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Jan. 12, 2022
Un appel à l'aide
Depuis le début de l'année 2022, tout le travail que j'ai du faire était malfait a mon avis. J'ai de tres bonnes notes dans toutes les autres matieres et langues mais le Francais reste toujours ma pire moyenne. Je ne suis plus à l'aise avec mon francais et ça m'inquiete beaucoup pour mon futur. Je n'ai que 14 ans et le stress accompagnié de la panique me frappe deja.
J'espere vraiment que cette mauvaise habitude de se coucher apres minuit s'arrete, je pense que mes promlémes lui en sont d'origine.
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait bien m'aider? Merci.
Jan. 12, 2022
A Reply
In my impression, the United States is almost a perfect country with highly developed technology and powerful strength.
People from all over the world seem to tend to go to America and live there.
I was a little shocked after hearing from you because I didn’t expect this situation in the US.
China has an old saying “家家有本难念的经” (jiā jiā yóu běn nán niàn de jīng) It means every family has their difficulties. So maybe as to countries, it’s the same situation.
Anyway, no matter how difficult it is, I still hope the United States is able to change the unideal situation and return to a prosperous America.
Jan. 12, 2022
L'Hyperloop di Dubai
L'Hyperloop di Dubai
Secondo me, l'Hyperloop di Dubai è un'idea molto ingegnosa; sebbene non sia un'idea rivoluzionaria (ci sono delle linee ferroviarie che contano già sull'utilizzo dei treni elettrici), l'idea di installare dei panelli fotovoltaici sul tetto di ogni cabina funzionerà più che mai nei deserti degli Stati Emirati. Questo è lapalissiano!
Per questa ragione, non mi sorprende che l'idea sia diventata una specie di chiodo fisso per Elon Musk. Non mi piace la gente della sua risma, tanto meno partecipare alla mondanità, ma la sua ossessione può aiutare le persone che sono a spasso, e così, eviterà che finiscano sul lastrico. Inoltre, con una pianificazione meticolosa, il Dubai può diventare il prossimo snodo di trasporto.
Ma prima di poter giocherellare con questo nuovo congegno, il Dubai deve ovviare ai suoi problemi di schiavitù. Oltre a ciò, deve assicurare il trattamento equo tra uomini e donne; queste ultime sono attualmente sottomesse al catechismo islamico.
Jan. 12, 2022
Težek jezik
Res bi me moralo biti sram, da je moja slovenščina tako slaba. Ali pa bi za res moral? Saj nisem kriv, da sta se moja starša ločila, ko sem bil še majhen, in da me je mama, ki se je rodila v Sloveniji, vendar avstrijskim in slovaškim staršem, odpeljala v Nemčijo in z mano 99 % časa govorila nemško - slovenščino je uporabljala le, ko me je kregala ali ko je morala povedati nekaj, česar ni želela, da bi drugi razumeli. Kakorkoli - ko smo zapustili državo, sem bil star štiri leta, moj jezik je osnoven, in ker se v Sloveniji nisem šolal, sta moj pravopis in slovnica najverjetneje grozljiva.
In napisati tole malo besedilo je trajalo 20 minut :)
Jan. 12, 2022
L'espace
Pensez-vous que nous devrions continuer à explorer l'espace malgré les coûts astronomiques, ou pensez-vous que nous devrions dépenser l'argent pour d'autres choses qui sont sous-financées ici sur Terre ? Pourquoi?
Selon moi, ça vaut la peine de ramasser beaucoup d'argent pour explorer l'inconnu. À la fin, c'est quoi les explorateurs ont fait pour étendre le territoire de leur patrie (nous leur devons une fière chandelle, parce que si ce n'était pas pour eux, nous ne serions pas ici aujourd'hui). À l'époque, l'ampleur du terrain était un atout que on pouvait exploiter.
Je suis conscient de l'état bordélique de notre Terre. Elle est remplie de pauvreté, de disputes territoriales, de malnutrition... mais tout ça ne peut pas nous empêcher d' aspirer et de bayer aux corneilles. En outre, chaque découverte faite dans l'espace nous ragaillardie, et nous remplume. Nous adorons bougonner que les êtres humains ne font pas de choses pour innover, et quand ils le font, au lieu de les motiver, nous les critiquons.
Les planètes pullulent dans l'espace. Nous devons nous délester des problèmes qui ne sont pas à coté de la plaque. C'est de bonne guerre de nous concentrer sur les questions qui nous tourmentent toujours, mais il faut donner de l'espace à l'innovation. Ça ne rimera a rien si nous faisons le cent pas en se faisant de soucis, puisque nous resterons assez minables.
Jan. 12, 2022
Jan. 12, 2022
¿Deberíamos aumentar el precio de gasolina?
¿Deberíamos aumentar el precio de gasolina?
Es verdad que el uso de gasolina por carros hace daño al medio ambiente. También, los incentivos monetarios puede ser una herramienta efectiva para cambiar el comportamiento de las personas, por ejemplo para reducir el uso de carros. No obstante, una política que aumente el precio de gasolina sin proveer métodos de transporte alternativos es una mala idea. Las personas van a pagar sin importar el precio si la sola opción es manejar, y esto va a lastimar a los pobres.
Aquí en los Estados Unidos, hay muchas comunidades en que manejar un carros es la única manera de transportarse. Si queremos reducir el uso de carros, tenemos que construir nuestras comunidades para acomodar eso. Por ejemplo, podemos cambiar los leyes de zonificación para permitir tiendas en áreas que hoy en día son “residencial” y edificios de viviendas cerca de centros de transporte. Es un problema complejo y un aumento en el precio de gasolina es tan simple.
Jan. 12, 2022
Creo en los extraterrestres
Creo en los extraterrestres.
No creo que extraterrestres hayan visitado la Tierra, sino que creo que existen y no hemos comenzado contacto. Es verdad que vida es rara, pero hay muchísimas planetas y oportunidades para desarrollar la vida. No hemos comenzado contacto con ellos porque nuestra y su nivel de tecnología no es tan avanzada para cruzar el tamaño grande del universo. Una teoría sobre los extraterrestres es que antes de que puedan inventar la tecnología para comunicarse y viajar a través del universo, se destruyen. No es difícil imaginar porque ha sido muchas oportunidades de que la civilización humana se destruye, por ejemplo con las guerras mundiales, el cambio climático y las pandemias. Las últimas dos son muy relevantes hoy en día y espero que la humanidad supere a ellos para que podamos desarrollar la tecnología para comunicarnos con extraterrestres.
Jan. 12, 2022
Jan. 12, 2022
Jan. 12, 2022
Writing Practice
I have to declare first that I have never gotten a mental illness, but I can give some thoughts about this topic.
We can see many people having mental problems at any gender and at any age. It's both really sad for them and us.
I am not a medical worker, so I don't really know the reason which caused these problems, but I guess if it's not caused by brain tissues, it is mostly caused by people's mentality.
If people are open minded, kind, friendly and generous, they hardly seem to get mental illness, otherwise, they are easy to.
So, the best way to avoid getting mental illness is to build a strong mental power and be open minded to everything.
Additionally, giving is always happier than taking and I think it's another good method to keep from mental illness.
Jan. 12, 2022
Jan. 12, 2022
Mon petit déjeuner
Quand je me lève le matin, je marche en bas et je prends un petit déjeuner. Chaque jour, je mange quelque chose différent. Je mangerais plus si j'avais plus de temps mais le matin est trop bref pour un grand repas. Des examples d'un petit déjeuner typiqe sont des céréales, une banane, une pomme, ou un pancake. Je prends trop de temps pour me soigner le matin et j'habite très loin de m'école.
Jan. 12, 2022
Подарки
Если надо выбрать одно из этих вариантов, то я предпочитаю получать подарки. Это только из-за того, что придумывать хорошие и соответственные подарки -- это довольно трудно. На мой взгляд, лениво дарить что-нибудь намного хуже чем ничего не дарить. Как результат, я часто провожу много времени, чтобы придумывать что-нибудь хорошие купить, и честно говоря, я совсем не люблю эту процесс.
С другой стороной, мне не особенно нравится получать подарки. На самом деле, я предпочитаю не получать, потому что я часто переезжаю. Я стараюсь избегать иметь много вещей, я вообще храню только то, что необходимое для повседневной жизни. Например, одежда на 5 дней, компьютер, паспорт, и т.д.
Итак, я не люблю ни получать подарки ни ударять. Но конечно, в жизни, есть ситуации, где нам надо купить что-нибудь, чтобы быть вежливым.
Jan. 12, 2022
Ms. Zeng
Monday, I bumped into Ms. Zeng, who tried to persuade me to get married. (https://langcorrect.com/journal/persuade/?reply=42369)
Tuesday, we had a meeting, where I sat next to her. The meeting was so boring that I read fiction on my phone. Ms. Zeng looked at me and would have tried to say something a few times, but she said nothing at last. I just kept reading. At the end of the meeting, I received three messages from her."Hi, you'd better understately fulfill the most important affair of a final settlement in life -- marriage. Youth always dies fast."（最好尽快低调完成终生大事，不然干什么只能留下遗憾！青春易逝。）
In Chinese, the word "低调“ means a lot, I can't even pick an equivalent word in English. It means understate sometimes, however, it is used as a sarcasm word among the youngs. According her situation, I think she didn't know that at all. Nevertheless, I still think her words are ridiculous, and I hate that she never has boundaries. Whether get married or not is my private business, it has nothing to do with her. Furthermore, I had stated with her that marriage is not my goal of life, in other words, it is not important to me. She is so traditional and conservative and arrogant. She always tell me a story of her friend who didn't get married at her thirties, and she finally married someone at her early forties. Unfortunately, she could'n have a baby, hence she got divorce. Even though, she is still trying to find someone to get married. Ms. Zeng keep using it as an miserable example to persuade me that if I don't get married now, I would experience her friend did.
I told her that the experience of her friend is a particulare instance, it can't represent all. However, stubborn like her, my words won't help anthing. Hence, I'm considering to block her.
Jan. 12, 2022
Delicious pineapple
I do not think I have a favourite fruit but the last two o three weeks I have a particularly preference to eat pineapple.
I go to the market once a week and it is too easy to find pineapple there.
The price is not the same in everyplace but it seems cheap in a small store that sells two medium pineapples form 1.25 USD.
There are very sweet pineapples called Honey-gold.
What about you? Do you like to eat pineapple?
Jan. 12, 2022
A Good Sleep
A Good Sleep
Is been so many days that I don’t need to get up early.
This morning I can enjoy a good sleep.
Or, I should say last night when I go to bed and this morning.
I don’t need worry about when to get up and keep watching the clock.
We are torture by the virus for 2 full years plus no one knows when will end!
Actually, even without this virus some people are suffering in worst situations.
They reminds me, I am and I can live better.
So, use all of strength and knowledge to make a better day from now.
Jan. 11, 2022
リメーク
最近「うる星やつら」という80年代の漫画のアニメ化を観ている。昨日、今年に「うる星やつら」がもう一度アニメ化されることを発表したティザーを観た。面白いリメークになったらいいけど、私はあまりリメークが好きじゃない。ほとんどのリメークはいい作品を作りたい気持ちから生まれるより、お金のために作られている気がする。リメークを通して言いたいことがあったら別の話だけど。例えば、テーマを少し変えたいとか、新しい時代の人たちのために変化したいとか、絵や音声を改めたいとか、そういう動機から生まれる作品なる好きかもしれない。多分金目当ての方が多いと思う。一番気に食わないのはアニメの実写リメークだ。現実的な物語が成立するかもしれないけど、SF、ファンタジー、アクションのジャンルの作品のリメークがほとんどダメだと思う。実写でアニメキャラクターの動き方や必殺技をちゃんと描写できないと思う。そもそも、誰がアニメを観ないけど実写を観たいのか。それとも両方を観たいとしたら、なぜ原作をもう一度観ないのか、分からない。
Jan. 11, 2022
Letter.
Hi dear,
Yesterday, I saw your eyes are tearing up. I pretended I didn't see you...I don't want to embarrass you. Honestly, I didn't see you that away!
Do you take drops eye?
When I saw you, I pray for you by myself, because you make me happy day, after day.
You take care about me. you are kindly. You are so friendly with me. You are always here when I need you.
I want to write a big letter for you. To tell you at what point you are important and very especial. Yes, you are my angel!
Thank to God you are in my life. Amen!
Jan. 11, 2022
My self-reflection
Coming into class I had to experience that the average level of English by the attendants is above mine. As a result, I had to make sure that I am able to catch up during this semester. While I have to confess, that the beginning went very slowly in terms of my own motivation, I‘ve started to notice that I made progress in certain aspects of the language. However, I am far away from reaching the level I have set myself for at the end of 2022. For this, I have to make sure to constantly fulfill the task I’ve set for myself every day. Subsequently, I want to describe the tasks I am doing every day in order to set myself up for a better level of English.
In my daily life, I am often not able to communicate without describing the proper vocabulary, which I can't come up with in proper time, therefore I am reading for half an hour books which I bought on my e-reader. While I like reading books in the old fashion, I have to admit that the newer technology has its own benefits. When I find new vocabulary which I do not understand I translate it by holding my finger on the word I don't know the translation of. Afterward, when I assess that they are important enough, I write them down into an app that helps me to learn them. Furthermore I watch my series and movies in English, as this will also help to improve my hearing-comprehension.
Another part at which I lack tremendously is the topic of writing. I feel like I am not able to express myself on paper to an certain level which I am aiming for. Therefore I am writing as often as I can to you guys, as this is helping me to practice the language and also my grammar. Unfortunately, I often do mistakes but you guys help me to an insane amount to get better. Writing down the mistakes you guys found and repeating them helps me to improve my grammar as well. Therefore I am very grateful to have found this website.
Last but not least I have to do my homework and comprehend the sessions with my lecturer as well. I do enjoy the sessions but I would prefer to have them at the university instead of online.
Recently I realized that I need to practise my tenses aswell. As I haven’t found enough exercises based on an certain level I ordered an exam book. I hope it’s not too late, as the exams are starting very soon.
To conclude this I have to say that while admitting that I have big gaps in my usage of this language, I am confident to fill these in the next semesters. I have found tons of motivation which also helps at the long distance.
Jan. 11, 2022
Vriendschap
In de afgelopen 5 jaar heb ik een paar (niet te veel, maar ook niet weinig) Nederlandse vrienden gemaakt. Verassend genoeg, ik heb mijn eerste Nederlandse vriend eerst in Barcelona ontmoet. Ik was voor een weekendje weg in Barcelona alvorens ik naar Amsterdam verhuisde. Daar ging ik op een zaterdagavond naar een "International Meetup" evenement in een of ander kroeg dichtbij het centrum.
Meetups zijn vooral een tijdverspilling, want de mensen daar zijn bijna altijd de wanhopige singles die een meisje willen versieren en niet echt nieuwe mensen ontmoeten. Deze meetup was een uitzondering. Ik heb in deze avond 3 echt goede vrienden gemaakt. Een van hun was S. S was een van de aantrekkelijkste meisjes in de kroeg. Ze zag er echt elegant in de warme spans zomeravond uit.
Vanwege haar schoonheid was ze ook heel afstandelijk. Maar ik vond haar leuk, dus hield vol. Na een half uur gesprek werd ze geleidelijk openhartiger. Wij verzamelde ook een groep mensen rond ons en brachten bijna de hele nacht samen door. Ik was de enige van de jongens rond haar die geen agressieve versieringen gewaagd. In plaats daarvan was ik de hele tijd vriendelijk en geduldig. Dat was blijkbaar door haar hoog gewaardeerd.
We zijn tot nu toe goede vrienden. We hebben veel avonturen samen meegemaakt.
Jan. 11, 2022
Jan. 11, 2022
Jan. 11, 2022
Description
Je pense que les Lituaniens sont très sincères, mais ils sont très tendu et personnes fermées, il est difficile pour eux de s’ouvrir aux autres.
Ils ne sont pas très audacieux, mais d’autre part ils sont très productifs et directs et et travailler très dur, c'est un fait.
Honnêtement, ce sont des gens très bons et accueillants, donc si seulement ils se détendaient et n’étaient pas si tendus et pouvaient s’ouvrir au monde, ils seraient parfaits.