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화요일의 문법 2
1. 내일은 놀래요?
아직 몰라요. 바쁠 텐데요.
2. 문을 노크할까요?
아니에요. 그들이 자기를 텐데요.
3. 우영이가 뭘 하나요?
설탕이랑 밀가루를 찾는데 나중에 요리할 모양이에요.
4. 준호가 뭘 전공하나요?
법 책을 가져서 변호사를 전공하는 모양이에요.
5. 영화관에 갈까요?
네 근데 오후 복잡할 테니 일찍 갈래요.
6. 오늘밤에 늦은 회의에 참석해야 돼요.
그래요? 그럼 가기 전에 피곤할 테니 조금 먹어요.
7. 어제 잘 텐데 네가 뭘 해요?
책을 읽을 거야.
8. 피곤해 보일 텐데 앉아요.
고마워요.
9. 지하철을 타요. 많은 막힐 테니까요.
좋은 생각이에요.
10. 강아지를 아주 싫어해요.
왜요?
진짜 시끄러울 테니까요.
Dec. 15, 2021
화요일의 문법 1
1. 공부를 엄청 지루하니까 진짜 싫어해요.
공부를 지루한 반면에 좋은 습관이에요.
2. 네 역사 점수가 아주 높구나!
역사 점수가 높은 데 반해 수학 점수가 진짜 낮아요.
3. 저 식당에서 먹을래요?
음식이 저 식당에 맛있기는 하지만 값이 너무 비싸요.
4. 수지를 왜 싫어하나요?
모두가 수지가 친절한 것 같기는 하지만 진짜 못되어요.
5. 안녕!
조용하세요. 도서관에 있으니까 사람이 공부할지도 몰라요.
6. 왜 슬픈가요?
이전에 남자친구 같이 싸워서 아직 화날지도 몰라요.
7. 다음주에는 아내 같이 휴가를 가요.
아내? 결혼한 줄 몰랐어요. 미혼 있는 줄 알았어요.
8. 지금은 강아지를 산책시켜야 해요. 나중에 말할게요.
강아지를 키우는 줄 몰랐어요. 고양이를 키우는 줄 알았어요.
9. 이 커피숍이 좋아요?
음…작년에 왔는데 음료를 좋았을걸요.
10. 주현이 벌써 떠났어요?
네. 머리를 아프고 있었어요. 누울걸요.
Dec. 15, 2021
せんせい
Lan 先生は高校時代の担任教師の先生です。Lan先生は私わたちの英語の先生です。彼女はアメリカに留学しただけに英語がうまいね。彼女はきれいです。それに彼女は親切です。Lanせんせいは、自分の美しい卵形の顔に非常に誇りを持っていた。彼女は小さな体型と短い髪をしています。Lan先生はいつも厳しいことばかりいっているが、あれでとても優しいときもあるんです。先生せんせいは学生のためを思ってきびしくしつけようとしたのでしょうが、私たちにしたら自分がきらわれていると思いこんでしまったのです。しかし、そんな考えは間違っていたと気づいた。いままで、先生が難しい宿題を出したり、私たちを叱ったりするのは自分の学生がちゃんと勉強して良くなったり、とても難しいことを解決できるようになるためだとわかった。Lan 先生の厳しい批評によって私が進歩しんぽになった。私はときどきLan先生とフェイスブックでメッセージを交かんしました。Lan先生にまた会えるのを楽しみにしています
Dec. 15, 2021
Monday morning sick
That usually happy to a person who is working 9-5.
Even now my working schedule is not like that.
But after 2 rest day and the first day come back to work.
I also have that same sickness feeling.
However, I also come up a good habit which can help reduce that stress.
The night before you go to work again.
I will take 10-15 minutes preparation for tomorrow.
Like double check my bag, tidy up the clothes…
Once when I get up, I don’t need to think too much.
Maybe you also doing the same preparation too.
Dec. 15, 2021
A Reply.
Hello Allan:
Thank you Allan for giving me this reply after our class.
I think I have experienced an amazing class from you. You are very kind and friendly, and you are also very patient. You speak slowly and clearly, so I can understand you very well.
The problems in my English learning at present are the following: tense is the difficult part because often times I don't know what tense I should use. Singular and plural are the other difficult parts because there are still many nouns that I don't know if are countable. The last one is that I still don't know much about the part of speech for many vocabulary words, so I can't make sentences at will.
Anyway, it's really nice to learn from you and I feel I am very honored.
Sincerely
Your student, Jack Liu.
Dec. 15, 2021
Dec. 15, 2021
About Music and School
Music is a compulsory subject in some schools. On the other hand, some schools do not prefer to include music classes in their academic curriculum. In this short essay, I am going to write about some aspects to consider in this matter.
First, there is a common belief about how music or learning to play an instrument could improve many cognitive aspects in individuals. A person with different skills or interdisciplinary qualities could be more competitive and able to think outside -the box and develop their creativity. Just to make an example, Einstein played the violin and claimed that this instrument helped him to think. There are even some academic papers and research that support theories of this kind. Not to mention that an early music discovery could be the trigger that a future musician needs to become a marvelous artist. Popular singers, like Beyonce, started their music career at a very young age.
However, there are some cons to including a compulsory music course. First, some children may not really be interested, to the point of feeling it like a waste of time, in comparison with some other more “important” subjects like mathematics, natural science, or sports. Music as a requirement could be a double-edged sword if they feel it as an academic burden.
In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages to including music compulsory classes. Maybe the wisest decision could be to let students explore music in their study plan. Of course, a successful music program needs good teachers and resources. A bad instructor or do not have enough instruments for all could increase the failure of any initiative.
Dec. 15, 2021
Dec. 15, 2021
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Dec. 14, 2021
My routine
Nothing happened lately, at least nothing that I could write about and people would read without getting bored. I tried to remember what the journals that I correct usually say - games, traumas, dream trips, and so on - and I realized that all I was missing was creativity. Unfortunately, I didn't solve that problem yet, the fact that I am sitting in front of my laptop for 23 minutes and just wrote 4 lines proves that, so I will just copy other people's ideas and tell you about my routine. It isn't very interesting, but it's what we have for today.
I don't have an alarm clock, but I wake up early anyway. The first thing I do is to have breakfast and brush my teeth. Then I make a to-do list and decide where to start, it can vary depending on the day, but there are a few things that I do every day: read, work out, and study french. Since I'm on vacation I don't have to go to school and can focus on studying french, which is my main concern at the moment. I also write and publish these journals three times a week and practice English with other people twice a week. I can't study English every day (because I don't have time), but I try to keep in touch with the language so I won't forget it.
Dec. 14, 2021
La dificultad de escribir
A veces me cuesta encontrar un tema de que pueda escribir. Intento evitar escribiendo de cosas polémicas, como la política y las relaciones internacionales, así como también tragedias como los tornados en el estado de Kentucky que han resultado en la muerte de decenas de personas. Eso suele hacerme escribir de temas como el aprendizaje de idiomas, la lingüística y la ciencia por lo general. No obstante, estos no son temas muy útiles. Dudo que vaya a ir a España, encontrarme con mis amigos y decir "oye, chico, ¿has oído de los idiomas indoeuropeos?"
El problema es que es difícil escribir de lo cotidiano, lo que creo que es muy irónico. Lo cotidiano, aunque hay algunos patrones, consta de cosas aleatorias. A menudo nos hallamos diciendo cosas como "iría a la escuela pero el perro acaba de vomitar por toda la alfombra y mis padres no están", lo que sería muy difícil encajar en un ensayo. Lo cotidiano es aleatoria, lo que lo hace difícil de escribir.
Dec. 14, 2021
Dec. 14, 2021
Les imprévus
Ce qui arrive très souvent en France, c'est que les horaires qui figurent sur le site web diffèrent de celles disent les personnes à l'accueil au téléphone. Google Map n'est pas vraiment digne de confiance non plus : il m'est arrivée mainte de fois que sur Google Map ce magasin devait être ouvert mais non en réalité. En plus, j'ai l'impression que les gerants français changent plus fréquemment que ceux au Japon.
J'aime bien planifier des choses. Cela ne veut pas dire que je suis du genre organisé, je doit avouer être le contraire. Je voulais dire que je suis habituée à vivre la vie comme prévu. À l'opposite, les Français me semblent plus habitués aux imprévus.
C'est comme les climats de chaque pays. Au Japon, le temps est assez stable (même si la situation commence à changer à cause du réchauffement climatique), alors qu'en France on ne peut pas vraiment prévoir le temps qui s'imposera dans 5 minutes. Désormais j'apporte toujours mon parapluie en raison du temps capricieux.
Dec. 14, 2021
zum Thema ”Wie halten Sie sich fit?”
"Täglich sich bewegen, um sich fit zu halten" : Damit bin ich wohl auf dem Laufenden! Aber es ist mir nicht so leicht. Ich arbeite nämlich vor meinem Computer. In der Schule war Sport alles andere als mein Lieblingsfach und heute habe ich noch darauf keine Lust, an einem Leistungssport teilzunehmen.
Im Alltag gehe ich spazieren, denn ich laufe gerne. Manche sagen, dass es kein Spartart ist. Aber ich bin auf der Meinung, dass es nicht für den Körper, sondern auch für die Seele gesund ist. Dann gehört es zum Thema.
Zu Hause kann ich auch Fitness machen, wenn ich darauf Lust habe. Dabei erlege ich trotzdem oft Pausen.
Außerdem tanze ich allein zu Hause gerne. Zwar denken meine Nachbarn, dass ich lächerlich bin. Na, und! Beim Tanzen macht man richtig Spaß. Und da man alle Körperteile bewegt, kann man definitiv diese Aktivität "Sport" nennen.
Dec. 14, 2021
Frankenstein: success or failure?
Frankenstein: success or failure? Viewed from the 21st-century biologist.
Victor Frankenstein, «a man of science», who was he? Infantile dreamer or great scientist? Is there any difference?
In this essay, I don’t want to write about the «God role» or the ethics of the experiments with a human being. The ethic is so changeable and depends on time. Being a bastard was awfully not so long ago. Today, people are frightened by genetically modified organisms. Tomorrow, maybe it will be as normal as having illegitimate children.
Frankenstein, who dreamt about giving life, gets success in it. It was an incredible event, but Victor fined his creature terrifying. So it was both a success and a failure.
What was the success? He creates life in his laboratory.
The failure: he had dreamt about creating a man, but he created a «monster», who could not adapt to the human world, because he was too strong, too ugly and too frightening.
What were the reasons for the failure?
One Finnish scientist told me about the «Russian» style of carrying the experiments. «You (Russian scientists), always start to do smth without careful thought, but always think why it won’t work».
First, he didn’t have a proper experimental design.
He didn’t carry out enough previous experiments. He should first experiment with mousses, then dogs, then chimpanzees.
He worked alone. It would be better for him to discuss his methods and technics with other specialists.
He should do the main procedure by himself, and not delegate them to the apprentice. If Igor hadn’t stolen the abnormal brain of a criminal from the laboratory of a professor, who knows what it would turn out to be?
And if we return to the ethical side, I really think that forbiddance on experiments with embryos older than 2 weeks will not stop scientists who want to work in this area. There is already He Jiankui, who has edited twins genomes. However, if these experiments will be open and there will be a normal law base controlling such experiments, we will be able to avoid the consequences of the creation of Frankenstein.
Dec. 14, 2021
A Deafening Experience
Lately, I don't go to the cinema with so much frecuency like some years ago. Of course, one reason is the current pandemia. But there is another reason also, which is a bit crazy. In general, the level of sound in the movie theater is high, but reasonable yet. Usually when the characters are talking, there is no hassle with the sound volume. The problem come with the music, and particularly with the specials effects. Here the sound can reach a deafening level. With some action movies, people can go out from cinema with whistle in the ears.
Dec. 14, 2021
Dec. 14, 2021
Uncomfortable
After lunch, the dormitory keeper told me that one of my female students had a fever, so she asked for a rest. I remembered that she didn't look well in the morning, but she didn't ask a break when I was in the office. The keeper said that she thought so, but the girl told her that she didn't take her temperature until class was over. Eventually, I told the girl that she didn't need a number to declare she was ill. She could just ask a rest when she felt uncomfortable.
Dec. 14, 2021
Jour 26 : câlins
« Câlins gratuites » est une activité populaire dans les rues avant l'épidemie, qui a but de rendre le monde un peu plus convival. Même si je le passais plusieurs fois, je n'ai jamais l'essayé. C'est étrange d'embrasser un inconnu, non ? Au moins pour les asians, car on est un peu timide. J'embrasse rarement mes amis ou même membres de la famille (sauf que mon petit frère parce qu'il est encore petit).
Donc je me souviens clairement chaque câlins que j'ai faits. Le plus heureux se passait quand j'ai vu un 5** pour la géographie dans mes notes pour l'examen publique du terminal. Combien de temps que j'ai consacré sur cette matière-là ? Et comment j'ai envie d'avoir le meilleur note pour ça ? Je ne pouvais pas m’empêcher d’embrasser ma prof de géographie pour partager tous mes excitations !
En fait, le contact physique direct me fait très bien. Peu à peu, ça devient plus naturel de donner une petite tape sur l'épaule de mes amis quand on ne se voit pas pour longtemps.
Dec. 14, 2021
Dec. 14, 2021
友達が失恋したとき
A: ねえ、Ｄｕｙｅｎさん、もう遅れたね、昼ごはんを食べに行かない？
Ｂ：ううん、遠慮しておく。
Ａ： どうしたの？げんきないね。何かあった。
Ｂ: うん実は昨日ボーイフレンドに振(ふ)られちゃったんだ。どうして彼氏にふられたか、わからなかった。原因を探したあとで、彼が他の人がいることが知っていた。そんな人になるとは思えないなあ。
A: ふうん、そうなんだ。本当に悪い人
B: うん、かっかりしてたまらないな。彼氏にまだ愛しているのに、
Ａ：気持ちがわかるわ。君と同じだよ。それより元彼は私の友人を愛してるよ。でも今あたしはとても幸福しているよ。世界でこの男の人より１０００倍いい男性のほうがいいだよ。心配しないで。
B: そうだね。
A: うん。そんなこと気にすることないよ。もう大丈夫だよ。元気だして！
B: うんそうだね。何かちょっと気持ちがらくになった感し。ありがと
A: えっほんと、よかったあ。じゃ、ああ、おなかがすいた。ねえー、何を食べたい。わたし、おごるよ。
B: ええ、ほんと、じゃ、らめんどう。
Ａ：いいよ。行こう
Dec. 14, 2021
彼に振られた
A: ねえ、Ｄｕｙｅｎさん、もう遅れたね、昼ごはんを食べに行かない？
Ｂ：ううん、遠慮しておく。
Ａ： どうしたの？げんきないね。何かあった。
Ｂ: うん実は最近ボーイフレンドとよくけんかをしていたから、そのうえ、昨日彼が他の人がいることが知っていた。それで彼に振(ふ)られちゃったんだ。彼はそんな人になるとは思えないなあ。
A: ふうん、そうなんだ。本当に悪い人
B: うん、かっかりしてたまらないな。彼氏にまだ愛しているのに、
Ａ：気持ちがわかるわ。君と同じだよ。それより元彼は私の友人を愛してるよ。でも今あたしはとても幸福しているよ。世界でこの男の人より１０００倍いい男性のほうがいいだよ。心配しないで。
B: そうだね。
A: うん。そんなこと気にすることないよ。もう大丈夫だよ。元気だして！
B: うんそうだね。何かちょっと気持ちがらくになった感し。ありがと
A: えっほんと、よかったあ。じゃ、ああ、おなかがすいた。ねえー、何を食べたい。わたし、おごるよ。
B: ええ、ほんと、じゃ、らめんどう。
Ａ：いいよ。行こう
Dec. 14, 2021
I can’t find his book
I am a simple person.
Or, I am an easily fooling person.
Few days ago I read a book which introduce an author and some of his books.
Next book I almost go to book store and buy his book!
Fortunately, at last minute I suddenly remember I can use library.
Borrow books for free!
So, I go to the nearest library and check out the books from this author.
In the computer shows that book is in the library.
But when I go to the bookshelf that not isn’t there.
I ask the staff help me but the book is just not in that library.
I need go to other library!
Dec. 14, 2021
Dec. 14, 2021
December 14, 2021
I watched the Gemini meteor shower last night. However, I watched them on YouTube live broadcast. First, I watched them at the Tokyo University Observatory in Nagano. I was able to see one shooting star in a few minutes. Next, I watched them at Mauna Kea Observatory in Hawaii. I was able to a lot of shooting stars.
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