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Termin beim Arzt
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
mein Name ist Huan Lai. In letzter Zeit habe ich ständig Albträume und mein Körper ist extrem müde. Manchmal habe ich auch negative Gedanken. Ich glaube, dass es am Schlafmangel liegen könnte. Also bin ich früher ins Bett gegangen, aber es passierte immer wieder. Ich würde mich freuen, wenn Ihr mir einen Rat geben könnten. Können Sie mir sagen, ob wir uns am Freitagnachmittag treffen können? Bitte geben Sie mir bald Bescheid. Sie erreichen mich per Mail unter [email protected]
Vielen Dank im Voraus. Ich freue mich sehr auf eine baldige Antwort.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Huan Lai
April 7, 2022
Bar de dragas
Las semana pasada fuí con un grupo de amigos a un espactáculo de dragas en un bar en la Ciudad de Mexico. Honestamente, no sabía que esperar, y cuando entramos eramos casí los unicos en el bar. Las pobres dragas me parecieron igual de nerviosas que disilucionadas por la falta de espectadores. Me imagino que para ellas sería raro hacer una performance drag, con su estilo muy exajerado, para una audiencia casi no existiente. El estilo se alimenta de la energía de una audiencia. De los pocos otros espectadores había una mesa con tres personas mayores que parecían muy fuera de lugar. Estoy seguro de que eran familia de una de las dragas (¡y eso me pareció muy tierno!) o tal vez turistas medios perdidos - que tenían rostros de estar un poco incomodos. Todo esto hizo que sentieramos mucha presión por ser buenos espectadores y aplaudir y chiflar fuertemente a cada canción que interpretaron.
April 7, 2022
Lesen am Computer
‘‘Lesen am Computer’’ ist ein sehr interessantes Thema. Als ich ein Kind war, habe ich Papierbücher gelesen, aber jetzt benutze ich den Computer zum Lesen. Ein großer Vorteil ist, dass ich jedes Buch auf dem Computer einfach durchsuchen kann. Außerdem kann ich die Schriftgröße und Helligkeit nach Belieben einstellen. Während des Lesens kann ich dort auch markieren und kommentieren. Neben den Vorteilen gibt es natürlich auch Nachteile. Es ist sehr schädlich für die Augen, wenn ich zu viel Zeit damit verbringt. Ein Nachteil ist, dass ich es ohne das Internet nicht lesen kann. Für mich überwiegen jedoch die Vorteile, da Lesen am Computer meiner Meinung nach die praktischste Art des Lesens ist.
April 7, 2022
Un mercredi pluvieux à New York
Aujourd'hui, j'ai eu une réunion dans une société financière à "mid-town" -- c'est une expression des New Yorkers.
C'était un jour gris et mouiller. La pandémie a causé une baisse d'activité c'est perceptible pour quelqu'un qui vit ici depuis longtemps. C'est triste.
Cependent, un chose que je sais -- New York change rapidement. Déjà il y a des nouvelles que les gens retournent. Il n'y a pas d'appartements disponibles dans mon quartier. Il y a autres signes de vie et et j'ai reçu un e-mail concernant la saison de ballet du printemps au Lincoln Center.
Peut-être qu'un peu de soleil et des températures plus chaudes amélioreront l'ambiance à New York. Je l'espère.
April 6, 2022
안전조처 소홀로 물류창고에서 화재 발생
내가 읽은 기사에 따르면, 1월 초 평택시에서 공사 중이던 물류창고에서 화재가 발생하였다. 화재의 구체적인 원인은 아직 수사 중인데, 설계도안 없이 설치된 열선과 우레탄폼이 현장에서 발견되었다. 화재가 19시간여 만에 진화되었는데 그 과정에 소방관 3명이 순직하였다.
이 화재에 대한 기사를 읽으면서 이런저런 생각을 많이 하게 되었다. 창고에서 안전조처를 왜 취하지 않았을까? 너무 급해서 그런가? 아니면 돈의 문제였을까? 공사를 너무 대충해서 결국에 창고에서 불이 났고 사람 3명이 목숨을 잃었다. 안전을 우선순위로 하면, 공사가 무사하게 잘 될 가능성이 높아진다. 만약에 돈 때문에 안전조처를 취하지 않았을 가능성이 있는데, 안전을 보장하는 데 쓰는 돈보다 더 많은 돈을 이제 화재 때문에 없어져 버렸다. 복잡하거나 번거럽더라도 특히 공사장 같은 위험한 곳에서 안전을 무엇보다 중요시해야 한다.
April 6, 2022
April 6, 2022
April 6, 2022
Are there food kitchens for the needy in your country?
I am currently living in Russia and I've never checked whether there're food kitchens for needy nearby. When I and my farther lived in Montreux, Switzerland we used to ride a bike to the food kitchen which was situated in the neighbouring town. We pedalled there two times a week: On Wednesdays and Fridays. For two euros you could buy a pack of different food and have lunch right in the kitchen, while the same food in nearby shops was by threeholds more expensive. In the local shops we only bought the red fish.
April 6, 2022
L'exam
L'école est durée et parfois vraiment stressant. Je n'ai pas vraiment de problemes à l'école. Seulement la matière "allemand" me donne un peu de problèmes en temps de temps. Il y avait des moments comme maintenat quand j'étais vraiment stresse mais j'éspere que je vais me debrouiller. Aprés tout je ne suis pas la seule personne qui visiter cet école.
April 6, 2022
Hello there
Hello everyone! My name is Michael. I am a seven-year-old boy from Russia. I'd like to improve my English. I currently have English classes at school. We do some activities there: reading , writing and speaking. Most of the time we read out loud. Sometimes, we act out some scenes. I love my English classes, but I'd like to be more involved and interact with not only my classmates, but with people all over the world.
April 6, 2022
6 avril - La sélection de chef d’état
Aujourd’hui, on dit qu’il y aura qu’un seul candidate pour la sélection de chef d’état qui aura lieu le moi prochain. Ce seul candidate a été le chef de police, et puis le chef du bureau de sécurité et désormais il est le ministre de affaires politique qui est un poste de plus haute fonctionnalité au dessus de chef d’état. C’est drôle de dire que ce soit une « sélection » parce que c’est evident que le gouvernement de Beijing a déjà décidé qui va prendre ce poste. En fait, je n’intéresse pas vraiment au politique mais chaque fois que j’ai reçu tel message, j’ai vu de détérioration répandu ici et j’ai eu envie de quitter cet endroit envahi par une nouvelle forme de « démocratie ».
April 6, 2022
Working Lately
I am still working remotely even though I come home.
Because there is an urgent issue, and it hasn't finished yet.
Many people are talking about how to solve the issue, but I think it would not be solved soon.
Actually, I don't understand why it should be handled right now.
I will suggest them to handle it tomorrow.
April 6, 2022
Report about a cooking course
You have just completed a cooking course. As part of the schook's research and efforts to offer superior classes, they have asked you to write an evaluation of your experience as student.
Your report should discuss what you learned from the class and what you thought of the teachers and their instruction methods. Mention any ways you think the class could be improved and say whether you would or would not recommend the course to a friend or relative.
Write your report.
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(What could I do to make it sound more natural? )
Evaluation of the cooking course
My progress and experience so far
When I first came to the course, my knowledge about cooking was very limited, since my skills don't go further than preparing a salad, boiling eggs or pasta and warm a takeaway in a microwave. Thanks to this course, I have been currently able to cook the most basic recipes, such as vegetable soups, tomate and carbonara sauces or chickpeas and lentils stews. Moreover, I am now able to handle the most useful and elementary cooking techniques, like preparing a dough for pizza, spaghetti or a cake, cooking a tasty sofrito as a base for a lot of different dishes, such as stews; or a delicious bechamel for cooking any kinds of croquettes you like it.
As regards the teaching methods, I am generally satisfied with most of my teachers, as every subject had a very practical approach, avoiding wastings of time at memorising recipes or learning methods in a theoretical way. I could only complaint about pastry classes. It is completely understandable the severity of the teacher's method in this subject, due to the fact every ingredient should be weighted accurately. Nevertheless, this cannot justify his bad manners at teaching, it is indispensable to be patient at this work.
Suggestions to improve the course
It is true that the course has been focused on easy to cook plates, but also we often used unusual ingredients, which make it impossible this dishes to get into our daily diet. I guess that it would be easy to change them for more common ones.
Conclusion
All in all, is it recommendable this course/do I recommend this course (what option is better?)? It is, whenever you have no idea of cooking, but I suppose it would be boring for those who knows how to cook properly, as most of my friends and relatives.
April 6, 2022
April 6, 2022
приложения
Из-за санкций, которые ударяют страну в последние недели, у многих россиян нет доступа к товарам и обслуживаниям, которые люди в других странах принимают как должные (take for granted?). К сожалению, виртуальный мир интернета не был спасен от волны запрещений. Тем не менее, благодаря идеям некоторых инженеров, возникают приложения везде. Но с таким быстрым развитием, как это, многие эксперты начали сомневаться в успехе многих проектов. Итак, домашние приложения могут заменить оригинальные социальные платформы в России?
По-моему, это будет сложная задача. Во-первых, если мы говорим о таких приложениях в рамке международного бизнеса, невозможно, чтобы они получили глобальное признание, из-за того, что главный язык использован базой пользателей в обсуждении будет русским. Во-вторых, у пользователей, которые не из России, не будет побуждения для создания профиля, поскольку у них уже есть свои приложения. Кроме того, многие будут нерешительны об том, что давать личные данные компании , которая ещё не установляется.
April 6, 2022
Imensa decepção
O passado sábado eu estive a jugar padel com uns amigos. Parecia um bom começo para um bom fim de semana. Depois do jogo de padel fomos almoçar. À tarde o nosso plan era sair aos copos e estar com outros amigos durante a noite. Mas aqui tem começado os problemas: eu comecei a ficar com umas dores de costas muito fortes. O pesadelo ficou realidade: eu estaba com dores de ciática.
A minha namorada e eu tínhamos planeado fazer uma viagem a Serra da Estrela a próxima semana, mais eu não acho que esso seja possivel. É uma pena, sobretudo porque nós já tivemos de suspender esta viagem em 2020 e em 2021 por as restrições causadas pela pandemia.
Eu espero que possamos finalmente viajar no verão. Cruzaremos os dedos!
April 6, 2022
April 6, 2022
話の筋書きの悩み
あの、昨日短い話を書いてみると言ったけど。
まぁ、確かに何を書くかをちゃんと考えた。本当だ。
でも、一つの構想がなくて、どこから筋書きを計画し始めるかが全く分からない。
色々なアイデアを空想しようとして、書くことについてプロンプトがあるウェブサイトをブラウズしたにも。
結局何も書かれなかった…
小さいころ、作家になりたかった時期があった。
あの当時たくさん新しい物語のアイデアがどんどん思いつかれたが、残念ながら、それを書く習慣がなくて、今でも昔でも。
まぁ、いつか小説かライトノベルを書きたい。
もちろん、英語で書くつもりだ。
しかし、自分で自分の書き込みを翻訳できれば、かっこいいじゃない？それに、楽しそうみたい。
この目標は現実できるのかが知らないけど，とりあえず目指してみよう。
April 6, 2022
EXERCICES SUR LA NÉGATION
Est-ce que ces phrases sont correctes?
1. Il ne retrouve ni son chapeau ni ses gants..
2. Je ne connais ni son nom ni son adresse.
3. August n'a ni faim ni soif.
4. Jeanne n'écoute ni son père ni sa mère.
5. Ni Aurélie ni Pascal ne sont pas arrivé.
Ici,je dois transformer des phrases affirmatives en phrases négatives.
~ Il aime tout. > Il n'aime rien.
~ Je vois quelqu'un. > Je ne vois personne.
~ Mon ami entend quelque chose. > Mon ami n'entend rien.
~ Il y a quelqu'un. > Il n'y a personne.
~ J'entends encore le tonnerre. > Je n'entends plus le tonnerre.
~ Emma oublie toujours son parapluie. > Emma n'oublie jamais son parapluie.
~ Le vent vient de la mer. > Le vent ne vient pas de la mer.
~ On parle toujours la bouche pleine. > On ne parle jamais la bouche pleine.
- Au petit déjeuner,elle n'a pris que du café.
- Dans cette région,on ne cultive que des céréales.
- Il ne me reste que deux photos à prendre.
- Ces boucles d'oreille ne coûtent que 100 francs.
April 6, 2022
How do you stop comparing yourself to other people?
That’s hard. In my opinion, we can’t stop comparing ourselves with others even though we don’t want to compete with people. Because there are some types of features we want to follow or want to be.
For example, you want to be a person like Mr. Trump because he is confident and motivated. It doesn‘t mean you are competing with him， you just adore him. You might be thinking yourself whether any features you don’t have but he has. You start finding the gap between you and him. And you want to learn some advantages of him. This is also a comparison. Then how to accept yourself even if you are a person who always compares with others unconsciously. And how to enjoy this process by yourself.
You need to do three steps for enjoying yourself. First, you have to build an “identity”, which means you should feel good and nice yourself. Secondly, you should be competitive, just be the good one if you can’t stop comparing. And Appreciate yourself whatever the ranking you are in your related circle. Finally, enjoy the following process for your hard work.
That’s all for my answer, Thank you for your reading.
April 6, 2022
April 6, 2022
家事の手分け
私と妻は暮らしの用事を手分けしています。過去は妻も仕事をしていたけど、今は私だけ働いています。なので、今のところ、家事は妻の方がしています。しかし、仕事の他にも、私はまだいくつかの家事をしています。
私の家事の責任はお皿を洗ったり、ゴミを出したり、リサイクルを出したり、小さい雑事をしたりします。たとえば、お手洗いの大きい鏡を掃除したりします。その上、週一回、晩ご飯を料理します。妻の家事の責任は、うちの掃除をほとんどしたり、洗濯をしたり、晩ご飯を作ったり、猫の用事をしたり、芝生とガーデンの維持をしたりします。その上、雑事もあって、たとえば車を掃除するとか予約をするなどもあります。
仕事は私は常勤のシニアソフトウェアエンジニアで、妻の前の仕事は海洋生物学者でした。正直に言えば、私達が両方仕事をしていた時の方がいいと思います。そういう時、家事と稼ぐこともバランスしたから、いい感じがしました。妻も同じ気持ちがあるから、引っ越したあと、多分そういう状況に戻ろうとします。
April 6, 2022
Questions
1) I got very high marks in my recent exam ...
How long have you prepared for this exam?
What did you do for best preparing?
Was this exam hard for you?
2) My dad's just bought a new car ..
Wow! What colour is it?
How expensive is it?
Have he presented you his old car?
3)I've just started a guitar lesson ...
Do you really want to play guitar?
Why did you choose guitar?
Do you have your own guitar already?
4) A bookshop has just opened in my neighbourhood ..
How far is it from your home?
How often do you go there?
What is your favorite book bought there?
April 6, 2022
April 6, 2022