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Writing Practice
I didn't know the term of resolution before I started learning English. I think it’s like the Chinese word 许愿(xǔyuàn).
I don't remember I have made some resolutions before New Years, because I don't believe that they work.
When I was in school, I didn't have study plans either. I was just relying on my feelings in that I could sense which part I should work on.
No matter how many resolutions you make, it is useless if you don't put effort into them.
Although you never make resolutions, as long as you work hard every year, you can still make big achievements.
As to when we should stop greeting others by saying "happy new year", I don't really know, but I think we may stop saying that in the middle of the first month.
Jan. 11, 2022
La musique
Hier, j'ai parlé de la musique avec une copine. Ça a commencé parce qu'on s'avait dit que c'est bizarre qu'une personne puisse être tellement émue par la musique. Bizarre, parce que physiquement il ne s'agit de rien d'autre que de la vibration de l'air (comme des langues, bien sûr).
Une deuxième observation : autrefois, la musique était une chose assez rare. Prenons le moyen-âge ; il y avait des troubadours, des artists, petits concerts, etc., mais j'ose dire que la musique n'était pas un phénomène quotidien. De nos jours, par contre, la musique est partout et toujours accessible, grâce à la radio et l'internet. Peut-être que cela a changé notre façon de vivre la musique.
Jan. 11, 2022
Back to square 1
With high hope that this year can go to Japan.
Looks like this dream will have to wait again.
How long? No one can answer!
Furthermore, resultants, library…will close at 6pm.
This coming Chinese New Year all we can do is stay at home!
I really run out ideas or things to do.
I hope you in a better situation.
Good luck in this year of Tiger.
Jan. 11, 2022
Cuando Viajas, ¿Cuál Asiento Prefieres?
Para mí, depende de si es un vuelo corto o largo. Si es corto, prefiero viajar junto a la ventanilla, principalmente para ver el paisaje. Si es un vuelo largo, prefiero el pasillo porque priorizo la comodidad. Me gusta poder estirar las piernas de a ratos y el asiento del pasillo brinda libertad para ir y venir por el avión. No me molesta que el resto de los pasajeros de la fila me pida pasar por adelante. Por suerte, es raro que los pasajeros que circulan por los pasillos se chochen con mi hombro o pateen mi pierna. De todos modos, hace dos años que no viajo en avión por el coronavirus así que no he tenido que elegir.
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Random Thoughts
Time flies. Another year has passed that you haven't even noticed.
We are all walking to the end of our lives, but not many people are aware of this.
We can't stop time, even let it flu a bit slow.
The only thing we can do is to run, run against time and win it.
Let’s run together in 2022.
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Jan. 10, 2022
El diez de enero
Hola,
Hoy tuve mi primero dia del clases de Espanol en La Cuidad de Mexico. He aprendido los articulos indefinitivos y saludos. Yo hable y escuche. Tome el autobus a la universidad. Despues yo trabaje ejercicio. Ahora estoy leyendo un libro. Este noche comera un carne y bebera una leche. Entonces dormire en mi cama. Manana lo hare de nuevo.
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L'hiver
C’est l’hiver là où j’habite et il fait froid. La température est tombée en dessous de zéro et il neige de temp en temp. Il n’y a pas de neige maintenent, parce que certains jours il faisait plus chaud et la neige est partie.
Hiver ou pas, la construction d’un immeuble de l’autre côté de ma rue continue. Les grandes grues portent leurs charges et les camions remplis de béton causent des embouteillages. Très bientôt, je ne verrai qu'une étroite bande de ciel dans la fenêtre de ma chambre. Ça me rend triste. Je sais que le monde n'est pas là pour m'énerver, mais parfois, il a l’air comme ça.
(Au lieu de « énerver » j’aurais voulu utiliser un autre mot commençant avec « emm… », celui qui a été utilisé par le Président, mais j'ai réalisé que j'aurais pu recevoir un avertissement sur ce site. Après tout, les présidents sont plus puissants.)
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My Story With Porn Addiction
I decided to stop watching porn movies due to some reasons that I will tell you later. I started to watch porn when I was 13 years. I remember that day when my relative showed me the first porn video. It was so exciting because we live in a Muslim country where we couldn't see naked women or normal. My religion forbids us to watch naked women or such things and commends us to lower our gaze. After a few months, I bought a used computer. To my surprise, porn sites in my country and in most Muslim countries are banned, but I searched for a solution for my problem. I found an article talking about VPN softwares, and I imdediately downloaded one. Now I had a full access to porn sites. I started to watch porn every day without stopping. As I said earlier In my religion doing such thing is not allowed, and it consider a bad deed. I did this for years and I couldn't stop it. Feeling ashamed and guilty. Last year, I read a book about Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. I've had this disorder since I was a kid and read that book in the hope that I could treat myself. To my surprise, even in that book I found some people's stories about their struggling with porn addiction and OCD. I learned that Porn addiction can be related to OCD. I decided to apply what I had read in that book to my porn addiction and other compulsions. The result was satisfying. I managed to reduce the amount of time I spend to watch porn. Instead of watching porn every day, I reduced that to each 5-6 days. Now I feel much better than ever before because watching porn is so dangerous for my health and faith.
Jan. 10, 2022
First order from Aliexpress
How are you guys? Yesterday I ordered from Aliexpress some items that I needed, like a phone case and some rings. This is the first and maybe the last time I'm ordering something from there, because a lot of people have a negative opinion about Aliexpress. I guess I just have to wait and see for myself what will happen. Don't worry I'll keep you updated for sure. Until then have a nice day and stay safe < 3
Jan. 10, 2022
Malerei
Können Sie bitte meine Fehler korrigieren? Danke im Voraus.
Als ich Kind war, hat Kunst mich besonders Malerei und Bildhauerei begeistert. Ich wollte Malerin werden, wenn ich erwachsen werde. Deshalb kenne ich viele weltweiten Künstler. In meinem Heimatland Iran hat die Malerei eine Geschichte über 12 tausend Jahre.
Die allererste Gemälde wurden in Höhlen von Lorestan (Südwesten am Zagrosgebirge) gefunden. Es gab eine Art der Malerei, die „Miniaturmalerei“ genannt wurde. Die wichtige Funktion der Miniaturen war in persische Literatur und Illustration. Islamische Malerei begann unter dem Einfluss der islamischen Kultur. In dieser Zeit haben die persischen Malerei einen anderen Begriff, zum Beispiel die Malerei der Safawidenzeit. Also wurden einige der iranischen Gemälde von China Kunst inspiriert. In der Kadscharen Dynastie wurde die iranische Malerei von klassischen europäischen Stil begeistert. Heutzutage gibt es viele Galerien und Ausstellungen, in denen es viele zeitgenössische Malerei von viele kreativen Künstler/innen gibt.
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Book - A Shot in the Dark - P26
Part twenty-six.
This story is written in present tenses on purpose (analyse the story as if it takes place while you read it)
After dismissing the leads on Forrester’s guilty as worthless, Inspector Steine moves on to playwright Jack Braithwaite, who is also, as yet, at large. Penny, his girlfriend as well as a cast member, reveals that this afternoon he was fuming at Crystal’s upcoming review of “A Shiling in the Meter”. But she does not believe he could have gone to such lengths to stop the review hitting the paper. However, Todd Blair thinks the opposite, he quotes Jack’s own words “I’ll kill him! That bastard!” Brunswick enquires when Penny has last seen Jack: “It was around seven. He said he needed to go back to his lodging; he was worried about something there but would not say what.” Steine eagerly suggests “perhas it was a gun?” but soon feels flattened to get a negative answer: “Shame. I thought we had him.” Yet the police officers ask for his address, and head there straight away. As they approach the house, Steine is deep in thought : “what is the exact form of words used when making an arrest?” Eventually he gives up and has Brunswick take over; the Sergeant feels flattered, he has Steine’ trust for a change. After waiting several minutes for someone to answer, a Mrs Thorpe, who is Jack’s landlady, opens the door. She is puzzled by their presence and asks; Steine recklessly answers “We are here to arrest Jack Braithwaite for the murder of A.S. Crystal”, to which, Brunswick promptly chips in “or to possibly eliminate him from our inquiries. Sir, we don’t actually know if he’s the culprit yet.” Brunswick presses on apprising her of Penny’s statement. When his words finally sink in, she gasps “I begged him not to...not tonight.” She then calls out to Jack Braithwaite, thinking he would surely be in his room, but no answer comes.
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