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Motivation for Writing
I found it difficult to make a habit of writing daily for some reasons. Even when I set about writing something about myself in my native language, Japanese, no idea comes to mind right away because nothing happens especially during the state of emergency. To be blunt, thousands of ordinary days account for a large part of one's life. Or rather, we might have to make special memories or appreciate everything happening to me every single days as much as possible. Even if you can't do this, prompt or news helps you write articles.
However, it's still hard to keep writing if you find good topics to talk about. I believe that writing always requires readers in order to maintain your motivation. Of course, I know that some people are able to keep writing daily by themselves for over several years. As for me, I have not a little desire to make readers feel sympathy or interesting. I suppose that most of LangCorrect members expect readers to leave comments as well as kind corrections.
Aug. 7, 2021
Le deuxième jour de voyage et les vanances des Japonais
Il prevoit de commencer à pleuvoir à partir de vers midi, donc on a décidé de ne rien faire et se relaxe aujourd'hui.
Pour les Ftançais, je crois que c'est bien normal de se détendre sans rien faire pendant les vacances ou le voyage, mais pour les Japonais, ça ne se passe presque jamais : on aime bien se déplacer tout le temps pour faire un tour dans les places touristiques. On croit même que c'est le tourisme, et l'idée de se détendre en voyage ne vient pas vraiment à l'esprit (c'est une cliché typique concernant les Japonais, peut-être ?). Ça commence à changer petit à petit surtout parmi les génération jeunes, mais il reste toujours rare de se relaxer totalement en voyage.
Ça découle du fait que les Japonais aiment faire quelque chose tout le temps, mais à mon avis également du fait qu'il n'y a pas assez de congés payés au Japon. On en a 20 jours à peu près à part de jours fériés, mais peu de salariés en utilisent tout. J'envisage d'écrire les raisons pour cela dans un proche avenir.
Aug. 7, 2021
Marathon Race
I went for a walk early this morning. When I got home, the Olympic marathon race had already begun. I thought the race would start at 7 AM, but the Olympic Organizing Committee decided to start at 6 AM because of the hot weather. The decision was announced at 8 pm the night before. The marathon race was held at Sapporo because Sapporo has a cool weather. However, Sapporo is very hot this summer. I think it's because of global warming.
Aug. 7, 2021
Bâtiments à Karpilovka
Nous avons deux types de maisons à Karpilovka : des maisons en bois et des maisons de brique. La maison en bois est plus efficace pour garder la chaleur en hiver qui n'est pas très utile avec le réchauffement climatique. Ma famille habite dans cette maison de brique. J'ai été surpris d'apprendre que je peux la trouver sur Google Maps. Big Brother vous regarde même ici. À part la maison comme celui-ci, nous avons aussi des appartements comme celui-là mais ils ne sont pas très répandus à Karpilovka.
Aug. 7, 2021
Dia sete de agosto
Por Macau, tinha muitos construções históricos.
Por exemplo, Ruínas de São Paulo.
É ruína de igreja. É bonito, mas ele sempre tinha muitos pessoas.
Sobre Barra, é um templo perto do mar.
O Templo de A-Má lá adorava a Mazu.
Ela é a deusa protegia os pesacadores.
A Mazu era a deusa comum pelas pessoas viviam em sul China, Taiwan, e chinêses em suldeste Ásia.
O templo é pequeno, mas o história deste é mais longa do que Taiwan.
No templo, você pude passar perto e pude ver os espetáculos de Macau.
Achei que os templos e as estátuas de deuses foram diferente, comparando esses eu vi em Taiwan.
No entanto, os nomes de deuses e as fés são mesmo.
Eu sempre gosto de inspecionar os templos quando eu viajava para outras lugares.
Aug. 7, 2021
Aug. 7, 2021
The sometimes difficult access to knowledge
Now a days, we produce much knowledge than ever. To be more precise, we create so much information every single day that it'll be impossible to read it for a single person. Sometimes I feel amazed by all the medieval and ancient manuscripts that are to be read, but my shock is even bigger when I think of all the texts, images and videos that we're producing every second. The impressive amount of information causes that the important things to be hear or read just get lost in a sea of gibberish. The true is, nobody cares about what is published in the last number of a International journal on ancient philology. Just a few people will read some of the papers there published, and probably some of them will quit the reading as soon as the began it. What upset me the most is that even in this context -where the people don't need the journals nor the books, but rather the journals and editorial houses need new readers- the access to this academic information is closed. Only the best universities have access to almost all the papers and books that are saved online. For me it's almost criminal to have a bunch of texts saved in servers and not get free access to them. I have had to go to multiple pages, to ask to many friends, to download a lot of incomplete and even dangerous files, while trying to access to a text that could be as near as a click.
Aug. 7, 2021
Aug. 7, 2021
Aug. 7, 2021
한국어를 배우기에 대한 읽기
벌써 한국어를 배운지 5년째 되었는데 내가 한국어를 배우기 결심한 날이 아직도 내 기억에 생생한다. 그때 영어만 할 수는 있는 17살이 된 난 언어를 공부하는 것에 관심이 하나도 없다고 생각했지만 운이 좋아 K-드라마나 Kpop으로 한국말에 관심을 천천히 모었다. 사실 그때는 내가 위태로우고 부그러운 사람인 편이라서 "아 한국어를 배울 수 있을까?" 또는 "언어를 배우는 것에 소질이 있나?"란 생각이 많이 들었는데 매일마다 꾸준히 공부하다보니 언어를 배우기에 사랑에 푹 빠지게 되었다. 한국 동사, 문법 구조, 말, 등 배울수록 너무 아름답다고 생각이 듣는 기억이 난다. 다만 정직하게 말하자면 내 생각엔 한국어를 배우기에 제일 힘든 점은 남들을 만나다는 것이다 ㅋㅋ. 너무 긴장됐어서.
한국어를 배우기 덕분에 자신감이 얻었서 내가 날 깊이 알게 되었다.
아무튼 여기까지 읽어주셔서 너무 고맙슴니다!
Aug. 7, 2021
Aug. 7, 2021
Mis deportes favoritos de los juegos olímpicos
Me gusta ver los juegos olímpicos porque hay una gran variedad de deportes que no suele transmitir por televisión en mi país, como el waterpolo, el voleibol y la gimnasia. Me impresiona ver atletas tan dedicada a su deporte y me emociona celebrar con ellos cuando ganan.
Aug. 7, 2021
2100-0230 Snooker
Last night I was playing snooker for almost 6 hours.
That was hard!
Especially, at the ages of 50’s.
When I was young, I can stay up to 3:00 am every night and I still feel nothing.
But now all I thinking is just go to bed.
When I was young, I also play snooker for long hours. (From 9am to 9pm)
But in between I will have lunch or afternoon tea…
Not for straight 6 hours!
The only good news from this experience.
My snooker skill is getting steady even under such condition.
I am feeling happy but this road is too lonely.
Aug. 6, 2021
러시아 여행 ✈
칼리닌그라드 여행 잘 다녀왔어요~~
이 디지털 시대에 여행시 온라인 번역기를 사용하는 게 쉽기도 하는데 나같은 사람이라면 여행책 가지고 가는 게 더 편해요. 핸드폰 배터리가 방전될까봐 조금 불안해서 관광중에 불필요한 앱 사용을 제한해서 카메라와 지도앱을 걱정없이 사용할 수 있도록 노력해요
요즘 파워뱅크가 있어 더이상 2번째 배터리 가지고 다닐 필요가 없는데도, 여전히 배터리에 대해 걱정하는 것이 내 습관... 🙈
시원스쿨 왕초보 여행 러시아어 솔직리뷰
사실 나는 이 책을 일부러 산 게 아니였다. 시원스쿨 러시아 패키지에 신청했는데 이 책이 받은 10권 교과서 중 하나였어요. 그래도 아주 잘 받았어요! 작고 무겁지 않아서 휴대수하물에 편하게 가지고 비행기에 읽을 수 있어요
책에는 대표적인 표현이 많고 만화로 실제 시나리오를 설명하고 심지어 내가 가장 좋아하는 러시아 음식이 крошка картошка 추천하기도 합니다!
요즘 러시아어 공부에 더 많은 시간과 집중 쏟고 있어요 여행시 예상보다 많이 이해할 수 있어서 자신이 자랑스러웠고, (문법이 아직 엉망이지만) 내가 원하는 것을 가게 직원들에게 이해할 수 있게 설명해줄 수 있었다어요.
칼리닌그라드는 아름다운 도시입니다, 기회가 된다면 꼭 방문하시기 추천합니다
Aug. 6, 2021
Aug. 6, 2021
あたらしいはじまり
また1か月がすぎた。2 しゅうかん りょこう して あたらしい ところ を たくさん みたらょこう する まえ よりあたまがすっきりした. こころ が らく で, まだきにかかる こと も ある が, いつ もよう に すべてはやく かいけつする とおもいます。ほんとうは、 いそぐ ひつよう も ない し、とおりすぎる しゅんかん や ひと を しがみつく ひつよう も ないです.「なみだ の1 リットル」 で あや の はは が いった よう に「 けっか は かんけい なく、 こうかい なく げんざい を いきて こそ みらい が そんざい する」。私はこんなに生きたいです。8 がつ が7 がつ より もっと よく なって ほしい。
Aug. 6, 2021
새로운 시작
또 한 달이 지났다. 2주 동안 여행하고 새로운 곳을 많이 보고 나니 여행하기 전보다 정신이 아주 맑아졌다. 마음이 편안하고, 아직도 마음에 걸리는 점도 있긴 있지만, 언제나 그랬듯이 모든 것이 빨리 해결되었으면 좋겠다. 사실은, 서두를 필요도 없고, 지나가는 순간이나 사람을 붙잡을 필요도 없다. "눈물의 1리터"에서 아야의 어머니가 말했던 듯이, "결과는 상관없이, 후회 없이 현재를 살아야 미래가 존재할 것". 나는 이런 말에 부응하고 그냥 부담 없이 삶에서 흘러갈 수 있기를 바란다. 8월이 7월보다 더 잘되길 바래.
Aug. 6, 2021
Aug. 6, 2021
Kolkhoze à Karpilovka
Pour ce qui ne connais pas, un kolkhoze est un système agricole en Union Soviétique où les terres est mis en commun. Tous les champs, que je vous avez déjà montré, ont appartenu à kolkhoze. Après la chute de l'Union Soviétique, les kolkhozes ont également cessé d'exister. Je vous laisse deviner qui est arrivé à leur place : (une pause) des ruines et des bâtiments hantés. Voilà une petite introduction de l'histoire agricole de ma campagne.
Aug. 6, 2021
Kerouac ist immer noch cool
Kerouac ist ein Symbol von der Beat Generation. Laut der Legende schrieb er "On the Road" komplett in drei Wochen und in einer endlosen Papierrolle, die mehr als 30 Meter lang am Ende war. Europa hatte seit langem einige Generationen von böhmischen Schriftstellern gehabt und es schien, als nach dem Krieg, die USA an der Reihe waren, etwas Ähnliches zu erleben. Und das war genau "Beat", ein paar böhmischer Schriftsteller, die nach neuen Ausdrucksformen suchten und versucht haben, das Leben in vollen Zügen zu genießen. Kerouac ist nicht anders, "On the Road" ist immerhin eine Sammlung vieler seiner Abenteuer unterwegs. Das Chaos in diesem Teil seines Lebens kann leicht als selbstzerstörerisch bezeichnet werden, er suchte nach einem Sinn, aber hat am Ende seine Frau verloren und eine alkoholische Angewohnheit entwickelt. Ich denke jedoch, dass der Mann eine reifere Seite hat, die nicht viele gesprochen haben. "The Dharma Bums", das später in seinem Leben geschrieben wurde, beschreibt erneut seine Sinnsuche unterwegs, diesmal jedoch in der Natur und als Bergsteiger und durch eine Zen-Buddhismus-Perspektive, die Kerouac entdeckt hatte. Es hört sich sehr Klischee an, aber ich finde es eigentlich ziemlich cool.
Aug. 6, 2021
Aug. 6, 2021
Brother Daxiong (two)
I went to the swimming pool another day. When I was practicing taking a breath, I heard somone said hi to me. It was Daxiong. He said I had already knew the first action so that I could start to learn the action of legs. He taught me patiently and told me to join him the next morning.
From then on, he began to teach me frequently. We never made any appoitment, but everytime I got there, he would recognized me soon. Then he approached me and told me that I had made progress, and told me what I should improve. Because of the near sight, I could hardly recognize him in distance. One day, he asked his friend to give me a lesson for free. I thought the reason was that maybe he had a bottleneck in teaching me.
He lent several float boards to me for a long time. He also reminded me not to ask the lifeguards to teach me, because they would charge for the lesson. He even tried to used his wife's card to take me into the pool. Unfortunately, he failed. But I was very thanful for his kindness.
We talked about oue private life seldomly. What I knew was that he was two years older than my father while I was two years old than his daught. His daught began to swim since she was very young, so she was much taller than her peers. He told me there were so many people asked him to teach them but he totally refused. He had no idea why he would teach me. We analyzed the resistance of the water sometimes. I would talked a lot according to my physics lessons. I insisted on my opion when he didn't agree with me in some cases. I am not sure whether I was right at that time.
Aug. 6, 2021
Aug. 6, 2021
教師介紹
大家好！ 我叫---. 我是你的英文教師 . 我來自紐約，可是我現在住在芝加哥, 在語言學系進行博士的研究. 我也取得了語言學的學士跟碩士學位.
我已經很久學各種各樣的語言包括華語, 韓語, 意大利語. 所以我很熟悉學習一個語言的困難. 跟我上課的時候, 不必擔心犯錯誤. 事實上，我歡迎錯誤!
我最重要的目標就是讓你感到自在, 以便你能自然地學習英文. 我的教學風格是基於非正式的, 沒壓力的對話, 而且是關於你對它感興趣的的話題.
這樣可以發展自己的説話風格也能學到對你最重要的單詞跟短語.
以我在語言學方面的經驗, 如果需要的話, 我也可以提供語法, 新詞, 跟發音. 上課的時候, 你可以傳給我你想讀, 看, 跟討論的資料.
否則, 你可以告訴我你最想練習的話題. 這樣我能找到一些合適的讀物或者影片.我個人有許多興趣可是, 我最喜歡學習語言聼音樂, 彈吉他,
騎滑板, 跟烹飪. 所以你如果想要討論這些事, 我們一定可以. 那, 説到這裏就好了. 我很期待跟你聊天! 拜拜!
Aug. 6, 2021