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Anger
This morning, my father told me to wait him at the corner. When I opened the car door, I saw a woman sitting on the right side. So I went to the left side to put down my luggage. When I closed the door and went to the shotgun seat, the car left. Yep, it left without me. I was a little confused at first, I thought that maybe my father want to change a place to let me in. However, the car just left quickly. I spoke loudly to ask my father stop, but I failed. Then I ran after it fast, but failed either. I went to the gate and called my father.
He went back to pick me up a few minutes later. I was so angry that I accused him of careless. But my father contradicted angrily that he thought I was in the car because he heard the sound of door closing. The woman sat in the rear said that she also considered I had gotten in because she also heard the sound of door closing, when she was having a nap. I realized that he would never admitted his mistake. As for he was driving, I didn't want to make him angry, so I told him that it was all my fault. Then he became quiet.
Then I went to school, I found three boys were absent. I called for their parents, one of them replied that they arrived very early, the others didn't answer the phone. A few minutes later, there were about ten students stood in front of the teaching building with the teaching leaders. They were stopped bucause of late for class. When they went upstairs, I asked them why they were late. They all went to the dormitory first, one of them arrived school at 07:43, while they were asked arrive before 07:40. So, his grandpa lied. I punished them for cleaning classroom for two weeks. Then I told the incident in the parents chatting group. I had redeclared the arriving time for more than three times, but some parents still didn't take their responsibility, what they did was bad for the whole class.
During the second class, I receive many photos about my students who were just standing in the school yard when they should had cleaning the yard. They spent a class there when the other students were all having class. It was the third time they were accused of default in cleaning their clean zone. What should I say? I didn't know. It is so boring of teaching them.
I played drums in the afternoon. I ran 2 km at night. I need to relax more.
Sept. 22, 2021
Suomeksi #4
1. tarkasti
- Hän ampui hirven tarkasti. (She[He] shot and killed an elk accurately.)
・ampua → ampu- + -i → ampui
・hirvi → hirve- + -n → hirven
2. kuolla
- Pelkään kuollakseni maanjäristyksiä. (I am deathly afraid of earthquakes.)
・pelätä → pelää- → pelkää- + -n → pelkään
・kuolla → kuolla + -kse → kuollakse- + -ni → kuollakseni
・maanjäristys → maanjäristykse- + -i → maanjäristyksi- + -ä → maanjäristyksiä
Sept. 22, 2021
Sept. 22, 2021
Conscious About Health
In the past, people thought less about their health.
Being healthy was just not being sick.
And there was not enough information about health.
But these days, it has changed a lot.
First, people can easily get information about health on the internet.
We know what food is good for the body and what we should do to stay healthy..
Next, people try to check their body on a regular basis.
With the regular check, they understand the current state of their bodies and what they need to do.
Lastly, these days, people try to work out as often as they can.
So they usually go to the gym to train their bodies.
The gyms also provide many training programs like yoga, Pilates, cross fit and so on.
Once again, people are more conscious about their health these days.
Sept. 22, 2021
Joke
I think saying funny things is very difficult. It has to suit the situation and it is not obvious that what fanny things are. Sometimes, something funny you think is boring or rude to other people. It depends on other people, so you need to understand the personality of who you want to make laugh. I look up to humorous people and they are smart.
Sept. 22, 2021
Sept. 22, 2021
A Brighter Summer Day - 2
A minha mãe diz-me que o filme foi verdade filmado atrás da casa da minha bisavó.
É legal!
A coisa mais supreendente para mim foi eu posso lembros as cenas.
Infelizmente, as casas japonesas no filme foram resgarado muitos anos atrás.
O nosso governo é estúpido!
O lugar foi construído das casas novas e luxusas.
Mas, a árvore onde eles datem existe.
E o restaurante onde o Honey veio existe também.
De facto, ele é lugar onde a refinaria da açúcar venderanda sorvete.
Eu gosto muito da sobremesa que ela venderanda!
Este ano é o filme que estreia há 30 anos, e é o incidente aconteceu há 60 anos.
A distribuição do filme publicou DVD e BluRay com o pôster.
Eu comprei um, e o pôster é bonito.
Acho que Criterion Collection é Deus, porque ele restaurava o filme.
Ele restaurava há 10 anos.
Vamos agradecer como Criterion Collection fazia o filme!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2AMSHs2adWk
0:57 A árvore !
1:42-1:58 Quando eu era criança, o lugar foi assim!
Sept. 22, 2021
September 22nd, 2021
As I wrote before, my son took two graduate school entrance exam the other day. His first choice is Kyoto University and his second choice is Tokyo University. He passed the Kyoto University entrance exam the other day. Today, the result for Tokyo University was released, and he passed the exam.
Sept. 22, 2021
048 Audience’s Fault
048 Audience’s Fault
Kevin played as a dad in the soap opera, The Manny. He suggested to the director and play writer that they make it in a serious way. However, the director didn't agree with him. The audience didn't like serious topics. They just wanted something funny and light. In one of the scenes, Kevin was quite pleased with his own performance. He showed his talent as a real actor. Although the director liked this scene, he knew this wouldn't work for the audience in front of TV. He demanded to take an alt. Kevin lost his temper and began to throw a tantrum. He smashed the fake baby on the ground. He opened the suitcase which was empty and smashed it. Everything was fake. He said it was not the directors fault, not the writer's fault, and not the network's fault. It was the audience’s fault to like this soap because they demand so little of the play.
Sept. 22, 2021
Choses à faire
Un autre jour! Une bonne journée! Je regarde un arbre bel par la fenêtre. Elle est jaune et verte sous les rayons du soleil. C'est l'automne!
Je pense que je dois m'asseoir droit pour avoir bonne santé.
Je dois aussi commencer à aller à la piscine, à nager, pour bonne santé et humeur également.
J'ai juste rappelé que j'ai voulu à marcher à la rivage et ramasser des coquillages. Je vais faire cette bientôt!
Sept. 22, 2021
I sold my electric grill.
I sold my electric grill.
I also sold my hiking shoes.
There is a famous application for selling used items.
You can upload your items on it to sell them.
I have been selling many of my items which I won't use anymore.
I 've got a bit of money from that.
I thought I have to reduce my properties for my mental health and it worked.
Items that wasn't organized distracted me a lot.
I have to clean our home before my girlfriend coming.
I have never cleaned home during this holidays.
I feel like it was a heaven.
I have been in laziness as possible as I can.
I have been lying back and reading books all the time.
I went for a run just once in a day.
Now autumn has come and the weather is so so beautiful and I think I should go travel to enjoy the weather.
Sept. 22, 2021
14/15/16-8 迎月追(送)月
昨日、中秋祭りでした。
Yesterday was the mid-autumn festival.
前の日は「迎月」の名がありますし、後の日は「追(送)月」の名があります。
The day before will call “welcome moon”, the day after call “chase moon”.
外国の友達はなぜこの二つ日がそういう名前があるの質問を聞いた。
My non-Chinese friends ask why we named such days.
これは説明：
Here is why.
実は「月」は伝説の主人公「嫦娥」に代表しています。
The moon is actually referring to the lady who lives in the moon.
彼女は8/15に地球を戻る。
So, she will come back to earth at 8/15.
だから、前の日は彼女に期待を会う、歓迎としてに待ている。
Therefore, the day before we are waiting /expecting her to come.
後の日は月に帰る。
And the day after she will go back to moon.
だから、彼女に「送る」或いは「追う」の気持ちがあります。
So, we are trying to chase/sees her go back to the moon.
実はこの説明は本の根拠がない、個人的に思う。
This explanation is not from any books, it is what I think.
もし、不賛成たり、ぜひ、自分に解説をする。
If you don’t agree, you can have your own version to explain.
Sept. 22, 2021
Sept. 22, 2021
훈훈한 하루
요즘 비가 3일간 동안 꾸준히 내린다. 하루를 천천히 시작하니까 최고. 보통엔 커피 한 잔을 끓으면서 이렇게 하루를 시작된다. 커피의 나에겐 일어나기에 도움이 되기보다는 향이 내 기호에 맞다. 그러니 비가 내리는 날엔 도시가 조용해서 빗소리가 들으며 내가 커피 끓는 과정에 폭 빠진다. 고향에선 비가 이렇게 내린 날이 겨우 없어서 기상하자 하루를 편한 마음으로 보내곤 한다. 일단 커피를 끓고 책도 읽기도 하고 시간이 흐르며 밖에선 무슨 일이라도 생기면 보기도 하고 공부도 하고 그냥 하루를 편하게 보려고 한다. 이렇게 비가 엄청 내리는 날엔 음악을 든 생각 없고요. 왜냐하면 내가 '이 순간'을 즐겨 보내려고 해서 음악을 들면은 안 되는 것 같아요. 또 보통 비가 내리면 머리가 갑자스럽게 아파서 공부도 하지 못하는 때가 있고. 그런데도 오늘 오후쯤엔(?) 요새 읽는 말다 한 책 두 권을 다 읽어 버려서 둘다 너무 재밌었다.
오늘은 예상처럼 공부도 못 하지만 적어도 새 어휘를 쪽지에 적이라도 할 수는 있었다. 이렇게 적어 놓으면 잡생각을 다 사라진다.
아무튼 내 나라에선 비가 내리면 모두 사람들이 집안에 고립되기 때문에 전통이 있어서 tortas fritas를 만들어서 즐겨 먹는 날이다 :)
Sept. 22, 2021
Sept. 22, 2021
Gutes Benehmen. Ist das noch aktuell?
ich nehme Bezug auf die Talkshow "Gutes Benehmen - ist das noch aktuell?". Ich bin der gleichen Ansicht wie die Moderatorin: moderne und emanzipierte Frauen brauchen keinen Menschen. Heutzutage braucht keine Frau mehr einen Mann, der ihnen die Tür aufhält. Natürlich sind einige Benimm wichtig, wenn ein Mann eine Frau zum ersten Mal zu einem Date einlädt. Mehr als wichtig, diese Mannieren sind zuvorkommend. Aber die Frauen sind heute nicht mehr nur Hausfrauen und statt sind sie tätig beruflich. Zum Glück gibt es heute immer mehr gleiche Rechte für Frauen und Männer in beruflichen Umfeldern.
Aus diesem Gründ würde ich meinen Freundinnen diese Talkshow empfehlen, weil sie sehr motivierend ist.
Sept. 22, 2021
Sept. 22, 2021
奥地利何去何从
今年7月发生的一起强奸案在奥地利掀起了轩然大波。四名16-22岁的阿富汗难民对一名13岁女孩下药、强奸和杀害。她的尸体在公园的一棵树旁被发现。三名嫌疑人仍被拘留，一人在逃。一些嫌疑人已经有犯罪记录。
虽然这一野蛮的行为深深地影响了这个国家的每一个人，但人们有不同的反应。一般来说，有两个观点。
有些人反对收容难民，认为他们都应该被驱逐出境。难民的犯罪率比本地人高多，让我们的国家更不安全。因为文化差异太大了所以也没办法帮他们融入当地社区。他们不愿意融入社会，他们只想利用社会福利制度。因此，政府必须对难民犯罪行为实行零容忍政策。如果一个难民犯罪，尤其是暴力罪行，就得遣返原籍。否则，我们所知道的奥地利将在几年内不复存在。
右派倾向于遣返难民，但左派却反其道而行之觉得这是奥地利该反思的时刻。他们呼吁大家不要认为难民是一丘之貉，大多数的难民不是犯罪，他们只想要和平地，自由地生活。
在他们看来，都是政府的错因为他们早知道嫌疑人是罪犯但是没有处理以前的案件。这起案件显示奥地利社会不够包容。他们觉得政府需要对语言学校等项目进行更多投资，以帮助难民融入奥地利社会.
我个人认为，肇事者应该依法受到惩罚。此外，应该对当局进行内部调查。我支持零容忍政策，因为我暴力犯罪应该受到严厉惩罚。尽管如此，每个人都应该被视为一个个体并受到尊重。总的来说，这是一个非常悲惨的案件，不仅深深伤害了受害者的父母，而且也伤害了整个国家.
Sept. 22, 2021
Books or movies?
It depends a lot. In the book, the only limitation is the author's imagination, so it is easier to build amazing scenarios with fantastics things and most of the time characters have better constructions, but sometimes it is difficult to "enter" in the story because we are not seeing them, we are just imaginating. Movies are a visual midia so it is easy for us to create a connection with what is happening, it is easy to understand the story, but this midia has a lot of limitations like money, places, time, people and many other things that make its building very difficult, and sometimes these limitations makes the movie really bad.
So, usually I prefer the books because most of the movies can't show everything that a book can offer because of its limitations.
Sept. 22, 2021
transsexual children
Nowadays there is a controversial topic, transsexual children and the process that that means to themselves, to their bodies, to their health, to their families and the society.
Are parents or governments who have the rights on kids in this topic?
This controversy appears when some kids want to do the transition process, but their parents disagree with that decision, for this reason some governments intervened in the name of the children rights and took custody of the kids.
Some people think that the decision on children about this kind of topic should be on parents, because their know their kids and they have the capacities for recognizing what is better for their children. Moreover, some of these parents are not transphobic, they just think that children do not have enough maturity for understanding this process and they can regret this in the future. Besides some parents think that they have right of teaching their values or religion to their children, but it seems illegal this topic today.
In the other hand, some people and governments believe state should take the decision on children because, they are its responsibility and the government should guarantee kids rights no matter parents decision. They consider that the identity of the children should be respect and allow them to build themselves in the way that they need regardless to their parents or society ideas.
In conclusion, every part have their reasons and evidences for supporting their views.
Sept. 21, 2021
Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job
Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job.
To what extent do you agree?
Many people believe that having a good degree guarantees students get a good job. Well, I don’t agree with this statement, because there are other factors that influence people find a good job today.
To begin with, having a good grades is not related to getting a good job. In fact, if people want to find a very good job, they could need professional experience. For instance, I am a perfect example about that. I graduated from one of the best universities in my country, but it didn’t guarantee to have a good job. Well, I liked my old job because I had the opportunity to learn many technical things in situ, however, my salary was not suitable because I did not have any professional experience before. Therefore, I do not consider my old job as a good job.
Secondly, it is true that a good university degree can help people to find better opportunities in their professional field. But, sometimes these people need to develop other skills in order to get better jobs. For example, nowadays an indispensable skill in jobs is the leadership. Six years ago, I was talking with a friend who recently graduated from marketing, and she was explaining to me that most of the companies needed employees with leadership courses.
Finally, my last point is that the academic environment is totally different to workplace. If students are comfortable taking exams, doing homeworks, writing papers, they will obtain an outstanding grade from university, yet having a job is a different story. At workplace, employees have a boss, fixed schedule, pressure, work extra time, and among others. So, all these features of the job are not the same compared to the university, therefore it does not guarantee to have a good job.
To sum up, using these explanations, I think that having a great university degree does not guarantee getting a good job.
Sept. 21, 2021
Dejar
Estaba solo en un país diferente cercado de unas personas que no confiaban. Aunque me gustaba mucho Cali, decidí dejar al día siguiente. Me despedí de una chica Caleña que había conocido en la ciudad. Me suplicó que me quedara una noche más, pero no pude. Me iría a Medellin en la mañana siguiente por otras 10 horas en autobús. Era feliz conocer una ciudad nueva pero triste que había dejar tan abruptamente.
Sept. 21, 2021
Lepší dny
Před včerejší nocí jsem byla špatně, ale ve včerejší noci přišel můj přítel z Česka do Belgie. To bylo překvapení. Šli jsme do malé restaurace a chodili jsme na procházku kolem mé domova.
V dnešní práci jsem pořad pracovala z domova. Vlastně jsem dopsala zadaný článek, ale neřekla jsem kolegyni, protože jsem chtěla odpočívat. Pracovala jsem přesčas hodně dřív, takže teď necítím špatně, když odpočívám.
Sept. 21, 2021
Reseña de película: "Zodiac" (parte 5)
Robert sigue escribiendo su libro, pero no puede descubrir más pistas en el caso, y detective Dave no tiene suerte tampoco. Los años pasan, y Robert finalmente acaba su libro, que tiene mucho éxito en el mercado. En 1991, un detective logra organizar una reunión con un sobreviviente de uno de los crímenes, que ha vivido afuera de los Estados Unidos desde el ataque. El detective le muestra algunas fotos de varias personas, y le pide identificar si cualquier es el asesino que vio durante el crimen. El sobreviviente replica que sí, el asesino está allí: apunta a una foto de Arthur Leigh Allen, el sospechoso favorito de Dave y Robert. La película termina aquí, y las próximas pantallas indican que pronto después esta identificación, la policía decidió cuestionar Arthur otra vez, pero Arthur se murió de un ataque de corazón. El misterio nunca está resuelto definitivamente - hasta la fecha, Arthur solo se queda un sospechoso.
En general, me gustó la película. Fue espantosa a veces, y que generalmente no me gusta las pelis de terror, pero esta película no enfoca demasiado en los detalles sangrientos de los crímenes, en vez enfoca en las caracteres de los periodistas y detectives que trataron de solucionar el caso, y como el caso crecía a afectar sus vidas y psiques. Hay algunos fallas, una siendo el ritmo de la película, lo que debido a los espacios grandes entre los eventos del caso, a veces siente lento. Y el fin de película no es satisfactorio -- se ve como el único resultado del caso ha sido el libro que Robert publicó. Hay una falta de algún significado de la historia.
Sept. 21, 2021
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