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Will Smith
I just realized that actors whose movies were part of my childhood are getting old. It sounds obvious considering that I'm already 28 and my childhood is way behind me.
But I want to point out that there are cases that I find truly interesting
For example I was surprised when I read the news of Will Smith turning 51. I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith being someone lively, happy and youthful. I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air , Men in Black and Bad Boys as a kid , that's why whenever I heard the name Will Smith, the image of him being lively, playful, trustworthy, reliable, self confident and strong always came to my mind. It's hard to believe that he is already in his 50s. I'm aware that he is still a good actor, my point is that it's hard for me to imagine one of my childhood heroes being a middle aged man who is almost as old as my father.
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
Perché mi piace viaggare
Mi piace viaggare da cuando ero bambina. Sono ansiosa di scoprire altri paesi. Cuando faccio un viaggo, provo il cibo locale. Faccio delle lunghe passeggiatte nella città que sto visitando. Scatto molte foto. Penso che viaggare è l'occasione perfetta per praticare le lingue straniere e incontrare persone di altri paesi del mondo. Anche mi piace camminare nella natura. Il mondo è meraviglioso !
Sept. 23, 2021
Do not drink milk tea in the afternoon
It was 1:30 a. m. at the moment when I was writing this journal. I can hear the sound of my heart battering clearly It seems as my heart would explode immediately. That must be blamed for a cup of milk tea. That milk tea was so savory and filled with Jasmine's pleasant flavor. Unfortunately, it contains rich caffeine that leads to my sleepless night. I even started to tell stories with myself in my mind to help me fall asleep. My roommate even begins to snore like a hippo while I still have a clear mind…I assume I will suffer from sleeplessness till tomorrow even though I'm exhausted…😢😢 So do not drink milk tea or anything else contains caffeine in the afternoon unless you want to know what does midnight sounds like...
Sept. 23, 2021
Will Smith
I just realized that actors whose movies were part of my childhood are getting old. It sounds obvious considering that I'm already 28 and my childhood is way behind me.
But I want to point out that there are cases that I find truly interesting
For example I was surprised when I read the news of Will Smith turning 51. I was really surprised since I've always imagined Will Smith being someone lively, happy and youthful. I used to watch The Fresh Prince of Bel Air , Men in Black and Bad Boys as a kid , that's why whenever I heard the name Will Smith, the image of him being lively, playful, trustworthy, reliable, self confident and strong always came to my mind. It's hard to believe that he is already in his 50s. I'm aware that he is still a good actor, my point is that it's hard for me to imagine one of my childhood heroes being a middle aged man who is almost as old as my father.
Sept. 23, 2021
A horrible Sunday
Last Sunday must be darkest Sunday that I ever had. Our teachers announced that we need to make up the missed lessons in next Monday. All of us were upset because Monday is a day which is usually filled with our major classes! In the Monday, we often start at 8:00a.m. and end our class at 8:00 p.m.. In addition to that crazy schedule, one of our teacher's class is dull. I mean that the textbook is impressive and fantastic. But the way he teaching us just disapointed me and it is confusing at same time. He is always chatting with us about different entertainment news which is off the class topic. Moreover, some of his stereotypes on my country always offend me. Luckily, I at least enjoys reading the textbook.
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
Thema "Arbeitsverbot an Sonn- und Feiertagen"
Das Thema "Arbeitsverbot an Sonn- und Feiertagen" interessiert mir sehr, deshalb möchte ich meine Meinung äußern. Das Einkommen ist wichtig und man kann an Sonn- und Feiertagen mehr Geld als nomalerweise Tagen verdinen. Besonders kann man auch mit den Chef beeindrucken, wenn man in diesen Tagen arbeitet. Jedoch im Gegenteil, wenn man die Feiertage frei hat, kann man sich erholen und mehr Zeit für Familie, Freuden, Privatleben haben. Man kann außerdem dabei Stress abbauen, dann wird man effetiver arbeiten. Nach einer beschäftigen Arbeit ist es wichtiger, sich zu entspannen oder gesund zu bleiben. Deshalb ist "Arbeitsverbot an Sonn- und Feiertagen" für mich sehr praktisch und notwendig.
Sept. 23, 2021
Clean energies
I'm sorry but a do not agree with this assertion. If you maintain the cause of the enviroment problem, then you not solve this. So, you only will achieve to do richest to the countries increasing the taxes, and petroleum producing countries. The only one that can to resolve the enviroment problem, simply, is not create this contamination. So, we need first to change our mentality and then to make a change of production habits toward clean energies.
Sept. 23, 2021
Wort des Tages: nah
"nah" ist ein Adjektiv, das bedeutet einfach "nicht weit weg sein". Hierzu ein paar Sätzchen:
- Als Kind war meine Nichte oft krank und musste regelmäßig ins Krankenhaus. Meine Tante war aber immer nah bei ihr.
- Mein Vater war immer nah, als er mir beigebracht hat, Fahrrad zu fahren.
Sept. 23, 2021
ワクチンの注射を義務付けられるべき？
時として、政府は市民の自由より市民の安全のほうが大切であることを決める。例えば、たくさんの国ではシートベルトを締めないのは法律に反することや、日本のメタボ法律などだ。つまり、自分の健康を害する行動をしてはいけないということだ。だから、コロナのワクチンも同じように、注射を受けないと病気になる可能性があるので、義務つけられるべきだというポイントがある。
一方、私にとって市民の自由は大切なものだ。もし政府は、みんな毎日３０分運動をしなくてはならない法律を作ったら、それはおかしいと思う。確かに、毎日運動をしたら、それは健康にいいことだが、政府は市民がどう生きるかを選ぶ権利がない。難しい問題だが、市民の自由を守るため、ワクチンの注射を義務付けられないほうがいいかもしれない。
Sept. 23, 2021
A Big Surprise
OK, my students keep surprising me forever. In the morning, I was told by a teacher in charge of class 2, whose classroom was next to mine, some of my students drank with hers in the classroom last night. A teacher of grade 7 passed by and saw the incident, she said that she smelled the smoke smell as well.
I started to ask my students one by one. The first one was the deputy monitor. He said that he wasn't dare to tell the truth, because he was afraid of being revenged. He asked me to talk with the monitor, she would know. Then I asked the girl, she consisted that she knew nothing. The third one I talked with was a boy in Class 2, who was accusing of drinking. He also was the guy, whose father accused one of my students of threatening his son, but finally was proved that it was his fault. I asked him to tell me the details for about 5 minutes, but he said nothing. Then I asked a girl Xue, who joined the strip poker, she said she didn't take part in.
A few minutes later, a boy told me that he would tell some details. The monitor and another girl Ling, who also joined the strip poker, were drunk. Both of them had a red face and crying. He didn't sure that whether Xue drank or not, but she was very mad. There were girls smoking as well, but he couldn't sure who they were. Very soon, the boy told me that he regreted to tell me the whole thing, because he was threatened. I told him to ask help from me if anyone hit him or did something else to revenge.
The monitor's father used to be a student of my father. He always sends gifts to my father in many important festival for a long time. If he isn't at home, his parents will do the thing for him. In some case, my family and his family are quite close. He is about 40 years old, but had a heart operation two years ago. His son quitted from middle school two years ago at the age of about 15. It is illegal to quit the 9-year compulsory education, but the enforcement of law isn't strict.
In the first day of this term, I asked the monitor about her brother's situation. He had changed a lot of jobs and never could keep a job for a long time. I told her that she should study hard because of her family condition. Well, it seemed that she never heard a word.
I talked to her again. I told her that beconcerned about her father's health, I hadn't told him anything. If she violates the ruled the third time, I would invite her father to talk with the chief.
I knew the two girls smoked by accident tonight. So I went to the security room with the teacher of Class two to check the monitoring. The two girls smoked eventually. But the camera near my class was out of work, so I couldn't get the evidence of their drinking.
I would not say anything about the monitoring to my students. I didn't want to waste much time on them, they didn't deserve it. If one of them violates any rules, I will show the evidence and ask the parents to take them home for a big break.
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
Persönliche Kontakte und Internet
ich finde die Menschen heute haben keine Zeit für treffen anderen Menschen. Internet ist sehr wichtig diese Zeit und für die Zukunft, aber die Leuten benutzt ihm für alles das sie brauchen, und bleiben nur zu Hause der ganze Tag ohne draußen gehen.
Ich denke das ist gut, weil Internet macht alles einfach mit der Computer oder das Handy, aber man soll manchmal Sport mit seinem Freunden machen, um gesund zu bleiben und nicht alles machen zu Hause, weil das Stress machen kann.
Sept. 23, 2021
My Hometown
My hometown is a small village far away from Seoul.
So there are lots of good places where many people don’t know and do ‘t visit.
First, there are nice place where a river flows around there.
The place seems like an island but one direction still connects with main land.
Because of this scene, people visit there and take pictures.
Next, there are many small valleys where children can swim.
The water is also clear, so we can see the bottom of the river.
So my family visits more than 4 times a year.
Because of these reasons, I like traveling to my home.
Whenever I have a chance, I go there with my family.
Sept. 23, 2021
Steigende Temperaturen
Es ist jetzt Frühling, aber es ist sehr heiß, mit Temperaturen um die 30 Grad Celsius. Vorher war es nicht so heiß, aber jetzt ist es so. Die Auswirkungen des Klimawandels werden immer deutlicher. Ich lese in den Nachrichten von einer Stadt in Pakistan mit Temperaturen über 50 Grad Celsius. Wie schaffen sie es überhaupt zu leben? Im Vergleich zu hier wirken 30 Grad gar nicht so heiß.
Sept. 23, 2021
「人は外見よりも中身が大事である」「外見が大事である」どちらに賛成か。
「外見が大事である」という意見に賛成です。なぜなら、今の社会は誰でも外見が重視していますから。例えば、初めて相手に会うとき、綺麗な外見がある人なら、良い印象を与えています。それから、二人の働きの成り行きはもっと簡単になります。逆に、初めて相手に悪い印象を与えていたら、働きの成り行きが大変になります。また、ある人は外見があれば、仕事に真面目で、慎重な人という傾向があります。
「人は外見よりも中身が大事である」という意見も否定できません。外見があるのに、仕事でよく働くことができないと、何にもならなりません。しかし、外見を大切にする現在の社会、外見を無視するべきではありません。それだけではなく、外見があれば、もっと自信を持つのに役に立ちます。それで、仕事をするとき、成功しやすくなるだと思います。
私は「外見が大事である」という意見に賛成です。
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
Le chemin
Hier j'ai fait du vélo pour trois heures. J'ai découvert plusieures chemins étroit intéressants dans le parc. L'un d'eux m'a mené à un bel endroit près de la rivière. Le rivage était couvert d'herbe verte et douce. Quelques bateaux étaient sur le côte gauche. De l'autre côté de la rivière était une belle forêt, pleine de jaunes, vertes et rouges couleurs. Il a fait froid mais j'ai resté la et apprécie la vue.
Sept. 23, 2021
Un fragmento
"Soy el hombre que vive en la casa. Soy un prisonero en una jaula de madera. Con la lluvia que me guarde, me burla y me atormenta. No sé por qué estoy aquí. No puedo ver nada excepto el libro en el suelo y la lluvia desde la ventana y no puedo sentir nada aparte del dolor, dolor, dolor. No veo John planeando matándome. O el policía intendo salvarme. Solamente oigo a alguien golpeando la pared con furia. Lo que interpreté como la furia ... y ahora es conocido como un intento de comunicación. Soy el cuerpo que ves temblando en la cama de dolor, agonía y pena. No sé cuando moriré pero sé que pasará pronto." ~ E. Moran
Un fragmento lúgubre escrita (en inglés) por una compañera de estudios en Creative Writing :)
Sept. 23, 2021
Un article de journaux
Hier j'ai commencé à lire un article de journaux. C'était à propos de la montée d'étudiants vont à l'université. L'article a parlé à propos de comment après un an et demi de cours sur écran, environ 1,7 million d'étudiants regagnent à classe dans personne. Il a mentionné aussi que les étudiants retourneraient dans un contexte de sous-financements et que le nombre d'enseignement-chercheurs ont diminué dans les dernières dix années. Les deux l'étudiants et l'enseignements qui interviewaient pour l'article étaient heureux de revenir à les campus. Le taux de vaccination pour l'étudiants premiere dose de vaccin étaient environ 86%.
Pendant que tout le monde est heureux d’être de retour sur le campus, les problèmes avec sous-financement et surpopulation continueraient seulement à moins que des changements sérieux sont faire.
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
As Lambretas Eléctricas
Em Taiwan, quase todas pessoas podem andar as lambretas.
Nós andamos lambretas de comutar.
Normalmente, as lambretas tomam gasolina.
Nos últimos anos, as lambretas eléctricas mostram-se.
Muitas pessoas escolheram a marca, Gogoro.
As lambretas usam baterias em vez de carregarando.
Os usuários têm de ir ao ponto em troca das baterias.
Além disso, Gogoro não tem da chave pelo começo.
Ele usa o seu smartphone com a aplicação de Gogoro.
Ou você pode usar a cartão pelo começo.
As lambretas eléctricas não são muitas barulhas.
Às vezes, eu estive assustado de Gogoro.
Mas ele tem a desvantagem grande.
Ele é demais caro.
Ele custo aproximadamente USD 2,800, e custa USD 36 cadas meses pela electricidade.
Ele é mais caro do que as lambretas tradicionais.
Se calhar, Gogoro gastou dinheiros pelo este vídeo 😂
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQ4ppB7EYSM
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
My husband is cooking Spaghetti
Dear man! Do you not know how to cook spaghetti?
Do you need the help of an experienced cook?
I will help you:
Start with a very large pot of water-- about six liters per 1 kg of pasta.
Add salt and the pasta, and let it cook.
Try the pasta after a few minutes to see if it is soft and elastic.
Drain the pasta and it is ready to eat.
You can also pour some sauce over the pasta.