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Wie oft lernen Sie Ihre Zielsprache?
Ich lerne jeden Tag Deutsch. Natürlich mache ich nicht jeden Tag Grammatik Übungen oder schreibe sehr lange Aufsätze aber sehe mir immer Deutsche Videos auf YouTube oder Netflix an. Ich lese auch Deutsche Bücher vor, sodass mein Akzent sich verbessern wird. Es gefällt mir sehr vorzulesen. Momentan lese ich Percy Jackson und es ist ziemlich interessant. Einmal pro Woche habe ich mein Deutschunterricht, wir sprechen und machen Übungen mit meinem Lehrer für eine Stunde. Manchmal schreibe ich mit meinen Freunden, die in Berlin wohnen, per Instagram oder WhatsApp auf Deutsch. Ich versuche auch jeden Tag einen Aufsatz auf langcorrect zu schreiben, obwohl ich manchmal keine Lust habe.
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
education level
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on payrolls for school tutors. Use specific reasons and examples.
Most Universities want to maintain or boost the education status to attack new freshmen. There are various alternatives, such as building up each lecturer's proficiency or promoting searching between juniors and educators. From my perspective, I disagree with the statement. I think it is more proper to enhance the course grade of all schoolteachers rather than give greater pays to raise the schooling standard because investing in a teaching program to merge their qualification and supporting learners in external matches to get updated info.
First, when all employees should attend to learn classes, their background turns to change and positively affects their juniors. Having a deeper perception of the subject motivates each student to understand. For instance, my history professor explained how to use a timeline to study. Moreover, I notice practicing to learn several essential ancient acts and I got significant results. Consequently, my classmates and I apply this same technique in distinctive themes, and the studying quality of the learners is stronger. Therefore, I suggest institutions should establish expanding the intelligence of their workers to build up the whole scholar's achievement.
Second, when juniors take part in a national contest, this develops their study process. Searching is necessary to have a complete overview of the topics. For example, my daughter performed at the United Nations competition in their city. Therefore, the team spends several hours learning about the political, social, and cultural problems of significant cities around the world. As a result, they identify the best solution to their challenges. They won all the prizes, and the Academy received famous recognition for the president. Thus, I advise that supporting students to take part in tournaments outside of campus benefits children's learning.
In essence, I strongly disagree with spending higher salaries to increase the study level in an institution. This is because of two reasons: one is a regular educator coach program to develop their students’ intelligence and the other is taking part in foreign competitions to expand updated knowledge between scholars.
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
Quel est le sport le plus populaire dans votre pays ?
Le sport le plus populaire dans mon pays est Hockey sur glace. C'est un sport que les joueurs doivent marquer un but par passer le palet dans les buts. Il y a 6 personnes dans une équipe, 1 gardien de but, 2 défenseurs et 3 attaquants. Les joueurs ont différents équipements pour participer dans un match, comme une casque, une crosse et des patins.
De temps en temps que je vais à regarder un match avec mes amis, on parie sur un de deux équipes et le perdant dois donner un repas. C'est marrant et également on peut se rencontrer et s'amuser.
Le match dure une heure, 3 périodes de 20 minutes. Après le match on ira à un restaurant pour manger quelque chose.
June 23, 2021
Mon boulot le plus mauvais
Le boulot le plus mauvais que je n’aie jamais eu était quand je suis allé porte à porte en collectant l’argent pour les charités. Il peut a l’air que ce type de boulot n’est trop mauvais, mais le part que l’a fait insouffrable était le fait que personne aime quand un étranger frappe à leur porte et le demande pour une faveur; surtout à l’heure de diner!
Il n’était pas que les gens étaient impolis ou rude, mais essayer d’amener les gens a me, un parfait inconnu, donné l’argent n’étais pas facile. Donner vous une idée de le ratio de gens qui m’a dit « oui » a m’a dit « non », dans une semaine, je parlerais a centaines des personnes, mais il considérait comme une bonne nombre de clients si je m’inscris quatre ou cinq personnes par semaine. Et j’attendrais ce nombre-la rarement. Le plus souvent, ils me demanderaient pourquoi il devraient s’inscrire pour un paiement mensuel avec moi en place d’aller a l’internet et le faire la. Et je n’aurais pas une bonne réponse.
Quant a le code vestimentaire, je portais vêtements habiles normale, et c’était la manière recommande. Mais beaucoup de personnes qui aussi travaillaient a cette boulot habille dans tous les manières. Un mec habillait dans chiffons absolus en ordre apparaitre plus sympathique pour collecter argent.
June 23, 2021
Les vacances
Dans ce texte en dessous, je vais essayer d'utiliser le gérondif et le futur autant que possible. Du coup, je peux les utiliser sans aucun doute. On y va !
Quand on commence à parler de les vacances en général, on a assez de rêves. On veut souvent faire tout les choses en même temps. On nous trouve de dire les trucs comme : << Je vais lire la guide en volant à Marseille. >>, << Quand j'irai au musée, je verrai les oeuvres en écoutant leurs infos. >> , << Quand j'arriverai à l'aéroport, j'appelerai les garçons qui sont résponsable de porter des valises. >> etc.
Cependant, ce n'est pas vraiment nécessaire d'essayer de faire tout les choses, parce que c'est si stressant qu'on oublie de se décontracter. Il faut être plus calme. Il faut préparer à l'avance et rester calme. Peut-être on peut faire les choses dont on vraiment désire, en étant fidèle au plan dans la tête. Même si on peut pas faire les chose qu'on voulait faire, on sera comblé avec nos vacances.
Ça y est, c'est simple !
June 23, 2021
Desire to Go Back Home Town
As is usual with other schools, there are still some restrictions in my university due to COVID-19, even though domestic travels never be recognized illegal. And they have been since last summer.
Because of that, I haven't been back to my home town for about a year.
There are some old friends who I really want to see and talk with in person or many places where I'm eager to visit.
So I hope I can go back there without hesitation as soon as possible.
June 23, 2021
Si tu pouvais voyager en temps, irais-tu au passé ou futur?
Je pense que c'est la question la plus intéressante, jusqu'ici !
J'irais au futur, parce que voyager au passé est trop dangereux, particulièrement pour les parents. Je pense que personne ne devrait aller à le temps avant la naissance de ses enfants.
Pourquoi?
Ben, en supposant que tu aimes tes enfants, tu voudrais assurer que tes enfants ne changeraient pas grace à quelque chose que tu as fait dans le passé. Je pense que c'est presque impossible.
Ce qui fait une personne, est une combinaison de tous les événements passés dans sa vie. Comment pourrais-tu t'assurer que tu feras toutes tes interactions avec tes enfants seraient exactement les mêmes que celles qui se sont déroulées dans la ligne de temps originale?
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
Sentences 147: Breath, Gloss Over, Heels
"The new system is due by next Friday" - "I wouldn't hold your breath!"
I found a serious issue but our IT department only glossed over it.
It's not the first attempt to create equal opportunities for everyone in the company. But the new manager really digs her heels in and will finally improve the situation!
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
27/30 le Canada
27/30 As-tu déjà visité le Canada on aimerais-tu y aller un jour ? Pourquoi ?
Je n'a jamais visité le Canada mais j'ai entendu dire que c'était un très beau pays entouré par des montagnes. Mon père y faisait ses études et il m'a dit que le Canada était très grand et chaqu'un habitait dans un grand appartement où même une maison avec de jardin. Mais ce qui m’intéresse plus, c'est leurs langues. Comme j'ai appris sur la leçon de français, Canada est un pays bilingue et les politiciens qui occupent un poste à haute responsabilité doivent être bilingues. En plus, le français Québécois est trés fun ! Il a un accent different de ce qu'on entend en France. Je trouve ça très drôle !
Pourtant, l'hiver du canada est très rude et j'aime plutôt la chaleureuse du région tropicale. Mais je crois avec le réchauffement du planer, c'est plutôt une bonne idée d'y installer, non seulement d’y visiter.
June 23, 2021
Journal
In the early 90's, I had just worked for several years and my younger sister lived with me. She didn't have a job and the clothing store was mainly for her. I got married back then, so we three people ran the store together. We bought clothes from Hanzheng street in Wuhan, in Hubei province. The street was very famous for its commercial wholesale at that time. We bought those clothes just according to our personal preference and the seasons. The transportation and the security of society were not good back then. To save time, we usually take the night bus to Wuhan. To protect the passengers, the bus owner hired a strong man holding a thick iron stick sitting on the front door in case the robbers. It was said that some people in some areas in Henan province would rob the bus during the night, though I have never experienced that situation. Maybe after three years, my sister got a job, so we closed the store.
I have ridden a bicycle for about one year. Yes, cycling brings me a lot of joy. Sometimes I almost don't want to get off it. I once tried walking, but I don't think my legs could stand it. My legs often hurt if I walked a little long. My first bicycle is a stable speed common bicycle. The one I was riding recently is a variable speed one, and I have other variable speed ones. If you were in China, no doubt I could give it to you.
From your response, I know we are both happy people and have smart points towards life. This attitude is very precious that nothing can compare. So living healthily and happily is our ultimate goal. (I don’t intend to join competitive cycling because I am not a young man, but if there is competitive cycling for old people, I don’t think I will decline it.)
June 23, 2021
Earworm
Right now I'm at the office waiting for a meeting. And yes, even behind closed doors I can hear the radio the guard is listening to. It's difficult to make up the meaning, maybe due to how far I am from the guard. Oh yeah, I just heard the tune, it's an old song. I always wondered why, but for some reason Argentinian rock is very popular among older adults in my country, and apparently the guard is also a fan of it. There's a radio signal that plays oldies almost every day, each time you go into any public-service office, there's always the same songs. When you get into public transport, the same. When you wait in line at the bank, anywhere masons are working at a construction site, and even at the hospital, the nurses of certain age put it on. It's always the same, if you visit someone past some age, you just can't stop hearing those songs. I mean, they aren't bad or anything, but it just gets a bit repetitive after a while. There's one about some kid that leaves his town with his worn-out shoes... and it goes like that, "worn-out shoes, worn-out shoes, where do you go with that look?". Then there's another about a lady that was called crazy by the kids in the town because she waited for her lost love at the threshold of her house for many years. Ended up in a psych-ward. Also, there's ABBA in Spanish, good stuff. But as I said, it gets kind of repetitive after a while. The worst part is, after you hear it for a while, it gets stucked in your head for the rest of the day.
June 23, 2021
Un cadeau par ma petite amie
Je sais que vous ne me croyez pas, mais c'est vrai. Mais je demand que vous rapellez ce: Je suis un anarqueur.
Ma petite amie adore le piano, mais elle n'a pas lui. Le jour de son anniversaire, j'ai l'acheté un petit piano electrique. Elle était très heureux !
Mais son travail la porte beaucoup de temps, car ca, je joue le piano a plus temps qu'elle. À présent ce piano est mon piano. Cette nuit est mon prémiére classe de piano. Je suis mauvais.
June 23, 2021
IPhone
I think, the iPhone is one of the great products in the 2010s.
Before introducing the iPhone, most smart phones had many buttons and a small screen.
After Jobs' incredible presentation about the iPhone, it really took off.
The phone has a big screen and users can possible to touch on the screen.
This experience was really new to people, so many people wanted to buy it.
What's more, it had a good appearance.
Having an iPhone meant cool.
Apple is continuing to expand the user experience to other devices like tablets and MP3s.
Now people still want to know what is a next innovate device made by Apple.
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
Life Is Not An Exam
Life is not an exam. We learn how to live by making mistakes.
Happiness is not a gift, but an ability. We fill our lives with too many things, until we are out of breath, then we stop and think about who we want to be? Where do you want to go? And how we can live a life without regrets.
In this era, we are focusing on running hard and forgetting to taste life. The hand of capital pushes us all the way forward. We value efficiency too much, so we miss many beautiful moments that we need to feel with our hearts.
If you have a cup of coffee, I hope it's not just for your work. You need to get along with yourself and talk to yourself sincerely.
I often take out my ipad and doodle on it in goodnotes. That is my best time-I forgot my troubles and poured all my thoughts into the tip of my apple pencil.
If you are tired, why not try to see how the greatest minds evaluate life? Perhaps, you will find motivation, inspiration or direction in life again from a certain sentence. Please be courageous and continue to live a wonderful life!
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
June 23, 2021
Dinner time
I don't look up an atmospheric temperature today. But it seems to be similar to yesterday. It is nearing twilight. I am considering what I will eat as a dinner, yakitori, McDonald's, or something else. It is because McDonald's in Japan today started to re-offer the popular ever menu including Texas Burgers. The sale will, though, be for a limited time. Since the price of a Texas Burger is the same as a ''Double'' Big Mac cost at 490 yen, even if I order it, I will do as much as one burger with other choices.
Thank you also today. (I'm sorry this diary was posted later. It is already night. lol)
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