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Quando o saque é moralmente aceitável?
O saque costuma ser uma das consequências de um evento catastrófico. Pode ocorrer depois de uma inundação, uma guerra ou uma crise financeira. É um sinal que algo não sta dando certo em um país.
As vezes, o saque é uma demonstração de furia o de raiva para algo dito pelo próprio negocio, mas curiosamente tende a suceder como resultado do desapego mostrado para um assunto social. Os casos mais destacados provavelmente sejam os tumultos raciais contra a polícia estadunidense durante o ano passado. Além dos óbvios benefícios materiais, muitas lojas de luxo foram saqueadas porque emves de apoiar os movimentos raciais e os manifestantes, ficaram com a boca fechada, e não escolheram nenhum lado. Em tais casos, não é aceitável o saque, dado que os dependentes não têm a culpa, e mesmo assim, o saque pode pôr em xeque suas vidas.
Não obstante, algumas pessoas precisam de recorrer a medidas extremas (neste caso, o saque), quando têm de fazer o primordial (ou seja, alimentar suas familias e pagar a renda), mas lhes resulta insuficiente o apoio do governo. Neste caso, a gente não pode ser os juizes, a menos que a gente estivesse em uma situação semelhante.
Você se têm perguntou uma vez se forem justificáveis as ações de quem participa em algo que destrói a vida dos donos das lojas roubadas, specialmente quando se trata de uma empresa pequenina-meia?
Aug. 8, 2021
Solo Assignments
Today's topic of online English class was solo assignments called "tanshin funin" in Japanese. Some Japanese employees are forced to transfer to the countryside alone against their will. To make the matter worse, it is likely to happen to middle-aged men who have bought their houses in the city and decided their children's school. It must be the next worst trait of Japanese firms after overwork which may result in death. From a management point of view, solo assignments are plausible decision to fill in the gaps in workplace or have their staff acquire a variety of skills.
Now that teleworking enables the employees to work in distant places, they don't need to be apart from their family any more. In addition, it is much harder to live in the rural area than it used to because Japan's population has been shrinking and gathering at the capital, Tokyo. Needless to say, students today who was born and raised up in the city are reluctant to apply for companies which compel them to work in the country. Japanese society reaches the point where the companies should change their culture or their way of hiring.
Aug. 8, 2021
Ma routine dans la matinée
Je m’appelle Bob. Chaque jour je conduis mes enfants à l’école. Ma fille fréquente une école qui est près de chez nous. C'est passe 30 minutes y aller. Puis je conduis mon fils à ton école. C’est loin de mon bureau. Ma fille est en sixième année et mon fils est en deuxième année. Ils sont tous bons étudiants. Ma fille chante habituellement ses chansons favorites pendant que je conduis. Mon fils dort habituellement.
J’arrive au bureau à huit heures et demie. Je dis « bonjour » à tous mes collègues puis je reçois un grand café chaud. J’utilise mon ordinateur et lis mon email. Quelques jours j’en ai beaucoup à lire. Bientôt, je besoin d’un autre café.
Aug. 8, 2021
可口可乐和百事可乐 (Coca-Cola and Pepsi)
全球最著名的两家可乐公司就是Coca-Cola（可口可乐）和Pepsi （百事可乐）。虽然他们卖的产品看起来很相似，他们的商业名模式是完全不一样。关于可口可乐和百事可乐的竞争故事，最让人困惑的一件事就是百事可乐如何能那么多年以来继续和市场领导者可口可乐拼下去。因为很多人觉得百事可乐的可乐并没有比可口可乐好喝，而且可口可乐的可乐市场份额、销售量和品牌实力远远超过百事可乐的，甚至 “可乐”这个词也是来源于 “可口可乐” 这个饮料。但是尽管这些理由，百事可乐的2018收入是700亿美元，而可口可乐的收入只是330亿，连百事可乐一半都没到。这是为什么呢？因为刚才我提的市场份额只是可乐市场。在可乐饮料方面，特别是软饮料，可口可乐却是毫无疑问的领导者，但百事可乐的商业模式不仅专注于饮料；其公司发展早已经拓宽到其他领域了。很多零食品牌，比如Lays薯片、Doritos薯片和Tropicana果汁，都是在百事集团旗下的。所以，可口可乐的竞争力是靠可乐品牌价值，百事的商业策略关键是产品多样性。总之，人们就会说可口可乐是可乐领域的一座珠穆朗玛峰，而百事发展成了零食世界的一片广阔的草原。
Aug. 8, 2021
Festivals
At the last Spring Festival, when I sat at home, I heard someone cry outside. It was a little boy, and someone sounded like adults were comforting him. One of them asked the little boy whe he was crying while told him that it was Spring Festival, so be happy. What a similar sentence! I can hear it every Spring Festival. Since the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, and it is regarded as a new beginning, so there are a lot of taboos during the festival. For example, you must be happy, you must say sweet words, etc. No matter how angry you are, you need to control your emotion in public. Especially when you're confronting older generation.
In the movie "Free Solo", Alex said that he didn't like celebrating festivals because he didn't need to be told when to be happy. I totally agree with him. I want to live really everyday. I don't want to act in the festivals. Moreover, festivals should be a happy vacation to relax instead of busying social life which require so much energy. Furthermore, when everybody asks you to be happy during the festival, you will doubt yourself that if you do something wrong. As a result, you will become scare to show your emotion.
Lucky enough, I am so stubborn since I was a kid, so I get rid of the emotion problem and become a better me. At the same time, I hope more people can realize the situation and get rid of it. Let's live really.
Aug. 8, 2021
Geburtstag
Heute ist mein Geburtstag. Normalerweise fühle ich mich nicht alt und mein Geburtstag ist eigentlich nur ein Tag wie jeder andere, aber diesmal fühlt es sich irgendwie anders an. Als ich ein Kind war, sagte meine Mutter, dass man mit 23 wirklich erwachsen ist. Wahrscheinlich, weil sie in diesem Alter das Haus ihrer Eltern verlassen hatte. Ich habe das Gefühl, dass mir bald etwas Ähnliches passieren wird. Wenn alles gut geht, werde ich in einen anderen Bundesstaat ziehen und meinen Master beginnen. Ich kann es kaum erwarten, endlich unabhängig zu leben. Jetzt aber sollte ich schlafen, ich muss später noch ein paar Dinge erledigen und möchte auch ein bisschen über mein Leben nachdenken. Es ist jetzt 01:00 Uhr hier und obwohl es schon der 8. August ist, habe ich nicht das Gefühl, dass es so ist. Ist es nicht lustig, dass man nie das Gefühl hat, es sei ein neuer Tag, wenn man nicht schläft und aufwacht?
Aug. 8, 2021
English Morning Routines
Let me introduce my morning routines about learning English.
After getting up, I try to launch the Duolingo app which is a language learning app.
With games in the app, I can learn English sentences.
Next, I study textbooks for practicing writing and speaking.
With these books, I am able to learn grammars and vocabularies as well.
If I have a time during working, I try to read English books or listen to podcasts or watch YouTube contents.
They release my stresses and help my input skills.
Lastly and most importantly, I write and English journal before going to bed.
When writing it, I try to use dictionaries and google to make sentences as long as I can write.
It is little difficult, but it is fun because I can present my thoughts to sentences in English.
Here are my morning routines to increase my skills.
Aug. 8, 2021
please help me to correct this if it has any mistake
私が生まれたのはハノイです。ハノイはベトナムの首都で、悠久な歴史があって、景色が美しです。ベトナムじんは親切さと丁寧さで有名です、ほかに料理はとてもおいしいです、ハノイ料理と言えばphoやnemやバンミなどです、ハノイの天候は季節によって変わります、１ねんで一番好きなのはあきです、空が青いし、きこうもすずしいですから、ハノイは有名なところがたくさなって、たとえばhoan kiem いけや古い町です。ハノイの道はいつもにぎやかです。私はここに１９ぐらい住みましただから忘れられないきねんがたくさんあります。いくらどこでもへ行くでも、いつもハノイに思い出します
Aug. 8, 2021
premiere jour avec langcorrect
bonjour. c'est mon premiere jour en langcorrect. je apprends lanlangue française depuis 6 moins. j'adore cette langue mais je suis trés mauvaise dans la production écrite. je suis essayer d'ecrite quelque chose chaque jour.
pouvez vous m'aider? je vraiment veux amelioré mon competence. merci pour votre aide.
À plus
poonam
Aug. 8, 2021
Dia oito de agosto
Em Macau, há um lugar e chama-se Coloane.
Na área, há casas bonitas, templos velhos e igrejas pequenas.
As casas e igrejas foram construir em moda portuguesa.
Há uma pastelaria vendado pastel de nata.
Perto do ponte, você pode ver o mar.
Antigamente, eu tinha passado tarde lá.
Eu gostava de passear perto na área comprava pastel de nate e café, e sentava perto o porto.
Eu divertia-me nas tardes quando eu não tinha de estudar.
Eu queria vir pôr do sol lá.
Coloane é o meu lugar favorito.
Eu recomendo aqui quando você visitava Macau.
Aug. 8, 2021
La fin de l'histoire à Karpilovka
Mon histoire sur Karpilovka touche à sa fin. Pour finir, je veux donner la parole aux gens qui habitent ici.
1. Bonjour ! Il y a beaucoup de choses sur Karpilovka que Slava n'a pas rencontré. Il peut faire plus de vidéo si ça vous intéresse.
2. Merci d'avoir écouté jusqu'ici. Je veux vous dire au-revoir en espérant qu'on se verra bientôt.
Aug. 8, 2021
Aug. 8, 2021
Journal
I am different from other English learners because I only want to practice my speaking, so I prefer having free talk, not reading, writing, listening or grammar because I can practice them on my phone by myself. This requires my teachers to be skilled talkers to lead our conversations. They can not say too much or very quickly. If they say too much, I would lose the chance to speak and if they speak quickly it is difficult to follow them. Apart from this, the topics can not be very professional, because they would involve many different new words that I don't know, and I will be stuck in the middle of the conversation. The most important thing is that teachers should not have a strong accent, which would be difficult to understand. Furthermore, teachers must have passions, and have to be patient, otherwise the effect of the lessons will not be good.
Aug. 8, 2021
Aug. 8, 2021
Blood Donation
The other day, the Japanese Red Cross Blood Center sent me a postcard to request for blood donation. The blood in stock seems not enough. I checked online where and when blood donations were held. I found that it was held in front of the nearest station today, so I went there to donate blood.
Aug. 8, 2021
I felt sick today
A week before, I had a cold. It wasn't a heavy one, but ,given the current situation, I was very concerned. I took a test and, luckly, I hadn't COVID. That time was the first time I felt sick in the whole year, so wasn't a great time for me.
Today I went out looking for a new pairs of shoes. When I returned I had a heavy headache. To be honest, I'm still in pain. I hope this is nothing.
Aug. 8, 2021
Aug. 8, 2021
Deng Xiaoping
The most important man in modern China history , Deng Xiaoping, had great difficulty in restoring US-China relationship. Following in Mao’s footsteps, he highly valued US-China relation. However he bursted with anger just several days before the announcement of US-China diplomatic establishment because the US side had mistakenly thought Deng had agreed an an important issue. The US had wanted to continue to sell weapons to Taiwan which was strongly opposed by Deng. Although Deng was very annoyed by this, he had to compromise because he need the American’s help to defend China against the Soviet Union and to open and reform China.
Aug. 8, 2021
N°10 Les parfums
Un petit flacon de parfum est simplement un mélange de l'eau et des produits chimiques, rien que plus. Mais, des marques comme Chanel, Jo Molane... elles sont vendues cent fois plus que leur coût. Enquêtons-nous pourquoi les femmes les adorent tellement !
D'abord, ce flacon de liquide est un état d'esprit, une personnalité, et selon l'odeur de le porter, on affiche sa singularité. même qu'on porte le même parfum que l'autre, la réaction peut être totalement différente. Comme le vous savez, les humaines sont capables de nouer un lien fort entre une odeur particulaire avec une personne, un lien ou un événement. Donc, le parfum me rappelle souvent des mémoires.
Ensuite, le haut prix de parfum peut être expliqué par le temps conscaré dans l'invention et l'essai, mais aussi la légende derrière ce flacon. L'histoire et l'écart d'esprit de ces grandes marques se reflètent dans le prix.
Pour moi, ça désormais ne vaut pas la peine d'investir dans le monde de parfum parce que je n'ai pas le besoin de dépendre d'un parfum pour montrer ma singularité et je suis assez confiante d'être moi-même sans les odeurs de synthèses et les marques. Mais ça m'amuse vraiment de découvrir quel parfum on porte.
Aug. 8, 2021
Aug. 8, 2021
J'ai besoin d'aide !!!!!
J'ai cherché su google comment s'appelle ce objet des photos ceci dessous, mais je ne l'ai pas trouvés....
https://www.google.com/search?q=lacre+de+latinha+em+ingles&tbm=isch&ictx=1&tbs=rimg:Cdh2yXIU3lfiIgjYdslyFN5X4ioSCdh2yXIU3lfiEfQbmSMmXysj&hl=it&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjSy5qqoKDyAhWECrkGHbZZA_0QiRx6BAgAEAQ&biw=1349&bih=625
Aujourd'hui je suis très fatiguée....
J'ai passé toute la journée assisse devant l'ordinateur pour répondre mes épreuves de traduction.
Je dois l'envier à la professeure cette semaine et je n'ai pas encore fini la deuxième partie.... Je vais devenir plus folle....
Et non oublions pas que je vais commencer un deuxième cours de traduction dans 5 jours.
Je suis sortie pendant 2 heures et je ne sais plus quelle langue je parle ou même qui je suis.... j'ai écouté quelque chose en espagnol, en italien, en français, en anglais ... et une chanson en turc !!!!! Sans mentionner que je suis été obligé de lire un chapitre d'un livre en anglais....
OH... cette chanson est fantastique.... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cTLTG4FTNBQ elle me manque beaucoup.
Oh mon bon Dieu.... PRIONS pour moi !!!!!
Demain je dois aller au supermarché avec ma mère qui est âgée.... PRIONS ENCORE UNE FOIS POUR MON ÂME !!!!! =(
Aug. 8, 2021
Ho bisogno di aiuto ....
Sto cercando su internet, senza avere nessun esito, il nome in italiano di questo oggetto della foto giù.
https://www.google.com/search?q=lacre+de+latinha+em+ingles&tbm=isch&ictx=1&tbs=rimg:Cdh2yXIU3lfiIgjYdslyFN5X4ioSCdh2yXIU3lfiEfQbmSMmXysj&hl=it&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjSy5qqoKDyAhWECrkGHbZZA_0QiRx6BAgAEAQ&biw=1349&bih=625
La seconda cosa che sto cercando da un pezzo è dove potrei scaricare il film "Luca" di Disney in italiano. L'ho trovato su un sito ma richiedono di registrarsi per poter scaricarlo. Non so la precedenza di questo sito... e se è fishing? Non ne ho fiducia....
E la terza cosa che non riesco a trovare da molti anni è la quarta stagione della serie Le tre Rose di Eva, dato che ho già visto le prime tre molti anni fa... penso che dovrò rivederla tutta, perché non mi ricordo bene il finale della terza stagione... =(
Madre mia... adesso un gatto maledetto sta miagolando fuori della casa... Non faccio male a nessun essere vivente ma non mi piacciono questi animali...
Oggi mi sono resa conto che sto invecchiando. Ascoltavo sulla radio francese una canzone di Laura Pausini molto famosa. Poi hanno messo Nek con Laura non c'è.... mi ricordo quando l'ho sentita per la prima volta. Il venditore di un negozio di CD mi l'ha consigliato di ascoltare la sua canzone. Ero a Bariloche in Argentina e l'ho sentita un po' in italiano e un po' in spagnolo.
Ero anche su Buenos Aires quando è uscito il film Titanic. L'ho guardato due volte in un cinema di una via molto famosa della città. Mi ricordo bene come chiacchieravano le argentine mentre io era muta perché non parlavo una parolina in spagnolo, anche se lo capiva. Che vergogna!
Allora.... questa è una giornata di nostalgia per me e di silenzio da parte di chi sta leggendo, per favore. Non è necessario imaginare quanti anni ho.... =( =)
Oggi è stata una giornata moltissimo impegnativa per me.... ma arriverò dove voglio stare....
Aug. 7, 2021
Job presentation stereotypes.
In many cases you cannot show yourself in a sincere way in work interview. The interviewers look at your clothes, the way you carry yourself, how you speak . They want a specific profile that fill-full their expectations, you know that and you give to them what they want, because you want success in your career and get your dream job.
Interviewers in charge selection process have different strategies or methods, but some of them are useless or outdated, because you can find them on the internet and you learn how used them. They have an old perception about clothes or tattoo linked to work. It is truth that your clothes speak about you, but that does not mean that formal or informal presentation makes you better professional or person. For example, the biggest corrupts are sophisticated and well look.
A lot of good workers or people lose the opportunity to show their capacities for superficial things. Maybe this kind of “weird” people are the most honest about, how are them and what they want. They are the kind of people that needs every organization and society for building something special with creativity and different perceptions of the world ,it is giving dynamism to the environment.
Are the clothes, the look, the posture enough for concluding someone capacity for a job?
Aug. 7, 2021
La carta a Carlos
¡Hola, Carlos!
Quisiera describirte un par cosas que pasaron en la semana pasada.
Mi madre y yo volamos a Barcelona para 4 días. La ciudad es magnífica. La nos gusta mucho.
Especialmente la catedral de Antonio Gaudí, la Sagrada Familia. Fuimos también a Camp Nou, el estadio de FC Barcelona. Fue muy interesante. El billete costó 29 euros. La excursión duró cerca 2 horas.
Tú debes visitarlo próxima vez tú estas en Barcelona.
¡Qué tengas un bien día!
Rafa
Aug. 7, 2021
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