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My Childhood in My Hometown
My hometown is a very small city.
In my youth, it was easy to go field, mountain surround by nature.
My friends and I used to go to a small stream near my house and swam there.
Like other elementary school students, I loved to enjoy playing in the playground.
After school, we used to play soccer and hit-and-seek and so on.
We also ate street food at a stationary near my school.
The stationary sold not only goods but also served street food and small game consoles.
There was a hot place for us and we visited there every day even weekend.
My hometown always reminds me of good old memories.
July 1, 2021
sending a text over a phone call
Technology has made it easier for humans to reach out to each other. Some individuals prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to connect through text messages. Which type of communication do you prefer and why?
In this contemporary world, technology is essential to stay in contact with others. Using devices, people have various ways of conversation, such as by phone call or by message. From my perspective, I agree with the statement. I think sending a text better rather than a phone call because dropping a note doesn’t interrupt people's tasks, and it is useful to pass on relevant information.
First, the conversation is necessary between humans. During daily life, there are stressful moments where it is difficult to claim the call-up, like during a meeting, medical procedure, or class. So, a note is the best option. For instance, I am a physical therapist that provides the at-home treatment. When I start a procedure, I focus on each symptom to apply the technique and heal the damage. For this reason, I denied answering the call-up. Moreover, if a person needs treatment, the doctor sends a note. Consequently, when I have a free chance, I check and answer all the notices. Therefore, I suggest that sending a notice is an efficient way to connect with someone without interrupting their projects.
Second, sending a note is useful. It helps to inform about a crucial condition, such as an invitation to graduation, an accident, or only chat. For example, for my job, I sent a note to each of my cases to learn how they feel about their illness and if they have any questions related to the exercises. Moreover, when pain increase I interrupt the exercise, until the next treatment. As a result, delivering essential details in the text is efficient and simple. Thus I advise that sending a text is helpful to understand everything.
In essence, I strongly agree that sending a note is a stronger plan to maintain in touch rather than dial a call. This is because of two reasons: one is entry a note doesn’t alter humans’ actions and other text can share relevant news.
July 1, 2021
Ich habe das Jobangebot abgelehnt
Vor eine Woche habe ich ein Jobangebot bekommen.
Ich spiele seit 13 Jahren Klavier und bin wirklich gut darin. Letztes Jahr, bevor ich nach Berlin gegangen bin, habe ich private Klavierunterrichte gegeben. Als ich zurückkam, gab es Corona, deswegen konnte ich keine Unterrichte mehr geben. Letzte Woche hat die Mutter einer meinen Schülerinnen mir auf Whatsapp geschrieben und hat gefragt, ob ich wieder ihre Tochter unterrichten kann. Sie wollen ein Klavier-Zertifikat erhalten. (Wegen Corona, sind die Prüfungen bis Ende des Jahres online und sind viel leichter als eine Präsenzprüfung. Kandidaten sollen nur vier Klavierstücke spielen in der Online-Prüfung. In der Präsenzprüfung sollten sie Tonleitern und Arpeggien, Vom-Blatt-Spiel und Gehörübungen, und auch drei Klavierstücke spielen.)
Ich habe gesagt, dass ich ihr helfen kann. Dann haben wir uns für nächste Woche einen Termin vereinbart. Sie wollen zweimal in der Woche eine Stunde lange Unterrichten haben. Also wie gesagt, ich habe ja gesagt aber ich hatte Kopfkino. Ich hatte mir wegen der Zeit und Ort Sorgen gemacht. Diese Schülerin wohnt, wo meine Eltern wohnen, und ich wohne nicht mehr dort. Es dauert fast 1.5 Stunden von meinem Haus dorthin zu gehen. Ich arbeite auch vier Tagen der Woche in eine Firma und habe nicht so viel Zeit. Ich habe mich entschieden, dass es zu stressig für mich sein wird, und deswegen habe ich ihr nochmal auf WhatsApp geschrieben. Ich habe ihr erklärt, dass ich nicht mehr dort wohne und es für mich sehr anstrengend sein wird. Natürlich habe ich mich bei ihr entschuldigt. Sie hat gesagt, dass es kein Problem ist.
Zuerst wollte ich sehr gerne diesen Job bekommen, da es sehr gut bezahlt war. Ich hätte in sehr wenigen Stunden relativ viel Geld verdienen können. Aber natürlich ist Geld nicht alles und ich denke, dass ich für meine psychische Gesundheit die richtige Entscheidung getroffen habe.
July 1, 2021
July 1, 2021
여름 방학의 첫날
어제는 학년의 마지막 날이었다. 아침에 학생들이 학교에 왔는데 제가 담임 선생님 아니라서 아이들을 볼 일이 거의 없었다. 3시간 동안 도서관에 있어 이런 저런 도서관 관리에 필요한 일을 했다. 학생들이 집에 갈 때쯤이 됐을 때 도서관에서 나가 아이들과 인사를 했다. 지금 일하는 학교에서 3년 동안 일을 했고 이 학교에 오기 전에 5년 동안 다른 학교에서 일하고 있어서 학년 말에 아이들을 보내는 것이 익숙한데 그래도 서러운 것도 조금밖에 아니어도 있다. 대부분의 아이들이 9월에 우리 학교에 다시 올 텐데 전학을 해서 다시 못 볼 아이 몇 명이 있다. 슬퍼도 씩씩하게 보내주는 것은 선생님의 역할이다.
학생들이 집에 간 다음에 동료 친구들과 함께 나가서 점심을 먹었다. 그리고 그 다음에 퇴근 시간까지 시간이 조금 남아서 다시 학교에 돌아가서 교실 청소와 정리를 좀 했다. 3시쯤 전직원이 다 함께 모여서 내년에 돌아오지 않을 선생님들을 보내줬고 그 다음에 여름 방학이 시작했다. 동료 친구 한 명은 우리 집에 와서 지난 10개월을 회상하면서 그동안 쌓인 스트레스를 풀기 시작했다.
오늘부터 여름 방학이 시작했는데 내가 가장 먼저 한 것은 어렵게 신청한 수영장에 가서 40분이나 동안 수영을 하는 것이었다. 자율 수영은 8시부터 시작했는데 학년이 아직 끝나지 않았으면 그 시간쯤 출근하러 집에서 나갔을 것이다. 그런데 출근하는 대신 자유롭게 물에 떠있었다.
수영을 한 뒤에 집에 가서 하루를 남편과 같이 보냈다. 남편도 원래 평일에 일하는 건 맞는데 이번 주말 출장 가야 돼서 오늘 출근하지 않았다. 우리는 특별한 무언가를 하지 않았다. 쇼핑을 조금 하고 카페도 가고... 주말 같은 평일이 되었다.
이번 여름 방학 특별한 계획이 없는데 매일 무엇을 할 계획을 무조건 세워야 된다고 생각하지 않는다. 학년 때 아이들에게 한정된 시간 안으로 무엇을 가르쳐줄 지를 정신없이 빠듯하게 계획을 짜야 되는데 여름 방학의 매력은 그렇게 할 필요가 없다는 것이다.
July 1, 2021
La première jour d'isolement - 1 juillet
D'accord, oui j'écris ce journal de passer le temps pendant mon isolement à cause de covid... bon, parce que une de mes colleagues le obtenu et je dois isoler aussi :(
Je essayerai écrire sur mon jour, chaque jour jusqu'à mon confinement a fini, donc il y aurait neuf plus de ces journals. Alors, aujourd'hui je vais de faire un test de covid a midi, lire des livres et commencer à peindre 👩🎨
J'ai trouvée que mon adoration pour le français à diminué beaucoup, principalement en raison de le fait que j'ai aucun motivation de le pratiquer ou faire les choses d'améliorer mon français ce que j'aime à faire. Malheureusement, je vais étudier le français a l'université en septembre... (aide moiiii)
Je dirais que ces dix jours d'isolation pourrait être bon pour améliorer mon français, mais aussi m'occupe pendant ces jours (probablement) très ennuyant!
Merci :D
July 1, 2021
Bouldering
I went to a bouldering gym yesterday. It's was the first time, so my friend told me how to do it. It was enjoyable to climb a wall and get to the goal. I couldn't grab holds at the end because it required hanging with fingers. Now, I'm sore with my forearms. Seniors in the gym climbed up with tiny holds or jumped toward other holds, which seemed impossible for me.
July 1, 2021
Où vous-voyez vous dans dix ans?
En lisant les informations en ligne, j'ai lu une information très intéressante : il y a une dame qui s'appelle Eileen Kramer, elle a cent-et-six ans cette année. Elle est danseuse, artiste et performeuse. Elle ne s'est jamais mariée ni n'a eu d'enfants.
Ils disent qu'Eileen Kramer est la personne pour qui l'âge n'existe pas. À quatre-vingt-dix-neuf ans, elle danse encore.
Eileen me fait pense à ma vie.
La vie d'Eileen me fait réaliser qu'il n'est jamais tard pour commencer à faire quelque chose.
Dans les dix prochaines années, je veux devenir un polyglotte qui parle au moins quatre langues: français, anglais, chinois et russe. Je veux aussi devenir pianiste.
Je sais que c'est beaucoup plus difficile à faire qu'à dire.
Au Vietnam, les gens de mon âge se sont déjà mariés et ont eu des enfants. Ils passent tout leur temps à s'occuper de leur famille et de leur travail.
J'aime être célibataire. J'aime passer mon temps libre à étudier d'autres langues, à pratiquer le piano, à faire le tour du monde, peut-être à développer de nouveaux passe-temps comme la peinture ou l'écriture.
Et vous, où vous voyez-vous dans dix ans ?
Merci beaucoup de m'avoir aidé à corriger mon écriture.
Cette écriture est très difficile pour moi d'écrire comme ma compétence actuelle.
July 1, 2021
Neighbors (3)
At the moment, our conversations at home are always about the upstairs neighbors since they are ruining our lives. This morning I was woken up by their impact noises. I start my day by being already tired, it really gets on my nerves. In September, I will be in fourth year of medicine. I passed all my exams with flying colors. I am among the best 25 students on about 250 students. I am still working five or six nights a month at the psychiatric hospital. Everything goes well with the patients, but I do not get along with some of my colleagues. We are 7 medicine students and I think some of them are jealous because I got hired and not their friend. They want to work in a small circle, only between friends. I am sorry but I went for a job interview and I was better than the other person. I also believe that they do not like that my mom is working in the same hospital as a headnurse. So, when we are doing the planning, I try to not be with them. I am not working to bear their mood swings.
I would like to thank you very much for your last gifts. Thank you for sharing your favorite candies, everyone tried and liked them. We have not tried the cans of mackerel yet but we will in the future. Thank you for bringing a touch of Japan and exoticism in our gloomy everyday life.
July 1, 2021
Dia um de julho - Um dia tanta quente
Hoje é um dia tanta quente.
Eu não posso fazer o ar-condicionado todos dias porque a taxa da electricidade é caro.
Além disso, eu decidei de comprar a bebida frio depois.
Queria a comida coreana por o jantar.
Gosto de kimchi melhor, é condimentado e ácido.
Mas eu nunca comi comida coreana saborosa do meu país o mesmo eu comi da Coreia.
July 1, 2021
July 1, 2021
Hari Ketiga Puluh
LangCorrect adalah sebuah situs pendidikan bahasa. Saya menulis gugus kalimat dan mengirimkannya di situs. Siapapun bisa mengoreksi gugus kalimata saya. Saya membantu pelajar bahasa Inggris; saya sudah berbicara bahasa inggris dengan baik. Segera saya akan berbicara bahasa Indonesia dengan baik.
July 1, 2021
¡Hola!
¡Hola a todos! Mi nombre es Francisco (en inglés, Francis). Este año he empezado a aprender español. Estoy escribiendo en español por primera vez. Yo vivo en Nueva Zelandia. Trabajo en una universidad, donde enseño teoría de la música. Toco el chelo y el ukulele. Me gusta también ir corriendo. Me gusta aprender idiomas. Hablo alemán, francés, italiano y inglés. Encantado conoceros!
July 1, 2021
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June 30, 2021
Sentence 1-3
1. The fertility ratio will be disfavored which limits the number of children a couple will have.
2. The company's failure derived from its apparent inability to develop new products and from its irresponsibility to guarantee product quality.
3. The connotation of this painting is overlooked by many people, since it highlights an aspect of its attitude of technology that is very different from the traditional picture of prosperous cities where have unlimited convenience to people and leave no privacy at all.
June 30, 2021
Sfida giugno 2021 - giorno 30
Ce l'ho fatta! Sono molto contento di aver partecipato a questa sfida, ho imparato molto ed è stato molto divertente esprimere la mia opinione su tutti quegli argomenti!
All'inizio non lo sapevo se sarebbe possibile scrivere un testo ogni giorno, perché ci sono giorni in cui semplicemente non ho tempo per fare praticamente niente a causa della scuola e delle mie altre obbligazioni, ma alla fine è andato tutto bene.
La verità è che amo scrivere, mi è sempre piaciuto molto dire quello che penso e questo sito mi aiuta molto in questo senso, principalmente perché mi sento benissimo quando scrivo in italiano, sento una energia molto positiva che mi fa sorridere sempre mentre elaboro i miei testi!
Sono anche molto soddisfatto con il mio progresso, ci sono testi in cui ho fatto un sacco di errori e altri in cui non c'erano così tanti, ma sono comunque felice di essere risucito a scrivere esattamente quello che penso. A volte ripetto gli stessi un paio di volte, ma col tempo diventa sempre più facile capire la forma giusta delle cose.
E certo che niente di questo sarebbe stato possibile senza l'aiuto di chi corregge i miei testi, quindi volevo ringraziare di cuore Joshua per tutte le correzioni e consigli che mi ha datto!
June 30, 2021
Los sistemas de escritura ajenos
¿Crees que un sistema de escritura ajeno te anima a aprender un idioma o no?
A mí, uno de los que más me gustan cuando aprendo un idioma es los sistemas de escritura ajenos. Sé que mucha gente los considera un desafío y les desaniman a aprender los idiomas que los tienen. Esto me entristece un poco, ya que a menudo no son tan difíciles que al principio parezcan. Cuando entiendes los principales básicos que la construyen, una escritura ajena se vuelve súper fácil. Y sé lo que estás pensando: ¿Entonces, qué tal de los símbolos chinos? Pues, tal vez "se vuelve súper fácil" sea una exageración. Aún habrás que aprender todos los símbolos, pero esa solo es la memorización. Y esa se vuelve más fácil cuando comprendes por qué algo es así.
Sí solo estás empezando aprendiendo un idioma nuevo, entonces deberías averiguar la índole de sistema de escritura en que se escribe el idioma que estudias. Hay seis tipos básicos que puede ser: un logograma, un silabario, un alfabeto, un abjad, un abugida o un sistema de escritura característico. Te va a ser mucho más fácil memorizar todas las letras (o otros símbolos) de la escritura después de entender los fundamentales de ella.
Dos oraciones con "mientras + subjuntivo".
1. Mientras mantengas tu parte del trato, todo saldrá bien.
2. Mientras limpies toda la casa, no se te castigará.
June 30, 2021
Sfida di giugno-giorno trenta
Mio figlio mi ha incoraggiato a provare LangCorrect e la sfida di giugno, e sono così felice de averlo fatto! Mi piace come le persone sono state gentili e positive, e le domande erano divertenti e interessanti da rispondere. Grazie per aver organizzato questa sfida, e attendo con ansia quelle future.
June 30, 2021
二零二一年六月三十號
昨天我找到了一個在學漢語人的隊。幾天我想找了住在格拉斯哥會說漢語的朋友肯幫助我的學習。在格拉斯哥把部分的中國人是學生，而且大學剛才下課了，所以他們馬上就回國。我建幾片廣告請會說漢語的人傳電郵給我，可是我還沒有收到一個電郵。於是我開始用一個網站叫“Meetup.com“，我很快找到我已經說得隊。
認識他們非常好。從開始學到昨天我只跟中國人或者台灣人說話，所以昨天是我第一次見面其他的漢語不好的人，哈哈。他們都的漢語比我好，可是我只有四個月的學歷。我發現聽其他的人很難說話讓我很舒服，現在我知道我不是一個人。
昨天在酒吧裡我們一共有四個人。除了我，有兩個英國的男人和一個中國的女人。兩個男人都在中國住過，他們都也跟中國的老婆結婚了。我一點羨慕他們，我想搬去中國認識許多新朋友，可能也找一個女朋友。 那個見面結束的一點晚，而且我喝了幾杯啤酒，所以我回家的時候不想寫我的日記。
今天是一個很正常的天。我做我的工作，複習我的詞卡，做我的飯和讀我的書。今天才有一件很有意思的事，因為我最近發現動畫我決定看“大魚海棠”。我聽說過那部電影很美可是我沒想到他可以是那麼美！我很喜歡看那部電影，我也很期待看其他的動畫。
June 30, 2021
das Fahren
Vor einiger Zeit habe ich glücklich meine Führerscheinsprüfung bestanden, und deswegen bekam ich meinen Führerschein. Ich bin endlich auf dem gleichen Niveau wie meine Schwester, die vor 4 Jahren ihren bekommen hat.
Ich bin bei den meisten Situationen beim Fahren ganz gelassen, aber ich bin noch ein bisschen nervös, als ich durch Verkehr fahren muss. Ich hoffe, dass je erfahrener ich werde, desto bequemer werde ich hinter dem Lenkrad.
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