還沒有車牌。因為我覺得，現在學會開車對我真的沒有甚麼用途。住在城市裏，坐公共交通挺方便，而且要開車的機會比較少。要是真的需要車，用電話叫也可以。其實我還有另外一個原因。我一想起開車就覺得緊張，恐怕車技一定會很爛。可是我試還沒試過，就不應該低估自己。要是真的開得很爛，努力練習就會進步。如果學會開車，去其他地方旅遊就會更加方便，有多一點選擇。要是去冰島的話，不會開車就一定要參加旅遊團。因為自由行比較適合我，將來可能真的為了旅遊這個原因考車牌。

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