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人生で誰に刺激させられましたか。
一生で別で多い人に出会うことはそれが事実です。その中で、ただの知り合い、友達、家族、同僚、それかきっとお手本も会えると思います。
私にとって高校生の頃にある先生にとても刺激させられました。その方は哲学の先生でした。先生のおかげで人生で仕事は別として、自分のことを大事にすることを重要だとわかりました。何か興味を持っていれば高校か大学が終わっても、それについて勉強を続けれます。芸術、文学、文化も高校に限りでわないです。その理由で現在は日本語を勉強しています。それに、生徒たちによく「自分で考え、全部を疑え」と伝えました。それもいつまでも覚えると思います。
その上に、家族も友達も、本さえお手本になれると思います。もしかすると、いつか私達さえ誰かを刺激するかもしれません。どう思いますか。
Nov. 3, 2021
Nov. 3, 2021
Les téléphones
Les téléphones portables peuvent-ils être des outils éducatifs ?
"Un grand pouvoir implique de grandes responsabilités."
Les téléphones sont objets très puissants, car on peut les utiliser pour changer positivement ou négativement le monde. Ils sont comparables aux pioches, puisqu'on peut utiliser une pioche pour creuser une roche et y arracher des minéraux précieux pour enrichir sa propre vie et la vie des ses proches, mais une pioche peut aussi être utilisée pour tuer quelqu'un.
Malgré des maladresses et des démonstrations de faire la surenchère, Greta Thunberg est un exemple notable de cette «révolution digitale». Elle a inspiré les jeunes à prendre une position plus concrete en face du changement climatique et l'échauffement global, à travers l'exploitation des réseaux sociaux. Donc, il me semble un plan faisable permettre l'usage des téléphones dans l'espace éducatif, pour enseigner les qualités personnelles et pour faire que les élèves plus timides sortent ses coquilles.
Il faut tout d'abord implémenter des régulations en simulant le monde réel, parce que les enjeux sont très hauts. Une brouille, dans lequel un élève est fustigé peut inciter un cas de suicide. Donc, l'administration éducative doit simuler et encourager surtout une ambiance de tolérance, de conscience et de respect.
Nov. 3, 2021
家対映画館
皆さん、こんにちは！
皆さんは映画を見る時、家で見ますか？それとも映画館で見ますか？どっちの方が好きですか？
私にとって、どこに映画を見るかは映画次第です。
例えば、ずっと昔から見たかった映画だったら、多分映画館で見ます。なぜなら、映画館で映画を
見ると、凄く衝撃的だと思います。もっとインパクトがあります。
でも、そんなに期待してない映画なら、映画がテレビで見ます。
家で映画を見るのもメリットがあります。まず、自家の方は居心地がよくてゆっきる見る事ができる。
そして、聞き逃した事を再生できる。最後に字幕を付けてもいいです。
これは私の意見です。
皆さんはどう思います？
最後まで読んでくれてありがとうございます！
Nov. 3, 2021
Nov. 3, 2021
Une question de grammaire
Je suis en train de repasser les règles pour la formation du passé composé avec les verbes pronominaux. Selon le manuel, le participe d'un verbe pronominal au passé composé s'accord avec le sujet. Par exemple : Elle se sont souvenues de l'histoire (le participe « souvenues » s'accord avec le sujet « elles »).
Ensuite il y avait un exercice ou on doit réécrire des phrases en les mettant au passé composé, donc j'ai écrit cette réponse :
Elle se demande si c'est vrai. --> Elle s'est demandée si c'est vrai.
J'ai pensé que le participe du verbe « demander » devait être d'accord avec le sujet, qui est féminin, car « se demander » est un verbe pronominal (si j'ai bien compris). Mais selon le corrigé, la réponse correcte est « Elle s'est demandé si c'est vrai. » Donc je suis un peu perdue. Si quelqu'un peut m'expliquer cette réponse, je serai très reconnaissante !
Nov. 3, 2021
Nov. 3, 2021
Nov. 3, 2021
Practice Adjetives ending in -ed and -ing
- The train travel tonight was annoying, there was a baby crying.
- Five years ago I was charmed with the new surgery´s resident.
- Daniela and I are dissappointing with the teacher behaviour.
- I am inspired with the IU´s interview.
- Yeo Jin Goo was embarrased seing his name at the wall.
- Our family travel day was relaxing and pleasing.
Nov. 3, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
Le résultat des élections au Japon
Il y a deux jours, le résultat des élections législatives au Japon a été publié, et franchement c'était très décevant. De ce fait je n'ai plus beaucoup de moral depuis, mais maintenant essaie de me rétablir.
Je voudrais écrire dessus demain pour ranger mes idées et ce qu'on doit retenir de ces élections.
Nov. 2, 2021
Journal
Sorry, I am afraid I misunderstood you. If you were referring to the original time at 7 pm on your side, I think it's also okay, but it's just that we can only have our call for 30 minutes because this morning I will go to another city to hold field training, as I said to you before. During the trip we are supposed to go out of the hotel at 8 am, so I think I have to have my breakfast at least at 7:40. That's to say we can only have about 30 minutes' call. If it's okay for you, let's do it.
Nov. 2, 2021
Journal
I think so. What you were saying tomorrow means evening where I am. At that time, I already get off my work, so I think it was pretty okay. You are really talented. See you this evening (also tomorrow on your side.
One thing I need to apologize for is that 8:00 every night is when my regular lessons start, so we only have one hour's call, but it doesn't matter. If you want to settle the time down for a long term, I can postpone my lessons to 8:30 pm from the eleventh of this month so that we can have one and a half hour call. Please let me know what you think because I want to make everything very suitable for you.
Nov. 2, 2021
Meine Gewohnheitstabelle
Heute war ich sehr produktiv. Das macht mich sehr glücklich. Ich glaube, ich fühle mich schlecht, wenn ich mich für den ganzen Tag entspanne und nichts mache. Also, wenn ich produktiv bin, fühle ich mich super!
Ich habe gestern eine Gewohnheitstabelle vorbereitet. Auf diese Tabelle stehen Aufgaben wie; 6000 Schritte laufen, zeichnen, deutscher Podcast hören, Bücher lesen, usw... Ich habe diese Aufgaben gruppiert. Die erste Gruppe heißt jeden Tag, die zweite Gruppe heißt mindestens 3 Mal in der Woche, die dritte Gruppe heißt mindestens 1 Mal in der Woche und die letzte Gruppe heißt wenigstens 1 Mal in dem Monat. Ich glaube, warum ich die so gruppiert klar ist. Ich mache ein Kreuz, wenn ich eine Aufgabe erledige. Einfache Logik aber ich denke, dass sie mich sehr hilft. Wenn ich, was ich machen soll, schriftlich sehe, es ist klarer und auch ein greifbareres Ziel.
Ich werde versuchen so weiterzumachen. Hoffentlich, kann ich schaffen gute Gewohnheiten zu entwickeln!
Nov. 2, 2021
Ett mem på svenska
Jag försoker att skapa ett mem på svenska om att skriva på svenska som andraspråk.
Den handlar om det här memet: https://imgflip.com/i/5sqjlv
Jag undrar om det som jag har skrivit är korrekt (dvs. satserna 'en idé att skriva om' och 'min hjärna som blockerar varje svenskt ord jag kan').
Tack så mycket!
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
Music
We all love music, we all like listening to songs, everyone knows that. I particularly like to listen to songs almost all the time. My favorite musical rhythms are Country, hip-hop, Electronic, and more.
It is so good to listen to songs, I mean, every time I listen to songs I feel like I am in another world. It is so good. There are times when the song tells exactly what you feel. Even though you are in problems, You feel better after doing that. . I like doing it in different situations. For example, when I start to learn a language, I like to look for songs that are sung in that language, so I can do what I like to do and learn a language at the same time and that is so good.
People are different. They have different hobbies and kinds of things like that. People have a favorite song, a favorite band, kind of thing, they also have a favorite rhythm. Maybe, not everyone has a favorite song or band, but everyone likes songs, so let me know what you think about, and what is your favorite musical rhythm?
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
Вы можете привести пример очень хорошей рекламы?
Реклам который компания американская сотворила был назван "Got Milk"? Намерение реклама был вдохнуть страх в людях, через напоминать им важность молока, и без этого продукта очень важно, там будет очко в их жизни.
(This marks day 1 of learning/writing Russian! :)
Nov. 2, 2021
Упражнения со статьёй "Энергия будущего"
1) О чём идёт речь в статье?
Речь в этой статье идёт о потреблении разных источников энергии. Во-первых, автор описывает машину его соседа и подчёркивает его потребления бензина. Во-вторых, автор рассказывает про потребление энергии в быту и рассматривает разные возможности для будущей энергии, включая солнечную энергию, альтернативные источники и ветроэлектрогенераторы. Хотя он признает, что на практике будет очень сложно полностью перейти на альтернативную энергию, автор считает, что атомная энергия является многообещающей альтернативной текущим источникам, но только если мы относимся к нему с умом.
2) Какие вопросы поднимает автор?
Автор задаёт вопросы о практичности перехода на альтернативную энергию. Точнее, спрашивает какие есть плюсы и минусы альтернативных источников, и можно ли обойтись без текущих источников энергии. Он также спрашивает, как это изменение может влиять на транспорт, в частности на автомобильный транспорт.
3) Является ли эта проблема первоочередной или у человечества есть время подождать?
Я считаю, что проблема “чистой энергии” первоочередной. Дело в том, что влияет на личную жизнь каждого человека по-разному. Те, кто живёт близко к экватору должны готовиться к изменению климаты. Тем, кто живёт далеко от экватора почти ничего не угрожает.
Nov. 2, 2021
Funny Stuffs
1.My phone rang when I was riding my bike. I stopped to answer. A boy started, "teacher, I want to ask a leave." I replied, "who are you?" He told me his name and the reason that he had a toothache. I told him to wait till 7 p.m, then I would signed the note for his leave. It is a principle that if students who live in the dormitory want to leave during the weekdays, the teacher need to sign a note for them to make sure that the teacher knows their track. Furtheremore, their parents also need to submit a request to the teacher. After all these have done, the parents should go to the security room to sign a note and then leave with the students.
The boy is the guy who seldom takes part in the cleaning work and handing in homework. What's funny is that his parents never regard these as his fault but the teacher's. His father even called me and tried to blame me by these stuff once a time. However, I stroke back and won.
His mother sent a message to me tonight. I hestitated whether I should told her that her son hadn't handed homework a countless time, and was so noisy during some class. I really didn't want to waste my time to talk to her because she was so rude. However, I told her in the end since she had connected with me. She replied that she had aksed her son to complete the homework tonight and hand it to me tomorrow. After a while ,here came the funnist part: she asked me what the homework was. I replied that I had told the students on Sunday evening, and I left the homework in office, so I couldn't answer her question. She said that her son would finish the homework tomorrow then. I had implied that her son never paid any attention to the homework, but she didn't take it seriously or even got it. Besides, she would never use the polite words like,"thank you" and "please." That's why her son is so rude.
2.In the third lesson in the afternoon, a boy who sits in front of the teacher desk, kept transmitting notes under the desk（传纸条） with two girls sit behind him. I was reading at that time, but I could feel his eyes on me for many times before he passed or receipted a note. However, I pretended to focus on my book. It was quite funny, but I don't want to waste my time to stopped them because it really was not a big deal.
Nov. 2, 2021
Help me to understand English! ☘️
Which one is correct? What is the difference between these two ?
1. Did you see any friends of you at the funfair?
2. Did you see any friends of yours at the funfair?
3. This is a picture of me.
4. This is a picture of mine.
5. The largest jungle in the world is called the Amazon.
6. The jungle largest in the world is called the Amazon.
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
broken window
Yesterday was the sunny warm holiday day.
I have made all my work which I had left on these holidays and was thinking how would spend the rest my free time.
All my friends were busy at that moment and nobody could take me time.
Suddenly, I remembered that one of my friend, Alise, had said to me she was free.
She plays soccer well despite she is a girl.
So I called her and invited playing out in succer.
Firstly, I suggested, I was standing in a soccer gate, she was trying to score a goal.
During 5 minutes everything was getting well but the ball, from one of the kick, flew in the window which was located on the first floor.
The window belongs neighbous apartment. They were very angry.
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