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Jour 32 : l'eau Cologne
Je suis passée devant cet atelier de Cologne pour plusieurs fois. J'étais séduisée parce que la décoration est plutôt belle mais je n'avais pas d'envie d'en acheter un parce que ça me semblait très coûteux. Comme c'est Noël et Nouvel An, la désire d'en avoir un petit flacon s'agrandit en moi, et donc aujourd'hui, en passant devant sa porte, j'ai met les pieds et fait une visite pour jeter un œil ou même acheter un. Le vendeur m'a recommandé quelques parfums et parmi eux, j'aime l'orange sanguine. En plus, les emballages pour l'édition limitée de Noël sont magnifiques. Cependant, je n'ai pas encore pensé ce que je voulais faire engraver sur ça. De plus, ça coûte plus haut que j'avais imaginé. Je me suis donc sortie la main vide du magasin. Mais bon, peut-être la prochaine fois que je passerai devant ce magasin, je ferrais un achat.
Dec. 20, 2021
Cold
It was cloudy and cold yesterday. My neighbor was very noisy because of the building constructing. I wanted to find somewhere to stay for afternoon. I didn't want to ribe a bike to De, who I visited a lot, because it was a little far away. I called a friend nearby, but she wasn't at home. Finally, I went to the teaching building, and had a seat at the reading corner since I didn't want to ask the securer to open the office's door. I calmly did two sets of listening exercise.
It's colder today, and drizzled. After class, I went to the meeting room. Nobody was there. I did a set of listening and checked the answer, relistened. The room was colder than the classroom, and I also was hungry, though. To my surprise, I was still calm. Maybe I know that if I want to catch my goal, I really need to work harder. I need to get a good score in IELTS, only then can I apply the school I want to study in.
I like cold weather because I think it makes me calm. I dislike hot weather because it drive me irritable.
Preparing for IELTS is quite hard for me, and I know that applying schools won't be easy either. No pay no gain. I need to stay calm and try my best, just step by step.
Dec. 20, 2021
Dec. 20, 2021
Dec. 20, 2021
Calling With My Brother
I don't have friends to call regularly.
Instead, I try to talk with my brother on the phone quite often.
Because he lives too far from my home, so we are not able to meet twice a year.
On the phone, we usually talk about many topics like his new girlfriend, each city's weather and funny YouTubes.
The phone call makes me feel happy and comfortable.
Dec. 20, 2021
Dec. 20, 2021
A Reply
Yes. I think you have completely understood what 面子 means. At first, I was really afraid that I couldn't make myself clear or you would have difficulties understanding what I said. I didn't expect that you would be such a quick learner.
To strengthen that concept, I'd like to give you a few more sample sentences.
I thought he should have treated me enthusiastically, but he didn't. This made me feel that I really lost 面子.
To save my 面子, I prepared so hard for this competition because I wanted to be a winner and didn't want to lose my 面子.
Dec. 20, 2021
Fifth journal
As I’m keeping a diary recently, a strong desire caught me to look all over my old diaries I’d written when a teen. So I took them from the memory box located in the corner of the closet. A teen, I was so sentimental, crazy, and evil...LOL. I felt so cringe and even a shame reading the poems in the diary I’d written. However, all the memories I wrote were precious. This moment I’m recording will be the same precious memory later.
Dec. 19, 2021
A Reply
This is an interesting question and many Chinese people want to know how to say 面子in English. To answer this question, I have checked many resources on the Internet, but all I got is only confusion because everybody has different opinions, and some of them are even the opposite. Now I want to express this issue in my own way based on what I have learned. If you translate 面子 directly into English, it is just "face", it's so simple. Let me set several scenes to show you what 面子means. One day, you go to a dancing party, your skirt suddenly falls down while you are dancing, so you can consider that you are really losing your 面子. Another example is that one day you are playing cards with your bestie. All of a sudden, your husband comes yelling at you and taking you away very rudely in front of your bestie because he hates you playing cards, so you can also consider that you are losing your 面子. On the contrary, if you and I are just very ordinary friends, we talk little and do not get in touch so often. Anyway, just a nodding acquaintance, but one day, you need to go to China to ask me to do you a small favor. What do you imagine how I would treat you? Of course, I most likely won't treat you so enthusiastically, and probably just give you the minimum respect because we are just nodding acquaintances. But the fact is that when I meet you in China, I treat you to big meals every day, offering you a seven-star hotel and accompanying you all the time. Besides, I pay all the bills for you, so you will consider that you really have 面子. So I think now you will know what 面子 means in English, although I still don't know the exact English words or phrases that refer to 面子. I hope this helps.
Dec. 19, 2021
Dec. 19, 2021
Dec. 19, 2021
Ein schönes Zitat (Übersetzung)
"Dein Leben gehört zu dir. Ich möchte dass du diese Satz liest bis das völlig zu deiner Bauch gesunken ist und alle und jede Zulufte die sagt dass du deine Intuitione pausieren solltest. Dass du dich selbst zweitens liegen solltest, dich presst und beugt und zerbreche frei von was die andere denken du sein solltest. Dein Leben gehört zu dir. Ich möchte das es durch dein Kopf so viel Mal durchgeht bis das langsam der Schutt des Angsts aufräumt. Ich will dass du mit diesem Wissen maditierst bis es dir ausfällt das du nicht zu seltsam bist, du hast nur Mut dein wahre Ich zu sein. Du bist nicht zu anders, du hast nur Mut dein eigenes Herz zu folgen. Du bist nicht unwürdig, du bist nur ehrlich über die sehr natürliche menschliche Erfahrung die Unwürdigkeit zu fühlen. Jede Mensch der lebt wünscht diese gleiche Arte des Freiheitens zu verkörpern. Sie verurteilen dich nicht, sondern ausdrücken seine eigene Teile die sie ins Schweigen zu verurteilen haben. Dein Leben gehört zu dir und wird das immer sein. Du muss der Mut finden um das zu fordern, oder das wird dich unberührt passieren - das schimmernd Potenzial von alle die hätte geschehen können." ~ Brianna Wiest
(Das Original auf Englisch in Notizen.)
Dec. 19, 2021
고쳐주시면 감사하겠습니다♡
노인들이 일상적으로 겪는 첫째 어려움은 쩖은이들끼리 유행되는 속어나 줄임말을 이해하지 못하는 것이다. 시간이 지나가면서 지목받는 일이 다양해진다. 그와 어울리는 새로운 말과 표현이 함께 생긴다. 어른들이 유행되어 자주 듣게 되는, 새삼스러운 말을 배우고자 힘이 부족한 상태이니 문제가 될 수밖에 없다.이 때문에 손자 있는 노인들은 애들과 소통이 어려워질 수도 있다. 각자 말하는 언어가 상당히 다르기 때문이다. 둘째 어려움은 시골마저 도시화되므로 어른들이 평화로운 곳에서 지내지 못하는 것이다. 어른 나이에 고요함을 찾는 사람들이 시끄러운 것에 익숙해야만 한다. 그렇다고 남은 인생을 불편하게 살아가는 것말고 노인에게 다른 방법이 없다. 이는 쩖은 사람들 대상으로 기술과 시설이 발전하고 만들어지기 때문이다.두 문제 해소 대책으로, 줄임말을 노인과 대화할 때 주의해서 최대한 쓰지 않는 것은 하나이다.또, 만약에 깜빡하고 썼다면 말하는 어른에게 설명해줘야 한다. 그래야 상대가 잘 이해하고 의사소통이 잘 될 것이다.노인들을 생각하여 한적하고 조용한 그들만이 평안하게 지낼 수 있는 공간을 만들면 큰 효과가 있을 것이다. 요약해 말하면, 나이가 든 사람을 배려하여 생각하면 그들도 힘들게 살 일이 없는다
Dec. 19, 2021
My blog
Year 6 finished on the 18 of June. It was summer, the weather was hot and sunny. The year 6 school year started on the 7. of September but this school year(7) started on the 6. It doesn't always start and finish on the same date but it's always the same month. The most interesting thing about year 6 was that our class split, so now there is grade 6. a and 6. b I had 14 different subjets but the subjects that I had the most were math and Croatian at four hours a week. I usually had 6 lessons from 8 am to 1 pm. My favorite subject out of the 14 was IT because I love computers. The most important thing was that we had online school because of the coronavirus. All in all year 6 wasn't that bad but it could have been better. On the summer break, I went to the seaside with my family. There we went to the beach and Istralandia. For me, the summer break was good because a got a chance to relax.
Dec. 19, 2021
Une nouvelle bibliothèque
Je suis directeur d'une bibliothèque publique dans une zone rurale de Caroline du Nor. Je suis en train d'intenter de convaincre le gouvernement local (dont la bibliothèque est une département) de construire une nouvelle bibliothèque. J'ai dit que c'est dans une zone rurale, mais plus précisément la majorité du comté est rural, mais il y a une section plus densément peuplée le long de la côte. Il y a déjà une bibliothèque dans cette région, mais c'était construit il y a 23 ans et la population a explosé pendant ces années, donc on en a besoin d'une plus grande.
Beaucoup de gens pensent maintenant, et encore plus gens pensaient au passé, que les livres numériques allaient remplacer les livres brochés, mais aux États-Unis les vents des livres numérique sont demeurés au niveau de vingt pour cent du marché de livres pendant plusieurs années et l'usage des livres numériques dans notre bibliothèque c'est similaire. Donc, on a toujours besoin d'espace pour les livres brochés.
Dec. 19, 2021
Social factors of honesty or dishonesty
I don't think it is related to inherency but it is a matter of social circumstances of the society in which people are born to. Starting from the childhood, the social environment we live in can shape our core values, beliefs and subsequently, our behaviour. If a society's core values, where themes and effectiveness of the education about moral concepts are usually unadequate, are mostly based on social prejudice and hierarchy. When coupled by public trust issues, it is inevitable that most of the people feel insecure about their life circumstances, and thus, this may lead to trust issues between individuals of the society as well. Justice is also a crucial point in sustaining public trust among individuals. Personal dishonest or honesty is depend on whether public trust is ensured by the government that built up a strong judicial sytem or not. If most of the people feel insecure in a society due to economic, social, moral and ethnic factors, and usually don't trust the objectivity of judicial system, then it is reasonable that why people are often dishonest. In the opposite version, this time, the degree of honesty on a personal scale may be observed.
Dec. 19, 2021
Dec. 19, 2021
Black Panther
My superhero name is Black Panter. He's 32 year old, he have black costume,black hair and blue eyes. He was born in Afrika. His weapons are claws, smoke bombs and he is also super strong, he can transform into black panter and he's super fast.
The main enemy of Black Panter is Thanos. Black Panter is protecting stones of infinity gauntlet from Thanos. With that gauntlet and all stones, Thanos can destroy all world just by snapping with his fingers. Baron Zemo, Erik Kilmoger, Achebe and Ulysses Klaue are aslo his enemys. His alter ego is that he live in Manhattan in New York City, with his family into his house.
His friends are Avengers, Black panters,Leopards and many other animals. He is born to protect world from dangerous creaturos, Thanos and other enemys. He's proverb is „Wakanda forever“!
Dec. 19, 2021
Dec. 19, 2021
Jour 31 : Le jour de l'élection
Aujourd'hui, c'est le jour de voter pour les représentants dans le conseil de legislation. Le gouvernment dit que c'est la première selection après avoir « parfaitionné » ce système donc il nous encourager à voter. Pour ça, presque tous les transports public sont gratuits aujourd'hui. Mais il est drôle parce qu'on vote dans un centre près de chez lui , on peut donc se déplacer à pied, pas besoin de prendre une voiture. Mais quel veut-on dire « parfaitionné » ? Ça-veut-dire que les candidats doient « aimer le pays (Chinois) et Hong Kong » et donc beaucoup de candidats d'une partie démocratie ont été déqualifiés. Par conséquent, les citoyens ne sont pas si enthousiaste d'aller voter parce que quel que soit les gagnants, ils viennent d'une même partie - celle qui soutient 100% le gouvernement. Et avec le gratuitement de transports public , tous sortent aux plages, aux parcs d'attraction...... pour s'amuser, plutôt que d'aller voter. Il y a du monde partout. J'ai expérimenté cette foule et l'ai fait partie. La conclusion, c'est qu'il faut mieux de rester chez lui dans ce jour là.
Dec. 19, 2021
Speaking Books Aloud
I have just completed to read books which are Mr. Men and Little Miss series.
Every morning, I have spoken books aloud for improving my speaking skill.
And I did a book a week.
For 89 weeks, I have spoken books aloud and they make me speak more fluently than the first time.
The books were very interesting for me to read and remember vocabularies.
I will keep going to speak the books aloud.
Dec. 19, 2021
来年JLPTN3を受けるつもりです！
こんにちは！
来年JLPTN3の試験を受けるつもりです！いい成績を通るために毎日日本語を勉強するつもりです！今私の弱点は語彙と文法です。でも、よく日本語のテクストを読んだり、日本語の文書を書いたり、間もなく上手になるでしょう。頑張ります！
今日も練習問題があります！
かの助詞
１．今日は絵を描いたりか本をよんだりを決まらない。
２．京都に行く時、京都動物園か伏見稲荷大社を訪問しますか？
３．月曜日か金曜日か両親に見に行きます。
４. デートに行くか行かないかを決めてください。
５．トムは兄か姉がいますか？
６．明日は犬か子犬を買います！
質問・ 「お茶かコーヒーか、どっちが飲みたい？」 と 「お茶とコーヒーのどっちが飲みたい？」の両方を言うことができますか？ これらの2つの文書は同じ意味を持っていますか？
Dec. 19, 2021
やった、僕の人生を直した
先週、自分の人生を管理してみたいと思って、少しずつ計画を立ててきた。今日はとうとうやってしまった。
Google Calendar を利用して、大事な予定を忘れないようにメモを作る習慣を練習している。しかも、運動時間、掃除時間も加えてみた。その通りできるかは、頑張ってから答えられる。
今日は部屋を大掃除してしまった。前は、ものが床に置いてあり、服は乾いたまま、畳もうとせずに、荷物に入れた。今は、部屋らしい部屋になってうれしい。
ミールプランナーも作ってみた。これは、冷蔵庫に何か残っているもの、いつまで食べられるか、などの詳細が書いてあるものだ。こうして、食べ物の費用を節約できるし、食べすぎを防げるようになる。
さらに、勉強のことにも計画を立てた。暗記カードを作ったり、ノートを管理したりした。今から頑張ってみようと思っている。
Dec. 19, 2021
Liseuse
Cette année, j'ai bossé dur pour des projets professionnels, mais aussi pour des projets personnels.
C'est pourquoi, en Octobre, j'ai eu besoin d'une récompense et j'ai décidé de m'offrir une liseuse électronique.
Enfait, j'avais déjà une liseuse mais elle a dix ans maintenant et elle m'a accompagné sur plusieurs voyages sans casser ou autrement dérailler. Mais l'écran est petit, les fonctionnalités sont limitées et elle s'essouffle quand je la demande d'ouvrir un PDF d'une taille moyenne.
Avec le nouvel appareil, tout est mieux. Il est même possible de lire des articles scientifiques d'une façon très comfortable. Seule la fonction de lire d´haute voix laisse à désirer pour des textes en allemand ou anglais, pour le français ou le portugais, je la trouve intolérable.
Depuis Octobre, les heures que je passe en ligne se sont largement réduites, ce qui est une bonne chose car aujourd'hui les conneries et la merde jaillissent de toutes les fentes de l'internet. Je préfère donc de sauvegarder des lectures intéressantes et distinguées pour lire en paix.
Dec. 19, 2021
Como transformar ansiedade em uma emoção boa
Segunda a esses exercícios da BBC:
1. Lembra que a ansiedade pode ter qualidades boas. Por exemplo, ela pode ser um lembrete de suas circunstâncias que pode ajudá-la a mudar o seu ambiente.
2. Tentar algo novo, como uma aula ou esporte, para se habituar a sair da sua zona de conforto.
3. Todos os dias, pensa sobre uma incertezas atual com sua vida. Imagina o melhor resultado que você pode ter, para praticar a sensação dos resultados positivos.
4. Falar com outras pessoas e pedir ajuda. Não fica sozinho!
5. Escreve mensagens otimistas no início ou no final de cada dia.
6. Respire em um parque ou qualquer lugar tranquilo e preste atenção na natureza para recuperar sua saúde mental e aumentar sua resiliência.
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