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March 19, 2022
La prensa
Los prejuicios de la prensa del Oeste
La guerra en Ucrania ha sido terrible, y lo digo de la perspectiva de alguien la experimentando de manera personal. Es una terrible tragedia semejante de lo que pasó en Yugoslavia en los noventa y en Europa durante la segunda guerra mundial. Ni en inglés puedo expresar la angustia que me siento a menudo por leer la noticia.
La prensa del oeste se han enfocado muchísimo en el conflicto durante las últimas semanas. Y eso me pone feliz y amargo a la vez. Las organizaciones periodistas son una de nuestras vinculaciones principales con el resto del mundo; su único objetivo es (o al menos debería ser) informarnos de lo que esté pasando en el mundo sin prejuicios. Desafortunadamente, esta es una meta irrealista: todos los seres humanos, a pesar de nuestros mejores esfuerzos, vamos a tener prejuicios, aunque sean casi imperceptible. No obstante, las organizaciones periodísticas deberían intentar de todos modos darnos la verdad y cubrir todas las regiones del mundo con el mismo nivel de respeto que dan a Europa. Y esto no ha estado pasando.
Hay muchos conflictos por todo el mundo que son poco representados en nuestros periódicos. ¿Sabes de lo de Myanmar o lo de Etiopía? ¿Y lo de Madagascar, Siria y Afganistán? Mucho está sucediendo en el mundo ahora mismo, y debemos cubrirlo todo, para que la gente sepan la verdad.
March 19, 2022
March 18, 2022
Meine Vorstellung
Hallo zusammen. Ich heiße Humberto. Ich komme aus Ecuador und wohne in Manta. Ich kann Spanisch (meine Muttersprache), Englisch, Chinesisch und ein bisschen Deutsch sprechen. Ich mag gern Fußball aussehen und lesen.
Ich möchte nach Deustchland studieren, weil dorthin Spitzentechnologie hat. Ich glaube, dass die deutsche Kultur sehr interessant ist und die Sprache nicht so schwer ist. Jetzt lerne ich deutsch B1.1, am Ende des Jahres will ich ein B2 haben. Ich bin sehr zufrieden, da ich eine neue Sprache lerne.
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
Book - The Spy and the Traitor - 20
Summary no. 20
This is a real story.
Richard Bromhead was the head of the MI6 station in Copenhagen, which meant he was responsible for every MI6 operation in Denmark. Bromhead was the typical old-fashioned Englishman who would put on a cheerful facade to conceal his actual feelings. The head of the Danish Security Service and Bromhead found a shared strange interest: teasing and harassing suspected KGB agents. Some of whom were summoned back to Moscow. According to KGB’s policy, any agent that drew Western’s attention to itself was to be kept in Soviet territory and distrusted. The senior Danish officer had two agents carry out these harmless yet funny practical jokes on the Soviets. Bromhead even called these two Asterix and Obelix.
March 18, 2022
La presse
En classe on a discuté un texte qui parle d'un école, lequel allait visiter d'un journalist. Il a expliqué son travail et apres donner la classe un devoir. Il s'agit de faire un journal d'un sujet qui a un rapport avec la France. À cause de ce texte je réfléchir beaucoup de métier journaliste. Comme que ils doient faire tous les jours ou combien de temps ils travaillent. De plus il y a aussi différents sortes de journaliste. Donc quoi je veux dire c'est que journaliste est un plus dur et compliqué métier que j'ai cru.
March 18, 2022
A class excursion to the zoo
What about the trip?
Last week I did a school trip with my class colleagues to a zoo in Valencia. Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I were talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.
What we did?
When we arrived to the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map. We go over almost all the animal zones
Behind every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like theirs family belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits... I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework.
Recommendation
For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys. They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒.
March 18, 2022
031801 - An email about curriculum schedule
****would you love to help me correct this email writing to a professor? Thanks****
Dear Prof. Huang,
I am Tana Gao in MSCS-22-Fall program, and so glad to know that you are my advisor! I am writing to ask about the curriculum schedule.
As my undergraduate major in sociology, and I have not learned basic computer courses systematically, I am on the 36-credits track. But I learned some web development knowledge and had a short internship in front-end development. I hope to work in the US in the Internet industry for some time after graduation. What do you think to choose courses will be properly?
And before I arrive at Hoboken, what should I do to understand computer science better? Would you love to recommend some books or courses for me? I would appreciate it.
Best wishes,
Tana Gao
03/18/2022
March 18, 2022
A short message
Hi Sabine, it's been a long time since I stopped contacting you. I hope you are doing well.
Just over a month ago, I went through a lot of difficulties. Although that was what I never wanted, I could do nothing about it.
All of that has gone. Life needs to continue.
I still remember your last message, "I will be here whenever you are ready", which touched me very deeply.
I am here now and I hope everything is going up for us from now on.
Best wishes.
March 18, 2022
18 mars 2022 - Impossible
« Tous les matins au petit déjeuner je m’exerce à imaginer six choses impossibles. » – La Reine Blanche, Alice au Pays des Merveilles. Décrivez six choses impossibles.
1. La position du ciel et de la terre serait reversée.
2. Je serais en France dans la seconde suivante.
3. Je me plongerais à l'eau et trouverais un groupe des sirènes.
4. Je traverserais le manteau et le noyau.
5. J'aurais des ailes et donc je volerais à côte d'un avion.
6. Je parlerais le language de chats.
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
Spending a Week With My Sons
Because one of my sons is infected by the COVID-19, all of my family members should stay at home for a week.
My wife and I did the remote work and my first son who is in an elementary school studied remotely.
This was the first moment that my son studied remotely at home.
So we weren't familiar with the system, and we faced many issues during classes.
Fortunately, we finally finished all classes of this week without any big accident.
Tomorrow, we will check again, whether infected or not.
I hope that no one has a problem on the test.
March 18, 2022
Journal
I first knew English when I was in the first grade of middle school.
My first English teacher was an old man. My school hired him from another town. He taught us only for a few months before he left for the reason I didn't know.
One English sentence I remember clearly so far is "Dongfanghong tractors are made in Luoyang".
Our second English teacher was a young man. His name was Liuzhengguo. He just graduated from a normal school and he was very good at playing table tennis.
After graduating from middle school, I went to a technical secondary school. Although there was an English subject in the school, I didn't study it hard because studying in this school meant that I already got an opportunity to work in the government department.
After I worked, I almost forgot anything I had learned about English.
Around 2000, I bought a personal computer and I got to touch English again, but I just knew nothing about English apart from "yes" and "no".
In order to use the computer better, I bought a small computer English dictionary, and learned some simple English words.
This time, I am learning English just for fun, and focus on writing and speaking.
March 18, 2022
About studying music (C1 CAE Writing)
Write paragraphs to answer the question: about studying music
In some schools, students must study music and learn to play a musical instrument. In other schools, studying music may not be required or there may be no music classes at all.
Do you think all students should have to study music?
Support your opinion with reasons and examples.
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(Notes: is there anything that doesn’t sond natural? What would you write in replace of?)
(ANSWER)
Nowadays, working market is extremely competitive and is especially interested in scientist and technical areas of knowledge. That is the main reason why music is not a mandatory subject in most of schools.
As an class related to arts, music is not as promoted as other subjects due to the fact that is considered impractical for children's future and, an entertainment rather than a job for adults. These misconceptions of music classes is nowhere near to be correct. For example, Albert Einstein played violin, and he often said that music had helped him improve his creativity, what was really useful for him in physics. In other words, music favours the development of a better working brain in general terms.
Music has been part of us since our origins, so why do people not demand it as a compulsory subject in all schools? My opinion on this topic is very clear, students should benefit from music as much as they have to do with maths, biology or chemistry.
In addition to the above, playing musical instruments is a really amused way of interacting and communicating with other people. That could be an important tool for the music teacher to use in order to remove barriers between differents groups of children in the class and help some of them socialise.
Another reason to support music classes comes from the music that teens and youth usually listen. It is very repetitive and lacks of creativity (using always the sames tunes and samples). I used 'it' to highlight that I do not refer to any especific musical genre, though most people only think in Reggaeton at this point, wrongly.
To conclude, schoools should not be influenced by political or economical ideologies, in order not to give more importance to technical subjects and take back music to the classes.
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
Mein Tag
Heute ist der achtzehnte März. Es war ein normaler Tag für mich. Ich bin zur Schule gegangen und habe viel gearbeitet. Ich hatte zuerst Gesundheitsklasse. Es war ok. Wir haben etwas über Fitness und Sport gelernt. Dann habe ich mein Essen gegessen. Während ich aß, wurde ich nervös, weil ich einen Mathe Test hatte. Ich denke, ich habe es furchtbar gemacht. Aber ich bin froh, ein neues Theme zu beginnen.
An meiner Schule haben wir die Wahl. Wir können Griechisch oder Japanisch lernen. Ich habe Griechisch gewählt. Es ist ein sehr schweres Sprache, und ich wollte sie nicht lernen. Es gibt auch viele nervige and laute Studenten. Ich hatte immer Kopfschmerzen.
Nach der Mittagspause hatte ich Wissenschaft. Ich finde sie interessant aber manchmal schwer und verwirrend. Ich habe am Montag einen Test. Ich sollte wahrscheinlich am Wochenende lernen!
Heute ist Freitag, und ich bin sehr glücklich! Schule macht Spaß, ist aber auch sehr anstrengend. Jetzt kann ich mich endlich entspannend!
March 18, 2022
A Reply
20 to 30 degrees Celsius would be the nicer weather for humans to live in, however there is no this place.
China has an old saying,"赠人玫瑰, 手有余香" it means that when you give roses to other people, your hands remain rose aroma. Giving always makes people happier than taking.
I haven't made posts on HelloTalk for a while. I don't even know the reason, but I suppose I would be active there after not long.
Yeah, it snows every year where I live during the Chinese New Year. Now I don't like snow because it causes many troubles in our lives. For example, traffic issues, agricultural issues and so on.
I like island countries because they have beautiful scenery. Vast sea, tall mountains, green trees and colorful flowers. Moreover, the air there is extremely fresh.
I checked some photos of KL. The twin towers are very beautiful, but I don't know their names, and what they are for.
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
复述的劣等的说明2
假设有在笛卡尔坐标系上两点（1，7）和（5，4）。会不会相乘它们？如果尝试做这样，大概相乘两个x坐标成乘积的x，相乘两个y成为乘积的y。老实说，我不知道这种乘法是否可以得到有用的信息。这个例子的目的是演示“怎样会相乘这两点”这个问题不太容易并且不太有意义，直到改变观点为复数。
复数只是实数和虚数的和，并且我们会相乘实数和虚数，所以相乘1+7i和5+4i没问题。会把(1+7i)(5+4i)这种表达，就像普通的二项式同样地相乘。
(1+7i)(5+4i)=5+4i+35i+28i²
因为i²等于-1，5+39i-28=-23+39i。还得到了一个负数。在表面上，也许仍看起来没用。
代替看复数为a+bi，也会观察会表达每一点为从原点的距离和角度。平时，计算的角度是从原点到某点的线和正实轴之间的那角度。
相乘两个复数的时候，从原点的距离成为原本的距离的乘积，而角度成为原本的角度的和。所以使用复数会容易的表达旋转。
March 18, 2022
カラスの鳴き声
Mở bài
カラスの声(こえ)はいつも人々を怖がらせます。特に夜です。昔からはカラスは死(し)を象徴(しょうちょう)する動物でした。しかし、事実はそうなのですか。私と一緒に下のスピーチで詳しく調べてみましょう。
Thân bài
科学によると、カラスは非常に頭がいい動物です。でも、ベトナムでは、この鳥が誰かの家に向かって鳴くと、それは不運(ふうん)で心配なことだと信じられています。
カラスが鳴く理由はたくさんあります。たとえば、怪我をしたとか、同類(どうるい)を呼び出すとか、道に迷ったとか、危険に遭ったとかです。
しかし、人間にとって、カラスの鳴き声は別の意味を持っています。お金が失う合図、仕事の失敗、そして死のお知らせです。しかし、これは全く正しいわけではありません。
Triển khai
時間帯に、カラスの鳴き声の意味はさまざまです。いくつか例は以下の通(とお)りです。
９時から１１時まで：もうすぐ幸運があるそうです
１１時から１３時まで：突然に命(いのち)に影響(えいきょう)を与えるために病気を防(ふせ)ぐ必要があります。
１３時から１５時まで：ぬすみやとみの損失(そんしつ)に注(ちゅう)意するように警告(けいこく)するそうです
１５時から１７時まで：仕事に関する協力をすれば、成功しやすいです。
ベトナム語でカラスの鳴き声は「qua - qua」が一般的です。実はカラスの鳴き声は４０通りあります。世界の他のどの鳥より多いです。詳しく注意すると、カラスの鳴き声は、朝、昼、夜に…すべて違いがあります。 カラスの鳴き声はベトナムの社会的で、精神的(せいしんてき)な現象(げんしょう)です。
Kết luận
カラスの鳴き声は何を兆(きざ)しましか？スピーチの通り、人々はそれぞれ答えがありますね。しかし、これは民間(みんかん)の観念(かんねん)だけですから。カラスの鳴き声を聞いたときは心配しないで参照(さんしょう)することです
March 18, 2022
Pagar por el lavado de cerebro
Anoche, un jefe anterior me llamó inesperadamente después de unos 11 años.
Charlamos durante unos 5 minutos sobre los viejos tiempos, y de repente nos pusimos manos a la obra. Empezó a hablarme de problemas personales en su juventud, de cómo tuvo que afrontar también dificultades en su vida profesional como joven adulto, y finalmente salió a la luz de qué se trataba realmente.
Cayó en manos de una extraña organización. No son una secta (no tienen creencias esotéricas directas), pero utilizan un vocabulario que suena a panteísmo u otras religiones. Y utilizan métodos cercanos al lavado de cerebro con el pretexto de enriquecer la personalidad y superar los bloqueos internos, y hay que pagarles caro por ello. Y las víctimas son contratadas como "misioneros" de forma gratuita, de ahí su llamada. Contar la buena noticia y el gran éxito es una de las tareas del programa del grupo.
Después de haber hablado conmigo durante casi una hora, le dije con toda claridad que no me interesaba la organización.
March 17, 2022
Любовь?
Я попробую перевести тему, на которую я хочу ответить здесь: "Говорят, что лучше любить и проигрывать , чем никогда не любить. Вы согласны с этом утверждением?"
Во фильме (и книге) "Имя розы", сюжет которого расследование монаха Уильям Баскэрвилский в то время средневековия, персонаж Адсо Де Мэлк (юченик Уильяма) влюбляется в молодой крестьянке, а Уильям ему спрашивает: "Адсо, ты уровен, что ты не перепутаешь любовь со страстью?"
По мнению ученного монаха, который конечно знал традиционную разницу греческого происхождения между "ерос" (чувственной, эротической любовью) и "агапэ" (братской, духовной любовью), очень плотский "ерос" — обмачив, тогда как настоящая любовь происходит из сердца. "Ерос" — только желание владеть кем-то, но "агапэ" — личное чувство братства.
Очевидмо, это очень христианское мнение. Но это показывает что-то интересно: есть разные понимания слова "любовь". Кстати, я считаю, что старые языки (как греческий язык) точнее, чем наши, чтобы рассказывать о любви, но это другая тема. Я имею в виду, что мы называем ошибочно "любовь" разные чувства, которые на самом деле страсть или просто плотское желание. Ошибка ещё общее в наше время, где "любовь" стал видом поверхностного потребительства. Мы встречаем с людьми на Тиндер и других аппликациях, "потребляем" их и сразу после, забываем их.
Несмотря на это, мы все любим (кроме психопатов, может быть). Есть 1000 разных манер любить. Мы не должны резумировать лубовь плотскому челанию. Конечно, "ерос" — красив, магический, но часто, самые глубокие, устойчивые и настоящие виды любви не относятся к страстью, которую возможно видеть в многих голливудских фильмах.