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Dec. 26, 2021
France
France is beautiful and so cute . It very big and capital is Paris . This city is the romantic there world. The Eiffel tower is so tall and fashion is so cute . But the Food is very different . How snail und shell but the cake is good . great is but the cookies . My family live in France . In the Holyday visit we they . We go to the park and in Disneyland . We drive with the merry-go-round . After that we go shopping we buy dress ,socks, shoes ,pants , candy , skirts and shirts . We play farther in park and after two weeks we go home.
Dec. 26, 2021
Ich weiße nicht ,was ich jeden Tag schreiben soll.
Gestern ist Weinachten,es ist ganz normaler Tag, ich habe nichts besonderes getan. Manchmal hoffe ich ,dass ich viel um die Ohren haben könnte, damit ich nicht langweile.
was hat am Gestern unnormal passiert? Nämlich bin ich gestern mit dem Fahrrad in so einem kaltes Wetter gefahren. nach der bewegung fühle ich mich sehr wohl. Ich weiße immer , dass man regelmäßig Sport treiben soll. Es ist nicht nur gut für unseren Körper sonder auch für den Geist.
Heute scheint die Sonne . trozdem ist draußen sehr kalt. jezt fange ich an zu überlegen, wohin ich in einnem schönen Tag gehen soll.
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
Un jour
Je suis moi lever du mon lit. Ensuite je proser mes dents. Quand j'etais finir avec ca je decide de faire mon petit dejeuner. Un oeuf, d'orange et de pain avec du fromage. C'etait deliceux et un bon debut pour la journée. Apres je pris tous mes livres et fait les dans ma sac. Je suis partir à l'ecole avec le bus pour trente minutes. Lorsque, en route j'ecoute un podcast avec mes ecouteurs. Quand je suis arrivé à l'ecole, il commence immediatement. On a appris d'allemange, de francais, de mathematiques au fin on a aussi faire du sport. Ensuite je suis revenu à la maison. Je manger diner avec ma famille, fais mes devoirs, jouer au console et regarde un episode de ma serie préfére. Au fin je suis parti dormir.
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
Toby
Hallo Leute. Heute ich will über Toby erzählen. wir ist Toby? Toby ist ein schön Hund und seine Eigentümerin ist Claudia meine Freundin. Claudia seit einem Monat ist in die Vereinigten staaten von Amerika,weil sie seine familien besuchen ist deshalb Ich habe die haftbarkei von seinem Hund achten. Ich habe circa zwei Woche mit Toby und hat ein gut benehmen außerdem ich spaziere immer mit ihm zwei mal pro Tag. Toby isst am Morguen oder Nacht. Gestern war Toby sehr nervös wegen der Feuerwerkskörper aber heute hat er ruhig aufgestehen. Toby ist elf Jahre alt und er watet für seine Eigentümerin .
Dec. 26, 2021
Writing Practice
You're at a restaurant, what will you order?
I think this question is related to the attitude of someone to choosing their food.
For me, I prefer eating light flavored foods. I have the principle of eating: less meat, less oil, less seasonings and no sugar, no fried food.
Every meal must include wheaten food (for example, steamed buns, rice and noodles), vegetables, a little meat and soup.
For breakfast, I eat soybean milk or porridge, eggs and bread. For lunch, I eat rice or bread, meat, vegetables and soup. For dinner, I eat bread, meat, vegetables and porridge.
In my opinion, a nutritional meal must cover wheaten food or rice, meat, vegetables and soup or porridge. And less salt, no sugar, less seasonings, such as soy sauce, aniseed and so on.
Just using green onion, ginger and garlic to increase the dishes' taste is enough.
Anyway, different people have different tastes, but healthy diets are very important to one's health. We should attach more importance to it.
Dec. 26, 2021
Trying to write a story
Kyle was sitting on his laptop. Legs crossed and closing, his hands occasionally due to the cold Christmas night. It was about time for him to start writing, and he had quite an ambitious project in mind. His son entered the room.
Johnny could you get me that pen please - said Kyle keeping his eyes on the laptop.
Sure dad. Here you are - said Johnny handing the pen to his dad.
Dad, May I…. tried to ask Johnny
English please - interrupted his dad.
Oh, sorry for that, may I get this 1 euro coin that you left here on this shelf?. Johnny knew that he couldn't take any coins without his father's consent even if he knew he could steal them and they wouldn't even realize.
Sure. I'm happy that you asked this time - said his father who was also happy for his son's improvement in English in the recent weeks.
Now please leave me alone since I need some inspiration here and you´re distracting me - Said Kyle with a serious face.
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
Seres extraterrestres
No hay ninguna duda en mi mente: hay que existir formas de vida fuera de nuestra sistema solar. Los humanos solamente conocen una parte muy pequeña de nuestro universo inmenso. Hay mil millones (¡aún más!) de planetas a través del universo. ¿Cómo no podría existir seres extraterrestres en solamenta una otra?
Además, es posible que la vida desconocida sea tan extraño para que no necesite vivir en una planeta. Hace muchos años, los científicos creyeron que toda la vida de la tierra necesita la energía del sol. Sin embargo, descubrieron vida tan profundo en el océano de modo que allá es totalmente oscuro. ¿Por qué no puede existir vida en el espacio profundo también?
Aunque no conocemos (aún) qualquiera seres fuera de nuestra planeta azúl, es posible que la vida extraterrestre ya nos conozca. Y, si es cierto, ¿se gustaría lo que ve ocurriendo aquí?
Dec. 26, 2021
È Natale ma sto lavorando come una bestia umana
Oggi è stata una giornata di moltissimo lavoro per me anche se è Natale. A proposito...auguro a tutti una bellissima giornata, anche se qui a São Paulo è già notte.
Sono stanchissima dato che sono uscita durante tutta la settimana per fare compere, le spese, andare al shopping center e sicuramente sdraiarmi un po' sul mio letto perché ho una influenza che si allunga da giorni.
Oggi ho sviluppato un sito per il nostro lavoro in gruppo ed è stato divertente...
Ho imparato a "giocare" un pochettino con i colori e la parte visiva della presentazione, ma un mucchio di altre cosa accadrà nel corso del tempo dato che abbiamo ancora alcuni mesi per modificare tutto innumerevole volte a seconda della nostra volontà e necessità.
Comunque sono soddisfatissima del mio risultato anche se è solo una piccolissima bozza per cominciare a pensarne più seriamente.
Devo ancora cominciare a anotare sulla mia agenda come sarà l'inizio dell'anno dato che devo ancora andare dai dottori e consegnare il lavoro del mese, dopo de guardare con cura le lezioni. Sarà di sicuro una pazzia come sempre.
Per 2022 vorrei avere un po' di pace spirituale e imparare meglio la lingua di Dante per superare il mio esame di livello a Dicembre ma con la quantità de lavoro che avrò, le giornate dovranno avere più di 48 ore.
Comunque adesso che ho appena trovato un libro scaricabile che lo cercavo da mesi, devo correre per leggerlo entro una settimana....il problema è che è in inglese e non mi piace molto questa lingua.... mi mette ansia!
Faccio la doccia e dormo che è già tardi e domani sarà un altro giorno di impegni .... ieri ho lavorato per 12 ore senza sosta per mettere la casa in ordine e oggi era tutta un casino ancora una volta. Nessuno in questo pianeta se lo merita!!!!
E devo ancora sentire assurdi di gente che se ne frega della situazione in cui mi hanno lasciato....ma sarà il tema di un altro testo!!! Adesso me ne vado.... ho sonno!!!! Sono davvero distrutta, cotta, esaurita!!!! Ma sono felice con me stessa perché non mollo mai....
Vi lascio una canzone che mi piace... NOTTE!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=saHhYGzdISY
Dec. 26, 2021
Writing Practice
The junior high school I studied in is in my hometown, which is called Gongji town. It is around 1.5 kilometers away from my village. All of my classmates came from different elementary schools, so we didn't know each other at first.
The school is located in the southwest part of Gongji town. Our classrooms were a few rows of bungalows. On the weekdays, we slept and ate in school. Only on weekends can we go home.
The east side of school was bordered by a pond, and every morning we went to the pool to wash our faces. If it was winter, we had to find a brick and break the ice to get water.
We had early self-study back then, so every morning in the winter when we went into the classroom, there was always ice in my front hair.
There was no electricity in my school at that time. We had to use two vapour lamps to light up the classrooms when we self - studied in the early morning.
Our dormitory didn't have beds, we just slept on the floor and used two bricks as a pillow. Besides, there were two holes on the northern wall of the dormitory, so we hardly felt warm on windy nights in the winter.
My school had a cafeteria. We brought 80 percent sweet potato flour and 20 percent wheat flour to it. Besides, we had to give it a small amount of money. Maybe it was just 0.5 RMB.
So three meals a day, what we ate were all steamed buns and salty porridge. Of course, they were made from what we brought to the cafeteria.
However, bad living conditions don't necessarily mean that we aren't happy. On the contrary, I was not only happy, but also got very good grades when I was in junior high school.
Dec. 25, 2021
University Investment.
Nowadays university prices are high, but do this kind of inversion give enough retribution to people?
Some people think that we should take this money and make a better inversion as star your own business or buy your home. They support this idea because buying your own home or business gives you stability and also in many cases it is the purpose when you begin to study, that you can find a good job and do this kind of inversion. However, this is not the only one argument, they say that the university does not coherent with the real life, that in many cases the people does not find a job or not in the way that they thought when they chose the career or university.
On the other hand, many people think that the knowledge that you gain in the university it is invaluable. This kind of experience builds you as person and allows you to open your mind to new cultures, realities, experiences, moreover you take new capacities that make you more competitive worldwide. The people in favor of the inversion in university think that the knowledge is the kind of thing that no one can take away from you, and this allows you to rebuild yourself as many times as you need. They take the knowledge as a tool against injustices and world improvement.
In conclusion, the university is as any inversion that should be taken with responsibility and by correct reasons.
Dec. 25, 2021
An essay on the role of journalists in society
We live in an era where news is spread in a blink of an eye, but the information has never been subjected to such changes and has not caused panic. Therefore, facing this situation, the main functions of a Journalist role in providing information and influencing opinion have to be reinforced.
Such sources as social media have changed the amount of information that journalists used to handle, and although this is a positive thing when used appropriately, it has increased the amount of hours they spend filtering the information and as a result they could feel tempted to be bias instead of setting out the facts accurately.
As citizens of the world we're all responsible for taking part on the decisions either locally or globally. We need profesionales that are well informed and take the time to back up their posture in politics, healthcare, social security,etc to make it easy for us to make up our minds in relevant areas.
Dec. 25, 2021
Dec. 25, 2021
Dec. 25, 2021
Dec. 25, 2021
Lego with my kids
During this Christmas, my sons and I played with new Lego, which were given by Father Santa.
The first toy is about chess of Harry Potter.
On the movie, the main characters play chess with magical chess pieces.
We can make the pieces with Lego.
The other toy is about the Sesame street which is a famous kid program.
Recently, we have watched the program for learning English.
Fortunately, my kids really like it even they don't understand the meanings.
We make the characters with Lego.
I always love to play with my kids, and it is a very important memont for me.
Dec. 25, 2021
Jour 37 : Le privilège d'étudiant
Comme nous, les étudiants ont un emplois du temps plus libre que d'autre, on peut créer notre propre jour de repos et c'est donc pas nécéssaire d'être le weekend où il y a foule dans les rues. Alors on peut profiter d'un monde plus tranquille et même dépenser moins d'argent. Mais de l'autre côté, c'est très difficile de ressembler tout le monde pendant les jours de semaine, surtout quand quelques de mes amis d'enfant ont déjà commencé à travailler comme des adultes. Tant pis !
Dec. 25, 2021
Busco un hablante nativo que quiera aprender italiano
Creo que mi nivel de español no está muy mal, pero tengo que reconocer que nunca he hablado español de manera regular. Por eso ahora busco un hablante nativo de español con el cual podría mejorar sobre todo mis habilidades de conversación y mi vocabulario. Estaría muy feliz de aprender español con él o ella y enseñarle un poco de italiano, mi idioma materno. Si tienes ganas, puedes escribir bajo un comentario y podemos contactarnos en los próximos días. ¡Hasta luego y que pases unas felices fiestas!
Dec. 25, 2021
Dec. 25, 2021
Les stations françaises
J'ecoute plus souvent la radio française. Elle me permet de tenir informée grace au journal. J'apprends egalement un tas de choses sur les sujets de la culture,l'économique,la politique et la science. J'aime bien l'emission qui parle de les thèmes internationaux. Je peux aussi me distraire grâce aux programmes humoristiques et les chonsons françaises. Vous savez, les radio francaises doivent passer minimum 40% de chansons dont les auteurs sont francophones. La motie entre eux aussi doivent être nouveaux talents. C'est parceque la musique française reste dynamique.
Est-ce que vous pensez ecouter la radio est plus efficace pour amolierer le niveau de francaise. Je préfère ecouter la radio parce que j'ai besoins de comprendre l'oral des natifs. Et aussi comme je n'ai besoin que mes oreilles pour ecouter je peux faire autre choses en même temps.
Est-ce que vous pouvez me conseiller quelques émissions intéressantes?
Dec. 25, 2021
Tapeuse d'épaules
Si vous pensez de ne pas obtenir suffisament de consécration pour vos efforts, je propose un voyage à Mettauertal en Suisse. C'est là où se trouve la première tapeuse d'épaules du monde. L'idée de développer un tel appareil vient du président de la commune qui est réputé de donner des compliments en disant "c'est bien fait, vas prendre la tapeuse d'épaules pour quinze minutes". Après avoir été demandé plusieurs fois où cette fameuse tapeuse se trouve, il en a construit une.
Aujourd'hui l'appareil se trouve dans une cabine téléphonique arrêtée par Swisscom depuis longtemps. Pour obtenir la consécration désirée, en choisit sur l'écran la prouesse qu'on a accompli. Ensuite, on est célébré avec des applaudissements et de la musique triomphale, après ça une photo est prise de l'héros pour la marquer sur la page internet de la tapeuse. A la fin, on obtient un bon d'achat valide dans les magasins de Mettauertal.
Cette invention est probablement bizarre pour les français mais elle l'est aussi pour les allemands. Il est vrai, par contre, que dans les pays allémaniques les gens louent très peu aux autres. Le proverbe dit que ne pas gronder est suffisament louer. Mais les psychologues remarquent que le feedback positif est très important pour l'âme humaine.
C'est pourquoi j'enhardis à tous mes lecteurs: Louez plus vos proches!
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