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Sturm mit Regen am Sonntagnachmittag
Als ich heute im Restaurant war, gab es einen sehr starken Sturm mit Regen, der viele Bäume gefallen hat, viele Leute hatten Angst vor der Kraft des Windes und die kleinen Kinder haben viel geweint.
Wir waren einige Stunden ohne Strom und Internet.
Am Freitagnachmittag gab es in einem anderen Teil des Bundesstaates in einer ländlichen Gegend einen sehr starken Sturm, der sich mit einem Waldbrand verband, bei dem Menschen, die bei der Brandbekämpfung arbeiteten, und auch einige Tiere ums Leben kamen.
Oct. 3, 2021
Min første journalpost
Hej allesammen! Jeg hedder Karissa, og jeg er treogtyve år. Jeg kommer fra USA, og jeg bor sammen med min kæreste i en by, der er meget tæt på Canada. Jeg har en orange tabby kat, der hedder Tiger. Jeg kan godt lide fotografering, natur, musik og at skrive historier.
Jeg lærte lidt dansk da jeg var lille, men jeg begyndte for alvor at studere sproget da jeg var fjorten år. Jeg har altid elsket sproget. Jeg så danske film med undertekster, så mange videoer på YouTube, læste bøger og skrev hver eneste lille ting ned. Og jeg fik endda venner fra Danmark. Jeg studerede meget og blev god til det. Men desværre stoppede jeg på grund af depression, så jeg mistede meget af sproget. Men jeg er fast besluttet på at få det tilbage. Jeg håber, at jeg en dag kan besøge Danmark.
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Le rire
L'autre jour quand je parlais avec ma partenaire d'échange de langue, on est tombés sur le sujet de Soseki Natsume, un grand exrivain japonais qui était actif aux alentours de 1910. Il a laissé nombreuses œuvres célàbres, donc il y a des incipits très connus parmi les Japonais. Par exemple, dans son livre intitulé « Je suis un chat (wagahai-ha-neko-dearu) » les phrases du début « Je suis un chat, je n'ai pas encore de nom » sont très connues, et les Japonais citent souvent ces extraits pour raconter des blagues.
Après qu'on en a parlé, ma partenaire a dit qu'en France aussi il y a des incipits qui les Français utilisent pour plaisanter car tout le monde en connaissent. Elle m'a appri un livre intitulé « L'Étranger » d'Albert Camus, dont les incipits sont « Aujourd'hui, maman est morte. Ou peut-être hier, je ne sais pas », et qu'il y avait beaucoup de Français qui employaient ces phrases, parfois en les modifiant un peu, par plaisanteries.
Les mêmes phénomènes devraient arriver dans le monde entier : on joue avec les incipits des grandes œuvres. Cela peut se faire car il y a des consentements tacites que la plupart de gens conaissent ces phrases, donc on peut les utiliser comme blagues. Le rire est quelque chose qui s'appuye sur des connaissances ou des idées partagés, car les blagues qui sont décalés du sens communs ont tendance à faire rire.
À propos, j'ai décidé de lire « L'Étranger » parce que je voudrais assimiler les incipits afin de rire avec d'autres sur des blagues qui les emploient.
Oct. 3, 2021
Perfect tenses
Are perfect tenses corrdctly used in here:
1.X: You've been on holiday - your face is tanned!
2.Y: You're right. I've been skiing in Switzerland with my friends. We got back yesterday evening.
3.X: Have you seen Mark yet?
4.Y: No, he's been busy training for the seimming competigion next werkend.
5.X: I saw him yesterday morning. He looked terrible as he hed been training for 2 hours before school.
6.Y: When I left for Switzerland last week, they hadn't chosen the team for the competition but Mark texted me during the week to tell me the news.
7.X: Yes - he's been looking forward to it.
Let's go and watch him together.
Could I use I'D BEEN SKIING IN SWITZERLAND (if they already got back?)
Oct. 3, 2021
時の流れは
今日は時の流れについて話したいです。
私は最近32歳になりました。まだ中々若くても、今年ある体得を気づきました。時がとても早く過ごしますね。1月の末ぐらい、5年間の恋愛関係が終わってしました。それ以来9ヶ月が過ごすのは信じられません。もちろん、コロナなので生活が変わました。コロナの前の同じな活動が出来ません。新しい人に会うのはもっと難しいです。それにも関わらず、その9ヶ月にあまりしませんでした。
それだから、もっとたくさん事をしたいです。もっと活発な生活に生きたいです。時の流れは早すぎるですからね。毎日同じな事をしたら、全部週が混じり合っています。今から、もっと別な活動をするようにします。と言えば、コロナがもうすぐ終わることを希望しているね…
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A Special Day
I finished my part-time job at noon. I had lunch and slept for a while. When I woke up, I was fairely upset because I didn't sleep well.
I went to pick up my friend at 2. It was quite hot, even though I sat in the car, I still felt pain by the sunshine. I thoght my car was hit by a three wheels bike driving by an old couple, and they were so rude. There was traffic jam, and I thoght the couple would never admit their fault and compensate, so I went on. There was a part of the road under constructing, so it was quite jolting as I was driving a go-kart.
When I arrived at the hotel, I asked the boss to park my car because there were so many people and so many cars, I was so scared. I told him I was hungry and want to eat outside, then I can go swimming with him. He invited me to eat his prawns which he cooked half an hour ago. The prawn was not cheap here, so it was very kind of him. I ate something dilicious at a reastaurant with my friend.
The boss drove my car and took us to the beach. He once told me that he would take me to a special and beautiful beach, but we stopped at a scenic spot where were so many people. I felt a little disappointed at first, when I jumped into the sea, I forget everything. I sat in the water and letted the water to take me anywhere. It felt quite special and awesome as I hadn't experienced it for a few years. If it didn't getting darker and darker, I would have been playing in the sea for a long time.
On our way back to the hotel, I lied on the window just letted the wind caress my face. I looked at the sky, or looked at the buildings, or the the people passed by. I felt like I was living in a movie. It was so good to just be a passenger in a car.
After I took a bath, my friend was singing karaoke. I joined her at once though the tone quality was really bad. We had a good time.
There were two guys playing a boxing champion 97 on a new game machine just bought by the boss. I asked one of them if I could have a try, he nodded. He taught me how the play, and we play several rounds. He left with his friend, another boy sat down and played with me, and taught me some skills. It was hot, but I was really happy.
I was gungry again. I hang out with my friend. There were so many people in the street. We had some snack.
I am really exciting today! Wish you have a good day as well.
Oct. 3, 2021
Der wahre Spiegel
Wie wir uns im Spiegel sehen, ist nicht genau, wie die Leute uns sehen. Der Grund ist, dass der Spiegel unser Bild umdreht. Es gibt jedoch einen cleveren Weg, das zu vermeiden. Durch das Zusammenfügen zweier Spiegel im exakten 90-Grad-Winkel wird die Spiegelung wieder gespiegelt. Der schwierige Trick besteht natürlich darin, zwei Spiegel so zu verbinden, dass die Linie in der Mitte der V-Form nicht sichtbar ist. Es ist jedoch möglich und das Verfahren wurde bereits 1982 unter dem Namen "True Mirror" in den USA patentiert. Manchmal findet man einen auf Ausstellungen.
Oct. 3, 2021
Translation Practice
My grandma passed away last week.
She liked me and our family very much. Her assistant is her best friend. I think her assistant treated her better than I did.
My grandma had lived with my parents for five years. My mother had been helping my grandma. My father loved my grandma so much, but he was really busy. He rarely had the opportunity to chat with grandma. And grandma's ears were not so good, it was hard for her to hear what other people said.
Although grandma was not perfect, her experience was really helpful for me. She got married as a teenager. She often said to us, "Why did my mother let me get married so early?" She encouraged us to go to college, study abroad and so on. She liked her children and grandchildren so much. But she regretted not having the chance to go to college. She gave birth to her first child at the age of nineteen.
She often said to young people, early marriage would reduce the opportunity in your life. You should wait until at least your twenties to get married."
Oct. 3, 2021
Londres
Londres est une ville bien connue et historique. C’est la capitale de l’Angleterre au Royaume Uni. La ville est assez populaire pour le tourisme parce qu'une des monarchies les plus âgées en Europe s’y trouve. Rita et Joanne ont récemment voyagé à Londres. Elles ont été très excitées pour leur voyage parce que c’était leur premier voyage à l’étranger des États-Unis.
Parmi les vus populaires que Rita et Joanne a visités sont “Big Ben”, “Buckingham Palace”, et “The London eye”. “Big Ben” est un des monuments les plus connus de Londres. C’est une grande tour d’horloge qui se trouve au nord de “Westminster Palace”. La tour d’horloge mesure 96 mètres de haut. Malheureusement, Rita et Joanne n’ont pu le vu de la tour que de l’extérieur. Les femmes ont appris que l’intérieur de la tour est en train d’être rénovée jusqu’à la fin de l’année 2021.
Oct. 3, 2021
L'arbre de noël
On met des cadeaux dessous un arbre de noël, ou un arbre décoré avec des ornements et/ou des lumières. C’est symbolique pour la fête. En plus, plus petits cadeaux sont peut-être placés dans une chaussette qu’on utilise spécifiquement pour noël, et elle est suspendue au manteau de cheminée (les maisons sans cheminée utiliseront le mur). Les ornements d’un arbre de noël, les décorations habituellement sphériques, en plus des lumières mentionnées, sont accompagnés d’une étoile. Parfois, ce sont des image de l'étoile de Jérusalem que les trois apôtres ont suivi en apportant le bébé Jésus des cadeaux et l'en honorant, dans la bible.
Oct. 3, 2021
Memory During My Business Trip
I can forget this memory when I went on a business trip to Warsaw in Poland.
After finishing my 5days business trip, I got a free time the last day.
I went to the Chopin museum where is one of the favorite place in Warsaw.
I took a tram to go there, and passed through the old town which is the world heritage.
Before I entered the museum, I bought some foods at the convenience store for my dinner.
I ate food in front of the museum while listening Chopin’s songs.
It was a very happy moment.
But it happened when I tried to buy the museum ticket.
In my wallet, there was no credit card.
I remembered that I used it at the convenience store last.
So I tried to go there again and searched my credit card.
Unfortunately, I couldn’t find it finally.
This is one of my bad memories during my trip.
Oct. 3, 2021
Oh, você é aqui também?
Eu pensei uma novela que eu liv quando era estudante no ensino secundário.
Chama-se "Amor" da Eileen Chang.
Eu gostei de historia uma vez.
Eu frequentemente vi a novela quando eu escrevia as perguntas de Chinês.
É muito difícil traduzir as palavras dela outras línguas, mas eu estou tentando.
Eu gostei de parágrafo último da novela.
Você encontra uma pessoa em dez milhões anos, em a sertão do tempo interminável.
Não há mais cedo, ou não há mais atrasado, e nós pegamos.
Então, nós não temos outras coisas que dizer-nos.
Apenas perguntar-se suavemente, "Oh, você é aqui também?"
É incrível que as pessoas encontram um ao outro.
Se eles perdem, é impossível encontrar mutuamente.
Oct. 3, 2021
自己紹介
(日本語で何か書くのはお久しぶりなので不自然なところ沢山あると思いますが、文法的には問題ないとしても不自然だったら(この...書き出し?も奉還して)添削してもらえたら嬉しいです！よろしくお願いします(o・ω・o))
こんばんは！韓国系アメリカ人(アメリカに住んでる韓国人?)の言語制作者、ルナバン(月兎)です！
日本語は一応話せますが下手ですし、何よりも漢字が全然読めないので発言することはあんまり多くはなさそうです。(ここで「少しだけなら話せはします」とも表現できましょうかね。正確なニュアンスを表すのが難しいですね(∋_∈))
でも、言語制作にはたしかに興味があり、日本語のことを発音的にも文法的にもめっちゃきれいな言語だと思っているので、日本人の皆さんはどういう言語を作っているのか見に来ました。(「興味があり」と「興味がありますし」の違いがよくわかりません)
どうぞよろしくお願いします！
(ユーザー名はハングルで「ルナ」です。ルナって呼んでください)
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Translation Practice
When I got up today, I found that I hadn’t eaten glutinous rice balls for a long time. Because I think making glutinous rice balls is more fun than just buying them, I went to the grocery store and bought glutinous rice flour in the afternoon. I haven’t bought the fillings yet because I don’t know which one is better, black sesame paste or red bean paste. If let me choose, I prefer black sesame paste, but the price of black sesame is expensive, not as cheap as red bean paste. So I want to see if there is any alternative. I found that the store also sells black sesame powder, and not as expensive as black sesame paste. But the problem is that I don’t know if black sesame powder can be used instead of black sesame paste. In short, I only bought glutinous rice flour. I plan to go to the store to buy black sesame paste or black sesame powder tomorrow.
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059 Best Food City
059 Best Food City
In Chengdu, Kevin's food of choice at dinner is noodles. He remembers when he was still a child, eating noodles at a street stall. And ever since then he has been addicted to noodles. If he is traveling in places around Chengdu, he tends to go for noodles. For example, Dandanmian, his go-to from his school days. He always gets the jumbo-size portion. And he goes for the mild spicy option. A little hack, if you're not sure which one you want, go for mild spicy.
' I have to be biased here. Chengdu is the best food city.' he said. That is true. There is nothing your stomach can desire that you cannot get here in Chengdu.
Oct. 3, 2021
Leyendo en inglés y español
Leí una novela para adolescentes en español para aumentar mi vocabulario. Agregué casi mil palabras nuevas a una lista para estudiar. Aunque entendí casi todo lo que sucedió en el cuento, sé que no pude entender las complejidades de la escritura. Para aprender estos detalles, estoy utilizando otra manera con el libro nuevo. Leo un capítulo en inglés, entonces leo el mismo en español. Con este método, puedo leer la escritura en español con ideas de lo que debería esperar leer.
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