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Dec. 6, 2021
Mein Hund wird alt
Ich habe diese Woche gemerkt, dass mein Hund nicht mehr so energisch ist, wie sie früher war. Früher haben wir Spaziergänge für 40 Minuten gemacht. Momentan, wenn wir rausgehen will sie sofort zurück nach Hause gehen, nachdem sie Pipi macht. Sie will nicht eine Minute mehr laufen, wenn sie fertig ist. Vielleicht es ist auch wegen des Wetters. Es wird kälter und sie mag warm zu bleiben.
Ich habe auch gemerkt, dass, wenn wir die Treppen hochgehen, läuft sie viel langsamer als früher. Manchmal stolpert sie, aber sehr selten.
Sie schläft auch den ganzen Tag. Ich kann es nicht glauben. Wie schafft sie das?
Sie ist aber sehr gesund. Es gibt keine gesundheitlichen Probleme oder so. Ich wollte nur erklären, dass sie anders als früher ist.
Dec. 6, 2021
English! Do you speak it!
During my whole life, I have been travelling around the world and lived in several countries as well. When I began my journey I thought English was spoken in every corner of the world and everyone should speak it, but with the pass of the years, I have changed my mind, in fact, I have learned that one must make an effort and learn at least few words or expressions of the country in which you are living. Very often I have come across a fact really annoying for me; American people want them to be spoken in English only, no matter the country in which they are in.
I have met a lot of people from other nationalities, very often the language we used to communicate was English, but sometimes during a conversation with someone whose English wasn´t the mother tongue we tend to use words in other languages most of the time. Often, the context or a further explanation makes the meaning of that word clearer, we were available to have a mutual understanding. It really does not matter if the word was in German, French, Italian or another language we always try to understands each other However, there is a particular population who apparently does not share this mutual convention, Americans!
It turns out, when an American joined a conversation with people from other countries, they really get offended when someone uses a different language rather than English while speaking! Even if we are in a country, where English is not the official language, it´s very common to hear them utter “In English, say it English” just like if it was an order! I am completely sure that not all Americans are monolinguists, but I am not really sure why they think everyone should speak only English.
Over the course of the years, I have joined conversations where people constantly switch from one language to another without any problem nor any prejudice, but when it comes to Americans the story is totally different. I think that is the reason why Americans are seen as extremely narrowed mind people. Probably my conception is biased but until now, my experiences have proved to me the contrary.
Dec. 6, 2021
なぜ日本語を勉強しています
私の母は日系三世のアメリカ人なので、子供の頃にはいろんなところで日本語を聞きました。日経寺院とか、日系スーパーとか。私の親が英語しかできなくても、言語に興味があったのです。多分、特に日本語だけじゃなくて、大体外国語が面白いなと思っていました。友達の家に遊びに行った時に、友達のお母さんに”英語しかできないの"と言われた時は苦しかったのです。周りの人が秘密能力を持っていたみたいな感じだったのです。
だから、中学の頃ぐらいから日本語を独学で勉強しています。あの時にはあまり進まなかったが、何年か前からもう一度日本語をチャレンジしています。今度こそ上手になりたいです。いつか日本語に上手になったら、他の外国語も覚えたいです。
Dec. 6, 2021
I am hungry
I am hungry. why I still up now?
As is often the case with me that I stays up late for no reason.
Sometimes my sleep time is broken for anxiety and headaches that my chronic disease.
Studying English hard is also go me mad.
As there is no telling whether you could speak English fluently or not, you just must work hard in the case you study a foreign language.
It'll never come a time to me when like somebody come to me and said that finally, your English studying finished.
Pronunciation is a temporary skill.
Somebody who studies Japanese told me that if a brain is interchangeable and that has made like lego-ish, I could give you mine so that we could exchange between mine and your Japanese brain.
Unfortunately, I think, It'll never happen to me and won’t wanna be.
When to think of my native language, re-learning of my native language is so stupid.
Yes, I said "stupid."
Especially Japanese is complicated.
It's difficult to re-learn.
It is too costly for me to lose.
Now I can say that I still love Japanese.
It'll never happen to me when you get up in the morning and forget your native language because you are healthy unless things that can replace your brain with the other's will be invented.
It is the point, you should say thanks to you able to speak your native language.
Good night.
And hope to still be Japanese when I got up.
Dec. 6, 2021
Perduto nella città dove le strada si biforcano
Perduto nella città dove le strada si biforcano
Era una calma e tranquilla notte di settembre quando sono arrivato per prima volta a Venezia. Prima di tutto ho capito che la città era veramente piena da gente da tutto il mondo. Mentre camminava per il ponte principale a Piazzale Roma sentiva parlare diverse lingue, russo, inglese, francese, tedesco e tantissime altre che non riuscivo a capire. Prendeva con me una valigia di colore verde, dove o messo tutti i miei vestiti e i miei libri, per esempio un libro da Pirandello, “l´ Umorismo” basicamente saggi verso questo argomento, cioè il umorismo, altre libro con il titolo “Propaganda; The formation of Mass Attitude” anche uno di Storia di Linguaggio e tantissime altre…in fatti la mia valigia era quasi piena di libri e non tanto di vestiti.
Dopo dare una veloce occhiata al mio telefonino avevo scoperto che il google maps era inservibile a Venezia, o provato di trovare il mio ostello sulla mappa ma, la mia posizione non era precisa anzi errata e imprecisa. Era molto stanco, aveva viaggiato per quasi due giorni senza aver dormito bene. Sentiva come le mie energie lasciavano il mio corpo. Aveva già camminato per quasi 3 ore o non riuscivo a trovare il posto che cercava. Ero convinto di che il ostello era troppo vicino ma la Città è un labirinto, sentivo come si fosse in un giardino di edifici, e monumenti antichissimi che si biforcavano, finalmente ho smesso questa impresa e ho deciso di affittare una camera in altro hotel.
Alla fine, dopo andare tra il buio della città ho trovato un posto per dormire. Era troppo caro comunque, non avevo altre opzioni doveva dormire e ricuperare le mie energie. L’hotel mi sembrava più piccolo rispetto agli altri che ho conosciuto. C’ era una ragazza che mi parlo prima in italiano ma io ero stanco e il mio cervello non poteva pensare in italiano, inoltre non riusciva a trovare le parole giuste per cominciare la conversazione.
Ho deciso di utilizzare l’inglese, ma la ragazza sembrava un po’ contrariata! Mi aveva chiesto di parlare lento, avevo modulato la mia maniera di parlare e la ragazza sembrava conforme.
La camera aveva un letto matrimoniale, di fronte al letto aveva un specchio di forma ovale. Il bagno era al fondo della camera, amplio, pulito, e tutto di colore bianco. Ho fatto una doccia troppo veloce e immediatamente mi ero andato a letto per dormire.
Mi sono svegliato troppo presto, alle 7:30 a.m. Sentiva il rumore della città nella mattina, nuovamente tantissime lingue quasi come nel racconto della torre di babele, ma qui, non si voleva costruire una torre fino al cielo, anzi andare per la strada semplicemente come un turista in tempo di covid.
La città me sembrava più diversa con il sole radiante, ho scoperto che il mio ostello era troppo vicino a me, però non avevo potuto trovarli la notte scorsa per la mia stanchezza o per il buio della notte. Ho preso una strada che si chiama San Antonio e dopo un ponte con lo stesso nome, quindi, sono arrivato finalmente al mio ostello, Santa Fosca, ero molto lieto!
Dec. 6, 2021
Dec. 6, 2021
Etimología de los nombres de países hispanohablantes 4
¤ PANAMÁ = Hay muchas teoría sobre el origen de ese nombre. Provendría o del arból panamá o de una palabra indígena que significaba "(lugar con) muchas mariposas". Alternativamente, se dice que provendría del nombre del primer pueblo en que los europeos desembarcarón, y cuyo nombre significaba "(lugar con) muchos peces". Por fin, algunos relacionan "Panamá" con la palabra "bannaba", que viene de la lengua indígena kuna y significa "lejano".
¤ PARAGUAY = Es seguro que el nombre español proviene del topónimo guarani "Paraguay", pero su sentido sigue siendo objeto de debate: "rio que origina un mar", "rio que pasa por un mar", "rio de los moradores del mar" son algunas de las hipótesis que fueron propuestas.
¤ PERÚ = Según la teoría más probable, el país debe su nombre al rio Virú Se dice también que "Peru" proviene del apellido de un cacique llamado "Biru" que vivía en Panamá, y después, los conquistadores habrían empezado usando el nombre para designar le país actual y el rio. En cualquier caso, la etimología de "Biru" o "Virù" queda oscura. Si se trata realmente de un nombre originario de Perú, es probable que su etimología provenga de lenguas pre-inca.
¤ PUERTO RICO = Hace referencia a las riquezas de la isla, que se llama San Juan Bautista (naturalmente una referencia al personaje biblico). El primer nombre (indígena) de la isla es "borikén", lo que significa 'Tierra de Nuestro Altísimo y Bravo Señor', y de ahí proviene también el gentilicio "boricua" que los habitantes siguen usando hoy.
Dec. 6, 2021
Tell me about yourself
I have been working as a junior developer for almost four year and my duties included to create databases and store procedures.
Currently, my company is collaborating with "company name" and I was selected with others two coworkers for we help them. I usually help them to fix bugs in frontend or backend.
Also, My company have collaborated with others companies where I was selected as well, for example "company name" in "city" and "company name" in "city"
I always been interesting in development software and currently I am doing a online course about flutter and also I am improving my english.
Dec. 6, 2021
Jour 18 : un marché
Le quartier où s'installe mon école est vieux mais riche en histoire, qui s'appelle Sai Ying Pung. Juste devant mon école, c'est un ancien parc avec de briques en pierre et de grands arbes qui s'entendent leur racines dans les briques. En marchant au bureau de poste, on y trouve pas mal de petits cafés. C'est là où j'aime bien passer des heures de pause entre deux cours. « Missing piece », « Détour » et « Shez confection» sont les trois cafés que je passe la plupart de temps. Le premier est très occupé au pause déjeuner et les autres sont plus libres. Mais en tout cas, ils ont de bon ambiance pour se défendre.
Il y a aussi 2 ou 3 magasins qui vendent du verre et des fleurs. Je n'en ai jamais acheté parie qu'ils ne sont pas si bon-marchés que ceux sur le marché de fleurs.
Après 10 mins de route, j'ai arrivé enfin au bureau de poste et j'ai la chance d'acheter quelques timbres de Noël, édition limité. ça a fait une bonne pause déjeuner.
Dec. 6, 2021
Anger
I went to visit Die and Xian yesterday. I had lunch with X, and she told me that next Saturday, I could whatever I wanted to eat to her, then she would cook for me. I was expecting the day. Die asked the progress of the building construction of my neighbor's house. I told her that they had stopped since last time I had visited her. She said that I would be happy because they wouldn't bother me anymore. I nodded. However, it seemed that I was happy too early. They restart construting today. What's worse, they keep working at noon while I need to have a nap. I asked them to delay until half an hour later, but they refused and said that there would definitely be noisy when they were working. I was so angry that they were so selfish. I called the owner immediately and asked him to deal with this. He soon replied that the workers promised they woouldn't work until 1:30. I hated them so much but I couldn't do nothing because the police wouldn't deal with this.
Dec. 6, 2021
Dec. 6, 2021
planear uma viajar
Olá, eu sou a Hancock. Na próxima semana, eu vou viajar. Vou para Nha Trang durante três dias. As minhas família vão viajar comigo. Nós vamos de avião. Esta vai ser a minha primeira viagem de avião. Estou animada. Eu vou levar câmara para tirar muitas fotos. Nha Trang é a praia bonitíssima do Vietname: um mar transparente e com uma temperatura muito agradável e uma praia enorme de areia branca. As pessoas que vivem em Nha Trang são muita simpática e sociável. Nós vamos ficar num hotel com pensão completa. Lá, de manhã nós vamos acordar cedo para passear e ver o nascer do sol. À tarde, vamos à praia, depois vamos visitar as pequenas ilhas. Vai ser interessante!
Dec. 6, 2021
Dec. 6, 2021
C'était vraiment une bonne journée
Aujourd'hui je me suis inscrit au niveau B2 à l'Alliance Francaise. Je suis tres content. Je suis très contente pour ça. Après de nombreuses discussions avec ma famille, j'ai décidé de continuer mon voyage linguistique. J'attends d'apprendre de plus en plus le français...À bientôt!
Dec. 6, 2021
Role-play. Reservation.
I just find out that our reservation is canceled by restriction of the coronavirus at our hotel.
Just so you know, there was not enough time to change our trip schedule.
As a result, we don’t have any reserved hotel during our journey now.
Fortunately, the ABC hotel still has available rooms even thought they are smoking rooms.
If you are ok to stay there, I will make a reservation.
Please let me know your opinion when convenient to yourself.
Dec. 6, 2021
Dec. 6, 2021
no tempo livre
Eu sou a Hana, tenho 20 anos e sou estudante. No tempo livre, eu gosto de ver um filme em casa, ouvir música, ler livros, tocar guitarra, praticar desporto, encontrar-me com os amigos ou conversar com os amigos ao telemóvel e fazer os trabalhos de casa ou projetos para a escola, etc. Eu sempre vejo de filme ao sábado à noite. Eu adoro filmes de ficção científica. De manhã, normalmente leio um livro e ouço música. Ao domingo, eu encontro-me com os amigos e depois vou às compras. À tarde, nós praticam desporto juntas. Os meus amigos gostam de tocar piano mas eu prefiro tocar guitarra. Eu adoro jantar em casa com os meus pais.
Dec. 6, 2021
Dec. 6, 2021
Transport en commun
(En baissant le prix, peut-on encourager les gens d'utiliser plus des transports en commun au lieu de leurs voitures ? Écrivez un essai, expliquez-vous, donnez les consignes)
À mon avis, je ne pense pas qu'en baissant le prix, les gens vont utiliser des transports en commun au lieu de conduire par eux-même. Je vais vous expliquer pourquoi.
Premièrement, ils ont tous fatigué. Même s'il y a les trains ou les bus, ce n'est pas près destinations. Ils doivent marcher pour qu'ils puissent y arriver. Parfois, c'est très ennuyeux si c'est l'été ou l'hiver puisqu'il pourrait faire très chaud ou froid.
Deuxièmement, c'est trop encombré. Notamment si c'est l'heure que les gens vont travaliler ou rentrer chez eux. La majorité des entreprises ont la même heure pour rentrer et travailler. On n'aime jamais d'être entouré par d'autrui !
J'ai une expérience ainsi. J'étais dans un bus, entouré par d'autrui. Les hommes ont beaucoup de l'odeur dégueulasse et leur sueur qui pue. J'ai presque vomi quand j'étais là. C'est absolutement un enfer ! Après, je dois marcher pendant dix minutes pour que je puisse rentrer chez moi. Ainsi, je conduis tous les jours et nuits.
Selon moi, il n'y a pas des consignes que je peux donner puisqu'ils ont leurs droits à choisir entre transports en commun et leurs voitures.
Dec. 6, 2021
Dec. 6, 2021
Jobs and 2nd hand computer
I learning Japanese and I get a certificated.
So, I start looking for jobs with Japanese language skill require.
But around 90% of jobs (Japan Company or Japanese related) are held in local agents.
You can argue that why not direct send your CV to a specific company.
Yes, you can but I believe the success rate will less than 1%.
Recently I want to buy a second hand computer.
So, I check out few popular local web site sells second computers.
But around 90% computers I can find were come from the local 2nd computer shops.
They take over the web site and set their own stand price range for 2nd computers.
Nothing is fair.
Dec. 6, 2021
김영하의 <살인자의 기억법> 독후감
알츠하이머를 앓고 있는 늙은 연쇄살인자의 이야기다. 소설은 그 살인자의 덧없는 생각을 따라가서 읽은 일기 부분들을 완전히 믿지 못하게 된다. 서서히 사라져가는 마음의 혼돈을 통해 이야기를 발견하게 된다.
이 살인자는 진짜 감옥에 있는 게 아니라 마음의 감옥에 있는 것이다. 서술자의 마음은 그에게 망각을 선고했고 현실과 망상 사이에서 항상 흔들리는 생각으로 세상을 붙잡으려고 노력한다. 마음은 혼란스러워지고 기억은 사라질수록 감옥의 벽이 점점 가까워진다. 처음에 서술자의 망상과 생각을 이해할 수 있었지만, 서술자의 입장에서 이야기가 진행될수록 무엇이 진짜고 무엇이 가짜인지 구별하기가 어려워졌다.
읽기가 쉽지만 결말을 알면 소설 존체를 새로운 시각으로 보게 된다. 그 문장들이 누군가가 치매 탓에 마음을 천천히 잃어버린 느낌을 얼마나 잘 전달을 수 있는지 감명받았다. 간결하면서도 영향력이 있다.
인간으로 우리의 한계와 피할 수 없는 끝을 생각하게 한다. 우리 끝이 오면 어떤 부끄러운 기억이 떠오를까? 우리는 어떻게 사라질 것인가? 죽은 후 우리를 기억할 마지막 사람도 죽기까지 얼마나 남인가? 시간을 피할 수 없고 시간이 제한되어 있는 것을 피할 수 없다.
이 소설은 나에게 매우 개인적인 느낌을 가지고 있다. 많은 감정과 기억이 떠올랐다. 나를 잊어버리고 있는 증조할머니를 보는 마음속에 고통. 내 옛전 환자들이 사랑했던 모든 사람들을 서서히 잊는 것을 봤을 때의 슬픔. 한때는 너무나 분명하고 편안했던 환경에서 잃고 혼란스러워하는 사람들을 보는 무력감. 나 자신도 그렇게 사라지는 것에 대한 두려움.
Dec. 6, 2021
Dec. 5, 2021
Je suis heureuse...
et quand je suis heureuse je chante cette chanson : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zcG4rTyhPNI&list=RDMM&index=5
J'ai fait la leçon à mon "trop cher" frère !!!!
Il m'a écrit un e-mail il y a quelque mois pour être grossier avec moi. Tout parce que je l'avais dit de m'aider un peu avec d'argent. Je savais que ce serait impossible, pas pourquoi il est pauvre mais parce que lui non m'envisage comme une persone de la famille. Il ne m'aime pas et d'autre coté, je ne comprends pas pourquoi il est toujours arrogant avec moi.
Il m'a fait du mal dans le passé et maintenant lui dépend de ma bonne volonté... et aura besoin de plus à l'avenir!!!! Il me souhaite du mal gratuitement avec des beaux mots...
Je ne vais pas raconter ce que si est passé mais maintenant je crois que luis est encore plus bleu de colère face à mon succès. J'ai balancé mon sucès a son visage !!! On dit que les envieux sont ceux qui ne veulent pas que l'autre ait quelque chose.
Il peut même me souhaiter du mal mais ce qui me soutient c'est Dieu. Si je dépendais de lui pour quelque chose, je serais mort il y a longtemps...mais le jour de chacun vient, que ce soit pour le meilleur ou pour le pire.
La seule chose que je sais c'est que il habite en Korea maintenant et aujourd'hui, il a passé une heure au téléphone à parler avec sa mère.
Elle a dit à la belle-fille que si ce n'était pas pour moi ici les choses ne fonctionneraient pas parce que je fais tout dans la maison. Mais la belle-soeur s'en fout parce qu'elle ne s'opposera pas à son mari pour me défendre.
Mais il aurait pu se coucher sans lire ce que j'ai écrit ! J'ai humilié un peu et j'ai dit que je n'avais pas besoin de ta permission pour vivre...
Je ne veux pas être meilleur que quiconque, mais je refuse d'être médiocre comme la plupart des gens. Je lui ai frotté sur le visage un échantillon gratuit de ce que je suis capable de faire aujourd'hui...
Je n'ai pas vu et je ne verrai pas quelle a été sa réaction mais il doit sûrement se tordre de haine...
Je tue un lion par jour et vis avec des serpents... Je dois me défendre et survivre. J'ai déjà gagné !
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