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Les nombres
Plupart des gens ne pensent pas aux nombres, ou les représentations numériques de quantité, mais ce sont des grandes parties de la vie. Par exemple, les nombres déterminent l'heure que des gens se lèveront le matin, combien d'argent les travailleurs gagnent chaque heure, le jour de la semaine, et beaucoup plus.
Additionellement, des nombres impactent la vie courante dans des façons plus petites. Dans le supermarché par exemple, des nombres déterminent les prix des produits (lesquels sont les coûts des produits disponibles pour acheter), d'argent besoin de payer pour des produits, et beaucoup d'autres choses.
Aug. 2, 2021
Mi volt az első könyv, amit olvastál magyarul?
Két válaszom van erre a kérdésre. Egyet olvastam egy barátommal és a második olvastam el magam. Az első könyv volt A kis herceg. Soha sem olvastam semmilyen nyelven. Csak kezdő szinten voltam, amikor ezt olvastam. Ezért nehéz volt érteni, mi történt a könyvben. A barátom sokat segített nekem az olvashoz. Ő fordított le a szavakat. Én inkább figyeltem a nyelvtanra. De nagyon nehéz volt ezt olvasni és egy kis idő tölt mielőtt újra kezdtem olvasni magyarul. Amikor nőtt a szókincsem, olvastam A Pál utcai fiúkat. Tudtam, hogy Magyarországon a diákok szokták ezt olvasni az iskolában. Nekem ez volt mint egy kis kihívás olvasni. Sok régi szó volt ebben a könyvben. Használi kellet egy “régi szó” szótárat. Olyan lassan olvastam a könyvet, mert gyakran fordítottam a szavakat. Egy hónap telt olvasni. De olyan büszke voltam magamra, mert végre olvastam egy könyvet magyarul és értem mit történt benne. Emiatt bátorságom volt több könyvet olvasni.
Aug. 2, 2021
My favorite hobby
Hi! Today I want to talk about what I considere one of my favorite hobbys. Since I was a kid I have always liked to take care of plants, specially suculent plants or cacti that's because I live in a country where cacti are very common to find everywhere but I think most of the people are not aware about how important are the plants in the ecosystem.
Aug. 2, 2021
The difference of perception between English and Japanese
Hello everyone,
Today, I am going to talk about my personal opinion on languages. English, while quite ubiquitous, is still a rather strange and odd language for most east Asian folks like myself. Even though we are taught English from elementary school, it is often the cause of misery for many students. Over the years, I have read and learned a lot from different books and people and have realized that the primary reason why so many of us have difficulties with English, especially with its grammar, is not because of the vocabulary but because of perception or philosophy of the language.
I could enlist many such examples but for the sake of brevity I will point out the few most obvious ones. Primarily the usage of articles (a, an, the) are rather strange for non-natives like myself, since the whole point of assigning a particle feels a bit moot when seeing it with a different lens than that of a native. The variable ways of describing plural forms of nouns strike as nothing but superfluous for many Japanese since in most cases, the plurality of nouns can be deduced from the context. Usage of pronouns is usually kept at minimum in Japanese since it is considered rude and unnatural, whereas pronoun is the essence of English, since they have no such policies of omitting obvious subjects or objects based on context. And most importantly, I have noticed that English tends to have a more physical oriented language usage, where most actions or ideas are rooted deeply on physical matters; whereas in Japanese, metaphysical concepts are the essence of all derived ideas and actions. For the sake of brevity, I would avoid writing detailed explanation on this matter but the points I mentioned above and many more are some of the reasons why Japanese find English quite challenging.
Regardless of the dissimilarities between both languages, it is paramount to mention that I do not feel any one of them is better or worse than the other. They are different at its plainest definition and as such, should be approached in a more open minded way. Most of the schools attempt to teach English through the scope of Japanese, which as a result produces a garbled version of broken English for many students.
Aug. 2, 2021
二零二一年七月二十九號
昨天是非常好的一天。發生了兩個很重要的事。
第一個是我得到了我第一個打針。因爲醫院的網站有點難懂有點麻煩，我很久試著用錯的網站預定我的打針。我到底發現了有另外一個我應該用的網站，所以兩個星期以前我終於預定到了。這個星期一我收到了一個電子郵件告訴我我的打針是星期三上午十點五十分。我請假了那天的第一半。
得到打針很好的經歷。我喜歡在一個有很多聊天的大廳，我很久沒有聽到這麽多人聊天。我也跟一位醫生聊天。因爲我現在只有一個愛好，我跟他談我打算去台灣，可是我不覺得他認識很多人在學中文，所以我希望她發現我們的聊天很有趣。
打針以後，我得在那裏等十五分鐘，所以我看了一下我的分級讀物。我最近買了許多新的書，因爲我度過每一個“Mandarin Companion”的分級讀物，我決定買每一個“Sinolingua”的分級讀物。他們的數比較難，“Mandarin Companion”最難的級跟“Sinolingua”第二個級大概一樣，所以我還有很多東西要學， 太棒了！我昨天讀了“花木蘭”。我當然已經聽説過木蘭，可是我覺得在現在的度很好玩， 因爲我最近注意到了很多我讀的書有女人打扮成男人。我不知道爲什麽那是一個這麽流行的故事。：）
第二個是我跟我的台灣朋友一起去一家火鍋店。我們過得非常好。我記得我帶我的人家去那家火鍋店，我們也過得很好，可是我現在知道我們沒有知道怎麽吃火鍋。昨天我們首先湯裏放著每一個蔬菜，因爲蔬菜把湯加味到。我們然後加肉，只應該放水下幾個秒，肉不再是粉色的時候，馬上就拿起。我們的聊天也很好玩很有趣。我當然想學每一個台灣文化的東西。我們談KTV，我還沒有去過卡拉OK，所以她告訴我我需要學很多台灣的唱歌。附近有一家卡拉OK的地方，所以我希望我有時候參觀。
我覺得我跟她的友誼會越來越好。我們已經有幾個建議我們下次可能一起做。我想跟他做台灣菜，我的家附近有一家台灣的波霸奶茶管她想嘗試。她不玩電腦游戲，她明顯還有很多非常好的經歷要做，所以我想對她介紹我最喜歡的電腦游戲。格拉斯哥還有很多餐廳我們都沒有嘗試過，所以我很期待看下次發生什麽事。
Aug. 2, 2021
我上個周末去阿伯丁的旅行
朋友們好：）
前天我坐火車去阿伯丁見我的朋友了。他是一位醫學生，所以他正常住在格拉斯哥，可是現在是暑假，所以他回家了見面他的家人。我以前沒有去過阿伯丁，而且他在格拉斯哥的時候我們每一個周末見面，所以我決定去阿伯丁看他，參觀阿伯丁。
阿伯丁很好玩。阿伯丁的人口比格拉斯哥的小四倍左右，所以市中心很小，你走的幾個分鐘就不再在市中心。我很喜歡住在非常大的城市，所以我覺得我不能喜歡住在阿伯丁，可是參觀很不同的地方很有趣。這麽小的城市有一個很好的方面，我們一起去了一個保齡球場，那家地方的客戶量比我以前去過地方的大很多。可能是因爲蘇格蘭的隔離越來越放鬆(輕鬆?)，可是我還沒有看到了這麽熱鬧的保齡球場！去那裏讓我十分興奮。他們不僅有保齡球，他們也有“小型高爾夫球”，“落袋檯球戯”，“卡丁車”，“激光槍游戲”，和其他的好玩東西。每一個活動有很多客戶，每一個在游戲廳電腦游戲在被玩，酒吧有很長的長隊。環境的氣氛非常非常好玩。因爲這麽多人在那裏，我們不可以打保齡球，所以我們決定打小型高爾夫球。我總是喜歡有很多人的地方，所以在那裏給我活力。我對阿伯丁有點羡慕，我不知道在格拉斯哥裏哪裏可以找這麽好玩的地方。
Aug. 2, 2021
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Você tem um desempenho melhor quando está competindo ou colaborando?
Vou responder esta pergunta a partir de uma perspectiva empresarial. Tradicionalmente, as marcas preferem competir a uma contra a outra, posto que estão competindo para ser o número uno da concorrência; ou seja, as marcas querem ser o leão que todos os animais na selva temem.
Todavia, estamos observando uma mudança nas diretrizes das empresas, devido ao crescimento da popularidade dos movimentos sociais. As empresas querem se-projetar como entes que podem aproveitar seus recursos em trabalhar para o bem comum. Por isso, as colaborações entre grifes e organizações ambientais têm virado a ruta preferida para os anunciantes no sector da moda. Se acha que fazem isto porque creem realmente nas causas, está errado.
Então, para ganhar a corrida, é melhor actualmente colaborar, em lugar de esnobar e vociferar as críticas para a competição. Acredito que todos têm algo que aportar, portanto os negócios devem investir a maior parte do seu tempo e seus recursos em tentar ter parceiras.
Aug. 2, 2021
Days in The Rain
It has been raining for a week. The weather is so similar in these days: it is sunny in the morning, then it start to rain in the afternoon.
My feeling of the weather is quite contradictable. On one hand, I haven't been going riding for a week because of the rain. Especially I want to visit Auntie Detay by bike. I miss the feeling of riding. I miss the wind caressing my face. I miss the sunset and clouds. I miss seeing the birds flying over the fields. I miss Auntie so much.
On the other hand, when it rains, it is pretty cool. I like the temperature very much because I hate the heat. I can sleep very well at night without an air condition working. I don't have to wake up because of thirst even though the humidifier is working. Furthermore, it is so quiet when it rains. What I can hear is only the rain. I can stay in the house and just watch the rain falls. I feel like I'm a little island in the sea. Or I can read with the rain dropping.
When I was younger, I hated the raining days a lot. While I like it in some periods. My emotions changed easily because of the weather. I could hardly control myself or maybe I didn't want to. I am quite peaceful now because I know that I can't change the weather. But I can change my mind to make life easier.
It is raining outside now.
Aug. 2, 2021
Journal
You had the correct pronunciation of 杭州, but you are wrong in their tone. You actually pronounced the 杭 in the third tone and the 州 in the second tone. Their right tone is the 杭 in the second tone and the 州 in the first tone. However, you were doing a good job.
Based on what from your message, I know how great the love parents give their children is! They never want to put their children under pressure, no matter what situation they are in, they just suffer in silence, never want to bother their children.
In China, rural cultivated land belongs to collective ownership, and is contracted to farmers for farming without any charges. Not every farmer is qualified to attend our training. They should be specialized in a certain industry and have a certain scale, and other requirements. According to some benefiting farmers' policies, as long as you can meet some specific requirements, you can get some financial subsidies from the government. Additionally, all income from farmland belongs to farmers. So nowadays, being a farmer in China is definitely not a bad thing.
Yes, I am very satisfied with my job and I am glad to do some work helping farmers.
For historical reasons, I never went to college, but I do know some common rules about 高考. When students enter high-schools, they are supposed to be divided into science and liberal arts according to comprehensive situations and their own will. When they get the college entrance exam, they can also choose which major and university to study in. So most of them could choose their favorite majors and university, but if you don't get an ideal score in the exam, you probably have less chance of getting an ideal major and a university. Additionally, I learned that you could change your major during college if you meet certain requirements. Therefore, I think that girl didn't at least tell you about these whole aspects.
Yes, that's my happiest thing too to communicate with you and I have learned a lot from you. I do appreciate all the communications between us, so let's keep it going.
Aug. 2, 2021
Fadinha
Jetzt dass Skaten eine olympische Sportart ist, hat Brasilien seine Chance um zu zeigen wie gut er ist. Wir haben Silber gewonnen und sogar die USA geschlagen. Eine besondere Konkurrentin in Frauen-Skaten war die 13-jährige Rayssa Leal. Sie ist berühmt für den Spitznamen Fadinha (Feelein), nachdem sie als Fee verkleidet einen Heelflip gemacht hatte und Tony Hawk selbst das Video geteilt hat. Sie vertrat dieses Jahr Brasilien und trat gegen viel ältere Gegner an, wie die 34-jährige aus den USA. Sie hat Silber gewonnen und nur gegen ein anderer 13-jährige japanische Skateboarderin verloren. Wir haben Silber in Männer-Skaten auch gewonnen aber dort gab es keine Wunderkinder. Es gibt aber einige aufstrebende Sterne, wie Filipe Mota und der 11-jährige Gui Khury, der letztes Jahr Geschichte geschrieben hat, indem er einen 1080 auf einer Rampe landete.
Aug. 2, 2021
Mountain Stream
When I was young, my family used to go to mountain streams during summer vacations.
My home was close to the mountains, so it was easy to go there.
My friends and I went the stream after school.
But I can't go any mountain streams because my new home is far away from the mountains where have good streams.
Moreover, I don't want to stock in heavy traffic which is occuring every weekend.
However, I need to try to go any places where my kids can get same memories as I did.
Aug. 2, 2021
변역 연습 - 니야야 철학에 따르면 할 만하지 않는 논쟁도 있다 (1/7)
전근대인도에선 논쟁이 궁전의 오락이자 말장난이나 조롱을 좋아하는 재치꾼의 경쟁이었다. 논쟁을 잘 하는 이들은 제자, 명성, 부유함까지를 얻을 수 있었다. 그런 실용적인 목표들의 이면에는 더 고결한 목표들도 뒤얽혀 있었다. 유신론자와 무신론자들이 종교적 교리에 대해서 논의를 했다. 종교계 안팎에서도 사회적영향이 있는 논란들이 토론되었다. 의학적인 치료 방법의 효과도 이런 논쟁거리였다.
서기 9세기에서 10세기에는 니야야 (의미: 추리) 학파 철학자인 바챠스파티 미스라가 논쟁은 진실을 추구해야 사회에 이로울 수 있다고 주장했다. 또한 논쟁은 인간이 짧고 취약하고 고통스러운 삶에서 최고의 행복함을 이루는 것에 도움이 될 수도 있다고 생각했다. 하지만 논쟁의 목표가 그렇게 고결한 것이라면 우리가 논쟁에 이기는 것에 대해서 관심을 가지는 게 과연 지혜로운가? 그리고 논쟁은 진실로 이어질 수 있으면 우리가 항상 누군가와, 어디에서든 논쟁해야 한가? 바챠스파리의 대답을 이해하려고 하면 먼저 니야야의 논쟁 철학을 이해해야 한다.
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Aug. 2, 2021
01/08/2021 Las cosas interesantes del domingo
1. Pedí un PS4 gamepad. Quiero el conectar a mi ordenador o móvil para hacer de aprendir de palabras (con Anki app) más fácil y más interesante. El funcionará un poco como un juego. Naturalmente el usaré para jugar a otros videojuegos.
2. Pedí una tableta barata. Tiene un stylus que convertir la caligrafía en texto. No tiene la pantalla. El gamepad y la tableta llegan el próximo martes o miércoles.
3. Arreglé la impresora. Se atascó con papel y no pudo imprimir. Tuvo que la abrir. La limpié y quité el papel atascado.
Aug. 2, 2021
Chickenpox
The CDC reported the Delta variant of coronavirus is as transmittable as chickenpox. I remember I got chickenpox when I was a little child. It was agony because of the itch. In addition, I couldn't go to kindergarten or go out since chickenpox has strong infectivity and it's decided not to attend school until cured completely. The report is bad news.
Aug. 2, 2021
Dia dois de agosto
No verão de 2017, nós fomos a Shanghai, Hangzhou e Suzhou, de China.
Shanghai é uma cidade grande, e é lotados de povos.
Antigamente, Shanghai tinha muitos povos estrangeiros.
Então, os lugares em Shanghai há os edifícios estrangeiros.
Foram lindo!
Na uma noite, a minha família e eu foram a barco e via espetáculo perto o rio.
A noite de Shanghai fui bonita.
Nós visitamos Jardim Yu, e foram uma jardim chinesa tradicional.
Na jardim há tanque pequeno com os peixes.
Pode ver madeiras verdes e construções tradicionais.
Este jardim foi a minha favorito lugar em Shanghai.
Mas, tinha demais pessoas!
Aug. 2, 2021
McDonald's commercial
Yoshiko Miyazaki is a Japanese actress. She is 62 years old. She has appeared in a McDonald's commercial and has become a hot topic. The commercial was set 50 years ago, and she played a girl. She only looks like a girl.
Here is the commercial: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WmYaiFBDbEU
Aug. 2, 2021
Aug. 2, 2021
A busy day, today
Today was a busy day. I did things I don't used to do. I was out of my home most of the day, didn't read nor write anything. Today I wanted to continue the writing of a fictional dialogue. Now, I don't feel I'm in the mood for that. May be tomorrow.
While J. was driving I thought of all the unconscious decision we took along the day. I don't know exactly what this means, it just stroke me as a passing idea. Other thing I've been thinking about this day is that all the researches - at least those that are in the field of humanities- are essentially discourses. With this I mean that every result should be express in a text that resemble a speech. It has to be coherent and articulated, as a history. The order is critical too. What matter should be addressed first? Can be use a sort of historical criteria? Or is it better to use one based on the importance of the given subject? These are questions that I think every humanist have resolved before. But, they are encrypted in the structure an tone of theirs texts.
Now, I only want to sleep.
Aug. 2, 2021
Aug. 2, 2021
El mes de julio
¡Este mes me han pasado muchas cosas!
1) Conocí a los padres de mi novio y hablamos casi exclusivamente en español, lo cual me hizo ilusión
2) Comí mucho durante ese viaje y probé platos nuevos de algunas culturas (por ejemplo, comida persa y bolas de arroz japonesas)
3) Di una presentación al club de lectura sobre el libro del mes, 'El amor en los tiempos del cólera'
4) Aprendí a asegurar para la escalada
5) Fui a dos planetarios
6) Mi amiga se mudó a otra ciudad a tres horas de distancia en avión
7) Mi hermana vino de visita
8) Me ha encantado ver los Juegos Olímpicos
Aug. 2, 2021
Aug. 2, 2021
une ville universitaire
Je vis dans une ville universitaire et cette universitaire est connue pour leur football américaine équipe, donc j'imagine que quand quellqun veut visiter ici, c'est parce qu’ils ont de grands fans de ce sport, et ils voulaient toutes les choses qui correspond avec ça. Moi, personnellement, e ne suis pas une énorme fan, donc je ne peux pas vraiment dire tout les chose a personne doit faire à cause de ça. Mais pour une chose à éviter en termes de ça, je suggère rester pas plus que deux semaines, parce que si tu restes plus longue que ça, tu vas deviner ennuyer, parce qu'il n’y a rien à faire ici, franchement.
Aug. 2, 2021
2021/08/01
自從上了藝大後，我都是使用電腦來畫畫的。用電腦畫畫比較方便，如果畫錯了可以馬上改，而且不需花很多時間就可以試試不同的畫法。我現在主要用 iPad Pro 或繪圖板來畫畫，認為各有各的好處。要是用 iPad 的話，無論去到哪裏都可以畫。反而坐在電腦前用繪圖板，顯示器的螢幕大，看到的範圍也更多，而且不用彎著脖子看螢幕，所以畫得更加舒服。舊時我喜歡用 Photoshop，但最近由於幾個原因以改了用 Clip Studio Paint。Clip Studio Paint 不用每個月付款，交了一次費用就不需擔心了。因為這個軟件是為繪圖愛好者而製作的，所以它擁有的功能都比較適合我。更何況其他用戶會在官方網站上上傳自己創造的素材，因此有很多不同筆刷可以試試看。看起來我好像在寫廣告一樣，但我真的超級喜歡用這個軟件來畫畫。
Aug. 1, 2021
Aug. 1, 2021
Une visite à ma fille
Demain matin je vais rendre visite à ma fille. J’ai vraiment hâte de la voir. La dernière fois que je l’ai vue était en Octobre. On parle à FaceTime 4 ou 5 fois par semaine mais c’est pas la même chose.
Mon ex-femme habite à peu près cinq heures de ma blonde et moi. Le plan c’est d’aller chercher ma fille demain après midi et puis de rester à un hôtel demain soir. Ma fille adore nager alors on va probablement visiter la piscine plusieurs fois. En plus, on va aller manger a son restaurant préféré. C’est assez proche de l’hôtel et ils servaient le petit déjeuner pendant toute la journée. Je vais la gâté et je vais la laissée manger ce qu’elle veut.
Après ça, on va rendre visite à ma sœur et sa famille. Elle a deux petits garçons qui sont à peu près la même âge que ma fille. Il y a un grand parc qui est proche à ma sœur et les enfants adore jouer ici. Ils peut facilement passé quelques heures par jour ici.
L’autre chose qu’on va essayer de faire c’est de visiter le zoo. Toutes les enfants aime les animals et parfois il y a l’opportunité d’y caresser. En plus, le dernier fois qu’on est allé ma fille a monter un petit cheval. Au debut elle avait peur mais vers le fin elle était vraiment contente.
Ces visites sont vraiment spéciales pour ma fille et moi. J’essaie de prendre plusieurs photos et on cree des mémoires pour la reste de nos vies.
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