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Je veux aller aux vacances
Je veux aller aux vacances. Je rêve de soleil et de mer. Aujourd'hui, j'ai passé quelques heures sur l'internet à chercher des vacances. Dois-je aller en France ou en Espagne? Au bord de la mer ou a la campagne? Autant j'aime la plage, j'aime aussie les montagnes.
C'etait un vraiment bien façon de passer mon temps! Et toi? De quelles vacances rêvez-vous?
Oct. 19, 2021
Comment aborder le problème des crimes sexuelles sur---
Comment aborder le problème des crimes sexuelles sur les campus ?
Les crimes sexuelles sur les campus, particulièrement le voyeurisme, sont violations de la loi qui doivent être soigneusement investiguées. Mais avec tant de discussions et de avertissements, nous devons nos demander: Où nos sommes tombés? Bien, je peux vous dire que la totalité des problèmes on peut retracer à un thème central: l'impunité. J'en dividerai en deux parties, vous donnant le contexte dans cette partie.
Il fait que les auteurs de tells crimes soient punis n'est pas suffisamment pour décourager les imitateurs, parce que ils pensent que la condamnation vaut la peine pour la gratification qui ils peuvent obtenir de la violation des droits féminines. En plus, l'identification du individu par le média peut lui causer reculer dans les rideaux, donnant lieu à le récidivisme, car quand on se sent seul, il va à recourir à ses vices.
Donc, qu'est-ce que les institutions peuvent faire afin que quelquefois se arrête avant de songer à faire telle chose?
Oct. 19, 2021
Oct. 19, 2021
Oct. 19, 2021
Deep work (Del 2)
Det er viktig å strukturere tiden sin for å optimisere glad. Dette betyr at når vi bruker tid på unyttige ting, som ruller FB, føler vi lavere energi. Når man vet ikke hva man skal gjøre neste, pleier man å bruke tid suboptimalt. Dette kan føre til at man kan ikke 'gå' dyp inntil vikige prosesser i livet sitt. Newport skriver at det er enda bra å strukturere fritid å utvikle gode vaner. Folk tenker ofte at de må slappe av og ser på tv hjemme. Men vi kan produsere mer verdifulle øyeblikk gjennom livet vårt med dyp tid. Det minste vik kan gjøre er å planlegge og å forberede oss på slike momenter. I tillegg kan vi finner mer flyt i slike tider. Flyt beskriver følelser av totalt fokus på en objektiv. Man kan ikke kjenne tid, plass blir smalt og vi optimisere reaksjonen vår til problemet ved hånden. F.eks når man løper kort distanse på høy tempo, er det vanskelig å tenke på skatten sin. Endelig, fra mitt perspektiv, struktur er avgjørende for å redusere usikkerhet. Jeg sliter mye med slike momenter og jeg er ikke mitt best selv da. På den andre siden, når jeg skape tid å gjøre viktig ting, føler jeg vekst og fremgang.
Oct. 19, 2021
2021/10/19
有些作家並不喜歡讀者用他的創作品而寫同人小說。他們覺得對於有抱負的作家來說，寫同人小說無益，會嚴重影響到寫原創故事的能力。我對這樣的想法不認同。我個人沒有寫同人小說的習慣，不過認識幾位朋友有。大部分寫同人小說的人並沒有當作家的念頭，他們只是愛好者而已。他們寫同人小說，是因為看完書或玩完遊戲後，很喜歡故事裏的角色與主題，才花那麼多精神與時間來寫同人小說。而且，假如你真的想當作家，寫同人小說也算是練習。因為角色已經被預先決定了，你可以練習一下其他寫作元素，比如故事節奏、角色對話、描述等。當在寫同人小說時，你並不是從零開始，所以跟寫原創故事相比，壓力也比較小。所以我覺得，寫同人小說並沒有負面的影響，而且還是一種有趣的練習方式。
Oct. 19, 2021
Religion, what religion?
In prehistory, religión was a manner to find an explanation to all things the man did not understand. Unfortunately at present, religion has become a problem in the moment that one person wish to impose his beliefs to others. All people are free to belief in all they wishing, certainly, but without imposing anything to the rest. We all must to have respect the beliefs or not beliefs of other people, and to live all in peace.
Oct. 19, 2021
License
I will have to make my driving license renewal tomorrow. The renewal deadline was last January, but it was postponed three times because of coronavirus situation. There was one more opportunity to delay the deadline, but I decided not to delay it anymore. I should put on my make up more carefully than usual, because I will make taken a photo for license. I wonder why photos for license are always terrible. My face in the photo usually look pale and evil!
Oct. 19, 2021
Oct. 19, 2021
Exhausted
I'm exhausted today.
I went to the cleaning zone in the morning, the boys are cleaning. There were some administrators in the city cented would come here foring guiding, so it was quite busy for the students to clean. I was a little stressful because they didn't do it well while the school's administrators told me that I need to be more carefully of the cleaning work.
Then I went to classroom, it was still dirty. Sooner, I got a call from the dormitory keeper that my students didn't clean their room. I got angry soon. What's worse, a chief asked me to look after my class so that he could have a rest. I was very hugery, and I would have class in 10 minutes.
The students performed badly, they didn't take the lesson seriously. I felt like I was bomb that I would explode any seconds. But I had no time to do that because I need to attend a public lesson and a semonar after that. Yep, I was quite busy.
My neighbour is building a new house, it was very noisy today. I went to office early in the afternoon. I put on my earphone and got peace for a while. Ms. Liu told me that there was a girl in her class who had CHD, was very fragile. Last Friday, she girl told her that she wanted to die because of her illness. I was astonished. I always thoght that class 1 was the best class in grade 8. I was quite regjoiced now. Though the boys were naughty, they were tough. Long time ago, I received a massage from a network friend, she told me that she wanted to die. I was so shocked and worried for a long time that she would really did as she had said.
I finished some parper work as well. I also corrected the homework. When I thought I would have a good time to relax, the chief asked me to look after my class at night. He called my father, and my father made a promise. I always think that my father is stupid.
I'm exhausted. I have never gotten any happiness from the job.
Oct. 19, 2021
Help me to understand English! ☘️
Which one is correct? what is different between them?
1. At the last hour of school, Paul's teacher gave the children some homework to do.
2. At the end of school, Paul's teacher gave the children some homework to do.
3. Cows live most countries 'in the world and give us most of milk that we drink.
4. Cows live most countries 'of the world and give us most of milk that we drink.
5. They often fish 'at the end' of their garden.
6. They often fish 'from the end' of their garden.
Oct. 19, 2021
Finalmente, un titolo- Chernobyl (1)
Chernobyl (1)
È innegabile che il disastro che ha avuto luogo a Chernobyl sia un avvenimento che ha sbudellato completamente l'Unione Sovietica, precipitando (ne?) il suo crollo. Vorrei analizzare, in questo componimento, le azioni dei lavoratori che adoperavano il pannello di controllo del reattore quel fatidico giorno; più specificamente, quelle di una sola persona- Dyatlov.
Dyatlov era una figura imponente. Gli garbava minacciare i suoi subordinati con il licenziamento, anche se non ha mai avuto intenzione di dimettere qualcuno. Gli piaceva anche dileggiare i suoi colleghi, fino al punto che c'erano dei pettegolezzi su come disumanizzasse i dipendenti quando ridacchiava che le loro mogli gli mettevano la corna.
Sfortunatamente (o fortunatamente), l'incidente a Chernobyl è capitato di essere il suo colpo di grazia; l'ha accoppato. Durante la notte dell'accidente, doveva esserci un test di sicurezza per verificare che funzionasse, ironicamente, il sistema di sicurezza. C'è stata una discussione sulle modifiche che conformavano il reattore ai parametri del test. I consigli di Dyatlov infrangevano le regole, perciò i dipendenti, ormai diventati balbuzienti dalla paura che Dyatlov aveva incusso in loro, gli suggerivano di non fare quello che diceva, pur di prevenire una fusione del nocciolo.
Cosa succederà?
Oct. 19, 2021
Oct. 19, 2021
Notizia
Dalle prime ore di questa mattina il pubblico di un circo in Polonia ha presenziato una scena terribile. Un orso ha attaccato a una donna in mezzo uno spettacolo.
La donna, che formava anche parte del gruppo, era accompagnata da due altri compagni prima dal attache dall’animale. L’orso attaccò alla donna innanzitutto acciuffando la sua gamba e dopo la aveva buttato al piatto.
La vittima era una donna da 30 anni, alta e magra, di cappelli castani, lunghi e risi. Lei indossava un vestito molto colorito e molto impressionante. Lei è stata pronta per lo show quando aveva successo il tragico evento.
I due uomini che la accompagnavano hanno colpito all’animale per spaventarlo e la vittima l’hanno portato all’ospedale. Da fonte affidabile sappiamo che i medici hanno informato al circo che la donna sta bene e ha subito pochi graffi e una contusione.
Secondo la vittima, l’orso l’ha attaccato per “gelosia”. La donna assicura: “dopo questa situazione, l’orso si comporta con me come al solito, molto affettuoso e molto carino. Come se nulla cosa è successa.
Ciò nonostante, gli attivisti in Polonia chiedono ai circhi di smettere di usare animali per i loro spettacoli. Un giovane attivista chiede: “I circhi devono lasciare di fare questi spettacoli con animali, è una attività bruta e poco divertente”.
Oct. 19, 2021
Vacation at Home
I really liked to go abroad during my vacations.
If I had a chance, I went to Japan or China once a year.
These days, it isn’t possible because of Covid-19
This time, I just stayed at home during my 3 day vacation last week.
At first, it was very boring since I couldn’t see anything outside.
However, I finally enjoyed spending my time at home.
I read many books and watched videos.
In the end, I changed my mind that a home vacation was also good.
Oct. 19, 2021
Reseña de película: Amelie (parte 2)
Después de aceptar su propio reto, Amelie empieza buscar el dueño de la cajita. Habla con sus vecinos en su edificio, incluso a una mujer mayor que fue abandonado por su esposo hace muchos años y ahora vive solitaria. También conoce a un hombre viejo que vive en la unidad opuesta a suya. Llamado "El Hombre Hecho De Vidrio" por unas personas, ella descubre que él tiene una enfermedad relacionada con sus huesos, que son muy frágiles. El hombre, Raymond, es pintor, aunque generalmente hace reproducciones de obras famosas. Raymond sabe el nombre del niño que vivía en la unidad de Amelie y se lo dice a ella. Amelie finalmente logra encontrar el hombre - pero debido a su timidez, no quiere entregarle la cajita en físico, y en vez sigue al hombre y contacta a él con teléfono público, mirándolo desde una distancia cuando él encuentra la cajita. Su reacción es inmediata y fuerte: echa de llorar con lagrimas de alegría. Amelie decide embarcarse en un camino nuevo, de tratar de hacer a la gente feliz.
El resto de la película involucra sus intentos para hacer esta tarea. Algunos son breves, como cuando acompaña a un hombre ciego al estación de tren, a lo largo del camino describiéndole en gran detalle los visuales de la calle. También tiene un plan para su padre: ella roba a un gnomo que forma parte de su santuario, y lo da a una amiga que es azafata - su amiga toma el gnomo por todo el mundo, tomando fotos de él en frente de sitios famosos y enviándolas a la padre de Amelie, en un intento de alentarlo a viajar. Trata de encender un romance entre una compañera de trabajo y un cliente. Y hace hasta más cosas extrañas...
Oct. 19, 2021
Oct. 19, 2021
Oct. 19, 2021
Journal
I work in an agricultural radio and television school. The school is responsible for training farmers in my district. Anhui province has 13 prefectural level cities, 9 county level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts. In theory, every administrative reigns should have this type of school. Anhui agricultural radio and television school is our head school. It has the highest administrative level in all the schools in Anhui Province and it directs the works of all the schools in Anhui province. Every year, the provincial school will organize training courses to promote the knowledge and pedagogical skills of teachers in the schools of our province. I have the chance to attend the training this year. The training for this year will last two days and there are four courses during this training. Two lessons one day, one in the morning and another in the afternoon. Food and accommodations are free in the training, and the training takes place at a hotel in Hefei, the capital of Anhui. I eat at and live in the hotel. I took some photos of the hotel. Let me share it with you guys. I think the hotel is wonderful. What do you think?
Oct. 18, 2021
まとめ：「なぜカトリック教会の存在感が薄れてきたのか」
著者によると、ブラジル人は、宗教を聞かれ答えるとき、自嘲気味に答えます。
「私はカトリック信者だけど、熱心に教会に通うほどじゃない」
「ブラジル国土は、貧困救済の左翼思想をもつカトリックの一宗派「解放の神学」の中心地だ。しかし、近年カトリック教徒の数は激減している。」
著者は、ブラジルと、同じくカトリック教徒の多いメキシコを比較しています。メキシコでは、毎週土曜日か日曜日に家族で教会に行くのは普通のことです。しかし、ブラジル人はメキシコ人のようにミサに行くことはありません。
IBGEのデータによると、1940年以降、プロテスタントの数は増加しており、カトリックの人口は薄れてきた。
著者の言葉は、「妊娠中絶や離婚を認めないなどのカトリックの考え方が、しだいに現代のブラジル人の生活とかけ離れてきていて、そのことが教徒の減少に拍車をかけている可能性は否定できない。」 と言います。
カトリックの考え方と現代のブラジル人の生活に含む論争は、著者によって言及されました。
2009年、ブラジルでは、九歳の少女が義父にレイプされ、妊娠し、中絶を受けました。これらの場合、ブラジルでは、中絶手術は合法化されます。しかし、教会は医師の決定を否認しました。
「当時のルラ大統領は「医学の方が正しい判断をした」と教会側を批判するなど、政府を巻き込む騒動に発展した。」
著者が提示したケースは、2020年8月16日に起こったことを想起させました。ブラジルでは、プロテスタントの「ボルソナリスタ」グループが、父親にレイプされた10歳の少女が中絶を受けるのを阻止しようとしたのだ。
プロテスタントの教団については、著者はこの教団の信者が増えたであろう2つの要因を指摘している。
第1の要因：プロテスタントは, テレビ番組でミーサを放送しているし、貧困層に届いています。
著者は、プロテスタントは大きな説得力があると説明しています。ブラジル人によると、「心の隙に入るのがうまい」。
第2の要因: サッカーブラジル代表の力力は、福音主義者であり、これまでスキャンダルとは無縁であった。さらに、このサッカー選手は、同じ宗派の女性と結婚するまで純潔を守り通すとを保っていたことが知られています。
私の質問：
著者によると、現代のブラジルの生活と含むを合わせていないカトリックの考え方は何ですか？
Oct. 18, 2021
Should a high-school be built in your community?
Just as the education is extremely important, many schools have been opened during this new decade. Personally, I reckon education is one of the most important things in a society. Therefore, a high-school ought to be constructed in my community because many students can study, the high-school could be used for other activities, and people have the opportunity to practice sports at campus.
First off, building a new high-school in a community is an excellent message to society to involve in the development of that place. Many kids will have the opportunity to study and learn new things provided by qualified teachers at high-school. The knowledge is not only the unique goal for students, but also the development of other skills is important as well. For example, if the high-school has a small library inside of the campus, students may go inside to study and share with their parents doing different activities such as science fair, reading books, and so on.
Secondly, a new high-school has other benefits as doing special activities of the community in the high-school. It is not only for students, but also people can use this location to do important activities as parties of the city, big meeting to discuss problems, and events that parents can share with kids. I remember when I was a child, I used to go to my elementary school with my parents to spend time together in some activities like “Kermese”, which is a day when each course of my school did a special dance to show to parents.
Finally, practicing sports is a perfect way to keep healthy. In some communities, they do not have the enough space to practice them. However, having a high-school with fields, it is possible to do exercise or play sports anytime, even weekends when people have much free time. Consequently, community people are able to do exercise and be healthy due to the high-school. If they did not have that site, they might not have this opportunity of doing recreational activities.
To sum up, I believe that a high-school would be a big benefit to my community because students can study, the place could be used for other activities, and practice different sports.
Oct. 18, 2021
Je veux aller aux vacances
Je veux aller aux vacances. Je rêve de soleil et de mer. Aujourd'hui, j'ai passé quelques heures sur l'internet à chercher des vacances. Dois-je aller en France ou en Espagne? Au bord de la mer ou a la campagne? Autant j'aime la plage, j'aime aussie les montagnes.
C'etait un vraiment bien façon de passer mon temps! Et toi? De quelles vacances rêvez-vous?
Oct. 18, 2021
Livre d'exercices de la physique
Aujourd'hui, j'ai reçu un colis qui provenait du Japon. Il contenait ce que j'avais commandé sur Internert, donc la plupart du contenu était de la nourriture, mais un des articles était un livre d'exercices de la physique.
J'ai toujours voulu rapprendre la physique, car c'était l'un des cours où j'étais la plus mauvaise. Au lycée, je n'ai pas bien compris ce qui était intéressant avec le cacul de puissense machin et l'onde truc etc, et en plus je n'avais pas besoin de cette matière pour les concours des universités où je voulais aller.
Mais maintenant, l'idée de devenir capable de comprendre des phénomènes physiques autour de nous m'excite, majoritairement grâce à du temps libre dont je me dispose en ce moment. En plus, si j'ai des questions, mon mari pourra m'aider, parce qu'il l'a étudié pour entrer dans l'université.
Oct. 18, 2021
Do we need music in our lives?
Music is one of the most important thins in our life.
When we born, we listen since first minutes, and music is one of the things that we listen.
Feelings listening music are very different, sometimes we feel happiness, other times we feel sad, other exited,...
I think few people can live without music. I mean that it's not necessary every day, but sometimes is a good therapy for our mind.
Oct. 18, 2021
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