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날 보는 눈이
난 작은 아파트에서 혼자 살고 있잖아..아니..그 날까지 혼자 살고 있었어 근데 그 날부터 내 벽에 둘 큰 무섭게 날 보는 눈이 있었다. 왜 경찰을 안 부렸어, 이렇게 생각했고 그죠? 난 경찰들을 부렸지만 그들이 눈을 볼 수 없어!! 우리 가족과 친구도..다들 이눈들을 볼 수 없어!! 그래서 그 날부터 난 혼자 살고 않아다. 눈이랑 같이 살고 있었어.
시작에 너무 무섭지만 많이 돈을 없으니까 다른 곳을 이사하는 것 아주 비싼데. 그래서 난 그냥 익숙했어 근데 요새 이 눈이 빨간색 있구나 너무 무섭게 날 보고 있어..아침부터 밤까지 난 그눈을 정신에서도 보고 있어..꿈에서도 시시각각 그 눈이 날 보고 있다. 그래서 난 미친것 같았어 소름이도 돋았어. 여러분, 어떡해 해야 됐어요? 도와주세요
끝 - 상상한 이야기
Oct. 8, 2021
64 Everything is Convenient.
64 Everything is Convenient.
Hi, this is Kevin. I'm going to show you my day in the first tier city in China, called Shanghai. This is my bedroom. Out there is my balcony. Tucked away here in the corner, is bathroom and shower. If you look there, you'll see my little kitchen. The little room is only 56 square meters. I stand in the Yangpu district of Shanghai, so the housing is considerably expensive. It ranges between 4000 to 8000 yuan. It's the end of the month. so I need to pay for my light, my internet and my phone. The great thing about China is that everything is convenient. I just need to go into a single APP. Convenience store is everywhere on the street.
Oct. 8, 2021
Canção da Batalha
Normalmente, eu não ouço canções chinesas, mas eu gostava a canção nos anos passados, chama-se "Canção da Batalha" de Mayday.
Outra vez eu tento traduzir em português.
Quando a pareda fica só bloquear todas as ânsias da liberdade
Quando a fé não pode resistir todas as guerras e fome
Em caos de Lan Ling, o paraíso e a terra separam porques eles foram esqueídos
Eu não tenho mede da cova anônimo, já tenho medo da tortura do humano
A noite não tem terminado, o céu não tem iluminado
Estou em o só campo de batalha
Eu só espero encontrar a cara que eu tenho saudade na minha vida
Minhas lágrimas não estão secas e meu coração está quente
Canção da Batalha com minha soberba sem remorso
Quando o facto pode esconder até as pessoas esquecem por um mão
Escrever a página do impulso que as nossas páginas foram brilhantes
A tinta fermentava pelas mils anos, já estou bebâdo que eu posso ewquecer minha tristeza.
Não lamento da locura jovem, já espero minha ambição iluminar
A noite não tem terminado, o céu não tem iluminado
Estou em o só campo de batalha
Eu só espero encontrar a cara que eu tenho saudade na minha vida
Minhas lágrimas não estão secas, como está quente?
Canção da Batalha, quem é cançando sozinho na situação indefesa?
Não posso esquecer, não posso perdoar, e eu estou zangado e ódio ilimitado
Não posso limpar, não posso remover todas as fantasmas
As crianças estão fomes, as habitantes estão desabrigadas
Quem é roubar?
Mil anos depois, você e eu estavámos amamentados
A noite já tem terminado, o céu já tem iluminado, o luz na manha tem ocultado o luz de estrela
Assim nós serámos enterrandos na enchente da história
Quando todas as pessoas esquecem quem meu sangue esteve quente pelo
Entrar a batalha, já porque estou decepcionado
Oct. 8, 2021
Best friend will immigrant
When I say “Best friend” only means in definition.
For example, when he was stumble in his career.
I didn’t look down at him and treat him still like a normal person.
When I go to Japan alone, he is the only person come to airport say goodbye.
When I return from Japan, he is the only person come to airport and welcome me!
However, because we are so different in our style.
We never talk about our truth feeling.
Man-man friend relationship is different to man-woman friend.
Anyway, he will going disappear in my life.
Good luck to him and his family in a new life.
I hope I can move to Japan soon.
Oct. 8, 2021
October 8th, 2021
I went to the dentist for a check up. I go every six months. I had no problem today. I felt good because I got my dentist to remove the tartar.
By the way, A big earthquake occurred in Tokyo last night. I live in Osaka, so I felt nothing. It was the biggest earthquake since the Great Tohoku Earthquake ten years ago. The global warming has progressed since around 1990 and the number of typhoons coming to Japan is increasing. I feel that the number of big earthquakes has increased in recent years. It feels like as if the earth is angry.
Oct. 8, 2021
What I do when I need chicken breast
When I need chicken breast I do the following: First, If I am shirt-less, I put on a shirt. I take my bike, open the door, and being at the threshold I make sure that I have the keys of my bike's lock and my mask (here for entering to a supermarket it is necessary to use a mask). After that I bike to a supermarket that is near my house. I stop some meters before the entrance, at a place where a big and long guardrail lies, and lock my bike to the rail or to one of its pots. I enter to the supermarket, go directly to the butcher shop. If there is someone, I just stand in line after him; if not, I ask the butcher for one big chicken breast or more (depending on the day and the money I got). This butcher shop has its own employees and is in some sense independent from the supermarket, but you should pay for your order in the supermarket's cash register. I go to the registers and select the one with less people or less things to be pay (because sometimes there is only a person with a big shopping). I wait as long as is needed and pay for my chicken. I go out and do the former actions in reverse: unlock the bike, get on the bike, ride it to my same, make sure I have the chicken and the change, and finally I throw open my door and take off my shirt.
Oct. 8, 2021
"Guten Abend! Es ist Essenszeit!"
"Guten Abend! Es ist Essenszeit!" DW erscheint mit Suppe auf dem Dachboden, der Krieger im Bett starrt ihn an.
"Was machst du dir Sorgen? Ich habe keine schädlichen Medikamente hinzugefügt." Er versicherte ihr.
"Maddi hat diese Suppe extra für dich gemacht." erklärte er, bevor er den grimmigen Ausdruck in ihren Augen sah und sich fragte, warum jemand einer heißen Suppe wiederstehen konnte.
"Komm schon? Es ist das perfekte Trostessen, um die Trauer zu überstehen." versicherte er, bevor er mit dem gleichen feindseligen Blick zurückkehrte.
"In Ordnung! Ich nehme diese Herausforderung an." Er lächelt selbstbewusst, als der Kampf begann, den Krieger zu ernähren.
DW rennt voraus, hält einen großen Löffel Suppe in der Hand und weiß, dass man eine Kriegerin am besten füttern kann, wenn man sie austrickst. Konzentriert seine Aufmerksamkeit auf das Zeil vor ihm, mit einem cleveren Plan, bevor ihm eine starke Faust direkt ins Gesicht schlägt, während der eigene Angriff des Kriegers ihn durch die Falltür zurück schickt.
"Я ненавиджу овочі!" schreit R wütend, als der Topf auf den Boden fällt und ein riesiges Durcheinander hinterlässt.
Maddi ist überrascht, ihren Stiefsohn auf dem Boden zu finden.
"Oh DW! Was ist passiert? Du musst Schmerzen haben!" Sie nimmt ihn in ihre Arme, "während er vor Qual stöhnt.
Dieser Moment erinnerte die DW an die Zeit, als er seinen eigenen ältesten Bruder durch die Falltür fallen ließ, nachdem er sich über eine Schüssel mit bittergrünem Gemüse geärget hatte.
"Was immer du tust, Maddi .... Serviere ihr nicht das Gemüse ... oder du wirst dein Ende finden .... "Er spricht heiser, schließt die Augen, tut so, als würde er sich dem Tod anschließen, auf humorvolle Weise.
"Ich verstehe. Wir müssen in ihrer Nähe aufpassen!" Maddi nimmt zur Kenntnis, dass der Krieger, den sie aus dem heftigen Meer gerettet hatten, nicht freundlich war. Dann nimmt sie ihren Stiefsohn mit ins Büro und versorgt ihn mit medizinischen Hilfsmitteln.
Oct. 8, 2021
Влияние цифровизации на мою жизнь
Я даже не помню, когда начала день не с телефона. Я из поколения, которое по-английски называют "digital native" – по-русски, цифровой абориген. Предлагается, что технология является нашим родным языком, и во многих аспектах, это совершенно верно.
Ясно, что технология упрощает нашу жизнь во многих ситуациях. Телефоны, например, позволяют нас поддерживать связь с родственниками и друзьями в других странах и общаться с ними при желании. Мы имеем доступность к бесконечным источникам развлечения, включая Ютуб, Нетфликс, Хулу и все остальные потоковые платформы, не говоря уже о прямой эфир, который позволяют нам следовать за новостями в режиме реального времени. К тому же, участники в онлайновых форумах могут обсуждать интересные вопросы и высказывать свое мнение, выстраивая отношения с другими пользователями.
Тем не менее, следует признать, что технология также усложняет нашу жизнь и может угрожать наше эмоциональное здоровье. Недавние исследования показывают, что у пользователей соцсетей может быть повышенный риск депрессии и даже самоубийства. Кроме того, троллам в интернете несложно распространять дезинформацию и фейковые новости, которые порождают политические конфликты. И, наконец, хотя можно общаться с людьми в соцсетях, те, кто долго сидит за компьютером могут испытывать одиночество и страдание, которые не связаны с очными контактами.
Как говорится, всё хорошо в меру. Надо быть осторожны с интернетом, но это не значит, что технология – сила зла. Без технологий, я никогда не познакомилась бы с моим партнерам языкого обмена, не получила бы исправления на этом сайте, не смогла бы смотреть первенство России по фигурному катанию и всё время заблудилась бы, даже в родном городе. У меня плохое чувство направления. Не могу представить жизнь без Гугл-карты.
Oct. 8, 2021
Journal
It's true that the change of seasons will bring about emotional changes, but I don't think I belong to this situation.
I think sometimes I am sentimental, but the situation won't last long and I can be back to normal soon.
Summer has indeed passed. In the past few days, the highest temperature hasn't exceeded 23 degrees and the lowest temperature has dropped almost to 10 degrees. I have to wear two clothes to keep warm now.
In the blink of an eye, this year has almost passed. I have been studying hard in English and I dare not to waste even the slightest amount of time. I don't know if I have made some progress, but I do think that I should have made some progress.
I suddenly thought of the famous poet HaiZi and his poems were very well written. Let me read one of his poems to share with you.
Oct. 8, 2021
Mi cumpleaños
Mi cumpleaños es el sábado. Cumpliré 31 años. Por primera vez en años pasaré el día con mi familia, y siguen preguntándome qué quiero hacer. No me importa ni un poco porque no me gusta celebrar mi cumpleaños. La razón es que sucedió algo traumático en mi decimocuarto cumpleaños. No creo que ellos sepan que todavía me pongo ansiosa cada año. Todo lo que quiero hacer es relajarme y disfrutar de la comida india para llevar, que es lo que he hecho durante años.
Oct. 8, 2021
Oct. 8, 2021
Reseña de película: "Barking Dogs Never Bite" (parte 4)
El final de la película es interesante. Park huye del hombre sin hogar, y su amiga Jang-mi llega y golpea al hombre. La policía viene y lo arresta. Park devuelve el perro a Ko, que está muy feliz que el perro fue encontrado. Park y su esposa prepara una torta con el soborno escondido adentro, y Ko va a encontrarse con el profesor que quiere sobornar. Ellos beben mucho, y Ko se vuelve borracho. Mientras tanto, Park mira la televisión, donde ve un reportaje sobre el arresto del hombre sin hogar, que ha sido culpado por las autoridades para todos los desapariciones de perros. Park está decepcionada que su acto de heroísmo no fue reconocido. Ko regresa a su casa y se topa con Park, que acabo de enterarse que ha sido despido de su trabajo. Ellos charlan un poco y Ko está vencido por la culpa. Trata de decir a Park que él era el ladrón de perros, pero ella no lo entiende. La película termina con una escena de Ko en un aula, haberse realizado el sueño de ser profesor.
Como dije antes, me gustó esta película mucho. Trata de temas variados como la importancia de la "carrera" y el impacto que puede tener en nuestras vidas, y además la culpa y la verdad. Por ejemplo, parece que quizás Park no quiera saber la verdad sobre la identidad del ladrón - quizás porque el hombre sin hogar es un sospechoso estereotípico de crímenes, y no el hombre bien educado como Ko. Por otro lado, Ko también trata de revelar la verdad a Park, pero en una manera indirecta, y cuando ella no lo entiende, él no hace más esfuerzos, optando para continuar su vida como nuevo profesor. El estereotipo de la esposa molesta es también un blanco de la película - de hecho, Eun-sil sacrifica mucho por el ego de su esposo, y le ayuda limpiar sus líos. Ko, que no puede tolerar hasta el sonido de los ladridos, parece un "hombre niño" que no está en control de su propia vida.
Oct. 8, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Some students think that grades do not reflect the real performance in class, whereas others believe that grades are a good indicator to show how they are doing in class. I agree with the latter. I reckon grades are a good way to encourage students to study new things because they get satisfaction, may apply to a scholarship, and grades show capacity and skills that they already learned.
First off, every student in the world gets satisfaction when they get outstanding scores of homework, test, small quizzes, oral presentation, and so on. If they are doing well in academic life getting good grades, they probably feel excited about their performance. Then, they will get a special interest to learn new things in class. Consequently, students can improve their scores, for example, a B+ into a –A.
Secondly, master’s and PhD candidates are increasing around the world, so they should have good grades in order to apply to higher studies. Even college students are preparing in their academic life to study abroad or at a good institute in future. In this point, it is difficult to find cheap programs in the world, then many students try to get a scholarship in order to achieve their own goals. That is the reason because many students try to get good scores to get a scholarship. Therefore, they will learn more if they want to have a good grades. I remember when I was a student. I used to study too hard because I wanted to study my master’s abroad. This small habit encourage me to learn new things in my academic life.
Lastly, good grades support students showing their capacity and skills that they already learned. Any student is proud of the acquired knowledge in classroom. They feel more confident about their own skills, and in a short time, they will want to learn more. All of this, thanks to get better scores. I remember when I was a student in high-school, I normally got excellent grades in math, physics, and chemistry; yet I had terrible scores in biology. Therefore, I did not feel comfortable in that class. After that, I started preparing for my biology class by myself, and finally got better scores, more confident in that class, and I obtained more knowledge about human system what was the topic in my class.
To sum up, I agree that grades help to students to learn new things due to the satisfaction when they get good scores, to get a scholarship, and to show the skills already learned.
Oct. 7, 2021
WRITERS.
I specially admire the people with the capacity of writing beautifully, because :
• They possess talent for writing about fantasy or real world in an amaze form. They have the capacity of transporting you to places, feeling, scenes, ages without problem.
• Writers can give order to their own ideas or feelings, allowing to other people give order to their ones through their writing.
• Some writers utilize their abilities for manipulating situations, people, even countries with their knowledge of using the appropriate word in the opportune moment. I disagree about this behave, but it is happening.
• This people habitually enjoy others fascinating qualities, as, imagination, observation, curiosity, introspection, analysis, criticism.
• They display the talent of expressing and perceiving the life in a creative form.
I am so grateful because talent people like them, because they color life.
Oct. 7, 2021
"Я знаю що я їжу!"
"Я знаю що я їжу! Я весь час їжу ці ягоди!" Він запевнив дружину.
"Мама в цьому не помилилася, Тату! Нічого не можна відмовити. Потрібно дивитися під кожним кутом. Що завгодно могло спричинити вашу хворобу." Вона захистила, здивувавши свого батька, взявши сторону матері.
Мама права, тату. Нічого не можна відмовити. Потрібно дивитися під кожним кутом. Що завгодно могло спричинити вашу хворобу. "Його дочка захистила, здивувавши батька, ставши на бік матері.
Oct. 7, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
Verbessern Sie mich bitte!
**Betreff
Sie schreiben einem/einer Freund/in, weil Ihr gemeinsamer Freund Manuel ein Problem hat.
Er hat die letzte Prüfung nicht bestanden, ist sehr traurig und weiß nicht, was er tun soll.
Beschreiben Sie: Was ist passiert?
Begründen Sie: Warum wollen Sie Manuel helfen?
Machen Sie einen Vorschlag, was Sie für ihn tun könnten.
Achten Sie auf den Textaufbau (Anrede, Einleitung, Reihenfolge der Inhaltspunkte, Schluss).
**Mein Text
Lieber John,
wie geht es dir? Ich hoffe gut. Stell dir vor: Letzte Woche habe ich mit Manuel ein Bier getrunken. Weißt du was, er war sehr traurig und müde, weil er die letzte Prüfung nicht bestanden hat. Obwohl er fit in Mathematik ist, hat er ein 4 bekommen. Ich denke, dass wir Manuel helfen müssen, da er das Studium abbricht möchte. Ich finde das wirklich schade und ich schlage vor, dass wir Manuel besuchen, um mit ihm zu sprechen und dann eine Lösung zu finden. Ich schlage vor, dass wir uns am Sonntag um 16 Uhr treffen und sprechen dann darüber, falls es dir passt. Was hältst du davon?
Bitte antworte mir bald!
Liebe Grüße
Maria
Oct. 7, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
La Pizza Pazza
Ciao a tutti! C'è il mio primo testo in italiano.
Leggo un libro in italiano : la prima storia del libro parla di un ragazzo e la sua sorella, Daniel e Julia, che sono studenti di intercambio.
Viaggiano in Italia. Il amico di Daniel, Armando, è un studente italiano che aiuta gli studenti di intercambio. Armando aspetta gli fratelli all'aeroporto di Roma. Tutti vanno all'appartamento di Armando. Daniel e Julia vogliono mangiare. Julia sceglie di mangiare a un ristorante dove servono piatti tipici, e Daniel prende l'autobus per andare al ristorante "La Pizza Pazza".
Daniel ha tanto sonno e dorme in l'autobus. Sveglia a Napoli. Vuole chiamare la sua sorella ma non ha batteria nel telefono. Lui va a un albergo per passare la notte.
Il giorno successivo, Daniel vede un camion con la scritta "La Pizza Pazza". Chiede al corriere se può venire a Roma con lui. Il corriere accetta ma dice a Daniel che deve stare nel retro del camion. Lì, Daniel trova un anziano signore nascosto tra le casse di mozzarella. L'anziano dice a Daniel che non conosce il suo figlio e va a Roma per lo trovare.
Arrivano a Roma, davanti "La Pizza Pazza". Entrano nel ristorante per mangiare, ma c'è 5 del pomeriggio, presto per la cena. Vanno nell'appartamento di Armando. Non c'è nessuno. Daniel carica il telefono e chiama Julia. Julia e Armando vengono a casa. E Armando incontra il suo padre per la prima volta.
La fine.
Sono molto felice perché ho capito quasi tutto. E c'è la mia prima volta che scrivo in italiano. Grazie per la correzione!
Oct. 7, 2021
Oct. 7, 2021
English Language Phobia
Today I was watching a video of Jhanvi Panwar on 'how to stop translating English in the back of our mind'. It is a common problem with English learners. We tend to think first in Hindi then translate it to English. So in this video she has discussed that this way is going to be very difficult for people who wishes to speak some day English fluently. she belives that it is a time consuming process and it builds fear because if someone asked you something in English and before speaking you're just thinking about the grammar, words, phrases, sentence structure whether all are correct or not. such process leads to fear among that person and won't let the person speak English fluently.
In her video she said that people should change their language approach. if you are at a beginner level then it's OK to understand English with your native language but in the advanced level you should change your approach like start listening to English songs, watch more english content, observe their expressions, their tone of the dialogues, etc. The excerpt is surround more yourself with English environment to learn it fast.
And in the end she said English is just a language don't treat it like a subject. You cannot cram everything of this language in a one go, gradually your level goes up. So be patient and practice it everyday.
Oct. 7, 2021
Mi juventud
(Estoy practicando la diferencia entre del pretérito y el imperfecto, entonces si pudieras enfocarte en esto me lo agradercía)
Cuando era niño, me gustaba hacer muchas cosas. Tomé clases de nadar por algunos años, y para un tiempo pequeño pensé que quería ser salvavida. También me encantaba leer--era un adicto. Por las noches, escondía libros en mi cama una hora antes del tiempo de dormir, así que mis padres no pueden sacarlos de mí. Pasaba muchas horas tarde en la noche leyendo con una linterna. Otra cosa que me gustaba hacer era jugar con otros niños en nuestro cuadra. Durante el año de escuela, inmediatemente después de las clases terminaron, los niños de la cuadra jugabamos etiqueta, el escondite, y caputura la bandera. Jugabamos hasta que el sol bajaba y nuestros padres nos llamaron.
Oct. 7, 2021
Quel aspect de votre culture vous rend fier ?
Quel aspect de votre culture vous rend fier ?
Je pense que notre multiculturalisme nous a donné une augmentation à notre niveau de tolérance pour les traditions pratiqués pour notre prochain, que, en conjonction avec delle lois plus strictes, a causé une réduction de cas de racisme pendant les ultime ans.
On peut dire que notre multiculturalisme a aussi un côté bénéfique que un côte négatif, puisque le pays non aura une identité nationale (même si c'est que donne à le pays sa individualité), mais je pense que les pour surpassant les contre pour que la multiculturalisme peut être considéré comme quelque chose que peut améliorer a vie de la population.
(pardon my terrible French, I just started learning a few days ago :p)
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