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Talking about Foods 15
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.✍️
B: What did you eat tonight?
A: Ebichili.
B: What's that?
A: Fried shrimp with chili sauce.
B: Nice! Sounds delicious!
A: Yeah, it's awesome! This kind of spicy food goes well with rice! The one I had isn't as spicy though. Do you like spicy food?
July 28, 2022
re Talking about Food 11
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.✍️
B: What did you have for breakfast?
A: I had leftover miso soup from last night's dinner, so I ate it with rice.
B: What did you put in it?
A: Just potatoes!
B: Nice and simple.
A: Yeah, most Japanese households only add one ingredient to their miso soup.
B: Oh, really? I didn't know that. What about lunch?
A: Didn't have any!
B: Again? You must like to skip lunch.
A: Yes, I love to do.
B: What was for dinner?
A: McDonald's nuggets. They discount that a 15-piece is on sale for 390 yen. I also had red leaf lettuce and bacon with miso and vinegar sauce.
B: Nice! What's the normal price for a 15-piece in Japan?
A: 580.
B: Not too different.
A: Oh, I see. Are you a nuggets or fries person?
July 28, 2022
re Talking about Food 19
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.✍️
B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?
A: Pancakes!
B: Ohh, nice, did you put a lot of maple syrup on them?
A: Of course! They wouldn't be pancakes if I didn't!
B: True! Did you add any toppings?
A: Just butter. I would've added cream, but I forgot to buy it.
B: What about fruits?
A: Nope. They're too expensive.
B: Simple is yummy, too!
A: Yeah, but It is a bit lackluster.
B: There's always next time. And what about dinner?
A: Lemon-salt-sauce ribs bento and pork shabu-shabu salad at the convenience store.
B: Shabu shabu?
A: It's thin slices of pork that have been boiled.
B: Oh, I see! Sounds light and good!
A: And what did you eat?
July 28, 2022
re Talk 1
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.✍️
B: What time did you get up today?
A: Around ten o'clock
B: late!
A: Cause I went to bed way too late.
B: What time?
A: Around 5:30 this morning.
B: Omg, so you good job.
A: Yeah.
B: You're still sleepy, aren't you?
A: I'm wide awake.
July 28, 2022
re Manga Talk
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.✍️
A: Have you heard of "Kingdom"?
B: Yeah, I've read it. But now I'm putting a stop to it.
A: Omg, really?! You're a rare pokémon!
It's extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone from overseas who has heard of it. But how can you stop in the middle?
Usually, when someone starts it, they can't stop. Like heroin.
Anyway, how far have you gotten?
July 28, 2022
Schreiben Teil 1 B1
Sie haben gestern jemanden kennengelernt. Sie fanden ihn/sie sehr nett und haben auch Handynummern ausgetauscht. Berichten Sie einem Freund / einer Freundin darüber.
- wo und wie haben Sie ihn/sie kennengelernt?
- was hat Ihnen an ihm/ihr sofort gut gefallen und warum?
- Bitten Sie um Rat, was Sie jetzt machen sollen.
Lieber Ali,
Wie geht es dir? alles geht gut? ich will dir unbedingt etwas erzählen.
Gestern habe ich eine neue Freundin auf einer party kennengelernt. Sie war sehr schön und allein gesitzt.
Sie gefällt mir, dann habe ich sie zum kaffee eingeladen.
Sie liebt Barcelona Fußballteam wie ich. Stell dir das vor.
Außerdem hat sie ein nettes Lachen. Was soll ich jetzt tun?
Soll ich sie anrufen oder warten?
Was ist dein Meinung? Ich bin sehr froh.
Antworte mir bitte so schnell wie möglich!
Es grüßt dich
Abdulaziz
July 28, 2022
Ausprobe neue Wörter
Ein volles Einkaufzentrum gefällt mit gar nicht. Ein Gedrängnis kann zu einem Gemetzel führen. Aber an dem Tag wollte ich unbedingt chinesisch essen, also guckte ich im Telefonbuch nach, wo sich die nächste Imbissstube befand. Des Buches Verzeichnis war eingehend, und ich genoss von einer Seetangspeise, was danach an meinem grünen Gebiss zu bemerken war. Allerdings war die zierliche Kellnerin mir wie ein Ärgernis.
July 28, 2022
Hier soir
Hier soir, mon copain est rentré de son travail à 8 heures et quart. J’avais déjà fais le diner quand il est arrivé. J’aurais été trop fatigué pour cuisiner après le travail, mais j’avais décidé marcher dans la forêt et après, je me suis senti mieux. Mon copain conduisait au travail mais maintenant il prend le train. Il trouverait un train plutôt si il y en avais un. Alors, parfois il arrives tard.
July 28, 2022
Besprechung mit dem Meister
Wir haben ein Problem mit der Decke, der Regen hat in die Küche und in das Wohnzimmer eingekommen. Gestern hat es sehr viel geregnet und das Wasser in die Wohnung eingekommen hat. Wir vermieten diese Wohnung, leider weiss ich nichts darüber. Aber wenn Sie möchten, kann ich die Vermieterin anrufen. Mein Deutsch ist nicht so gut, aber ich kann meinen Freund anrufen, er spricht perfekt Deutsch. Es wurde schon bezahlt oder wird von jemand anderem bezahlt. Danke für Ihre Hilfe.
July 28, 2022
心か頭で決めるのがどちらいいのか
面白い質問ですね。僕は心で決めることがあっても頭で決めることもある気がします。幸せのためなら心で決めると思いますけど、一番ふさわしいことを決めたら頭を使用したのと思います。どちらも役立つでしょう。危なくても楽しいことをしたい時に、頭は「しちゃいけないぞ」と言うけど、心はきっと「やろうよ！」と言うと思います。もちろん、危なく生きるのは危ないかもしれないが、一生に生きていつも少し危ないことをしないことがやっぱり退屈そうです。
そして、いつも頭で行動なことができるが、他人に気を悪くする危険があります。少ないでも遠慮が大切なので、正確の思いじゃなくてちょっと優しく言う方がいいと思います。そう思わない人もいると知っていますのに。
July 28, 2022
La playa en verano
Vivo muy cerca de una costa impresionante, llena de playas de arena y calas rocosas. Casi cada fin de semana he ido a la playa para disfrutar del sol y del mar.
Este año he empezado de practicar esnórquel. Al principio tenía miedo porque no me gusta nada respirar por la boca. Tampoco tenía confianza de mis capacidades de nadar. Pero ahora me encanta!
Este fin de semana, encontramos a una playa pequeña y escondida, lejos de la mayoría de las turistas que inundan las playas grandes. Cuando entramos en el mar, vimos a un escenario llena de vida.
Por las rocas estaban salpicadas por un montón de erizos de mar, esperando en picar los pies de los que se acercasen demasiado. A sus lados estaban estrellas de mar rojos, tan grande como una cabeza. Nadando por el agua, había peces pequeñas, medianas y grandes, incluso una que si no te cocinaras bien, podría causar alucinaciones! No he visto algo tan cautivante!
July 28, 2022
28 juillet 2022 - la vie sans Internet (1/2)
Comme habitant du 21er siècle, on ne peut pas vivre sans Internet. C’est la source de l’information et la connection au monde. Avec Internet, on peut trouver facilement l’information nécessaire, bien qu’il y a beaucoup d’information fausse, il faut simplement un bon critique pour les distinguer. Ensuite, Internet est un grand réseau pour lier le monde, ce qui facilite la cooperation entre différentes pays, donc la mondialisation. Enfin, sans Internet, je ne peux jamais apprendre des langues rapidement et avec un horaire qui me convient.
July 28, 2022
В четверг
Сегодня в семь часов я встала, позавтракала, и приняла душ. Погода была тёплая, поэтому я погуляла с моими собаками.
В полдень я встретила с друзьями в кино. Мы посмотрели новый фильм, потом пообедали в кафе. Еда была вкусная!
Я шла домой и отдыхала до четырёх часов. В семь часов я поужинала и в десять часов я уставала и хотела спить.
July 28, 2022
paris
Paris is the beautiful and romatic city of France.
It is also the capital from this country .
We travel in few than 3days this summer.
There we visit my aunt nina.
That is so exciting.We don't travel there for along time ago.
But finally the last time wasthere in paris with five.
My aunt nina is very nice and rich she has always great present for us and toys.
I hope we have so much fun like previously .
July 28, 2022
July 28, 2022
Visitando la playa con Charlie
Este verano, mi familia se mudó a Florida. Yo, mi hijo de 14 años y mi perro Charlie manejamos a Florida, mientras que mi esposa y mi hijo menor fueron en avión. Cuando llegamos a Florida, estábamos muy cansados y no hicimos nada durante unos días. Más tarde supimos que cerca había una playa en la que se permitían perros. Charlie nunca antes había jugado en la playa. ¡Le encantó! Aunque hacía calor, jugaba en el agua con otros perros durante horas. Espero que podamos llevarlo allí de nuevo pronto.
July 28, 2022
Human spine
Many people suffer pain from too much sitting. Esther Gokhale, an acupuncturist has researched human spine shape. She says we have forgotten how to use our bodies. Some people slump over too much, So they have C shape spine, and others pull their necks forward while their back and butts are pulled back. Both shapes are unnatural and a recipe for body injuries. Ester started her research after having back pain as a young mother. She did some surgery, but it did not work out. She read medical studies and found that traditional cultures don't have this problem, So she decided to study them firsthand. she found that despite having demanding lives these people are pain-free, and it is because of their spine shape which is straight from the top and curves at the bottom.
July 28, 2022
La salle de sport
Cette semaine j’ai inscrit avec mes potes dans une salle. On pensais que si on boit ensemble tous les temps, on devrait essayer à perdre un peu du poids qui en résulte. Mais ce n’était pas un grand succès. Tom a dépassé le plupart de son temps en train de regarder les filles, et devant la miroir pendant que Lewis (qui avait acheté tous le matériel) a soulevé un poids et a quitté. Je ne pense pas que ils aient envie d’y retourner, et je ne veux pas être le seule là-bas pendant que les autres boivent les soirées.
July 28, 2022
日本語の勉強のモチベーションは何ですか。
外国人の男性と付き合いたいです。冗談ですよ。
特に何もありません。ただ日本語を専攻しているので、日本語を勉強しなければなりません。
将来の希望は海外で働きたいことです。お金をたくさん稼いで、家族と幸せな生活を送りたいです。そして自分の夢を実験させたいです。
どうやって日本語の勉強のモチベーションを続けますか。教えてください。
実は日本語を勉強しているときは何度も諦めました。日本語をすれば、するほど、難しくなります。とくに潮解と会話です。さまざまな方法をやってみましたが、日本語のレベルは変わらない気がします。
諦めたいときは私は家族を考えます。なんとかして日本語の勉強のモチベーションを作ります。
勉強したくない日もあります。勉強しないで、好きなことをします。でも短く時間です。
July 28, 2022
words practice 1-12
evaporate, cunning, decidedly, disgrace, dismay, cardiovascular, plagiarism, infringe, exemplary, leveraged, emancipation, disseminate
1. The cunning thief disappeared into the dark alleys as if he had suddenly evaporated. This blunder was a disgrace to the police, and the chief expressed dismay in the following press conference. He was decidedly uncomfortable about the fiasco.
2. The recent rise in cardiovascular diseases poses a big challenge to the National Health Ministry. It has proposed a new law that force taxes on obese people, but it has met with a strong opposition from many people, saying it infringes basic human rights. It has also uploaded a series of health education videos in an attempt to show exemplary lifestyles.
3. The song represents emancipation from toxic relationships. It got popular among younger generations and has become quite a sensation. Many similar songs were published afterwards, and some were suspected of plagiarism.
4. The company has made many leveraged transactions this year but is still growing rapidly.
5. Attempts to disseminate false information have been overlooked by the messaging app company.
July 28, 2022
July 28, 2022
Caches tes intentions
Ne jamais laisses quelqu'un savoir ton objetif. Laisses tes adversaires croient qu'ils savoir tes intentions mais en realité tes objetifs sont totalement différents. Grace à ça tes adversaires ne peuvent pas defendre contre tes attaques. Ce n'est pas seulement une tatique de guerre c'est aussi utile dans la vie normale. Cependant n'oublies pas que c'est justement une tatique pour les enemies.
July 28, 2022
수요일의 쓰기 연습
1. 학생이었을 때 공부하기를 즐거워서 대부분의 점수가 좋은 편이었어요.
2. 화면에 보고 안내를 따라하는 대로 문제를 풀을 거예요.
3. 업무를 한 채로 핸드폰을 쓰지 않아요.
4. 교실에 우산을 잊어버려 놓았으니까 집으로 가는 동안 옷이 젖어졌어요.
5. 차에 모든 여행 가방을 놓아 두는데 휴식을 했어요.
6. 1년에 몇번 커피를 마시기 때문에 거의 마시지 않는 셈이에요.
7. 무모하게 운전하다가는 언젠가 교통사고를 될 텐데요.
8. 식사를 준비하는 것을 시작했더니 밥을 사 잊어버렸네요.
9. 달은 과자를 좋아하더니 많은 충치를 생겨요.
10. 계속하게 노력을 넣다 보면 실력이 꼭 발전할 거예요.
July 28, 2022
Arreglar el metro de Nueva York
Hace poco, dos adolescentes habían golpeado a unos policías por haber saltado el torniquete en una estación del metro de Nueva York. Después de ser detenidos, fueron liberados sin fianza y se volvieron a las calles en menos de 24 horas. Desde que sucedió el incidente, el alcalde le ha pedido a la gobernadora que organice una sesión legislativa para que el estado pueda tomar medidas que, al parecer, arreglarán el sistema de justicia. Como lo veo yo, esta suplica suya pasa por alto la raíz del problema: la inasequibilidad de vivir en una de las ciudades más costosas del país. A lo largo del tiempo, han aumentado el precio de los pasajes mientras que la confiabilidad de Metro sigue empeorando. Sería mejor que el alcalde se enfoque en el mal manejo y la escasez crónica de financiación de los subterráneos.
July 28, 2022
Une histoire d'amour
Un ami de vous a rencontré une belle fille au travail et ils voudraient les demander pour une date. Mais, il a peur qu’il pourrait devenir inconfortable au bureau. Qu’est-ce que vous recommanderiez pour votre ami ?
Quant à moi, je dirais non. Pourquoi ? Ce n’est pas une bonne décision. Parce que si la relation devient mauvaise vous ne pouvez pas éviter. Tes collègues réagiraient pauvrement. Ce dépendant de la compagnie mais quelquefois ils ont des règles contre les relations amoureuses au bureau donc, si vous aimez votre travail ne pas commencer une relation amoureuse.