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You finds $50 on the floor. What are you do?
Imagine I are walking by street and you found a $50 bill on the floor. I catch it, of course, and you check nobody is looking for it. After to check it, the bill will go straight to the pocket. But if the $50 bill is on the ground of a market, for example, then I will to talk with the market chief. Is possible some person has lost it.
Sept. 20, 2021
二零二零年九月二十日
我近日開始學會用我的手寫漢字。我開始學中文的時候，試著用我的手寫漢字。我發現手寫是很麻煩，很複雜的，而且幾個網站寫說大部分的中國人不常手寫，所以我決定放棄學會手寫。
上個週末，我研究了半去台灣學中文的機會。台灣有一個非常好的獎學金，可是為了合格你必須已經申請過一所大學的中文課程，所以我研究了幾所大學的課程。原來，什麼都我查過的課程要求具備手寫的能力。他們的考試都用紙，所以你需要手寫你的答案。
如果我不會通過主要的考試，就不會是很大問題。這些課程不給你資格，它們只讓你學中文。如果我不通過TOCFL的考試，他們會回收一個月的獎學金，可是我在銀行已經有一點錢，所以我不害怕。不過，我還決定我會再試學會手寫，一個原因是這次我認出漢字比以前容易，所以記得它們的形狀應該是比較容易，另一個原因是我認為手寫是一個很酷的能力。我打算學會寫不比學新的詞或者文法努力，一年以後我希望我可以從記得寫一千個詞。
我的方案是我會從TOCFL的五百基礎的詞開始。我又用我的詞典告訴我什麼時候應該複習一個詞，所以每天我會學三個詞的形狀，也複習我需要的都。至此我學了六個詞，我會寫“找”，“贏”，“元”，“學習”，“分鐘”和”近“。
Sept. 20, 2021
Amigas virtuales
Gloria: - ¡Hola! ¿Que tal?
María: - Estoy bien, ¿y tu?
Gloria: - Estupenda. Mañana tengo una cita, ¿sabes?
María: - No, no tenía ni idea. ¿Verdad? Pues cuéntame todo, ¿vas a salir con alguién? ¿Quién es el?
Gloria: - Su nombre es Pablo, tiene veintisiete años y trabaja en una comisaría en la calle Trece.
María: - Interesante. ¿Es guapo?
Gloria: - Sí, muchisimo. Es moreno y tiene ojos oscuros. No es alto, pero a mí no me gustan los hombres altos. Tiene el pelo corto y rizado. Lo mejor, todavía, es su sonrisa. ¡A mí me encanta su sonrisa!
María: - Muy bien, estoy cierta que van a pasarla bien. ¡Que viva! ¿Que hora es la cita?
Gloria: - A las diez, en el cine.
María: - Ponete hermosa, ¿vale?
Gloria: Por seguro que sí.
Sept. 20, 2021
Sept. 20, 2021
Journal
Birthdays really are an important day for everyone and I don't need to say more about its importance because everyone knows it. Since it's an important day for everyone, people will celebrate their birthday. In our country, parents will celebrate their children's birthdays, especially for those children who are under the age of ten. Usually, when children's birthday comes, their parents will celebrate it by eating at restaurants, buying them gifts, for example, new clothes, new toys and so on. Parents' immediate relatives will also celebrate children's birthday by doing the same things as buying gifts. When the children are over the age of ten, parents rarely celebrate, even do, they will choose a very simple and brief way. For instance, they spend less money and don't invite relatives. When people get old, usually over the age of sixty, their children will celebrate their birthday by eating at restaurants, buying them some gifts and so on. But people rarely celebrate their own birthday because it seems so weird. Some people like that other people celebrate birthdays for them, but I don't. I am a very simple person and I always prefer doing things in a brief way because I think that we should use our time doing some meaningful things. As for birthday, it doesn’t matter whether you celebrate it or not, it never makes any difference. You always get one more year old. Right?
Sept. 20, 2021
10. Les trains de nuit
Dépasser en train de nuit, ce n'est pas une chose nouvelle, vu qu'il était un mode de transport très populaire dans le 19ème siècle. On peut souvent trouver son apparition dans littérature chinois de ce époque. C'était parce qu'il était le seul moyen de faire un long voyage, étant donné qu'il n'avait pas encore d'avion abordable. Mais est-ce qu'il peut désormais encore tenir sa place ?
Certes, il y a sans doute des inconvénients, par exemple : une promiscuité pas toujours agréable avec les autres voyageurs, un confort réduit avec un lit dur, un service de restauration plus ou moins insatisfaisant...... Cependant, en ce qui me concerne, le train de nuit est encore séduisant pour les voyageurs étudiants ou ceux qui ont un budget limité.
D'abord, ça peut économiser le coût de voyage à l'échelle du tarif et du frais d'hôtel. Le tarif de train est déjà inférieur à l'avion, mais comme il se dépasse au nuit, le tarif est bien moins aux trains de jour. Et comme on passe les nuits au train et quand on se réveille, c'est déjà le matin, si on prévient de faire un tour de l'Europe ou de la Chine, on pourrais passer quelque nuits aux trains en allant d’un endroit à l’autre. Ça donc économise beaucoup d'argent sur l’accommodation, surtout que l'hôtel se coûte cher. Par conséquent, il reste un choix favorisé par les voyageurs de sac à dos.
En plus, c'est un gain de temps parce qu'on ne perd pas de temps de journée en train en faisant rien. On peut utiliser ce temps pour visiter plus d’endroits !
En outre, ce mode de voyager permet aux jeunes de rencontrer de nouvelles personnes parce que la plupart de temps, ils doivent partager la chambre avec d'autres, ça peut être une perte de confidentialité mais en même temps c’est une bonne opportunité de parler avec les étrangers et écouter à leur histoire. Ça me semble assez intéressant !
Malgré tous ces inconvénients, pourquoi pas l'essayer et dites vous-même s'il fait plus de mal que de bien ? Après tous, ça me semble d'être une bonne idée.
Sept. 20, 2021
Feeling good
It is the second day of Mid-autumn Festival vacation. My stomach feels better. So I am quite sure that pressure makes my stomach feel bad.
I read some romance novels and some news today. I went to the supermarket and wanted to buy some fruit, but they were so expensive. As soon as it is festival, the price food and fruit rises. I hate that a lot. And I don't like most of the festivals, because there are so many traditional rules. Relatives will visit each other, which I dislike. I just want to stay alone, social is too tired for me. Tomorrow will be the last day of the vacation, I gonna miss it.
Sept. 20, 2021
Wort des Tages 20.09.2021: der Wälzer
Beschreibung: Wälzer ist das umgangssprachliches Wort für ein dickes Buch. Hierzu ein paar Sätze:
Ich habe zum Geburtstag drei Wälzer von "Der Herr der Ringe" geschenkt bekommen. Ich lese aber nicht gern, willst du sie dir ausleihen?
Nee, Wälzer sind eigentlich auch nicht mein Ding. Ich bin eher ein Filmtyp.
Sept. 20, 2021
Nachhall
Ähnlich wie bei einem Echo entsteht ein Nachhall durch die Reflexion von Schall. Der Unterschied besteht darin, dass der Nachhall viele Male auftritt, wie ich es im vorherigen Text mit der Schallreflexion von Wänden beschrieben habe. Es ist ein Effekt, der manchmal wünschenswert und manchmal unerwünscht ist. Musiker brauchen manchmal einen Raum mit geringem Nachhall, damit sich die Klänge nicht vermischen und sich in Chaos auflösen. Andererseits kann der Nachhall die Idee der Natürlichkeit vermitteln und zum akustischen Erlebnis beitragen. Ein gutes Beispiel ist Bowies Song "Heroes", der im Konzertsaal des Tonstudios in Berlin mit drei Mikrofonen an verschiedenen Orten aufgenommen wurde, um Nachhall zu erzeugen.
Sept. 20, 2021
Innan Det Blir Hejdlöst
Du ska skriva en argumenterade text. Ditt ämne som du väljer att argumentera för ska vara kopplat till hållbar utveckling. Exempelvis kan du argumentera för eller emot att äta kött, för eller emot att handla fair trade, för eller emot att äta ekologiskt osv.
Med tanke på hur planeten blir sakta men säkert varmare och varmare och snart obeboelig måste vi vidta åtgärder snarast. Ett flertal är bekymrad och inser nu att klimatförändringnen måste tas på allvar innan det blir hejdlöst. Det finns således ett stort behov att göra allt vi kan för att minska vår koldioxidavtryck. (Koldioxidavtryck är ett begrepp som kvantifierar ens klimatpåverkan.) Ett av de enklaste men mest effektiva sätt är att bli vegan.
Att vara vegan betyder att inte äta kött men det kan även innebära mer än det. Men om vi förutsätter att man bara inte äter kött så gör det redan en stor skillnad. Enligt peta.org så har veganer 41.7% mindre koldioxidavtryck än någon med köttdiet. Chalmers forskaren Fredrik Hedenus säger att att förminska konsumtionen av animaliska produkter är oerhört viktigt för att få jordbrukets klimatföroreningar på en ofarlig nivå igen (Fight the Climate Crisis by Going Vegan, peta.org). Det finns mycket bevis från en mängd studier för hur veganer kan underlätta för oss en mer hållbar utveckling.
**(He actually says it in English, but I attempted to translate it: Dr. Fredrik Hedenus, the lead scientist of the study, said that “reducing meat and dairy consumption is key to bringing agricultural climate pollution down to safe levels.”**
Att bli vegan är bra för ekosystemet och biologisk mångfalden. Det finns nästan en miljard kor och 33 miljarder kycklingar. Korna utsläpper en betydligt stor del av metangasutsläpp. Vi använder dessutom många resurser för att odla näring som vi ger till djur när vi kunde änvanda dem för de många svältande människor i världen. Det onaturligt stora antalet av djur också är dåligt för ekosystemet och förstör den biologiska mångfalden.
Men finns det konsekvenser eller påföljder från att bli vegan? Det finns några som tror det. De ifrågasätter om en vegansk kost har tillräckliga näringsämnen. Ett till perspektiv att räkna med är om alla har råd att bli veganer. Men det är faktiskt bara en fråga av hur man tillbringar sina pengar på ett bra sätt. Grönsaker, baljväxter, och frukter är faktiskt billigare än kött, och om man planerar sin kost bra så får man alla sina nödvändiga näringsämnen. Icke desto minde måste det belysas att åtgärda kilmatförändringens oöverskådliga följder och de ökande naturkatastrofer som inträffar nuförtiden är värt alla nackdelarna som kanske finns från att bli vegan.
Mot bakgrund av mina resonemang får jag dra slutsatsen att det är ett brådskande ansvar för folk att bli vegan. Klimatkrisen är oroväckande och alla borde vara angelägna att göra vad som helst för att lösa problemet! Lär dig vara den förändring du vill se i världen.
Sept. 20, 2021
For Healthier
I do several things to healthy.
First, I try to eat healthy food.
When I get older, my stomach is not good enough to digest all of things.
So I changed meals from meat-oriented to vegetable-oriented.
Vegetables help me reduce my weight as well.
Next, I have exercises every day.
Every morning, I try to get walking near my house.
And I usually go to my office by my bicycle.
If I have a chance, I swim more than 1000m after work.
Lastly and most important thing is to keep my mind positive.
When I have a spear time, I try to do meditation.
It helps me avoid angry, sad and exhausting by stress.
So these are the things, I stay healthy.
Sept. 20, 2021
046 I live across the line
046 I live across the line
Kate made up her mind to lose weight. She went to an AA organization for overweight people. In the meeting，everyone complained about their problems they were facing. A woman said her mother never let them eat pizza. And so now she had to eat the entire pizza every time. She said the only way to solve her problem was to have her stomach stapled. Another lady who was quite slim and seemed not belonging here complained about her extra six pounds in the midsection. Kate and another man were smirking and even laughing at their complaint. When they were having coffee during the break, Kate told the man said he had crossed the line. The man answered, ‘You laughed.’
‘Well I lived across the line.’ Kate said.
Sept. 20, 2021
Sept. 20, 2021
Suomeksi #2
1. jos
- Jos sää on hyvä, menisin ulos. (If the weather is good, I'll go out.)
・mennä → mene- + -isi → menisi- + -n → menisin
2. kuin
- Hän oli kuin ei olisi nähnyt mitään. (She[He] behaved as if she[he] hadn't seen anything.)
・olla → ole- + -i → oli
・ei ollut → ei olisi
・nähdä → näe- + -nyt → nähnyt
・mikään → mitään
3. essive (-na)
- Sinuna irtisanoutuisin työstäni. (If I were you, I would quit my job)
・irtisanoutua → irtisanoutu- + -isi → irtisanoutuisi- + -n → irtisanoutuisin
・työ → työ- + - stä → työstä- + -ni → työstäni
4. kunpa
- Kunpa minulla olisi enemmän rahaa. (I wish I had more money.)
・minulla on (I have) → minulla olisi
・raha → raha- + -a → rahaa
(What is the difference between "kunpa" and "voi kun"?)
Sept. 20, 2021
Si vous avez un jour à vivre, que ferez-vous ?
Si j'ai seulement un jour à vivre, je jouerais des jeux vidéos pour une heure. Je ferais des choses illégales, par exemple, je tuerais quelqu'un, je braquerais une banque car je n'ai jamais fait ça. Si j'ai réussi de braquer une banque, je vais aussi acheter tout ce que je veux avec l'argent. J'inviterais mes amis aussi pour faire des choses ensemble. À la fin, je vais me détendre chez moi en regardant un film et attendre pour la mort.
Sept. 20, 2021
September 20th, 2021
I went to Kamigamo Shrine in Kyoto this afternoon. It is one of the oldest shrines in Kyoto. It is about 27 kilometers from my house. It took about an hour to get there by motorcycle. I took some photos.
Here are the photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20210920/w800/index-e.html
Sept. 20, 2021
Dia vinte de setembro - O Festival da Lua
Amanhã é o Festival da Lua.
A lua é lotada no dia.
Ele acontece no 15 de agosto do calendário chinês.
Normalmente, nós vimos a lua, comer o bolo lunar e o pomelo em tradição.
Na noite, nós queremos jogar fogo de artifício.
Em Taiwan, as pessoas gostam de comer churrascos.
Outras regiões não têm o hábito, só em Taiwan.
É porque em 1980, a anúncio da televisão do molho de churrasco apoiou o fenómeno.
Até agora, quase todas famílias temos os churrascos no Festival da Lua.
Você pode ver as pessoas têm os churrascos em frente das casas deles.
Além disso, o festival é pela reunião da família.
As nossas famílias foram a casa da minha avó.
Eu não quero porque muitos parentes velhos perguntam as questões privadas.
Eles perguntam, “Onde você trabalha?”, “Como exames que você faze?”, “Você tem o namorado?”, etc. Que horrível!
Mas, eu gosto de brincar com filhos do meu parentes.
Eles são fofos, e eu jogava Monopoly com eles por um tarde.
Sept. 20, 2021
Sept. 20, 2021
Des Activités
1. Tu vas voir tes amis quand tu es à Orlando ?
2. On a vu une expo, qui s'appelle "Tout est juste pour un moment", chez le Gropius Bau musée.
3. Jasper et Véro ont fait un pique-nique, avant de partir pour France.
4. Je voudrais prendre une verre au nouveau bar du centre-ville. Veux-tu venir ?
5. Pierre n'aime pas faire les magasins. Peut-on faire autre quelque-chose?
Sept. 20, 2021
Economic Sanctions
Topic: Are economic sanctions a useful foreign-policy tool?
It is critically important to have foreign policy tools other than military options. In my opinion, economic sanctions are most powerful diplomatic tools today. I feel this way for three reasons, which I’ll explore in the following essay.
To begin with, economic sanctions can prevent dictators or military regimes from earning their funding. They are likely to exploit citizen's properties such as real estate or food forcefully. However, severe inflation caused by economic sanctions lessens the value of their funding. In addition, they wouldn’t pull off sufficient amount of money if they have bank accounts in foreign countries.
Second, shortage of funding would make it harder to possess weapons preparing for dispute with hostile countries. As you know, making powerful rockets or maintaining mighty armies costs an enormous amount of money. Since military power is essential for anti-democratic countries, international community should make great efforts to get rid of their weapons by peaceful means.
Finally, the degree of economic sanctions can be easily controlled depending on the target countries’ attitude. If the countries keep threatening their citizens or neighboring countries, other countries should get together to impose stronger sanctions. On the other hand, sanctions can be immediately eased as a result of the negotiation.
I’m convinced that economic sanctions are useful as a foreign-policy tool because those measures can effectively lessen budgets of military regimes and prevent them from making weapons. In addition, those policies can be easily suspended.
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私の最初のペット
子供の時、私は四歳ぐらいでした、母が子猫を見つけました。悪い子供たちがその可愛い子猫はマイクロウェーブの中に入って、放りました。母が子猫を手伝って、悪い子供たちに怒鳴りました。後で子猫を持ち帰りました。その瞬間に子猫を見まして、「子猫を知るよ」と言いました。その子猫は隣人のでした。でも母は怒りましたから、「返さない」と言いました。子猫の名前はノルマであることを知っていました。私たちは隣人が子猫のために来ることを持ちましたけど、決して来りませんでした。そのままに可愛い子猫が私たちと一緒にいて、アビーと名付けりました。アビーは十三歳の時、亡くなりました。それから六年前です。まだ会いたいけど、ここで過ごした時間に感謝しています。
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