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Exhausted
I'm exhausted today.
I went to the cleaning zone in the morning, the boys are cleaning. There were some administrators in the city cented would come here foring guiding, so it was quite busy for the students to clean. I was a little stressful because they didn't do it well while the school's administrators told me that I need to be more carefully of the cleaning work.
Then I went to classroom, it was still dirty. Sooner, I got a call from the dormitory keeper that my students didn't clean their room. I got angry soon. What's worse, a chief asked me to look after my class so that he could have a rest. I was very hugery, and I would have class in 10 minutes.
The students performed badly, they didn't take the lesson seriously. I felt like I was bomb that I would explode any seconds. But I had no time to do that because I need to attend a public lesson and a semonar after that. Yep, I was quite busy.
My neighbour is building a new house, it was very noisy today. I went to office early in the afternoon. I put on my earphone and got peace for a while. Ms. Liu told me that there was a girl in her class who had CHD, was very fragile. Last Friday, she girl told her that she wanted to die because of her illness. I was astonished. I always thoght that class 1 was the best class in grade 8. I was quite regjoiced now. Though the boys were naughty, they were tough. Long time ago, I received a massage from a network friend, she told me that she wanted to die. I was so shocked and worried for a long time that she would really did as she had said.
I finished some parper work as well. I also corrected the homework. When I thought I would have a good time to relax, the chief asked me to look after my class at night. He called my father, and my father made a promise. I always think that my father is stupid.
I'm exhausted. I have never gotten any happiness from the job.
Oct. 19, 2021
Help me to understand English! ☘️
Which one is correct? what is different between them?
1. At the last hour of school, Paul's teacher gave the children some homework to do.
2. At the end of school, Paul's teacher gave the children some homework to do.
3. Cows live most countries 'in the world and give us most of milk that we drink.
4. Cows live most countries 'of the world and give us most of milk that we drink.
5. They often fish 'at the end' of their garden.
6. They often fish 'from the end' of their garden.
Oct. 19, 2021
Finalmente, un titolo- Chernobyl (1)
Chernobyl (1)
È innegabile che il disastro che ha avuto luogo a Chernobyl sia un avvenimento che ha sbudellato completamente l'Unione Sovietica, precipitando (ne?) il suo crollo. Vorrei analizzare, in questo componimento, le azioni dei lavoratori che adoperavano il pannello di controllo del reattore quel fatidico giorno; più specificamente, quelle di una sola persona- Dyatlov.
Dyatlov era una figura imponente. Gli garbava minacciare i suoi subordinati con il licenziamento, anche se non ha mai avuto intenzione di dimettere qualcuno. Gli piaceva anche dileggiare i suoi colleghi, fino al punto che c'erano dei pettegolezzi su come disumanizzasse i dipendenti quando ridacchiava che le loro mogli gli mettevano la corna.
Sfortunatamente (o fortunatamente), l'incidente a Chernobyl è capitato di essere il suo colpo di grazia; l'ha accoppato. Durante la notte dell'accidente, doveva esserci un test di sicurezza per verificare che funzionasse, ironicamente, il sistema di sicurezza. C'è stata una discussione sulle modifiche che conformavano il reattore ai parametri del test. I consigli di Dyatlov infrangevano le regole, perciò i dipendenti, ormai diventati balbuzienti dalla paura che Dyatlov aveva incusso in loro, gli suggerivano di non fare quello che diceva, pur di prevenire una fusione del nocciolo.
Cosa succederà?
Oct. 19, 2021
Oct. 19, 2021
Notizia
Dalle prime ore di questa mattina il pubblico di un circo in Polonia ha presenziato una scena terribile. Un orso ha attaccato a una donna in mezzo uno spettacolo.
La donna, che formava anche parte del gruppo, era accompagnata da due altri compagni prima dal attache dall’animale. L’orso attaccò alla donna innanzitutto acciuffando la sua gamba e dopo la aveva buttato al piatto.
La vittima era una donna da 30 anni, alta e magra, di cappelli castani, lunghi e risi. Lei indossava un vestito molto colorito e molto impressionante. Lei è stata pronta per lo show quando aveva successo il tragico evento.
I due uomini che la accompagnavano hanno colpito all’animale per spaventarlo e la vittima l’hanno portato all’ospedale. Da fonte affidabile sappiamo che i medici hanno informato al circo che la donna sta bene e ha subito pochi graffi e una contusione.
Secondo la vittima, l’orso l’ha attaccato per “gelosia”. La donna assicura: “dopo questa situazione, l’orso si comporta con me come al solito, molto affettuoso e molto carino. Come se nulla cosa è successa.
Ciò nonostante, gli attivisti in Polonia chiedono ai circhi di smettere di usare animali per i loro spettacoli. Un giovane attivista chiede: “I circhi devono lasciare di fare questi spettacoli con animali, è una attività bruta e poco divertente”.
Oct. 19, 2021
Vacation at Home
I really liked to go abroad during my vacations.
If I had a chance, I went to Japan or China once a year.
These days, it isn’t possible because of Covid-19
This time, I just stayed at home during my 3 day vacation last week.
At first, it was very boring since I couldn’t see anything outside.
However, I finally enjoyed spending my time at home.
I read many books and watched videos.
In the end, I changed my mind that a home vacation was also good.
Oct. 19, 2021
Reseña de película: Amelie (parte 2)
Después de aceptar su propio reto, Amelie empieza buscar el dueño de la cajita. Habla con sus vecinos en su edificio, incluso a una mujer mayor que fue abandonado por su esposo hace muchos años y ahora vive solitaria. También conoce a un hombre viejo que vive en la unidad opuesta a suya. Llamado "El Hombre Hecho De Vidrio" por unas personas, ella descubre que él tiene una enfermedad relacionada con sus huesos, que son muy frágiles. El hombre, Raymond, es pintor, aunque generalmente hace reproducciones de obras famosas. Raymond sabe el nombre del niño que vivía en la unidad de Amelie y se lo dice a ella. Amelie finalmente logra encontrar el hombre - pero debido a su timidez, no quiere entregarle la cajita en físico, y en vez sigue al hombre y contacta a él con teléfono público, mirándolo desde una distancia cuando él encuentra la cajita. Su reacción es inmediata y fuerte: echa de llorar con lagrimas de alegría. Amelie decide embarcarse en un camino nuevo, de tratar de hacer a la gente feliz.
El resto de la película involucra sus intentos para hacer esta tarea. Algunos son breves, como cuando acompaña a un hombre ciego al estación de tren, a lo largo del camino describiéndole en gran detalle los visuales de la calle. También tiene un plan para su padre: ella roba a un gnomo que forma parte de su santuario, y lo da a una amiga que es azafata - su amiga toma el gnomo por todo el mundo, tomando fotos de él en frente de sitios famosos y enviándolas a la padre de Amelie, en un intento de alentarlo a viajar. Trata de encender un romance entre una compañera de trabajo y un cliente. Y hace hasta más cosas extrañas...
Oct. 19, 2021
Oct. 19, 2021
Oct. 19, 2021
Journal
I work in an agricultural radio and television school. The school is responsible for training farmers in my district. Anhui province has 13 prefectural level cities, 9 county level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts. In theory, every administrative reigns should have this type of school. Anhui agricultural radio and television school is our head school. It has the highest administrative level in all the schools in Anhui Province and it directs the works of all the schools in Anhui province. Every year, the provincial school will organize training courses to promote the knowledge and pedagogical skills of teachers in the schools of our province. I have the chance to attend the training this year. The training for this year will last two days and there are four courses during this training. Two lessons one day, one in the morning and another in the afternoon. Food and accommodations are free in the training, and the training takes place at a hotel in Hefei, the capital of Anhui. I eat at and live in the hotel. I took some photos of the hotel. Let me share it with you guys. I think the hotel is wonderful. What do you think?
Oct. 18, 2021
まとめ：「なぜカトリック教会の存在感が薄れてきたのか」
著者によると、ブラジル人は、宗教を聞かれ答えるとき、自嘲気味に答えます。
「私はカトリック信者だけど、熱心に教会に通うほどじゃない」
「ブラジル国土は、貧困救済の左翼思想をもつカトリックの一宗派「解放の神学」の中心地だ。しかし、近年カトリック教徒の数は激減している。」
著者は、ブラジルと、同じくカトリック教徒の多いメキシコを比較しています。メキシコでは、毎週土曜日か日曜日に家族で教会に行くのは普通のことです。しかし、ブラジル人はメキシコ人のようにミサに行くことはありません。
IBGEのデータによると、1940年以降、プロテスタントの数は増加しており、カトリックの人口は薄れてきた。
著者の言葉は、「妊娠中絶や離婚を認めないなどのカトリックの考え方が、しだいに現代のブラジル人の生活とかけ離れてきていて、そのことが教徒の減少に拍車をかけている可能性は否定できない。」 と言います。
カトリックの考え方と現代のブラジル人の生活に含む論争は、著者によって言及されました。
2009年、ブラジルでは、九歳の少女が義父にレイプされ、妊娠し、中絶を受けました。これらの場合、ブラジルでは、中絶手術は合法化されます。しかし、教会は医師の決定を否認しました。
「当時のルラ大統領は「医学の方が正しい判断をした」と教会側を批判するなど、政府を巻き込む騒動に発展した。」
著者が提示したケースは、2020年8月16日に起こったことを想起させました。ブラジルでは、プロテスタントの「ボルソナリスタ」グループが、父親にレイプされた10歳の少女が中絶を受けるのを阻止しようとしたのだ。
プロテスタントの教団については、著者はこの教団の信者が増えたであろう2つの要因を指摘している。
第1の要因：プロテスタントは, テレビ番組でミーサを放送しているし、貧困層に届いています。
著者は、プロテスタントは大きな説得力があると説明しています。ブラジル人によると、「心の隙に入るのがうまい」。
第2の要因: サッカーブラジル代表の力力は、福音主義者であり、これまでスキャンダルとは無縁であった。さらに、このサッカー選手は、同じ宗派の女性と結婚するまで純潔を守り通すとを保っていたことが知られています。
私の質問：
著者によると、現代のブラジルの生活と含むを合わせていないカトリックの考え方は何ですか？
Oct. 18, 2021
Should a high-school be built in your community?
Just as the education is extremely important, many schools have been opened during this new decade. Personally, I reckon education is one of the most important things in a society. Therefore, a high-school ought to be constructed in my community because many students can study, the high-school could be used for other activities, and people have the opportunity to practice sports at campus.
First off, building a new high-school in a community is an excellent message to society to involve in the development of that place. Many kids will have the opportunity to study and learn new things provided by qualified teachers at high-school. The knowledge is not only the unique goal for students, but also the development of other skills is important as well. For example, if the high-school has a small library inside of the campus, students may go inside to study and share with their parents doing different activities such as science fair, reading books, and so on.
Secondly, a new high-school has other benefits as doing special activities of the community in the high-school. It is not only for students, but also people can use this location to do important activities as parties of the city, big meeting to discuss problems, and events that parents can share with kids. I remember when I was a child, I used to go to my elementary school with my parents to spend time together in some activities like “Kermese”, which is a day when each course of my school did a special dance to show to parents.
Finally, practicing sports is a perfect way to keep healthy. In some communities, they do not have the enough space to practice them. However, having a high-school with fields, it is possible to do exercise or play sports anytime, even weekends when people have much free time. Consequently, community people are able to do exercise and be healthy due to the high-school. If they did not have that site, they might not have this opportunity of doing recreational activities.
To sum up, I believe that a high-school would be a big benefit to my community because students can study, the place could be used for other activities, and practice different sports.
Oct. 18, 2021
Je veux aller aux vacances
Je veux aller aux vacances. Je rêve de soleil et de mer. Aujourd'hui, j'ai passé quelques heures sur l'internet à chercher des vacances. Dois-je aller en France ou en Espagne? Au bord de la mer ou a la campagne? Autant j'aime la plage, j'aime aussie les montagnes.
C'etait un vraiment bien façon de passer mon temps! Et toi? De quelles vacances rêvez-vous?
Oct. 18, 2021
Livre d'exercices de la physique
Aujourd'hui, j'ai reçu un colis qui provenait du Japon. Il contenait ce que j'avais commandé sur Internert, donc la plupart du contenu était de la nourriture, mais un des articles était un livre d'exercices de la physique.
J'ai toujours voulu rapprendre la physique, car c'était l'un des cours où j'étais la plus mauvaise. Au lycée, je n'ai pas bien compris ce qui était intéressant avec le cacul de puissense machin et l'onde truc etc, et en plus je n'avais pas besoin de cette matière pour les concours des universités où je voulais aller.
Mais maintenant, l'idée de devenir capable de comprendre des phénomènes physiques autour de nous m'excite, majoritairement grâce à du temps libre dont je me dispose en ce moment. En plus, si j'ai des questions, mon mari pourra m'aider, parce qu'il l'a étudié pour entrer dans l'université.
Oct. 18, 2021
Do we need music in our lives?
Music is one of the most important thins in our life.
When we born, we listen since first minutes, and music is one of the things that we listen.
Feelings listening music are very different, sometimes we feel happiness, other times we feel sad, other exited,...
I think few people can live without music. I mean that it's not necessary every day, but sometimes is a good therapy for our mind.
Oct. 18, 2021
Oct. 18, 2021
1810. Granada (2)
Granada med mina kollegor var en "skitshow" och jag har den enda som inte gillade det. Jag vill inte alls göra igen nåt liknande reda med dessa personer.
Vi var tio, tre flickor och sju män. De flesta männen drack öl hela tiden. Det är okej att dricka alkohol men kanske inte medan man resar och besöker en ny stad. Kanske finns det andra bättre tider för att dricka alkohol... Det var omöjlig att gå någonstans utan de pojkarna letande efter öl.
Det fanns mycket jag gillade inte och jag vet att jag vill aldrig göra detta igen. Det är bättre att göra nåt som detta på min egen hand eller med en vän.
De vill åka till Córdoba nästa vecka och jag är den enda som har inte än sagt något positivt om förslaget.
Oct. 18, 2021
Oct. 18, 2021
アメリカ政府によると言語の難しさ
アメリカの国務省のサイトには外交官に色々な外国語を教えるのにどのぐらい時間がかかるかのを比べるページがあります。レベル１の言語は平均２４－３０週間がかかります。そのカテゴリーにはオランダ語やノルウェー語やスペイン語があります。次に、レベル２の言語は平均３６週間がかかります。そのカテゴリーにはドイツ語やマレー語やスワヒリ語があります。レベル３の言語は平均４４週間がかかります。そのカテゴリーにはロシア語やトルコ語やベトナム語があります。最後に、レベル４の言語は平均に８８週間がかかります。その言語はアラビア語と中国語と韓国語と日本語です。この情報はとても面白いと思います。私はもっと習いやすい言語を勉強したら、もっと流暢のようになったかもしれません。しかし、難しい言語と知ったのに、日本語を勉強することにして良かったです。日本人にとして、言語の難しさは逆でしょうか。中国語や韓国語は習いやすくて、英語は習いにくいですか。
国務省のウエブページはここ（https://www.state.gov/foreign-language-training/）
Oct. 18, 2021
movie or book
it depends on the type of the movie. But in general i do prefer movies over books. Movies can convey the message of the scenario in broder way otherwise is hard by books to get the same message of that certain scenario. For example, we have the famous Harry Potter series films. what i did first is that i have read the philosoph's stone novel and then watched the movie. There were a huge difference for me on how certain things perceived from movies to books. the feelings and experiences we get out of movies is just awesome.
Oct. 18, 2021
Oct. 18, 2021
Je veux progresser en Français
Comment est-ce que je progresse en français ? Je me sens bloquée à mon niveau. Je trouve qu’il est difficile à m’exprimer couramment, donc j’ai peur de parler avec les autres natifs. Mais je sais que cela est une partie d’apprendre une nouvelle langue ! Et pourquoi je dois écrire ici. Si vous avez des conseils pour moi, dites-moi. Je ne suis pas sûr combien d’heures que je devrais étudier chaque jour, combien d’heures que je devrais parler chaque jour, etc. Je sais qu’il n’y a pas une voie exacte pour l’apprentissage d’une langue, mais il est aidé à entendre beaucoup de conseils et façons pour s’immerger dans une langue.
Oct. 18, 2021
JLPT N4 / N5 Practice 4
１．昨日、買い物をしてから、友達に会いました。
２．宿題をしてから、一緒に映画を見ましょうか。
３．去年の夏はとても暖かかった。
４．先週は寒くなかった。だから、家族と海へ行きました。
５．あなたは私にギータの弾き方を教えてください。
６．子供は読み方を習いています。
７．2時間で私のアパートの掃除をしました。
８．昨日4時間でこの本を読んだ。
９．今日時間がありません。明日宿題をしてみます。
１０．今日僕の彼女はいない。だから、料理を自分で作ってみる。
１１．明日雨が降らないなら、テニスをしに行きませんか。
１２．私たちは来年の夏に日本に行くなら、何月に行きましょうか。
１３．今日、宿題をしたし、掃除をしたし、疲れました。
１４．あの本は、詰まらないし、長いし、まだ読んでいません。
１５．昨日、寒すぎてから、出掛けませんでした。
１６．昨日、食べすぎたので、お腹が痛かった。
１７．私は田舎の町に住んでいるので、ここまでバスで行かなくちゃ。
１８．明日お兄の誕生日だので、彼に贈り物を買わなくてはいけない。
１９．鉛筆を持っていませんか。私のを貸します。
２０．このビルに人はいません。だから、音はありません。
Oct. 18, 2021
Computers is life now in the moment of today.
If we want to admit is good, but if not it don't matter. The world changed the day because of the virus we all moved to the lockdown and the computer use became essentially. I which to convincing you to improvement your technological abilities because if you only know to tik tok and to facebooks, you are in the past. In my case, I am always been liking to type my words in the keys of the computer, but with the advent of the virus of Covid all peoples are not touching the keys for communications with all the peoples, and no matter what she says, all the people have the need to push the keys now. before was something to choice from, but in the moments of the living of today nobody gives us choose, or you type on the computer or you are out. In these journal I will to tell you the reasons all the people needs resistance for the use of computers so much if she wants too perserve a pinch of what life it was before in the years ago prior to the Covid pandemic.
First off all the computer connect you to the web and to the rest of the worked if that is what you what, and that is fine, but it also open many doors that takes you to others pages that are not in the interest of what you are doing at the moment only to exacerbate your distractions to endless loops of time wastings that never end. in the workplace for example you can talked to your workers friends for a tiny moment but at the point of some time you should to came back to your obligations for not to get scolded from the master of the company. So you had the leader always on your top to command you to continues to the work if the wastings of time is too many so you never shoulve had to many times for wasting or you had the consequences that came along with it, so you became more productvity to the company and to the other employees. Those is not the case today, becaues in the sanctity of the house, you can give love to the plants in the garden, or have enjoys with the pets when they came to chew to your feet to get feed, or if tiring go to the bed to sleep for minutes and you go back to the screen when you wants not when you haves. This new modality is making the humans evolve to least production makers which to the peoples is never a good idea for all needs to be productive and the companies no can have peoples which do not has compenetrations with the task.
Now in this moments let's us to made connections to the realities of the pupils who now connection and reception the classes on the online Internet modality. To many pupils have becoming much productive with the use of the computer and now personalization the class and materials they use for to learn the class well, but on the other hand exist other pupils who now are becoming more laziness to extremes. Let's us to talking about the latter. The reason for the situation I talk to you in actuality may derive from a multitude of factors like because they haven't no supervisions from the parents, or they acting like the online modality is the apocalypse, but no apocalypse of the religious way, but the zombie way, and because of this they feel life is over and no responsability is necessary so cheating and cheaters has becoming the new way, and with no shame they get hundreds in all activities and they say all people cheating now, so why not me, and all people in the families may also to say if all people cheat, my boy and girl can to cheat too. In some others cases the situation for the laziness may to be depression or to the feeling that the world is ending, and also may to be too that the families are experimenting domestic difficulties and economical stress and with much inevitability the pupil suffer too the effect of the butterfly and reacts with a demonstration for the lazy way and do not work on nothing, shuts off the camera, and always has bad internet in the house, and the electricity never functions. Now to the first. Another version of pupil is also evident. the pupil who is smart and has no time to waste and listen to ridiculous non sensical chit chat but she who wish to be the pupil of the Cum Laude now is full of freedom. She use the time is manners which is wise, and complete all the tasks before to the end of the period, and consults sources that are full of reliability, and do not fall behind in nothing, and now she feels that nobody is pulling her on the shoulders to spend bad her time, and she likes. She now have more productivity because she no travels in the bus, neither never suffers the asphyxiations of traffic in the capital, and because she no has to get out of the bed before the light of sky is visible, she now has breakfast in the house and all this sums to the better experience she has now.
After to have give you all the reasons important for the use of the computers in the nowadays, it is with no doubtings that you now can agree that the use of computers in the work or school is mandatory today, and if you are a person who knows not to use one you are out of the new world. You now are in the past, the century is 21, but you are in the 20. Obsolete you are because no can function in the school and in the work, and the life is not giving opportunities if you do not engage correct to the internet to do you performance in the correct way. If you are of the ones people who still needs brush up on the technology, you must to do it now, because it will be to late.
Oct. 18, 2021
Nuclear Deterrence
A while ago, as I played a game called Metal Gear Solid: Peace Walker, the concept of Nuclear Deterrence was brought to my knowledge. Curious to know more about the subject, I went on google and searched for further explanation on it, and I found out that the game actually did a really good job explaining what Nuclear Deterrence is.
In a nutshell, Nuclear Deterence is a theory which says that the best way for a state to prevent a nuclear war is actually... having nuclear weapons. It may sound crazy at first, but that makes sense if you think it through. The thing is that, according to this theory, when two states that possess nuclear weapons engage in a clash, they will most likely find a diplomatic solution to solve their differences, since a nuclear war would most likely completely destroy both sides. So, the justification adopted by most states the possess nuclear warheads nowadays is that by having them they also have the power of retaliation in case another state attack them first, and by having this power they will probably never be actually attacked.
Of course, there is a lot of criticism towards this theory, but there is no wonder that it makes sense - especially if we consider that the fear of being attacked by the other country was what probably prevented the USA and the Soviet Union from attacking each other during the Cold War.
It may sound crazy, but probably the existence of nuclear weapons was the reponsible for us to have much of the peace that we have in the world nowadays.
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