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Dec. 25, 2021
Writing Practice
I have lots of memories of my childhood, and it seems that I can only remember things that happened when I was a child. I can't remember things since I became an adult.
Now I'd like to talk about going to school.
The primary school and middle school that I studied in are all in my home town. The primary school is in another village which is about 1.5 kilometers away from my village.
I walked to school every day with my fellow children. We didn't have any transportation, we could only walk.
The roads back then were just natural dirt roads, and surrounded by fields.
Also, the roads would have unknown grass and flowers on them if few people walked on them.
We didn't hate the dirt roads and the long distance walking, we only hated the rainy days.
Because they were dirt roads, they were really hard to walk through. There would be lots of mud on our shoes, it made our feet really heavy.
Another tough situation was on snowy days. It made our walking harder.
Therefore, when rainy days and snowy days come, we will find a strong branch to scrape the mud from our shoes all the way along.
We also had a lot of fun during the journey of going to school or returning home. If we had enough time, we would chase each other for fun during the journey.
I still remember a kind of wild grass growing in the spring which can be eaten, so if it's in spring, the biggest fun during our journey was digging and eating it.
I don't know its English name, I found the photos of it online. I hope you guys can tell me what it is in English.
Okay, I think that's enough for this journal. Have a good day and see you guys next time. Bye bye!
Dec. 25, 2021
Sixth journal
My hubby asked me out to the Myeong-dong station right after i finished the work, texting me that it's a surprise date for Christmas eve. I hadn't seen it coming.
So, we went to Nam-san, where we hadn't been there since my hubby proposed me. The surprise date in Nam-san brought back a bit emotional memories.
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To Eat in a Restaurant
It depends of which kind of restaurant will it be. If is a restaurant of mediterranean food, then a "paella" is very advisable. It is a single dish. In a chinesse restaurant, usually I order "rice four delights" and some vegetable dish. In a pizzeria I can order anything pizza less of pineapple. I don't like the taste of pineapple hot.
Dec. 24, 2021
Cô gái Nga
Hiện nay anh học ở đại học ở Pháp. Anh học tiếng Nga. Một bạn học anh là cô gái từ nước Nga. Em tên là Anna. Theo anh, em rất đẹp, nhưng cho anh khó nói với người, vì anh là người nhút nhát.
Anh ngạc nhiên, khi em muốn đi chơi với anh. Em nói, em không muốn bạn trai, nhưng em muốn chúng ta là bạn. Anh hy vọng em thay ý.
Dec. 24, 2021
La casa de las flores
Mi debilidad de español es la comprensión oral. Necesito escuchar más español. Estoy viendo "La casa de las flores" en Netflix ahora. Esta serie de televisión es muy interesante y los personajes son hermosos. Creo que es el material perfecto para practicar porque no necesito usar mi cerebro para analizar la trama.
Dec. 24, 2021
Jour 36 : La fête de Noël
Faire une fête pour Noël n'est pas la tradition de ma famille parce qu'on n'est pas Christian. Mais comme mon frère, ma sœur et moi sont grandis dans les écoles christaines, nous savons très bien l'histoire de Noël. En plus, Hong Kong était une fois la colonie Britannique, alors on est beaucoup influencés et il y a donc des décorations de Noël partout dans les rues, les centres de commerce, les écoles...... etc. C'est très festive !
Quand j'étais petite, je me demandais toujours pourquoi nous ne fassions pas la fête de Noël le 24 décembre. On affirme que c'est une activité familiale, mais chaque année, je dois me sortir et chercher l'atmosphère de Noël en dehors du cadre familiale.
En grandisant, j'ai commencé à comprendre : c'est parce que mes parents n'avaient pas ce genre de chose dans leur enfance, et c'est à nous, les jeunes pour leur apporter les goûts de Noël.
Dec. 24, 2021
Sarcasm
There are two vice headmasters in my school, H and Z. H is the math teacher of my class. On Wednesday, he told me that it seemed like there was a boy listening music in his class, he wanted me to talk with the boy to confirm the incident. If so, I should talk with the boy's parent about it. He added, "when I found the boy was injured, I gave him the best medical health. But he never concerns it, and keep making noist in my class. I'm so desparat."
I remembered that he criticized me of the bad class discipline. Ironically, even he is a vice headmaster that he can't maintain a good class discipline. How dare he blare me since I am just a normal teacher for temporary.
Dec. 24, 2021
Christmas eve
Because all of my coworkers worked hard, we were able to work off on time.
Now I am having dinner with my family at home.
We have a stake, a pizza, a pasta and some donuts.
With my sons, we set many lights on the Christmas tree and on the walls.
Tomorrow morning, they are going to receive the nice gifts from Father Santa.
I hope they will be happy.
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Club de cuervos parte 2
Cuando Salvador se muere, Isabel y Chava empieza a lucharse sobre quien va a dirigir el equipo. Chava gana a Isabel y se vuelve presidente del club. Una de las primeras cosas que hace es cambiar las camisetas - pero hasta este primero paso causa problemas, porque los patrocinadores del equipo no están consultados antes del cambio. De luego los problemas no paran.
Mientras tanto, Isabel obtiene fotos de una fiesta donde Chava y otros miembros del equipo usan cocaína y otras drogas. Filtra los fotos a la prensa, pero Chava maneja (con la complicidad del jefe de el diario) que solo los fotos de un jugador en particular, Moises, se publican. Moises tiene esposa y los fotos también incluye mujeres media-desnudas.
Un problema hasta más grande ocurre cuando Chava decide correr al entrenador del equipo, que no se queda bien con Chava debido al hecho que Chava siempre se involucra en los detalles del entrenamiento y cada partido.
Durante el resto de la temporada Chava comete una serie de errores y tonterías, con el resultado siendo que el equipo baja de la división primera de futbol en el país.
Esta serie es interesante en que no hay muchos personajes amables o agradables. Los dos protagonistas, Chava y Isabel, son hijos de un rico, aunque Isabel claramente tenga más inteligencia y competencia que su hermano. Unos de los jugadores parecen más agradables, pero en general los jugadores son bien fiesteros y no tienen tanta profundidad como personajes. En un respecto la serie tiene semejanzas con otra serie de los Estados Unidos, "Silicon Valley", porque todos los personajes son groseros y sin aspectos buenos. El punto de la serie es más de exponer el mundo cotidiano de industrias o espacios mitificados. En el caso de Club de cuervos, los equipos de futbol se muestran ser los juguetes de niños ricos a veces, y los jugadores sufren las consecuencias del egoísmo y codicia de los dueños.
Dec. 24, 2021
Writing Practice
A long time ago, I was a child living in the countryside.
Living conditions back then were really terrible, in that we didn't even have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear.
Even though many years have passed, I can still remember those bad memories.
When winter came, we didn't even have a mat quilt, so we had to sleep directly on the reed mat. It was really cold.
Of course, we had a cotton padded jacket and trousers, but we didn't have underwear.
If it was a windy day, these cotton clothes didn't have any effects on keeping warm because the cold wind could easily blow and touch your body from all the collars and cuffs. That was the worst feeling.
However, we still have a lot of fun at that time, especially during the Chinese New Year. We had many traditions during the Chinese New Year.
On New Year's Eve, we used cypress, cotton ears and candles to simply decorate the long, narrow table in the central room.
On the night of Eve, we ate dumplings for dinner. After dinner, my mom did some worship god activities.
She burned some special papers and kowtowed behind the doors and in front of the cooking stove murmured.
Although I never knew what she was really murmuring, I did know that she was praying for all the good things for our family.
An interesting thing was that when we ate dumplings at dinner we should hold more bowls of dumplings because it is said that more bowls of dumplings were for our ancestors and our family members who couldn't return home to celebrate the new year with us.
On New Year's Eve, we were supposed to stay up late until the next morning to welcome the first day of the next year.
By 0'clock, we began setting firecrackers and fireworks. At that time, the whole village was full of deafening firecrackers exploding, and we fellow kids were running to where the firecrackers exploded to pick and collect unexploded firecrackers.
Some of them were seriously hurt because of this.
We have many impressive events during the new year, as this journal is too long now. Let me just stop here, and I will share it with you next time.
Dec. 24, 2021
Personajes navideños alrededor del mundo
La navidad se acerca y niños de todo el mundo están emocionados para recibir regalos navideños. Muchos de esos niños esperan la llegada de Santa Claus, o "Papá Noel" como es conocido en algunos sitios; sin embargo, Santa Claus no es el único personaje que los niños esperán que vengan a darles regalos.
De los personajes que traen regalos, seguramente los más conocidos por la gente hispanohablante son los tres Reyes Magos. La tradición que vino de España dice que el 6 de enero los Reyes Magos vienen a distribuirles regalos a todos los niños, al igual que hicieron con el niño Jesus. Un otro personaje que también trae regalos y que puede parecer un poco raro en principio es la Bruja Befana. Este personaje vino de Italia y, aunque sea una bruja, de mala no tiene nada. Según el folclore italiano, la bruja fue una vieja señora que recibio la visita de los Reyes Magos mientras ellos buscaban el niño Jesus. Los reyes invitaron la Befana a venir con ellos, pero ella rechazo la invitación. Poco después, se arrependió y agarró una canasta con dulces para regalarles a Jesus, pero nunca lo encontro y tampoco volvió a ver los Reyes Magos. Desde ese entonces, dicen que todo el 6 de enero la Befane les trae regalos a los niños con la esperanza de un día llegar al niño Jesus.
Esos son solo algunos de los muchos personajes navideños que hay alrededor del mundo. Al parecer, lo que les gusta a los niños de todas las partes es verdaderamente ganar regalos, sin importar mucho que personaje los va a traer.
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Dec. 23, 2021
열 질문과 열 대답
1. 종호의 파티에 내일이에요.
아, 진짜요? 우리 할머니가 방문해서 바쁠걸요.
2. 민트 초코 아이스크림을 좋아하나요?
네! 맛은 진짜 맛있는 것 같아요.
3. 점수를 받아요?
네, 너무 낮아요. 더 공부하면 나은 점수를 받았을 텐데요.
4. 와, 많은 책을 모아군요!
산 책은 다 특별해요. 책을 아주 좋아해요!
5. 은하가 말했어요?
“후라이드 치킨을 살 주세요”라고 부탁했어요.
6. 경찰을 연락해요!
왜요?
저기에 불이 있고 계속하게 불타해요!
7. 잠깐만요! 같이 가고 싶어요.
오? 바쁜 것 같아요.
여행을 아직 갈테니까요.
8. 그래요. 춤을 다시 연습할까요.
춤은 진짜 어려운데 춤을 수 있을지 몰라요.
9. 와, 줄이 너무 길은데요!
네, 그 식당이 지난주에 열었지만 벌써 엄청 인기가 있어요.
10. 초롱이가 왜 전화해요?
늦게 도착할 거라고 해요.
Dec. 23, 2021
My thanks
I want to change many things and bad habits. I want to set goals of this new year 2022. I confess tat I failed to improve my languages. Although,i studied hard. I know I miss the conversation with other native speaker.
I realized my mistakes, as soon as, with the bignner of the new year. I will have to change method to learning.
I am very luck to have many persons in the site to help me.
I want to say them: Thank you to xxxxxx and other persons.
I want to say them: Thank you you for supporting me.
Yes, I nedd your help and I want to ask God to give you health,sustenance and happiness.
Dec. 23, 2021
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