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Спорт
Спорт не просто метод приготовлять мышцы и клетки тела для ситуаций высокой интенсивности. Он тоже способ убежать из когтей нищеты. Поэтому, в развивающихся странах, государство сильно вкладывает деньги в создании и в строительстве спорткомплексов и в программе тренировки. Оно знает, что когда у граждан есть шанс тренироваться в оптимальных условиях, вероятность того, что они победят другие страны высокая. В результате, страна будет предметом Фокуса, и будет получать бесконечный доход из реклам и туристов.
Кроме того, государства стран первого мира считают спорт источником дохода. Одно из преимуществ спорта в том, что часто является глобальным мероприятием; то есть может быть, что если европейская страна устраивает соревнование, азиаты будут посещать.
April 24, 2022
My oldest memories 2/3
2. And yet again, a bathroom story
TW: an accident and its consequences. teeth.
I was exactly four and a half years old and was at my grandparents for holidays. I remember very livingly how it happened. One moment was I laughing uncarefully in the bathtub, and one second later was I covered with blood. I had slipt then fell ahead and slaped my face on the bathtub's floor. My frontteeth were still at their right place but now moving and they did hurt badly.
My grandparents grew up in the countryside. They did not consider a simple bathtub accident as a reason enough to go to the doctor. They simply told me to drink and eat well to regain strongness. Drinking water was doable. But eating ?! Impossible. I remember how hungry I was this evening. My grandmother had given me a full packet of butter dry cakes (petits Lu). I ate only the corners of each of them. These four little squared millimeters were the only part I could reach with my back teeth without touching the front ones. My grandmother was a bit surprised the next morning, when she discoverd all the damaged cookies.
What followed faded from my memory. My parents told me that they learned what happened at the phone and forced my grandparents to drive me to the dentist. This was a good idea because I was starting to have fever. The dentist removed just two milkteeth, that eventually did grow up again, and stopped the infection. Nowadays, everything is perfectly fine.
I still have a soft spot for these typical dry cakes, and appreciate that I can find similar ones in any supermarket here in Germany. However, their corners are tinier as the ones of their french twins. Please, buttercakes ingenieers, make the shape of your biscuits easier to eat for the children whose teeth are hurting !
April 24, 2022
Using the words
If there is anything wrong or unnatural, can you please correct my sentences?
I'd like to know common and natural phrases using the word I indicated！🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
1
I need to use this word.→ →itinerary
B: Have you made an itinerary?
A: No, I didn't.
First of all, I've never made one.
Do you always make itineraries?
2
I need to use this word.→ itinerary
B: Do you have an itinerary in your head?
A: Sort of.
3
I need to use this word.→warranty
B: Did I keep the warranty card for this thing?
A: What happened?
B: I dropped it in the water and I want to check the warranty period.
A: Oh, I see, it's probably in the box.
But I need to find the box.
4
I need to use this word.→warranty
A: Does this warranty defects during delivery?
B: Of course!
5
I need to use this word.→ merchandise
A: This store has a lot of merchandise!
6
I need to use this word.→ merchant
A: You have as much as an arms merchant!
7
I need to use this word.→ questionnaire
A: Did you fill out the questionnaire in the back?
B: What, was there such a thing?
A: Yes, there was!
B: Wow, I missed it!
8
I need to use this word.→ venue
B: What is this place?
A: This is the Tokyo Olympics venue
9
I need to use this word.→ brochure
A: What are you reading?
B: Travel brochure
10
I need to use this word.→ inventry
A: There is a huge inventry of this item in stock.
Is it because they are not popular?
B: I guess you just stocked up.
11
I need to use this word.→inventry
B: I did inventory today.
A: Oh, You must be tired, right?
B: little bit.
A: What's selling the best in your store?
12
I need to use this word.→refund
A: The item I ordered broke within 3 days of delivery, so I would like a refund, please.
13
I need to use this word.→refund
B: Is this refundable?
A: It says it's a refundable item.
B: Really? Oh, thank goodness!
A: What's wrong?
B: It wasn't my size. This isn't my ideal shape.
A: What kind of shape do you want?
B: I need clothes that are wider in width.
14
I need to use this word.→warehousd
B: What did you do part-time in high school?
A: Sorting and unloading and so on at a warehouse.
15
I need to use this word.→warehouse
B: Do you have this item?
A: Ah, It might be in the warehouse. I'll check with the head office.
16
I need to use this word.→merger
B: What does M&A stand for?
A: Mayby, "Mergers and acquisitions".
B: Oh, that's right!
17
I need to use this word.→merge into
A: Pixar was merged into Disney in 2006, right?
B: Yeah, but did anything change?
A: I don't know about that
18
I need to use this word.→merge with
A: Huh? Where's Michael?
B: I don't know, he merge with a crowd.
April 24, 2022
Comment j'ai suis devenu polyglotte
Aujourd'hui je te raconterai comment je suis devenu polyglotte. Tout a commencé quand j'étais au lycée, un nouveau professeur d'anglais est arrivé, nous sommes devenus bons amis. J'aimais ses cours parce qu'il avait une passion évidente, ses cours étaient très dynamiques et amusants. En outre, nous parlions beaucoup en anglais pour pratiquer la langue. L'année dernière du lycée, j'ai décidé de faire un cours particulier d'anglais pour me préparer pour l'université. Je ne savais pas quelle chose j'allais étudier, mais ici tout le monde dit que l'anglais "ouvre des portes pour toi", alors il faudrait apprendre.
Je me rappelle qu'il n'était pas si difficile pour moi d'apprendre l'anglais parce qu'il me plaisais et dans cette école d'anglais j'ai connu beaucoup des personnes.
À la fin de 2018 j'ai décidé d'étudier la Licence en Langues modernes. Je suis entrée à la fac avec un B1 en anglais et il y a un an j'ai obtenu un C1 dans l'examen internationale d'anglais. Cependant, je n'aime pas l'anglais autant que le français. Je crois que c'est parce qu'il y a beaucoup de personnes qui parlent l'anglais, personne n'est surpris pas quand tu le parles. Mais, même pour les gens de ma licence c'est étonnant quand quelqu'un parle le français ou l'allemand avec un niveau intermédiaire.
April 24, 2022
April 24, 2022
El pesar
Las sombras empezaron a alargarse, consumiendo la puerta y borrando los contornos de la sala, pero no me importaba. Me había enfocado en algo fuera, fuera de todo y dentro de nada. La oscuridad me cubrió y no me importaba, los sonidos de la noche me llegaban como a través de una nube. No entendía entonces, y, la verdad, aún sigo sin entender. Había perdido algo, pero qué no te pude decir. Mis pensamientos eran casi etéreos, apenas me daba cuenta de su llegada habían vuelto al abismo de donde habían venido.
De pronto había un fuerte dolor en mi pecho, pero no era dolor físico. Era pesar, pesar por todo lo que había pasado y lo que no a la vez. Tan fuerte era ese dolor que me arrancó de mi fuero interno, de mi cielo y mi infierno. Me salvó y a la vez me condenó a sufrir sin tregua. No pude respirar, no pude mirar, los sentimientos me ahogaron, me golpearon, me abusaron. No había escape, no había refugio.
Hace muchos años ocurrió eso, no era la primera ni la última vez que se me pasó. ¡Ay! Si solo pudiéramos viajar por el tiempo, por nuestro enemigo más feroz y nuestra mejor aliada.
April 24, 2022
Chat 1
Can you please help correct anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
A: Hi! I'm Sho!
How're you doing?
B: Hi!
Good! thanks! and You?
A: Not bad.
Do you study Japanese ?
B: I try to learn the language because I love Asia.
A: Oh, Thanks! Let's talk in Japanese if you have time! If you don't mind, You speak Japanese, I speak English.
B: Sorry, only now I’m focusing. More on learning. English.
A: No time for talk ? If you have time to talk. Let's talk in English.
B: If it's ok, it may take a while for me to respond sometimes.
B: Sure! Please text me, when it's convenient for you!
B: Anyways, cute cat! (my profile pics)
A: And cute man.(2 of my profile pics)
B: man? name?
Thank you my name isn't so pretty and it’s very common.
A: Oh, sorry! I misunderstood. I thought you had checked all my profile pics.
B: Oh, you say it for the man who appears in your photos?
A: Yea.
B: Are you that man?
A: Nah, He’s a Japanese comedian. Who is your profile pictures?
B: Oh, that man scared me. Haha
The one that appears in my profile pictures is me. Haha
A: Oh, sorry.
Wow! Nice hair!
B: Thanks.
I have to charge my cell phone so I say goodbye, nice to meet you, have a nice day!
A: Oh, Ok!
You too!
———-A day later
B: Hi! How are you doing?
A: Pretty good!
And you?
B: Hi! good!
A: That's good!
Anyways, what do you do in your free time?
B: Now I’m on vacation l’m going university in July but next month l have a very important exam so I’m studying these days.
A: Oh, I'm sorry I spoke to you when you were busy. Send me message if you have time to talk!
B: No no, now I’m not studying. Hahaha
Don’t worry. I already studied a while ago.
Can you send me photo of you to meet you?
A: While ago? You’re a diligent person! I respect you!
No, I’m anonymous.
You too, right?
B: No no, I just like to be responsible with my things.
No, actually I do have photos of myself on my profile hahaha
A: That’s exactly what I mean!
It's not something that everyone can do!
I have to follow your example. 🔥
Liar~! lol
ーーーsending celebrity's photo
You're using this person's photos, right?
B: Thanks!
No no why do you say that.
the one that appears in the profile if it's me hahaha Why don't you believe me.
This is me.
A: Really?
Can I use your photos as my profile pics? I sould learn English from a lot of man, if I can do it.
B: Don't tease me. 😂
A: I looked it over again, you and she are llittle different.
I have a feeling I’ve seen the one you look the same, though.🤔
Does anyone ever tell you that you look like someone?
B: Huh? Are you sure you're looking at my profile or someone else's?
Eh yes to famous.😂
A: Who is it?🤔
B: When I had my natural hair color they told me that I looked like emma whatson from Harry Potter and that girl you just put in a photo they also tell me that I look like her and others that I don't remember but they tell me a lot that I look like Argentina.
A: Come to think of it, maybe they are right, you're similar to them, I don't know
Argentina, though.
They say God doesn't give with both hands, but you're gifted with both intelligence and beauty.😡🔥
B: Actually in my country I am not considered so pretty. Ahhahah
A: in Spain?
B: not, in Colombia.
A: Then, even Emma Watson isn't popular from men ?
B: Yeah, She isn't attractive to most of men in my country.
A: What kind of women and men are considered attractive in Colombia?
B: In Colombia the pretty girls are the ones with a good body, my body is thin like Asian girls, here in Colombia that is not pretty, less thin bodies are prettier.
A: I see.
in men case, buff bodies are cool men?
B: Yes, of course well that's what they think here, although for me it's not like that.
A: I see.
I shouldn't go to Colombia...🤔
Colombian values are totally opposite to Japanse.
B: Yes, it is very true.
Do not go for the people, get to know Colombia because it has very beautiful landscapes.
---Watched photos of Columbia.
A: You're right!!
I wanna go to Colombia😍 but is it safe?
B: Not as much as Asia. lol
A: Asia. Lol
Wide range.🤣
B: I'll go to sleep, it's late, take care.
A: Oh, Ok! You too!
Let's talk again!
ーーーーA day later
B: Hi!
How's it going?
A: Alright!
You?
B: Can’t complain.
Oh,tell a lie, I have a complaint.
A: What?
B: I wanna see your photo!
A: Oh, No!
B: Why?
A: I'm a super ultra hyper fantastic shy🙈
B: Oh… I wish I see your photo...🥺
A: If it's ok, photo when I was child.
B: Great!
A: There you go. This is me. good looking, huh?😂
B: Yeah, good looking guy.🤣
Can I call you now?
A: Sure! , but I'm not good at speaking and listening, Is that ok?
B: Ok.
A: I'll use deepl, so I'll say "wait a sec" and "can you say that again slowly? " again and again, is that alright?
B: alright.
But, what's the deepl?
A: Translation site.
B: Ah, alright.
A: I warned you clearly. Alright! Let's talk!
April 23, 2022
부당 요금 택시 단속 강화
택시 기사가 외국인 방문객을 속여 부당 요금을 징수하는 것을 막기 위해 서울시가 최근에 부당 요금 단속을 강화하고 있다. 코로나로 인해 방문객의 수가 많이 떨어져지만 이제 사회적 거리두기 와 격리 제도 등의 완화 때문에 외국인들이 한국을 다시 찾기 시작하였다. 특히 인천 국제 공항에서 서울까지 택시를 타는 외국인이 속이기가 쉽다. 예를 들어서, 작년 11월부터 올해 3월까지 외국인을 대상으로 실시한 인터뷰를 통해, 시계할증이 적용되지 않는데도 20% 시계할증을 적용한 사례 117건이 적발되었다. 미터기를 아예 안 사용하는 택시 기사도 있었다.
부당 요금 징수를 줄이기 위해 서울시는 단속 인력을 늘리고 있다. 그리고 인천공항을 비롯해 외국인들이 잘 가는 남산, 한옥마을, 대학로 등에서 단속을 확대할 것이다. 불법 운영으로 적발된 택시 기사는 과태료, 과징금 등을 내야 한다. 그리고 3번 적발되면 택시 운전 자격 취소로 처분된다.
이 부당 요금 단속이 정말 좋다고 생각한다. 택시 기사가 외국인을 외국인인 이유만을 그 사람을 속이고 내야되는 돈보다 훨씬 많이 내게 하는 것은 불법인 데다가 방문객에게 안 좋은 인상을 준다. 한국에 도착하자마자 이런 부당한 행위를 당하면 외국인이 한국에 대한 안 좋은 감정을 갖게 된다.
April 23, 2022
Korrigieren
Am letztes Wochenende habe ich viel zu getan . ich bin mit meiner Familie in der Berge gereist, wir haben viel Spaß gemacht und das Wetter war sehr schön und bestimmten eine tolle Zeit.
ich liebe auch ins Meer reisen, aber in dieser zeit sind alle teurer und gibt es viel stau, dazu können wir nicht machen, was wir möchten, z.b. Fußballspielen Tennis spielen und andere Aktivitäten. also ich finde am besten, dass wir in die Berge Reisen, dort können wir in ein Zelt übernachten.
im Urlaub mache ich gern das Fisch braten und das Feuer anzünden.
es werde besser , wenn wir die Kosten teilen, damit wir das Geld sparen.
April 23, 2022
Paradise
Ce matin, j'ai révélé tard, je n'ai pas pris une douche et j'ai descendu avec mes vêtements de hier. J'étais le dernier à table.
Avant j'ai descendu, Darlene m'a demandé si j'ai un plan pour aujourd'hui. J'ai répondu que je n'avais pas. Donc, elle a requête si je peux rester à la maison avec Jacques.
J'ai dit oui.
Ce n'est pas un problème pour moi de rester avec Jacques. J'avais beaucoup devoir de faire, alors que je dois le concentrait de faire cela. Normalement, je vais jouer pour toute la journée avec Jacques, par contre cela n'est pas toujours possible.
Pendent la journée, j'étais capable d'étudier et j'ai progressé sur mes études. Meme que jacques était beaucoup plus seul et ennuyer. Heureusement ses cousins à arriver après-midi, alors il s'avait de jouer avec.
Ce soir, mes amis ont arrivées tard, ils étaient fatigues, ils n'avaient pas à manger à midi nier arrêter leurs travailler. C'est m'inquiétè pas, j'étais content d'ils avoir, de manger le diner emporter et de regarder la voice tous ensemble.
Aussi il a acheté raclette pour moi, parce que je n'y étais pas quand ils le mangèrent.
April 23, 2022
Comment le covid vous a-t-il affecté ?
Le covid a été très énervant ces deux années dernières. En 2020, j'ai dû annué trois trajets, un à Cologne, un autre au Islande et un défile à Nijmegen. Cette année, il n'y a pas une équipe de ma région donc je pense que je ne pourrai jamais participer à Nijmegen. Ça me rend triste mais c'est la vie.
J'ai aussi raté le temps précieux à l'école secondaire et cadets.
Pendant le confinement, j'ai arrêté de manger des bonbons, mes parents et moi avons mangé plus sainement et j'ai fait plus de sport. Grâce à tout ça, j'ai maigri et j'ai maintenu mon poids, donc j'aime mon corps plus qu'avant. Mais, avant je m'en foutais que maintenant.
Je pense que le covid m'a changé parce que j'ai pu découvrir les choses que j'aime maintenant, le kpop et la danse par exemple.
Je ne sais pas comment, mais je n'ai pas attraper le covid en dépit d'être près des contagieux.
En tout, il y avait des points positifs et négatifs en rasion du covid.
April 23, 2022
April 23, 2022
Mein deutsches Lieblingsgericht
In Deutschland habe ich natürlich Schnitzel, Bratwürste und Kartoffelsalat probiert.
In einem Restaurant in Sachsen habe ich 2021 auch eine sehr gute Spezialität entgedeckt, aber den Name habe ich leider vergessen. Es war ein Stück von gesalzenen Schweinefleisch mit einer süßen Soße und Bratkartoffeln. Aus was war die Soße? Ich weiß es nicht, weil ich nicht richtig die Karte lesen könnte. Ich muss verraten, dass ich nur dem Kellner eine Reihe vom Menü zufällig gezeigt habe. Und es war lecker! Es bleibt zurzeit mein deutsches Lieblingsgericht.
Trotzdem sind alle diesen Spezialitäten mit Fleisch. Die vegetariane Options sind nicht so üblich in den traditionellen Restaurants. Auch wenn ich Fleisch essen kann, bedeutet nicht, dass es mich immer freut. Deswegen nehme ich oft nur Käsespätzle.
Aber tatsächlich mag ich in Deutschland die Kuchen besser. Nächstes Mal werde ich euch darüber erzählen.
April 23, 2022
Portuguese Exercises
Na foto, o homem à esquerda usa um polo azul escuro. A aluna à embaixo dele usa uma regata marrom e short jeans. O estudante número 3 usa uma seia preta e uma regata cinza. À embaixo dela, uma mulher usa uma regata preta e uma saia longa com flores sobre ela. Por último, há um homem que está vestindo um polo azul claro e shorts cinza.
April 23, 2022
Board games
Board games is a good reason to get together with friends and have a good time. There are a lot of different games. Sometimes they are divided on several categories:
1. Euro style games. They are games, where player with highest score at the end wins.
2. American style games. In this games many depend on players interactions and luck.
3. Party games. They have simple rule. It suites for large group of people.
April 23, 2022
El peor guitarrista del mundo
¡El peor guitarrista del mundo soy yo!
Siempre quería ser guitarrista, tocar la linda música de los grandes compositores del pasado, mejorar el mundo con la belleza de la música... Pero cuando toco, el mundo no se convierte ni un poco mejor - de hecho, ¡se convierte peor! Cada vez que tomo la guitarra en mis manitos sucios, el solo sonido que hay es el sonido del horror.
No sé que tengo que hacer para llegar a ser un bien guitarrista. Práctico la guitarra cada día. Hoy, por ejemplo, practiqué cuatro horas, pero aún no siento ningún mejoramiento.
Ay, quizás la gente me van a pagar para dejar de tocar. ¡Así todavía podría ganar dinero con la música!
April 23, 2022
¿Dónde está mi cabeza? (sin spoilers)
¿Dónde está mi cabeza? es una historia escrita por Benito Pérez Galdós en 1892. Fue publicada en el periódico El Imparcial como un cuento de Navidad. ¡Me gustó muchísimo! El estilo de escritura me hace pensar a Balzac, un gran autor francés que es considerado como el padre del movimiento realista en literatura.
La historia comienza con el narrador que se despierta y realiza que... no tiene cabeza. No voy a decir más porqué la historia es muy corta, pero me gustó mucho la manera en que la situación evoluciona.
También me he dado cuenta que esta historia se parece a La Nariz de Nikolái Gógol, escrita en 1836. Hay muchas similitudes: primero, las dos historias tienen elementos surreales. Luego, el narrador de La Nariz también se despierta una mañana sin una parte de su cuerpo: su nariz. Después de las aventuras de los personajes, el cuento se termina de una manera absurda.
Me encanta este típo de historia, y más precisamente este típo de fin. Eso es porque intentaré leer otras obras de Galdós.
April 23, 2022
April 23, 2022
23 avril 2022 - samedi
C’est enfin le weekend ! Pendant février, mars et les deux premières weekends d’avril, j’ai profité vraiment le weekend : le matin, je faisais du randonné et l’après-midi, après avoir donné des cours particuliers aux élèves, je faisais du yoga sur un parc et dessinais, ou bien je lisais « Harry Potter ». C’était très détendu par rapport à la même période l’année dernière, où j’avais consacré tous les weekends pour réviser. Mais pour ce weekend, il y a pas mal de cours à rattraper et je suis donc déjà contente que je puisse me réveiller à quelle heure que je veux, et avoir une petite pause l’après-midi pour goûter une glace.
April 23, 2022
I love you. What should I do?
This is a wired question and I love it. Maybe you mean what should you do if you wanna get over with me and you want to know the standrard of getting with me. To be honest, I have some experiences in relationship and I am a little bit hard to get with together because I usually can feel the love from others if it is true or not unconsciously.
Here are three points what can make me fall in love:
1. To be honest. This is very important if you want to grab my heart who is very sensitive.
2. To be humble. I like a person who is keeping improving herself and not that showing off becasue I am unstable and like showing off sometimes. I know that is horrible and I am trying to fix it.
3. To be patient. You would be arguing with me frequently if you are not patient because I am in heady company.
The above are the tricks what can grab my sight. I hope my answer does not sounds like too ridiculous and strange. Maybe you will feel happy if I can make you laugh by writing these things hahaha.
Thank you for reading and have a lovely day!
April 23, 2022
April 23, 2022
JLPT N4 Practice 30
１．明日買い物がてら、ドイツ語の辞書を買います。
２．東京でアメリカ人の友達に会いに行きがてら、兄に本を2冊買ってあげました。
３．彼は日本語が上手だけど、日本人ではない。
４．イタリアより日本のほうが高いです。それでも、休みに日本に行きたい。
５．雨が降ると思います。傘を持っていればよかった。
６．このレストランの食べ物はあまりおいしくない。他のレストランに行くのに決めればよかった。
７．私は料理を作りながら、ラジオでニュースを聞きます。
８．私が寝ている間に、兄が宿題をします。
９．昨日はあまり勉強しませんでした。
１０．その旅行はあまり安くなかった。
１１．ドイツ語は日本語ほど難しくない。
１２．イタリアはノルウェーほど高くない。
１３．このアパートは去年住んでいたアパートみたいだ。
１４．私は日本語を彼らみたいに話したい。
１５．田中さんが一番スペイン語が上手です。
１６．イタリアの町でローマが一番大きいです。
１７．君は彼に落とさずに花瓶をあげてください。
１８．子供のころは野菜を食べなかったものだ。
１９．この映画は面白くなくて安くもない。
２０．私はあなたがもう食べたレストランに行くなら、何を食べたらいいですか。
April 23, 2022
Tax
VAT Withholding is not applied to following invoice because the material in the invoice was imported and besides, no information was written at the bottom of the invoice but information of custom certificate. If the company purchases certain materials such as copper,aliminium, lead etc from importers, statement of “purchasing from importer” has to be referred on the invoice with custom certificate and import invoice.
April 23, 2022
Traveling With My Parents
Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang where is a nice place in Korea.
About 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories.
When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before.
We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.
I hope all of my family members get good memories here.
April 23, 2022
Traveling With My Parents
Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang where is a nice place in Korea.
About 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories.
When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before.
We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.
I hope all of my family members get good memories here.