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Dec. 21, 2021
I can have my home back!
Finally, everyone in my house is gone just me left.
I can do whatever I want.
My house isn’t small but when everybody is here.
All I can do is stay inside my room.
Now I can do whatever I want.
I don’t need to go to library, gym…
I can do all that in this house and no one will in my way.
That is the best charismas present I get!
Dec. 21, 2021
A new life
Hi, my name is Aura (Not Laura, Aura, without "L").
To be fast describing myself I can say that I´m brunette, 1,60 meter tall and skinny.
I was born and raise up in two different countrys on latin america, because that it is dificult to say that I am from an only country.
A few years ago I take the decision to quit my job and change my profession, and now I work in a really confortable place.
Dec. 21, 2021
¿La gente es honesta o deshonesta?
Considero que las calidades humanes son como espectros de colores, con el blanco en una extremidad, en negro en la otra, y sombras de gris entre ambos. Pues, pienso que hay una minoridad de la gente que es por naturaleza honesta, una otra minoridad enteramente deshonesta, pero la mayoría es más o menos deshonesta según las circunstancias.
Sin embargo, a mi modo de ver, la humanidad de manera general tende a ser deshonesta. A los humanos la verdad les chupa un huevo. Quieren más bien sus proprios egos y sus proprias creencias (que sean buenas o malas). A veces, mienten para evitar que asuman sus responsabilidades, o mienten para jactarse. "Embellecen" la realidad, proclamando que tienen dinero, un alto estatus social o tales cosas, porque por desgracia, son los valores mediocres por los cuales la gente se define ahora.
No debemos olvidar que hay situaciones en que la honestidad no sirve a ninguno. Un caso típico: si su mejor amigo le presenta su nuevo corte de pelo pidiendo su opinión, y que piensa que es feo, decirlo no va a hacer nada sino herrir al amigo inútilmente. Deberíamos poder ser honestos con nuestros amigos, es verdad, pero todo el mundo no puedo soportar la honestidad brutal todo el tiempo. Por tanto, en algunos casos, es necesario hallar un equilibrio.
Dec. 21, 2021
Writing Practice
My ideal life is to be born in a mediated wealthy family and my parents treat each other nicely. During my childhood, I had enough time to play with my fellow children and without a lot of worries. When I was in elementary school and high school, I studied hard and could get a good grade so that I could be admitted to a famous university. While I am growing up, my parents can give me a good education. I can get a decent job and a nice salary and the work is not so busy and does not involve lots of pressure and stress. I can afford a decent car and a house. Also, I can marry a nice woman and not scold me all the time. I also want to have certain savings to deal with some unexpected issues. If possible, I want to retire at the age of fifty and have enough money for me to travel by then. I also want to have a long life span and stay healthy because I hate illness. Of course, I will die, but die from age, not from disease. I think my request is not high, and I hope all my ideal life can come true.
Dec. 21, 2021
Dec. 21, 2021
Dream trips
Many people learn languages to travel. Unfortunately, that’s not my case. I’m not even responsible for my own money and international trips are really expensive in my country. But I do dream about traveling around the world. It’s easy for a country to attract me. It just needs to have a beautiful language, be a good place to live or have famous people that I like. That makes the list really large, so I’ve narrowed it down to 3 countries.
Because I’m also learning French, the idea of visiting a French-speaking country came to my mind. First I thought about France because, you know, it’s the obvious answer. Then I also thought of visiting Belgium because I have relatives that live there. But Canada is my first option, especially because English and French are spoken there, and I’d have the chance to practice both. I think the most popular cities to travel there to are Toronto, Vancouver, and Montreal, but I don’t know which one I’d visit since I didn’t spend more than a few minutes searching about exchange programs in Canada before I checked the prices of the flight tickets and gave up.
Dec. 21, 2021
Résolution du nouvel an
Je jamais compris parce que gens ont résolution du nouvel an. Je donne c'est pour personne qui veut fixer un objectif. Mais, majorité de personnes échouer leur résolution du nouvel an. Certains d'entre eux connaissent qu'ils se font de vaines promesses. Mais le proche anée ils vont fera une autre résolution du nouvel an.
Dec. 21, 2021
Résolution du nouvel an
Je jamais compris parce que gens ont résolution du nouvel an. Je donne c'est pour personne qui veut fixer un objectif. Mais, majorité de personnes échouer leur résolution du nouvel an. Certains d'entre eux connaissent qu'ils se font de vaines promesses. Mais le proche anée ils vont fera une autre résolution du nouvel an.
Dec. 21, 2021
Dec. 21, 2021
The Evil Seed
There is a science fiction movie named "Voyagers" that talks about this topic. Well, not, but it is look like. The topic that talk is about wickedess. Is does the evil inherent to human being or the man is good for nature? Is a good question. Usually the truth is not white or black, is in a grey tone.
The genetic could bring the evil seed? Could be, but in my opinion, a traumatic and hard life could also affect, to worse, in the normal behavior of a human being.
Dec. 21, 2021
Dec. 21, 2021
Мир в 2030
Я недавно написал этот текст отвечая на следующую тему: "По вашему мнению, кяк будет выглядеть мир в 2030?". Я думал, что его опубликовать тоже в ЛангКоррект - хорошая идея.
Я считаю, что мир в 2030 не будет красивым. Мы вероятно будем заниматься с экологическими и экономическими кризисами, которые будут связанными с прогрессивным истощением серья, например, ископаемое топливо.
Природные катастрофы будут вероятно ещё более обычними, чем сегодня. Международные напряжении будут увеличивать, особенно между западными странами и трио Россия-Китай-Иран. Мы уже привикаты, обращать друг другу как врагам, и к сожеленью, я не думаю, что ситуация будет улучшаться... Экономические и политические кризисы всегда водят к авторытарным правлениям, так, есть шанс, что называемые "демократические" страны (демократическую натуру которых уже можно обсудить) больше не будут ни соблюдать мнение народа ни общественные свободы.
Я знаю, что у меня пессимический взгляд, но никакой знак не показывает прекрасное будущее!
Dec. 21, 2021
Jour 33 : Harry Potter 2
Je viens de terminer « Harry Potter et la chambre de secret » et il y a une phase qui me touche profondement : « ce qui te rend très différent de Tom Jedusor. Ce sont nos choix, Harry, qui montrent ce que nous sommes vraiment beaucoup plus que nos aptitudes. »
En cherchant l'héritier Serpetard qui était seul de pouvoir d’ouvrir la chambre de secret, où on trouvait un monstre pour tuer tous Moldus-sorciers, Harry était tracassé par le fait qu'il lui-même ait beaucoup de choses pareilles avec Voldemort ou avec Serpetard. Il avait peur de deviner un sorcier du magic noir. Mais en fait tous les facultés pareils de celles de Voldemort venaient de Voldemort en essayant de tuer Hany quand il écrit encore un bébé. D’ailleurs, avec la bonne volontée de Hany, je suis sûre qu'il peut deviner un bon sorcier dans l'avenir, avec le courage, l’intelligence et la gentilité. JK Rowling a fait une bonne comparison entre Dumbodore et Voldemort : les deux avaient de grand pouvoir mais le dernière a consacré son don à de mauvais choses et au final, il ne s'est profité que d'une court période de pouvoir.
Dec. 21, 2021
Mood
I started to play jazz drums 2 years ago. Recently, I practice the song 'Numb' a lot. Its bpm is 110, which is quite fast. Its rythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play. I practice it a lot, so that I can play it without music score. What I want to reach is that I can play it by my heart, in other words, I can really enjoy it, become a part of it. By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieve at the beginning. For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song. After playing it half an hour later, I will feel irritable. Maybe because it is too noisy for continuing listening for thirty minutes. Then I will change a lively song like 'Yellow' to makes me feel good again.
It seems that I play drums isn't because of love of music, but the need of mood ventilation.
Dec. 21, 2021
Mood
I started to play jazz drums 2 years ago. Recently, I practice the song 'Numb' a lot. Its bpm is 110, which is quite fast. Its rythm isn't complicated, so it isn't hard to play. I practice it a lot, so that I can play it without music score. What I want to reach is that I can play it by my heart, in other words, I can really enjoy it, become a part of it. By now, when I play the song, I always feel relieve at the beginning. For the reason, when I feel bad, I always practice the song. After playing it half an hour later, I will feel irritable. Maybe because it is too noisy for continuing listening for thirty minutes. Then I will change a lively song like 'Yellow' to makes me feel good again.
It seems that I play drums isn't because of love of music, but the need of mood ventilation.
Dec. 21, 2021
Meine komplizierte Beziehung mit Informationen
Einst, nicht so lange vorher, hat einer meiner Mitschüler mir eine witzige Geschichte über seinen Informatik-Lehrer erzählt. Ob es wirklich wahr war, ist der Sache nicht so wichtig.
Der Lehrer hatte jeden in der ersten Klasse nachgefragt, warum er Informatik als einen Schulfach ausgewählt hatte. Es gab viel verschiedene Antworte, aber jedesmal reagierte der Lehrer so:
"Mein Sohn! Was für ein Job ist das in dieser modernen Welt? Weißt du nicht das es jetzt auch Cyber+[Job-Name] gibt!?" (z.B, "cybercrime", "cyberpolitician", "cryptocurrency", "online banking", usw, usw...)
Na ja, vielleicht hatte der Lehrer ein bisschen Recht. Viele der Kinder hatten nur in Sinn, eine "angesehene" Stelle zu bekommen, viel Geld zu verdienen, die Eltern zu befriedigen, usw. Jetzt ist die virtuelle Welt fast genauso eine Welt wie die konkrete, und es braucht auch ihre eigenen Ingenieur, Regisseur, Banker, usw.
Aber wir kommen vom Weg ab. Ich wollte nur zeigen, wie die heutigen Leute immer die Internet als ein Plus bezeichnen. Und natürlich, stimmt das meistens. Ich benutze die Internet selbst, jedes Mal dass ich nach einem Wort oder einem Begriff suche, oder ein Buch finde und lese, oder Vorlesungen zuhöre, oder einen Wikipedia-artikel durchlese, oder... Vielleicht habt Ihr den Problem schon erkannt?
Informationen. Wir vertiefen uns dahin jeden Tag in der jeweiligen Welt. Schau mal, was für Informationen, die man heutzutage mit ein paar Klicks kriegen kann, so schwer zu finden waren nur ein paar Jahrzehnten vor. Vielleicht sind Videos ein unfaires Beispiel, also sehen wir Texte an. Wenn man nicht in der Nähe von einer großen Bibliothek oder Universität lebte, konnte man keine unhäufigen Bücher leicht kriegen.
Solcher Lebenstil war unerfassbar nur ein paar Jahrzehnten vor. Viele Leute besprechen die Möglichkeit einer "Singularität" - das heißt, eine Punkt, nachdem die Technologie so schnell entwickeln will, oder genauer gesagt, die Entwicklung von sich *selbst* beschleunigen wird.
Lass mich mal das erklären: Wann wir eine Technologie entwickeln, die unsere Leben erleichtert oder damit wir über das Universum mehr entdecken können, läuft das Tempo dieser Entwicklung immerhin zügiger und zügiger. Deshalb, das Bereich der Technologie, wenn wir dass als ein ganzes System betrachten, erweitert sich exponentiell.
Und hier liegt das, wovor ich mich fürchte. Ich kann mich daran nicht ganz recht erinnern, aber einst laß ich einen Text, in dem der Verfasser etwas beschrieb das er selbst als "Information-sucht" (information addiction) genannt hatte. Jener Begriff fasst meinen Zustand perfekt.
Es gibt immer so viel Informationen, und ich muss immer mich sozusagen in einem Käfig halten, um "Informationsüberfluss" ("information overload") zu vermeiden. Ich weiß dass ich nicht bei diesem Problem allein bin, aber vielleicht gibt es auch eine persönliche Element dazu. Ich habe solche Probleme, bei was auch immer ich probiere. Ich lese viel, aber es braucht viel Disziplin, weil mein Gehirn immer denkt an anderen Bücher und Texten, die ich früher in dem Tag oder der Woche entdeckt habe. (Wir man sagt auf Englisch, "the grass is always greener on the other side", oder "Nachbars Kirschen sind süßer")
(Sidenote: Auf Urdu gibt es einen schönen Spruch, دور کے ڈھول سُہانے, "duur ke dHol suhne", das bedeutet etwa "Die entfernten Trommel klingen immer schön" XD)
Manchmal fühle ich mich sogar froh, wann ich mit Leuten umgehen muss, weil es entfernt mich von meinen Informationenquellen, lol. Es läuft auch so mit den Sprachen. Ich will an nur ein paar meine Bemühungen konzentrieren, aber meine Neugierigkeit auf den neuen, unvorstellbaren der vielen Sprachen der Welt erfüllen.
Ich erinnere mich gerade an meine frühere Kindheit; ich würde immer ein paar Bücher IN DEN HÄNDEN mitnehmen. Ich bekam ein Gefühl, vergleichbar mit dem Angst, wenn ich nicht etwas zu lesen nicht hatte.
Aber jetzt, sehr glückerlicherweise, habe ich die meiste von diesen Gewohnheiten gebrochen, und planne ich die meisten meiner Tage besser als zuvor. Ich habe endlich erkannt dass um meine Ziele zu erreichen, müsse ich mich ein bisschen kontrollieren. Und ernst gesagt- diese Grenzen befriedigen mich mehr. Ich hoffe, eine goldene Zukunft mit den Informationen zu verbringen.
*phew*, vielen Dank wie immer, falls jemand bis zum Ende gelesen hat. Das war auch schwer für mir zu schreiben, auch die Meinungen zu äußern, und die Wortauswahl zu verbessern. Ich musste das Thesaurus ein bisschen benutzen, hehe.
Auf jedem Fall, bis zum nächsten mal! :D
[oooh, gereimt :> ]
Dec. 21, 2021
Before Burnout
It was quite hard at work.
I had a lot of things for negotiating teams, and I had to solve many issues.
Because my health became bad, I feel more tired.
In this case, I have got to sleep well for more healthier.
If not, I will be burnout, and everything will be annoying.
I don't want to do that.
Dec. 21, 2021
Writing Practice
I don't think I have closest friends. It's not because there is something wrong with me. It's because I don't think having closest friends is worth proud of, that just shows people's weaknesses because they are not strong enough, but one of my classmates, although who can't be as closest to me, I really want to talk about him because I think he is very strange. I met him when we started our junior high school and we were from different villages. He has a strange temper, but I don't know how to express it to you. In short, he is a bit out of touch with the world and doesn't seem to know anything about the world. But he can get a good grade in exams if he studies hard. In other words, if he doesn't study hard, he can fall to the bottom. Later, he was admitted to an accounting major in a school. After three years of studying, he was assigned to work in a state-owned food factory. A few years later, that food factory closed down. To survive, he passed the CPA qualification. Afterwards, he went to work in a few accounting firms. It was about the age of forty. He started his own accounting firm and became a boss himself. Now he is way more wealthy than before. Although we rarely communicate with each other, we remember each other very well. I value him very much, and I am very impressed with him.
Dec. 21, 2021
Dec. 21, 2021
Writing Practice
First, this question itself has something wrong. You can't say people are honest or dishonest, and can't say they are inherently. Every person can be honest or dishonest, and it completely depends what outcome they will face if they are being honest. If people face unfavorable situations when they are being honest, then they will choose to be dishonest. When they won't face unfavorable situations if they are being honest, I believe they will choose to be honest. Being dishonest, in my opinion, is just a kind of self protection, so if being honest would never cause any unfavorable situations, why do people need to be dishonest? That everyone wants to be a good person is always my belief. If people understand this, the so-called "are inherently" is not worth debating.
Dec. 21, 2021
Dec. 21, 2021
サルマン部長へのお礼の手紙
拝啓
この頃、雪が降る日が続いており、やはり冬らしいです。トロントの天気はずいぶん厳しいけど、イランはいかがですか。オムニコロン株のせいで、旅行があまりできないようですね。それでも、ご家族と時間をお過ごしになれるといいですね。
さて、去年のインターンシップでは本当にお世話になりました。その一年に授業で学べない能力を受け、とてもいい経験になりました。例えば、サルモンさんのおかげで、CNCやCADなどの技術が習えました。それに、年齢や意見が異なり、いろいろな社員たちと協力ができました。初めはお金を稼ぐことにしか構わなかったが、働けば働くほどみんなと頑張れることに感謝しました。X社でみにつけた能力は将来の技術者の面接を受ける時に誠に役に立つでしょう。
では、世界の状態は大変になってきましたが、どうぞお体にお気を付けください。ご家族に「メリークリスマス」をお伝えください。カナダにいらっしゃる時期が来たら、是非またお会いしましょう。
敬具
monkeysquirel10
サルマン部長(X社)
Dec. 21, 2021
Translation (Webtoon)
*These are some lines from the webtoon that I had to translate from Korean to English :) I'd appreciate some suggestions! Thanks.
Some sentences in parentheses are narratives :).
<Webtoon 1 (R+18)>
A: Mm, what is this…I smell something nice. What is it? Ah, I’m getting dizzy. Hey, wrap it up.
B: It tastes so good…I don’t think that I can stop…
A: What is this...
B: Sunbae...your blood doesn’t come out anymore. What's going on? I'm hungry...
A: Hey
B: What's wrong?
A: What did you do to me? Temptation? I know that doesn't work on Vampires, though. What did you do?
B: Sorry…? What's that?
*Temptation: Seduction.
A skill created by vampires to hunt humans easily.
C: Are you ok? Are you there? It’s just that you’ve been there forever… Is it really that bad? Should I call someone?
A: She’s calling you?
B: I was on a date with Jinju…
A: Ah…
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A: Ah, I guess you don’t remember. I helped you and Gok last time when you passed out at the izakaya.
C: Ah…you’re that sunbae? I really appreciate your help last time…But..why are you...
A: Ah, I like going to the movies alone, so I come here often. I happened to be at the restroom when I found him like this. I think I need to take him to the hospital.
C: I’ll go with you.
A: It’s alright. Gok would be worried then.
B: ‘I feel sorry for Jinju…’
A: Don’t worry about it. Get home safely.
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B: Why are we at a hotel…?
A: We’re supposed to finish what we started. Come here. This is the first time I've brought a guy to a hotel. It feels weird.
B: Ah, then why did you even bother yourself to do so?
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A: Blood...Should I give you more? Ah, seriously. It’s driving me crazy. You smell so good.
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D: What? They just left? Are you saying you got turned down?
C: It looks like it…He just left with that sunbae.
D: Why are you grinning?
C: I mean…that sunbae was really handsome…and tall.
D: Is he your type?
C: N-no !! it’s not like that…It’s just that…they look so good together…So, I just imagined smut featuring those two…That was hot.
D: There she is. Was that hot? So, who was the “top”?
C: That…obviously…obviously…That sunbae was the “bottom”!
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A: It's only halfway in. It’s way too tight…Relax a little.
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A: Well, I can’t do anything about it. I’m a vampire. You’re so warm. No, you are actually hot. It’s almost all the way in. Ah…again…Something smells good.
B: ‘Sunbae smells really delicious…why…? Wait… I feel ticklish. Wait a minute! Why the hell am I supposed to do this?’
<Webtoon2>
A: My name is "SHIN EUN HA." I just turned 20. I'm the type of person who picks up trash on the street when I see it, volunteers at a local orphanage as a hobby, and helps the elderly with a heavy bag. But then...These freaking eyes!
(I came here because my friend told me about it…)
A: No one talks to me because of my eyes. Turns out, I have scary eyes.
(All of them are thugs.)
A: That’s why It was difficult To make friends when I was In school. Even my teachers were scared of me.
(Teacher: Eun Ha, Could you look elsewhere?)
A: Then how am I supposed to learn :’(? I’ve been put through the wringer. Particularly, when it comes to dating…
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B,D: “What’s that intense gaze for...?”
B: Can I go to the bathroom, please?
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A: If she leaves now…! I can see him better! (At this point,) I’m just gonna keep staring at him. Should I ask him if he wants to go home together? Hey, Gyung Won. Do you wanna go h…
D: Eun Ha!! I’m so sorry! I…I’ve been such a snob, right…? I’ve got enough money…so…
A: It’s not like that!!
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A: I have many failed unrequited love(?) stories like this…Now that I’m an adult…I thought plastic surgery would make my life easier…But I’m not even eligible for it…Maybe I can’t date in college either…
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A: Yay, Religion class got canceled…
E: Hey! Is this seat taken? Could you put your bag away?
A: What? Say that again. (He really couldn’t hear it.)
F: I’m sorryyy-!!
A: Nooo!! They’re running away again!! It’s my fault that I look like this…
G: Hey…I’d appreciate it if you could put your bag away…
A: ‘He’s handsome!’
G: What are you doing?
A: ‘What is this feeling…I’m so nervous…!'
Teacher: I’m going to take attendance.
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A: ‘Han Yuh Reum…? Even his name is cute. He’s so hot…I can’t help it.'
A: I was way too distracted that day. I am trembling! I can’t do anything~!!
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(Why the hell do you cook like this! Who the hell adds sugar to stew??!)
A: Mom! Dad! Try some strawberries!
Mom: Aww, our boy Eun Ha’s home?
Dad: Try some apples, Bambino.
A: Oh, you guys are already eating apples.
Mom: We can still eat the strawberries later.
Dad: You must be tired after school, right?
A: No, not really. You guys must be tired. Should I massage your shoulders?
Dad: It’s okay, it’s okay~! Seriously, no one can hold a candle to our son! Who helps their parents with house chores? He even bought us strawberries~! You would be perfect if you had a girlfriend!
A: ‘Whenever I hear something like this…I kinda feel guilty. I like boys…’
Dad: Eun Ha, you can stop giving me a massage. Go to your room and rest.
A: ‘I don’t really wanna go, though…’
Dec. 21, 2021
Ordinary Neighborhood
My neighborhood is as ordinary as other places in my city or country.
Sometimes is quit and sometimes so noisy that you can hear music out loud from different houses at the same time.
Among neghbors we do not talk much, we do not know each other, but I think is good to live like this.
I like my neighborhood.
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