Recently corrected public entries
👉 Register to view more posts, get corrections on your writing and correct others.March 26, 2022
March 26, 2022
Một buổi tối xem TV với bạn bè
Một buổi tối xem TV với bạn bè
Tối nay, mình và ba người bạn sẽ họp mặt ở nhà mình để xem phim và ăn tối cùng nhau. Bình thường thì chúng mình đi choi vào cuối tuần ở nhà một người bạn có nhà rộng. Bà mẹ bạn ấy luôn đi vắng, nhưng cuối tuần này, vì họ ở nhà nên chúng mình đã quyết định gặp nhau tại chỗ của mình.
Mình sẽ làm món bò bún, một món ăn mà mình hay làm và cả bạn của mình đều thích. Mình sẽ làm hai loại nước mắm khác nhau vì mình thích nó với nhiều ớt và tỏi, còn bạn của mình thì không. Sáng nay mình đã đi chợ Việt Nam để mua những loại rau đặc biệt không có bán ở sieu thị của Pháp. Ở phần trái cây mình đã thấy trái sầu riêng nguyên có mùi rất thom. Mình thèm chảy nước miếng nhưng chúng rất đắt tiền 70 euro! Trời ơi! Mình đâu phải là triệu phú đâu!
March 26, 2022
Essay: "About life goals"
Write paragraphs to answer the question: about life goals
For some people, making a lot of money is an important goal. Others think that their free time is more important than wealth.
Which is more important to you? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
(How could I improve it? Does everything sound natural?)
(ANSWER)
Life goals has been a topic issue throughout the centuries, even the millennia, in philosophy, owing to everyone has ever made to himself this question before along life. Obviously, there is not just one target to achieve, such as a professional vocation, and these will depend on your preferences and what existence means to you.
In my humble opinion, there is nowhere near anything so important as spending time with your closest environment, this is family, best friends and, if so a partner. Therefore, other aims, like earning a lot of money in a wealthy job position or living for a profession, are not among my priorities, especially due to the fact that it is impossible to have a full-time dedication in a job, both you work for economic reasons or passion
There is an endless supply of examples of job often considered as vocations: scientists, musicians, social workers, ... Most them suppose a huge load of work and little time to spare, for that reason, you are just able to properly socialise at weekends. It is true that these sorts of job fascinates to those who work on it and let you live unforgettable moments, nevertheless, it is not often said how much hard training is behind, or how many people have bet so many years to fall short of their expectations when they finally get the job of their dreams.
In regard to working for making a lot of money, it is just an ego matter. For example, business people as brokers or traders are usually very competitive and lack of empathy, so their only live's satisfaction in to be ahead of every one, rather than being rich.
All in all, there is nothing so important for me as enjoying my free time with my closest relatives and my friends, in spite of discussions and problems usually related to it.
March 26, 2022
Phrase Practice (as ~ as)
As long as I practice English, I always confuse to use these phrases, so I will try to make some sentences with them.
I think learning grammar is important as well as learning speaking.
As far as I know, I can speak more natural sentences when practicing the grammar.
I am able to make sentences with the phrases as long as I use a dictionary.
But I am not still used to speaking as much as I know.
I will keep practicing them.
March 26, 2022
psychopathe
Il y a quelques heures quand j'ai fini un manga (bande dessinée japonais) qui s'appelle "Chainsaw Man". Avant que je commence cette série j'ai entendu beaucoup de fois comme "Chainsaw Man" était un chef d'oeuvre. Personalement, c'était une serie pas mal mais aussi pas très bonne. Alors un 7/10 mais c'est pas de quoi je veux parler maintenant. Je voudrais parler d'un caractère dans cette serie qui s'appelle Makima (un caractère populaire de la série). Franchement je ne comprends pas comme elle est aussi populaire. Elle est jusement un véritable psychopathe. Donc j'ai toujours généralement detester les psychopathes en fiction. Parceque je ne sais pas comment tu peux aimer un caractère sans savait pourquoi il fait quoi il fait.
March 26, 2022
Die letzte Schlacht
Henry dachte an Himmel. Er brennte. Die letzte Abendssonennstrahlen griffen nach Himmelszelt wie die Tentakel des Meermonsters, der die ganze Welt unter Wasser ziehen möchte. Die feuergelben Wolken wurden allmählich blutrot. Henry fragte: "Wie viele Seelen noch müssen nach Paradies fliegen, um dem Himmel zum Weinen vor Blut bringen?" Und der Himmel antwortete ihm mit einem leichten Regen. Der Junge ging über das Feld, wo seine für ewig verschlafende Kameraden liegten und nur das Rasseln seiner Rüstung störte die Stille. In der Hand hielt er noch den Schlüssel. Henry musste ihn dem Feinden übergeben, damit Waffenstillstand geschlossen wurde. Aber er ist gescheitert. Ja gestern hatte er sich vorgestellt wie er mit seinen Kamerdanen bei einem Becher Wein feiern, aber heute blieb nur Himmel mit. Auf dem Himmelsgewölbe konnte man schon winzige Sterne sehen. Es schien dem Ritter, als ob das Flüstern dieser Sterne ihn aus dem All erreichte. Und jeder davon sprach seinen Namen. Henry, Henry, Henry!..
March 26, 2022
關係德雷克等式的寫作
我查的文章是叫”沒錯，宇宙一定有過外星人“。引用科學家Gerard Dubois， ”，指出雖然我們不知道銀河系中是否存在先進的外星文明，但如今我們已經掌握信息，可以認為在宇宙歷史的某個時點上，外星文明是肯定存在的。這些科學家的證據是從德雷克等式來的。德雷克等式是一種等式來算多少先進的外星文明存在？
第一個因素是每年會誔生多少顆恆星。第二個因素是有多少顆恆星擁有行星。因爲雖然我們的銀河有太陽，但不是每個恆星有個軌道的行星。第三個因素是有多少行星是運行在適宜生命。第四個因素是，在這樣行星當中，有多少顆上已經有真正的生命起源跡象。接下來的因素是，在這樣的行星當中，有多少顆行星上存載智能生物，以及發達的文明（就是説能無線電信號）。最後個因素是一個技術文明的平均壽命是多少。
我讀這偏文章，就覺得這個等式沒有答案，因爲這個等式是在描述人性的出生的故事。雖然人性需要水，需要太陽，需要行星，外星人也可能不需要。而且，他們的進化也可能不是線性的。人們沒有別的例子，沒看過外星人，所以這個等式是用我們的故事來算。
但是Gerard Dubois的研究不是在回答“現在到底有多少先進的外星文明存在？“ 的問題而是”迄今爲止，地球是宇宙中唯一出現過的技術文明，這個可能有多大“。GerardDubois和他的博士的計算表明我們應該不是宇宙第一個技術文明。
HabEx 是美國太空總署的新望遠鏡。HabEx是HabitableExoplanetObservatory, 是可住係外行星。Habex主要的目的是找德雷克的第三個因素，到底有多少係外行星向我們的地球一樣，能支持生活？
謝謝你讀我很差的作文，祝你一切順利。
March 26, 2022
March 26, 2022
March 26, 2022
March 26, 2022
El valle
Eran los primeros seres humanos a andar la superficie blanda de la orilla. No quedaba ni un rastro de la civilización de que habían huido. Las altísimas cimas de la cordillera les parecían a dioses aviesos, con pelo de nieve blanca y barbas de árboles que cubren las cuestas.
Los refugiados no conocían la tierra extraña por donde caminaban, y ni siquiera allá, lo más alejado que se puede estar de la civilización, no se sentían seguros de sus perseguidores. Les acosaban sus recuerdos de la tortura, destrucción y caos de su tierra natal. No obstante, estaban determinados a medrar en ese paraíso lejano.
Hoy en día, no hay nadie, ni siquiera los más viejos, que tengan abuelos ni bisabuelos que estuvieran involucrados con la construcción de la ciudad. Dicen que lo primero que se construyeron fue la muralla, aunque hace muchos años ahora que se destruyó por el terremoto...
March 25, 2022
La lune bleue
Chapitre 2: Le secret de Melody
Aujourd'hui, Melody est venue l’école en voiture. Elle d'habitude venue en autobus où à pied. Elle marche dans l'école. Son amies a couru vers elle. Une de la fille dit “Melody! Comment ça va?”. Melody dit “Ça va très bien! Et toi Sarah?”. Sarah glousser “Très bien! Je penser toi oublier quelqu'un...”. Melody voit son autre amie. Melody dit ”Désolé Violet, Je oublier tu être ici!”. Violet soupirer “D’accord Melody, je vous pardonne...”. “Merci, Merci, Merci Violet!” dit Melody. Melody, connaissant la personnalité froide de Violet, pensait qu'elle ne lui pardonnerait jamais. La cloche sonnerie deux temps. Les filles crier “NOUS SOMMES EN RETARD EN CLASSE!”. Les filles ont couru vers leur classe. Après classe, les filles sont allées au casier. “Ugh, pourquoi la chimie doit-elle être la première matière?” dit Sarah. Melody rigola “Eh bien, je pense que la chimie est vraiment facile-”. “Non, je pense toi sont tu es très intelligent!” Sarah coupe elle court. Les filles rigolèrent. “Hé, Le saviez-vous pour la sortie sur le terrain?” dit Sarah. Melody arrêté “Il y a eu une sortie sur le terrain... ?”. “Oui, Celui que les professeurs nous rappellent depuis une semaine?” dit Violet. Violet et Sarah réaliser ça Melody avoir oublié sur sortie de terrain. Les filles éclater dans rire. “Hé! Ce n'est pas drôle!”. D’accord, D’accord!” dit Sarah, “Allons en classe maintenant!”. Après école, les filles est allé aux nouveaux dortoirs. “Tu sais, tu dois encore me parler de cette sortie sur le terrain.” Melody dit après avoir bu une gorgée de son cappuccino. “J’aime le dortoir!” cria Melody et Sarah.
March 25, 2022
Book - The Spy and the Traitor - 22
Summary no. 22
This is a true story.
MI6 agent Bromhead had been instructed to get close to and recruit Oleg Gordievsky, a KGB agent. Bromhead tried to sound out Gordievsky at several diplomatic parties in Copenhagen (both of them were under diplomatic covers), but the only conversation they had was about art. Oleg proved to be a difficult target. MI6 arranged another plan. They had Standa Kaplan, a Czech defector and friend of Oleg’s, turn up at Oleg’s flat in Copenhagen to arrange a lunch for next day. At first, Oleg couldn’t put his finger on this unexpected visit of Standa. Standa shouldn't even be in Europe, let alone in Oleg's flat. However, by the time Standa left, Oleg knew what Standa was up to. Someone had sent Standa to assess Oleg. But who? At lunch next day, Standa broached two sensitive subjects: his defection to Canada via France and the Prague Spring in 1968. Oleg trod carefully, trying not to commit to anything while having a sympathetic facade. On one hand, Oleg didn't want to scare MI6 and Standa off for good. On the other hand, he definitely didn't want the KGB suspecting him to harbour thoughts of defecting.
March 25, 2022
Sobre Mi Marido
Conocí mi marido en 2014. Fuimos amigos durante dos años antes de empezamar a salir. Le amo maś que nadie. Siento que él es mi alma gemela, pero sé que almas gemelas no son reales.
Es muy divertido y me hace reír.
Tiene el pelo negro y los ojos marrones oscuros. Los ojos son muy hermosos. Crea que mis ojos son más bonitos, pero no acuerdo.
Él viaja en moto. Es físico - un tipo de cientifico - y investigator. Usa muchas matemáticas. También es programador.
Ahora duerme. Beso a mi marido en la cabeza, pero no le dispierta.
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
A restaurant review
Discovering the Beer World
There is a place in my town where you can taste different types of beers, but in a more interesting way.
This pub has a special menu which you can try a broad variety of beers while you eat various dishes according with the selected beer savour.
In addition, you can enjoy the experience in a able isolated from the pub tumult. The table is enough big to spend the time with some friends what enlighten the experience.
Furthermore, each beer is explained by the owner, this way all of you learn about the history of brewing industry, the class of beers, the reason of theirs flavours...
Although the whole menu isn't cheap, I think it's worthy and recommend anyone who likes beer to give it an opportunity. Even i you don't tolerate gluten they adapt the food and the beers to gluten free versions!
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
me presenter
Bonjour! Je m’appelle est Wendy et J’ai trente ans. Je habite a Dublin, Ireland, et je suis Irelandaise. J’ai un grand famile avec deux parents, ma mere et ma pere, et six frères et seours – trois frères et trois seours. Et oui c’etait tres bruyant dans ma maison. Maintenaint, mon familie habittent partout dans le monde. Ma mere et duex frères habittent dans etatas unis, et mon pere et une seour habitant dans hongrie, ma grande seour habite en Qatar, et J’ai un frère et une soeur qui habitant dans Irland avec moi.
Mon experience avec le langue francais est compliquee. J’avais etudie francais dans l’ecole, mais il y a longtemps depuis lors. J’ai aussie etudie francais ici et la comme un adulte, mais parce que je n’ai jamais etudie en continu, je n’ai pas ameliore.
March 25, 2022
Banning the use of mobile phones (C1 CAE Writing)
A letter: Banning the use of mobile phones
Your town council is thinking about banning the use of mobile phones on public transport and in shops and restaurants.
Write a letter to the town council giving your opinion about this and why you think it is or is not a good idea.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
(Could you help me to make it sound more natural? Thanks in advance)
(ANSWER)
To whom it may concern,
Current mobiles phones can access on the internet, play multiple sorts of games, record audio, take photos,.... For these reasons, almost everybody has always their mobiles with them. This digital addiction sometimes interfere with daily life, for example, during a meeting with friends, in which some of them seem to be more interested in texting than having a conversation face to face. Despite this fact, banning people so far is not a good precedent in a democracy.
In my humble opinion, these are very severe restrictions for the citizenship, because they unable people communicating in the commonest places of our town, so if they are aproved it would not take so long until citizen take them down.
In a hand-on point of view, mobiles are helpful for people to use in restaurants and shops to pay or to do shopping list; even on public transport as a bus ticket, all of which is faster than the traditional way.
It is also true that people are abusing on their use, though it would be better educate people not to overuse mobiles and lift his head, rather than imposing so tight a banning.
Finally, what is worst, whenever politicians forced citizen to be educated by means of restrictions results are just the opposite. Moreover, it is usually the beginning of the end of freedom, which every one consider to be linked to democracy.
All in all, I do think these kinds of banning would be useful for nothing more than create controversy.
Best regards,
Jesús Correa Benitez
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
Learning New Things
While I read a book today, I found a nice sentence.
"If you study more, the resolution of seeing the world increases."
The depth of the trip changes how much I study there.
Even if I go to the same place, what I experience is different when I go to places I don't know and when I go there with a lot of research.
It seems like I am watching TV shows between FHD resolution and 4K UHD resolution.
For understanding this world more clearly, I will keep learning new things.
March 25, 2022
I always run away.
I always run away.
I hadn't tried to change you.
I couldn't be your opponent.
You were so vicious and frightening.
I wasn't confident to be against you.
You would've made me a mess.
But I am not a coward.
I well know you'd be crushed by a stronger opponent.
I'm cultivating a village for the broken.
you would be broken oneday and sunk
as if broken pebbles are piled up on the sandbank.
There would b e full of broken pebbles like you.
A village for the broken,
I wouldn't be there, though,
you'll be able to find my trace.
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
鶏の鳴き声
鶏に関する日本のテレビ番組を見たとき、その鳴き声にとても感動しました。なぜ私はそれに感銘を受けたのですか？これは、日本とベトナムで鶏の鳴き声が違うためです。
日本では鶏の鳴き声が「コケコッコー」で、ベトナムの鶏は「O O O」と吠えるからです。これは本当に面白いです。ベトナムでは、特に農村部で鶏を飼育している家族がたくさんいます。鶏は誰もが目ざまし時計として使用しています。鶏が早朝に鳴くたびに、みんなが目を覚まします。この意味に加えて、ベトナムで鶏の鳴き声には別の意味もあります。
人々は、鶏が午前1時に鳴くと、これは不運の前兆と見なされ、家は非常に火事になりやすいと信じています。午前2時に鶏が鳴く場合、これは泥棒があなたの家に入ってきてお金を失ったと見なされます。
結局、鶏の鳴き声の意味は何ですか？誰もが自分の考えを持っていると思いますし、上記の意見はすべて参考用です。鶏が午前1時か2時に鳴くのなら、あまり心配しないでください。たぶん鶏はお腹が空いているだけですよ。
March 25, 2022
Qué estoy leyendo ahora
Querido diario,
Hoy me gustaría escribir sobre una novela que estoy leyendo en español ahora y que ha aumentado mi capacidad para aprender español rápido. La novela es Harry Potter y la cámara de secretos, cuál es la segunda novela en la serie de autora J.K. Rolling. Creo que casis todo el mundo saber de esta serie porque esta una del más famosa de serie por adolescentes en todo el tiempo. Me encanta la novela por unos números razones, pero en principal tiene una tema y un argumento que sé bien, disfruto mucho, y la gramática no esta complejo. Además, estoy leyendo la novela con un Amazon Kindle cuál ayudar para traducir las palabras nuevas o frases gramáticas complejo. Estoy aprendiendo lenguaje diferente como mágica y bruja y varita además de expresiones común y útil por conversación.
Ahora, acaba de terminar capituló tres cuando Ron y sus hermanos rescatan Harry de su casa y volverse a la casa de Ron en un coche volando. El personaje en el libro que más me gusta esta Hermione porque es inteligente, simpática y bonita.
Pues, cuando acaba más estaré escribir una anotación del diario. Si disfruta Harry Potter déjame un mensaje con tu carácter favorito abajo y si prefieres leer con un libro o Kindle.