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JLPT N4 / N5 Practice 4
１．昨日、買い物をしてから、友達に会いました。
２．宿題をしてから、一緒に映画を見ましょうか。
３．去年の夏はとても暖かかった。
４．先週は寒くなかった。だから、家族と海へ行きました。
５．あなたは私にギータの弾き方を教えてください。
６．子供は読み方を習いています。
７．2時間で私のアパートの掃除をしました。
８．昨日4時間でこの本を読んだ。
９．今日時間がありません。明日宿題をしてみます。
１０．今日僕の彼女はいない。だから、料理を自分で作ってみる。
１１．明日雨が降らないなら、テニスをしに行きませんか。
１２．私たちは来年の夏に日本に行くなら、何月に行きましょうか。
１３．今日、宿題をしたし、掃除をしたし、疲れました。
１４．あの本は、詰まらないし、長いし、まだ読んでいません。
１５．昨日、寒すぎてから、出掛けませんでした。
１６．昨日、食べすぎたので、お腹が痛かった。
１７．私は田舎の町に住んでいるので、ここまでバスで行かなくちゃ。
１８．明日お兄の誕生日だので、彼に贈り物を買わなくてはいけない。
１９．鉛筆を持っていませんか。私のを貸します。
２０．このビルに人はいません。だから、音はありません。
Oct. 18, 2021
Computers is life now in the moment of today.
If we want to admit is good, but if not it don't matter. The world changed the day because of the virus we all moved to the lockdown and the computer use became essentially. I which to convincing you to improvement your technological abilities because if you only know to tik tok and to facebooks, you are in the past. In my case, I am always been liking to type my words in the keys of the computer, but with the advent of the virus of Covid all peoples are not touching the keys for communications with all the peoples, and no matter what she says, all the people have the need to push the keys now. before was something to choice from, but in the moments of the living of today nobody gives us choose, or you type on the computer or you are out. In these journal I will to tell you the reasons all the people needs resistance for the use of computers so much if she wants too perserve a pinch of what life it was before in the years ago prior to the Covid pandemic.
First off all the computer connect you to the web and to the rest of the worked if that is what you what, and that is fine, but it also open many doors that takes you to others pages that are not in the interest of what you are doing at the moment only to exacerbate your distractions to endless loops of time wastings that never end. in the workplace for example you can talked to your workers friends for a tiny moment but at the point of some time you should to came back to your obligations for not to get scolded from the master of the company. So you had the leader always on your top to command you to continues to the work if the wastings of time is too many so you never shoulve had to many times for wasting or you had the consequences that came along with it, so you became more productvity to the company and to the other employees. Those is not the case today, becaues in the sanctity of the house, you can give love to the plants in the garden, or have enjoys with the pets when they came to chew to your feet to get feed, or if tiring go to the bed to sleep for minutes and you go back to the screen when you wants not when you haves. This new modality is making the humans evolve to least production makers which to the peoples is never a good idea for all needs to be productive and the companies no can have peoples which do not has compenetrations with the task.
Now in this moments let's us to made connections to the realities of the pupils who now connection and reception the classes on the online Internet modality. To many pupils have becoming much productive with the use of the computer and now personalization the class and materials they use for to learn the class well, but on the other hand exist other pupils who now are becoming more laziness to extremes. Let's us to talking about the latter. The reason for the situation I talk to you in actuality may derive from a multitude of factors like because they haven't no supervisions from the parents, or they acting like the online modality is the apocalypse, but no apocalypse of the religious way, but the zombie way, and because of this they feel life is over and no responsability is necessary so cheating and cheaters has becoming the new way, and with no shame they get hundreds in all activities and they say all people cheating now, so why not me, and all people in the families may also to say if all people cheat, my boy and girl can to cheat too. In some others cases the situation for the laziness may to be depression or to the feeling that the world is ending, and also may to be too that the families are experimenting domestic difficulties and economical stress and with much inevitability the pupil suffer too the effect of the butterfly and reacts with a demonstration for the lazy way and do not work on nothing, shuts off the camera, and always has bad internet in the house, and the electricity never functions. Now to the first. Another version of pupil is also evident. the pupil who is smart and has no time to waste and listen to ridiculous non sensical chit chat but she who wish to be the pupil of the Cum Laude now is full of freedom. She use the time is manners which is wise, and complete all the tasks before to the end of the period, and consults sources that are full of reliability, and do not fall behind in nothing, and now she feels that nobody is pulling her on the shoulders to spend bad her time, and she likes. She now have more productivity because she no travels in the bus, neither never suffers the asphyxiations of traffic in the capital, and because she no has to get out of the bed before the light of sky is visible, she now has breakfast in the house and all this sums to the better experience she has now.
After to have give you all the reasons important for the use of the computers in the nowadays, it is with no doubtings that you now can agree that the use of computers in the work or school is mandatory today, and if you are a person who knows not to use one you are out of the new world. You now are in the past, the century is 21, but you are in the 20. Obsolete you are because no can function in the school and in the work, and the life is not giving opportunities if you do not engage correct to the internet to do you performance in the correct way. If you are of the ones people who still needs brush up on the technology, you must to do it now, because it will be to late.
Oct. 18, 2021
Nuclear Deterrence
A while ago, as I played a game called Metal Gear Solid: Peace Walker, the concept of Nuclear Deterrence was brought to my knowledge. Curious to know more about the subject, I went on google and searched for further explanation on it, and I found out that the game actually did a really good job explaining what Nuclear Deterrence is.
In a nutshell, Nuclear Deterence is a theory which says that the best way for a state to prevent a nuclear war is actually... having nuclear weapons. It may sound crazy at first, but that makes sense if you think it through. The thing is that, according to this theory, when two states that possess nuclear weapons engage in a clash, they will most likely find a diplomatic solution to solve their differences, since a nuclear war would most likely completely destroy both sides. So, the justification adopted by most states the possess nuclear warheads nowadays is that by having them they also have the power of retaliation in case another state attack them first, and by having this power they will probably never be actually attacked.
Of course, there is a lot of criticism towards this theory, but there is no wonder that it makes sense - especially if we consider that the fear of being attacked by the other country was what probably prevented the USA and the Soviet Union from attacking each other during the Cold War.
It may sound crazy, but probably the existence of nuclear weapons was the reponsible for us to have much of the peace that we have in the world nowadays.
Oct. 18, 2021
Formelle E- mail
Sehr geehrter Herr Seifert,
ich bin Mutter von Lara, die gerade Klasse 10B lernt . Heute schreibe ich Ihnen, um Ihre Hilfe zu bitten. Meine Tochter hat häufig schlechte Noten in Chemie gehabt. Und sie hat mir gesagt, dass sie nichts verstanden hat. Könnten Sie sie nach der Unterricht 2 Tage pro Woche nachhelfen? Außerdem möchte ich wissen, wie kostet diese Nachhilfe ?
Vielen Dank für Ihre Hilfe
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Van Tran
Oct. 18, 2021
Formelle E-mail
Sehr geehrter Herr und Frau Börlach,
ich schreibe Ihnen, weil ich Sie informieren möchte, dass ich den Hund im Tao Dan Park gefunden habe. Danach habe ich er bei mir zu Hause mitgebracht. Konnten wir uns am Samstag um 9 Uhr treffen. Mein privat Adresse ist unter angehängt. Ich warte auf Ihre Antwort. Mit freundlichen Grüßen.
Van Tran
Oct. 18, 2021
Entschuldigung E-mail
Sehr geehrter Herr Zeidler,
ich möchte mich bei Ihnen entschuldigen, weil ich gestern beim Test abwesend war. Der Grund dafür ist, bin ich leider Lebensmittelvergiftung bekommen. Ich wäre Ihnen sehr dankbar, wenn wir einen neuen Test am Freitag vereinbaren könnten. Vielen Dank für Ihr Verständnis
Herzliche Grüße
Van Tran
Oct. 18, 2021
Ma vie au Sénégal 3
Le plus grand festival au Sénégal est, sans doute, <<le grand Magal de Touba>>. Cette année, le festival a eu lieu le 25 et 26 septembre, à Touba (bien sûr..), une ville réligieuse qui se trouve environ 200 kilomètres Est de Dakar.
200 kilomètres prend normallement deux heures de route. Je dis <<normallement>> parce'que on a pri dix!!! heures d'y arriver.. Dakar se vide le soir avant le Magal, et tous le monde prend la même route à la même heure. Le bouchon était une expérience en soi. De la musique partout, des petites camionettes plein des gens, en roullant avec leurs portes ouvertes, des accidents.. Heureusement, on est y arrivé sans grands problèmes.
Les gens de Sénégal appellent le Magal <<Le Hadj de l'Afrique>>. La grande mosquée de Touba est la plus grande mosquée d'Afrique subsaharienne, est il y a des pèlerins musulmans de toute l'Afrique d'Ouest. J'ai fait un petit tour de la ville, et la ville était entièrement rempli. C'était la première fois que j'avais assisté à un festival réligieux, et c'était une expérience très impressionante.
On a aussi très bien mangé là-bas. Même le chameau ! Je le conseille.
Oct. 18, 2021
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"Dovremmo usare una gara di pulizia per coinvolgere i cittadini nel mantenere puliti i quartieri?"
Egregio Sindaco,
Quando esco a osservare i passanti, mi sembra che tutte le persone siano cieche come talpe; come mai non possono vedere tutta la spazzatura per le strade? Inoltre, abbiamo già rimasticato questo tema dell'inquinamento troppe volte: Avvertiamo sempre la gente che se nemmeno possono prendersi cura del loro dintorni, non ci sarà la possibilità che possiamo preservare il nostro lignaggio.
Sì, dobbiamo tenere testa a questi trasgressori, ma con un approccio diverso. Il fatto che ci siano degli informatori che tendano a spifferare le loro azioni all'autorità li porterà solamente a intestardirsi ulteriormente, facendo che diventino scalmanati che difenderanno le loro azioni spudoratamente con l'argomento che noi, gli ambientalisti, siamo despoti che vogliono imporre una dittatura su tutti i paesi del mondo.
Possono continuare con questa diatriba, ma credo di aver trovato la soluzione giusta per stanarli dal loro castello: una gara di pulizia. L'idea è che ci sia un'accozzaglia di oggetti scartati per ognuno, e l'individuo debba organizzare e caratterizzare ogni oggetto in categorie come vetro, cartone e carta nel più breve tempo possibile. Si renderanno conto presto quanto difficile è (o"sia"?) il lavoro degli addetti alle pulizie, e forse, attraverso la simpatia provata, cominceranno a dare retta al nostro consiglio.
Mi faccia sapere se è fattibile implementare qualcosa del genere. Aspetto la sua risposta.
Cordiali saluti
Oct. 18, 2021
Pizza for five euros
Close to my home, there is a pizzeria that until a few weeks ago, had an offer where you could buy and eat two slices of pizza and a beer or Coca-Cola can, all for 5 euros. But now, the price of the offer has gone to 6 euros. Not bad, however the price before was better. Occasionally, I go to eat pizza at this pizzeria, I like it because is a quiet place.
Oct. 18, 2021
Pensez-vous que vous pourriez aimer la vie en commun lorsque
Pensez-vous que vous pourriez aimer la vie en commun lorsque vous êtes un adulte?
On éprouve la vie en commun quand on vit dans un appartement qui est séparé en deux ou trois parties, où chacune d'eux est assignée à un individu (et sa famille si est nécessaire). Je ne pense pas que je puisse vivre dans un de ces appartements, parce que il y a plus désavantages que avantages quand on loue ce type de logements; mais quand je peux grouper tout les désavantages dans une certaine catégorie. J'en expliquerai à continuation.
Un des facteurs attractifs de la vie en commun est l'opportunité de pouvoir interagir avec outres personnes, et de cette manière, étendre ton réseau de contactes. Qui sait si un jour quelqu'un peut t'aider à trouver un travail qui te plaise (ou plait? utilise-t-on le subjonctif?) beaucoup? En outre, tout le monde peut contribuer à l'expérience propre talent. Par exemple, quelqu'un de bon dans la musique peut utiliser sa guitare pour agrémenter l'ambiance. Cependant, le fait qu'il y ait tant de gens sous un toit te priver de ta intimité, ce qui contredit la fonction de la maison; lequel est t'abriter du chaos de la vie dehors. aussitôt que tu commences à la partager, cette fuite disparaît.
Malgré tout ça, je pense que les gens peuvent jouir de cet type d'accommodation, toujours que ils sachent ce qui faisant. (As long as they know what they are getting into?)
comment- I know the title is in the “vous” form, I took it from a translator- please correct me as if I was using the “tu” form. Thanks!
Oct. 18, 2021
Ma maison de rêve
J'ai toujours voulu avoir une maison qui m'appartient. Je veux qu'elle a trois étapes de haut, un grand jardin autour de la maison, une grande cuisine pour que je puisse cuisiner. Quand j'ai rien à faire, je vais oragniser une fête et inviter tous mes amis. Je veux avoir 2 chiens aussi qui peut jouer avec moi. Je veux y vivre tout seul et faire ce que je veux faire.
Oct. 18, 2021
Oct. 18, 2021
Schrijfoefening-13
Mijn cursus is bijna afgelopen. Maar ik moet mijn huiswerk afmaken. Daarom kom ik vanavond niet op je feestje.
Ik dacht dat ik nooit zou slagen voor dat examen. Maar ik heb veel tijd gestudeerd. Daardoor is het toch gelukt.
Ik had me ingeschreven voor een cursus Windows. Maar het was heel moeilijk voor mij. Dus ga ik een andere cursus doen.
Vanavond begint de les om 19.00 uur. Maar ik moet mijn oma bezoeken. Daarom kom ik wat later.
Ik was op tijd van huis gegaan. Maar de trein was vertraging. Daardoor was ik veel te laat op school.
Oct. 18, 2021
Oct. 18, 2021
Schrijfoefening-12
Hoewel hij hard studeerde voor zijn examen, kon hij niet het afleggen.
Hoewel Latifa ver van de school woont, heeft zij geen stress.
Hij stopt met zijn opleiding, hoewel hij meteen naar buitenland wil gaan.
Juanita slaagde voor haar examen, hoewel zij niet tevreden was.
Terwijl ik de Engels les volg, sms ik met een vriend.
Ahmed en Juan werken altijd goed samen. Terwijl Ahmet informatie zoekt op het internet, Juan naar hun klanten belt.
In de pauze zet Alex thee, terwijl hij met zijn vriendin praat.
Terwijl zij naar buiten liep, dacht zij naar haar kinderen.
Ik dacht dat ik de les begreep. Toch ik veel fouten in mijn toets had.
Ze zijn echt altijd te laat. Toch ze altijd niks zeggen.
Christina studeerde hard voor haar examen. Toch haar uitslag niet goed was.
Hij moet de cursus zelf betalen. Toch zijn vriend hem betaalt.
Oct. 18, 2021
Oct. 18, 2021
24. L'utilisation excessive des téléphones portables 📲
D'origine, le but de téléphone était de connecter les gens du monde entier. Mais au bout d'un moment, le téléphone devient une barrière quand les gens s'assoient face à face. Il instruit même la vie actuelle. On va voir pourquoi.
Tout d'abord, on est trop concentrés sur notre petit écran. Quand on déjeune avec les amis, on n'oublierons pas de prendre un photo et le poster sur Instagram ou Snapchat. Et ensuite, on va se concentrer sur les « J’amies » et commentaires que nos amis virtuelle ont laissés. Or, on ignore qu'il y a des vrais personnes devant nous, pour parler et discuter avec. Donc, au fur et à mesure, il y aura moins de amis qui veulent déjeuner avec une personne qui ne se concentre que sur son téléphone. C’est comme ça qu'on perde des amis dans la vie réelle.
De plus, avec l'usage des applications de communication instant, c'est souvent qu'on reçevoie de messages de travail par téléphone quand on est en congés. Selon moi, c'est une intrusion de la vie personnelle et ça m'agace énormément.
Cependant, la technologie nous apporte beaucoup de convenients et c'est injuste de l'abandonner juste à cause de notre usage excessive. Cette petite boîte nous permet de communiquer avec notre famille qui vivent à l’étranger, de créer le lien plus proche avec nos clients et de augmenter l'efficacité de travail, parce qu’on n’a pas de besoin de poster un courriel et d’atteindre la réponse lentement. Donc, pour que le téléphone nous bénéficient plus, on peut adopter les mesures suivants.
Premièrement, c’est de laisser le téléphone sous la poche, sans regarder quand on est accompagné avec les proches. Comme ça, on peut bien profiter de ce moment précis.
Deuxièmement, on peut avoir deux téléphones, un pour l'usage personnel et un pour l'usage professionnel. Quand on sorte de travail, on peut laisser le téléphone de travail au bureau, on évite donc recevoir des messages agaçants !
Tout bien considéré, le téléphone lui-même n'a pas de problem et il peut même vous aider à s’agrandir le réseau sociaux. Le problème, c'est notre usage excessif et on doit donc le corriger.
Oct. 18, 2021
子供にゲームをさせないほうがよい。。どう思いますか
多くの人の子供の時代にとってはコンピューターゲームが欠かせないものになったといえるであろう。だが、ゲームは子供の夢をかなえるかたわら、勉強のことを邪魔し、いたずらな行動につながる心配に思う親が少なくない。したがって、子供にゲームをさせないほうがよいと言われるのはそのためである。私自分自身もゲームをするので、ゲーム好きの代表としてゲームを守りたいと思っている。
さて、言語習得からと言えば、ゲームは非常に効果的な媒体のひとつである。多くのゲームは外国語で表示するだけでなく、マルチプレイヤーゲームをするとき、英語などの国際言語を使わずにいられない。気づかないうちに、英語を話せるであろう。しかも、手と目の協調や創造性ということは言うまでもなく、ゲームは子供にとって利点がかなり多い。
しかし、現在、多くの親はゲームの利点を知っているが、不適切な内容、ネットいじめ、時間管理の方が心配している。そこで、早いうちに対処しておかなければならない。ゲームをさせないほうがいいことになった。では、それはいつも正しい方法わけではない。
ということで、親は子供に適切なゲームを一緒に選び、ゲームをしている間に監督すべきである。そうでなければ、ペアレンタルコントロールをオンにしてもよい。殊にアプリ内課金があれば、決して自分のクレジットカードを追加してはいけない。これらと共に、子供にコンピューターをさせても問題ない。
このように、ゲームは子供の成長に必要とはいえないまでも、友達を作るのに欠かせないものになった。現代の技術のおかげで、ゲームの良いところを生かしているうちに、子供の安全を守ってほしい。
Oct. 18, 2021
Morning Routines
Let me describe my morning routines, which I try to do a lot of things.
First, after getting up, I try to write nine golden sentences which are to keep my mind peaceful and to doing patiently.
After this routine, I can wake up completely and I am ready to do anything.
Next, I start to study English for improving my speaking skills.
I want to speak more fluently, so I have some study routines for that.
For example, I speak about any topic for more than one minute.
And I write a journal in English.
Plus, I practice quizzes given in my textbooks.
Whether I wake up late or not, I try to do all of these routines every day.
With the aid of routines, my speaking skills are improved, and I am able to keep my mind with less stress.
Oct. 18, 2021
The greatness of an individuals
In our human race, we always admire the exceptionality of individuals and their great work. However, the deciding factors for identifications of these exceptional persons are assessed differently in different ages. This prompt is recommending one the factors regarding this exceptionality where I strongly agree with this recommendation.
In a certain era, we can find different kind of talented and ambitious individuals that seems impeccable and no one seems not to cross that barrier. But within a few decades, we can see another perfectionist who crosses the barrier and surprised us. This is because of the determination, hunger and resources varied in different ages. For example, Shahid Afridi once scored a hundred within 37 balls and become the owner of the record of the quickest hundred in cricket history and later those records are broken by different batsmen. But in his time, it seemed impossible. Obviously, the availability of resources and improvement of the technologies and rules make it more possible. Nonetheless, it is always important to wait for a time being, to consider one great, exceptional and perfect.
Contemporaries are not always posed a significant amount of challenges for various reasons. That age might be full of different agenda, lack of resources, lack of enough “why’’, paucity of determination. In the time of Pele and Maradona- there were other sports with a lot of attention, the world was rebuilding after world war II and the cold war, lack of resources and bad rules are strongly demotivating factors of the growth of a player. That’s how we don’t find any better contemporaries that can contend these two great player.
In the case of other fields, Albert Eienstein, Stephan Hawkings, are the paragon for the science field and since now their contribution cannot be crossed by any other individuals and that’s how they are considered great to date. In political paragon, Skeikh Mujibur Rahman from Bangladesh, Abraham lincoln from the USA and many others are considered great for the same reason. But it was unwise to consider them highly exceptional in their own time. It would not be imperfect as well as would diminish their hunger and determination.
But in some cases, we can consider someone as great in the human race in a particular field. One of the examples is Messi and Ronaldo, who are doing great thing every day in the football field and crosses their own barrier every day and declaring them great doesn’t lose their hunger and determination in a minuscule scale.
Considering all these, I strongly believe that, it is more appropriate to consider oneself as a great individual after waiting a certain period of time and after that when no one still crosses him, safely declare him as a perfectionist in his own field – rather than quickly reach the conclusion by comparing him with his contemporaries.
Oct. 18, 2021
Oct. 18, 2021
お願いします＜３
コロナ影響で何もせずに、プレッシャーも大きく、いつも未来に不安を抱く、いつも母親にしがみつく。さらに、働きの目的もなく、弱い自分に勝つことができない。しかし、この記事を通じて３つのことを学ぶことができた。一つ目、人にしがみつかない、自立することが大切だと思う。「自分の腕一本で生きていく気概」をもつこと。二つ目、己に勝つことは，成長に必要条件なのだ。欠点を隠そうとするより、短所を目立つようにしたほうができる人に見え、価値を生み出せる人になる。最後、将来に向けて準備をしておくことで、順応性がある、新しい時代に生まれてくる課題やチャンスに向かう成長意欲を持った人材であると、上司にアピールすることが出来る。今から、前向きに明るくとらえ、気楽に生きていこう、ピンチはチャンスだとは思っている。
Oct. 18, 2021
lunes, 18 de octubre de 2021; La samosa
Una samosa es una torta frita rellena de relleno sabroso y es muy popular en países como India, Nepal, Pakistán y Bangladesh. Tiene forma de triángulo y se puede rellenar de papas, cebollas, carne, chow mein, especias, chiles, cacahuetes, chícharos, lentejas, etc. Se puede servir como plato principal con chutney de menta o cilantro y tamarindo y jalebi, bocadillo o aperitivo.
Receta de samosa:Ingredientes:2 tazas de harina (conocida localmente como maida), agua fría, relleno de su elección, sal y aceite
Mezcle la harina, la sal y 2 cucharadas del aceite. Añada el agua y amase hasta obtener una masa firme pero flexible. Forme un wrap triángulo, llene el interior con relleno pero se acuerda dejar un espacio de 1cm alrededor para hacer samosa crujientes. Presione los bordes juntos para sellar las samosa. Después de llenado, quedándolas cubiertas con un paño húmedo. Después de 5 o 10 minutos, fría las samosa hasta que se doren por ambos lados. ¡Y su torta rica está lista!
Oct. 18, 2021
Oct. 18, 2021
私の国の有名な人
チャン ・タインは ベトナムでは一番有名な芸術家です。私は子供のときに彼の映画を見て、チャン・タインさんが大好きでした。
映画、特にコメディを愛する若者にとって、チャン ・タインという名前は間違いなく見知らぬものではありません。元々はコメディアンでしたが、後に映画やテレビの俳優になりました。 14年以上の演技経験を持つ、この男はベトナムの本当に才能のある俳優と見なされるに値します。
演技への情熱に加えて、チャン ・タインさんは多くのテレビ番組の司会です。彼は面白くて、深い人だと言われています。2020年に, チャン ・タインさんは "Bo Gia" 映画の演出しました。この映画は彼の最初の映画です。メディアやファンから大きな注目を集めました。史上最高の売上高を誇るベトナム映画です。
チャン ・タインさんは多くのファンに愛されているです。ベトナムのファンだけでなく、外国のファンも彼をとても気に入っています。
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