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More customers?
More customers?
In my town one of the fast food chain just refurnished.
With new chairs and tables, they replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” order.
For Japanese may think that is common.
Because in Japan restaurant is usually purchase a ticket before.
But not Hong Kong!
In here most people especially old and lazy person.
They like to come to counter and told what they want.
Face a big screen and making decision is a hard job for them.
This morning when I come to fast food chain is less customers than before.
While next door the “old style” human take order restaurant is full of customers.
People hate change!
Jan. 19, 2022
Ein Land, viele Sprachen
In der Schweiz gibt es vier ofizzielen Landessprachen: Deutsch, Französisch, Italienisch und Rätoromanisch. Daneben werden auch noch viele andere Sprachen gesprochen wie zum Beispiel: Spanisch, Englisch, Portugiesisch, Albanisch und sogar Serbokroatisch. Der Grund dafür sind die vielen Zuwanderer, die nach der Schweiz eingewandert sind. Deshalb spielen diese Sprachen in dieser neuen Zeit im Land eine große Rolle.
Aber, wenn es um Bürokratie geht, haben die vier offiziellen Landessprachen die Hauptfiguren. Trotzdem kann man sicherlich einen-e Beamte-in finden, die sich sehr gut mit Englisch auskennt.
Jan. 19, 2022
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Jan. 19, 2022
Hausaufgaben Überdosis
Heute habe ich meine Hausaufgaben gemacht. Ich musste es gestern abgeben, aber das habe ich nicht geschafft, weil es einfach zu viel gab! Ich habe so viele Fragen über Deutsch geantwortet und jetzt mein Kopf tut weh. Demnächst muss ich etwas kochen, weil es schon Abend ist und ich habe gar nichts heute gegessen. Gestern habe ich drei deutsche Bücher gekauft, zwei Romanen und ein Geschichtsbuch über den Nürnberger Hauptkriegsverbrecherprozess. Wenn alles gut geht, werde ich das Buch verstehen. In 5 tagen muss ich mehr Hausaufgaben abgeben. Es gibt einfach zu viel Hausaufgaben in der Welt! Zumindest wird mein Deutsch verbessern. Ich habe ein Video dass dauert 20 Minuten ins Englische übersetzt. Eine Frau hat über studieren und arbeiten in Deutschland. Ich könnte es verstehen, deshalb war die Übung kein Problem. Ich freue mich auf Essen, weil ich viel Hunger habe. Morgen muss ich einkaufen gehen, um mehr Nahrungsmittel zu kaufen. In meinem Kühlschrank gibt es gar nichts dass ich essen kann. Gestern habe ich meine Fahrkarten für Samstag bekommen, obwohl meine Kreditkarte funktioniert nicht. Ich habe auch eine neue Kreditkarte bestellt. Hoffentlich werde ich sie vor Samstag bekommen. Ich habe seit 4 Jahren keine Züge genommen. Es wird ein Abenteuer, mit dem Zug noch mal zu reisen. Ich habe auch nächste Woche eine Deutschunterricht gebucht. Hoffentlich kann ich flüssiger sprechen. Dieses Jahr möchte ich mehr Deutsch sprechen und schreiben, sodass ich endlich die Sprache beherrschen kann. Vielleicht werde ich bald Käse kaufen und Käse mit Brot zum Abendessen haben. Es ist immer gut, Käse zu essen und ich freue mich auf deutsche Käse. Ich habe den Nase voll mit Winter. Es ist einfach zu kalt und das schottisches Wetter ist sehr schlecht. In letzter Zeit habe ich die Sonne gar nicht gesehen. I sollte öfter draußen gehen. Eigentlich sollte ich jetzt in Deutschland sein, aber meine Reise war leider abgesagt. Jetzt muss ich bis April warten, um Deutschland zu besuchen. Aber es wird sich lohnen. Bis dahin wird mein Deutsch viel flüssiger sein und werde ich besser sprechen können. Das Wetter wird auch in April wärmer sein, im Vergleich zu Januar. Im Moment ist Berlin vielleicht ein bisschen kalt. Heute Abend werde ich viel Deutsch hören und auch ein bisschen Deutsch lesen. Ich muss auch meine Zähne putzen und meine Wohnung auf Vordermann bringen. Aber zuerst, esse ich endlich etwas, sodass ich besser konzentrieren kann. Vielen Dank und bis nächstes Mal! :)
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Jan. 19, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - P34
Part thiry-four.
This summary was deliberately written in the present tense (analyse it as if it’s taking place as you read it.)
After leaving a bewildered Vince standing alone in the middle of the street, Brunswick goes across town looking for Maisie. He first tries at Luigi’s, as Vince told him, but she is not there. By the time he finds her at her own booth shop at the seaside, he is livid. What it does not occur to him is that she might resent him herself as well - and indeed she does, - having been left on her own last night. As he approches the booth, she darts him an enraged look. Whether it was meant to warn him or scare him away, it failed. Two are the simple reasons: he finds her even more attractive when she is furious; he puts such behaviour down to regular juvenile reaction. To settle the matter, he offers to take her out again. It could have been a good way to make it up, had he not added “It wasn’t my fault anyway. There were two murders on the same evening.” She rightly snaps at him that he left her before that as well - that is, when he entered the hippodrome to pursue the dodgy red-headed woman. He moans that it was only ten minutes. Her fury mounts: “It was half an hour Jim!.....If it hadn’t been for Vince I would’ve had to catch a night bus home alone!” Bruwnsick is startled: “Was Vince there?” She mocks at him: “Ah..You call yourself a policeman, and don’t notice Vince right under your nose? He was behind us all along!” He reflects on this. Was Vince actually there? And if so, how come did he not spot him? Anyway, he renews his apology and offer of taking her out, adding that is all he can do. She rightly bursts out: “But you didn’t actually apologise! You didn’t say: I’m so sorry Masie. I apologise for last night.” Yet again, he does not hold back his thoughts*. Eventually, she tells him that it is over between them.
*is it clear I mean he told what he was thinking at that moment?
Jan. 19, 2022
A Play
I was go out to the street from underground, when I saw an advertising of a theater play and I began unwittingly to smile. The play was "La cena de los idiotas", Dinner for Schmucks, in English, and is a remake of a French movie named "Le dîner de cons". It is very funny; I have watched this movie at least three times and always I finish laughing a lot. I will try to go watching this theater play.
Jan. 19, 2022
Academic essay.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
It is critically important that we make good relationships with other people. EIther keeping our old friends our endeavor to make new friends has its positive and negative aspects. Personally, I agree that it is better to keep our old friends. I feel this way for two reasons, both of which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, when we have old friends for years they may become like a family, therefore they become supportive and your right hand. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Fifteen years ago, I moved with my family to live in Turkey. Day in day out, I met a person that lives in the same neighborhood. We became best friends, and he was also in my school. Years later, we graduated from school and we decided to go to the same college and study the same major. Now our relationship lasts for over fifteen years, so he became very close to me like my brother. We support each other in every task even on our worst days, and I can rely on him for many things that even my real brother couldn't do.
Moreover, these days it is not easy to find or create new friends under the term 'real friends' without interest. My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. When I was in college, I used to go by public transport. The college was far from my home, so I tended to wake up three hours earlier. In the second year, my father bought me a car so I can go with it to save time and it's more convenient. At that time, there was a guy that hated me for a long time, and we were not friends we even talk with each other. Suddenly, after I got to the car, he started talking with me and telling me that he is feeling guilty for what he did, and he wants to be my friend.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that keeping our old friends is much better than making new friends. That is because, a friend who can last with us for years and become close to us, is a loyal friend. Moreover, many people nowadays want to keep in touch with you only for their benefit.
Jan. 19, 2022
"The Queen's Gambit"
C'est une série qui était publie au netflix à 2019. La série a neuf episodes et rancote la histore d'une fille qui a perdre sa mére parce qu'elle est mourait. Apès ca elle joint une orphelinat. Lá-bas elle trouve sa amour pour échec. Le concierge du bâtiment a elle montré comment on joue à ca. Quelques mois ensuite un couple a elle adopté. Mais le père ne l'aimait pas et a quitter sa femme seule avec elle. Il n'ai pas duré trop long pour un prof qui a découvert son talent. Ensuite ella comencer a participée au tournament. Ce tous avec 14 ans je crois. Au moment je crois que j'explique l'episode un, deux et trois.
Jan. 19, 2022
19 janvier 2022 - qqc que je trouve difficile à maîtriser
J’ai commencé à apprendre l’arabe il y a un peu plus d’un mois. Je le trouve très difficile de l’apprendre. Comparé à l’apprentissage du français, j’ai déjà connaît pas mal de phrases basiques pendant la même période. La raison pour laquelle je voulais apprendre l’arabe, c’est que je me suis ennuyée pendant les vacances de l’hiver (même si je devais me préparer pour l’examen qui suivait, j’ai eu beaucoup de temps libre) et j’ai reçu mes résultats de l’examen français et n’ai pas eu envie d’attaquer le plus haut niveau de l’examen, j’ai donc me lancé un nouveau challenge.
Je suis fascinée par l’écriture cursive de l’arabe, ce que je trouve est très beau et élégant. D’ailleurs, je pense que c’est peut-être un bon moyen de découvrir le culture arabophone mystérieux à travers la langue. Cependant, c’est une langue difficile à apprendre parce que d’abord, le système d’alphabet est complètement différent des langues que je connais. Ensuite, il existe beaucoup de dialectes et chacun est différent. En plus, il existe moins de supports en ligne pour l’apprentissage autodidacte aux comparés de ceux de français.
Mais je ne veux pas le renoncer aussi tôt. Ce qu’il me faut, c’est de changer mon vieux façon et ne cesser pas à l’apprendre chaque jour. Je crois que la régularité et la passion sont les deux clés de réussir.
Jan. 19, 2022
한국어를 배우는 과정
2016년 2월 때쯤에 처음으로 한국문화를 접했다.
같은 반 친구가 '런닝맨'이라는 예능 프로그램이 재미있다고 해서 심심할 때 보겠다고 기억해뒀다. 별 기대 안 하고 봤는데 의외로 너무 웃기고 신선한 콘텐츠였다. 그때는 아직 놀 시간이 많던 중3이었다보니까 그 후로 3개월 동안 런닝맨 정주행 하느라 바빴고 공부도 거의 안 한 걸로 기억하고 있다. 부모님께서 잔소리를 많이 하셨는데 의도한 게 아니더라도 그 짧은 시간 안에 내 자신에게 엄청난 투자를 했다고 본다.
왜 투자라고 하는지에 대해 설명을 해보자면 런닝맨 게임들 중에서도 가장 짜릿한 ‘이름표 뜯기’를 즐겨봤는데 멤버들의 이름표를 자주 봐서 그런지 어쩌다보니까 한글을 읽을 수 있게 되었다. 그렇게 해서 한국어를 배우고 싶은 마음이 생겼고 오래 걸리더라도 언젠간 드라마든, 예능 프로그램이든 자막없이도 재미있게 보고 알아듣고 싶어서 목표는 그걸로 정해서 한국어 배우기 시작했다. 4개 국어를 유창하게 하는 게 쉬운 일이 절대 아닌데 내가 어떤 프로그램을 통해 그걸 어느 정도 해내서 나도 내 자신이 뿌듯하고 이제 내가 열심히 공부한 만큼 성과를 보이는 게 참 신기하다. 그래서 런닝맨 보기로 결정한 게 살면서 내 자신이 제일 잘 한 선택이라고 생각한다.
이제 뒤돌아보면 “한국어를 공부했다”고 하기에는 조금 민망하기도 하다. 다른 사람들과 달리 책, 문제집 사고 단어와 문법을 외운다기 보다는 몇 년 동안 잘 지내왔던 한국 친구들과 조금씩 한국어로 이야기 하면서 발음도 고치고 자신감도 키웠다. 그 친구들에게서 유행어도, 책에 나오는 것보다 더 자연스러운 표현들도 배워가서 한국어를 조금 더 원어민답게 할 수 있게 되었던 것 같다. 물론 시간 날 때마다 예능도, 웹드라마도 챙겨봤고 그런 시간들은 듣기 연습이라고 쳤다. 이렇게 보면 진정하게 공부한 사람들에 비해서 내가 2018년까지 한 것은 공부가 아닌 놀이 뿐이었다.
2018년 초에 도전하고 싶은 마음에 10월에 진행 예정인 한국어 능력 시험을 보기로 했다. 그때 제대로 시험 준비를 하기에는 시간이 너무 부족해서 많이 초조해지고 잠이 잘 안 올 정도로 걱정도 많았다. 3개월 동안 학교 숙제를 아예 안 하고 온전히 한국어 읽기, 듣기와 쓰기에 집중했다. 문제 풀고, 오답 고치고, 논문만 쓰는 일상이 반복 되었다. 3개월 동안 시험 공부 말고 다른 거를 할 시간이 없었지만 시험을 잘 보기 위해서 학교 숙제를 제치고 한국어를 두 번이나 선택한 게 절대 후회하지 않는다.
시험 끝나고 나서 원래 일상으로 돌아가서 다시 대학입학시험 준비에 집중하겠다고 한국어 단어, 문법 학습을 버려서 한국어를 접할 수 있는 기회가 친구들과 이야기 하는 것 뿐이었다. 한국어로 말과 문자 밖에 할 일이 없어서 시험 준비를 하는 과정을 통해서 키운 실력이 점점 떨어지고 있다고 느꼈다. 한국어 실력을 유지하려면 구어체로만 말고 문장어로도 글을 써봐야겠다는 생각이 들었다.
그래서 이 글을 쓰게 되었다. 앞으로도 한국어 실력을 더 늘기 위해서, 아니면 그저 유지하기 위해서라도 꾸준히 글을 쓰고 올리려고 노력을 해볼 것이다.
(긴 글을 읽어주셔서 감사합니다! 평소에 말만 하다 보니까 글 쓰는 게 좀 불편하고 특히 오랜만에 일기 같은 글을 쓰니까 어색하네요 ㅠ 아직 부족한 게 많아서 지나가시는 분들께서 한 번만 봐주시고 틀린 게 있으면 꼭 말씀해주세요! 미리 감사드리고 좋은 하루 보내세요!)
Jan. 19, 2022
Envy
It is sunny today. I've never seen sunshine for more than a week, so I decide to go riding a bike. In the afternoon, I go riding to a town with a teenager Zhu. We chats when we riding. I tell her that one of her classmate live nearby, because I bumped into her twice. In the first time, I couldn't recognize her because I didn't know her. In the second time, I also couldn't recognize her for the same reason, but I remembered that she has a very small forehead. Zhu say, "oh, her forehead, which I envy so much." I am so surprised. Then she continue, "because my forehead is too big (or large)." I tell her that her forehead is quite pretty. She explains again, "my forehead is ok, but my top hair is sparse." I also think her hair is normal as well.
Well, maybe we always envy something we think we don't have, especially as a adolescent, when we are too sensitive about others' judgement. So I tell her that it would be ok whether your hair is thin or thick, because nobody is perfect. Furthermore, your hair quantity doesn't break the law or disturb anyone, so, take easy.
Jan. 19, 2022
Block by Correction Ratio
Thank goodness it is possible to write my journal.
Today is my 305th journal writing every day, so I was worried if I couldn't write my today's journal.
In the notification message, I wasn't the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal.
When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I should help others' sentences more than 1300 comments.
For increasing the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 years ago.
Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which were no correction comment.
With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, then it is possible to write a new journal now.
Writing journals on this site is one of my pleasures these days, so I am finally relaxed.
Jan. 19, 2022
Homework French
Translate the following sentences into English:
- Ils ont failli manquer de temps.
They almost lost the time.
- Cette histoire ne me plaît pas.
This history does not please me.
- Mes parents nous manquent beaucoup.
We miss our parents very much.
Translate the following sentences into French, using “manquer”, “plaire” or “faillir”.
- I miss my dog.
Mon chien me manque.
- They like this house.
Cette maison tes plaisent.
Jan. 19, 2022
Jan. 19, 2022
Имидж семьи
Я перескажу статью "Имидж семьи", которую я прочитал в учебнике. В статье у Виктора Шепель, доктор философских наук, делают интервью о современном имидже семьи.
Многие говорят, что одежда определят окружающие средство дома. Однако он утверждает, что одежда играет далеко не первую роль в этом, а самое главное -- окружающая обстановка дома. Согласно Виктору, 40 процентов семей в современном Росси на грани распада из-за отсутствия интимных отношений.
Виктор считает, что решение начинаются с общения, особенно за столом. Точнее он подчеркивает эстетику предметов на столе. Например скатерть, салфетки, и т.д. С этой точки зрения, создать приятно чувство за столом помогает семье ценить друг друга.
Виктор возражает против мнения о том, что одежда играет главную роль, хотя он все еще верит, что у одежды важная роль в имидже семьи. Самое важное качество домашней одежды -- уют. Люди должны быть удобны дома. Более того, он верит, что хорошими одеждами дети уважают себя, поэтому как одевать ребенка -- это важный вопрос.
На мой взгляд, я соглашусь с точкой зрения, что основание семейных отношений -- как люди относятся друг к другу дома. Бесспорно у родителей огромная ответственность за чувства, которые ощущают все члены семьи. С другой стороне, я не согласен с выраженной мнением об одеждах. Вероятно с слишком большим акцентом на внешний вид возникнут отношение, которое подчеркнут внешний вид вместо характера человек. Но Виктор не очень сильно так утверждает. На самом деле, он обсуждает, что одежда не должны быть только напоказ.
В заключении, у Виктора много веских аргументов, но в плане семьи, чаше всего все проще сказать, чем делать. То есть, уютный дом и одежда -- оба важные, но нам нужно найти равновесие в наших подходах. В семейной жизни, есть много подробностей и нюансов, которое нам нужно считать.
Jan. 19, 2022
Короткое сообщение
Всем привет! Я жил в Москве два месяце в прошлом году. Через несколько дней я вернусь, и я буду там три месяца в этот раз. И я ищу новых друзьей в Москве).
Если вы хотите что-нибудь сделать вместе, напишите мне! Я рад с вами общаться. Если возможно, я предпочитаю говорить по-русски с вами (и может вам удобнее). В данный момент цель моей жизни -- хорошо говорить по-русски. Я изучаю русский около года, но все еще мне довольно трудно (как каждый иностранный язык). Я очень хочу достигнуть высокого уровня русского языка, поэтому я буду стараться часто говорить по-русски пока я буду в России.
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