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April 19, 2022
Voy a aprender el islandés
He decidido aprender islandés. El islandés es el idioma oficial de Islandia, y tiene 320 000 hablantes. Puede parecer mucho, pero en realidad no lo es... Además, la mayoría de los islandeses hablan inglés lo que significa que es difícil encontrar personas con las cuales puedes practicar.
Tengo 5 razones principales para los que voy a aprender el islandés:
1. Pienso que es un idioma muy muy bonito. No lo puede describir...
2. Desde el Eurovisión 2019 me enamoro de Hatari, un grupo de punk rock/tecno islandés. Me encantan sus canciones, en particular "Spilligardans", "Ógleði" y "Klámstrákur". Me gustaría tanto comprender lo que dicen sin buscar las palabras en internet...
3. Quiero visitar Reikiavik en unos años. Sería genial ser capaz de conversar con los habitantes en su idioma.
4. Lo veo como un desafío para mí mismo. Es la primera vez que voy a intentar aprender un idioma sin un profesor, y quiero ver cuales son mis límitas.
5. Tengo muchos sitios web y videos que quiero explorar.
April 19, 2022
Safari
El safari no era un asunto sencillo porque recientemente había habido muchos cambios en el África Oriental. El cazador blanco había sido uno de mis amigos íntimos desde hacía varios años. Yo lo respetaba más de lo que había respetado a mi propio padre y él tenía una inmerecida confianza en mí, la cual yo anhelaba justificar en algún momento, de alguna manera. Él me enseñaba dejándome hacer y cuando yo cometía un error, él me explicaba en qué había errado. Si en lo subsiguiente evitaba repetir el error, me explicaba aún más sobre el mismo tema. No obstante, él era un nómada y yo presentía que se acercaba el momento en el que nos abandonaría para volver a su granja. Él era un hombre complejo dotado de un coraje excepcional, de todas las debilidades que pueden catalogarse como virtudes, y de un sutil y profundo entendimiento de la naturaleza humana. Sentía una devoción completa hacia su familia y su hogar, pero por alguna razón prefería vivir alejado de ambos. No obstante, no me cabía la menor duda de que adoraba a su mujer y a sus hijos.
"¿Qué te sucede? ¿Cuál es el problema"?
"Temo cometer un error cuando se trate de lidiar con los elefantes."
"Aprenderás".
"¿Tiene algo más que decir al respecto?"
"Que sepas que todos saben más que tú, pero que eres tú el que debe tomar las decisiones, y debes hacerlas acatar. Deja que Keiti se encargue del campamento y de esas nimiedades, y tú da lo mejor de ti."
Amo estar al mando porque me parece que es la amalgama perfecta entre esclavitud y libertad. Puedes disfrutar de tu libertad, y cuando ésta se torna peligrosa, puedes escudarte en tus deberes. Por muchos años, yo no había dado órdenes a nadie excepto a mí mismo y esto me había agobiado. Me conocía demasiado bien y mis debilidades me ofrecían poca libertad y muchos deberes.
Algún tiempo atrás, había leído con desagrado varios libros escritos acerca de mí por gente que creía saberlo todo sobre mi vida interior, mis motivos y aspiraciones. Leerlos había sido como leer la narración de una batalla en la que has participado, escrita por gente que a un tiempo había estado presente y no había aún nacido. Toda esa gente que escribía acerca de mí lo hacía con el absoluto convencimiento de que yo no había sentido jamás nada.
Por espacio de varios años, me había referido a mi amigo y maestro como "Pop". Él me llamaba de la misma manera. Al principio, unos veinte años antes, cuando yo había comenzado a llamarlo "Pop", él lo había consentido con la condición de que esta pequeña falta de buenas costumbres no ocurriera en presencia de otras personas. Sin embargo, cuando cumplí los cincuenta, edad en la que me convertí en un anciano de la tribu, a él se le dio por comenzar a llamarme "Pop", tal como yo lo hacía con él. Esta era una gran lisonja, fácil de conferir y mortal en el caso de que fuese retirada. No quisiera imaginar una situación, o más bien no quisiera sobrevivir a una situación, en la que me viese forzado a llamarle, en privado, por su nombre de pila, o en la que él me llamase por mi nombre de pila.
April 19, 2022
Essay: About tuition fees in UK universities (C1 CAE)
You have listened to a debate about UK university tuition fees. Then, you have been asked to vote in favour of some of the options provided. You have made the notes below:
Should UK universities charge tuition fees?
- Tuition gees should not be charged.
- Universities should charge very low tuition fees.
- Universities need to charge high fees to have a high standard.
Some opinions during the talk:
- “Universities are facing substantial cuts in direct government funding”.
- “Universities will face additional economic pressures as student numbers increase”.
- “We should ensure access to university is based on the ability to learn, not the ability to pay”.
Write an essay discussing two of the options in your notes. You should explain which option would be best giving reasons in support of your answer.
You may, if you wish, make use of the opinions expressed in the talk, but you should use your own words as far as possible.
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(What could make it sounds more natural? )
Last week I went to an interesting debate in my university, where it was discussed whether or not students in the UK should pay tuition fees in higher education. UK have some of the top ranked universities in the world, but is there an economical reason behind all of that?
From the debate I heard that universities more and more have to deal with public cutbacks. This problem affects a greater extend to those which have low incomes from private sources of funding, this is most of colleges in the country. Nevertheless, from my way of thinking this is far from being a good reason to students to be overcharged, since universities must face economic crisis periods as either private company would do. I mean, looking for new ways of funding in order to keep their educational standards without raising fees to the students. They are the real value of this higher education system, therefore it must be guaranteeded a universal access to it. This implies being free in order not to descriminate candidates for economical reasons, as it was expressed in the discussion by one participant, who stated that students must be assessed by their skills at learning.
Far beyond expressed above, there is no point on scoring a university by means of the economic resources. It is true that a stronger financially college is able to support more expensive facilities and tools, which leads to a higher quality education. However, it is not the most important part when it comes to rate such an institution. For example, student creativity play a major role on this issue.
All in all, I consider that there is no need in overcharging with higher fees, rather what may be done is removing the existing ones.
April 19, 2022
Little Things we Can To Do
It is hard to fight against the procrastinating. I think is a good idea to have an app or a notebook to list the things to do. The most important is to be realist and organize the tasks in one form and in a times that we can realize them. Also is important to begin with some easy task and follow with the rest of them. I have a cube clock that it has on the sides several numbers (5, 15, 30, 45 and 60 minutes), it has also one side without numbers to stop the timer. This clock is useful to change or concentrate between the different tasks. Other things, like to improve our will-power or to have little rewards can help us too.
April 19, 2022
April 19, 2022
19 avril 2022 - soucis
Aujourd’hui j’ai déjeuné avec ma prof de lycée et on a discuté beaucoup de choses (c’était plutôt qu’elle m’a parlé). Elle s’est plainte de ses collègues et m’a décrit en détails ce qui s’est passé. Je ne me suis plainte beaucoup de ma faculté (qui ne digne pas le classement de seconde du monde à mon avis) mais je me suis sentie quand même soulagée parce que je me suis rendue compte que les « souffrances » que j’ai subis à l’école n’étaient pas si radiculaires par rapport à celui qu’elle a reçus. Le monde adult est beaucoup plus difficile.
April 19, 2022
Eating time
It's fun to watch my children eat.
One child eats fast, but he eats while doing something else like watching TV and playing with toys.
So he usually eats late.
On the other hand, the other child eats very slow, but he eats steadily without doing anything else.
As a result, he often finishes his meal first.
It is like watching the story of a rabbit and a turtle.
April 19, 2022
Мой путь изучения языка, второя часть
Когда я начал изучать испанский язык, у меня была много мотивации. на начале я только изучал испанский язык в школе, потому что я считал что я не мог бы сам изучать иностранные языки. А потом я думал что классы испански потому что мы только изучали грамматику которой я уше значал.
April 19, 2022
From Bad to Worse
Throughout the pandemic, I have felt completely helpless most of time. I have suffered from cancer three times but that compared to going through two long years of such a deadly pandemic is almost irrelevant. Although having cancer is considered one of the worst things a human being can suffer from, at least I was surrounded by my family who always were by my side. I knew that, even though I was very ill, they were not. And that once, because every time I had cancer I positively knew I was going to overcome it, I was at home again, life would be as it was before. However, throughout the pandemic things were completely different. It wasn’t a matter of one person being ill. Nobody knew what might happen. Nobody was safe. You could become infected in anywhere anytime. Worst of all, it wasn’t something that was only happening in my city or my country, COVID was raging through the whole world. And of course, nobody knew how to stop it. Now, at least temporally, it seems that COVID positive cases are the lowest ever. However, there is an even greater threat to human beings. If the pandemic was unpredictable, and I firmly believe it still continues to be, Putin is even more unforeseeable and given the case, he could destroy the world in the blink of an eye. So we’re almost in the same place that we were two years ago. Nobody knows what can happen tomorrow. Nobody can do anything to stop this incomprehensible war. Nobody can tell Putin that what he’s doing is completely unjustifiable. We’re at the mercy of someone who one day decided that Ukraine was his backyard and everything inside it was his. And on top of that, he’s unstoppable because, even though things aren’t going as planned, he has something that could reduce the whole planet to ashes. As Mafalda said: “Stop the world, I want to get off”
April 19, 2022
3 Conversation about a Crayon shinchan's movie
Would you help me to correct anything wrong or unnatural in the following sentences?
I'd like to know common colloquial phrases and slang！ 🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
Movie summary is Shinnosuke and his friends enter a super elite boarding school for a week, and various incidents occur.
B: Have you seen "Tenkasu Gakuen"?
A: I've watched it recently!
It was really good!
Have you seen it?
B: I haven't yet.
I'm gonna watch it when it'll start to be uploaded on a streaming service!
A: It's on Netflix!
B: Really!?
I'll watch it this week!
A: I recommend it!
At first I thought it was more for kids than the usual Shinchan's movies, but I shouldn't have made light of it!
B: Were you moved?
A: Yeah.
It made me think about the idea of eugenics and equality.
B: It's a pretty deep theme.
A: I thought every one is different, so Equality doesn't exist, that's why every one is wonderful.
B: Great point.
A: By the way, I'm getting used to the new voice actors's voice.
Have you gotten used to it?
B: Ummm, I still feel a little strange.
I really liked Yajima's and Fujiwara's voices.
Did you like them both?
A: Of course! It's like I grew up with their voices.
But I think the two new voices have become more familiar with the characters than they were at the beginning.
B: They must be under a lot of pressure!
A: Indeed.
B: What number is the movie in your rank of all the Shinchan's films?
A: Ummm, tied with "Yakiniku" for fourth!
B: You like "Yakiniku"?
A: I like that ridiculousness. Haha
What do you think?
B: Ummm, not really. Haha
I didn't really find it funny.
What's third favorite?
A: "Robot to-chan"!
B: Nice!
Some of it didn't make a bit of sense, but I was moved though.
Let me guess first and second.
A: Yeah. But can you do it? Haha
B: Sure.
Well... I think I have two options.
Let's see, the first goes to "Adult" and the second to "Sengoku"!
A: Wrong! Haha
You put it in the wrong order.
B: Oh, c'mon! I missed the only two choices. Haha
A: But when I'm a little older, I'll probably change my ranking to that you mentioned.
Then what's your ranking?
April 19, 2022
April 19, 2022
Венеция
Гигантские корабли в Венеции давно были проблемами. Корабли вводили в сотни туристов (hundreds of people at a time?) в Венецию, и как вы можете воображать, этот наплыв людей вызвал конфликты между туристами и жителями.
Во-первых, туристы обращались с Венецией, как с площадкой. Они думали, что из-за того, что заплатили за путешествие, у них была абсолютная свобода, чтобы делать, что хотели, без отношения к окружающей среду. Например, после того, как они купили мороженое, вместо того, чтобы выбросить пластическую обёртку в мусорный ящик, они просто бросили её в пол, и ожидались, чтобы мусорщик очистил её. Такая деятельность может являться незначительной, но если бы группа туристов это делали, то у местности бы был случай контаминации. Именно случилось это.
Во-вторых, у жителей было впечатление о том, что туристы были богатыми. Итак, они начали повышать стоимость товаров и обслуживания, чтобы прибыли получившие были более высокие. Такое увеличение значило, что другим жителям невозможно продолжать обитать в городе. Вопреки протестам, они не удались достигнуть прорыв, поскольку государство истолковало отпор враждебным поведением с иностранцами, которые могли содействовать экономично городу.
April 19, 2022
April 19, 2022
Because of the global economy many goods including what we u
In past 20 years, as the rapid development of global economy. Many goods that we use on daily basis were produced by other countries, and transported for a long distance to all over the world. Did the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
To begin with, the global economy tighten the relationship and encourage more business activities between countries, so many companies will set their factories in country who have cheaper workforce and lower tariff , to reduce the cost. When the product's cost has decreased, the company can sell the product at an lower price to attract more customers. On another hand, we can buy things at an cheaper price, so we can less our living cost. either company and customers get benefits.
Meanwhile. There are many companies moved their production line to other countries. It means a safety and faster logistics is crucial. However, it usually facing problems like, the bad weather will affect the sea and air freight, caused extend the transport time.........
April 19, 2022
Мой путь изучения языка, первая часть
В Норвегии мы начали изучать английский язык во втором классе. Поэтому молодые люди в Норвегии говорят английский язык. После мы начали изучать другой язык, который мы выбрали сам. Я выбрал испанский язык, потому что я всегда думал что испанский интересный и мой отец мог говорить испанский.
April 19, 2022
How do I to not feel jealous of someone else relationship?
How do I to not feel jealous of someone else relationship? Im happy with being alone but when I see my friends in relationships or having guy best friends I start to wonder why dont guys like me, I have guy friends but they dont like me.
You won’t feel jealous if you really feel suitable for being alone. The truth is that you can’t stand being this because you want to enter into a relationship. You may find a partner who loves you, do not worry about that. Everyone has the people who they love each other no matter who they are because that’s how human beings work. I encourage you to try to have a heart set on loving someone, though you referred no guy who loves you.
Here are three suggestions to help you find that one belongs to you:
1. Have a nice mindset in which you are a nice girl and deserved to be loved. “You are deserved.” is not an empty sentence, but also a right sentence that can help you be more attractive. We can achieve something based on this certain belief. Try to set a nice mindset before you start entering into a relationship.
2. Be a person who always improves herself. You should be nice if you want to get with a nice person. You may think “will he like this kind of person like me if I am him？” If the answer is yes， you won’t worry about anybody loving you because you are the person who loves yourself. You will broaden your horizon through self-improvement and won’t spend energy on nonessential.
3. Treat others nice and gentle. You will be very popular if you keep doing this. Improving the 1% attitude you express to others every day, you will gradually have your social network. People will often replicate to you what you do to them. Enjoy the process in which you are being nice, gentle, and popular as long as you follow the rule.
The above are my suggestions. I hope they can help you and you are doing well.
Thank you for reading. Have a lovely day!
April 19, 2022
보조 식폼 살 만해요?
저는 14 살부터 운동하는 걸 시작했어요, 그리고 17 살 때 저의 레슬링 팀을 위해 운동 루틴 만들고 맞은 양식을 시연했어요. 그래서 예전에 저의 급우가 저에게 단백질 가루 먹고 헬스하면 근력을 쉽게 키울 수 있냐고 물어봤어요. "아니요 똑같은 단백질 양을 먹으면 단백질 가루 먹는 사람과 결과 다름없어요, 비결 아니예요."라고 대답해요. 그래도 단백질 먹는 걸 더 맛있고 편리하는 것 같아요, 레슬링 살이 빨리 빠졌을 때 몇 시간 초미료 없는 닭고기와 밥 한 번 더 참을 수 없었기 대문에 닭고기 대신에 재 가장 좋아하는 브렌드 Quest Protein 식품 먹었어요. 결론에 단백질 가루 근력 성장에 영향 없어요.
April 19, 2022
April 19, 2022
The beginning
Hello everyone!!!Today is my first day joining this warm and supportive community.I looked through online how to improve my writing and finally I found this site.I love this fantastic idea of correcting letters and helping each other to thrive.Hope I can meet many friends here who will help me to boost my confidence in English writing.I am excited and can’t wait to get an honest feedback for my very first journal:)Have a good one everyone!!!
April 19, 2022
April 19, 2022
La propriété intellectuelle
Quel type de personne pourrait avoir besoin de lois de la protection intellectuelle? En premier, il est les artistes: les auteurs, les peintres, les créateurs, etc. Dans la société, il est très difficile de fournir le soutien aux artistes. Les lois qui protègent la propriété intellectuelle peuvent créer un revenu pour les artistes par les permettre de distribuer son propre propriété intellectuelle. L'assistance dans cette façon est la première étape pour encourager créativité et l'innovation dans l'art. Source #2 montre les genres different de propriété intellectuelle artistique et industrielle et que les artistes seulement ont le soutien pour soi-mêmes, en comparaison à une industrie entière. Les lois qui protègent et appuient les artistes sont essentiel pour facilitent la grandi de l'art.
April 19, 2022
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