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L'ambition
À mon avis les ambitions sont importants pour une bonne vie. Chacune a besoin d'une rêve qu'il veut attirer. Il y a ce proverb qui dit "Quelqu'un avec une objetif peut endurer tous". Ce n'est pas grave si on n'a pas éncore trouvé mais cherhché quelque chose, bien sûr il y a quelque choses pour tout le monde. Peu importe comme grande cette rêve est, si tu veux vraiment l'attirer ça marche.
June 20, 2022
Journal
When I finished middle school studying, I left my hometown and studied at a specialized secondary school which is in the city l live in now.
My hometown is about 70 kilometers away from the city, so I could only go back to my home on summer breaks and winter breaks.
I didn't have much pressure on studies when I was in that specialized school, because students who were accepted by specialized schools meant that they already got the qualification to work for the government after three years of studying.
Therefore, life in that specialized school was very different from when it was in middle school. We were very relaxed and could have a little fun.
Learning to sing new songs almost became a habit of every student. Each of them would have a notebook that was used to write down some new songs.
I remember there was a movie back then called "A Sweet Career" and the movie had the theme music called "Our Lives are Full of Sunshine", which was a little popular.
So I learned to sing it and after a while of practice I could pull it off.
In the summer break, I went back to my village. One night, I slept with other teenagers on the threshing ground. I sang this song for them and they were surprised.
Now, I want to translate the song's lyrics for you.
“Our Lives are Full of Sunshine”
Happy flowers are blooming in our hearts
The songs of love drift with the wind
Our hearts fly far away
Longing for the beautiful revolutionary ideal
Ah, dear ones, go hand in hand, go hand in hand
Our lives are full of sunshine, full of sunshine
The sister flowers are competing to bloom
The inseparable love birds spread their wings to enjoy flying
Facing the wind and rain of fighting on the long march
Contribute youth and strength to the motherland
Ah, dear ones, go hand in hand, go hand in hand
Our life is full of sunshine, full of sunshine
June 20, 2022
Hast du Kinder?
Hallo Anna! Hast du Kinder?
Ja, ich habe einen Sohn, er heißt Mark.
Wie alt ist er?
Er ist dreizehn.
Hat er Geschwister?
Nein, er ist ein Einzelkind. Und du, hast du Kinder?
Ja, ich habe zwei Töchter.
Wie heißen sie?
Sie heißen Emma und Mila.
Sind sie älter als mein Sohn?
Nein, sie sind jünger. Emma ist vier und Mila ist zwei.
Das ist toll!
June 20, 2022
einfach Sätze bilden
1. Hinsichtlich ihrer Anliegen müssen wir noch darüber reden, ob wir ihre wünschen wirklich erfüllen können, da bin ich mir auch nicht sicher.
2. Hinsichtlich ihr Zertifikat und ihre Arbeitserfahrung bin ich der Ansicht, dass Sie übergebildet sind, es passt dieser Stelle nicht.
3. Der Bedarf von Kunden ist so wichtig, dass wir nicht bedenkenlos behandeln sollen.
4. Wenn ich solches motivierte Video anschaue, bin ich sofort begeistert, und möchte womöglich etwas in meinen Leben ändern. Aber allmählich verpuffe ich die Anfangsbegeisterung.
5. Sie hat zwar eine Arbeit gefunden, aber durch solche Arbeit kann sie nichts erlernen. Solche Arbeit kann man sogar die Ansicht in den 30 Jahren sehen, nichts würde verändert. sie kann nur Tag für Tag die gleichen Dinge wiederholen. Welche Fähigkeit sie jetzt hat, würde ganzen Leben lang gleich beleiben. und langsam hat sie in diser Gesellschaft keine Konkurenzfähigkeit mehr.
6. In beruflicher Hinsicht ist diese Arbeit schon seine Grenzen gestoßen, es überfordert ihn.
7. Es fällt mir schwer, ständig mit Künden Kontakt zu knüpfen.
8. In Maßen ihre Figur kann ich darüber spekulieren, dass sie bestimmt nicht nur gesund ernährt sonder auch oft Sport macht.
9. Während der Besprechung vermerke ich der wichtige Stichpunkt in meinem Computer. Um nach der Tagung mich noch erinnern zu können.
10. Die Gebrauchsanweisung hat schon alle Details dargelegt, du musst nur alles aufmerksam durchlesen, dann verstehst du sicher, wie du es bedienen sollst.
Danke für seine Korrektur.
June 20, 2022
война в Афганистане
По окончании войны в Афганистане, которая была провоцирована США, я спрашиваю- стоила ли её?
Несмотря на то, что изначально американская армия удалась отогнать Талибан из страны, организация уничтожила то, что принадлежало к обычной людям. Например, солдаты вырезали газопроводы, которые были намерены поставлять газ для приготовления и других цел, в акте саботажа против оккупантов.
бесспорно то, что без газа, никто не могло приготовить еду, даже если земля достаточно плодородная, чтобы воспитать множество растений.
В конце концов, Талибан одержал победа против коалиции, когда достигал до президентской дворца после 20 лета. Итак, припологается, что все прогресс в экономической поле страны был зря.
June 20, 2022
20 juin 2022 - le retard
Plus de trois professeurs de cette même discipline m’ont accusée d’être toujours en retard et m’ont stressée l’importance d’être à l’heure. De plus, ils ont l’impression que j’étais seulement en retard pour leurs leçons, ce qui est faux, parce que je suis en retard presque pour tous les cours, sauf si j’ai un cours auparavant ou bien si je ne viens pas chez moi. Donc, ma response est toujours : « mais non, je suis arrivée déjà plus tôt pour votre leçon… » mais ils ne me croient pas. Tant pis !
June 20, 2022
War Fatigue
In the last few days, I have begun to hear about this term very often. The first one was when reading an article in the British newspaper “The Guardian”. After that, I started being more aware of its use.
“War Fatigue” basically means being tired of war. I cannot imagine anybody who is in favour of wars just because that is the way it is. Of course, if your country is invaded and your people slaughtered, then, everything is different. Ukrainians would be happier living peacefully but for Putin launching a full-scale invasion of their loved homeland. According to the findings of a survey carried out by The European Council on Foreign Relations, in the weeks and months since the invasion of Ukraine, Europeans surprised both Putin and themselves by their unity and decisiveness. After the UK leaving the EU and other countries thinking about taking the same decision, Putin miscalculated the effect the invasion of Ukraine would have on the member states of the EU. Rather than refusing to welcome the hundreds of thousands of Ukrainian refugees coming every day since the war started, European countries received them with open arms, especially Poland. Nothing like that had ever happened before. Not only did the EU take in the millions of Ukrainians fleeing their country but it also sent humanitarian aid. The EU went to such great lengths as to send weaponry to try and help Ukrainian fight off its invaders.
At the start of the war, Putin thought it would take him just a few days to capture Kyiv and overthrow the Ukrainian elected president. However, he could not be more mistaken. Now, after almost 120 days since the invasion of Ukraine started, the war has begun to take its toll on Europeans and they are split between those who want the war to end as quick as possible and those who want justice to be done. In other words, economic stability versus holding Putin responsible for the many war crimes committed during the invasion of Ukraine.
June 20, 2022
用技術為殘疾人營造更包容的環境
據報導，6月14日聯合國秘書長古特雷斯呼籲用技術為殘疾人營造更包容的環境。在當天開幕的 「殘疾人權利公約」，他說通過技術我們的社會就可以促進平等，也可以大破各種屏障。更加，如果我們利用技術，我們可以鼓勵殘疾人參與勞動力市場。新冠疫情特別對殘疾人有很嚴重的影響，所以用技術營造更好的生存環境很重要。
當然保障技術可及性很不容易。全球10億多人需要輔助技術，但有不少人其中無法獲得他們需要的。而且，即是我們可以解決物流問題，還有技術合適不合適的問題。現代技術有限制，還有很多無法解決的問題。如果我們真的想用技術為殘疾人讓世界更舒服，我們先得發達更多樣的技術，也得建立更健全的物流體系。
June 20, 2022
Une bonne méthode à mémoriser
D'après mes expériences, si je prends les notes sur un papier avec un stylo ou écrire sur l'iPad, je peux mémoriser les choses plus rapide que taper sur un clavier. Quand j'écris avec mes mains, même si j'oublie un peu de chose, j'ai un mémoire de ce que j'ai écrit. Si j'ai écrit quelque chose que je ne me souvenais pas, je le sais. En revanche, en tapant sur le clavier pour mémoriser les choses, je fais seulement l'action de copier et coller, c'est-à-dire que je n'ai jamais mémorisé quelque chose.
J'utiliser souvent l'iPad maintenant pour mémoriser les vocabulaires ou même les phrases car je ne veux pas gaspiller les papiers. Souvent, je trouve que ça une bonne méthode au lieu d'écrire sur les papiers.
J'ai essayé une fois de mémoriser les choses en tapant sur le clavier, je ne pouvais mémoriser un mot pendant d'une heure et c'était comme ça j'ai gaspillé une heure à taper devant l'ordinateur
June 20, 2022
Export
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June 20, 2022
Journal
It may have been the first year in middle school, when my class had music classes.
The music teacher's name is Li Chengsi, a young man. In every music class, he taught us to sing songs while he played an organ.
At the beginning of every class, he let a student who sung the best lead us to sing a song before he taught us a new song.
The two songs we sung the most were "A Big River" and "The Spring Water on the Frontier is Clear and Pure".
When we sang "A Big River", the leading singer was always one of my female classmates. She sat on my left. She had a very beautiful voice which I thought was very suitable for this song.
Now, let me try to translate this song's lyrics for you.
“A Big River”
A big river has rolling wide waves.
The winds on both sides of the river release the rice fragrance.
My home is right on the river shore.
I was used to listening to songs by the Ferrymen,
And seeing white sails on the ships.
This is my beautiful motherland,
where I grew up.
In this vast land,
The beautiful scenery is everywhere.
The girls are like flowers,
How broad-minded the boys are!
In order to open up a new career,
The sleeping mountains have been awakened,
The rivers have been made to look different.
This is my heroic country,
where I grew up.
In this ancient land,
There is the power of youth everywhere.
Good mountains, good rivers, and good places.
All the roads are spacious.
There are good wines when friends come.
If the jackals come,
They will be greeted by shotguns.
This is the powerful motherland,
where I grew up.
In this warm land.
There is peaceful sunshine everywhere.
June 20, 2022
なぜ千と千尋BMGは素晴らしい
なぜ千と千尋BMGは素晴らしい
Why Spirited Agway’s Soundtrack…
この映画のBMGはなぜ最高ですか？
Why the music of this movie is so good?
これは質問が必要ですか？
Is that a question?
１０００方に聞いて、全部の答えはこの映画BMGはとても素晴らしいです。
Ask 1000 people they will answer the music from this movie was damn good!
何回も聞いて、飽きない。
No matter how many times you listen.
もし、生演奏会があれば、必ず切符を買う。
You want to pay money and buy ticket for live concert.
素人に聞いて、このくらいの答案が答える。
That is level of answer you will get when you ask me.
今日はある音楽家にこの曲がなぜ素晴らしい説明のビデオを見ました。
But today I watched a video from a musician, he explains how the music was good.
エンジニアが超高層ビルの作り方を教えてくれるようなものです！
Is like an engineer tells you how to build a skyscraper!
「素晴らしさ」は普段の方（俺）、分からない！
The “good” is not normal people like me can understand.
この説明ビデオを見たのに、大抵１０％くらいの深さを分かる。
Even I watched the video I can “understand” 10% how good was that music.
ちなみに、君もわかる？
What about you?
June 20, 2022
Why Spirited Agway’s Soundtrack…
Why the music of this movie is so good?
Is that a question?
Ask 1000 people they will answer the music from this movie was damn good!
No matter how many times you listen.
You want to pay money and buy ticket for live concert.
That is level of answer you will get when you ask me.
But today I watched a video from a musician, he explains how the music was good.
Is like an engineer tells you how to build a skyscraper!
The “good” is not normal people like me can understand.
Even I watched the video I can “understand” 10% how good was that music.
What about you?
June 20, 2022
Is it normal not to be romantic with your spouse?
It is normal I think. The pattern of relationships are multiple and diverse. Some relationships may are romantic, people kiss each other, they flirt each other, and have fun with each other becasue they enjoy that certain status.
Some relationships may are not romantic, they are more like a friend, people also kiss each other but it may feel different if compare with romantic people. People will support each other like a real family.
You would lessly say something romantic to your parents and brother. do you? We have a real trust for our family behind our hearts and don’t say something nice intentionally. Also, people get into this kind of relationship because they are enjoying it.
It depends on which one you like, and which relationship you can get into.
June 20, 2022
Le paysagement
Depuis que j’avais vingt-et-un ans j’étais moniteur de ski. J’adore cet profession. Ça m’a donné l’opportunité de rencontré plusieurs personnes et de skier presque chaque jour pendant l’hiver. Cependant, c’est toujours difficile de trouver un emplois pendant l’été parce que la plupart des employeurs veulent que tu travailles pendant tout l’année.
Un des emplois qui se convienne très bien avec le ski c’est le paysagement. J’ai fait ça pour quelques années et je l’ai vraiment aimé. Le travail est dur et les heures sont longues mais ça vault la peine. Les résultats de ton travail sont très tangibles et satisfaisante. Il a été prouvé qu’un bon aménagement paysager peut augmenter le valeur d’une maison jusqu’à quinze pour-cent.
L’entreprise avec lequel que j’ai travaillé était concentré sur le côté construction. On avait construit plusieurs patios et terrasses. En plus, on avait planté les arbres et préparé les plates-bandes. En général on avait commencé à sept heures et parfois on avait finit à dix-neuf heures. J’avais jamais la misère a dormir après une longue journée de travail.
Je m’ennuie de le paysagement parfois. Peut-être je vais retourner a l’industrie dans le futur.
June 20, 2022
Perfectionism
I noticed that I have two problems making my life bitter. One is perfectionism and the other is being controlled by emotions.
Perfectionism makes many bad feelings about others. And the feelings from that don't disappear but even make me mad. I would(used to?) impose impossible high standards to others to defend me. I am reading books about these. I hope these give me awareness.
June 20, 2022
19.06.2022
Ich habe gestern, mir den Film "The Perks of Being a Wallflower" (Vielleicht lieber morgen) zu Ende anzuschauen. Es ist schön.
Der Film erzählt die Geschichte eines Junges. Charlie ist 16 Jahre alt. Er ist im "High School". Er hat aber keine Freunde. Dort wird er neue gute Freunde zu finden. Ich empfehle diesen Film.
Heute habe ich diese Wörter gelernt:
• das Fieber, die Fieber
• der Film, die Filme
• finden
• die Firma, die Firmen
• die Flasche, die Flaschen
• das Fleisch
Hier schreibe ich diese Sätze als Übung:
• Er hat ein Fieber.
• Der Film dauert 3 Stunden.
• Ich fand deinen Geldbörse.
• Sie arbeit bei einen gute Firma.
• Wir möchten bitte eine Flasche Rotwein .
• Fleisch essen sie Fleisch nicht.
Danke schön. Bis morgen.
Edited:
* = notes in English for when I review the text again.
Ich habe mir gestern, den Film "The Perks of Being a Wallflower" (Vielleicht lieber morgen) zu Ende angeschaut. Er ist schön.
Der Film erzählt die Geschichte eines Jungen. Charlie ist 16 Jahre alt. Er ist in der "High School". Er hat aber keine Freunde. Dort findet er neue gute Freunde. Ich empfehle diesen Film.
Heute habe ich diese Wörter gelernt:
• das Fieber, die Fieber
• der Film, die Filme
• finden
• die Firma, die Firmen
• die Flasche, die Flaschen
• das Fleisch
Hier schreibe ich diese Sätze als Übung:
• Er hat Fieber. * ("Fieber" is uncontable)
• Der Film dauert 3 Stunden.
• Ich fand deine Geldbörse. * (I must play closer attention to declinations)
• Sie arbeitet bei eines guten Firma. * (I confused "bis" for "bei". Now I know that bei requires "dativ")
• Wir möchten bitte eine Flasche Rotwein .
• Fleisch essen sie nicht. * (FML)
Danke schön. Bis morgen.
June 20, 2022
Ньокки.
Ну, сегодня я хотела поговорить о нашем новом кролике, Ньокки.
Мы привезли его домой дня назад.
Мы попытались усыновить кролик для Болитас (моя крольчиха) for months.
Кролики социальные животные, значит, у них должен быть другой друг, по крайней мере.
Мы удочерили Болитас 3 или 4 годы назад, но, у нас не было достаточно места за другой кролик.
Теперь, когда мы переехали, мы решили что, это было время чтобы усыновить другого.
Я очень счастлива не только потому, что у нас другой кролик, а тоже они неплохо ладят.
June 20, 2022
Bonjour!
Bonjour, je m’appelle Lillian.
La français est un nouvelle langue pour moi. J’étudie cela depuis seulement trois semaines.
Maintenant, je ne sais pas comment utiliser les conjugaisons avancées.
Je pense que maintenant, je ne comprend pas assez de mots et verbes, et la grammaire de français est très difficile aussi.
J’étudie japonais et espagnol à l’école secondaire, et le espagnol et la français sont un peu similaire. Quelques fois je utilise un mot en espagnol à la place de le même mot en français.
Parce que je vais à Montréal en le mois de juillet, j’ai besoin de étudier plus.
June 19, 2022
June 19, 2022
June 19, 2022
My Plans for the Future
I want to move to the US for a while.
As a kid, I used to be smarter than the average, but I was lazy. Everyone told me that I need to study, yet no one told me how. So, I did. I studied things that I enjoyed like coding and English. But I never did my best at school, and I regret it.
Not doing well in school never had any real consequences, yet I missed the opportunity to learn a lot. I believe that the educational system is failed. However, after meeting some virtuous people that changed my mind, I've concluded that the ideal place to search for brilliant people is where they learn. That's why I want to go to college.
After school, I took a two year break to decide my next step. So, I choose to get a job. After a while, I landed a job at a multinational corporation. There I would meet brilliant people. They had several astonishing skills, and the way they saw the world was outstanding. Meeting them changed my life for the best.
I decided that I would not stay behind, so I started improving my skills. I had to step up my game: I went back to studying English, Excel, and coding. Unfortunately, most of them left the company to work in other projects. But I am still surrounded by smart folks, however I want more. I want be immerse in a highly emulous environment. I want be surrounded by the best.
If I want be surrounded by the best, I need to be between the best. And that's why, for the past months, I've been working hard. I've been learning my third language, working on my English, getting in shape, reading and studying. But I can do more.
I want to go to the US. Thanks to the feedback that I've been receiving in this site, I've learned a lot. Yet, I have a long way to go, and I think that living in the US would refine my English. To achieve that, I started to save money. Hopefully, I'll be able to move in two years. After that, it would be marvelous to visit Germany.
I believe that in this journey, I'll stumble upon ingenious people. And maybe they'll change my life again.
Thank you for reading.
Edited:
* = notes for when reviewing in the future.
I want to move to the US for a while.
As a kid, I used to be smarter than average, but I was lazy. Everyone told me that I needed to study, yet no one told me how. So, I did. I studied things that I enjoyed like coding and English. But, I never did my best at school, and I regret it.
Not doing well in school never had any real consequences, yet I missed the opportunity to learn a lot. I believe that the education system is a failure. However, after meeting some virtuous people who (* that was miss used) changed my mind, I've concluded that the ideal place to search for brilliant people is where they learn. That's why I want to go to college.
After school, I took a two year break to decide on (* decide on something) my next steps. So, I chose (* pay closer attention to conjugation) to get a job. After a while, I landed a job at a multinational corporation. I meet brilliant people there ( * KISS). They had astonishing skills, and the way they saw the world was outstanding. Meeting them changed my life for the better. (* change for the better)
I decided that I would not lag behind, so I started improving my skills. I had to step up my game: I went back to studying English, Excel, and coding. Unfortunately, most of them left the company to work on (* work in is for a company) other projects. But, I am still surrounded by smart folks, however I want more. I want to (* to be) be immersed in a highly emulous environment. I want be surrounded by the best.
If I want be surrounded by the best, I need to be between the best. That's why, for the past few months, I've been working hard; I've been learning my third language, working on my English, getting in shape, reading, and studying. But, I can do more.
I want to go to the US. Thanks to the feedback that I've been receiving in this site, I've learned a lot. That said, I have a long way to go, and I think that living in the US would refine my English. To achieve that, I've started to save money (* started in the past and still on going). Hopefully, I'll be able to move in two years. After that, it would be marvelous to visit Germany.
I believe that on this journey (* in for a specific point), I'll stumble upon ingenious people. And, maybe they'll change my life again.
Thank you for reading.
June 19, 2022
Une dictée 4
La video se trouve ici : https://twitter.com/franceinfoplus/status/1538084105660682241?s=20&t=4-SiNx8CAx1spW90sFXLZw
C'est la ruée vers l'eau à Châteauroux. L'information est tombée hier, une bactérie a contaminé une partie du réseau de la ville, interdiction formelle de boire de l'eau du robinet. La marie distribue gratuitement des bouteilles aux 25000 habitants concernés, un pac par foyer.
« On peut avoir l'apéro. Mais surtout c'est un peu difficile avec cette canicule mais bon. »
« Là, on en a, bah, six bouteilles donc ça va. On va s'en sortir. Mais demain on y revoit au centre de grand ville. »
« J'ai regardé, on peut faire bouiller l'eau quand même pour laver les animaux, donc on peut s'en sortir. Ça va le faire, oui. »
La bactérie E.Coli, peut-être mortele, surtout pour les nourissons et les personnes âgées, mais l'agence régionale de santé se veut malgré tout rassurante.
« Les quantités sont faibles, et ne présentent pas en population générale d'autres dangers que à l'arrivée des maux de ventre léger et eventuellement une petite diarrhé. »
Quatre-vignt dix mille bouteilles seront distribuées tout le week-end en attendant de nouvelles analyses dimanche soir.
June 19, 2022
Ansiedad
Mañana es mi primer día de pasantía.
Estoy un poco asustada. Voy a trabajar en una asociación para la lucha por los derechos de los consumidores, lo que parece muy divertido pero en realidad confiere mucha ansiedad. Tendré que contestar al teléfono y ayudar a particulares generalmente enfadados con consejos y cosas de este típo. Pero odio contestar al teléfono en general... cada vez que estoy al teléfono con alguien tengo la impresión que no hablamos la misma lengua. Ya que no puedo ver las caras de las personas con quien hablo es mucho más difícil comprender lo que quieren, y eso me estresa porque siempre estoy intentando responder a las necesitades de los otros. Estoy un « people-pleaser » en inglés, no sé como se dice en español; pero la idea es que me gusta complacer a la gente. Si no puedo me siento inútila.
Bueno, veremos cómo va mañana...
June 19, 2022
Un shower de bébé
La semaine prochaine je vais aller à un shower de bébé. Ma belle-sœur est enceinte et on va célébrer l’arrivé de son petit garçon. C’est le premier fois que je vais aller à un événement comme ça. Dans l’Ouest Canadien les showers de bébés sont seulement pour les femmes. Cependant, ici au Québec c’est beaucoup plus ouverte et les hommes font partis de ces célébrations.
Je ne sais pas à quoi m’attendre. Je pense qu’on va jouer des jeux de sociétés et on va socialiser beaucoup. En plus, on va boire et manger un peu.
Est-ce que vous avez déjà faites partis d’un événement comme ça? Qu’est-ce qui m’attend?