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March 11, 2022
IELTS T2 (4)
Topic：
Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
My answer:
It is argued that people become more rely on each other nowadays. There are various aspects show different views, and in my opinon, I think that citizens rely on themselves more than others.
Here are the reasons why people think we need more company. People prefer to use social media more than ever before, no matter they are children or old people, because they need interation from the other person. For example, when you walk in any streets in a city, you can see many people hoding a smartphone and wathing short videos from different APP. Furthermore, many people indulge in the Internet and frequently share their emotion or special moments in the social media, and they would keep their eyes in the screen whenever they are free. Because they hope somebody will respond inmediately.
However, people become independent. On one hand, increasing people especially the young who prefer to live alone rather than with their families. The main reason is that they have enough money for they working hard. With a good salary, they can also take part in numerous acctivities they favor. On the other hand, life in cites is more convenient because of the technology. There are so many domestic machines can help with the housework, so that citizens do not need do many housework by their families.
In conclusion, there are different views of whether people are more indepent through many aspects. I think that people are more rely on themselves because of the development of technology.
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March 11, 2022
Meinung #3 : Post wurde korrigiert!
Ich finde es auch wie Alex total cool und abenteuerlich und genau wie Alexs Eltern, denken meine Eltern auch, dass Extremsport ganz gefährlich ist. Sie sind aber recht, aber warum muss man irgendwas vermeiden jedoch es zu gefährlich ist? Das ist Leben! Du musst dich doch trauen und Risikos nehmen! Aber wann ich meine Leidenschaft für jeder Extremsport zeige, lächeln sie immer und sagen,, du? Bist du körperlich anstrengend? Bist du fit? Bitte Traum nicht in unnötiges Träumen." Seit meiner Kindheit während dieses Zeittraums habe ich Lust für verschiedene Extrem- Sport wie Parkour, Skateboarden, Tauchen und Klippenspringen, aber ich hatte gar nicht eine Chance zu wahrnehmen. Hoffentlich eines Tages bekomme ich eine Chance, wenn ich mein Haus der Eltern weglassen. Ich drücke dir und mir die Daumen.
March 11, 2022
A Reply
I heard that the temperature where you live can be as high as 45 degrees, and it rarely goes below twenty degrees.
If I have the temperature around 20 degrees, I will be very happy because the weather is nice (the lowest temperature here will be negative 15 to 18 in the winter). How can you think it's cold?
When I say "I believe in youngsters" I mean I think they have the ability to do everything well, and they are reliable, positive and enterprising and so on. So I don't need to worry about them and talk about them too much in this aspect.
To recall a good memory when you are old, you need to work hard and not waste your time when you are still young.
I am not sure, but maybe. No matter whether things that happened in the past are good or not, I think they are all precious because they're my history, my growing up, my youth and my memory. I think most people will hold this perspective.
March 11, 2022
School Sports Day
Could you please tell me wich of these options is correct and WHY not the others?
The agenda of the school sports day ceremony is all set.
The event starts with the head teacher's speech about the benefits of participation in the field of sports.
Then a team of students are playing / will play/ are going to play/ will be playing volleyball against a team of teachers in the school hallway . Next, there will be various other sports played on the school playground until 3 p.m. Along with that the school band is going to sing/will sing/ will be singing their no 1 hits during the breaks in the games. Finally the PE teachers will / are going to distribute prizes to first and second place winners, and diplomas to the contestants who will have finished in other places.
Could you also tell me what the difference in meaning there is between
In 3 days their students will play a match against another school
and
In 3 days their students will be paying a match against another school?
March 10, 2022
March 10, 2022
Шутка
Мальчик говорит отцу:
"Папа, сегодня у нас был урок о капитализме, правительстве, рабочим классе и так далее, а я не всё понял. Пожалуйста, объяснени мне!
- Вот, сынишка, это не трудно. Возьмем, например, нашу семью. Я приношу деньги, чтобы содержать семью, так, можешь считать, что я капитализм, понятно? Твоя мама тебе показываешь, каким правилам тебе надо следовать, и каким нельзя. Она правительство. Ты, ты следуешь, ты народ. Твоя маленькая сёстренка, она всё ещё детка, так, можно считать, что она будущие поколения. Наконец, прислуга работает для нас, по этому, она рабочий класс. Ты понимаешь?
- Я не знаю...
- Подумай об этом, и завтра, всё будет понятным!"
Ночь наступает, сын идёт спать. Среди ночи, он просыпается от слез маленькой сёстры, которая очевидмо запачкала свой подгузник. Он дойдёт до комнаты родителей, но найдёт только одну, которая спит крепко и одна. Так как он улавливает слабые шумы из гостиной, он идёт туда, и найдёт отца занимающего со сексом с прислугой. Очень разочарованный мальчик решает вернуться в кровать и стараться спать.
Завтра, при завтраке, отец спрашивает:
- Так что, сын? Ты подумал о том, что я объяснил? Сейчас всё понятно?
- О, да, папа, очень понятно! Я понял, что спящее правительство не слушает народ в то время как капитализм трахает рабочий класс, и следоватеьлно, будущие поколения в говне !"
March 10, 2022
Une question de grammaire française
Je suis tombée sur une question qui demadait de choisir un bon choix pour chaque trou. Il semble que ma réponse soit inversée, mais je pense que ça passe. Ne dirait-on pas vraiment « faire mal au bras » ?
MA RÉPONSE : Elles dormaient quand elles sont tombées du lit. Elles se sont (blessées) et elles se sont (fait mal) au bras !
RÉPONSE : Elles dormaient quand elles sont tombées du lit. Elles se sont (fait mal) et elles se sont (blessées) au bras !
March 10, 2022
Chiste de barra
En el tiempo de los banditos y desperados, un grandullón está bibiendo su tequila en una barra, luego sale. Pero después de algunas minutas, vuelve de nuevo:
"¡Mi caballo! ¿Qué cabrón ha robado mi caballo?"
Ninguna respuesta.
Empieza mirando a cada hombre en los ojos, con una mirada asesina:
"Al ladrón le doy cinco minutos para que me devuelva mi caballo. Si no lo veo frente a la barra después de este plazo, voy a hacer lo que hice en Tijuana, hace diez años..."
Después de cinco minutos, sale otra vez, y el caballo está de nuevo aquí. Un hombre viejo le pregunta al grandullón:
"Digame, señor, qué ¿hizó en Tijuana, hace diez años?
— Bueno, volvé a casa a pie...
March 10, 2022
The Spy and the Traitor - 17
Summary num. 17.
This is a real story.
On 24 September 1971, the British government expelled 105 Soviet diplomats due to their “involvement in activities not related to their official duties"; in other words, they were spies. This mass expulsion had been brewing* for some time. MI5 had been aware of KGB operations in Britain, but decided to bide its time to inflict the most damage possible. The break finally came with the defection of a senior KGB officer, Oleg Lyalin. He was at the forefront of the 13th KGB’s department, which was responsible for drawing up contingency plans in the event of war with the West. These plans, of course, included sabotage operations in enemy countries, such as: targeting strategic infrastructures, neutralising enemy leadership and vip, activating the so-called sleepers, and so forth. All of this was greeted with concern by the few briefed British. However, it was also the perfect pretext MI5 had been waiting for to “legitimise” even more the mass expulsion. The impact it had on the KGB was massive. The KGB London station, one of the largest KGB station in the world, had been reduced overnight. The KGB would spend the next two decades struggling to restore it.
*Can I say “looming”?
March 10, 2022
March 10, 2022
It's harder than I thought
The past week I started watching Seinfeld because my professor told me that watch English TV shows without subtitles would help me improve my listening and pronunciation... But actually, it's really hard to understand everything.
Do you have any favorite TV show you think is easy to understand?
March 10, 2022
10 mars 2022 - le tueur de plantes
Je ne maîtise pas très bien la plantation. Comment je le sais ? J'ai eu l'expérience de faire pousser de basilic, de mint et de chili il y a deux ans. Bien que qu'ils grandisaient rapidement pendant les premières deux ou trois mois, au fur et à mesure, ils suffisaient de ravageurs et étions mort un après un parce que je n'avais pas leur payé beaucoup d'attention. Il y a aussi une fois que j'ai essayé de faire pousser le cactus qui bien entendu n'avait pas besoin beaucoup de soin mais malheureusement il était aussi mort deux mois après parce que j'avais arrosé trop de l'eau.
March 10, 2022
E-Bucher
Unser Lebens verändert sich schnell. In den letzten 20 Jahren, haben wir die großen Desktop-Komputer mit kleine kabellose Tablets ersetzt. Während mein Studium, es mein Träum war, hundert Bücher mitzunehmen, und jetzt habe ich meinen E-Buch Gerat dabei. Trotz ich meine Papierbücher liebe, ist es schön, viele dabei zu haben. Unsere Gewohnheiten sind nicht wie unserer Eltern. Ich bin sicher, dass unsere Kinder andere Lesegewohnheiten haben werden.
March 10, 2022
Learning Something Every Day
According to a book, we feel happy when I am developing.
If we have less growth rate than before, we might feel unhappy.
I agree some points because I like to do something different every day.
For example, I come back home with different ways each day.
Sometimes, I make a food with a little different ingredient.
With these experiences, I can learn something new every day, that is one of my happy.
March 10, 2022
Mes amis ont attrapé le covid :(
Tous mes amis ont attrapé le covid la semaine dernière et ils doivent rester à la maison pour empêcher la propagation du virus. Je suis dernière personne qui n'a pas attrapé le virus parmi mes amis.
Avant d'avoir attrapé le virus, on a placé un pari de 500 dollaire, la dernière personne qui n'a pas attrapé le covid gagne le 500 dollaire. C'est pari puis nous a encouragé de rester plus à la maison pour qu'on peut jouer plus de jeux vidéos et diminuer la chance d'attraper le covid. Je reste chez moi tous les jours sauf quand je dois faire un course. Je ouvre les fenêtres aussi pour une bonne circulation d'air.
Cette semaine, mes amis sont guéris et ils m'ont donné le 500 dollaire. En fait, je ne savais pas quoi faire avec cet argent, ainsi je l'ai conservé.
March 10, 2022
March 10, 2022
031001-Accepted My Offer
I accepted an email saying that my dream school had updated my application status when I woke up. I was nervous when I clicked the link to the status page in the email, and my hand was shaking. I wondered whether I would be accepted or not. Suddenly, a big Red Cross popped up, and I was shocked. However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found the university accepted me, and this red cross is a sign to remind me that I need to update some documents to get an I-20 visa. I burst out screaming and laughing.OMG! New York, I come!
March 10, 2022
March 10, 2022
IELTS T2 practice (3)
Topic:
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
My answer:
It is true that the method of interation among people was changed by technology. Comparing with the past, there are various ways human communitcates influenced by technology. I think that it is a positive development.
Here are the different aspects people changed during their relationship with others. Firstly, more people prefer to text online rather than hang out together, especially in the young people. For example, it is very sever in Japan that many male adults would stay at home for years, and they would never throw the garbage out which leads to they live with them for hundreds or even thousands days. Secondly, people are more afraid of social life than ever before which impact their daily life such as children, who would have a lonely childhood.
I think there are many disadvantages of the case. On one hand, most people can not live without communication in the complex society, especially in the cities. Although the technology is well developed, it can help with most of our need, especially the emotion need. Stay at home can not meet the need. On the other hand, the earth is so beautiful, it worth us to explore. Furthermore, there are still many people need our help personnally, the disabled inparticular. We should go out more to help the others to make the world more harmony.
In conclusion, many types of actions between human have been changed a lot by the development of technology, I would argue that it is bad for the society.
March 10, 2022
팟캐스트와 문법
지난 주에 새로운 팟캐스트를 듣기 시작했어요. 팟캐스트에 진행자가 배우들와 이야기해요. 일상, 일, 관계와 많이 다른 주제에 대해서 얘기해요. 팟캐스트 내용이 재미있는데 그 것을 아주 즐기고 있어요. 그래서 일을 하면서 팟캐스트를 자주 들어요.
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1. 초등학교에서 읽던 많은 만화를 이제 길은 소설을 읽어요.
2. 이번 주말에 아마 바쁠 테니 다음 주말에 만날래요.
3. 태연의 음악은 너무 좋아요! 새 앨범을 들 만해요.
4. 매일 공부도 겸 열심히 연습도 겸 성공한 사람이에요.
5. 크게 미인일 텐데 현재 아마 연예인을 있어요.
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1. 제 피부가 진짜 건성이네요!
이 새 로션을 쓰지 그래요?
2. 노트를 곧 돌려주죠?
물론이죠! 사실 지금 돌려던 참이에요.
3. 낡은 차를 정말 고치려고 할 거라니요?
맞아요! 그걸 재미있는 프로젝트예요.
4. 다들은 너무 떠들려요! 공무원이라고요?
네. 미래에 대통령이 됐으면 좋겠어요.
5. 공장을 열는다면서요?
네. 성공한 사업을 운영하고 싶어요.
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