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A diary written yesterday
I stayed up late last night just for watching short videos about XuSong, a famous singer in China, through Bilibili (one of the most popular video websites in China). I felt so regretted that I didn’t write my diary timely and waste a lot of time. It hurts my eyes a lot cuz the light was too faint at the night. I just couldn’t t stop scrolling through the screen even though I didn’t find something that attracted me too much.
Is this app full of magic? Then why my eyes could not move away from the screen? Reflecting on myself, perhaps it is the feeling of boredom that make me do this kind of useless and repeated thing.
I promise to finish every day’s tasks first, then have a little rest. Try to have a real life conversation with friends to clear my head.
When I went to the bed, I suddenly remembered my unfinished work, watch a spoken practicing course, memory new vocabulary and listen to the interpreting course. How busy should I have been. However I didn’t take it seriously, as if it’s not a big deal for me. Only if the examination of CET 6 is around the corner will I fully concentrated on studying.
Super thank you for corrections.
Nov. 7, 2022
Дтп
Неправильно говорить, что производители и эксперты краш-тестов никогда не рассчитали женскую анатомию, когда они придумали манекены, использованные в соответственных тестах. На самом деле, согласно десятилетнему отчёту, сделанному американской газетой, транспортное управление уже начало тесты женских манекенов с 2003-го года. Тем не менее, тогдашние модели были по-простому уменьшенными вариантами стандартных мужицких моделей, равнявшись размерам двенадцатилетнего, символизировав по этой причине только 5 процентов женщин.
Сегодня, шведские инженеры выпустили обновленные манекены, назвав их "моделями для оценки сидений", которые являются более символизированными женских тел.
Числено говоря, мужчины с гораздо более вероятностью гибнут в ДТР, чем женщины, поскольку они проводят длиннее время за рулём, и они более склонны к совершению рискованных действий на дороге. Однако, женщины страдают от более серьёзных травм после аварии, если учесть размеры их тел. Из-за этой принципы, женщин-инженеры были вдохновлены создать более точные модели.
Сегодняшнее исследование сосредоточивается на смягчении ударов, причинённых во время ДТП. Исследователи сделали акцент на то, что дизайн сиденья влияет на вероятность выживания, из-за разницы центра тяжести между мужчинами и женщинами. Насчёт причины, почему только сейчас есть точное изображение женского тела, они ответили, что
мужчины царят в научной области, так что число сторонников более точных моделей-очень мало. В будущем, они надеются , что будут создаться модели пожилых, детей и тучных.
Nov. 7, 2022
A WeChat Message
Hi, Eilidh, People who do Covid tests are transferred from some public or private hospitals, and they get their salary from their original work unit.
In fact, every volunteer has a work unit and has a steady income.
Epidemic prevention and control work is only phased work, and volunteers don't need to work for it for so long, so it doesn't matter much to work for it for a short period without paying.
But if people took it as full time work for a long time, there would be a specific department paying them, otherwise no one would do it.
People who do the job also need to live, to support their families, so they can't do things without getting payback.
Nov. 7, 2022
My little diary
Do work out a lot. I felt sore and ache all over from back to feet.
Yesterday I went to a suburban home with my friend, and when we came back to school, we immediately happened to catch a bus, which was extremely fortunate, because we have to waited for at least 10 minutes in the bus stop before. Interestingly, the bus driver was still the one who sent us to our destination in the morning.
In the afternoon, though the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them are students, we got into the restaurant without a hesitation. Waiting for about 20 minutes, our delicious dinner was on the table. I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, maybe I was just not hungry anymore after a long wait.
Thank you for correcting.
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Nov. 6, 2022
Mi rutina de mañana
Original:
Cuando me levantaba en la mañana, usar el baño y lavarse los dientes. Después puse la ropa, cepillarme el pelo, y ir a desayuné. Usualmente, comía un bagel y bebía un taza de naranja.
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Cuando levantaba en las mañanas, usaba el baño y me lavaba los dientes. Después me ponía la ropa, me capillaba el pelo, e iba a desayunar. Usualmente, comía un bagel y babía un vaso de jugo de naranja.
Nov. 6, 2022
Quelle est votre saison préférée ?
Ma saison préférée est définitivement l’automne. Premièrement, je pense que la météo est le plus agréable en automne. Je ne supporte pas trop la chaleur, et je suis toujours soulagé quand la première fraîcheur d’automne arrive, alors je peux porter une jolie chemise en flanelle. Les changements plus rapides dans la météo, le feuillage, et la lumière sont un rappel d’être conscient de l’impact de l’environnement sur nos vies. Bon, ça peut devenir un peu fatiguant d’avoir besoin de ratisser les feuilles tout le temps, mais à mon avis ça vaut le coup. Deuxièmement, l’automne a deux de mes fêtes préférées : l’Halloween et le jour d’Action de grâce. Il y a toujours des soirées déguisées à Halloween où on peut s’amuser bien avec ses amis. En revanche, le jour d’Action de grâce est une période de passer chez famille, réfléchissant bien à quoi est le plus important.
Nov. 6, 2022
Frases 13
Nota: quiero usar el pronombre "ustedes" con el dialecto de América Latina. Quiero sonar lo más auténtica posible, por favor, siéntete libre de dejar cualquier corrección.
1. My dad is really cheap.
- Mi papá es muy tacaño.
1. I’m not looking forward to summer this year.
- No estoy deseando que llegue el verano este año.
1. Apparently this summer is going to be the hottest it has been ever.
- Al parecer, este verano va a ser el más caluroso que jamás haya sido.
1. I would like to get a tan at the beach!
- ¡Me gustaría quemarme en la playa!
1. Are you an extrovert?
- ¿Eres un extrovertido?
1. We have to buy fake nails. (Plastic nails)
- Tenemos que comprar uñas falsos.
1. I enjoy talking to you.
- Disfruto hablar contigo.
1. What country would you travel to to see snow?
- ¿En cuál país te gustaría viajar para ver el nieve?
1. In Australia, it snows in only one place.
- En Australia, solo nieva en un lugar.
1. Although I haven’t done much in my life yet, it just means that I have more experiences to look forward to later in life and now!
- Aunque no ya he hecho mucho en mi vida, solo significa que tengo más experiencias que esperar más adelante en la vida.
1. My friend left (dropped out of) school early due to bullying.
- Mi amigo dejó los estudios temprano debido al acoso.
1. We are all working and we all want to travel together.
- A todos estamos trabajando y todos queramos viajar juntos.
1. I find it really exciting that we are all going to go to university.
- Me cuesto emocionante que a todos vamos a ir a universidad.
1. It doesn’t matter.
- No importa.
1. It is a six month course you do, and after you complete it, you can go into any university course you want.
- Es una carrera de seis meses que hagas, y después de entregarla, puedes ir a cualquiera carrera quieres.
Nov. 6, 2022
O que eu gosto em Portugal
Olá a todos, espero que esteja tudo bem com vocês.
Hoje eu gostaria de falar sobre algumas coisas das quais gosto em Portugal.
Primeiro, acho que o clima é muito bom, é muitas vezes ameno e o sol costuma estar presente. Por isso, é bastante diferente de França onde não há muito sol durante o inverno.
Portugal é uma país com uma cultura muito rica, ora no âmbito literário com autores como Luis de Camões, José Saramago e Fernando Pessoa como em outros âmbitos artísticos com por exemplo o fado. A comida também é uma das coisas das quais eu gosto muito, em particular dos caldos e dos pastéis de Nata que como quase diáriamente.
Admiro muito a beleza de Lisboa, é uma cidade muito colorida e gosto muito da sua arquitetura e do fato que esta cidade tem muitos parques e espaços verdes onde é possível descansar. Um detalhe do qual gosto são os pavimentos de pedra com padrões artísticos.
Finalmente, gosto imenso dos portugueses, acho que são muito abertos, alegres e fazem todo o possível para que eu me sinta como se estivesse em casa. Acho que encontraram um equilíbrio entre a vida profissional e as atividades de lazer.
Poderia falar de muitas mais coisas, e fá-lo-ei, mas nos meus próximos textos.
Até já!
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Nov. 6, 2022
Challenge, Day 37
Today es the 37 th day of my daily English challenge. Today I felt much better than yesterday.
After woke up, I drunk lemon juice. I don't like to have breakfast. Then, I washed my face, brushed my teeth. I begun to clean the fridge because had messy. After I finished it. I baked chicken potato. It was delicious!
In the afternoon, I reviewed some lessons in Spanish, then I read tow texts a loud. I also did same in English. I was delighted that what I did today.
Before sleeping tonight, I will take care of myself and I read my book.
Nov. 6, 2022
Please review my essay.
Do you collect anything?
No, I don’t. I am not very into collecting things. I understand that many people collect on particular stuff because they love it so much. I have a strong love for books too, but I do not want to make a whole collection of my favorite novels and comics. For me, it seems like a waste of money as I can pay a much lower price for the digital form. Besides, my house is too small for this kind of hobby.
3. Is collecting a popular pastime in Vietnam?
I am not sure because I do not know a lot of people, but there are many people that I know who are into collecting. My younger sister and brother, for example, have a whole collection of shoes, some of which they never wear. My childhood friend bought the whole series of all his favorite comics, and dedicate a room to store them.
4. Do a lot of people in Vietnam collect things and what do they collect
I guess just a small number of people in Vietnam are into collecting things. Most people do not have the time or money to pursue this hobby. But I have seen many young people who like to collect high-end products such as shoes, bags, and watches. Stamp collecting is popular among the older generation in Vietnam.
What subjects are you studying?
I’m currently working now, so I do not study any subject at the moment. But I graduated from the University of Finance and Marketing with a degree in International Business.
What subjects are you studying?
I’m currently working now, so I do not study any subject at the moment. But I graduated from the University of Finance and Marketing with a degree in International Business.
4. Why did you choose to study that subject?
The first reason is that I have a knack for learning English, so I decided to pursue a career that could make use of it. Another reason is that at that time me and my parents believed that the business sector offered better salaries than others. As a result, I wanted to work in the import and export industry, so I chose to study International Business.
5. Do you like your subject? (English linguistics)
No, I did not. While the courses that required English skills were rather easy for me, those that required Math skills, such as financial analysis, were torture for me, as I am very bad at Math. I wish I had chosen to study English linguistics major instead.
1. Is it very interesting
Some courses were quite interesting. I don’t really remember their names, but one course really opened my eyes to the basic concepts of a country’s financial system, which were totally fascinating. Others, on the other hand, were quite dull, especially ones that required mathematics and Excel skills.
Nov. 6, 2022
Día sexto de mi reto
Hoy es el sexto día de mi reto de español. hoy me he levantado poco bien. lo primer algo lo he hecho es tomar zumo de limón,luego me he lavado la cara y los dientes.
Por la mañana, he limpiado la congelador porque estaba sucio y desordenada,después he preparado un plato es " Patatas con pollo al horno."
Por la tarde, he revisado algunas lecciónes en español, además, he léido un texto en voz alta. Creo que es una buena manera para mejorar mi dioma.
A la 15 horas, tuve una cita con a mi amiga por Skype y la había esperado por mucho tiempo, desafurtunadamente,no ella estaba en linea. Entences, he leído tambien dos textos en inglés en voz alta.
Nov. 6, 2022
Introverti(e) ou extroverti(e)?
Un(e) Introverti(e) est quelqu’un qui préfère être avec une ou deux personnes aussitôt qu’une foule. Ils sont concentrés sur leurs pensées intérieures et leurs idées. Ils ont tendance à être timides et réfléchissants. Ils préfèrent travailler seule. Des carrières pour un introverti : comptable, informaticien(ne), écrivain(e).
Un(e) extroverti(e) est quelqu’un qui préfère parler avec tout le monde. Ils reçoivent leur énergie par la socialisation. Ils sont ouverts et ils ont un vaste réseau social. Ils aiment travailler en équipe. Des carrières pour un extraverti : agent(e) de change, agent(e) immobilier, politicien(ne), coiffeur/coiffeuse.
Je suis un extroverti. J’adore parler avec de nouvelles personnes. C’est parfait pour moi parce que je dois parler avec des personnes au travail. J'apprécie de travailler en équipe.
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Nov. 6, 2022
Please review my essay
What types of buildings are there in your city?
In the affluent neighborhood of my hometown, Buon Ma Thuot city, you can see all kinds of buildings that are associated with developed urban areas, such as skyscrapers, high-rise apartments, and large office and factory buildings. The city also has some slums packed with weak buildings that look like they will fall down at any moment. But what makes it different from others is that you can spot many traditional stilt houses made of wood or bamboo in some ethnic minority villages.
Do you prefer old or new buildings?
With no question, I would go for old ones, for both safety and convenience reasons. It is unavoidable that houses will be degraded over time, so old houses are certainly less safe than new houses. Also, I believe that construction design and materials evolve in a way that can fulfill the changing need of people. So I would argue that modern houses are more comfortable and safe to live in than historic ones. Like, most of them are designed to be able to provide electricity to all rooms, which is something that you can hardly enjoy in an old building.
Are historical buildings important?
Absolutely, I think they are of great importance, and governments therefore should pay more attention to preserving them. I believe that such buildings represent the history and culture of the past, and they promote a shared identity for the community. They also can attract visitors and benefit the local tourism industry due to their unique character.
Would you like to live in an old building?
No, absolutely not. I have seen so many people talk about how their old houses or apartments are so inconvenient to live in, either on the news or on YouTube. Like, the ancient houses in certain areas in Hanoi, which are protected by the law against demolition, are notorious for being so uncomfortable to live in that the owners have many times protested to gain the right to reconstruct them. Similarly, while most old apartment buildings in France give a unique gothic vibe to the city and are very pleasant to look at, I have watched some people that have rented them reviewing what living there is like on YouTube. They are obviously not satisfied at all with the poor ventilation and no elevator system.
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Tradução dum texto sobre uma viagem a Suécia
O ano passado, no fevereiro, ficamos por uma noite ao Hotel de Gelo em Kiruna, a Suécia. Foi uma experiência fantástica!
O hotel está feito de gelo e neve, mas não é preciso de se preocupar pelo frio. Afora estava a -29 graus, mas o interior do hotel estava a -5 graus.
Usávamos roupas de inverno, assim que a temperatura não foi um problema.
Pela noite dormimos numa cama feita de gelo a l'interior dos nossos sacos de dormir. Não tivemos nada de frio. Dormimos a noite toda e de manhã comemos um pequeno-almoço típico suíço.
Mas houve alguns problemas. O restaurante era caro demais e o serviço foi um pouco lento. Esperamos quase uma hora os nossos pratos.
O hotel tem também uma sauna e um “spa”.
Certamente, não é barato, mas é uma experiência inesquecível.
Nov. 6, 2022
Erstes Date
Ich habe diesen Typ kennengelernt, auf dem ich total stehe. Wir haben uns nur einmal gesehen und unterhalten, für ungefähr eine Stunde. Wir sind durch die Stadt ein bisschen spaziergegangen. Damals dachte ich, dass wir mehr zu der Nacht hätten, aber er hat andere Pläne. Es war eigentlich für mich eine Enttäuschung, trotzdem habe ich das verstanden. Wir hatten keine Pläne außer einem Treffen.
Das ist vor einem Monat passiert. Seitdem haben wir uns zwar geschrieben, aber unbedingt weniger als ich möchte. Naja, nach dem ersten Treffen meinte er, dass wir uns zuerst nur Freunde sein sollen. Ich habe wahrscheinlich zu viel darauf erwartet.
Ich will mir aber nicht schämmen. Nicht nur ich aber er auch hat versucht einen neuen Treffen wahr zu nehmen. Trotzdem gibt es immer etwas im Weg, das alles kaputt macht. Heute würden wir uns nochmals treffen, wenn er nicht zu die Familie fahren müsste.
Vielleicht näschstes Wochenende?
Nov. 6, 2022
Chucky Past simple
There was a bird. Her name was Chucky. She had beautiful colorful feathers. But she couldn't fly, because cat tore out her tail. At first Chucky was very upset and decided to figure out what means to be happy. She asked the Sun, The Wind and the Water. But they gave her different answers. Chucky was taken aback. She thought she was completely confused. Then she asked a wise owl and the owl replied:
- Happiness is what makes you happy.
Little bird realized that she was happy when she was flying. So, she didn't give up and build hot air balloon. Now she could fly on it and was very happy.
Nov. 6, 2022
私の「普通」とあなたの「普通」
国によってさまざまな文化がありますね。以下は日本とベトナムの違うことです。
まず、日本人は時間を守るというマナーがあります。例えば、10時に待ち合わせにすれば、日本人は10分前、5分前に待ち合わせ場所に着きます。ベトナム人はちょうど10時または10時過ぎに着く場合が多いと思います。
また、ベトナム人は昼寝の習慣がありますが、日本人はありません。ベトナムでは、朝早く起きて、朝早く市場に買い物に行き、食事をしてから出勤しています。朝早く行動するから、会社でも自宅でも多くのベトナム人は、少しの時間でも昼寝をします。
最後にペットを飼うのがかなり違います。日本人は人よりも犬や猫をよく連れて行きます。日本人はいつも決まったトイレにペットを連れてきます。
普通と考えも普通じゃないと考えもあります。というのはそれぞれの国には考えることとマナーが違うからです。それは当たり前だと思います。
Nov. 6, 2022
Sprachprüfung
Ich habe schon Wörterbücher und Google benutzt, aber bitte prüfen Sie meine Aussage.
Heute habe ich eine meiner Bassgitarren mitgebracht. Ich habe sie in 2015 in Glasgow gekauft und habe sie mit meiner alten Band "Apache Sun" gespielt. Ich spielte jahrelang in dieser Band mit meinem älteren Bruder und zusammen haben wir Musik veröffentlicht und live in Schottland herum gespielt. Unsere Musik wurde in einige amerikanischen Fernsehserien verwendet und kommt auch in einem Film mit dem Titel "Uncharted" vor, der dieses Jahr herauskam. Sie wird in einer Filmmontage verwendet und ich fand es ziemlich lustig. Ich habe mit 13 angefangen, Bassgitarre zu spielen, aber ich habe mit 7 angefangen, Kontrabass zu spielen. Deswegen habe ich immer das Instrument sehr gut versteht. Meine Eltern kauften mir meinen ersten Bass als Weihnachtsgeschenk, aber ich spiele lieber diesen, weil sie sich so gut spielen lässt. Heutzutage spiele ich nicht mehr so oft, weil ich mich auf Deutschlernen konzentriere, aber ich habe vor kurzem eine neue Band gegründet, die "Rudergerät" heißt. Ich spiele auch jeden Freitag mit einem Freund, den ich in Reha kennengelernt habe. Zusammen spielen wir sowohl Lieder von Nirvana als auch Eigenkompositionen. Ich habe auch in Jazzbands und Musiktheater gespielt, aber meine liebsten Basslines sind immer Reggae-Basslinien, weil sie immer sehr cool klingen. Mit diesem Instrument einen Ton zu machen, kann man die Saite mit deinen Fingern oder einem Plektrum zupfen, und die Vibrationen werden von den Tonabnehmern aufgenommen und an den Verstärker gesendet. Es ist wichtig, mit den Schlagzeuger im Takt zu bleiben und nicht zu viele Noten zu spielen. Meine Lieblingsbassisten sind Paul McCartney von The Beatles, Geezer Butler von Black Sabbath und Krist Novoselic von Nirvana. Als ich jünger war, habe ich viel Black Sabbath gespielt, um meine Fähigkeiten zu verbessern. Wenn man in einem Veranstaltungsort spielt, wackelt der Raum und es fühlt sich immer gut an, Bassgitarre laut zu spielen. Habt ihr alle irgendwelche fragen?
DANKE!