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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Some students think that grades do not reflect the real performance in class, whereas others believe that grades are a good indicator to show how they are doing in class. I agree with the latter. I reckon grades are a good way to encourage students to study new things because they get satisfaction, may apply to a scholarship, and grades show capacity and skills that they already learned.
First off, every student in the world gets satisfaction when they get outstanding scores of homework, test, small quizzes, oral presentation, and so on. If they are doing well in academic life getting good grades, they probably feel excited about their performance. Then, they will get a special interest to learn new things in class. Consequently, students can improve their scores, for example, a B+ into a –A.
Secondly, master’s and PhD candidates are increasing around the world, so they should have good grades in order to apply to higher studies. Even college students are preparing in their academic life to study abroad or at a good institute in future. In this point, it is difficult to find cheap programs in the world, then many students try to get a scholarship in order to achieve their own goals. That is the reason because many students try to get good scores to get a scholarship. Therefore, they will learn more if they want to have a good grades. I remember when I was a student. I used to study too hard because I wanted to study my master’s abroad. This small habit encourage me to learn new things in my academic life.
Lastly, good grades support students showing their capacity and skills that they already learned. Any student is proud of the acquired knowledge in classroom. They feel more confident about their own skills, and in a short time, they will want to learn more. All of this, thanks to get better scores. I remember when I was a student in high-school, I normally got excellent grades in math, physics, and chemistry; yet I had terrible scores in biology. Therefore, I did not feel comfortable in that class. After that, I started preparing for my biology class by myself, and finally got better scores, more confident in that class, and I obtained more knowledge about human system what was the topic in my class.
To sum up, I agree that grades help to students to learn new things due to the satisfaction when they get good scores, to get a scholarship, and to show the skills already learned.
Oct. 7, 2021
WRITERS.
I specially admire the people with the capacity of writing beautifully, because :
• They possess talent for writing about fantasy or real world in an amaze form. They have the capacity of transporting you to places, feeling, scenes, ages without problem.
• Writers can give order to their own ideas or feelings, allowing to other people give order to their ones through their writing.
• Some writers utilize their abilities for manipulating situations, people, even countries with their knowledge of using the appropriate word in the opportune moment. I disagree about this behave, but it is happening.
• This people habitually enjoy others fascinating qualities, as, imagination, observation, curiosity, introspection, analysis, criticism.
• They display the talent of expressing and perceiving the life in a creative form.
I am so grateful because talent people like them, because they color life.
Oct. 7, 2021
"Я знаю що я їжу!"
"Я знаю що я їжу! Я весь час їжу ці ягоди!" Він запевнив дружину.
"Мама в цьому не помилилася, Тату! Нічого не можна відмовити. Потрібно дивитися під кожним кутом. Що завгодно могло спричинити вашу хворобу." Вона захистила, здивувавши свого батька, взявши сторону матері.
Мама права, тату. Нічого не можна відмовити. Потрібно дивитися під кожним кутом. Що завгодно могло спричинити вашу хворобу. "Його дочка захистила, здивувавши батька, ставши на бік матері.
Oct. 7, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
Verbessern Sie mich bitte!
**Betreff
Sie schreiben einem/einer Freund/in, weil Ihr gemeinsamer Freund Manuel ein Problem hat.
Er hat die letzte Prüfung nicht bestanden, ist sehr traurig und weiß nicht, was er tun soll.
Beschreiben Sie: Was ist passiert?
Begründen Sie: Warum wollen Sie Manuel helfen?
Machen Sie einen Vorschlag, was Sie für ihn tun könnten.
Achten Sie auf den Textaufbau (Anrede, Einleitung, Reihenfolge der Inhaltspunkte, Schluss).
**Mein Text
Lieber John,
wie geht es dir? Ich hoffe gut. Stell dir vor: Letzte Woche habe ich mit Manuel ein Bier getrunken. Weißt du was, er war sehr traurig und müde, weil er die letzte Prüfung nicht bestanden hat. Obwohl er fit in Mathematik ist, hat er ein 4 bekommen. Ich denke, dass wir Manuel helfen müssen, da er das Studium abbricht möchte. Ich finde das wirklich schade und ich schlage vor, dass wir Manuel besuchen, um mit ihm zu sprechen und dann eine Lösung zu finden. Ich schlage vor, dass wir uns am Sonntag um 16 Uhr treffen und sprechen dann darüber, falls es dir passt. Was hältst du davon?
Bitte antworte mir bald!
Liebe Grüße
Maria
Oct. 7, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
La Pizza Pazza
Ciao a tutti! C'è il mio primo testo in italiano.
Leggo un libro in italiano : la prima storia del libro parla di un ragazzo e la sua sorella, Daniel e Julia, che sono studenti di intercambio.
Viaggiano in Italia. Il amico di Daniel, Armando, è un studente italiano che aiuta gli studenti di intercambio. Armando aspetta gli fratelli all'aeroporto di Roma. Tutti vanno all'appartamento di Armando. Daniel e Julia vogliono mangiare. Julia sceglie di mangiare a un ristorante dove servono piatti tipici, e Daniel prende l'autobus per andare al ristorante "La Pizza Pazza".
Daniel ha tanto sonno e dorme in l'autobus. Sveglia a Napoli. Vuole chiamare la sua sorella ma non ha batteria nel telefono. Lui va a un albergo per passare la notte.
Il giorno successivo, Daniel vede un camion con la scritta "La Pizza Pazza". Chiede al corriere se può venire a Roma con lui. Il corriere accetta ma dice a Daniel che deve stare nel retro del camion. Lì, Daniel trova un anziano signore nascosto tra le casse di mozzarella. L'anziano dice a Daniel che non conosce il suo figlio e va a Roma per lo trovare.
Arrivano a Roma, davanti "La Pizza Pazza". Entrano nel ristorante per mangiare, ma c'è 5 del pomeriggio, presto per la cena. Vanno nell'appartamento di Armando. Non c'è nessuno. Daniel carica il telefono e chiama Julia. Julia e Armando vengono a casa. E Armando incontra il suo padre per la prima volta.
La fine.
Sono molto felice perché ho capito quasi tutto. E c'è la mia prima volta che scrivo in italiano. Grazie per la correzione!
Oct. 7, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
English Language Phobia
Today I was watching a video of Jhanvi Panwar on 'how to stop translating English in the back of our mind'. It is a common problem with English learners. We tend to think first in Hindi then translate it to English. So in this video she has discussed that this way is going to be very difficult for people who wishes to speak some day English fluently. she belives that it is a time consuming process and it builds fear because if someone asked you something in English and before speaking you're just thinking about the grammar, words, phrases, sentence structure whether all are correct or not. such process leads to fear among that person and won't let the person speak English fluently.
In her video she said that people should change their language approach. if you are at a beginner level then it's OK to understand English with your native language but in the advanced level you should change your approach like start listening to English songs, watch more english content, observe their expressions, their tone of the dialogues, etc. The excerpt is surround more yourself with English environment to learn it fast.
And in the end she said English is just a language don't treat it like a subject. You cannot cram everything of this language in a one go, gradually your level goes up. So be patient and practice it everyday.
Oct. 7, 2021
Mi juventud
(Estoy practicando la diferencia entre del pretérito y el imperfecto, entonces si pudieras enfocarte en esto me lo agradercía)
Cuando era niño, me gustaba hacer muchas cosas. Tomé clases de nadar por algunos años, y para un tiempo pequeño pensé que quería ser salvavida. También me encantaba leer--era un adicto. Por las noches, escondía libros en mi cama una hora antes del tiempo de dormir, así que mis padres no pueden sacarlos de mí. Pasaba muchas horas tarde en la noche leyendo con una linterna. Otra cosa que me gustaba hacer era jugar con otros niños en nuestro cuadra. Durante el año de escuela, inmediatemente después de las clases terminaron, los niños de la cuadra jugabamos etiqueta, el escondite, y caputura la bandera. Jugabamos hasta que el sol bajaba y nuestros padres nos llamaron.
Oct. 7, 2021
Quel aspect de votre culture vous rend fier ?
Quel aspect de votre culture vous rend fier ?
Je pense que notre multiculturalisme nous a donné une augmentation à notre niveau de tolérance pour les traditions pratiqués pour notre prochain, que, en conjonction avec delle lois plus strictes, a causé une réduction de cas de racisme pendant les ultime ans.
On peut dire que notre multiculturalisme a aussi un côté bénéfique que un côte négatif, puisque le pays non aura une identité nationale (même si c'est que donne à le pays sa individualité), mais je pense que les pour surpassant les contre pour que la multiculturalisme peut être considéré comme quelque chose que peut améliorer a vie de la population.
(pardon my terrible French, I just started learning a few days ago :p)
Oct. 7, 2021
A nyelvi vágy
Nem tudom ha vágy, de, én mindig izgatott vagyok amikor könyvesbolt megyek. Először megyek a idegen nyelvű rész keresni új könyvek magyarul, kínaiul, oroszul. Azt nem értem, de szeretem is venni könyvek idegen nyelveken. Még az nyelvek hogy most nem akarok tanulni! Múlt hónapban vettem egy könyvet jorubában, és idén nem fogok jorubát tanulni! Nem tudom amikor, de, talán egy nap….
Oct. 7, 2021
De grande enseignes
Au Japon, j'ai habité en banlieue industrielle (plus pécisément à mi-chemin de la compagne et la banlieue) pendant 4 ans, et il y avait beaucoup de grandes enseignes. Même si j'ai conduit environ 15 ou 20 minutes, la pluapart des restaurants était ceux de grande ensigne, et ils jalonnaient la route sans cesse. Ils étaient bien pratiques, à cause de leurs prix plus que raisonnables et de la qualité de repas toujours très stable. Néanmoins, ils rendaient le village très bannale et ennuyant avec peu d'originalité.
Quand on va à l'étranger, ce genre de magasins est rassurant car leurs enseignes restent toujours presque la même dans le monde entier. Starbucks a le logo unique et très célèbre, et on peut reconnaître la marque sans moindre problème avec lui. La carte varie d'une région à l'autre en appliquant des spécialités de la région, mais leurs boissons restent principalement la même : un café, un cappucino, un frappechino etc. avec les trois tailles (je crois qu'il y a des appellations sécifiques mais je ne m'en souviens plus).
Pour ma part, j'aime bien les resaurants et les magasins individuels, mais je pense également que ça serait difficile de restaurer le nombre des magasins individuels au Japon. Les grandes enseignes ont l'advantage en pouvoir d'achats. Ils se procurent des ingrédients ou des matières première en grande quantité, ce qui leur permet d'en obtenir à prix très raisonnables, alors que les petites magasins ne peuvent pas le faire. Ça entraîne la différence de prix de produits ou de services, favorisant des achats ou des fréquantations aux grandes enseignes. Côté consommateurs, la salaire moyenne baisse de plus en plus comparé aux prix à la consommation. Ils n'ont pas les moyens pour manger locale.
Oct. 7, 2021
Que tipo de medios consumes en otras lenguas
En Español me encanta leer bbcnews-mundo, e a veces wikipedia español. Pero, en las otras lenguas cuáles me interesen, siempre estoy probando de leer artículos por el internet. Por ejemplo, siempre quiero leer artículos por húngaro, pero la lengua me frustre porque es tan difícil y no tengo el conocimiento suficiente para tener comprensión. Yo puedo a veces leer en portugués, y esto es todo. Un día querría leer en húngaro, chino, ruso, y mejorar mi comprensión de español, portugués, polaco, y sí….esto es todo que puedo decir ahora!
Oct. 7, 2021
Act Like A Detective (Part One)
When the class begun, I received a call from athe monitor's father. He told me that there was a boy in Class 2 harassed his daughter continuoursly during the National Vacation. The cause was the boy accused the girl of ruining his uniform on 28th September, he asked the girl to compensate. But the girl denied the accusation.
On 28th Sept., I was noticed the incident. I told the girl fix it personally, because both Ms. Li and me thought it was a joke between them. The girl told me that she had talked with the vice headmaster about it. So I considered the thing was over. Hence, I was really surprised when I heard the phone. The father told me that he had communicated with the moral director, but the director wasn't at school at that time.
Then I went to the office, the boy was there with Ms. Li. I asked the boy for his phone to check his dialogue with the girl. He didn't hand it to me immediately, even I told him that I was so busy. I checked on his phone, and recorded the dialogue. There were some harassed emojis, and the content of his voices were very harassed as well. I told him that what he did was sexual harassment, it was illegal, expecially the girl is under 14. He was silent.
(I will continue it tomorrow.)
Oct. 7, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
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Un dilemma tra il trasporto a propulsione animale ed i diritti degli animali.
Può darsi che l'epoca del trasporto a propulsione animale sia qualcosa che appartiene al passato. Nonostante questo, ci sono delle organizzazioni turistiche che approfittano degli elefanti (in Thailandia) ed i cammelli (a Dubai) per guadagnarsi da vivere, attraverso il rinvigorimento dei sentimenti nostalgici nei turisti. Prima di sviscerare il panorama della propulsione animale, bisogna ricordare che non si può generalizzare il modo in cui gli animali sono trattati, a scanso di equivoci, poiché le maldicenze possono aggravare la situazione.
Allora, sono un fautore fervoroso dell'uso degli animali selvaggi per propulsare l'industria turistica, purché siano sufficientemente nutriti e badati. Oserei perfino ribadire che potrebbero essere un'alternativa fattibile per quanto riguarda l'ambito del trasporto pubblico, dal momento che non emettono nessun gas serra.
È pertanto un crepacuore osservare come alcuni animali vivono in uno strazio constante. Un esempio che si è stagliato alle decine di video caricati su Instagram e YouTube è quello di un elefante gettato alla rinfusa in una piscina e comandato dal direttore di circo a svolgere dei trucchi acrobatici. Il direttore lo flagellava forsennatamente per obbligarlo a farlo. Sono sicuro che i postumi di questo atto bruttale basterebbero per tormentarlo fino alla morte.
Sarò reciso nella mia risposta: questo tipo di comportamento non si deve né permettere né perdonare mai. Non è consono. Ma è anche evidente che questo è il frutto imputridito delle leggi lasse, promulgate con lo scopo di acchiappare gli abusatori.
Non voglio annoiarvi ulteriormente con questa cantilena. Insomma, sebbene ci siano delle bocche da sfamare, conviene agire sempre in modo etico.
Oct. 7, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
Albrecht Dürer
Albrecht Dürer war ein Mann von beeindruckendem Genie. Seine Holzschnitte waren absolut spektakulär, sie sehen überhaupt nicht aus, als wären sie auf Holz entstanden. Zu seinen berühmten Werken zählen sein Gemälde "Adam und Eva", die Zeichnung "Betende Hände" und die Gravur eines Nashorns. Das letztere ist besonders bemerkenswert, denn Dürer zeichnete das Nashorn, ohne jemals eines im wirklichen Leben zu sehen, er tat alles basierend auf Beschreibungen, die er gelesen hatte. Dann gibt es auch seine Meisterwerke, die drei Kupferstiche: "Ritter, Tod und Teufel", "Der heilige Hieronymus im Gehäus" und "Melencolia I"
Ich denke, es lohnt sich, etwas zu Melencolia I zu kommentieren. Es ist in vielerlei Hinsicht ein sehr symbolischer Kupferstich, dessen genaue Bedeutung bis heute nicht geklärt ist. Man bemerkt zum Beispiel das magische Quadrat auf einer Seite, die beiden Engel und einen seltsam aussehenden geometrischen Körper. Der geometrische Körper selbst ist bis heute umstritten, um welchen es sich handelt und wie und warum er ihn gezeichnet hat. Dürers Interesse für Geometrie war kein Geheimnis, er war bereits nach Italien gereist und hatte sich dort mit den Künstlern vertraut gemacht. Es wird angenommen, dass er sogar von den Werken Leonardos selbst beeinflusst wurde, wenn nicht direkt von den Lehren von Luca Pacioli.
Im Jahre 1520 reiste er mit seiner Frau in die Niederlande und malte eine Reihe wunderbarer Aquarelle sowie eine Reihe von Adelsporträts der Region. Er schien seine Frau zu mögen, ein Porträt, das er kurz nach der Hochzeit anfertigte, trägt die Aufschrift "Mein Agnes". Kurz nach seiner zurückkehr nach Nürnberg verstarb er leider im Jahre 1528.
Ich denke, eine besonders unterschätzte Werkreihe von ihm sind seinen Werken um Knoten.
Oct. 7, 2021
Internet In The Past
When I was young, the internet was not fast enough.
If I tried to download a picture file, I should wait more than 20 seconds.
That’s why many sites were full of text at that time.
After announcing faster internet services Iike ADSL, IDSL, I could see websites with pictures on the web browsers.
But the design of web sites were not still good because it was so hard to create a web site, so only SW programmers could make it.
As you know, many programmers don’t have an idea of good design.
Now we can see many beautiful websites on the phone.
Moreover, we can see video clips, and we can see even live broadcasts on the internet.
So, the internet is more and more faster now, and I want to know what is next.
Oct. 7, 2021
Major Scandal in Brazil
A major scandal struck the Brazilian people a few days ago as the news that Prevent Senior - a health care insurer - supposedly used some its pacients as guinea pigs came to light.
According to the report, the company carried out a secret research to test the effectiveness of medicines like chloroquine and ivermectin against Covid-19. According to the doctors and ex-doctors of the company who made the denounce, the administration of the medicines were made without the pacient or his/her family's knowledge or permission, and at least nine people would have died during the tests. Also, the doctors were told to work without masks to help spread the disease.
The case is still under investigation and there is evidence that the federal government would be involved too. Nobody was arrested ao far.
Oct. 7, 2021
63 Hard to Relate to
63 Hard to Relate to
Jesse, a Youtuber, is excited to be sharing some different contents over the next couple of weeks. When she started to do to establish a YouTube channel, she did have a wall up. She made sure that she said everything through smiles. She didn't want to pass negative emotions. However, she didn't know what the viewers think of her videos. They have some positive feelings and some negative feelings as well.
“She comes across as a positive, motivated, uplifting person. I wish my room would look like that.” one Of viewers said.
“That can be somewhat hard to relate to. People will be watching and thinking like, you know, I wish I could be that positive. But it's hard to take the suggestion when you don't see the context that she is put in.’
Oct. 7, 2021
Expressing result
Result from what sb has done:
Why are you tired?
- I haven't slept at night.
- I haven't had enough sleep this night.
- I haven't fallen asleep a single once this night.
- I I have lifted up that heavy wheel.
- I have taken the little one iin my arms . (He's really heavy)
- Ive had a hard day.
Result from what sb has been doing:
Why are you tired?
- I haven't been sleeping for the last night.
- Ive been staying awake all the night.
-She's been talking too much and I didn't have any time for myself.
Are those correct present perfect and present perfect continuous sentences?
Oct. 7, 2021
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