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Jolanta, Ewa i Janek
Jolanta ma córkę Ewą i syn Janeka. Ewa zawsze po południu pije mocną kawę z mlekiem i je szarlotkę. Ona lubi ciasto. Janek woli herbatniki i herbatę zieloną. Ma małego kota, który lubi mleko i kiełbasę. Nazywa się Tomasz. Jolanta lubi kawę z cukrem i makowiec. Ona zrobi wspaniały makowiec.
Jolanta i Ewa zawsze na śniadanie jedzą bułki, ser, kiełbasę, szynkę i jogurt. Janek woli świeży chleb i jedno jajko na miękko.
Oct. 25, 2021
Please help me to edit this and write better!
Well, this is the so-called journal, so should I be normal, and I go with “I got up at 8 and had my breakfast and so on” or I’d better plunge into it as if I’m a little salmon which swims against the current. That’s what I usually do, so if you read this, please let it be.
Today was one of those days that I felt heavy, sometimes I feel too dense in my brain that I can’t even bear carrying my head on my neck, I try to get up but my entire body inclines towards the bed and that can ruin my whole day. I figured out that the only way to get rid of this situation is to pop all the bubbles of “IFs” that had been created in my mind throughout the previous day. The mere tool which has the ability to burst these bubbles is the spiky needle of reality in the present moment. So, that’s what I did early in the morning today just like many other mornings, to get myself sort out. But the thing is, the cycle of reproducing these IFs is a never-ending one, I don’t even have to strive to swim upstream for laying the eggs of these IFs, I can just hatch them wherever I am, I just need a little pause to slot them into the free spaces in my mind.
Sometimes I think if the whole system was a factory, I would have been a cool CEO, but the problem is no salesman would work for me to sell the IFs, So maybe that’s the main reason that I decided to share them here with you.
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1st anniversary
Today is the first anniversary of my family coming to this country. In the past year, my family and I have experienced difficulties, happiness and growth. We have a home, although it is very simple, not luxurious, but it is very warm; We have integrated into the local life and studying, and made many new friends; We enjoy the beauty of this place throughout the year, which makes us fall in love with this place. Thanks my family for their love in the past year, thanks friends and teachers for their helping. I hope I can do better next year.
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Oct. 25, 2021
The giants
Last time I visited a church was some months ago. The church named Santa Maria del Mar, is a basilica and it is placed in the neighborhood of the Born in Barcelona. It is surounded by nice and narrow streets with plenty of bars, shops and museums as Picasso museum, that is not so far there. I went to this Basilica because there was a presentation of giants to the public with their new clothes. The giants are an important and traditional element in catalan popular culture, and them go dancing for the streets in some festivities in the year.
Oct. 25, 2021
Alec Baldwin
L'incident qui s'est produit le vendredi pendant le tournage du film de Alec Baldwin nous est enseigné une leçon précieuse: Manipulez les armes avec précaution.
À en croire la police qui a saisi des évidences, un membre de léquipage avait passé un revolver chargé à Alec, qui tentait ensuite de démontrer quelque chose à sa directrice de photographies. Malheureusement, l'idee de prendre le déclencher sans vérifieur d'abord que il n'y ait pas de balles a (est?) trotté dans la tête, et un coup de feu a tué la femme. Alec n'a pas pu se fuir de la scène du crime, parce qu'il y avait beaucoup de témoins qui ont annonce tout de suite a travers un haut-parleur de cesser le tournage et aider la blessée, mais est été trop tard.
Je suis sûr que les images obsédantes de ce jour hanteront toujours l'acteur, qui noiera éventuellement dans l'apitoiement.
Oct. 25, 2021
Осенний семестр - лексика
Мы горячо обсуждали в классе влияние социальных сетей в частности на подростков.
Я привела разные аргументы против использования соцсетей, но некоторые одноклассники не согласились со мной.
Интроверты могут общаться в интернете при желании и не чувствуют себя потрясены.
Я часто чувствую себя скованно в толпе.
Мой преподаватель по русскому языку рекомендует, что мы активизировали новые слова, чтобы полностью выучить лексику.
Не лезь не в свое дело! Это не касается тебя.
Предвидится хорошая погода завтра. Ты хочешь гулять в парке?
Она упускалась много возможностей из-за болезни.
Ты скоро будешь взрослым. Ты не можешь всё время перекладывать ваши ответственности на чужие плечи.
Путешествовать по миру и знакомиться с другими культурами поможет вам стать человеком широких взглядов.
После того, как фигуристка получила травму, она отошла на заднем плане в мире спорта.
Вы считаете, что чтение сказок формирует ум вашей дочки?
Чтение романов является прекрасным способом понимать внутренние миры людей.
Использование соцсетей часто вызывает плохое самочувствие, в частности у молодежи.
Невозможно переоценить, настолько вредны электронные сигареты.
Во время дебатов, оба кандидаты должны оправдывать свои взгляды перед публикой.
В Советском Союзе все делали по блату.
Мы долго ждали и наконец отстояли очередь, чтобы получить вакцину.
Я не хочу напрягать тебя, но надо торопиться. Наш рейс улетит в 15 минут.
В чём смысл печь торт, если не собираешься есть его?
В чём смысл покупать книги, которые никогда не читаешь?
Эта девушка является ярким примером того, что происходит, когда родители позволяют детям делать всё, что хотят.
Я предпочитаю носить простые, монотонные рубашки, тогда как моей сестре нравится яркая, цветная одежда.
Собака старается охранять нашу семью, но она настолько маленькая, что не пугала бы никого.
Мы завтра посмотрим презентацию об охране окружающей среды. Там будет сделан упор на изменение климата.
Результаты исследования были неутешительные, по меньшей мере.
Oct. 25, 2021
Worry
I've hear from the organization that I can satrt to have an appointment of an exam. I need to asked for about two days off. That dosen't important. What I most concern about is the quarantine policy. There are some cases wildly, so some cities or areas are set as the highest-risk area, Beijing included. Therefore, the school's administators worried about it very much. If it happens to another coronavirus outbreak, I have to quarantine for at least 14 days, which will interrupt not only my work but also the other teachers.
But if I want to pass the exam quickly to apply the summer course, I have to take the risk. Thus, I hope I would be lucky enough.
Oct. 25, 2021
Tenses (part 2)
What happened/ has happened here? Why is the floor full of clutter?
Tell me what has been happening/ has happened to you in the past few days?
She had worked / had been working / was working there for 2 years when Martin started at the company.
He had been writing / was writing a novel for a bit when she came to talk to him.
The kid's hands are soiled because he had been making/ was making slime creepy-crawlies and I tried to remove the stains from his hands with liquid soap but some of them have still remained/ still remained .
Are all the alternatives possible in those sentences in BRITISH ENGLISH?
Is what is below correct?
One day our ancient air fryer for burgers blew out all the hot air into our colleague's face and he needed to undergo aplastic surgery because his face had been badly burnt.
Not only do I have to wake up at 5.00 a.m. but she also makes me clean up and clear up the whole kitchen on my own.
The boss is mean and crashes everyone for the slighest mistake.
Im sorry that I didn't write you an e-mail . I just got so many things to do in my job.
I'm sorry that I haven't written you an e-mail but I've had so many things to do in my job.
I'm sorry that I haven't been writing for quite a bit. I had a load of things to do at work. Now Ive found some time to scribble you an e-mail.
Which of the sentences about writing an e-mail is the most correct, or perhaps all of them are correct
Oct. 25, 2021
Ein Zitat von Truman Capote
Das folgende Zitat von Truman Capote habe ich aus dem Englischen ins Deutsche übersetzt:
"Wir sprechen über die Liebe. Einem Blatt, eine Handvoll der Saatgut ... fäng mit diese an, lern ein bisschen was bedeutet zu lieben. Erstens, ein Blatt, das Regenschauer, dann jemand der/die erhielt was das Blatt dich unterrichtet hat, was der Regen reifen gelasst hat. Verstehe, das ist kein einfache Prozess. Dass kann ein Lebenslang dauern, es ist mich passieren, und immer noch habe es nicht gemeistert ... Ich weiß nur wie es ist, dass die Liebe eine Kette des Lebens ist wie die Natur eine Kette des Lebens." ~ T. Capote
Oct. 25, 2021
Très peu.
Avec cinq dollars je pourrais peut-etre achete un part de pizza ? Peut-être un bubble tea basique ? Je pourrais toujours acheter des bonbons ou des pâtisseries. En canada, $5 ne te permettent pas d'acheter beaucoup des choses. Le coût de la vie est plus élevé ici en comparaison qu'aux états-unis. Aussi, les taxes ne sont pas incluses dans le prix. Un produit qui coûte $5 est très probablement $5.70.
Oct. 25, 2021
das Pfandsystem (Essay)
In Deutschland gibt es ein Pfandsystem, das versucht, die Bürger einer Stadt umweltfreundlicher Verhalten anzunehmen. Mit solchen Regeln hofft die Regierung, dass die Menge des Verpackungsmülls reduziert wird. Kritiker lenken das Pfand ab, weil sie glauben, dass das neue System zu umständlich kann sein. Weiterhin, sagen sie, dass die Wiederverwertung der Einwegverpackungen verbraucht zu viel Energie. Vielleicht ein Gründ für die Ablenkung des Pfands kann sein, dass diese Leute wollen das Leben unkompliziert zu sein. Vielleicht glauben sie auch, dass die Verpackungsordnung vom Jahr 1991 funktioniert besser als das neue Pfandsystem. Im Gegensatz zu Kritiker, betrachten die Befürworter das Pfand mit einem anderen Perspektiv. Sie glauben, dass das System die Herstellen/Firmen zwingen kann, um mehr umweltfreundlicher Produkten zu produzieren. Vielleicht glauben sie auch, dass das Pfand einen wichtigen Schritt zu der Umweltschutz ist, weil sie fühlen sich, dass sie eine wichtige Rolle an der Schutzung der Umwelt beitreten.
Ich bin der Meinung, dass das Pfand eine gute Maßnahme kann sein. Vielleicht wird unser Leben ein bisschen komplizierter als früher, aber ist es mir egal, wenn ich die Umwelt besser machen kann. Ich kann ein Beispiel von meinem Heimatland geben. Es gibt kein Pfand in Indien und leider nur wenige Aktivitäten, die mit Wiederverwertung des Verpackungsmülls beschäftigen. Das bedeutet mehr Müll und mehr Treibhausgasen, die unsere Umwelt stetig schädigen. Wir haben nur eine Welt und sollen sie retten. Ohne unser Versuch kann es keine Hoffnung in der Zukunft mehr bleiben.
Oct. 25, 2021
Smart Phone
A lot of Koreans are interested in using smart phone and its technology.
There are many early adapters in Korea, so they usually share their experiences through YouTube or blogs.
For example, when folded phones were released, many people bought them and followed the influencers how to use three divided screens, how to use the front screen as funny.
Personal GPS trackers and good SNS services were introduced like this way.
We are able to learn about new released Video services like Netflix, Disney plus and so on.
In my case, I like to learn new note taking apps as my second brain.
With the influencers, I am able to understand about new note taking apps, connecting each note and making new ideas.
Like this, many Koreans like to use the newest smart phone technology.
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
Lunes, 25 de octubre de 2021; disfraz para Halloween
Mi disfraz favorito para una fiesta de Halloween es de Nina Sayers en Black Swan. La bailarina inquietante es un look fácil pero impactante. Solo necesito llevar puesto un vestido corto negro con un corsé negro liso, un par de medias de malla negra, tacones negros, guantes de encaje negro junto con una tiara negra para cumplir el look. No sé ni un jota de maquillaje. Y por eso estoy agradecida que mi compañera de cuarto se ofreció a hacer mi peinado y mi maquillaje. Decidió que me aplicará la sombre brillante de colores verde y gris oscuro a los ojos y con un delineador de gel negro, forrará los párpados y terminarlos con un ala exagerada. Mantendré los labios simples, solo me aplicará pintalabios de color carmín profundo. También voy a usar pestañas postizas con detalles de plumas.
Oct. 25, 2021
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Oct. 25, 2021
Una lettera
Oggi vi do una lettera da correggere, redatta con le parole che ho imparato oggi :)
Egregio Signor Angelo:
Spero che Lei stia bene. Rappresento la comunità di boscaioli. Ci troviamo in una strettoia, a causa degli ambientalisti che ci tartassano incessantemente, reputandoci i distruttori delle selve, quando stiamo solamente guadagnandoci da vivere. Consideriamo questa accusa infondata e ingiusta, per alcune ragioni:
Rispettiamo la legge che fa testo. Prima di inoltrarci nelle selve, conduciamo sempre un sondaggio per verificare che il luogo in cui staremo svolgendo i compiti sia una zona designata per il taglio degli alberi, e non un luogo che possa disturbare i nidi degli uccellini e delle api.
Inoltre, sebbene ci fossero delle aziende in cui i proprietari non rispettavano il codice di comportamento e latitavano, sono già defunte (liquidate?); cioè, questi gruppi sono già sfaldati. Macinare sul passato non aiuterà a nessuno.
Siamo innocenti. Siamo anche essere umani. Abbiamo sentimenti. Siamo una comunità di persone che sono caratterizzate da una personalità spigolosa e poco socievole, ma anche garrula, la quale contribuisce a un'aria arzilla. Capisco che, in un lavoro come questo, ci saranno dei saliscendi, poiché la gente ci guarda con diffidenza, ma questo è proprio uno strazio per noi. Le pareti delle nostre case sono deturpate da graffiti. Le nostre mogli sono state minacciate.
Le imploro (questo verbo è transitivo o intransitivo?): Ci aiuti, per favore.
Cordialmente,
Mario Bosco. (:p)
boscaiolo
macinare
spigoloso
sfaldare
arzillo
latitare
garrulo
fare testo
strettoia
saliscendi
Oct. 25, 2021
군대 들어가는 이야기.
먼저 저의 삶 배경대해 이야기할 거에요. 저는 고등학교 졸업하려고 할 대 미래 대학교 학비 어떡해 낸지 물랐어요. 그 시절에 저는 전기공학 전공하는 게 계획 세웠어요. 저는 고등학교 다닐 대 대학교도 다났어요. 저의 고등학교 1 년 동안 저의 학비 냈어요. 하지만 공장에서 저의 다 평생 동안 일하고 싶는지 물았어요 그리고 돈 벌은 방법 없었어요. 그래서 저는 군대 들어가기로 결정했어요. 식구는 그 결정을 결국 설득했어요. 대학교 가는 것보다 많이 장점 있어요. 군데 퇴원하는 후에 무려 교육, 각 년 30 일 휴가 받아요. 다양한 사람과 과제와 일해요. 저의 나라를 봉상해요. 마지막으로 여러 곳으로 요행해요.
Oct. 25, 2021
2021.10.25
1. What do your friends think of you?
My friends say that I am curious and considerate person. I am always curious about new things and from me, they were able to find out new information that they didn't expect. And I always listen to my friend's concerns sincerely, which makes them think of me as a thoughtful person.
2. Do you tend to get along well with others?
Yes. Even though I am relatively introverted, I am not shy that much. When I need to get along with others, I always approach them first and become close to them. That is because I know people also want that someone say hi to them first.
3.Do you have many friends?
I have a few true friends who can listen to my concerns and help me. They are very sincere to me and trust me very much. So I can talk to them about what I can't say to most people. and So can they.(they also can talk to me about what they can't say to most people)
Even though we haven't seen each other for a long time, we can talk without awkward silence.
4. please tell me who you look up to.
The person I look up to the most is kim kyung ho. He is not only my first mentor but also my first korean singer I love. When I was 14, I had been depressed. But when I found out him, the way he lives and him singing songs intensely was very impressed to me. This is why I chose him as a mentor. Thanks to him, I was able to realize how to thought positive thoughts and appreciate everything I was given. The best thing I earned from him was to try to find people's strengths and learn their good side even if they are not good to me. If it hadn't been for him, I wouldn't have changed the way I view people and the world. So now I try to be a person who goes all out on what I have to do like him
5. Do you think you have leadership skills?
I don't think I have leadership skills. However I can follow my leader easily and I can actively cooperate so that all members can be one time to complete what we take care of. and also I think I have organizing thoughts skills. As a result, I guess I can do useful thing to my team as a member rather than being a reader.
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
How are you
Hi!
I don't know what should I write today, so I just gonna write something that's kinda weird.
How are you? What do you feel today? Feel happy? Sad? Upset? Comtentment？
I feel a little sad and angry today, but I'm fine, don't worry about me.
Today was raining, I like rain, because it can let me feel peaceful and quiet. But l like sunny too, it feels like confidence and happiness.
This afternoon was very terrible for me, I still feel a little bit sad about what just happened. It's fine, I can go over it.
I'm thinking of a question, what kind of person do I want to be? Be a successful person? Be a normal person? Or be a happy person. I'm still young, I still have a lot of space to grow up and to make mistakes, but I should begin to plan my life.
What kind of person that you want to become? Or what kind of person have you already become? Have you really become the person that you want to be when you were young?
It's fine if the answer is no because there don't have a lot of people who can actually do it.
Good night.
Have a great night, and have a great tomorrow. :)
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