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July 12, 2021
July 12, 2021
Los impactos negativos de los medios
Los medios son los canales de comunicación que permiten la transmisión de información a nivel mundial. Si bien existen varios beneficios, también hay algunas desventajas de los medios. La abundancia de información que transmiten los medios no siempre es buena ya que la gente puede ser mal informada. Esto se debe a que a veces la información es falsa o no viene de una fuente fidedigna. Además, el rendimiento escolar de los niños se puede mermar si pasan demasiado tiempo usando los medios de comunicación como la televisión. Esto puede ser más evidente durante esta cuarentena ya que muchos niños miran la televisión mientras trabajan.
July 12, 2021
A Letter of Application
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing regarding an English teacher position which I saw advertised on your website.
I am originally from Spain, and I have more than five years of experience teaching English to adolescents and adults. Moreover, I am a C1 holder preparing for sitting my C2 exam this summer.
After returning from my first international experience in 2015, I decided to change my career and become an English teacher. Since then, I have pursued a second college degree and completed several specialized courses in the educational area, which provided me with the theoretical and practical knowledge required for the classroom. In addition to that, I have gained invaluable hands-on experience working with students ranging from the beginner to the upper-intermediate levels. In the future, I hope to gain more insight into the advanced level and exam preparation courses.
I feel I would be suitable for this role as I am a language enthusiast. Apart from English, I can speak fluent Spanish and Portuguese, and I am also learning French. In addition to it, I understand the intricacies of learning a new language and the challenges students may encounter on the way to fluency. Plus, I am a conscientious worker who is always looking for innovative yet fun ways to engage students and pave their way to success.
I hope I have shown I am the ideal candidate for this position, and please find my CV attached.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
July 12, 2021
July 12, 2021
Diary
The network at home is down this afternoon. The customer service call is always busy. It seems that the network in the area is broken. Because I generally only use wifi, I purchased very little mobile traffic, only 8G, mainly used for shopping and taking the bus to swipe QR codes. I could only read in the afternoon, but it was very inefficient. The internet finally came on after five hours. Just got on the social platform, I was excited to find that the notes app "Obsidian" just came out on mobile. I've been waiting for months! On Android, it only supports downloading with Google Play Store. I just fixed the GMS (Google Mobile Service) issues on my phone yesterday, and I can download and use this app. How lucky!
July 12, 2021
July 12, 2021
July 12, 2021
Hard to Learn New Things
It is very hard to learn new things as you know.
Most of people don't attempt to learn.
In my case, I want to good at something and I want to be perfect comparing than others.
So I always pay attention to judge by others, not learning itself.
These days, I read a book called 'Atomic Habit'
The book quotes, "Start a tiny thing first"
For example, if you want to work out, the goad is set a tiny thing, wearing sneakers.
With this tiny goal, reduces my burden to make a habit.
As a result, it is easy to accomplish to set it as a habit.
I will keep this sentence to make my new habits.
July 12, 2021
Какой твой любимый сезон?
Я люблю зиму, но я живу в Барселоне, поэтому зима здесь отличается от зимой в России. Здесь зима -- мягкая: редко опускается ниже 10 градусов и почти никогда не идет снег.
Я жила несколько месяц в Москве, но я там была осеню и только в январе, поэтому я действительно не пережил зиму. В любом случае, это было уже очень холодно для меня. В Барселоне не холодно, поэтому я думала что в Москве, это было бы хуже, но я быстро к холоде привыкла. Было другие девушки из Испании, которые ненавидели климат, но мне понравился. Это было первый раз что я отмечала Рождество и шёл снег! Я это любила! Было как в фильмах!
July 12, 2021
Japanese Women Situation(two)
Since the pandemic outbreak last year, most Japanese had to work at home. Female employees confronted not only their works but also their faimilies. If their families were infected, they would be blamed and they had to take the responsibility to take care the patients. And as being quarantined, they could't contact with their friends, so they were under more pressure. As a result, some of them got sick in mental. What was worse, some of them prefer to end their lives.
"Among women under 40, suicides rose by close to 25 percent, and among adolescents, the number of high school girls taking their lives doubled last year."--quote from the article.
When I read this sentence, I was shocked. I know that the rate of suicide of Japan was higher than other countries in the world for a long time. But the rate is too high during the pandemic. And I always know that female situation is much lower than most devoloped countries. But when the truth and details show infront of me, I become angery but helpless.
There is still good news to cheer me up. Nao, who is struggling with despreeion, started to write down her battles in her blog three years ago. Her blog helps a lot of people. Hashimoto, who tried to suicide once, developed an app teamed with her boyfriend. The app is a platform for psycology counseling. And she is training herslf as a theropist to help women who are in despression.
Wish they all would live better.
July 12, 2021
Un courriel à une amie
Chère Veronica,
Tout est bien passé de ton côté ? Moi, je viens d'arriver en France ! Enfin ! Après que je t'ai parlé il y a 2 ans, je suis ici ! Comme tu le sais, je vais à l'AIX - Marseille Université pour faire un échange de 2 semaines. Le moment que l'avion atterrait, j'aime immédiatement cette belle ville. Le jour que je suis arrivée, il faisait très beau : le soleil qui brillait, le ciel bleu et la brise douce. Il m'est arrivé un petit accident en débarquant. J'ai tombé ma valise à la main par terre quand j'essayais de la terrir de la cabine. Ça m'a rendu très mal à l'aise. J'étais très embarrassante. Mais heureusement, une jeune fille derriere moi m'a aidé à faire la valise encore. Elle a des beaux yeux bleus et porte un accent musical. Ça tombe bien qu'elle fait aussi ses études à l'AIX - Marseille Université. Elle m'a aussi appris comment acheter le ticket de métro et de bus dont je trouvais compliqué. Mais grâce à elle, je trouve ça très facile maintenant. On a déjà changé nos contacts et elle m'a invité à boire un café le mardi prochaine. J'ai hâte d'y être ! Je suis assez heureuse de partir en solo parce que ça me donne plus d'opportunités de faire de la connaissance avec les natifs. Mais, ne t'inquiète pas, tu restes toujours ma meilleure amie !
Je l'embrasse,
Jessica
July 12, 2021
July 12, 2021
Dia doze de julho
Durante dos anos da escola de ensino médio, a minha familia não viajámos para outra país.
Eu fui ocuparar-se os devers de casa.
Graduado de escola, a minha familia viajámos para Coreia do Sul outra vez, e visitámos Seul.
Mas nós viajámos de excursionistas.
A minha mãe foi obsessando de culturas coreanas.
Desse viagem nós visitámos muitos lugares localizado em Cidade Seul o que nós não visitámos a última vez.
Visitámos as feiras tradicinal e os mercados local.
Fomos "Dongdaemun", foi o lugar onde povos podem comprar roupas da moda.
A minha irmã chorou aqui porque esteve cansado.
July 12, 2021
July 12, 2021
July 12, 2021
Je nachdem
Ich habe diesen Ausdruck heute erst gehört. Deswegen möchte ich ein paar Sätze damit schreiben.
1. Je nachdem ob der Präsident kommt, kaufen wir die teuersten Blumen.
2. Wir können gehen, je nachdem wie viele unsere Freunde dort sind.
3. Je nachdem wie spät es ist, kommt der Zug relativ schnell.
4. Konntest du mit mir gehen? Je nachdem ob ich einen Partner brauche...
5. Je nachdem wann du gehen muss, können wir vorher verreisen.
July 12, 2021
Group study - Day1
Q1. Which program do you like the most among Yoo Jaeseok is broadcasted?
My favorite his program is 'Infinite Challenge'. I don't watch a lot of Korean tv shows anymore but I still have good memory of 'Infinite Challenge'. The program reminds my childhood and funny scenes that made me laugh. Also Even if it has been ended over 3 years there are some paradoies. I think it shows that how people loved the program.
Q2. What do you think the reason why Yoo Jaeseok has been getting a lot of interest from people and producers for several years?
I think especially in many Korean programs, the producers make the guests to show their talent like other people can't do or funny voice imitation. In that perspective, He doesn't have special funny talent as comedian. But He has impressive ability to make others be more funnier and lead the program organizing that it doesn't look messy during the program.
Q3. Except for him, who is your favorite entertainer?
My favorite entertainer is KImsuk. She is well known comedian in Korea and She makes me laugh when I listen to podcast every time. Especially I love her honesty and her speaking in Busan dialect.
Q4. To be a great entertainer, What kind of personality would be required?
I think to be a great entertainer, it's important to listen carefully your guest's word and care about what you're saying. Even if you have a special talent if you don't have any sympathy, you won't be seemed attractive. Also when people can relate to the entertainer, they will love you.
Q5. Suppose that you can be a entertainer, are you wiling to be one of them?
I don't want to be an entertainer. I think becoming celebrity means you have to hear all the good or bad comments from public. But I don't know if I can bear all the hate comments. And if people can notice me everywhere, I would not able to comfortably walk around. I would prefer enjoy peaceful daily life.
July 12, 2021
July 12, 2021
Det är svårt att skriva på svenska ibland
Hej allihopa! Dagens inlägg måste vara kort men jag vill berätta om hur svårt det kan kännas att skriva på svenska ibland. Ena dagen är det lätt som en plätt och jag kan skriva åtskilliga paragrafer på bara en halvtimme, och den andra är det svårt att formulera enkla meningar. Jag ser fram emot dagen när skrivandet ska alltid kännas lätt och naturligt. Tack till er som skriver här!
July 12, 2021
Le match de football hier soir
Salut Marc,
Hier soir je suis allé au match de football entre l’Angleterre et le France. C’était incroyable. Les deux équipes on très bien joués et c’était vraiment proche. Cependant, les français on gagne dans le prolongement. Le score finale étais 3-2.
C’était vraiment dommage que tu n’étais pas capable de me joindre. Je sais que t’adores le football et c’est vraiment le fun quand on a la chance de passer du temps ensemble. La prochaine fois que j’ai des billets je vais t’inviter encore.
À bientôt
July 12, 2021
July 11, 2021
Journal
The weather in Hangzhou is not nice, there is still humidity except for the hot waves. The greenery in Hangzhou is not as much as that in my hometown. Sanitation also can not compare with that of my hometown. Although my hometown is not a big city, there are many wide roads, greenery, and it's clean and tidy. Not many cars as well as people. I prefer living in medium cities to those big ones. Medium cities have a quiet and peaceful life.
July 11, 2021
Diary: Change My Phone's Operating System
I spent the whole morning yesterday installing my phone system. During the 7 days I waited for my phone to be unlocked, I read countless tutorials. But I didn't encounter any of the problems mentioned in the tutorials. But it failed many times in one step, took hours, and I spent some money to buy different versions of Rom. Finally, the problem was solved. I shouldn't have installed that software and Rom in Program File (x86) - because it was blocked by "administrator status"... I'm glad to have my phone's GMS back :)
July 11, 2021
Les robots peuvent remplacer les hommes au travail ?
Je pense que ça sera le cas de plus en plus dans le futur, et je trouve ça assez positif.
Le développement de la technologie est toujours amusant et passionnant à voir ( sauf celui d'armées ). En Chine, par exemple, j'ai entendu dire qu'il y a des restaurant où travaillent seulement les robots. Ils reçoivent des ordres, ils préparent des repas, et ils en servent au clientèle. Ça semble très intéressant, car ça bouscule nos idées que les vendeurs humains se trouvent toujours aux restaurants. En plus, pas seulement dans le cadre de restauration, mais les robots peuvent travailler dans un domain de secours. Il y a des tâches que les humains ont difficulté à effectuer à cause de la danger que l'environement pose, tel que la température et l'état de sol. Ils nous remplacent pour sauver des gens dans cette sorte d'environnement, et je trouve cette idée très fascinante.
En même temps, le développement des robots m'inquiète également. Dans l'histoire, on a inventé tous les produits pour faciliter notre vie, mais ça n'a pas vraiment servi à cet objectif : plus la technologie nous entoure, plus on est débordé. Par exemple, même après que les ordinateurs ont fait l'apparition, les heures de travail n'ont pas vraiment changé. Au contraire, on travaille plus dans un temps qu'on s'est libéré grâce à la technologie. En ce qui me concerne, j'ai travaillé dans l'entreprise et on a installé un nouveau logiciel pour améliorer nos capacités à gérer du boulot : il pouvait faire tous les boulots banals pour nous. Ça a marché bien et a rendu facile nos travails quotidiens, mais ça ne veut dire pas qu'on pouvais renter tôt après : on devait faire de différents choses au lieu des tâches qu'on a supprimé.
Pour résumer, j'aime bien la technologie et je reconnais qu'elle m'aide énormément dans ma vie quotidienne et les idées de nouvelle technologie me passionnent toujours. Cependant, je ne pense pas que ça ne allégera pas la pression de nos travails. À présent, je pense qu'on devrais réfléchir plus à utiliser la technologie pour notre bien-être.
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