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Going to the park
Hello Sammy.
How are you? I was doing a lot of homework today so I feel that I am very tired and because of this I decided to go to the park for walking. Could you join me?
I am sure we would have a good time together. There are many interesting things at the park so that we can eat ice-cream, breathe of fresh air, playing ball on the grass or maybe we can do some little picnic.
What do you think? Write to me back as soon as possible.
Oct. 27, 2021
Что я могу купить 5 долларами?
Я живу во Франции, и здесь, 5 долларами, невозможно купить много. 5 долларов приравниваются 3 евро (более-менее) и этом, возможно купит багет с несколькими кроассанами, или конфеты, но это всё. Жизнь в Европе – не дешева, потому что евро – очень сильная ваплюта. Конечно, есть преимущества и надостатки. Сильна валюта значит, что покупают продукты дешевле из иностранных стран, но также значит, что заработывают меньше денег продавав продукты странам, которые используют слабее валюту. Я считаю, что евро подходит Германии, но нет другим странам Европейского Союза, экономии которых не такие сильны, как экономия Германии. Евро - слишлом сильно для стран южной Европы, у которых уже экономические трудности. На самом деле, даже во Франции, жизнь становится дорогой для многих.
Oct. 27, 2021
Oct. 27, 2021
私の家
私はロサンゼルスの郊外に住んでいます。近所は静かな、安全な場所です。車で家からスーパーまで１０分ぐらいかかります。スーパや銀行やヘアサロンがあって便利です。中学校と高校も近いです。私の弟が家から高校まで歩いて１５分かかります。
私の家はとても大きいです。寝室三つ、トイレ二つ、リビング、台所、ホームオフィスがあります。プールもあります。夏にはプールによく泳ぎます。バックヤードで芝生があります。夏にはとても暑いので、芝生がよく乾いています。
私の部屋は大きな、綺麗です。壁は青いです。壁には綺麗な絵がかけてあります。
押入れと本棚もあります。読むのが好きだから、本棚には本いっぱいがあります。
場所が便利し静かで日当たりもいいので、気に入っています。
Oct. 27, 2021
27 de octubre de 2021;
Mi ciudad española favorita es Barcelona. Es conocida por su buen clima, su comida y la arquitectura modernista única de Antoni Gaudí.
Gaudí era muy famoso porque usaba curvas en lugar de líneas rectas en sus edificios como en Casa Batlló o en el Parque Güell.
En su carrera, se inspiró y motivó por distintas cosas como la religión, la naturaleza y la región de Cataluña. Así, podemos ver estilos distintos en sus creaciones.
Pero su obra maestra fue la Sagrada Familia, que es una enorme construcción de múltiples edificios.
Oct. 27, 2021
J'aime apprendre le Français
Bonjour ! Je m'appelle Zack et je viens des États-Unis. Je suis étudiant à l'universite. Ma specilisation es l'informatique parce que je peut faire beaucoup d'argent avec les ordinateurs haha. J'étudie le Français à l'universite. Ma professeure es geniale. J'étudie le Français tous les jours. Je lis les livres Français, j'ecoute la musique Française, je regarde le YouTube en Français, et je parle Français avec mon chat haha. J'étudie le Français pour trois mois maintenant. J'adore le Français et je veux visiter la France bientôt. Au revoir !
Oct. 27, 2021
Une situation hypothétique
La Corée du Nord et La Corée du Sud ont ratifié un traité, ce qui permettra aux agriculteurs des deux côtés de cueillir des fruits qu'il y a dans la zone tampon, ce qui malgré l'acte de neutralité imposé par l'ONU, est actuellement remplie de mines et barbelés; les reliques de la guerre qui avait été menée il y a des décennies.
Ce partenariat inespéré pourrait clore un chapitre de l’histoire des deux pays; un chapitre marqué par le carnage, la haine et les confrontations intensives pendant la hauteur de la Guerre Froide. Nonobstant les tentatives évidentes vers la paix, la majorité des nord-coréens, vivant toujours sous un climat de peur et défiance, épinglent (critiquer?) l'effort, levant les poings en défi en disant que l’homologue de leur président est un homme astucieux qui fait appel à les (des? je ne sais pas lequel des 2 est correct et pourquoi haha) sentiments de nationalité et de fraternité parmi les coréens pour saper la souveraineté du pays et apaiser les citoyens enragés.
Les mots qui j'ai appris aujourd'hui:
poing
haine
clore
apaiser
épingler
bémol
cueillette
barbelé
zone tampon
partenariat
Oct. 27, 2021
It is a funny post.
The first post I watch is talking about Halloween in USA. A person who I am following, is comenting about a thing that a work mate have placing in her workplace. The post come with a photo where you can see a skeleton that is holding a big radioactive jerrycan. It is a funny post.
Oct. 27, 2021
好久不見
大家好。對不起我很久沒寫我的日記。我近日開始學會手寫漢字，所以我平常寫日記的時候現在用來學手寫。而且，我這個星期開始學會用注音符號，所以我沒有更多的每天學習要做，可是我已經有的學習要更多時間。我上個星期三開始了，所以我的打字越來越快，可是我當初要花四個小時做平常要一個小時的實習。
我還不會用我的電腦鍵盤打注音符號。我的鍵盤可行，可是沒有注音符號，所以如果我想打字的話，我需要記得每一個注音符號的所在。我自己設計到我自己的鍵盤就讓一個中國公司給我造。我有一個很奇妙的鍵盤，所以我的鍵都有背後的光讓你夜間看符號是什麽。於此，如果我想買注音符號的鍵我需要用激光雕它們。這家中國的公司可以，可是貨運不是要很多錢，就是要很多時間，所以我要等很久。
昨天我發現了一個好玩的詞，我現在讀西游記，昨天看到第八章，那章的内容有一個妖怪！我發現我以前有地方聽説那個詞，所以我網上找到了。原來，電腦游戲叫“Fallout”有一個動物叫"Yao guai“。那個游戲的妖怪也是一個怪物的大熊。
Oct. 27, 2021
Femisism
Recently, I read some articles about the bad situations of Asian women, no matter they are civilians or princess. When I am reading, I always can't stop thinking my girl students. Most of them have low grades and also lazy, meanwhile, they seem like quite content their lives.
When I was a kid, I always heard people talk about their factory's life. As a result, I thought that working in a factory is so terrible. If I graduated from a college, I could escape the fate of it. Thus, I became study hard after I went to school, and I succeeded finally.
Though there are many ways to avoid being a factory worker, graduating from a college is still a quick way, especially for the poor like me. So I am so grateful for myself for working hard.
Yesterday, there was a phrase "little man" in a passage. I asked the students the meaning of "man" in it. A boy answered that it meant human being (他的回答是“人”). I asked them whether it was so weird that man can not only represent male but also human beings, while woman can't. So the world is ruled by men, we girls should become stronger and get rid of it. How to be strong? Try your best to study. If you prefer to be a housewife, I would also respect you. But tried to think deeply, if you regard working is uneasy, so did men. In that case, why your husband must to share his fortune with you? The law doesn't regard the housework valued either. If you were abandoned by your husband, what could you do?
Though I don't think they would understand my words or even try to understand, I still want to talk about it. At least they will know the existence of the thoughts.
Oct. 27, 2021
What if I am pregnant?
If I’m pregnant, my whole family would be so excited, especially my mom.
My period wasn’t regular since it came at the first time. The situation had been disturbed me for many years until I got married last August.
I think most women may feel uncomfortable and desperate to the period, but not for me. If my period comes, I would be so cheerful about it.
My period has came regularly for a year, it means the opportunity of pregnant is high.
Even though I’m anxious to be a mother, I understand I won’t regret having a baby because
he/she would be loved by many people. They would help me raise him/her up.
Oct. 27, 2021
O campo
O velho estava carrancudo. O ruflar das folhas era o único som que se podia escutar no meio do campo. Não podia suportar mais o mormaço. Parecia um lugar idôneo para os gladiadores antigos, apenas vestidos com xaxins, lutarem um com o outro.
No início, o ermo o enfeitiçou, pois um lugar rústico como este o atraia ao morar na cidade, onde a fadiga e os trambolhos da vida cotidiana o perturbavam.
Mas parecia cada vez mais que ia com muita sede ao pote, ao portar somente algumas bagatelas para um lugar tão inóspito. Agora, desejava que uma enchente alagasse a ele, sua cabana e suas quinquilharias, todos sumindo no entulho.
Oct. 27, 2021
How did my parents chose my firstname?
My parents had apparently a strong preference for classic firstnames when they had to chose it for their three children. When I was a child, they told me the story behind my firstname's choice.
At first, they wanted to name me Jeanne because it is intemporal and sounds good to the ears. But unfortunately, my grandgrandmother Jeanne died three weeks before my birth. My parents then changed their mind. They did not want their choice to appear like a tribute to the dead for the other family members. I personally disagree. To name a child according to their ancestors is, I think, a nice tradition. I would have been honored to bear my grandgrandmother's firstname. But as I was not born at a time, I had nothing to say on that matter.
My parents found the firstname Manon nice. But a famous movie with this firstname in the title was released, and my parents once again doubted. What if too many girls end named from this movie this year? What if this first name get indefinitely linked to the main character of the movie?
Finally, at the last minute, they decided for an other firstname. This one is so commonly given, that I always met two or three others at school. When someone is calling my name in the street, I don't know if it is addressed to me. I think it's a pity : What is the use of a firstname if everyone bears the same? And why my parents were so unmotivated to decide for a firstname that please them no matter what?!
Nowadays, the choice of a firstname is more open than before. Parents often seek for singularity, for something that sounds good or that is linked to some history or culture. They will then put the grandparents firstnames as second or third firstame. Some people find this trend for fanciful firstnames lame. I,however, think this is a good thing. I don't want to be an individualist, but the firstname is a part of one's identity, something one can talk of, and something one's parents searched just for oneself. Well, that is just my opinion.
Oct. 27, 2021
Business Trip to Poland
I would like to describe about my business trip to Poland.
About three years, I went to Warsaw where is a capital city in Poland.
It was because we needed to set up a new team on a research center.
At first, I was nervous because it was my first trip to Europe.
I was worried about communication, way to go my hotel.
And I had never experienced jet leg either.
When I arrived there, I adapted soon and enjoyed tasty foods, beautiful sceneries, kind people and my cozy hotel room.
I also had a lot of good memories at local markets, the Chopin museum and a big tea store.
The uprising museum was the best place where exhibited pictures, documents, video clips about WW II.
Because of COVID-19, it is very hard to go there now.
When it comes to end, I wanna trip there again.
Oct. 27, 2021
Ein Journalistichbericht über das Internet vom 2002
Das Internet hat sich in den letzten Jahren in Deutschland schnell entwickelt. Leute benutzen es nicht nur in der Arbeit, sondern auch zu Hause. Der Computer und das Internet haben sich als Kommunikationsmittel beweisen. So lautet einen Bericht von dem statistischen Institut in New York, dass es gebe eine deutliche Erhöhung durch Jahren 1999 bis 2001. Gleichweise, haben die Menge der PC-Besitzer vom 51% bis 63% gestiegen. Auch wichtig zu merken ist, dass die Zahlen von der regelmäßigen Internetbenutzung haben sich auch erhöht. Vielleicht ist es so, weil um besonders die Leute, die schulpflichtig und berufstätig sind, brauchen einen Internetanschluss zu Hause. Dieser Trend kann auch in der Zukunft stetig dauern mit diesem zugenommenden Trend.
Oct. 27, 2021
Oct. 27, 2021
October 27th, 2021
Today, I finished reading a novel which was written about 30 years ago. In the story, people listened to the music using the record. When people called their friend, they used a public telephone. In addition, many people smoked. The lifestyle has changed a lot in the past 30 years. If we look back now 30 years later, we may say that, did the cars run on gas 30 years ago?
Oct. 27, 2021
I capi
I capi sono seduti uno di fronte all'altro. Le loro scorte sono armate di spranghe, mentre i loro superiori sono armati di fruste e mannaie, a causa della mancanza di disponibilità finanziaria per acquistare qualcosa di meglio, in modo tale da affermare il loro dominio sui loro seguaci.
"Mi sta rompendo le scatole," dice un capo all'altro. "I soprusi che commette sono delle violazioni dei diritti umani, perciò mi sembra inadatto a guidare il suo paese."
L'altro, sentendosi scomodo, ancheggia, sospira, organizza i suoi pensieri, e risponde: "Non mi piace il suo tono caustico. È un ipocrita, sono i miei cavoli. Le operazioni alle quali da il nullaosta le permettono di insaccare le robe delle persone vulnerabili. Vede la pagliuzza nell'occhio del prossimo e non la trave nel proprio.
L'altro capo si è inviperito, e ribatte: "Non ho intenzione di farmi prendere per i fondelli da Lei. Le dichiaro la guerra. Lottiamo per vedere chi è il migliore."
E così, un conflitto deflagra.
Le parole che ho imparato oggi:
caustico
mannaia
deflagrare
ancheggiare
insaccare
soprusi
prendere per i fondelli
frusta
spranga
rompere le scatole
Oct. 27, 2021
Guada come cammina la gente
Ho cominciato a frequentare un posto di cibo che mi a piaciuto molto perche c 'e un picante che non ho trovato in nussuna parte solo lì. So che come messicano questo è un cliché perche molto spesso si pensa che i messicani sempre mangiano tacos e picamente ma...devo dire che c 'e un grado di vèrita in quello, comunque, la prima volta che ho mangiato in quel ristorante ho cominciato a parlare in italiano e il capo dei posto immediatamente mi ha chiesto se io ero messicano? Ero sorpreso, come lui poteva sapere questo? Io credevo che era per il mio accento ma, lui mi ha detto di no. Secondo lui, ha capito per la maniera nella qualle io camminavo
Dopo di quel colloquio ho cominciato a guardare con calma e attentamente come cammina la gente... posso dire che, veramente ci sono tantissime differenza tra noi, pakistano, cinese, francese, bengalese, italiano, tedesco etc, ma uno deve essere molto attento alle sottigliezza di questi aspetti per trovargli.
Oct. 27, 2021
Wie meine Eltern meinen Vorname gewählt haben?
Meine Eltern haben für ihre drei Kinder drei sehr klassische Vornamen gewählt. Das ist ihre Wahl, Ok, warum nicht? Aber die Geschichte meines Names ist, meiner Meinung nach, ein bisschen stupid.
Am ersten wollten Sie mich Jeanne nennen, weil sie mochten, wie das klingt. Aber leider ist meine nette Urgroßmutter Jeanne drei Wochen vor meinem Geburt gestorben. Meine Eltern wollten nicht, dass die anderen Familienteile denken, dass es eine Ehrung macht (* diese Satze ist eine Katastrophe *). Ich glaube, dass sie wollten nicht die Tradition folgen. Persönlich denke ich, dass es im Gegenteil gut diese Erinnerung mit seinem eigenen Vorname zu behalten. Aber im Moment konnte ich nichts sagen. Ich war nämlich noch nicht geboren!
Danach haben sie über Manon gedenkt. Aber noch einmal haben sie einen Grund gefunden, diesen Vorname gu absagen. Dieses Mal war der Abgang eines sehr bekannten Filmes. Vielleicht hatten sie Angst, dass zu viele Mädchen dieses Jahr "Manon" genannt würden. Oder dass dieser Vorname mit der Rolle im Film verbinden würde.
Endlich haben sie einen ähnlichen Vorname gewählt. Der ist so klassisch und üblich, dass wir oft zwei oder drei in der gleichen Schulklasse waren! Wo ist das Logisch?! Ein Vorname ist in diesem Fall nutzlos!
Heutzutage wird der Wahl von eines Vornames freier als damals. Die Eltern suchen wirklich einen Vorname, der klingt gut, oder der eine besondere Geschichte hat. Am wichtigsten muss der Vorname ihnen gut gefallen. Dann bekommt oft das Kind ein oder zwei zusätzliche Vornamen. Er kann zum Beispiel die Vornamen der Großeltern erhalten. Ich finde dieses sehr gut. Ich bin der Meinung, dass Vielhalt interessanter ist.
Oct. 27, 2021
Oct. 27, 2021
私の国の有名な人
ソン・トゥンM-TPはベトナムで有名な若手男性歌手です。
ソン・トゥンM-TPの本名はグエン・タン・トゥンです。１９９４にタイビンんで生まれました。子どものとき、音楽に興味がありました。彼が2歳のときに家族が彼の歌唱力を発見しました。8歳のとき、彼は県の音楽試験に参加しました（受けました）。しかし、彼の両親は彼の音楽希望の追求に反対しましたが、彼は両親を説得することに堅持しました。２００９年にクラスメートと音楽グループを結成しました。
成長して、まじめで一生懸命働いて、彼は有名なミュージックビデオがたくさんありました。例えば、「Em cua ngay hom qua」や「Chung ta cua hien tai」や「Hay trao cho anh」や 「Noi nay co anh」など．．．でした。そのミュージックビデオの中で「Em cua ngay hom qua」が彼の音楽キャリアの始まりを示しました。ビデオの再生回数が1時間で500千回を超えたこともあるほどとても人気がありました。ソン・トゥンM-TPは歌手だけではなくて、音楽家、俳優として活動しています。本当にすばらしいです。
ソン・トゥンM-TPは私が大好きだということわざを持っています（私はソン・トゥンM-TPの言ったことが大好きです）。それは「だれでも座れないところに座りたくて、だれでも耐えられないという気持ちで耐えらなければなりません」だから彼はいつも私がもっと頑張る模範です
Oct. 27, 2021
L’automne est là
Aujourd’hui, il faisait plus froid que hier. La semaine dernière, le feuillage était vert, mais ce matin, j’ai vu que les feuilles sont en train de transformer. J’ai vu plus de rouge, jaune, et orange. Cette semaine, j’espère aller au parc voir plus de couleurs.
Je n’y suis pas allé aujourd'hui, parce que il a plu un peu. Demain, le temps va faire beau, mais nuageux. Peut-être je peux aller jeudi, quand il va faire bon.
Oct. 27, 2021
Pratique des COD/COI
Ma sœur est très bonne en chimie, mais moi, je ne le suis pas.
Elle est toujours un peu perdue en cours, car elle n'est pas aussi intelligente que les autres le sont.
–Est-ce que tu veux gagner cette compétition ?
–Oui, je le veux, mais je ne vais pas recourir à la tricherie !
–Mais comme tu l'as dis, c'est la seule façon de gagner.
–Tu peux m'aider à mettre la table ?
–Oui, je peux t'y aider.
Es-tu accoutumé à se lever si tard les matins ?
Oui, je m'y suis accoutumé.
Est-ce qu'on a dû l'amener à l'hôpital ?
Oui, on l'y a amené.
Est-ce que tu t'es bien amusé à la fête ?
Oui, je m'y suis bien amusé.
Est-ce que la loi s'applique à cette situation ?
Non, elle n'y s'applique pas.
Est-ce qu'elle est arrivée à faire le triple axel ?
Non, elle n'y est pas arrivée.
Est-ce que l'on s'attend à l'annonce par la fin de la semaine ?
Oui, on y s'attend.
Ça veut dire qu'il est condamné à perpétuité ?
Oui, il y est condamné.
Oct. 27, 2021