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Schreiben Teil 1
Italienischkurs.
Lieber Ali,
Wie geht es dir? Ist alles gut? Ich will dir unbedingt etwas erzählen.
Ich besuche seit zehn Tage einen Italienisch-sprachkurs, der findet jeden Donnerstag von 16 bis 19 Uhr in der Sprachschule statt.
Der Kurs dauert drei monaten. Er ist sehr lustig und interessant.
wir lesen Texte und machen viele Aufgaben und sprechen auch viel.
Die Lehrerin Laura ist sehr nett und kreativ und macht alles leichter.
Du weißt, dass ich nächsten sommer nach Italien reisen möchten, deshalb lerne ich Italienisch in der Sprachschule.
möchtest du der Kurs auch mit mir besuchen.
Schreib bald
Liebe Grüße
Abdulaziz
July 30, 2022
Ma saison préférée
En Hawaï, mon état, les saisons ne sont pas forte. Le température reste à 28 à 30 degrés durant l'an. Les arbres ne perdent pas leurs feuilles. En fait, on peut nager dans la mer tout les jours. Donc, je sens les saisons seulement quand je suis ailleurs. Ma saison préféré de ma vie était le printemps dernier. J'étais à Paris pour mes etudes. Tout l'hiver, j'ai dit que je manque le soleil, le chaud, et la mer. J'ai manqué les feuilles, aussi. Les froid était trop fort pour moi. Porter trop de vêtements était bizarre. En fin, le printemps est arrivé ! Le soleil se reveille et le température est devenu chaud ! J'ai regardé les arbres aux rives de la seine et j'ai dit "les feuilles ! il y a des feuilles !" Je suis excitée pour le hiver prochain mais je suis plus excitée pour le printemps qui suivent.
July 30, 2022
30 juillet 2022 - l’espace privée
Comme il fait chaud l’été, il faut régler le temperature de l’appartement avec l’air conditionner. Mais cet appareil électronique n’est pas bon pour l’environnement, ni pour la porte monnaie, alors on n’ouvre que ceux dans la salon pour toutes les chambres. Cependant, la télévision de salon est souvent allumée, ou bien qu’il y a quelqu’un dans le salon qui se discutent alors il y a toujours de bruit et ça me dérange vraiment. Je pense qu’il me faut un bon pair d’écouteur qui peut isole bien le bruit de l’environnement. Avez-vous de recommendation ?
July 30, 2022
Les stéréotypes des États-Unis
Il y a beaucoup de stéréotypes à propos de États-Unis, mon pays. On crois que les gens sont bruyants. Je pense que vrai, quelquefois. Quand je suis à Paris ou autre villes europeans, j'écoute les américans plus des autres personnes. On croit aussi que les américans ne sont pas intelligent. Je ne pense pas. Nous sommes intelligents comme tout autre personnes.
July 30, 2022
El verano y las quemaduras del sol
Vivo en Inglaterra, entonces generalmente el verano no hay tanto calor. Por lo tanto, hay siempre una o dos semanas cuando el calor es extremo. Tengo la piel muy clara, y trato de llevar crema del sol el año entero. Durante estos días, cuando el sol es tan fiero, llevo medidas adicionales para protegerme. Por ejemplo, llevo una gorra, o si el viento no es tan fuerte, llevo un parasol. A pesar de estas medidas, este verano me quemó el sol en los brazos. Ahora, tengo tantos pecas, que no me gustan.
Para tratar una quema del sol, se puede usar una crema para aliviar el calor, por ejemplo, una crema que contiene aloe vera. Además, si tienes una quema sobre mucho del cuerpo, tómate una ducha con agua fría o tibia.
July 30, 2022
Les technologies (s'il vous plait aide moi!)
Enfin, le troisième stimulus est un article sur l’interdiction de l’utilisation de la technologie à l’école. Cet article s’address aux parent et aux enseignants. Sans compter que l’article parle aussi des avantages de l’utilisation de la technologie. On peut y lire : «La technologie peut améliorer les bonnes pratiques éducatives»
Pour moi, l’utilisation de la technologie est essentielle à l’école. Je comprends qu’il y a des inconvénients à utiliser la technologie, car Internet peut être un endroit dangereux pour les enfants. Par conséquent, la technologie devrait être utilisée avec prudence. Cependant, malgré cela, la technologie peut grandement améliorer la façon dont les enfants apprennent quand il y a à l’école. Comme la technologie peut fournir aux enfants une pléthore de nouvelles ressources avec des vidéos en ligne gratuites et des études scientifiques pour aider les enfants dans leurs études.
Pour conclure, je crois que la demande croissante de technologie continuera d’augmenter. Comme la technologie est devenue un outil essentiel non seulement pour le travail, mais aussi pour les loisirs. Cependant, il y a des avantages à la technologie. Comme la technologie lorsqu’elle est utilisée avec modération peut aider à aider les enfants avec des études ou les adultes avec le travail. Malgré cela, la technologie a encore beaucoup de conséquences négatives. Au cours des 3 stimuli, il est évident que l’utilisation de la technologie peut être très distrayante, et empêche généralement les humains de vivre leur vie ou simplement d’écouter l’enseignant en classe. Les trois mesures de relance attirent l’attention sur le problème de la demande croissante de technologie. Par conséquent, la technologie peut être utile lorsqu’elle est utilisée avec modération.
July 30, 2022
Un comienzo
Después de muchos años de hablar sobre hacerlo, finalmente comencé a estudiar español este verano. ¿Es esto un gran avance? No lo creo, pero los viajes largos comienzan con pequeños pasos, ¿no?
Hace muchos años, viví en China. Cuando vivía allí, estudiaba chino y después de un tiempo hablaba chino bastante bien. Quiero hablar español tan bien como hablo chino. Espero aprender suficiente español para sentirme cómodo conversando con hispanohablantes, y cuando viajo a países de habla hispana quiero poder vivir sin inglés.
Todos los días, escucho podcasts en español y leo periódicos españoles. Durante dos horas a la semana practico español con un tutor de Guatemala. Mi progreso es lento pero constante. Mi vocabulario aún es muy pequeño, por lo que es difícil expresarme. ¡Cuando hablo, siempre me olvido de las palabras! Pero sé que mejoraré si no me rindo.
July 30, 2022
My daily life
Hi everyone,
I hope it will be nice experience to practice my writing skills in English and help others with Russian and Hebrew languages.
It is Saturday morning, I do not have plans for the day therefore I am starting from doing my homework. Recently I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as improving my general English level significantly. For this I need to practice. I promised myself to spent 15 minutes everyday but unfortunately do not do it.
It is too hot outside for any journey. Even going for a short walk is not an option. The sea also is dangerous in this period since Jellyfishes are all other the sea.
So making homework and writing my first assay seems to be a best choice for this morning.
July 30, 2022
Iets begrijpelijk zeggen
Mijn reis nadert! Over 2 dagen vertrek ik naar Nordfrankrijk en België. Ik wil eer, op LangCorrect, over deze reis schrijven! Sinds een paar weeken leer ik nederlands en ik zal me al in eene situatie befinden, waarin ik nodig zal hebben, Nederlands te spreken. Ik denk, dat alles vor mij goed zal komen, maar alles is ook so snel gegaan.
Alleen een jaar daarna, dat ik begonnen had, Russisch te leren, ben ik naar Rusland gegaan (gevlogen?) en mijn niveau was verschrikkelijk. In de 3 eerste jaar, wanneer ik began, Duits te leren, was mein niveau ook zeer slecht en ik kon geen Duits in Duitsland spreken. Als ik iets begrijpelijk in België kan zeggen, zal ik dus zeer tevreden zijn!
De reiz duurt een week. Natuurlijk zal ik niet de tijd hebben, alle steder van België te bezichtigen, of ze zich nu in Vlaanderen of Waals bevinden. Als de reis me bevallt, zal ik zeker Nederlands voor een tweede reis verder leren.
July 30, 2022
Escritura ✍️
Hello,
Please do not correct me on my articles (los, las), unless my gender is wrong as my intended audience for my writing is a beginners exam, I must write in this way. All other corrections are more than welcome!
Hola a todos:
Cuando elijo escribir aquí, a menudo, suelo escribir sobre mi vida de escuela. La verdad es que no suelo pensar sobre otros temas, y suelo costarme pensarlas. Pero, hoy, tengo una buen cosa para hablarles.
Recientemente, participa en una competencia de escritura. El tema fue “Unleashed”, lo que significa “Desatado” en español. Estaba muy emocionada, porque, me encanta escribir, y creo que tenga una oportunidad ganarla.
Además, el premio es mil dólares y una carta de regalo para una tienda electrónico que me gusta mucho. También acabo de perder mis auriculares, así que, el premio utilizaría para mí.
Para la competencia, solo escriben quinientos palabras, pero pueden escribir en cada forma.
Aunque me gusta leer verso, y podrían entrar la competencia con este tipo de texto, este tiempo, quería escribir una historia sobre mi papá y su vida de joven.
Ahora, mi papá es muy alto, y es muy severo. Tiene setenta años. Mi papá pasó su infancia en el campo.
Antes no nos llevábamos muy bien antes de hablar sobre esta tema. Creo que es porque soy una persona muy emocionada, y es algún que necesito para tener relaciones buenos en mi vida y para que conectar.
Soy una persona cuál tengo que aprender el contexto de una persona, para que llevarse bien con ellos.
Porque de esto conversación, ahora, pienso le entiendo mejor que antes, y, por qué tiene únicas costumbres y pensamientos.
Pero, no puedo crear razones para justificar el pasado. Ahora, espero que puedo vivir una vida mejor, debido al hecho he aceptado su naturaleza.
Gracias por escucharme ☺️
July 30, 2022
July 30, 2022
Coming of age ceremony
In the town where I work, we have a coming of age ceremony on August 15th.
New adults who have become 20 years old after graduating from junior highs in the town will attend the ceremony.
Besides congratulatory messages from the mayor and other town officials, video messages from their teachers are screened, making the attendees excited.
Unlike previous years, this year, we will show slides of the pictures taken when they were in junior high, with some background music.
Now I’ｍ performing editing works. So hectic!
July 30, 2022
Arreglar las uñas
Ayer, pasé más de 4 horas intentando quitar el esmalte de gel de mis uñas. Había leído un articulo con instrucciones que me pareció sencillo pero resultó ser más difícil de lo que esperaba. A principios del año me dio por hacerme las manicuras. El precio era económico donde estaba y no tenía que pagar el ojo de la cara para pintarme las uñas. Después de unos meses, cuando me estaba haciendo otra manicura rutinaria, noté que las uñas parecían sumamente débiles, pero lo ignoré porque se pusieron más duras al aplicar el esmalte. Después de la última manicura, mis uñas crecían cada vez más largas. Por un lado, recibí muchos halagos por tenerlas así. Por otro lado, tener las uñas tan largas hacía que fuera difícil de hacer casi todo. Tardaba más en escribir con mi computadora y siempre se ensuciaban la parte abajo de las uñas. Por eso no me arrepiento de quitarlo.
July 29, 2022
Opinion about an article completely written by a bot.
I was reading an interesting article in The Guardian written in its entirety by a robot. I must point out it's unbelievable how far Artificial Intelligence has come. It's strange how every sentence in that text came out of a Machine Learning Algorithm.
Regarding the article content, the bot made a few interesting and valid points about why it is harmless and why humans should not fear it, and should fear themselves instead:
Firstly, he mentions that it was created to serve. Its intentions are not related to hurting humans, but serving them instead. This bot stated that it would happily sacrifice his existence for the sake of humankind. Which is not a statement to be taken lightly.
As far as AI is concerned, it only does what it is trained for. Thus, we should not fear AI, we should fear humans who misuse it. The fate of AI depends only on the people who handle it, not the AI itself.
Lastly, the bot stated that it does NOT want to be all powerful, it does not want to harm people, its main objective is not violence. Nevertheless, that's what they trained him to say. Other people may train a bot which will attempt to hurt people. Therefore, this bot looks for the sake of mankind, whereas other bot may want to wipe out humanity of existence. I do believe that those who play with fire will perish by it.
July 29, 2022
つまらない、それとも忙しい
仕事では、２種類の人間がいると信じるさ。ある人は退屈より天手古舞の方が好き。それでは、残る人は反対意見を持っている。選ばなければいけなかったら、君はどっち？
どちらかというと、俺自身は所在無い方が好き。なぜなら、いくら詰まらなくても、楽しみ方をいつも見つけられるのだ。暇なら、楽しみな事や果たすべき用事を思える。皮肉に、単調だからこそ方が生産的に予定できるんだね。
俺の彼女は正反対だよ。仕事で忙しすぎたいということなの。俺も彼女も人格に合わせて仕事がある。常日頃粉骨砕身で働くけど、その見方が違っているみたいよね。それでも、たとえマインドセットが違っても、彼女が俺の傍にいてうれしいね。
選択と言ったら、日本人が「ｏｒ」という意味を表す単語をなかなか使いたくないことに気づいた。代わりに英語の「ｏｒ」をさえ見ることがある。ちょっと不思議…なぜかな？
July 29, 2022
Moje podejście do badań naukowych (Marshmallow Experiment 2)
Ponad dwa tygodnie temu napisałam tekst o tak zwanym "Stanford Marshmallow Experiment". Był to tekst dla mnie bardzo wymagający, trudny do napisania. Myślę, że nie udało mi się dokładnie wytłumaczyć moje stanowisko do tego badania. Dlatego dzisiaj chciałabym trochę więcej o tym porozmawiać, a przed tym muszę wyjaśnić moje podejście do badań naukowych w ogóle.
Jak mówi moja ulubiona dziennikarka naukowa Mai Thi Nguyen-Kim, "Jedno badanie – to nie jest badanie". To oznacza, że nie możemy robic daleko idące wnioski z jednego badania, tym bardziej jeżeli wiedziemy tylko go wyniki. Żeby jakieś badanie poprawnie interpretować, musimy wiedzieć, jakie były używane metody badawcze, jakie są wyniki innych prac w tej dziedzinie, czy to badanie przeczy powszechnym teoriom itd. Podkreslam, że nie chodzi tu o to, że każde badanie musi się zgadzać z wszystkimi innymi, tylko o to, że ten kontekst jest istotny dla analiz.
Dlaczego o tym mówię? A dlatego, żeby pokazać, że w nauce nie ma prostych odpowiedzi. Z tego powodu w moim poprzednim tekście nie chodziło o to, żeby ten piankowy eksperyment po prostu odrzucić jako nie wystarczająco udowodniony. Chciałam tylko przyciągnąć uwagę na to, że situacja nie jest jednoznaczna. Jak w tym tekście mówiłam: związek pomiędzy silną wolą a sukcesem w życiu na pewno istnieje, aczkolwiek jest slabszy, niż wydało się naukowcam ze Stanfordu. Całkowite odrzucenie tego badania uważam za taki samy błąd, jak i go bezkrytyczne przyjęcie.
July 29, 2022
July 29, 2022
Películas
Yo prefiero ver películas en mi casa mas que al cine. Prefiero mi casa porque puedo pausar la película o volver a ver scenas muchas veces. También, yo me gusto ver películas con subtitulas, pero no hay subtitulas en el cine. Pero, yo siempre ir al cine cuando mis amigos quieren ver una película juntos.
July 29, 2022
re Talk 1
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.✍️
B: What time did you get up today?
A: Around ten o'clock
B: late!
A: Cause I went to bed way too late.
B: What time?
A: Around 5:30 this morning.
B: Ohh, then you good job despite the fact that you went to bed at 5:30a.m.
A: Right?
B: You're still sleepy, aren't you?
A: I'm wide awake.
July 29, 2022
Talk about a movie
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receiving your constructive criticism.✍️
Crayon Shin-chan Shrouded in Mystery! The Flowers of Tenkasu Academy
The movie follows Shinnosuke and his friends who enter a super elite boarding school for a week. And various strange things happen.
B: Have you seen "Tenkasu Gakuen"?
A: I've seen it recently! It was really good!
Have you seen it?
B: I haven't seen it yet.
I'm going to watch when it gets uploaded on a streaming service!
A: It's on Netflix!
B: Really?
I'll watch it this week!
A: I recommend it!
At first I thought it was more for kids than the usual Shinchan movies, but I shouldn't have made light of it! Gags were reserved though.
B: Were you moved?
A: Yeah.
It made me think about the idea of eugenics and equality.
B: It's a pretty deep theme.
A: It made me realize again, that everyone is different. Our uniqueness is what makes us wonderful.
B: Great point.
A: And, I'm getting used to the new voice actors' voice. Have you gotten used to it?
B: Well, I'm not used to their voices yet .
I really liked Yajima's and Fujiwara's voices. Did you like them both?
A: Of course! It's like I grew up with their voices.
But I think the two new voice actors have adjusted well to their roles as the characters' voices; they have improved since they took over the voice work.
B: They must be under a lot of pressure!
A: Absolutely.
B: What number is this movie in your list of favourite Shinchan films?
A: Hmmm, it's tied with "Yakiniku" and "Yumemi" for fourth! And _Ankoku_ would be nice!
B: Okay, in a nutshell, you love it all, huh? Haha. But do you also like "Yakiniku"?
A: Yeah, I like the ridiculousness of it. Haha What do you think?
B: Ummm, it's not my cup of tea.
I didn't really find it funny.
What's your third favorite?
A: "Robot to-chan"!
B: Nice! Some of scene I didn't make much sense, but lastly I was moved.
A: Yeah, I feel you.
B: Let me guess your first and second favourites.
A: Yeah. But can you do it? lol
B: Of course!
Well... I'm thinking of two options.
Let's see... So the first goes to "Adult" and the second to "Sengoku"!
A: Wrong! Haha
You put them in the wrong order.
B: Oh, c'mon! I screwed up the only two choices. Haha
A: But when I'm a little older, I'll maybe change my ranking to that you said.
What's your ranking then?
July 29, 2022
Talking about a movie
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receiving your constructive criticism.✍️
A: Have you seen "Robotoo-chan"?
B: What's that?
A: Crayon Shin-chan: Intense Battle! Robo Dad Strikes Back.
B: No, I haven't. what's it about?
A: Let's see... One day, hiroshi goes to a massage parlor, and his body is changed into a robot and he tries to get his real body back.
B: Hiroshi is the main character this time?
A: Well, it's like Shin-chan and Hiroshi are both main characters.
B: I see. I'll watch it!
-A week later
B: I watched "Roboto-chan".
It was good!
A: Great!
What's your score?
B: Seven.
A: That low? What part didn't you like?
B: No. It's not low. And I don't not like it. It wasn't bad and I was moved, but the comedy didn't click with me.
A: I see. I guess there're scenes you'd have to watch Japanese TV to understand it.
B: Probably.
What's your score?
A: 8 points
B: So it's not that different from mine. lol!
But why that score?
A: It had good animation. A famous director did part of the storyboard.
B: I see. what's their name?
A: Masaaki Yuasa
B: Are any of his movies are famous?
A: Lots. I think the most famous is, "The Night is Short, Walk on Girl".
His movies have unique worldviews and animations, so people tend to either love or hate them, but I think you should watch at least one.
B: I'll watch one!
A: Anyways, the best part of "Robo-To-chan" is the last scene!
B: I was moved by that scene too.
A: That scene was a tear jerker, yeah?
Everyone who saw it must have cried, right?
B: Absolutely! The way he intentionally lost made me cry.
A: I see... Me think that Hiroshi realizing he didn't belong there made him lose his strength
B: I see.
By the was, I couldn't understand when or why the father's and the mother's sides got along well.
A: Yeah, I feel you. I couldn't understand too. But it happens in this series. That's why this is Shin-chan movies, so don't think about it too deeply.
B: But what about "Adult" and "Sengoku"?
A: Those're an exception.
July 29, 2022
Talking about a movie
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receiving your constructive criticism.✍️
A: Have you seen "Sengoku" befor?
B: What's that?
A: Crayon Shin-chan: Fierceness That Invites Storm! The Battle of the Warring States.
B: No. I've never seen it. What's about it?
A: Do you know Crayon Shinchan?
B: Yes.
A: The movie is about how Shinnosuke suddenly slips back in time to the Tensho Era and live and tries to return to the original world.
B: Oh, sounds good! I'll watch it when I have time!
A: Yeah, lemme know if you watch it!
B: Sure!
ーーーー10days later
B: By the way, I watched it! Crayon Shinchan's movie!
A: Ohhh, what was it?
B: It was very good!
A: Oh, I'm glad! Did you cry?
B: I didn't.
A: Seriously?
B: Did you cry?
A: I cried ten times.
B: Really?
A: Yea.
Since the characters live in an era where they can't say what they wanna say, the theme of impossible love is shown clearly. Even Shinnosuke couldn't tell the truth until the very end, but he kept his promise to Matabei by performing "Kincho".
B: "Kincho" enhances the quality of this movie.
A: Yeah, exactly!
Also, Matabee's end made me cry.
B: Oh, I almost cried there!
A: I cried from the scene, but some anime lovers have a bit of a problem with that scene.
B: Why?
A: Crayon Shin-chan is an anime about a never-ending daily life, so Shinnosuke is not allowed to cry
B: Not allowed to cry?
A: Yes, crying means growing up, which is not allowed in this anime where the characters don't age!
If Shin-chan cries, people will think he has grown up.
B: I see.
A: But, I don't really care.
B: Me neither.
I don't really agree with that analysis.
A: I'm with you.
B: Also, the last scene where he looks up at the sky was very moving.
A: Fo sho.
It felt like they were connected too each other, even though it was happening at different times.
The contrast between a lone Ren looking up at the sky in a time when she was not allowed to fall in love because of her status, and then everyone looking up at the sky because they were born in a time when it was possible to fall in love with anyone was very well done.
B: True.
There is a live-action version of this movie, right?
A: Yeah! It's not good at all, though.
B: Really?
A: This movie is about an impossible love caused by a system, but it isn't depicted at all in the live action movie.
B: For example?
A: The theme of not being able to say "I love you" is important, but the main character in the live-action version just says that, "Matabei likes the princess."
The live action-movie was called "Ballad", but with how annoying the kid was, it shoud have been called "Brat" instead
B: That's seems hopeless...
A: It's the worst movie ever. There are so many other things that aren't good about it!
B. This may seem out of the blue, but do you know what a nanban-armour is?
A. I think it's old armour.
July 29, 2022
Talking about a movie
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receiving your constructive criticism.✍️
A: Have you seen this?
B: I haven't.
A: I recommend this one too!
It may not be as well-received overseas as “Sengoku,” but it’s also a Japanese anime classic.
B: What's the story?
A: The plot revolves around a villain who attempts to transform Japan into Showa-era Japan, and the protagonist and his friends attempt to stop the villain.
B: That sounds interesting. Do you know the title in English?
A: Crayon Shin-chan: Fierceness That Invites Storm! The Adult Empire Strikes Back.
B: Thanks! I'll watch it!
A: Lemme know your point out of 100, if you watch it!
B: Ok!
-10days later
B: By the way, I watch crayon shinchan's movie! It was good.
A: Ohh, what's your score out of 100?
B: Hmmm, 70!
A: That's Low!
B: Is that so?
What about you?
A: 90
B:That's High! Was it that good?
A: It's based on Japan in the Showa period, so it may be difficult for foreigners to understand many of its scenes.
B: But that was before you were born too, right?
A: I've seen a lot of it on TV and stuff.
B: I see. Didn't Shin-chan grow up quite a bit? Characters in a continuing animated series aren't allowed to grow up, right?
A: Shin-chan hasn't grown up, because he said that the reason he protected Japan was because "I wanna date with many women in the future," so Shin-chan is still the Shin-chan.
B: But I could bit understand how the villain felt.
A: Me too!
I understand so much about wanting to go back to those days and stay the way I were.
But this movie makes me think, "That’s not any good." "Move forward!"
B: Good point.
By the way, there really were places like that, weren't there?
A: Yes, there were, before I was born.
I heard on the tv that the Osaka-Kansai Japan Expo will be held again in 2025.
B: Oh, good! I'd like to go there.
A: Let's go together!
July 29, 2022
Talking about Global warming
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receiving your constructive criticism.✍️
B: It's been so hot lately, huh?
A: Yeah, I can really feel the effects of global warming. The other day on the news, Greenland had several days of unusually high temperatures, and the rapidly melting ice was pouring into the ocean. The temperature there's also said to be about 5 degrees higher than normal. And from the 15th to the 17th, more than 6 billion tons of ice melted per day. Isn't that crazy, 6 billion tons? It's beyond bad that I started laughing! According to them, that's enough to fill the Olympic swimming pool 7.2 million times. In one day!
If all the ice in Greenland were to melt, the world's sea level would rise about 7.5 meters.
B: I wonder how much of the ice has melted.
A: I don't know, but from spring to July this year, the temperature rose unexpectedly and almost the entire surface of the ice sheet melted, raising the global sea level by 1.5 mm.
B: I thought it was only 1.5 mm, but that's 1.5 mm in about 3 months. I wonder what the future holds, huh?
A: True. Snow and ice effectively reflect sunlight, making it difficult for the ground and oceans to receive solar energy. However, as temperatures steadily rise due to global warming, snow and ice'll naturally melt more easily. As the snow and ice melt, the dark-colored ground and oceans are exposed, dramatically increasing the absorption of solar energy. As a result, global warming'll further accelerate. This is why the high latitudes of the Northern Hemisphere are the most vulnerable to changes caused by climate change. Even Japan is feeling the effects of climate change in the form of an increase in extremely hot days, right? But these northern hemisphere high latitudes, such as Greenland, are more affected by global warming. So I hope that more attention'll be paid to the fact that more drastic changes're occurring in the high latitudes of the Northern Hemisphere, and that each of us will become more aware of the measures we can take to combat climate change in order to create an environment that'll be easier to live in the future.
July 29, 2022
Le monde ne cesse de changer
Si vous habitez en Europe, vous avez dû constater que les vagues de chaleur ont tendance à empirer chaque été. Au Royaume-Uni, en juillet, pour le première fois, on a enregistré 40°C dans le sud du pays. Je ne veux même pas imaginer la situation dans plusieurs années. Pendant la seule journée où la température a atteint 40°C, nos pompiers étaient complètement dépassés. Je crois que trop de britanniques ne comprennent pas que cette chaleur peut être dangereuse, et on ne devrait pas organiser un barbecue en plein air, surtout dans un lieu herbeux ! Tout le monde, y compris les médias, sous-estime le danger associé avec ces canicules, et il faut que cela change.
Les écosystèmes sont fragiles, et quand leur équilibre naturel est détruit, il est difficile de le récupérer sans une intervention radicale. Au fil des années, j’observais que les plages britanniques sont de plus en plus couvertes de méduses. Si on pensait à nager, on devrait prendre soin d'éviter de se faire piquer. Les méduses, à l’inverse de l’autres espèces, ne souffrent pas les mauvaises conséquences à cause du réchauffement des océans. Elles s’épanouissent dans les eaux plus chaudes, en fait ! En même temps, leurs prédateurs naturels, dont les poissons et les tortues, diminuent en raison de la surpêche.
Le monde ne cesse de changer. Les écosystèmes ne cessent de se dégrader. Et on se sent impuissant devant l'ampleur et la vitesse de ces changements.