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Journal
“I think it’s partly because the common term for pet owners in China is shit shovelers”
When I first saw this sentence, I couldn’t get it. I thought there was something wrong because I misunderstood the word “shovelers”, which I thought meant people. After I got its meaning, I wanted to analyse its structure. Let me try. The “common term" is subject, “is” is link verb, “shit shovelers” is predicative, “for pet owners in China” is attributive. Then what is the “I think it’s partly because”? Adverbial?
Oct. 26, 2021
Il più grande enigma della musica italiana....
Noi brasiliani (ma non solo!!!!) stiamo ancora cercando la risposta del mistero:
Perché Marco se n'è andato e non ritorna più?
Perché Laura non c'è?
Perché Marlena non torna a casa?
È davvero un problema che cambierà la vita di molte persone, non credete?
Io direi che è sicuramente cervellotico questo enigma!!!!
(quanta besteira, meu Deus!!!) ahahahaha
Oct. 26, 2021
Insomnia
Ontem à noite eu não podia dormir. Dava voltas na cama, deitava com os olhos fechados mas não deu conta. Finalmente, tomei melatonina mas não ajudou. Às quatro da manhã eu adormeci.
Quando meu despertador tocou, apaguei-o e continuei dormindo. Eu perdi minha aula da manhã. Isso não é normal para mim.
Em fim. Aconteceu já. Amanhã eu tenho uma prova importante numa das minhas aulas. Porei o despertador no outro lado do quarto para ter que me levantar para desligá-lo.
Oct. 26, 2021
Flowers
Six months ago, when we bought second-hand furniture, the seller gave us a pot of green plants for free.
We did not take care of it very carefully, just put it in the corner and water it occasionally.
When I was cleaning the home today, I suddenly found that it was about to bloom. I sat next to it and counted the buds, and there were more than 20 buds!
I seem to feel it saying to me " Hi, dear. I have been here with you all the time, you are not alone."
My tears fell, at the beginning of this winter, this pot of free plants are bringing beautiful color to my home.
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
2021 ACT / Love Young People
In theory I will be retire next year and this 2021 camp is my last one!
Thanks to the lack of new recruitment, I can easily continue this part time job.
Another special meaning about this camp was the district.
I was working in this district for 19 years, but 7 years ago I was forced to another district.
But in my last camp I choice return to this district even now I still feel surprise.
Yesterday, was only the second day of this camp.
The young people already “mouth-fight” and win the senior supervisor.
I love hang out with young people.
Oct. 25, 2021
writing about my school
Bonjour, je m'appelle James
J'habite dans un grande ville, donc il y a plusiers l'ecoles primaires. Par conséquent je dois choisir ce qui est le meilleur.
Le weekend dernier je suis allé dans une l'école primaire pour voir si c'était bien. Cependant j'ai détesté cette parce que c'était une école pour seulement filles et je suis un garcon.
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
Fermer la porte le dimanche
Ce qui m'a surprise au début après commencer à vivre en France, c'est le fait que beaucoup de magasin ferment le dimanche. Même Picard, étant une grand surface, s'ouvre seulement dans la matinée et ferme après. Au Japon, roi d'heures supplémentaires, les supérettes sont ouvertes 24 heurs sur 24, and c'est même logique économiquement : si elles sont fermés le dimanche, cela signifie qu'elles perdent des oppotunités pour gagner du profit.
Dans des cours de commerce à l'université, on nous apprnd la notion d'opportunité perdue, c'est-à-dire le rendement perdu à cause des mauvaises décisions économiquement. Le dimanche, il doit y avoir nombreuses personnes qui ont besoin de quelque choses à manger, et perdre du profit possible en raison de la fermeture, cela coresspondait exactement la définition.
Mais au niveau de la santé mentale, je pense que les gens s'y trouvent bien, et en plus ce n'est qu'un petit inconvenient pour les consommateurs. On peut prévoir ce qui est nécessaire pour le lendemen pour faire des achats le samedi, pour protéger du temps en famille des vendeurs, ce qui nous permettra d'epargner notre temps en famille aussi.
On dit que la liberté est primordiale dans notre vie. Pourtant, il faut les régualtions pour nous arrêter de travailler sans cesse, car la santé mentale est plus difficile à visualiser que le chiffre d'affaires. On peut compter le nombre de patients, mais cela va sans dire qu'on doit détecter les patients potentiels avant qu'ils tombent définitivement malades, surtout de fait qu'il y a ceux qui ne peuvent pas se remettre pour toujours après avoir subi telles conditions.
La faiblesse du Japon, c'est qu'on ne peut pas créer des standards. D'autres pays en créent, et on en suit pour s'évaluer. À mon avis, cela ne suffit pas, car le Japon est un pays avec des particularités. C'est un de ceux où des personnes agées détiennent 28.7% de la population, entraînant des soucis sur l'avenir chez les jeunes. On a une marché de travail peu souple, qui a pour cause la grande croissance économique après la Seconde Guerre Mondiale, ce qui nous force de travailler des heures supplémentaires, même parfois sans rémunérations. À titre personnel, il faut qu'on établie des régulations nous-même pour nous rendre heureux, comme dérigieant de pays avec le fort viellissement et la vertue de travail acharné.
Mais le problème, c'est que le Japon est un pays insulaire, donc il est difficile de glaner des informations sur d'autre pays sauf qu'on est active à en chercher. En plus, on a tendance à se préoccuper des opinions des autres plutôt que de nos propres sentimens. Si la plupart des salariés travaille sous les conditions pareiles, ils ne se posent même pas des questions sur les conditions dans lesquelles ils sont forcés de vivre.
Oct. 25, 2021
My dream job
I realised I've never written anything in English, so I thought I could share a text I wrote for fun.
My dream job is to be a writer. I don't think there are jobs that are more important than others and I wouldn't mind doing something that doesn't align completely with the things I like (after all, I worked in several sectors in my life), but if I had to choose one out of the countless jobs I could do, I would definitely choose to be a writer.
I began writing in my teenage years. I've always had a creative mind and I tried multiple times to write something as a kid, but I was just a child and I had no writing skills whatsoever. Writing is therapeutic: it helps me clear my mind, organise my thoughts and rationalise my feelings. I'd love to be a writer, because writing helped me a lot during the darkest times of my life and I'm sure my stories and poems could help others as well.
As much as I'd like to be a writer, though, I know I will never be able to. In order to be a well-paid writer, skills aren't enough. Unfortunately mere luck is a very important factor in helping someone become a well-known writer. I say "well-known" not because I want fame (I'd rather see my art become more famous than my name), but because lesser known writers don't earn enough to be able to make writing their full-time job.
I will for sure try, but I'm quite confident writing won't ever be my job, even though it will always play a big role in my life.
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
Jolanta, Ewa i Janek
Jolanta ma córkę Ewą i syn Janeka. Ewa zawsze po południu pije mocną kawę z mlekiem i je szarlotkę. Ona lubi ciasto. Janek woli herbatniki i herbatę zieloną. Ma małego kota, który lubi mleko i kiełbasę. Nazywa się Tomasz. Jolanta lubi kawę z cukrem i makowiec. Ona zrobi wspaniały makowiec.
Jolanta i Ewa zawsze na śniadanie jedzą bułki, ser, kiełbasę, szynkę i jogurt. Janek woli świeży chleb i jedno jajko na miękko.
Oct. 25, 2021
Please help me to edit this and write better!
Well, this is the so-called journal, so should I be normal, and I go with “I got up at 8 and had my breakfast and so on” or I’d better plunge into it as if I’m a little salmon which swims against the current. That’s what I usually do, so if you read this, please let it be.
Today was one of those days that I felt heavy, sometimes I feel too dense in my brain that I can’t even bear carrying my head on my neck, I try to get up but my entire body inclines towards the bed and that can ruin my whole day. I figured out that the only way to get rid of this situation is to pop all the bubbles of “IFs” that had been created in my mind throughout the previous day. The mere tool which has the ability to burst these bubbles is the spiky needle of reality in the present moment. So, that’s what I did early in the morning today just like many other mornings, to get myself sort out. But the thing is, the cycle of reproducing these IFs is a never-ending one, I don’t even have to strive to swim upstream for laying the eggs of these IFs, I can just hatch them wherever I am, I just need a little pause to slot them into the free spaces in my mind.
Sometimes I think if the whole system was a factory, I would have been a cool CEO, but the problem is no salesman would work for me to sell the IFs, So maybe that’s the main reason that I decided to share them here with you.
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
1st anniversary
Today is the first anniversary of my family coming to this country. In the past year, my family and I have experienced difficulties, happiness and growth. We have a home, although it is very simple, not luxurious, but it is very warm; We have integrated into the local life and studying, and made many new friends; We enjoy the beauty of this place throughout the year, which makes us fall in love with this place. Thanks my family for their love in the past year, thanks friends and teachers for their helping. I hope I can do better next year.
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
Oct. 25, 2021
The giants
Last time I visited a church was some months ago. The church named Santa Maria del Mar, is a basilica and it is placed in the neighborhood of the Born in Barcelona. It is surounded by nice and narrow streets with plenty of bars, shops and museums as Picasso museum, that is not so far there. I went to this Basilica because there was a presentation of giants to the public with their new clothes. The giants are an important and traditional element in catalan popular culture, and them go dancing for the streets in some festivities in the year.
Oct. 25, 2021
Alec Baldwin
L'incident qui s'est produit le vendredi pendant le tournage du film de Alec Baldwin nous est enseigné une leçon précieuse: Manipulez les armes avec précaution.
À en croire la police qui a saisi des évidences, un membre de léquipage avait passé un revolver chargé à Alec, qui tentait ensuite de démontrer quelque chose à sa directrice de photographies. Malheureusement, l'idee de prendre le déclencher sans vérifieur d'abord que il n'y ait pas de balles a (est?) trotté dans la tête, et un coup de feu a tué la femme. Alec n'a pas pu se fuir de la scène du crime, parce qu'il y avait beaucoup de témoins qui ont annonce tout de suite a travers un haut-parleur de cesser le tournage et aider la blessée, mais est été trop tard.
Je suis sûr que les images obsédantes de ce jour hanteront toujours l'acteur, qui noiera éventuellement dans l'apitoiement.
Oct. 25, 2021
Осенний семестр - лексика
Мы горячо обсуждали в классе влияние социальных сетей в частности на подростков.
Я привела разные аргументы против использования соцсетей, но некоторые одноклассники не согласились со мной.
Интроверты могут общаться в интернете при желании и не чувствуют себя потрясены.
Я часто чувствую себя скованно в толпе.
Мой преподаватель по русскому языку рекомендует, что мы активизировали новые слова, чтобы полностью выучить лексику.
Не лезь не в свое дело! Это не касается тебя.
Предвидится хорошая погода завтра. Ты хочешь гулять в парке?
Она упускалась много возможностей из-за болезни.
Ты скоро будешь взрослым. Ты не можешь всё время перекладывать ваши ответственности на чужие плечи.
Путешествовать по миру и знакомиться с другими культурами поможет вам стать человеком широких взглядов.
После того, как фигуристка получила травму, она отошла на заднем плане в мире спорта.
Вы считаете, что чтение сказок формирует ум вашей дочки?
Чтение романов является прекрасным способом понимать внутренние миры людей.
Использование соцсетей часто вызывает плохое самочувствие, в частности у молодежи.
Невозможно переоценить, настолько вредны электронные сигареты.
Во время дебатов, оба кандидаты должны оправдывать свои взгляды перед публикой.
В Советском Союзе все делали по блату.
Мы долго ждали и наконец отстояли очередь, чтобы получить вакцину.
Я не хочу напрягать тебя, но надо торопиться. Наш рейс улетит в 15 минут.
В чём смысл печь торт, если не собираешься есть его?
В чём смысл покупать книги, которые никогда не читаешь?
Эта девушка является ярким примером того, что происходит, когда родители позволяют детям делать всё, что хотят.
Я предпочитаю носить простые, монотонные рубашки, тогда как моей сестре нравится яркая, цветная одежда.
Собака старается охранять нашу семью, но она настолько маленькая, что не пугала бы никого.
Мы завтра посмотрим презентацию об охране окружающей среды. Там будет сделан упор на изменение климата.
Результаты исследования были неутешительные, по меньшей мере.
Oct. 25, 2021
Worry
I've hear from the organization that I can satrt to have an appointment of an exam. I need to asked for about two days off. That dosen't important. What I most concern about is the quarantine policy. There are some cases wildly, so some cities or areas are set as the highest-risk area, Beijing included. Therefore, the school's administators worried about it very much. If it happens to another coronavirus outbreak, I have to quarantine for at least 14 days, which will interrupt not only my work but also the other teachers.
But if I want to pass the exam quickly to apply the summer course, I have to take the risk. Thus, I hope I would be lucky enough.
Oct. 25, 2021
Tenses (part 2)
What happened/ has happened here? Why is the floor full of clutter?
Tell me what has been happening/ has happened to you in the past few days?
She had worked / had been working / was working there for 2 years when Martin started at the company.
He had been writing / was writing a novel for a bit when she came to talk to him.
The kid's hands are soiled because he had been making/ was making slime creepy-crawlies and I tried to remove the stains from his hands with liquid soap but some of them have still remained/ still remained .
Are all the alternatives possible in those sentences in BRITISH ENGLISH?
Is what is below correct?
One day our ancient air fryer for burgers blew out all the hot air into our colleague's face and he needed to undergo aplastic surgery because his face had been badly burnt.
Not only do I have to wake up at 5.00 a.m. but she also makes me clean up and clear up the whole kitchen on my own.
The boss is mean and crashes everyone for the slighest mistake.
Im sorry that I didn't write you an e-mail . I just got so many things to do in my job.
I'm sorry that I haven't written you an e-mail but I've had so many things to do in my job.
I'm sorry that I haven't been writing for quite a bit. I had a load of things to do at work. Now Ive found some time to scribble you an e-mail.
Which of the sentences about writing an e-mail is the most correct, or perhaps all of them are correct
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