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Online Ordering
Do you know how to order food online ?
First of all , I used to prepare the inventory what I was going to order .
Than ,I visited the onine store website , meanwhile , entered correct username and password , clicked the submit button , if everything went well , the commodities will appear on the screen .
All food is fresh , I picked the food I need directly into trolley in terms of the inventory I prepared before, settleed account after picking, waited the express .
The whole precess is easy and fast
March 5, 2022
地球温暖化のためいろいろな問題が出ている
地球は過去より暖かくなりましたが、ずっと暖かくなっています。それでいろいろな問題が出ています。地球温暖化は農業と漁業に悪い影響を及ぼしています。あるところでは、過去に植えた植物はもうこれ以上よく植えられません。そして海の温度が上がったので死んでなくなってしまった魚も多いです。地球温暖化は人間の健康にも悪い影響を及ぼします。国連のIPCCによると、世界で３０億人以上は地球温暖化で被害を受けています。
私たち何をしたらいいですか。環境保護を重んじる会社を応援してそんな会社の製品を使うほうがいいと思っています。ある会社は環境を汚しますが、地球のためそんな会社がなくかければなりません。そして車の代わりに自転車や地下鉄に乗ったり歩いて行ったりするほうがいいです。落ちで水や電気を節約ことも大切です。
March 5, 2022
making a reservation for a table
I ate out with my friends who is also my collegue last weekend , but it was a pity that I couldn't use the discount coupon at that time ,it is famous restaurant ,but we needed to make a reservation for a table ,
the restaurant is non smoking , so there was a view of fine ,we choose a table next to the window ,my friends prefered to have a view of cityscape
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
A Reply
No. Anhui is a province in the east-central part of China, and Hefei is the capital. It covers an area of 140,100 square kilometers and has a population of 61,027,200.
It governs 16 prefecture-level cities, 9 county-level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts. The famous scenic spots are Huang Mountain and Jiuhua Mountain.
My city, Fuyang, is a prefecture-level city, which is located in the northwest part of Anhui province and covers an area of 160 square kilometers.
It governs 3 municipal districts, 1 county-level city, 4 counties and has a population of 11,000,000.
The Fuyang area is a big plain, which is a part of the Huabei Plain of China. Farmers here mainly grow wheat, rice, corn, soybeans and so on. So my city is an agricultural city.
In my opinion, you already have a decent job. Of course, if you can be a columnist, that will be nicer. You can give it a shot.
One thing before the pandemic I miss the most is that we could travel anywhere we wanted without any worries, but now, it's very different, and we even eliminated the thought of traveling.
Here are some photos of Fuyang city. Hope you enjoy them.
March 5, 2022
the experience booking hotel
when do you usually book hotel rooms
I usually book hotel rooms for business trips on the website ,sometimes on app , rarely on phone call.
when it is for a business trip, I always book a twin room ,
because I go to business with my collegue most time.
sometimes, I was lucky ,I can booked a breakfast included hotel, or got a discount coupon to book the hotel ,
sometimes ,I was upset, I could only book a bed for sleeping
March 5, 2022
the experience booking plane ticket
when was the last time you booked a plane ticket? how did you book it
two year ago , I booked a direct flight for a business trip on website named Ctrip which is one of the biggest travel business related company . I didn't book through travel agency as it is more expensive than Ctrip, Ctrip is also supply other booking services like app,phone call,
since I didn't sure when would return ,so I booked a one-way tickets instead of round trip ticket .
the flight take off punctually at 6 PM
March 5, 2022
Paid family leave in China
Paid Family Leave, a long forgotten term in China, has regained attention recently after a draft law aiming to protect the interest and rights of elderly people calls for the younger generation to spend more time with their parents.
Paid Family Leave was first brought up in the 50s, and it was only available for employees in the public sector. It has not been well honored nowadays.
People have been calling for revising the rules to give it more attention; some even argue that it should be codified into law. Some experts argue instead that, considering that Paid Family Leave was introduced when people worked 6 days a week and when there were no annual PTOs, reenacting it now would be problematic.
March 5, 2022
오늘 금요일이에요!
1. 안경이 깨었다. 글쎄 곧 고쳐야지.
2. 환대도 줄 겸 교환학생들이 환영을 느껴요.
3. 병에 걸을까 봐 마스크를 늘 입어요.
4. 아침에 급행열차가 고장을 나고 해서 지금 너무 짜증이 나요.
5. 비가 오는 바람에 집에 가야 했어서 우산을 가져와요.
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1. 요즘 식물의 성장이 느려요.
더 햇살고 물을 주지 그래요?
2. 다음 달 태국에 처음 여행하려고 해요. 그 곳에 뭘 할까요?
사원에 다녀갈 만해요. 진짜 예쁘네요.
3. 남주와 함께 이야기하도록 하는데 오해를 풀어요.
알겠습니다. 이제는 풀도록 하겠습니다.
4. 수술을 했다고 하던데 현재 괜찮습니까?
사실 등이 아파습니다. 쉬고자 집에 갈 겁니다.
5. 정거장에 이상 남자가 쳐다보니까 집에 걸어갔겠어요.
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여러분 좋은 주말을 보내세요! :)
March 5, 2022
Mein Tag
Hallo.
Ich möchte Sie über meinen Tag und meine Gefühle erzählen, um meine Deutsch zu üben.
Vielen danke für ihre Korrektur im voraus
Heute habe ich nicht so gut gefühlt, ich war ein bisschen von mir selbst enttäuscht.
Am Morgen habe ich eine Konferenz mit meinem Arbeitgeber gehabt, er hat mir viele Fragen auf Deutsch gefragt, dann habe ich sehr nervös geworden. Wegen meines nervös hat meine Deutsch sehr schlecht geworden. Das war lustig
Deshalb werde ich mich bei Deutsch Anstrengen und ich habe einen Tagbuch geschrieben zu entscheiden.
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
コンビニ人間
最近、コンビニ人間という小説を読み上げました。読み始めるのとき、1時間４ページだけを読めたけど、最後に１時間１２ページを読めたから、すごい読解の練習だったと思います。
小説のストーリはかなり変だけど、とても面白いでした。主人公は普通じゃなくてロボットみたいな性格で、まだアルバイトをしている中年の女です。店の外で行動を理解できないから、よく困ります。でも、主人公はアルバイトが大好きで、問題がない感じがあります。店で厳しいルールがあるし、やっと生き甲斐が得ます。
アルバイトを働きながら、新入社員の男が会いました。この男のほうがずっと変で、世界に怒っている人です。二人は分かりづらい絆を作って、ことはだんだん猛烈になります。
この本は私にたくさん深い事を考えさせました。社会のルールとか普通は何かなどです。たぶんいつか、本についてもっと詳しい文章を書きますね。
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
El acadio (parte 1)
Recientemente leí un artículo que trata del uso del idioma acadio en "Eternals", una nueva película de Marvel. En la película, un grupo de seres que se llaman "Eternals" llegan a la Tierra para proteger a los seres humanos de depredadores que les llaman "Deviants".
En la película, los Eternals llegan primero al Medio Oriente, donde afincan la ciudad de Babylonia. Durante esta parte de la película, los personajes hablan al acadio a los habitantes indígenas. Para conseguir que fuera auténtico, el director empleó a un experto del Medio Oriente antiguo que ha trabajado antes para crear guiones en este idioma.
Lo que me interesa no es el artículo ni la manera en que el experto llevó a cabo tal logro, sino la semejanza entre árabe y acadio. Por ejemplo, en el artículo, el autor (la persona que escribió el artículo es el mismísimo experto) menciona que la palabra para "puerta/verja" en acadio es "bābu", que es semejante a las palabras باب (bāb) y بوابة (bawāba) en árabe, a pesar de que apartan los dos idiomas más que mil años (ya que técnicamente el árabe moderno es muy relacionado con el árabe clásico pero no con los dialectos, pero eso es otra historia).
Creo que lo que me asombra no es la semejanza entre las palabras, como dije antes, sino que hay tal semejanza después de tanto tiempo. Por ejemplo, durante el tiempo en que se hablaba el acadio, los idiomas indoeuropeos acabaron de empezar a dispersarse.
March 5, 2022
March 5, 2022
Motivación
Muy raramente me falta motivación para aprender el español porque de hecho, no tengo la impresión de hablar una lengua "estranjera". Quizás vea las cosas así porque estoy aprendiendo idiomas muy diferentes de mi lengua materna (como el ruso), pero el español siempre me ha parecido como una forma desfazada y muy refinada de francés.
Por ejemplo, siemple se usa el imperfecto del subjuntivo en español, mientras que en francés, es un tiempo muy literario que por desgracia no se usa más. Entonces, hablar o escribir español me da la impresión que estoy mucho más elegante que lo estoy en realidad. ¡Me siento como un gentilhombre!
El placer que hallamos en una lengua es una gran motivación. Sé que nunca no podría aprender algunos idiomas, porque sé que no hallaría ningún placer en el aprentizaje, ¡pero no es el caso del español!
March 4, 2022
A Reply
Writing is so simple. You can write anything you want as long as you are interested in them. For example, when you were young, there would be many unforgettable things. You can write them. You said you want to learn Cantonese, so you can also write it; why? Or anything interesting with Cantonese.
The pandemic situation in Anhui is very good because so far there’s not a single case. But in Hong Kong it’s really the worst. The new infection has increased by over 50000 a day.
No one knows the origin of the Covid, even what stuff it is. I worry that we are not able to eliminate it, and it will exist with us. So stay safe and stay healthy.
March 4, 2022
Ma Mauvaise Habitude
La pire habitude que j'ai, c'est mon indécision. Tous les jours Je réfléchis trop, peu importe où je suis, j'ai l'impression que je pense trop à tout. Même les choses insignifiantes. Ma famille peut vous dire que c'est la vérité, cela les dérange depuis ma naissance et moi aussi je m'agace parfois.
Je sais que c'est un problème pour ainsi dire mais j'sais pas comment la vaincre. Si je prends la mauvaise décision je ressentirai des regrets et ça c'est difficule. Le temps est définitif alors il faut que je prends la bonne décision. Oh là là je pense bien trop encore.
March 4, 2022
Un jeu mauvais
Aujourd'hui je suis allé à l'université et je essaie de travailler en mes projets du informatique. Je dois faire un jeu qui s'appelle «Keno» quel est un jeu mauvais. Dans ce jeu, les gens achètent une carte et choisissent des nombres. Il y a une chance que on choisit un de les vingt numeros gagnant, mais c'est une chance vraiment petite. Donc, c'est probable que les gens perdront l'argent à cause de ce jeu. Je n'aime pas les jeus ainsi parce que la chance de gagner est trop miniscule et ces jeus peuvent créer une addiction si une personne n'a pas contrôle.
March 4, 2022
"The clan is my blood and the Pillar is its master."
If you love reading fantasy, here's something for you. "The Green Bone" trilogy by Fonda Lee. These books are just magnificent. The story is set on a fictional island and a country of Kekon, which is the sole producer of jade in the whole world - highly valuable and rare mineral, which gives its wearer enhanced abilities. Kekon, is ruled in fact by few clans of jade-wearing warriors, of which the most prominent and biggest are Mountain clan and No Peak clan. Both clans rival each other and try to assert dominance in the country. There is war, there is blood. There are sacrifices, treasons, but also friendships and brotherhood.
The trilogy is just phenomenal. It's been really a long time, since the last time I had the pleasure of reading such a high quality writing. I'm forever grateful to Daniel Greene from YT, for recommending that book.
The Green Bone saga could be classified as urban fantasy and I would never suspect myself of liking that sub genre of fantasy. I'm more of a high fantasy guy myself. But I did like it, it was a great introduction to the genre.
What do I like so much about this book? As weird as it may sound it's actually that it is so realistic. I loved the depiction of Kekonese immigrants and their traditions, which brought to another country became less and less in touch with those in the original country. I adored the characters. They're written so beautifully that it was impossible to pick a favorite one and they stayed with me for a long time. There were many times when I cried. I highly recommend the Green Bone saga, to anyone who loves to read. Not just fantasy readers, but everyone.
March 4, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 1
The chart illustrates the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
We can clearly see that USA is superior in all three kinds of medals. Even the number of gold medals of this country is dramatical more than the total amount of almost all rival countries. If we look at more closely, we can see that USA has approximately 2300 medals.
Sole comparable Country in the chart is Soviet Union. This country has 1000 medals in total and if we compare this two rival countries, we can estimate that USA has more than the double of Soviet Union's total number of medals.
All other ten countries have close number of medals. They are stuck between approximately 450-600 medals. Only United Kingdom is somewhat successful with 600 medals. Other have almost same number of medals in total.
However, it should not be forgotten that all of these countries have low population and located in relatively small geographies.
To sum up, the countries, this have diversified and high population can show more success in the Olympics. Success and of course the number of medals related with the number of athletes of that country.
March 4, 2022
Что значит ваше имя?
Сегодня, я отвечаю на следующий вопрос: "Что значит ваше имя?"
Мое имя - немецкая форма имени евреиского порисхождения, которое появляет в Библии. Русская форма этого имени - Иван. Кстати, некоторые русскоговорящие друзья меня зовут "Иван", это забавно! Слово значит: "Бог прощает".
В детстве, имя мне не понравилось. Половина людей не вспоминалась об орфографии, и вторая половина не вспоминалась о произношении, и так, кому-то немного раздражающее, когда все изковеркают его имя!
Однако, с временем, я постепенно знал его любить. В конце концов, я достаточно рад, что Бог мне прощает, потому что я часто делаю глупости! И если Бог не бы прощал, так много людей не бы верили в Его, нет? Нам всем нужны надежда и второй шанс!
March 4, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 1
The graphic illustrates in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK. If we look at the graphic, we can see that four different technological devices are selected.
CD players have the highest percentage, it starts with 60 percent in 1996/97 and increases approximately 82 percent in 2002/2003. Internet access is the sole component that the start point takes place in the graphic but it sharply increases from approximately 10 percent to 45 percent, especially between 2000/2002 periods. Home computer has a constant increase from approximately 25 percent towards almost 45 percent.
Mobile phones have the most dramatical waves in this graphic. It starts with 18 percent and there is a slightly increase between 1996 and 1998. After 1999, there is a jump off from approximately 25 percent to almost 45 percent but it remains steady for the second half of this period. Dramatical increase repeats in first half of 2000-2002 period. After 2001, percentage of mobile phones reaches approximately 65 percent and continues slightly increase.
To sum up, after the mobile phones and internet access modern technology in homes in the UK significantly changed. This graphic shows the obvious truth to examiners.
(200 Words)
March 4, 2022
En jämförelse mellan det svenska språket och franska
Mitt modersmål är franska (från Frankrike). Franska är ett romanskt språk som kommer från latinsk med många andra olika influenser, men det finns inte många ord som har ett germanskt ursprung. Vokabulär är olik men svenska har fått några ord från franska som ”restaurang” eller ”evenemang”. Morfologi är också olik, för att verb på franska ändras mycket oftare än på svenska. I stället för ”är” till exempel som används i alla fal i present på svenska, måste vi konjugera verbet: ”je suis, tu es, il est”. Det gör att svenska verbformer är mycket enklare för mig att minnas än franska verbformer för svenskar som lär sig franska. Ortografi på svenska är också enklare än fransk ortografi för barn att lära sig. På svenska uttalas generellt varje bokstav som skrivs och varje bokstav har sitt eget ljud. På franska finns många bokstäver som skrivs men uttalas inte, och ett ljud kan skrivs med flera kombinationer av bokstäver. Exempelvis kan ljudet ”o” också skrivs med ”au”, ”eau”, ”ô”. Jag tror att det kan vara svårt att lära sig med språket är också roligare. Någonting som jag tänker är bättre på franska är att vi har många synonymer som inte finns på svenska. Man kan välja precis ordet som bäst kommunicerar både mening och ton som man vil använda. För mig betyder det att dikter på franska låter mer poetisk än på svenska men det kan också vara för att jag kan franska bättre!
March 4, 2022
A Shot in the Dark - 51
Part no. 51.
This summary was deliberately written in the present tense (analyse it as if it’s unfolding as you read it).
It’s usual custom for theatres not to stage a play when its respective playwright has recently passed away. However, the news of the murder has put the seemingly doomed play in a new light, increasing the interest on it. Rumour has it that it could be a theatrical success. When the theatre manager gets wind of that, he greedily thinks it a perfect opportunity which he can exploit to the full. He first cunningly fuels the rumour even further. Next, behind a in-honour-of-the-playwright facade*, he puts word out to cast that the show should take place. It’s amusing to see the manager outwardly keen on the play, given that he previously despised the play, regarding it as doomed and unremarkable. He even went so far as to advise would-be customers against the play.
Constable Twitten has finally reached Miss Sibert’s flat over** in London. He rings the bell outside the building, but no one answers. He then calls out to the caretaker, who promptly comes and leads Twitten throught, up the stairs and into Miss Sibert’s flat. Looking around the flat, Twitten draws that Miss Sibert is probably long gone. Which strucks him as odd since they arranged to meet up. Yet again, Twitten starts to think about the Aldersgate stick-up case. It has been at the forefront of his mind ever since Crystal’s murder. The thought that he’s yet to find out the truth is nagging him.
*I meant that he used this pretext to deceive the actors, appealing to their feelings towards the late playwright.
**I used “over” because he travelled from Brighton to London.